Instead of just posting the same pictures over and over why not

>>4390416
>>>/aco/877958

>>4390416
> ITT: hurr durr I'm an ideas guy

>>4390538
>literally can't read
The idea has merit. It'll probably cost something like a grand for a 30-40 page manga. Divide that among a bunch of people it's not that crazy. And everyone gets a say in the final product.

OP here. Even if I were just an "ideas guy," someone putting up cash in exchange for a service is allowed to be exactly that. But the point isn't for me to unilaterally commission an artist of my choice and hire them to draw a manga of my choice and then expect the community to subsidize me. I never even said my ideas have to be the ones picked. I'm putting out the suggestion that we all collaborate and vote on each decision. That's not being "an ideas guy." Every other thread has a bunch of people lamenting the lack of such and such in hentai or the shitty quality of X, Y, Z. I'm gauging interest in whether or not this community wants to do something about that.

sooo where do we start?

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>>4390639
I did my part.

>>4390416
Drawfag here, I'm curious as to what you all want to do.

We could start with a story board plan and then keep adjusting it. Preferably trying to avoid some cliches.

My pathetic example: We got out 15-30yr looking Brotag who is an Evil wizard trying to fight some good wizard. Theyr'e both have equal powers so our Brotag devises a cunning plan to find strong vessels(bitches) onto which he can "unload" his power and use them as a battery. Fill them with semen and give them his energy supply, Recharge and do it again so in the end he can quickly drain all the batteries and go super wizard on the good wizard and destroy the world. Story could be that he finds a strong willed chick, beats her into submission, fills her up. Every time he gets a new "battery" he would turn slightly less evil though "for plot". Also chicks he fills up start developing "feelings" for him.

>>4390416
Then start drawing, faggot.

One thing that has always been high octane fap fuel to me is the stories where for some reason guys are encouraged (or required) to breed with as many female partners as possible.

Like where for some reason male births become much rarer and over a generation or two there's just not enough guys to go around for all the women. Over time women become open to casual sexual encounters and even want it/prefer it (especially since it's the only likely way for them to become pregnant if they want, since artificial insemination is expensive).

With that premise, you can do a whole hell of a lot. Sex Clubs in high schools/universities. Community centers or sex/nightclubs where it's flipped on its head and it's "free guys night" and all the women are hoping to get laid. Orgies, too.

I also like if the dystopian angle is sometimes touched on. In which case you could have prisons which will have basically only female offenders/inmates due to the population disparity. Maybe have it so women prisoners get time off for pregnancies instead of good behavior (or mandate they get fucked - maybe be training tools for the younger guys). Could have it so guys that have the most amount of successful impregnations get better rewards or something.

Worst part is that while there are some story premises which are like this, it doesn't really have a tagged group. Closest thing that comes to it is "public use," which probably fits in closer to the dystopian angle. Something to be said that most of the female populace being so sex starved that they all want it from any dick they can find.

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I recommend Asura:
>http://www.coroflot.com/benoit_picard

He's very good and is the current artist for the Dragon Ball Multiverse fan manga. Since he has experience doing manga format (and works for free on that particular project) he might be amenable to being paid for one.

I think OP has the right idea about picking an artist first. Let's forget about the content of the manga and start with voting on which artist to contact and ask how much they'd charge. Once we get that set in stone we can direct them to this thread and start discussing actual content.

I also wouldn't mind settling for black and white if that turns out to be worlds cheaper. If we get 20 people to contribute this might be plausible.

How are you going to crown fund?

>>4390897
I'm assuming Indiegogo if Kickstarter doesn't allow porn. But I'm wondering if there is a way to control the distribution of the money. For example, if we pay the artist and everything falls apart can we get our money back? Or do a 50% up front, 50% upon completion thing?

What shall we do for our premise? Maybe a concept pitching thread?

I saw something similar on /co/ the other day along the lines of "you have 5 seconds to pitch your cartoon idea before this business executive bashes your face in with an aluminum baseball bat." There were some terrific suggestions

Maybe we could do something like that. I mean when we have come together to make porn before, the results have been pretty good I'm interested

I believe that good porn should have a kind of build up to it. In the best porn there's sexual tension between two characters that just lasts and builds and builds and builds and keeps you rock hard throughout the entire story, and so when they finally are seconds away from getting down to it your dick is like one poke away from bursting.

Truth be told, I think a lot of stories are like this. There's usually a "resistance to call" element in most hero stories, for example. It makes us want the "heroes" to go out and do their -- ahem -- "hero things" even more. I think the same applies to porn

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Just get someone to draw this

I like this idea. Gonna be tough to get an idea that enough people agree upon, but it could be done. So we need 1. A way to collect funds, 2. An artist, and 3. The actual content of the thing.

>>4390906
>I'm assuming Indiegogo if Kickstarter doesn't allow porn
I checked, and Kickstarter doesn't allow porn. Indiegogo does not allow users to "post images or videos that are sexually explicit or post links to sites that contain sexually explicit material or show people or animals being hurt or degraded", but does not forbid the use of its site to create pornography. They would take between 8% and 10% of our money.

There's no way /h/ could collaborate on such a thing, too few people would be willing to take the risk putting money up (almost no one here pays for porn to begin with, let alone self-made porn). I understand where you're coming from and it would be cool, but let's be honest with ourselves. If you actually had an artist already lined up with samples of work, MAYBE some people would bite, but you'd still need a way to pay the man that wasn't a pain in the nuts.

You could always go the way of someone writing an entire script. Give 40 random people (willing to draw for free with their own unique drawing style) 1 page to work on, set a 2 week deadline, gather the pages and watch the hilarity unfold.

>>4390416
>spitball
fag confrim

>>4391681
This is a hilarious idea and I want to see it happen.

>>4390887
Not a Dragonball fan but I could live with that. He has a message link right on his page. Someone want to write him and ask for his rate for a manga in that same format? Something like 30-50 pages I guess this would be? I would do it but I don't think I'm the best "voice" for this. I can't pitch shit.

>dealing with money
>trying hard making a """good""" story.
>search for a good artist

all this only makes us fail.

we just need to create a simple short vanilla story. and if we reach that goal
only then. we can move on to something more complex.

fisrt of all we need

-set the story (a simple one)
-do a character desing process
-do a damn storyboard

and then even drawfags will be able to help. but the real problem is what can drawfags can actually do?

as a drawfag I thing having a damn storyboard makes it a lot easier to just take single page or helping with a single drawing.
then another person can put everything in order later.


I'd really like to draw something But I don't think my skills enough to make someone fap.


also this

>>4391681

>>4390416
Weeb drawfag here, you mean by manga, just a comic drawn in animu style, right?
Not actual right to left panel order with nip characters trying to mimic Japanese as much as possible...

>>4390416
>Let's make something WE want to see exactly how WE want to see it.
>no loli
>no trap or futa
>probably NTR or chad-porn about being alpha and fucking milfs

If this gets anywhere its just going to be basic vanilla shit with basic characters.
pass

Ok, look, I'm not OP but I think we're getting hung up on the order of events. What is more likely to see public interest on the boards here? Writing a story on the chance that an artist would be willing to work on it or having an artist already lined up and then working on the story? I'm betting on the latter. But like OP said, this should be a community project so maybe that should be our first vote. If you guys really want to take a shot at it then let's talk about that.

>>4392517
Who says? I'm betting that if it's a collective project everyone will add a dash of their own fetishes to the mix as long as it doesn't go to retarded extremes like vore.

>>4392669
just like he pass from it, we need to pass of him.

first we need to demonstrate that we can do something simple.

in an Ideal work we can make doujins time to tiem.

>>4392673
I'm thinking the ideal concept would be something that is interesting but not too specific. That way the sex scenes can play out like a series of events across a larger story. Those events can include a wide range that way. A lot more open to community input than something like an ordinary NTR setup or whatever. The setup -> plot -> resolution structure won't be too complicated that way and won't get fucked up when everyone starts chiming in.

>>4392684
yes, but it's not like Im against NTR or many other weird fetiches.
its just that I want to start doing domething nice to begin with.

IMHO vanilla is going to have a better acceptation instead NTR, for example.

and I'm talking about readers and drawfags.

In my case if I'm able to help drawing.. NTR is not the best way to keep my attention.
But I think if the 1st project is a success and a good experience, the 2nd one has a better chance to catch many other artists.

The main problem with these kind of things. is too much circlejerk and nothing comes from it. like a waste of time watching people arguing about fetiches until the the project is dead or until some weird drawfag appears.

anyway, just saiyan.

>>4391492
for example this is a nice idea. but hard to put in action IMO

>>4392711
This is why I think treating the premise as a wrapper is a better idea because that way the intro and ending can be set in stone pretty early and the sex scenes can be diverse. That way if one scene has something that someone isn't into, another scene will be exactly what they want.

>>4392733
so are you saying that people will read this douijn because 1 scene alone
and skip everything else. that's not how it works.

why we don't just do something that is popular here?
do a voting for the subject of this thing, or just take previous results of fetish votes.

if I remember well the last time was lolicon something,

isnt there a /h/ or even /a/ mascot, -tan to lewdfy?

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How about we finally make a sequel to pic related?

>>4392756
>sequel to something that is not even ours.
no

just pick something dorks.

Here's a list of body/chara types:
base teen/friend/main girl
arara MILF thicc
genki tomboy
older sis/fully developed
snu snu muscle girl
elf/alien
trap/sissy
roboko gynoid

now mix them up in a story with an MC, or have the him turn into a girl with a dick, I don't know.
There's a lot of kinks out there...

Genre is good, what kind of story, SF, fantasy, normie drama harem, comedy, a slapdash parody mix of everything...

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>>4392786
>no 1000 year old vampire loli

>>4392791

there's draculina
>>4391492

>>4392786
main girl must be
1. megane
2. fat tits
don't care about the rest

>>4392802
>2. fat tits
is there a thing more vanilla than this?
fucking normies and their normie taste.

>>4392806
And here I was thinking that I was the only one going to put some guro/vore into this...

>>4392834
>since he doesn't want fat tits, obviously he's into guro/vore just like me.

>>4392741
I think I get what he's saying. Im guessing the premise will still connect everything together, just that there will be more than one sex scene. That way we dont have to fight over who gets their way.

>>4392834
anal vore is the true gentleman's fetish

>>4392880
get out of here fucking furry!

>>4392883
I said anal, not cock, calm down normie.

>>4392741
>isnt there a /h/ or even /a/ mascot, -tan to lewdfy?
I think you're onto something here. There's no uniquely /h/ porn that I know of, nor a mascot to work with. But maybe we can learn from /a/. They created Katawa Shoujo based on a sketch. Surely one of us had a good idea once upon a time. What is our board's unfinished business? Or that one popular thing that never got the love and complete work that it deserved? Or can we make something that is uniquely and completely ours? (I feel like that would require a lot of memes.)

Can we just start bringing ideas or cencept for the caracters?
the rest could appear easily after that... maybe.

>>4393536
/h/ is a fap board, not a discussion board.

maybe you wanna make a thread on /a/?
"let's write an h-manga"

>>4393548
I know its a good idea but maybe they are going to redirect me here too.
I thought you were cool guys.

this is the chance for you to do something productive and stop fappingfor a while.
just to fap harder to your own effort later.

Also Im no OP by the way.

>>4393550
>being let down
get used to it, dipshit

Drama much, fuck off idea guy, go learn to draw or something productive instead of whinging at nobodies

>>4393554
Dude I didnt said who iam
Im just a bad drawfag waiting to help. Well whatever

>>4393566
>bad drawfag
>tfw it'll take years of practice to draw porn that isn't laughable at first sight
then only way to help is to write stuff and discuss.

why not take it to /a/, there is nothing special about /h/

Would it be better to try to cater to as many fetishes as possible, or simply design two characters and have them fuck in a romantic SoL type sex chronicle?

>>4393744

Draw the kind of porn you most get off to.

Porn is always hotter when you can feel the lust it was drawn with.

>>4393575
Cry more faggot.

>>4393744
>>4393779
well it depends on what fetish are we talking about.
some things are harder to draw. for example feet, no one knows about this,
like fat people or good looking milf or lolis. all depends on the style of who is in charge and his skills.
so going for many fetishes maybe its not the best idea.

anyway. at the time we don't even know how many people is going to draw.

>>4393805
I was thinking from a narrative standpoint, to establish a coherent story that features say, demons, loli, rape, impregnation, mind control, NTR, incest, MILF, femdom, BDSM, and vanilla without having to branch off into side stories with separate characters.

>>4393846
isn't harem a form of Ntr where all the girls are assaulting MC's cock

I thing putting al those things together is really complicated unless you do more than one chapter

>>4394242
>putting al those things together is really complicated unless you do more than one chapter
True. Cost would be proportional to page length, and considering that we'd be realistically limited to a oneshot, we'd pretty much only have a single scene.

>>4394305
well that's like 20 pages

5 for story
5 for foreplay
10 sex

and that's all.

I'm getting no responses from the few artists I emailed. Anyone have better luck?

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>>4393846
Here's what I've been working on. I think it fits our needs.


GENOCIDE CITY

In the future, a cyberpunk society has seen such terrible inflation that money has become so worthless that alternative forms of currency have become normal. One of the most valuable of these forms is women. Different acts and behaviors equal different values like a boob flash can pay for a cab ride and full public nudity can buy entrance and pay for a meal at an expensive restaurant. The more embarrassing or physical, the greater the value. Low income families have come to use mothers, wives, and daughters to buy their way into comfort and some sinister folk have started crime rings to exploit this trend.

This is all still technically illegal, though, and a young female detective named Aylish Indigo is working on bringing justice back to the city. Her investigation gets her wrangled into the seedy underbelly of the city's economics and she finds that this didn't just happen by chance. The economy was manipulated to this end from on high, a cabal organized by the gangs, corporate heads, and political figures, designed to maintain power over the populace.

Aylish has to navigate through the winding mystery and sometimes do what she must, no matter how degrading, in order to bring the entire corrupt system down from the top. She has to maintain cover and play along by putting her body on the line as she works her way up the ladder, fulfilling powerful men's fantasies all while gathering evidence to bring down the operation. As humiliating as it will be, Detective Aylish Indigo will be hiding her badge and baring her breasts for this investigation that nobody else is willing to do. Will her sacrifice be worth it? Will she succeed and arrest the kingpins? Or will she become just another victim of Genocide City?

>>4395230
My theory here is that we get the most bang for our buck. The premise can be demonstrated in just a few panels of snapshots of what goes on in the city. A man watching his wife and daughter strip down to pay for a cab ride, a woman being walked naked on all fours by her landlord to cover her rent, etc.

Then we get right into Detective Indigo's investigation where it will be like a gauntlet, a series of trials that she'll have to go through, all related to her ultimate goal but each one very different. We can brainstorm what kind of things she'll be forced to do in each event. Once she reaches the top we get the resolution that ties it all up nicely.

>>4395230
>>4395231
>Here's what I've been working on. I think it fits our needs.

no even porn. and a long ass shit.
get out

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>>4395145
so what are we going to do do if someone respond?
a kikestarter or something?

I think my skills are bad for porn. but I want to draw something
can we desing shit in the meantime?

>>4395394
If those are your sketches you'd be great if you're interested.
>>4395388
>no even porn
Did you read it? Its all porn.

>>4395231
>>4395230
Edgy and dirty, typical of western crime addled urban freaks, no thanks,
Sex should be filthy not the setting.

>>4395230
It's a good start. I agree that the premise should be a wrapper around a series of events. I love the gauntlet idea of a series of sexual situations that the heroine has to go through. Maybe we can work with that.

>>4392483
>>4392786
>>4393846
Wouldn't those be more /d/ material?

>>4395402
>>4395840
>>4396006

The problem is that we don't need a premise like that because we don't have space for it. We need to think in this like a one shot unless we find a way to put all that settle into no more than 2 pages.

The word steampunk and a complex world dunno like bladerunner's is just overcomplicating this.

Can we just go the simple way? something funny or fast?

>mc's living his normal day
>something happen
>only way to solve the problem is lewd

>>4396019
If you guys want something that's 10 pages, sure. A premise needs only two or three pages to establish. That's like 10-15 panels. I'm not committing to the above suggestion but I think we should aim higher than "MC goes to school, fucks the teacher, the end." If that's what we want to see then why bother at all? There's plenty of that kind of thing out there already.

>>4396105
Just to clarify, I think if we shoot for 30-50 pages we'll have room for just about any premise. 2-3 pages for exposition and 3-4 pages for a resolution is all we'll need. The above suggestion is good in that it demonstrates the kind of plot structure most efficient for our purposes. Namely, a setting that serves mostly as a backdrop. It bookends the story and serves to justify the sex plot.

>>4396116
>30-50 pages

you don't have an artist or money to pay for 30-50 pages (at this moment).
you need to think that many drawfags are not going to participate
because you need skills good enough to draw the premise. and the porn
which is going to be criticized a lot.

how how many people is going to be drawing?
and how many artists are interested in drawing a story like that.

we need to wait for more stories to decide what to do.

Remember that splintering on what we think the content should be is a good thing. We won't all agree, but if we can get a core group who start rolling on one particular subject, they're the ones who are gonna carry this thing. We may even get two completely different works out of it.

>>4395230
>>4395231
This sounds pretty good. I like what you're saying about the easy-to-depict setting, and that that scene setting is itself porn. I don't know if we need cyberpunk, and I don't understand the name Genocide City. But the basic premise of power imbalance and degradation, that works for me.

What role do you see for Aylish? Will she succeed? Will we be sad for her and empathise with her struggle, or will we enjoy her problems like the sick twisted animals that we are?

Well, if we're going to aim high:

Characters:

MC - An incubus who can't control his powers. Specifically, he will seduce humans at random, and will completely drain their life force if he has sex. Very resentful of his heritage as he doesn't like harming others.

FeMC - An orphan taken in by an order of demon slaying knights. As a paladin, she has partial resistance to demonic powers. Kind of a justicefag. Tall, but otherwise moderately sized.

MC's father - A rather typical incubus. Negligible father-son bond.

MC's mother - A loli who was taken as a consort by MC's father, and subsequently mindbroken. As a result of his magic, she remains a loli.

FeMC's father - Unknown to FeMC, he was the incubus that impregnated her mother. Has been searching the human world for FeMC, who was given to the paladin order by her mother, who was able to temporarily resist his control.

High Paladin - Leader of the order and most powerful. A tall, busty, ara-ara type.

>>4396457
Plot:

Out of disdain for his kind and himself, MC flees the demon world, and attempts to live a normal life as a highschool student. Though somewhat handsome-looking, he's ignored by his classmates because he gives off a chuuni vibe. He develops a slight crush on FeMC, but dismisses it, knowing that he might inadvertently kill her if they got too close. Things go well enough until his incubus power activates spontaneously, seducing her. Though he tries to resist, she overpowers him, and they have sex.

However, she not only survives, but points a sword at him upon regaining her senses. Explanations follow, but MC doesn't expect her to believe him, so he says to get his death over with. However, FeMC says killing him wouldn't be justice, because he had no ill intentions and at least tried to stop her.

MC expresses concern that a similar event could occur again, and FeMC explains that it could be avoided if he regularly has sex. As she is the only one he knows who could survive, she would bear that responsibility. MC objects at first, considering it degrading for the both of them, but she insists that it's the righteous course of action. He relents and they become sexual partners, though neither of them enjoy it.

>>4396458
Later on, FeMC's father shows up and ambushes her, allowing him to gain the upper hand and rape her. He explains her heritage and how he intends to take her back to the demon world as a replacement for her mother, whom he killed in a fit of rage after she freed FeMC. MC shows up, and kills him with FeMC's sword. Although MC brushes off her thanks, she gains more respect for him.

Eventually, FeMC is called back to the paladin order for a meeting. She brings along MC because she wants to try to establish a peace treaty between the humans and demons. The other paladins distrust him, though she swears that he is a good person. However, High Paladin locks him in a dungeon, and dominates him sexually constantly. The other paladins notice, the disappearance of MC and High Paladin, and immediately put the blame on FeMC for bringing an incubus to the headquarters. She is ordered to rectify her mistake.

After some investigation, FeMC finds the cell. MC tells her that he accidentally seduced High Paladin and that the others would not be forgiving, and that she should save herself by killing him. She says that she will deal justice, drawing her sword, and killing High Paladin. She explains that someone as powerful as High Paladin would be immune to his power, and that she had indulged her own lust and raped him. She also reveals that he wasn't her first victim-- High Paladin had a collection of now-deceased demon sex slaves.

>>4396459
The exposure of High Paladin's lechery stirs great commotion in the order. FeMC chooses to leave it entirely, disillusioned with the corruption present, and citing that it no longer represents justice. As she heads back home with MC, she suddenly kisses him. MC thinks his powers are acting up again, but she states that it was of her own will, saying that she wants a deeper companionship from him. MC comments that she's settling for him out of pragmatism, but she tells him to not dismiss her feelings and to be honest with his own. He confesses that the crush he once had developed into love. With their relationship confirmed, FeMC posits that their sex might be more enjoyable now since it's out of romance rather than pragmatic necessity.

>>4396461
Technically, it could be limited to just >4396458, although the sex scenes would be kind of odd due to the nature of the characters.

>FeMC straddles atop MC, who covers his face
>FeMC: "What are you doing?"
>MC: "Pretending this isn't happening."
>FeMC: "Aren't you supposed to enjoy this?"
>MC: "I'm not enjoying it anymore than you are."
>FeMC: "But you're an incubus."
>MC: "If your first sexual encounter as a child ended up with your dick in a corpse, I would imagine you'd be pretty traumatized by it."
>flashback to shota MC
>awkward silence as FeMC starts riding MC

Other instances like this would be similarly distracted from the sex itself, such as MC playing on a PSP, both of them studying math formulae, or simply making conversation with each other, such as discussing their mutual lack of parental figures, with MC having an uncaring father and a cock-slave mother, and FeMC being raised by the order without a family unit.

>>4396457
>>4396458
>>4396459
>>4396461
>>4396462


ok I think this is better than genocide city because everything is easier.
and the settle will only take 1 or maybe 2 pages. seems similar to those demonlord whatever ones.

talking about size. this post alone
>>4396458
is what makes chapter 1.
is content enough

>introduction
>sex
>conclusion.

part 2 and 3 needs some changes in my opinion.


sorry,I didn't saw this,
>>4395402
yep, mine and interested but I don't think I can draw all this alone.
I don't feel skilled enough.

>>4392178
>>4391681

I like the idea of making 40 random storyboard pages of random shit (hopefully like a fetish alphabet) and getting a bunch of artists to do a page or two

>>4397104
yeah but before that we need to set the character design and a common basis for everything.

>>4397108
aight i cast a vote for a tomboy loli with a onepiece swimsuit tan getting fucked as she gets older (like mega milk) shes been hypnotized since birth so she does anything shes asked like fuck a horse

also her dad has to save her from eldritch lust demons that make everyone fuck eachother
[/spoiler] including his daughter [/spoiler]

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How about a story about an anime convention that opens on the premise that cosplay IS consent and the girls in cosplay are all fair game?

Art by committee. Nothing can go wrong.

>>4397624
if we do something cosplay related then waifufags are going to cmplain
about what cosplay the main girl is going to be playing.


>>4397679
who?

>>4397112
>tomboy loli with a onepiece swimsuit tan
this is good, everything else not.

>>4397714
>giving a fuck about waifushits
Fuck them, they've killed the drawthreads with their bitchy infighting, sharia level prudishness and general faggotry.
Literally weeb sjws.

The public use con idea is pretty good since it combines real world we inhabit with a relevant hentai trope in a way that is more true to porn than the two story plus sex idea beforehand.
It becomes an hentai truly set in the west... if you're into that real world plus twist stuff.

>>4397679
Lol everything that isn't an indie comic/doujin/novel is produced by "committee."

Until you get money/artfag on board, this is just hentai story discussion by some idea guys, relax yer sphincter, anon.

i would like to add my 2cents into this, as i've seen this thread pop up for a few week(s) now.

i really like the idea of having /h/ create it's own doujin. I get a feeling from many users that most of the artists we enjoy seem to not be doing any work anymore. this is due to many things and is fairly complex and i think we all have our own perceptions on this along with it being mostly out of ours hands. I see /h/ coming together to create a doujin as a way to spark up quality doujins in america which could then be translated back for the nips, gooks, russkies and etc. to enjoy.

I suggest any who is serious about this to create a form of contact. either create a discord server or use a google hangout. collect resources to share, compile story ideas, and most of start actually trying to draw things yourself. We can maybe find drawfags to convince but i think if several people in the group begin drawing themselves, we'll have a better shot if getting this off the ground. I'm knowledgeable in the arts so i'm willing to do this myself but i can help teach some of you on basics. We all know plenty of good artists to get inspiration from or copy from so i feel strongly we can make something of quality. this just takes time and effort and i feel there's enough of us who give half a shit to see this through because of the lack of good doujins nowadays. personally i find myself going back to good Raita, Gunma, REDLIGHT and others because hardly anything new meets that quality.

>>4397736
If it were to be a true "community project" rather than a concept sent out to someone for a commission, then we'd need a writefag or two, someone to storyboard, and a team of VERY dedicated drawfags with a consistent style to make it happen. That last part is by far the biggest obstacle.

> Anything except NTR.
Can we include tanned sluts giving men footjobs?

>>4397825

for sure. we have to take what we get though and keep expectations low. i make a comparison to anthony fantano and deadmaus who were known to browse /mu/ and other parts of 4chan but made and participated in threads in /mu/. we can create something similar here where a person within the community rises up to the occasion to make content suited for the board in question. another exmaple would be someone making a fantasy story in TCG and possibly using peoples experiences with their tabletop games and D&D as fodder for the fantasy story. for /h/, we can make polls of anons favorite artists and favorite individual doujins. this can be pooled into a larger organized document that artists can use to create content that /h/ anons desire and go off of stories, settings, characters and plot devices various anons request.

in terms of supporting this happening, thats a bit tricky but patreon would be the best route. assuming a good scenario happens, legit artfag actually produces content that is good, people who care to see it continue should incentivise the artfag with patreon support or otherwise. it wouldnt be terrible to stream it on twitch either, although im unsure how their creative guidelines work for erotic art but honestly i feel that would be necessary at some point. nudity and sexuality is important in art and leaving that out would leave a stale air.

i'm willing to setup a discord or something and make some headway on this if anyone wants to make this a reality. even if all we end up doing is finding an artist that does semi-erotic art and get them to make a comic and support them then i think something positive can come from this.

>>4397849
Considering that most of us pirate our h-anime and h-games and only read scans of doujins, I seriously doubt that an original project would receive enough crowdfunding to incentivize even one drawfag for enough content to make anything beyond a few character portraits. The only way I actually see this happening is if some drawfags are willing to take this on as a passion project rather than expecting to be paid for it. And since artists tend to sell their work for a living, they're not going to take up something that would require so much investment of time and effort.

>>4397624
The day 1000 jimmies were rustled. Hilarious and simple, it could work. We can title it "/h/Con" to brand it as our own.

>>4397825
Writefag here so I can contribute. My first recommendation if we do this hentai convention is to have three or four MCs because if we just have one everyone will fight over who she cosplays as.

>>4397866
it doesn't matter how many. they are. waifufags going to ruin this.
just like tamamo, patchouli and saber ruined /a/

and plz think on a different and simple thing,

>>4397866
I mean, you can flesh out a premise as much as you want, but not much is going to come of it unless a drawfags are willing to pick it up and work with it. I wrote
>>4396457
>>4396458
>>4396459
>>4396461
>>4396462
and could expand it to a full story, but again, it won't matter unless there is dedication and passion to illustrating it.

>>4397885
I seems I'm the only drawfag here and I'm pretty sure that no one wants to draw because
even if is the best story ever. everything is a complicated or a long story...

you guys are thinking too much.

>more than one chapter?
>multiple MC ?

I'll give you a task to do, writefags.

"do something interesting in less than 150 words"

>>4397892

how 'bout a doujin with no dialogue? i've seen it done before and it's kinda nice. focus more on facial and body expressions, those unconscious cues we give to each other. you can even expand upon that with a mute or deaf character.

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>>4397624
I like this idea. Let's do this idea

>>4397825
Consistent style among drawfags is also a potential issue. That was also kind of a problem in Katawa Shojuo. Any ideas around this? What should the house style be?

>>4397863
Buying shit is one thing, crowdfunding is another. You need only a few overgenerous weebs to get the job done. Everyone else can just leach of of their hard work.

>>4397949
>how 'bout a doujin with no dialogue?

Are you upset or something. I don't get sarcasm if you tried

Anyway im asking for a story. And not dialogue. That can be done later

Even if she is deaf or something, im just trying to put limits to writefags in order to make them create something simple and useful from the point of view of a drawfag.

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>>4397892
I'll take that challenge.

This is the first year of the anticipated /H/Con, an anime convention with a twist. Four popular cosplayers (names and characteristics TBD), well known in the community, were encouraged by their fans to attend. Upon entry they’re greeted by a giant sign “COSPLAY IS CONSENT – Warning: All costumed attendees grant consent to sexual contact.” The girls are surprised to see so many cosplayers and it is obvious from the start that /H/Con is not for the faint of heart – only the most daring and dedicated can handle the gauntlet of debauchery inside. Besides the public fondling on the show floor, there are attractions that put cosplayers on full display and give attendees full access to them. One of our MCs wanders into a corner called the “Arcade.” Cosplayers dressed as video game vixens are displayed and offered to attendees. A Chun-Li is being gangbanged and a Tifa is being tittyfucked. Our MCs see everything – Sailor Venus giving footjobs, Mai Shiranui getting spanked, Bulma sucking dick after dick, cosplayers must submit to all demands. Are our MCs able to handle it? What situations will they find themselves in at /H/Con?

>>4397825
>team of VERY dedicated drawfags with a consistent style
Each artist will work in thier style in the anthology format, not like everyone is in the same workshop studio.

What would be actually more efficient is if we adopt the American model where drawing, coloring, lettering is all separately done so anons with little or no art skill (or the writers) can chip in.

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>>4397959
This reminded me: do you guys think it would be too much of a pain in the ass to animate something?

Now, wait just one second HEY COME BACK. Here me out. This could work. All we'd do is animate bullshit in SFM and then trace over it. Any stupid motherfucker could trace over the bodies. Hell, I could fuckin do it. We'd have inbetweeners by the dozen. The only real difficulty would be A) drawing faces and B) actual 3D animating. Faces shouldn't be too hard: keep models with little lines to show where the eyes will go and we'd be fine. As to SFM animating, it's pretty damn easy and I'm sure we could find some guys who'd do it. I'll chip in if no one else will. Hell, we could even mo-cap some of the shit.

... ok we wouldn't mo-cap the sex scenes since obviously a male pretending to fuck and then pretending to be fucked would be awkward. But we could do it for everything else. Walking around. Drinking coffee. Shit like that.

If this sounds too crazy to you guys (it's not, we could totally pull this off) we can always just do the comic and then animate it later if it's any good. The only real problem is female voice actresses, and I'm sure there's someone who'll do it for enough money.

drawing the faces (which shouldn't be too hard

>>4397973
This is actually pretty much how they animated The Triplets of Belleville. I don't think we could pull something like that off, though. Also, how would we do the backgrounds? Would those be 3D?

>>4397977
I'm thinking we just animate everything in blank rooms with boxes for the furniture, and then give that to a guy with Adobe Illustrator and tell him to decorate it.

I think a manga is far more realistic.

>>4397978
And then tell him to draw it again and again every time the camera moves 0.5 degrees. That's not going to fucking work, dipshit. We're not going to animate your shitty story

>>4397878
You're beginning to sound like a filthy waifu faggot already... I can smell your pathetic faggotry.

Its just anons attempting a hentai comic/manga/dojin, why do you care, why would they care, who gives a fuck dipshit.
I mean seriously, what loser section of Reddit am I in, did you just crawl out of /jp/?

>>4397983
I'm the writefag who wrote the /H/Con thing. He's not me.

>>4397972
Well l'm pretty sure drawfags are not going to write the dialogs if they are like me, ESL people.

Leave that to them is pretty fine

>>4397983
The camera wouldn't be moving. I didn't think I'd have to specify that but obviously some of us are fucking retarded.

>>4397981
Yeah, maybe you're right. Walk before we run. Our perfectionism will probably make this shit take too long as it is. Most of us would be dead by the time an animation got done.

>>4397973
>dis guy
I wanna laugh in yer face give you the "you have no idea how real life works" lecture, but seriously the fags who SFM animate DOA shorts with Kasumi getting barbie doll raped by ugly monsters rake in like 2 grand a month Patreon bucks last time I checked.

Writefag here. Let's stop with the infighting and the overambitious suggestions. We're trying to decide on a concept and find a drawfag. Energies on that if we're going to get anywhere at all.

>>4397959
Call me a faggot for applying a modicum of realism to pornography, but why in fuck's name would the MCs not be fully aware of the "cosplay is consent" caveat before going into all of this? Hell, the name /h/con would be a dead giveaway.

>>4397993
I thought it was implied they did know. Its more of whether they can handle it once fully entrenched in it. I left that open ended because I don't know whether they should come out loving it or lose their constitution.

>>4397992
Just based it on epic posts of the past... like Children of the Trough.

>>4397994
I didn't interpret it that way. That being said, it'd be more reasonable to have them go in actively looking to fuck and get fucked-- i.e. they're sluts, with one of them a virgin looking to lose it.

>>4398002
That's fine. My fault for not being clear. What do you think of the post overall though?

>>4397992
Deciding on a concept is contingent on what the drawfag wants to draw. Unless we're commissioning someone, in which case we need people willing to throw money in the trash.

>>4397992
Content only allowed in /h/, right?
Cause my fantasies have become dangerously degenerate last few years...

>>4398004
I hate the mindbreak trope, which is why I suggested the cosplayers be sluts, so they'd actually be enjoying all the debauchery (personal bias here). Maybe have one character be a male, so you could have multiple females attendees looking to use him for pleasure.

Speaking pragmatically, however-- group sex is harder to portray. There's also the issue of a variety of background characters. Sure, all of them will have references since they're in cosplay, but you'd still have to include a wide variety of designs as part of establishing the setting. The premise as a whole makes it harder on the drawfag.

I like the /h/con idea. I believe it will be the most efficient way to have crossovers of so many different series without having to resort to any shitty storytelling gimmicks to facilitate it.

>>4397892
Wanting to show and get more than just the big cons allow, [number of] popular cosplayers book their trip to /h/con, a convention where cosplay is consent, and sexual acts are encouraged in the name of "cultural exchange or something like that" (put that word for word in the exposition).

The event spans several days, several nights, several inches, and several other severals.

Although the con is essentially a giant orgy, that doesn't mean it lacks features that normal cons have. Some features include:

-Don't want to wait in a long lineups? Just fuck someone in line for their position!
-Want to talk positions or experiences at the panels? Ask and receive hands-on (and other body parts) experience!
-I guess the vendor booths can just be vendor brothels with commissions of sex instead of drawings
-Midnight balls
-Also some games, tournaments, etc

Then just throw in some popular character archetypes, KanColle has been especially successful in tying numerous appeals in each character, for example.
-the slutty longhaired one
-the slutty shorthaired one
-the slutty tanned tomboy
-the secretly slutty shy one

I think we could go 2 ways. An slut that want to take some virginties since she assume that every man in the convention is a virgin.

And the other way is j st some vanilla meeting and sex at the convention

Also the girl has to have a generic costume like a catgirl to avoid waifu faggotry

>>4398015
If we're going to crowdfund to pay an artist then we can set terms. But even outside of that, if we simplify it too much then why even bother? We can find vanilla one on one sex hentai everywhere. I'd like to work on a concept that doesn't actually exist yet.

>>4398015
Variety is good, if I wanted tattooed balloon sluts wanting cocks all the time, I'd watch Brazzer shit.

Don't worry about drawfags untill one shows up, just concentrate on how interesting we can make this or other scenarios.

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CONCEPT:
Male and female flasher meet by happenstance and simultaneously expose themselves to one another. After realizing that the other is also a flasher, they proceed to fuck the shit out of each other.

ENDING: after hours of intense, acrobatic sex, spraying each other with various bodily fluids, and traumatizing the children of unfortunate bystanders, the girl casually asks the guy if he'd like to go get some coffee and he says sure. Later they're telling the story to their kids.

>>4398022
I mean, I would like for us to aim high, but again, it's not going to happen without someone stepping up to contribute, be either a drawfag willing to work for free, or people willing to throw in cash. And exactly how much are we going to collect from those of us here who support this project?

GUYS GUYS GUYS

2 words:

Keitai Hentai

>>4398029
We email artists and ask what their price would be to see what's realistic. We have over 20 people in this thread already, too, so it might be a very reasonable cost per person when all is said and done. A drawfag who would contribute for freewould be wonderful and incredibly generous, but that was never expected.

>>4398025
There's only one drawfag here and we're ignoring him because he suggested to stop the circlejerk and be more productive.

CONCEPT:
A john solicits a prostitute. Later in the hotel room, they both pull guns and badges and try to arrest one another. After realizing they're both cops conducting sting operations, the decide to have sex anyway. Handcuffs are involved.

>>4398042
I think most of us are trying to be. Our drawfag friend hasn't yet said if he definitely wants to participate though. I would straight up write the script for this thing if he wants to.

>>4398036
20 people that like 0 to 2 giving money.

And remember for porn it has to be skilled and tje workbis at least 15 pages so its going to be a little expensive

>>4398043
I dont like cops but it sounds kinda funny

>>4398049
If its impossible then lets make sure by at least seeing what's out there. If the thing doesn't fund then it doesn't fund. But may as well solicit drawfags just in case it does work.

Hey guys, drawfag here, just to let you know, I've bookmarked this thread and checked on it time to time.
I'm mostly busy at the moment, but I'll contribute what I can.

Character design wise, let's keep it simple, just combine the attributes/elements of you fav. girls to make new ones, like fusion charts.

Unitil you assigned them name, call them A, B, C, etc
Each of you can take a letter and make a girl, giving her Miku's hair, Galko's body, Ryuuko's attitude, etc.
And then I can sketch some certified OC donut steel Franken-waifus.

Obviously if you go for the H-con idea, you don't need OCs...

>>4398050
Also I like the discord idea. I think most of us want this to happen.

>>4398036
Just turn this into a eroge oroject already.
People live to give money to that shit, but won't give squat fir essentially a subpar exhentai porn comic.

>>4398043
How about we take this but then make it more like Kaguya

There are two rival officers on the team, who have made a sport out of competing to see who's the better cop.
One day they both get assigned to a different sting op, but neither know that it's the other.
>Later in the hotel room, they both pull guns and badges and try to arrest one another. After realizing they're both cops conducting sting operations, the decide to have sex anyway. Handcuffs are involved.
Since they're still trying to act like the better, they each try to make the other cum first, etc. Maybe since they're both in disguise, they both think the other is lying, and somehow try to fuck the other into defeat.

Hope nobody else started a server yet, might as well set up so we can get things rolling.
https://discord.gg/z2srb

>>4398049
They wouldn't be dressed as cops. They're in disguise, remember.
DESU I'm totally ripping this off of a comic by Sergio Aragones. But I think it's a good porn concept

It's in "A Mad Look At Cops" if anyone can find it

>>4396457
>>4396458
>>4396459
>>4396461
I'll call attention to this again, because I'm a writefag who is looking for [spoiler]character development[/spoiler]. Any feedback?

>>4398051
Can you post a sample of your work? It actually might help us if we know your style, assuming you're interested, of course.

People seem to like the /H/Con idea so I'm going to run with that for now. I think it's actually easier in that we just have to namedrop known characters for most of the story.

>>4398021
>Also the girl has to have a generic costume like a catgirl to avoid waifu faggotry
I don't care about waifu faggotry but you might have a point that the MCs should be "generic" cosplayers to distinguish them from the background events. Things like "fantasy elf cosplayer" and "future soldier cosplayer."

It depends on what everyone wants to see, though. If everyone wants specific characters to be "mains" like Peach or Samus or whoever then we can do that. But I'm a little worried we'll get hung up on that decision and start arguing for our favorite characters. Personally, I don't give a shit but it's a team decision. For a short manga like this I can write a full formatted script in 24 hours but if it's a collaboration I want to include what people want to see.

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>>4398069
>like Peach or Samus

>>4398350
1. He was just using them as an example
2. There's nothing wrong with them
3. Really?
Maybe you can fuck off to /v/ already.

>>4398350
>>4398069
Actually, if you want to do shit that rarely gets done by nips, Peach would be ideal, Nintendo's been DMCAing everything with Peach porn on tumblr and similar attitude prevents barely any hardcore stuff in Japan.
>inb4 shroom weed refs and Bowser NTR stuff

>>4390416
Ya'll know there are artists that frequent /h/ as well as /wg/ and, oh yeah, /ic/ which is the art and critique board. I'm sure some would charge, but you could probably interest one of the regulars to do it for free. Hell, I would be interested myself, but I'm not really an anime artist, so it wouldn't be that style if I did it.

>>4398059
Reminds me of that one off page cutepet did of the "Ann Frank-esque hiding in the attic from Nazis" harem gag.

>>4398420
Weebs are extremely picky, animu is very subtle and tricky to get the style down if you're not a full blown weeb already or chink.
They'd need to pay to get any art that isn't cringy dA puke.

Anyway, this is essentially a ~20 page drawthread request, good luck with that.

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>>4398048
dunno if you're talking about me this >>4395394
I'll say that I want to participate and and help. it's just that I don't want to be the main drawfag.
too much work and no idea if I can draw good porn (maybe not)

>>4398404
>>4398408
not really. in fact I don't see what's his problem
maybe is going too normie or nintendrone with them
like ruined by /v/ , whatever.

>>4398420
well, still depends on what you can do. someone doing backgrounds or helping with complex anatomy can help too.
then can be traced to make them look animu or achieve the desired artstyle .

it can be a solution.

>>4398426
any kind of porn that comes from here is going to be citicized
and making something that everyone can love is going to be a pain im the ass
unless we do something funny

>>4398426
>Anyway, this is esseantially a ~20 page drawthread request,"
yep and maybe free but can be solved with leaving the work to many
drawfags and the see what it comes out from it like someone said.

I'm sure it will be laughable

>>4398448
Get the figuart body kun/chan for complex posing, works for me.

here is my scenario you can use it if you want:

to sort out the birth numbers, every japanese male is at birth designated a number of sex tokens. if he wants to have sex he must give the lady a sex token and she cannot refuse. when a lady collects enough sex tokens she can go on holiday to the carribean.

its kind of a diamond in the rough idea but feel free to improve

>>4398457
Can the tokens be used on his mother or 10 year olds?

>>4398457
>>4398516
>>4398540
the MC of that hentai with an horrible shaky camera
Zettai Junshu Kyousei Kozukuri Kyokashou! has an licence to fuck every girl he want
because japan is in danger as always and needs to grow its population

also the cops appears immediately if he cums outside cuz it's illegal
and if I remember well Anal is illegal too.

Resending the Discord link because the last link will expire in a few hours: https://discord.gg/xz3cD9z

>>4398448
Liking those sketches a lot, would love to see if this works out further.

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Writefag here. Did some brainstorming in the discord and I took the liberty of writing up a full script for the /H/Con idea. All feedback welcome.

I'm distributing it like this because I can post it here directly for one, but also because I think it's best if all changes go through me. If everyone can freely edit a document we'll wind up with a thousand different versions with different sets of changes and regressions. Best to have a single editor.

>>4398874
> The three girls Aylish, Cynthia and Trixie

Dropped

>>4398894
I literally don't care about the names. Change them to whatever. Just don't weeb out on me.

>>4398894
Ok, point taken. So we gotta change the names. They were just picked at random. Any suggestions? Also, any other criticisms?

Weeb names in stories that aren't actually Japanese piss me off so let's avoid that shit at least.

>>4398900
chinese looking cartoons with american names piss me even more.

what is this? 4kids? what do you always ruin everything, america?

>>4399237
If the gimmick is that its a twist on an American anime convention then wouldn't it be taking place in America?

>>4399237
Are you fucking for real?
Are you a pathetic chink weeb who fantasize you're a jap as you jerk off?

Animu style isn't race bound, unless you think they all "look" white but should be japanese, fuck off.

Drawfag here. I think that idea with a bunch of drawfags each doing one or two pages is stellar. It could be jarring as fuck, but here and there you'd get out of this world pages. I'd do that shit for free just to have lived through the first /h/ made doujin. Like some have said, just have someone storyboarding, and people go and pick what they'd like to do, and have it snowball from there. It sounds like loads of fun imo. Additionally, it would eliminate the need for payment of any kind. And to top it off, drawfags can discuss amongst themselves on how to improve technique, or improve their use of their drawing program of choice. Monitoring this thread for massive potential. Just imagine a big 100-page doujin produced by /h/. My username on hentaifoundry is VVlewd, if anyone wants to go judge whether I am worthy for the cause.

>you have my stylus, fappers in arms

>>4399237
>4kids
Lol, 30 year old neckbeard stop jerkng off you're too old dude.

>>4398894
There's nothing wrong with those names, they are /cgl/ con whores.

The fuck is wrong with you morons, can you stop pretending to be try hard retards and just think with your dicks?

>>4397972
>separate person doing all dialogue

This would be good for consistency

>>4399298
Idealy it should be one drawfag per story like an anthology, but yeah.

Drawing each page is far more doable, but I don't think it'll be very erotic or suceed as fap material.
Though /v/ style collage structure might make for a very amusing read none the less

ref folder with some good angles
https://mega.nz/#!AxwBELxR!4qtKaU55buF-l6NNPoyu2JWAhM0bFTrV5-SUxfqq3Eg

>>4398874
>Weeb Attack
My sides! This is damn good for what I expected out of this thread. One of the artists in here should at least do a rough sketch version.

I'm starting t think that this thread is full of samefag

and its pushing for his story

Writefag here. I realize it has absolutely zero weight to tell you I'm not samefagging but if you want to come into the discord and talk about the story with the few of us who are in there you're more than welcome. But still, even if I were trying to push a story, I'm also the only one who stepped up to produce something that could be considered complete (at least on the writer's end).

>>4395230

This is a great idea.

>>>>4398874
Drawfag here.
This seems perfectly acceptable, I mean, it's pretty much what you'd find in any mainstream porn monthlies.
The sex scenes seem too abrupt more like erogame scenes compared to the slower intro, like the first half is more leisurely BW manga and the last half are the more expensive color illustrations.
Still a good 2 weeks to a month work for a decent artist

How are the girls in the sega cabinet stocks, with their butt in thr screen, feet at the controls and head sticking out the back?

Is Weeb Attack a real band, or are they referring to one?
Same question too about the lyrics.

Anyway I'll try to sketch something this weekend, it quite a lot of work to type out an entire script, I think you deserve far more appreciation than you're getting.

If anyone has a suggestion as too how the girls look, reply too.

>>4399568
In the discordapp chatlog where everybody discussed the script, we were trying to please as much of the crowd as possible. That's why its such a clusterfuck (no pun intended). If any of you guys want to cut out some of the stuff, just say so and I'll notify the writefag.

By the way, if you're the drawfag, you might want to browse the chatlog where we discussed everything to get an idea of what we were going for. You can also ask us whatever you want, we're there right now:
https://discordapp.com/channels/233798179882008586/233798179882008586

> Is Weeb Attack a real band, or are they referring to one?
Weeb Attack is something we just made up, I think

> Same question too about the lyrics.
It's the Doraemon theme.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ScRCef7kXGg

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>>4399568
that what I was thinking. We need to design the characters first in order to be able to start.

what about?

generic big tits
flat loli or flat tall tomboy
thicc girl (not retarded design)

also, can we change the names to something like: Maria, Laura, Panchita, Lupita or Guadalupe ?

>>4399575
we definitely gotta change those names. As it stands they sound like California valley girls.

I mean maybe that's appropriate since a lot of famous cosplayers seem to fit that type, but still.

>>4399568
>The sex scenes seem too abrupt more like erogame scenes compared to the slower intro, like the first half is more leisurely BW manga and the last half are the more expensive color illustrations.
I went for a three act structure so the beginning is definitely slower where it introduces the nature of /H/Con. The third act is basically a montage of the girls being put through a battery of the sex events they saw demonstrated in Act 2.

>How are the girls in the sega cabinet stocks, with their butt in thr screen, feet at the controls and head sticking out the back?
If you look at a Sega Astro City cabinet, it's a sit down cab where the player is on a stool. I visualized it as the girls are sitting on a chair or bench or something behind the cab and their feet are sticking through the monitor, which I guess would be fake and just a plastic mold with holes in it.

>Is Weeb Attack a real band, or are they referring to one?
Made it up. I was going for a parody of the kinds of bands that perform anime songs. That's why the lead singer uses shitty Japanese he barely understands when addressing the crowd.

>Same question too about the lyrics.
Doraemon theme. I liked the dissonance of pairing a happy go lucky theme song with scenes of hardcore sex but also the theme has a fun beat that is oddly fitting for a high speed montage. It also keeps the convention "active" during that sequence. Up until that point there are a bunch of background events to show that it's a lively event. I didn't want to stop everything cold in Act 3 so having a band play in the background throughout maintains that it's an active convention.

>>4399575
>Maria, Laura, Panchita, Lupita or Guadalupe
You have to go back.

Why not Shawanda, Latika, Tinisha?

>>4399578
I'm partial to Bertha, Ethel, and Mable.

>>4399586
one idea is to chose names that are used in both america and japan: like Anna

I'll change the names to whatever but I really don't like giving them Japanese names. It makes zero sense. This is a western anime convention probably in Los Angeles or New York. Also, PLEASE lets not accidentally give them the same names as real famous cosplayers. Talk about a potential shitstorm...

>>4399568
>I think you deserve far more appreciation than you're getting.
I appreciate it but really this is a group effort. A lot of things that found their way into the script came from things suggested here and in the discord.

I just think that we should get moving on SOMETHING because otherwise we'll spend eternity suggesting different concepts and never reach the point of actually making anything. I'm not trying to strong arm and take over the project, just saying that at some point we have to pick a story and stick with it. /H/Con got the best reception of all the suggestions so that what I ran with.

Right now we have two choices:
1: Someone else can write a script on one of the concepts (or even their own version of the /H/Con concept) and we can decide if we like it or not.

2) We can talk about the specifics of my script and tweak it. This name thing that's happening now is noted but that's a very simple issue to resolve. Does anyone have any major complaints?

>>4399568
>If anyone has a suggestion as too how the girls look, reply too.
Triple post. Sorry.

I have no real preference but I assume blonde, brunette, redhead trio? Also we haven't decided yet what they should be cosplaying as. I left that ambiguous because I don't know if they should be dressed like specific characters or "just cosplay."

>>4399588
well if its in los angeles can be latina, chinese , korean, or even more.

also, why it has to be in america?

>>4399593
Like I said, I don't really mind. I just approached it under the assumption that it was three white girls in a major American city. There's no rule that says it has to be that way though.

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>>4399583

mmm... Shawanda sounds funny to me.

I'm pretty bad at creating things, Any ideas of what you guys like.
I just want to draw something,

>>4399593
Because it is.
Offer alternatives instead of just complaining.

>>4399660
Neat sketches, tho they look more /c/ute then /h/...

And I think that post was a joke

>>4399660
Writefag again. Those designs are great! We're actually on a roll here. I think all that really matters is that the three girls have some variety to them. Tall/short, blonde/brunette/redhead, big/average/small tits. Do a mix and match of those qualities for our three mains.

>>4399669
Hey, some people dig a little /c/ute in their /h/.

We already have the premise that these are three famous cosplayers. So what do famous cosplayers look like? From there, we can get our archetypes. We probably want diversity between our girls. (likely including "the one with big tits" and "the one I can barely believe is an adult") And from there, we can get our names. Where do our archetypal people come from? What are people of those backgrounds named? It makes sense to me that one of them could have a "weird" name like Aylish or Trixie. They may even not go by their real names, instead having made up names for their famous cosplaying characters.

I'll suggest Trixie for a white outgoing F-cup, Anna works for someone quiet and cute, Mei or Hina if Asian, Isabella (or Izzy) if latino, Yulia if slavic... This world has a ton of names. This can't be too hard. I'm tempted to let an artist pick a name if they feel that that gives them a better anchor, a strong sense of what to draw.

>>4399298
>>4399306
I like this plan. It can't help but be funny. And one good page could provide a mental image to basically insert into the other pages which are maybe not drawn that any given person wants.

VVlewd, you do some good stuff, particularly your Leanne, Raynie, and Chie. I'd be happy to have you doing a page.

>>4399679
Yeah, let's break this down.

We have:
1) An energetic girl who is gung ho about getting involved in all the sex. So that's either a redhead for the fiery personality or a blonde for the sluttiness.

2) A bit of a prude who pooh-poohs the convention and insists she's only there to observe before turning into the biggest slut of them all. Brunette, right? Maybe the tallest and most slender, too. Although an argument could also be made for her to have the biggest tits of the three and be a buxom beauty.

3) A naive silly girl who barely notices the sex at all. Shortest of the three, most likely. Blonde or redhead, depending on the choice for #1. She could either be a flat chested pipsqueak or have the biggest bust, depending on the choice for #2.

We can pick names based on the results of that calculus.

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Here is an example of what is immediately coming to mind as far as basic characteristics go.

>>4399685
I don't think she necessarily needs to be prude. She should just be in denial about why she's there and slowly but surely allow herself to go deeper and deeper.

The way I pitched her character in the discord app was:
> There should definitely be one girl in denial about why she came. First she says she just came to do a report, but she won't leer at anybody. Then she says she'll watch, but she won't get off on it or anything. Then she'll say she'll masturbate but only in a way that nobody notices. And then...
>[etc]

>>4390416
A struggling mangaka and roommate writer decide to make hentai

So they begin having sex and exploring fetishes together as "strictly research" and it goes about as well as you'd expect

>>4400084
Both dudes, one is hawt trap.

>>4400084
the que question is why are they roommates?

>>4400115
Wut
Why are anyone roomates, they are young and have no money for thier own place the fuck is wrong with you.

Some of these "questions" are the most retarded shit I've read, so this is what running a creative writing class for autists is like.

>>4400125
Whoa! take it easy, man.

there's always a reason to be or have a roommate and it can be something important for the plot
but yeah. if you want to rely everything on destiny its ok.

everything happens in a magical way as always. no problem with that.
IMHO I think ¡s just a little lame that way. just that

and sorry, I'll try to be careful with my words before say something about your masterpice.
my apologies

>>4400135
Not even the idea guy, lol.
It's a premise for porn, eng major, not a dissertation.
Even this >>4400125 silly comment is better, maybe you faggots should concentrate on hot fucking and sex not regurgitating homework here.

>>4400142
ok whatever you say samefag

>>4390416
why the fuck would i want to pay for a professionally made hentai that relies on the input of retards? if you're going to base it off of nonsense, then make the project fun. we write a hentai and then draw the pages ourselves, one page at a time.

>>4400165
>why the fuck would i want to pay for a professionally made hentai that relies on the input of retards?
I admit I laughed. But come on be fair. Most hentai relies on the input of retards.

>>4400074
Are you talking about as the cosplay or just body type and hair color?

>>4398874
Not bad at all. I have a few recommendations. Could we add in a backstory about /H/Con itself? Who are the organizers? Why did they start it? Also all three MCs are kind of the same. They all show up and then ahegao at the end. Maybe make it so some of the girls are tricked into going and theres a rape scene. Or maybe this isnt a new convention but one that really exists like anime expo and the new organizers corrupted it and there's a battle over what side wins with some people liking the new style and others wanting to go back to the old.

>>4401056
>Could we add in a backstory about /H/Con itself? Who are the organizers? Why did they start it? Maybe make it so some of the girls are tricked into going and theres a rape scene.

One of the explanations was that a couple of years ago nobody bothered to bring the signs >>4397624 so attendees just decided to roll with it, and it worked well enough that it continued. It'll be worked into the intro, but it's not meant to be overly significant.

>Or maybe this isnt a new convention but one that really exists like anime expo and the new organizers corrupted it and there's a battle over what side wins with some people liking the new style and others wanting to go back to the old.
Not up for political shit. It's not meant to be social commentary, and if introducing something that major doesn't add to the story, then it's actively detracting. I'm not trying to go into some Tumblr-tier autism about how rape is bad, but this is intended to be a light-hearted or funny hentai manga, people fuck and enjoy it, not an insider's look at the Russian sex trafficking network.

>>4401056
I don't think it really needs any explanations. Some interest develops in an anime convention that is part orgy, people show interest, so it happens. Sure, you're playing loose with the legalities of consent, but there's always an element of "porn logic" with these things.

>>4401056
>Could we add in a backstory about /H/Con itself? Who are the organizers? Why did they start it?
Adding backstory would also add to the length though. If our drawfag associate's estimates are accurate, we're already looking at two to four weeks of work for a competent artist. I don't think we can pile on much more than that and maintain any realistic expectation of it getting done. Any additional subplots would add at minimum five to ten pages.
>Maybe make it so some of the girls are tricked into going and theres a rape scene.
We talked about this a lot in the discord. I wanted to cast as wide a net as I could as far as fetishes go but some are controversial to the point that their presence will necessarily repel a certain percentage of people. And since this is a group project we have to be neutral. I threw a small bone to the NTR crowd with the mom and son background scene but I don't think it's prudent to make rape a major topic. I think the one thing we have a near 100% consensus on is that we want this to be fun.

>>4401179
>One of the explanations was that a couple of years ago nobody bothered to bring the signs >>4397624 so attendees just decided to roll with it, and it worked well enough that it continued. It'll be worked into the intro, but it's not meant to be overly significant.
We had two competing "origin" stories. Thing is, they're not compatible with each other. The one I ran with was that it's a new convention and the premise was known from the start. The other suggestion was that it was a NORMAL convention but someone forgot to bring the "Cosplay is not consent" signs and without them it fell into chaos. The second scenario means that the attendees couldn't have been prepared and definitely sounds more rapey. But ultimately my problem with it is that it feels needlessly confrontational. It reads like a challenge to Tumblr or something. "Hey, check out our reductio ad absurdum satire on how silly the Cosplay Is Not Consent sign is." "Oh lawd, they forgot the sign! Whatever will we do! The rapists will win now!" It leans very political.
>>4401223
In the real world consent can be withdrawn at any time. In the fictional world we're spinning here I suppose there's an implication that saying no would be overridden by being dressed in cosplay at the venue. Just being there and in costume is the consent regardless of any vocal objections.

That said, I don't want to tease that out because of the above issue with rape. I kind of make a joke of it in the background with Link and the security guard but bringing that into the forefront would rub some people the wrong way. And again, it also changes the nature of the event from a fun twist on traditional anime cons into a high stakes battleground. The tone shifts.

>>4401293
>In the real world consent can be withdrawn at any time.
This is exactly what I meant. Hell, it's the first thing I thought of when considering the premise.

I also think it's less about tone and more about which crowd(s) you try to please. There are plenty of works featuring comedic rape, so featuring it doesn't inherently detract from the lighthearted tone if it's done with thematic consistency. If you want to appeal to rapefags, then you don't have to worry about treading lightly, except maybe to maintain a comedic tone throughout the work. However, if you want vanillafags with delicate sensibilities to like it, then you have to be careful so as not to even imply rape. The easiest option, of course, would be to skirt the issue of revoking consent during intercourse entirely-- that everyone who is having sex because they want to.

(Semi-related aside, it irritates me when scriptwriters feel the need to have the girl say "don't" in the middle of an encounter she explicitly consented to.)

There's no problem with going either way, except that if you don't cater to vanillafags, then at best a large chunk of people ignoring the work, or at worst, a lot of backlash.

>>4401478
You don't like the "r" word then the whole concept is no good, and who is this for if not us, the filth that is 4chan, where vanilla-fags are certainly newshit minority.

You're trying to apply western live action porn rules as if this was some commercial project to sold porn-hub casuals for profit.

I can't belive so many anons, in a blue board, are actally worried about offending anyone, waifu-fags, vanilla-fags like politician scum.

What are you faggots so afraid of??

>>4401478
>it irritates me when scriptwriters feel the need to have the girl say "don't" in the middle of an encounter she explicitly consented to.
No sometimes mean yes, yes sometimes mean no.
Humans aren't lawyers and you'll will forever be irritated that people prior to ~2012 didn't think like you.

>>4401500
It's not about offending anyone outside the boards but appealing to the largest percentage of people on /h/. Granted, it's /d/ material but I personally would be put off if one of the girls sprouted a dick. And if we're going to work together then we need to produce something that everyone can fap to and read from beginning to end without the story going in a direction that makes them lose their boner. Even things that people don't find offensive but would be stupid as shit wouldn't really work. Like if it every woman had two heads or some shit. A lot of people aren't going to want to see that and at some point we have to agree on this thing or at least be reasonably content with the direction it goes in.

Besides, I don't think there's anything vanilla about the premise. I personally have never heard of any hentai being set within anime culture and puts a perverted spin on conventions.

>>4401513
Nice hyperbole.
You're bringing up obviously /d/ examples, waifu/vannilla faggotry, along with rape is well within /h/ territory.

The fuck do you care about pleasing everyone, do you see anyone here but us, the half dozen of us keeping this thread alive?
The best this project can hope for is art that isn't completely laughable to be posted on another thread that will have the same amount of IPs.

Speak from your heart, speak from your boner, you're a vanilla-fag say so, stop hiding behind this delusion of consensus, no one cares.

>>4401500
>You don't like the "r" word then the whole concept is no good
>There's no problem with going either way
Nice strawman.

>>4401513
>Besides, I don't think there's anything vanilla about the premise.
Vanilla is used inconsistently, but basically if it's not rape, NTR, scat, /d/, etc. then you're clear. It may not be vanilla in the truest sense of the word, but a vanillafag won't be put off.

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can we design the girls already?

>>4401520
There's 60 posters in this thread so far. I don't know how many are still active but there's a decent number of people involved. Again, you want to contribute, write a script.

>>4401538
Waiting on our drawfag friend. Looks like he's interested in doing something with what we've got.

>>4401540
I'm one of those drawfags. I want ideas because im bad with original characters.

>>4401542
I made a suggestion here >>4400074 for a general idea of what kinds of traits the girls could have. Blonde/brunette/redhead trio and varying tit size and height among them.

Simple question. Is this work going to be black and white, Right to left?

Black and white, most likely. Probably left to right though I would imagine unless we really want to pretend its Japanese.

>>4401564
>unless we really want to pretend its Japanese.
at least to me, LtR feels weird when I read B&W comics.

I don't care, but I'm pretty sure we're going to need to describe in that story the reading orientation

>>4401568
Regardless of which way, just put a line on the cover page.

whatever this will be it needs to have at least one instance of non NBR incest

>>4401572
to me NBR incest is not incest

>>4401572
Well there's real incest already.

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>>4401538
>>4401542
Very obvious inspiration, major differences are lower cut and higher midpart.

Probably someone with better aesthetics than me can throw in some more things to make it more subtle? The chest straps should be kept though

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>>4401905
>The chest straps should be kept though
that just reminds me kasumi/misty.

not sure if that's ok.

>>4402106
I could see one of them cosplaying as Misty.

gawd, this is the slowest thread 'ive ever been.

Found something similar to the general premise of /h/con: https://nhentai.net/g/175052/

This means the idea isn't entirely original (most of what I want to include is featured in this doujin), but I still think going with /h/con will be the best opportunity to write in a wide variety of features all at once.

>>4402288
It's within a similar nexus of a public orgy. But I think one of the neat things about /H/Con is that it takes the sexualization of cosplay to its logical extreme. There's something arousing about instead of seeing Chun-Li get gangbanged, its a girl dressed like Chun-Li. Probably because while Chun-Li is clearly fictional, girls who dress like her are not. It's actually pretty meta. A fantasy of a fantasy.

>>4398874
Been following this thread. Dick diamonds at some of these scenes. I would prefer NTR but if you guys make anything at all that would be amazing

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Okay, so I'm aware that this one is a bit more complex, but the idea is that even though she's hesitant at the start, clothing loss is followed by her being less prudish, so by the time she's wearing next to nothing, she's really really into the con.

For example, full -> loses sash -> loses rings -> loses cloak -> loses underwear/garters -> just hat and boots

>>4402653
I like the design but drawfags might shudder at the thought of a MC having so much loose fabric.

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>>4402653
its a nice idea but.

>>4402886
>drawfags might shudder at the thought of a MC having so much loose fabric.
this.

Suggestion: We use that design but we shimmy in a panel in the first page or two where a guy runs by a rips off most of the flowing cloth. The girl says something indignant like "Hey, this took me all night to sew!" and the story continues as normal with her in a more skin-tight version of the costume.

>>4403012
I don't remember if I mentioned that, but that's definitely something that has to happen in order to make it viable. Outer sleeves get detached and say, the cloak gets torn halfway or something.

>>4403018
It should be easy based on how the script looks. Look at Page 2, panels 4 and 5. Squeeze in a panel of some shithead ripping half of her dress off and her angrily huffing about it. It would make it extra ironic happening right after she says "I think I'll be fine" and would add extra emphasis on the "you were saying?" that comes right after, too.

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>>4403012
>>4403018
>>4403058

since it's like a one piece dress is complicated.
the only thing you can do is leave her in underwear
if you're not going to destroy it

if you look how the costume works this combination is not possible through stripping.
but can be an option.

Can we make a doujin that closely follows that phone meme on /a/ and make it as lewd as possible?

>>4403061
I think readers will forgive a bit of fudging in that regard. If the guy rips an indistinct amount of fabric off in the panel and in the next panel she's in something less intricate, the readers would get the gist of what happened, even if the specifics of the damage done to the costume isn't perfectly depicted. As long as the costume goes from flowing and intricate to smaller and streamlined, people will understand what happened.

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>>4403070
that's a valid point.

well according to discord now it's settled that she's the sencond girl.

>>4400074

and I assume that this one is the 1st.

now we need to create the loli.

ideas?

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>>4403736
My first thought for #3 (Trixie) was a small girl with dark hair (black or blue). The nearest example I can think of is Stocking, but that's not a very good one. She needs that wide-eyed... not kuudere, not vacuous, but innocent expression. Can transition seamlessly from sucking dick to talking to her brother, because nothing really fazes her.

The hard part may be making her adult enough for /h/.

Dammit, I have a face in mind when I'm reading this, but I can't put a name to it, and I don't have the skills to draw it. This may be the closes thing in my /h/ folder.

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shit artist here. i thought it would be cool if one of them cosplayed as blossom, but then there wouldn't be much of a sole personality to the person. might as well leave it here since it might help you come up with things to avoid

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>>4403802
I thought this loli was supposed to be naive and reclutant to lewd do stuff
and blossom is a moralfag it should be ok..

momoko is just normal lovely girl.
a little cheeky too if I remember well.

we wanted a red hair so I think we need to change her hairstyle at least
to not just draw blossom.

>>4403844
doesn't /h/ like a little bit of fat on their lolis nowadays? Though I don't really keep up with the flavour of the day.

Haha, love the creepy old man with the blossom head. Gotta remember who you're doing all of this for.

>>4403844
>I thought this loli was supposed to be naive and reclutant to lewd do stuff
No, it's Girl 2 (witch cosplay) who is reluctant. The naive girl, Girl 3, is just completely unphased by the sex. She doesn't demonstrate either aversion or interest in it until it actually happens, then she likes it but still treats it like no big deal.

>>4403844
The anime Blossom in the lower right corner is the perfect look for the naive girl. She doesn't even really look loli, just small. As long as her proportions are relatively adult, no worries.

>>4404122
>>>4403844
>As long as her proportions are relatively adult, no worries.
No worries for you maybe. What if we want a loli that looks like a loli?

>>4404124
I dont care, just that loli is banned from /h/ right? But the sketch there is fine proportionally anyway isnt it?

>>4404131
I forgot about that rule since its not a blue board.
but I dont know how loli is loli enough to be banned

I think that blossom is fine. is not too much loli anyway.

>>4404256
Agreed. That design looks old enough it shouldnt trigger the loli ban while looking young enough to satisfy loli interests

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ok, here's an attempt or sketch of page 1

>>4398874

>>4397624
>>4400074

>>4403736 (You)
>>4402987 (You)
>>4403844 (You)

>>4404411
Nice. I like the relative sizes of the characters, and their expressions.

>>4404411
Am I the only one in awe that this is actually happening in a structured, mature, and professional manner? An anon posts a thread and says "let's make a manga" and /h/ is like "yeah, sure" and just straight up does it. Fucking amazing people on this board.

>>4404411
I can tell I'm gonna go big for the one in the witch hat

>>4404715
I'll say that this has gotten further along than I had expected, so credit to that. I'm still hardly certain we'll get a finished product out of this, but hey, I'm a cynic. Good on you guys if you actually pull through.

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obligatory

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>>4404715
>>4404831

>>4404874
porn civilizes us

>>4404874
forgive me that watermark

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>>4397973
sure thing buddy, never give up on your dreams! the biggest issue would definitely be consistency. We don't have a dozen inbetweeners at best we'll find maybe 2 since people who can imitate a style properly are rare. Granted you can always simplify the style until even a monkey could do it but still... hey who knows maybe I'm wrong and /h/ really as the potential to create a 30 min animation. I've seen crazier things.

>>4404411
>>4403736

I really like the design keep it up, maybe I'll manage to animate a
of it :)

inb4 pathetic attempt at animation

>>4404939
Are you another artist? Our current drawfag could use some assistance.

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ok. 2nd.

I didn't want to use the same
layout for 2 pages in row, Fuck

>>4405117
nice job, man!

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>>4404411

fixing things.

>>4404874
I dunno, the arguments over NTR spring to mind.

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new page 2

so
1 >>4405213
and 3 >>4405117

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>>4405674
you could always take the original sign as is.
not that I don't like the beach sign or anything.

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>>4405776

>>4404874
Top lel

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>>4405776
>>4405674
>>4405213
>>4405117
>>4404411
>come into thread expecting shitposting
>something decent is already being produced

>>4405776
>>4405794
I wanted to use the original but at the moment that beach was just a placeholder.

>>4405804
it's pretty great, isn't it?

>>4405213
This is promising. Great designs!

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>>4405804
>come into thread expecting the same thing
I don't mean to intrude on the drawfriend here in the thread, but I wouldn't mind lending a hand in contributing.

>>4391681
>>4391783
If that happens, artists should really be given the pages one after another and continue the story from where the previous artist left off.

>>4407754
Please, intrude! Join the discord to coordinate with elsbx!
https://discord.gg/xz3cD9z

He's doing essentially storyboards of the pages at the moment. Maybe you can help with final versions?

>>4407808
not him
Could I use the same link to just follow it?

>>4407831
Sure. The whole point of the discord was to help coordinate the project. We've done most of the work in there.

>>4407831
sure.

also next thread is going to be easier.
we have some stuff prepared to follow the progress of this thing

there are more sketches of pages done. but im not sure if post them since we're reaching the limit of this thread.

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guys.

since the first 3 pages were kinda symetrical. the're was no problem
but starting from page 4. we've been discusing something fairly important.

the reading direction of this manga. (Left to Right) or (Right to Left)

Up to now, page6. Changing the reading orientation to one side or another it's not a big deal. but we need to settle this thing.

some people wants L2R and others R2L. so I make a poll to solve this

http://www.strawpoll.me/11452506

RtoL

> japanese manga reading direction <--
> it doesn't fuck your mind when read Black and white comics.
> weeb
> makes sense since its a manga

LtoR
> normal roman reading direction -->
> it doesn't fuck your mind when read Black and white comics.
> less weeb
> korean manga is L2R so it makes sense in some way too.

I vote left to right for some major reasons. Japanese manga isn't drawn right to left just for stylistic reasons. Japanese can be written vertically and when it is it is read right to left. Since manga uses vertical text, its drawn right to left to keep consistent with the reading direction.

English doesn't work that way. Its always read left to right. Obviously when translating manga into English this is just a necessary evil where you have to read the text left to right but follow the panels right to left. But when we're writing something from scratch, natively in English, there is no practical reason not to keep consistent and make everything left to right, art included.

>>4407872
Furthermore, this page is too perfect to change and flipping art is a no-no.

I think Trixie/Annie is too suddenly lewded in the script. I mean Aylish/Belle is lewd from the get-go, and obviously Cynthia/Charlotte's had plenty of lewd characterization, but nothing's happened to Annie and then suddenly all three of them are subject to sexual acts montage style.

I mean I don't have any objection to that happening to Annie, but the way it happens to all of them at once implies they've all reached the same point character-wise, and at this point I don't even know if Annie's okay with it, indifferent, actively seeking it out or pathologically blind to reality (I mean she doesn't seem to notice). So if Annie suddenly being made to suck dick is the intention, I think it should be made to come before the montage-style sex. Even just a page before would be sufficient

Although unfortunately this would ruin
>What's happening?
>/h/con is happening.

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>>4407882
but still everyone brings something like "EHHH?! it was L2R!" when they read this thing.
the problem is that many of us are used to start reading from the right side if the thing is B&W

>>4407892
it was originally drawn R2L you know. just like page 5 and 6

>>4407897
if this is a problem... we need to work on that.

>>4407906
For what its worth, Dragon Ball Multiverse, a hugely popular fan manga, is Left to Right with very few if any complaints. But I'm just pointing out the obvious. English reads left to right. So if English is the native language of this thing it makes little sense to not have the art run in the same direction. The only reason to do the opposite is to pretend that it's a translation of a non-existent Japanese version. If the majority of people want that I understand. I just think it's kind of silly.

>>4407882
>>4407892
>>4407911

I know you're the same guy.
just give others an opportunity to decide

>>4407912
Never pretended otherwise. I'm giving my thoughts.

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>>4407906
I know this is a bit late, but something like this? (For which the current design fits perfectly I'd say.)

>>4407872
L2R I side with this guy >>4407882

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I'm interested in this proyect, but I don't have time now. I can do simple task, or I can make the colour later if you want.

You must have a place to store all the progress, or the project will eventually lose.
In addition it would be interesting to know those involved and the tasks to be performed.
A drive could be enough, and users can request work. They must coment the task with the date and if they don't do nothing in some days the task change to the next colaborator.

>>4408571
There aren't any plans for this to be in color but if you're offering I don't think anyone will complain. Your work looks great!

>>4407921
A day later I notice my mistake. Meant to quote >>4403783

>>4408571
Excellent work! I think everyone would love to see this in color!

>>4395230
I cast my vote for this. It's a decent story with a good opportunity to explore multiple fetishes.

>>4409108
we already started another story,.bro.

>>4407872
Whatever you choose please include a note about reading direction in the comic, it's often very confusing to figure out

>>4407882
>there is no practical reason not to keep consistent and make everything left to right, art included.
There's one that is, people who read manga are used to reading right to left and that orientation is usually way more intuitive for them

>>4407882
I actually default to reading right to left for comics. I'd imagine it's the same for anyone who reads far more manga than western comics.

New thread?
Bump limit reached!

>>4409261
just wait.

>>4409261
>>4409276

>>4409287
System kept thinking it was spam for whatever reason

>>4409288
Could have waited until like page 8. /h/ isn't that fast.