critic this design i made a while back, i fely it was incomplete

What the fuck even is this? Your text is ass, btw.

>>309755
Text is unreadable, compass is too transparent, make both things more visible.

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What's the design for?
Is it supposed to say "Cardinal"? It's really hard to read. The fact that I had to ask after spending some time deciphering it means you should definitely change it. If your client insisted on the font, persuade them to change it.
If this is meant to be a cover for something like a book or album, it needs more in the sense of time spent thinking of what'll make it clearer to understand, not just speaking about the font on this one.
Your colors are nice, but that's a really simple and easy effect you did, so I don't think you spent much time on that, but maybe overworked/thought on the font and design.
Ask yourself what the purpose of this is and then just think of what'll be understood the quickest and by the most amount of people.

>>309755

If you are unsure, grayscale it and then squint your eyes and see if it is readable.

>>310184
>Applying time spent on something as if that makes it better

stop acting like you know stuff.

>>310189
I'm not acting I know lots of things. He asked for advice so there.