I'm trying to improve my style by using finer lines. And

>>2499684
Nice :D

>>2499692
Thanks so much! ^^

It's garbage. Read the sticky, don't make a seperate thread for your shit but post it in the beginner thread.

>>2499700
Sorry, I thought this board was about critique so it should be appropriate to create an own thread.

>>2499684

Lines are nice, rest, like perspective (see torso broadening too much, especially on shoulders) or proportions is off and needs focus. Also pose is not very dynamic.

>>2499703
We have generals for things like this so the front page doesn't go to shit. Delete your thread and come join us! >>2498305

>>2499692
dont do this to him man LMAO

>>2499716
I thought he is leaning back on his right side.
Maybe I should post the version without jacket, too...

>>2499722
I'd like to, but how do I delete it? The "delete post" underneath this thread doesn't work for me -> blank page in return.

>>2499728
Next to your post number there is a dropdown arrow, go delete -> post (not file).

>>2499736
>Error: You cannot delete a post this old.

I guess it's up to a mod.

>>2499740
How old might you be?

>>2499684
No i do not like it. Try practicing basic human anatomy before trying out stylized stuff or trying to mix human and animals

>>2499684
This reminds me of my sphincter throbbing after hours of homo sex

>>2499684

This is /ic/ mate, not /postyourshit/

>>2502405
>mate

OI WOTCHA GUVNAH I SEE U FREQUENT THE 4CHINNY DOODLYBOARDS AS WELL MATE WHATS THE DEAL WITH ALL THE BLOODY YANKS EH?