any tips on improving from this, specifically directing, edi

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Love it, that beat is so ill...Do some beter sound editing as far as sfx are concerned like edit out the crinking of the water bottle plastic [unless u like the realness in that] what triggered me was the act of yah sound lightning or whatever instead of using the tin pan use like an actual short lightning crack....

I don't like the font in the credits. It doesn't match the title and byline, or the tone of the film, really.

Whenever Mike(?) says "oh hello didn't see ya" I think he should be in a different position on camera, so it doesn't look like a crappy YouTuber cut where they slice out all their ums and uhs. Normally it's good about that, but when he's out in the snow it's noticeable.

A lot of sections have too much background noise/echo. Look into some sort of way to record the audio without that.

The slow-mo shot of the school at the beginning has a lower framerate than the rest of the video, and it's a bit jarring.

Otherwise it's pretty decent for a student film.