i've been workig on a monogram for my name: Agustin Guzman

It is a bit simple. I guess you could do better

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>>303888
lol

>>303888
I read CGA. Am I the only one that reads from biggest to smallest letter?

>>304009
This.
By the name I'm assuming you speak spanish: sin la envolvente y la tipografía podría ir como cascada, ocupa más espacio pero es mucho más claro.

>>303888
in spanish CH counts as a single letter

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UPDATE

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>>304020
wrong pic

>>304021

It reads "GA". The "C" is lost; I see you tried to make it appear with that small gap, but now it's an Easter Egg instead of an identifiable element.

you tryin to hard nigga

>>304020
it looks like it belongs on a shitty clothing store

>>304010
Me estas hablando a mi (el del post que le diste reply) o a OP?

>>304020
OP, keep trying. Don't get attached to just one idea, experiment a lot.

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ANOTHER UPDATE

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>>304130

>>304132
Trabajalo en trazos, tipo cursiva. La verdad que me parece que primero tienes que encontrar tu identidad y en base a eso hacer tu diseño, más parece que estás siguiendo una moda antes que diseñando.

Suerte amiguito

>>304135
No speak espanol. We no speak our stupid language here desu.

>>304140
Jeje, fucker cant event write un english

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>>304132

Looks great, if it were a logo for a radio station.

>>303888
I like it. Go with it.
Clean and well executed.

I'm a career GD 15+ years and I've designed lots of logos. This one is nice.

>>303888
>>305155

Also, don't post here for authentic, honest feedback. You'll only get trolls

>>304132
Uno problemo, how does the viewer know the correct order in which the letters have to be read?
Also, it's kinda generic, doesn't stand out.