Critique this album cover I'm working on for an industial

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>>2498403
honestly its actually pretty good for an industrial cover.

maybe take some inspiration from the Mass Effect vision cutscenes (pic related)

>>2498416
That's a great idea for the other cover I'm working on, and I wanna give them a variety to choose from.
The chaos in an artificial environment on mass effect would Def be a suitable vibe.

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>>2498403
Is this a cheesy 90s industrial album because that's what it looks like. Go for something more modern. Less is more and there's way too much stuff going on here. Too many effects and too blurry.

Take a look at this. A wonderful industrial album that keeps to an eerie weird theme but in a tasteful manner.

>>2498403
Looks fine for industrial mate. Maybe a little too blurry. Put some sharp area in there as a focal point.

>>2498821
I think indie hipster music when i see pic related, not industrial

>>2498403
I like it but it looks like something from early 2000s or late 90s like another anon said and I think part of that is the high contrast. Something like
>>2498416
This would definitely be a lot more modern but I do like where the idea is going. Not bad, dude.

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