First time Im posting work here, just made this logo for a website

As somebody who doesn't know code (i.e. your target audience), I don't get it. That aside, I get what you're doing with the box, but it reads like Kawschoo. And the inconsistent spacing between the horizontal dashmarks and your ascenders is making me twitchy.

>>281609
except for the dashes it's ok

>>281611
100% agree with this post

>>281609
Kawschoo?
I would go 1 of 2 ways on your typography.
1) Use a techno style font that the common man attributes to tech savvy business'.
2) use a straight up notepad/paragraph focused font that is grounded and realistic.

>>281609

This>>281750 is me

So one more thing.

Your idea is not strong, and it doesn't seem to be resonating with /gd/ - and if there was ever a nerd tech savvy enriched audience it's here.

So refine your concept, because the way you are attempting to visually communicate is currently inarticulate.

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What everyone has said, plus if those red bars are part of the design they don't work when it's in black and white.

>>281757
>guys i made it black and white is it better y/n

No. I still have no idea what Kawschoo does, and the spacing between your dashes is still fucking inconsistent.

My suggestion is dump it and start over.

>>281753
fampai here knows what he's talking about.

>>281757
I just realized you're not OP. But whatever, fuck you anyway.

I think the original one looks great.

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>>282080
>I just realized you're not OP. But whatever, fuck you anyway.

>>281609

It's like the roof collapsed on your ACHOO--