So while I was designing I forgot to mention the composer's

>>252793
really nice composition

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>>252793
mooie compositie
ik zou het met een light of thin lettertype onder het kruis centreren. of maak de bovenkant en onderkant van het rood is kleiner waardoor je meer speling hebt boven en onder. Schuif dan het rode vlak iets naar boven tot je een witte lijn onder het witte vlak heb en de zwarte streep die groot genoeg is om zelfde soort grootte te doen als utrechts studentenkoor

>>252805
witte vlak moet rode vlak zijn bedoel ik

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>>252805
Ik zat al te spelen met de afstanden en heb het over het algemeen wat kleiner gemaakt. De afstanden vanaf de rand horizontaal en verticaal zijn nu groter. Heb die lijn doorgezet door hetzelfde te doen tussen alle texten en het rooie vlak. Heb tevens Bach in de stijl van het stukje bovenin erbij gezet :)

Thanks voor de opmerkingen!

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Now I wonder whether or not I should put the entrance fee on this side or on the back

>>252807
Now that I'm looking at it after uploading I think I'm gonna either reduce the thickness of the lines so they're just as thick as the small text or I'm gonna increase the thickness of the text so it's the same as the lines.

>>252793
this poster looks like a tribute for fallen soldiers.
it has something aggressive due to the blood-like grungy background. why so much crosses? is it on a graveyard? also i dont know how it is in holland but in germany its called matthäus (double t)
you should put the name on the top like:
Utrechts studentenkoor presents: overture whatever b J.S.Bach.
the entrance fee should be small in a bottom corner.

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>>252811
Yeah I know. I did another version with only one big cross in reference to Jesus. Then there's this psychedelic version :D

It's as much a poster about Bach as it is about Jesus so it should be okay.

I also have some other designs with a different composition and elements all together, but still trying my luck with this one.

>>252821
the textplacement is better
the picture with those vectorized elements is shit.
try to be clever about it
maybe take some elements like: a piano, notes, the cross, church and combine it. be a little abstract
use a simple background. a nice dark blue resembles church for me.
avoid such result pictures like the cross or bach himself.

>>252822
Yeah I was just messing around. I'll probably do a minimal art type of thing