I feel like i'm missing something. I don't really know

Hierarchy man you need to work on your hierarchy

Too white, I would add more particles and make the gradient stronger

>>309070
i'd agree totally. as well as heirarchy. What needs to be said first? Second? Third? How can they be differentiated effetively? Think space, colour, type, size.

My best advice: don't dwell - do. And don't come up with one option. Make 5 more. Then make 5 more. Sure, use the same idea, but create variations of the same idea. And don't be afraid to make an entirely different concept. As well - get inspired. Look - people rag on using google images but its a great tool to pick up visual cues or hints and to generally just get inspired. If google images existed 50 years ago, you can bet your ass designers would be using it.

And that's what you're missing. Exploration, process, and experimentation.

>>309482
s-h-i-l-l-i-n-g-t-o-n

The date and time is too large, too close to the title which is obviously your main point. Work on your heirarchy.

Also maybe add some imagery or some illustrations or something, that basic sans serif on a plain looking background seems really bland. Don't be afraid to experiment with fonts, just don't use more than 3 fonts. Stick to something decorative for a title and something readable for body text

Waregem is echt een kutdorp desu

Needs a little more/less subtle background particles. Also: first and final letters of your title should be fixed somewhat, as the splatters are showing at awkward places making it clear that its just typed rather than 'smudged out of the paint' (if you understand what I mean)