Hey guys i'm 16 years old , i'm some what new to graphic

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i changed the size

if you want critique you need to communicate what the piece is meant to be.
a logo?
free artwork?

i would say its okay and kind of unique. the colors in bomb are somewhat too ugly.
try some more desaturated colors like in the F and U

This hatching is meh. If you are using it to add shadows, why don't you use darker shades like on some other spots ? You should remove it.