/efg/ Erotic Fiction General

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>>7225068
Typically we don't make them until the other one has dropped off the board, to make sure they get archived because /d/ is slow as fuck.

Reposting from the old thread because I'm pretty sure I'm on to something here with the futa.
pastebin.com/m6jHwvi0

Angel story, this is the first draft but I'd really like some feedback and how to polish it up.

This the first of my foray into futa but I've been a long time fan.

tags: Fantasy, futa, futadom, angels, wizards, occult, light bondage.

>>7224971
Please do, just check with the author first.

Since this is now a general thread, can we request /co/ related smut?

>>7225112
>now
So it was a never general for it being around for several years and starting on a different board?

>>7225112
Go ahead, but judging from how these thread went so far don't be surprised if people don't want to write about existing characters.

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Speaking of artists and commissions I'm having trouble too, not one of the artists I emailed has gotten back to me yet and Morpp seems to be AWOL. He hasn't responded to my email and he hasn't updated any of his sites in like a month.

Anyone know of any other artists who might be available? I don't even want crazy porn just SFW character portraits.

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Delayed response, but 1/2-3:
>>7223832
I use AO3 for fapfics, here's the short and long of it.

>Formatting is fine (though I use Wordpad and Notepad++ so I tend to have to go in and manually check the spacing anyway to make sure it doesn't look like garbage when I post)
>Multiple file formats for DL are convenient and great if you have an ereader.

Some other great features not listed here include:
>You can save rough drafts of new stories for a month; however once the month is up, the draft will be deleted with NO means of recovery, so do not use this as your main storage.
>You can queue future chapters of an already published story by writing it in like a normal chapter then choosing to save instead of post. Unlike drafts of new stories, there is no time limit on this as far as I'm aware. This and the above feature make it easier to build up posting queues if you want to create an update schedule.
>Supports Greasemonkey, so you can use scripts like AO3 Savior, which allows you to filter out stories with tags that you don't want. There is a list of unofficial scripts in the site's FAQ that I recommend looking at.
>Allows you to bookmark stories on your account, including private bookmarks if you don't want people knowing what you're reading and recommended bookmarks if you do want people to know what you're reading and want them to read it too.
>Easy(ish) share options on each page if you want to link to something via twitter or tumblr.
>Option to moderate comments. You can either prevent nonusers from commenting on your story or require all comments to receive your approval before they're posted on the story's page.

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>>7225161

http://superamiuniverse.tumblr.com/

>>7225165
Features, cont'd:
>When you select an author's name, you can sort their works by fandom or tags they've used. Ex. I read Snek and decide I want to read more XCOM2 works by Snekguy, I can go to his userpage, click on XCOM2, and everything that isn't XCOM2 will be filtered out. Same for say, femdom. I can click on the femdom tag and everything that has femdom will be sorted into a nice simple list for me. You can also filter out incomplete stories if you prefer to wait for a work to be finished or hate when people abandon stories. You can also sort a user's bookmarks this way too.
>You can connect stories in a series. This will give them a button at the bottom of the story that will automatically take them to the next part of the series without having to click through the author's dashboard. You can select a given series on an author's dashboard to see all the stories in that series.
>If you are retarded, you can prevent your stories from being seen by nonregistered users. I cannot think of a single example in which this does not actively hurt your readership, but I guess it's a feature for someone. Stories that have this restriction will have a blue lock icon in the corner of their description box.
>You can subscribe not only to users, but specific stories. This means if you like a specific story but don't want to get bombarded by the user's entire upload schedule, you can just subscribe the stories you like and get notifications when they update.
>You can use 'pseuds' if you want to separate your stories into different fandoms, which saves you the time of registering separate accounts. When you click on an author's page, all their pseuds will be listed and you can choose whether you want to look at a specific pseud or all their works collectively. I've also seen people use them for separating their short stories from their long works.

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>>7225170
Downsides not listed:
>No PM system. I assume it's to avoid harassment of authors, but makes it harder to network if you don't have an external social media account.
>Can't block registered AO3 users, only moderate comments.
>People seem somewhat hesitant to comment on works (but also tend to give higher quality or lengthier feedback than I've experienced on other sites).
>Once you get shoved off the first two or three pages of a given tag, your work tends to stop receiving feedback so first impressions matter tremendously.
>The time zone you're set in may cause your work to be loaded in further down the front page rather than loading on top. This is extremely annoying on days when there are a bunch of submissions in a given tag and means that readers may see stories that were posted earlier in the day (relative to your timezone) higher on the page than yours and assume that nothing else has been posted since they last checked. Always check the full day's worth of submissions for a given tag if reading the most recent content is important to you.
>Can't automatically click to the newest chapter in a story unless you install a specific script, you have to go through the dropdown menu at the top of the story's page (which some combinations of script blocking will render nonfunctional) or click through the chapters manually.

You don't actually need an invitation and the waiting list isn't very long. I think I only waited something like two days to get approved when I signed up a couple years ago. The tagging takes some getting used to, but once you figure it out, it shits all over every other online writing archive.

I can answer any other questions anyone has about it as well.

What gets you in the zone to write?

>>7225183
No idea. I think that might be the problem.

>>7225183
Writing at a specific time every single day.

>>7225183
Proper sleep
watching a romantic movie/tv show
general arousal

>>7225183
Either something I'm reading/watching gets my mind rolling with ideas; or I'm bored and want to do something constructive with my time.

>>7225183
Establishing a routine and the guilt of failing to meet quotas.

>>7225167
Thanks I'll check him out.

>>7225112
Sure. /aco/ mods don't want writing threads there for some reason (/h/ is fine with it though.)

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>>7225234

/aco/ was a mistake

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>>7225256
Western Art is such a mixed bag.
I feel like the nips have a far more consistent level of quality because of the style they all conform to, and they seem to draw less extreme fetish stuff, or at least a different subset of fetishes that seems to exclude the subjects I personally dislike.
Pretty much all Western art is either MS Paint-tier or sparkledogs.
But while Western art is 90% festering shit all of the very best artists are Western.
If there was a way to allow all Asian art and only the top 10% of Western art it would be the best board ever.

>>7225256
Nice fake. 10 minutes in Paint?

>>7225234
>>7225256
>>7225284
Seriously, could you please take this bitching elsewhere and discuss the content provided in the threads instead?

>>7225294

http://www.strawpoll.me/11868102/r

>>7225284
You should probably repost your last update because it was so close to the end of the last thread

>>7225183

A fresh start with a new setting/story.

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>>7225320
Sure.

Worlds Apart:
http://pastebin.com/H03yuTbM
>no new tags

>>7225329
Why don't you put the story tags with your updates? Why would you not tell anyone who hasn't followed your story since the very first update what your story contains?
Why not make it:
>Story tags: blah blah blah
>This update's tags: blah blah

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>>7225337
I can do that if you'd like, but I usually post so may updates in a given thread that it becomes spammy/redundant to keep listing them.

>>7225329
Tags so far:
>blowjob, oral, virgins, vanilla, vaginal, romance, drama

>>7225342
Then at least do it whenever you add new tags and your first post of every new thread so that anyone who doesn't religeously follow these threads knows what they're getting into and if it might interest them.

>>7225362
Will do.

>>7225365
Thanks.

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>>7216242
>a cute vanilla monsterboy story
i've been working on these designs between actual work, get in any last-minute opinions/changes now because i'm going to try to get something done about them soon!

>>7225388
Oh shit, somebody picked my thing up, awesome.
Those designs are looking good
Only thing is that I'd figure the wolfboy would be naked at first, since wolves don't wear cloths and he just shifted out of wolf form
Maybe she lends him her cloak?

>>7225388
oh boy that's cute.

>>7225388
That's really good.

>>7225388
The only thing I'd change would be to give the girl a pixie cut, but that's just because I think they're cute as fuck

>>7225165
>I use AO3 for fapfics
You write?
Links plox

>>7225388
>eclair meets the wulfen

>>7225388
Oh, my! Prote is back. This is a good day.

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>>7225477
I'd rather keep my fanworks and my original works separate. If I write stuff for this thread, it'll be posted here.

>>7225388
Oooh I like your art! Do you have a place you normally post it?

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>>7225172
One downside I forgot:
>When adding/editing a story or chapter, there is NO AUTOSAVE. If your browser crashes or you accidentally close the window, you're SOL on whatever you just did, so be sure to save drafts frequently.

>>7225388
Qt.

>>7225167
Over the last few years Nitro's anatomy and coloring has gotten a bit to rubbery/plasticky for me.
I mean, outside of where the character is actually meant to be made out of some sort of rubbery goop.

>>7225498
Solution: write in an RTF compliant editor that autosaves, then copypaste.

>>7225161

Snek, do you need me to find more FA artists for you? There are always more.

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>>7225503
That's why I suggested not using it as your main form of storage or writing. However, this can still be a problem if you're like me and do minor bits of editing while skimming through the draft after copypasting. It's easier to DL the version with corrected text after posting it rather than clicking back and forth between windows every time I realize I transposed 'trial' into 'trail' or something similarly petty, especially because I tend to post chapters or oneshots that are ~10k words long. Any major edits are done in the original document.

>inb4 but you could just do the edits in the original document
For some reason I catch things in the AO3 window that I don't in my normal word processors. Change of perspective, I guess.

>>7225388
This story better include fluffy tail-hugging

>>7225388

So when do they [spoiler]tie the knot[/spoiler]?

>>7225506
Sure, that'd be helpful. I sent off an email to a Tumblr artist I know too, I'll see if he has any slots open.

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>>7225388

>>7225538
Please tell me there is more to this comic.

>>7225388
>Started working on monsterboy story to try and get myself out of a rut
>This shows up
>It's above anything I could do in terms of quality
>Isn't even finished yet
>This kills the man
Welp. It's looking super cute though, I'll be waiting patiently to see what it turns into.

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3000 word update, new content at "She finally broke away, a soothing warmth washing over Jamie's body"

Worlds Apart:
http://pastebin.com/H03yuTbM
New tags:
>muscle

While the suggestions for having Jamie not believe it was Liz were good, I feel like that would make the plot drag on a lot longer than I want it to. I'm gonna finish this up within about 30k words.

Tell me how I did trying to give Liz her own distinct manner of speaking, trying to work on that.

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>>7226036
That pic, those tags. This is going to be a doosy isn't it? Lordy help me.

>>7226039
>doosy

*doozy

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wew that's a lot of responses!

first off thanks for all compliments/comments, if people are this interested i'll try to keep pace up on it!

>>7225414
duly noted, though i have no idea what kind of dick to give this good boy. normal human dick???

>>7225480
you know that can't happen!!

>>7225491
protle.tumblr.com

>>7225815
friend, post it anyway! it's a two-cake scenerio, where you think you're putting a bad cake next to a good cake, but everyone waiting for cake is just excited to see two cakes. i for one would love to see more monsterboy stuff, so join me on this posting journey!

Requesting a story about an awkward new prostitute girl getting shown the ropes by a more experienced girl who got tired of watching the new girl fail.
I'm just as interested in the girl learning to sell herself properly as I am in the sex.

>>7226036
It's kind of interesting how at times it's almost like she's gloating over earth stuff, obviously the martial arts but also a little in how she talked about not backing off.

>>7226071
>i have no idea what kind of dick to give this good boy. normal human dick???
Since it's a monsterboy, I'd imagine a dog dick
Original requester, what so you figure?

>>7226071
Definitely wolfdick, 100%

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>>7226036
>absurdly developed abdominal muscles

>>7226154
Knots or bust (a nut).

>>7226071
>duly noted, though i have no idea what kind of dick to give this good boy. normal human dick???
>>7226150
>Original requester, what so you figure?
I'm gonna make it unanimous for dog/wolf dick

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>>7226071

A bunch of these stories that are on the master smut list have been removed.

>>7226187
Any you can find, we should remove the hyperlink for, right?

Guys I'm trying to write about a take charge trap who fucks monster girls.
Except I keep having to use "his" and "him", what do?

>>7225284
>I feel like the nips have a far more consistent level of mediocrity
ftfy

>>7226247
If the audience knows they are a male, and they personally identify as a male, no problem.

If they identify as female, you'll have to be specific enough to make sure the audience always knows which she that paragraph is talking about. Don't mix actions in your paragraphs. Once an actor is done, line break, and reestablish.

If the trap doesn't know what they want to be, you could always try using 'they/them'.

>>7226187
Well fuck, time to make those offline backups of everything that remains

>>7226071
If you have the opportunity to give the knot, you GIVE THE KNOT.
Also, I like that first outfit design for him, but he can start with just the skirt.

>>7226036

I can see how you carved out a unique personality for Liz, she's clearly dominant now but you can sense the excitability in her tone, that part of Liz that Jamie was used to before she left. I like it.

Jamie on the other hand, had some pretty flat dialogue and reactions. You basically used him as simple pauses in her story telling, but there were no real interactions between them. Some of the lines were straight "So what happened next?" and nothing else, as if he was solely talking just as a narrative purpose and not as a character.

>>7226036
I hope you don't skimp on the sex. I've been really looking forward to it.

Don't forget to describe her size compared to him and ect. I want to know about her abs dude.

hey snek, I know you're swamped to the gills, but how about a story about a female human size queen looking for a Borealan partner that can truly scratch her itch?

>>7226187
Well, fuck me. Reupload them when you can, and be sure to add the new links.

>>7226595
Could make snuff too? Really lacking that round here.

>>7226611
I'm pretty sure that's explicitly prohibited from even being linked to on 4chan.

>>7226595

Better yet, make her a faithfull dragon dildo user who can't resist the idea of having actual, living xeno-dick inside her, and has made it her life-long goal to do so.

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Ohey new thread.

>>7226703
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>>7226706
These are great, I need illustrations of this quality.

>>7226703
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>>7226705
>>7226706
Hey, pretty nice !
>That farseer naked under her dress
HNNNG

>>7226706
Absolutely Heretical!

>>7226766
>>7226791
Even exiled all the way here on /d/, the /40k/ roots are still deep.

>>7226801
Well, Inker is pretty much the only reason I come around there anymore, considering of how little of /wst/ is left.

>>7226803
Yeah, well I guess it feels out of place to spend half the thread arguing about 40k lore or the mechanics of a DnD monster when we aren't on /tg/.

>>7226183
Snek, I dunno if you're aware you're doing this/doing it as a stylistic choice/whatever, but just in case, you're abusing the fuck out of commas.

>He didn't really believe her, things could never go back to the way they were before she had left, but that didn't mean they couldn't create something new.
You can't actually do that. You need a period after "didn't really believe her." Or a semicolon I guess, but those are awful in this kind of writing.

I dunno. Maybe you're aware and you're doing it on purpose. I haven't noticed it in any of your other work, and I've read almost all of it. But it's bugging me a bit, and you're doing it outside dialog, so I thought I'd mention it. I've seen it happen several times in Worlds Apart, especially this last update.

Anyway, back to lurking. Love your stuff.

This would be cute as hell.

>A dragon takes a human as her treasure.
>Before this, Anon was kind of depressed.
>Obviously treasure isn't worth much if it isn't polished regularly, so she "Polishes" the human by trying to cheer him up.
>There isn't any point in owning a treasure if you don't use it either.
>Lots of loving sex.

>>7226706
>Allies of Convenience

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>>7226595
I am likely gonna get to that, someone pitched a story where a size queen shuttle pilot ends up stranded in the Polar region and fucks Zagza.

>>7226390
That's valid I'll try to give him some more personality.

>>7226409
It's gonna be ab-solutely ab-surd.

>>7226808
That's just me sucking at punctuation, I'll try to work on it.

Also just a heads up some little gremlin has been posting non-authorized Pinwheel stories on Literotica, so if you see an extremely poorly written story about Borealans that plays out like bad Naruto fanfiction, that's not me and I didn't facilitate it.
I'm trying to get them removed but everything on that site happens in slow motion.

>>7226595
>>7226673
Somebody already made that request, it's on the list

>>7227071
>Also just a heads up some little gremlin has been posting non-authorized Pinwheel stories on Literotica, so if you see an extremely poorly written story about Borealans that plays out like bad Naruto fanfiction, that's not me and I didn't facilitate it.
That's fucking hilarious. Does it seem like it's written by a troll or just an idiot?

>>7226848
Seconded

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>>7227074
Just an idiot, I wouldn't have minded but he refused to credit me then claimed I 'don't own it' and refused to take it down voluntarily.
Oh well I'm popular enough for plagiarism, that's a milestone, right?

>>7227082
I see. I was almost gonna ask for a link out of morbid curiosity, but I don't want to give this wanker any more pageviews

>>7226803
Hey, don't forget me either. Been with /wst/ since day one, and fully prepared to be the last one out.

Speaking of which, repost time. Will be updating this further today, with an extra oral scene before the first sex scene inspired by anons here. I would've never thought of that description of angel vagina juice tastes without you, guys.

Divine Love
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16KevErEaG7glBQ_SQyWLSQQLkiiPKUTT2EleZA51OrE/edit

Tags: humanxangel, vanilla, oral (female), vaginal

>>7227071
>>7227082
If anyone plagarized me, I'd just ask what the hell they were thinking. I'm not nearly good enough of a writer for my stuff to be worth ripping off.

>>7227071
>Also just a heads up some little gremlin has been posting non-authorized Pinwheel stories on Literotica, so if you see an extremely poorly written story about Borealans that plays out like bad Naruto fanfiction, that's not me and I didn't facilitate it.
Oh shit I just saw that and was gonna link it here, but you beat me to it

>>7227082

they say plagiarism is the sincerest form of flattery

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/tg/-related stuff from stream.

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>>7227193
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>>7227187
Noice

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>>>/aco/
Off topic material goes in its proper board. You're lucky enough you're allowed to have your exiled threads in the first place so follow the board rules of you want to keep them.

>>7227268
>(you)

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>>7227071
>never lost a fight
Even if she never initiated any, that has to have racked up impressively. The effect on any underlings she's acquired if they saw her going full cuddle mode with Jaime would probably be hilarious.

Wonder what she's doing that she can afford the trip, not to mention a sweet scaled up human style wardrobe.

Also, I can't believe this is the only /fit/ girl image I have on this machine. Time to go trawling the non-hyper muscle threads for a while. At least she's blonde and caramel I guess.

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>>7227289
>the eternal debate of whether you should put these two in your /u/ folder or your /fit/ folder

Surely I was searching wrong, but I couldnt find any stories about volunteer TF stories. I really like those, especially when involing some science-sounding themes and suits.

Does anybody know any good ones?

I almost gave up on finding contortion or bodypaint related ones on the other hand.

Thanks for replies!

>>7227302
>not having a /fit/ subfolder in your /u/ folder
Amature hour right here folks.
Also, it's back to grave goods after this one, yes?

>>7227308
Next up is Snek 4, the back to Grave Goods.

>>7227314
K. How much Worlds Apart do we have left?

>>7227320
Probably another 10k words or so.

>>7227289
>Even if she never initiated any, that has to have racked up impressively. The effect on any underlings she's acquired
Hey, maybe THAT'S where she got the cash for the trip back, extorting money from everyone who was dumb enough to fuck with her

>>7227323
So 3-4 updates?

>>7227329
Probably yeah. It might drag into the start of February, depending on how fast I can do it, but it will be done in under a week.

>>7227306
TF is transformation yeah?

>>7227351

Yup. At first I expected to find stories about some female sciencist going wild with her research or female soldier volunteering for some sort of "upgrade procedure" to be more popular, but I must be just bad at proper searching.

I really should get back to writing stuff I want to see in the world.

I have an idea for soft Dom stories that will let me add in desperation/wetting content at the drop of a hat.

Typically it would be in the same setting as those Sander of the Zindu stories I wrote... But instead I might change it to fantasy, or sci-fi...

A woman forced into a sort of nun-like order, where her will is assumed to be attached to a powerful non-human guy that can treat her like a slave if he wants? I like. With the caveat being that she becomes his 'power source'.

Hmmm, fantasy, elves, or sci-fi.

>>7227268
Inker's from SEA, so it's eastern art.

Faggot.

Random question for snek or anyone else who cares to answer:

Who's your favorite polar borealan?

>>7227369
Sounds like a good enough idea to me, and the premise could work in any of the settings you listed.

How would this power source thing work, exactly? That might be what decides what setting type would be best for the story.

>>7227618
The original concept I had, way back when I was a horny teenager. Was sort of like using DC's Starfire as a magical battery.

The power sources were like a sub-species of elves that were mute, ritualistic, and naive. They could be bonded to a person trained for the task, and that individual could channel the power sources magical power to cast spells. But to keep your power source full of juice, it was a good idea to keep them happy. Because of their child-like naivety that lead to lots of cute bathing sessions leading into innocent naughty moments.

As I'm now jaded and old, I figure any strong emotional power would work, so an angry battery is as good as a passionate battery. The important thing is keeping them cared for, and from there their owner can do whatever they want with them within a certain range. No one cares if you whip your power source, when it has a terrible power output, that's your own fault.

>>7227543
Station doctor for Moraelz.
She's the only one who isn't an insufferable manipulative cunt.

>>7227645
So like Green Lantern mythos if instead of rings you had elf slave waifus?
I'd read it.

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2500 word update, new content at "She shifted her weight, perhaps growing uncomfortable"

Worlds Apart:
http://pastebin.com/H03yuTbM
>no new tags

>>7227543
Ursi

>>7225183
New projects and total isolation

>>7227325
Maybe, though I'm not sure I see fight money working when the bouts are basically a staple of establishing social structures.
I wonder if Liz found anyone on the homeworld that she counted as friends? Borealans clearly have a form of mutual companionship between things like pack mates, but I'd assume her more human outlook would make her want something a bit different. Raz had some of the human concept of friendship punched into her and it seemed to resonate a little, so they can learn, and it's basically guaranteed that a social animal in a highly regimented society has psychological needs being neglected by that structure. Case in point being shit like the hellfire club in Victorian London.

>>7227683

You

Godamn

Tease

>>7227658
Yes, pretty much that.

If I made it sci-fi, it would probably be an alien with a human slave waifu.

If fantasy, human slave priestess waifu.

>>7227543
>Who's your favorite polar borealan?
Tie between runt, because he's adorable, and Kaisha, because for a miracle she isn't a complete sleezebag in one way or another

>>7227683
>The gravity alone means humans can't stay there unaided for more than a few months
Eh, assuming Jamie's completely healthy, 1.3g is comfortably inside what a human can tolerate indefinitely. Though in a scenario with hypothetical interplanetary tourism you'd probably generally publicize that it wasn't so people with congenital joint problems or a predisposition to failing cartilage wouldn't fuck themselves up if they didn't pay attention to the fine print. People with mechanical breathing impairments or moderate severity cardiovascular disease would also be at increased risk of sudden onset complications. Depending on the level of their conditions you might not want them to stay more than just a few days and ideally not go there at all.

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>>7227683
>so let's fuck

>>7227683
>I want to feel the way I did back then, I want to pick up where we left off.
Well, I'm sure she can go on top like last time to begin with, but it'd probably be for the best if he was the one snuggling into her neck when they go to sleep. On the plus side, she's probably about as big as a bed from his view, so it should be fairly comfortable for both of them. Might have to put one leg on the mattress over the side of her thigh or something.

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One of the artists I emailed finally got back to me, so I'm estimating I'll be able to get some Liz before/after art done this weekend if it works out.

>>7227683
>http://pastebin.com/H03yuTbM
What are the tags for this? First time finding it

>>7228155
Childhood friends, oral:Male, Oral: Female, vaginal, defloration (mutual) light biting, very soft femdom, muscle, catgirl aliens

>>7228170
n o i c e
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>>7227071
>>7227683

Damn it so close but so far away.

I hope Jamie gets to be bottom some.

I'm ready.

>>7224268
Yeah, South America, Africa, and South-East Asia.

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>>7227683
>>>>>>but what does it matter? I want to fuck you, you want to fuck me or you wouldn't be so flustered, so let's fuck.

>>7227653
Seconded. All other polar are not to be trusted. Even if they look fluffy they are puppeteers. I Actually think that the polar are worse than the normal borealens, they get all up in yo head. Rape is bad but what's worse is when the rapist gets in your head, which is exactly the polar's modus operendi

>>7228149
Good. And it better be the teen Liz in a turtle neck dressed for school.

>>7228432
They also all seemed to have mastered tongue black magic/energy draining kisses.
Fear fuck, imagine someone stupid enough to introduce the concept/tradition the mistletoe to them.
>polars tricking humans to stand under mistltoes so they can throat rape them with their tongues
>polars using kisses to integrate/brainwash humans
>etc

Any good futa on male stuff? Preferably forced

>>7227683


What's up with random humans freaking out about liz? The presence of boeralans and information about them would be plastered on every news channel for weeks the moment they touched down on earth, ow are people acting like theyve never seen them before and also are too dumb to understand that something that's walking on 2 legs and speaking english probably isnt a wild animal?

>>7228149

Which one?

>>7227653
>>7228432

Snek has yet to write a polar doing something wrong or bad.

>>7227683
I FINALLY GOT AROUND TO READING IT.
THE FEEL TRAIN COLLIDED WITH THE FAP TRAIN. 10/10

>>7228472
Doesn't mean they're common on earth. Most people have probably never seen one, and they're fucking huge. They're also also aliens with a weird, fucked up, violent, rapey culture.

>>7228544


You'd have to live under an actual rock to not have seen them, think of how much the world would get shown them on the news if they were to appear right now

>>7228545
I've seen lots of videos of tigers. I'd freak out if I saw a real one, tame or not.

>>7228548


I recommend never ever going to a zoo then, theyre not good for massive, scared babies.

PS I've actually pet a tiger IRL at a zoo and it was awesome(tiger had a handler nearby and they routinely took it out to socialize with people since it apparently loved doing that)

>>7228550
Protip: most human beings are massive scared babies.

>>7228574

[citation needed[

>>7228550
Well I'm sure the humans would react much more calmly if Liz was behind bars at a zoo, but she's not.

>>7228615

The tiger was walking around outside of whatever enclosure it normally lived in, among people. It was clearly very used to being around humans and calmly sat there and let me pet it(handler told me to make sure it can see my hands coming before I pet it though)

So let's move away from all this negativity and get back to fapping, shall we?


An angel and a succubus have decided "fuck immortality; we wanna see what it's like as humans." Sounds good, right? Just cast some magic and *poof!* Instant mortality.

Not so fast. This sort of undertaking is unprecedented and requires a LOT of magic. To get it right the first time, the succubus suggests that they both be unbirthed and regressed by a strong enough spell-caster.

And then they find out about this really powerful witch living in the woods. Score! Except that witch is really old/has been dead for the past several years. Boo!

But then it turns out that even though the witch can't help them, her granddaughter most certainly can...

TL;DR: Angel and succubus wanna be human, so they get unbirthed and regressed by the granddaughter of a really powerful witch.

>>7228932
First idea here:
http://pastebin.com/qL9C67Nn
Warning, spoilers up to or past the end of what I'll have written when I post (probably still this weekend)

Content reassurance: not furry, pedo, or gay. (Mostly-vanilla version and my-fetishes version will be maintained separately and updated simultaneously.

>>7228956
Eugh, how could anyone fap to that?

>>7228972
No kink shaming, please. Different strokes, different folks and all that...

>>7228972
>in the rapecat-friendly threads, on the "WOMEN WITH PENISES SO HOT" board
I mean, I'm not saying I could ever summon even any phantom arousal to vore or unbirthing, but you've got to admit that drawing any kind of line on /d/ is an exercise in futility.

>>7228976
On the other hand, please don't use tumblrspeak on /d/ senpai

>>7228980
We have always accepted all forms of deviancy even when we were on /tg/, just look at XS' works. Sorry if "kink shaming" triggers your autism, but any form of written porn is welcome here.

>>7228993
Just don't except much general interest for really niche/disgusting stuff.

>>7228993
You're not on /tg/, which was great pre-2010 and then was pozzed as fuck. You're on /d/, where it's okay not to like thing.

>>7228956
Sounds pretty good. I'd read it.

>>7228980
Given how widespread they are, getting bothered by those fetishes is almost quaint for someone on /d/.

>>7228965
Here's my impressions and suggestions on it, take them as you will.

>Idea a
The meme thing sounds like it might be awkward to implement; perhaps you could generalize it to something regarding humanity's violent/genocidal/self-destructive tendencies as depicted in its history and culture instead? That would play into her role as content curator better since she would have a more balanced perspective than what her superiors are displaying, and because the idea of a literally infectious meme sounds like either a joke or some kind of mind control. Apart from that gripe, the concept is solid. By the way, what does this alien look like- humanoid or something more exotic?

>Idea B
I could've sworn I saw a fic with a similar premise once, albeit with no actual smut in it. I'll see if I can find it, it might give you some ideas.

>Idea C
Plot is hazy as you noted, but I like the idea a lot. We could always use more human-on-deity sex.

Overall, I'd say all of these have potential to be good fics. I'll be on the lookout for them when they're ready to be posted.

>>7229060
Have you uploaded the updated angel thing yet? I don't see it anywhere

>>7227306

A-anyone?

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>>7228615
>>7228619
I think you're both looking at this the wrong way. You shouldn't consider it as a tiger sighting, tigers are one of the most well-known animals on the planet, and thus their relative size and how they move and act are pretty well known. They're also pretty universally beloved.

Seeing a Borelean walking around would be like taking someone from the southern end of the planet and letting them see a fully grown moose. No one besides people who live around them seem to understand the size of moose, their ridiculous strength, speed, and behavior. Plenty of idiot tourists will stand around by a moose, going 'wow!' and 'it's so big!' without ever realizing how dangerous it is to even POSSIBLY be considered 'in the way' to a moose. Especially if it's a moose on a mission, like a female with babies or a dude trying to find a hot lady moose.

tl;dr human beings are more stupid than scared, and the ones who are smart enough to be scared usually know what to do anyway.

I just want incest with shemales. Is that so much to ask?

>>7229067
The link I originally posted should work, but here it is again:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/16KevErEaG7glBQ_SQyWLSQQLkiiPKUTT2EleZA51OrE/edit?usp=sharing

>>7229111
Oh, OK. Forgot google docs didn't work like pastebin.
Thanks

>>7229060
I posted it because Idea A's what I'm currently writing. I realize now that posting in reply to a deleted post in the thread after the one where I explain what I'm doing is pretty confusing, but thank you for reading and giving me some feedback anyways.

>the idea of a literally infectious meme sounds like either a joke or some kind of mind control
That's not what I'm talking about though. I guess it's not clear from the summary, but it will be clearer when written out. The current alien ruling coalition maintains its cultural grasp on the known galaxy by being paranoid and somewhat draconian, so

>perhaps you could generalize it to something regarding humanity's violent/genocidal/self-destructive tendencies as depicted in its history and culture instead
To be honest I was specifically avoiding the species-masochistic trope where sci-fi writers make every alien race idealized in some way and humans are the evil corrupt terrified foolish weak primitive bitchbois by comparison. In the interest of context, last thread I introduced the idea as a HFY type of smut since I was in a former /tg/ thread and had the idea, and it was after that that I wrote the summary I linked to.

I don't know if anyone here remembers but there was a woman who used to post her SecondLife alien over 4chan (and a few other places) sort of sporadically and called her "Culuf", she was like an amateur internet scholar of humans and fascinated with them, but not like obsessed, just basically a human otaku. That's sort of the conceptual seed for the female lead. The concept for the entire scenario wasn't originally smut-based and came out of a funny idea I had when I was thinking about what people in various cultures consider "deep" vs what they consider tawdry and common (despite often being similar to the "deep" stuff, just more familiar). It's an idea of aliens finding something we'd consider cheesy new and inspiring, and I fully plan to include it at some point.

>>7229060 (cont)

>By the way, what does this alien look like- humanoid or something more exotic?
Think Mass Effect/Star Trek pleb-tier humanoid variants with the occasional off species just like they have. I probably won't be writing much blob sex or giant-pig-looking-thing sex. Though I did think of a really fascinating/disturbing concept for an alien sex "surprise" I might throw in there just to break things up.

I'm sure I've seen something with succubi being nabbed before, though I haven't come across exactly what I'm thinking of myself.

Idea C is last on the list, but would be easier to write because the premise is openly absurd and whimsical and the source material is already there for the taking.


>>7229173
Realized I never finished thing about the human meme:
...so new "romantic" ideals and concepts from a long-isolated and planet with various specific creeds and principles which may clash or contrast with the current status quo is dangerous if left uncontained...because keeping a galaxy in willing social and political stagnation for millenia at a time takes effort, and novelty bias is a powerful enemy, and the rulers by their own nature and doctrine can't consider the value of any foreign, new, contradictory ideas or cultures, because they're the monolith holding everything together. Not a Rome or an America...a China. A stable base for the masses to build on which must be right and contain the sum totality of necessary truth so everyone can live in peace.

The question of whether the current ayylmaos in power or the various rebels being galvanized by the human ideal as overemphasized by agitators is unanswered and moot, as the story takes place largely on a human scale and on Earth, with an unwanted war thrust upon the species and the home planet as the only alternative to being quietly and finally destroyed by the will of the current ruling system.

It's kind of a lot of plot for a little smut, but most of it doesn't need to be explained in-story.

>>7229183
I meant using what I said as the regime's excuse, where she's seen it to be objectively wrong. Perhaps I should've clarified there.

As for the "human otaku" bit, I saw a fic which had a good spin on that idea. It's the first tinyurl link on the following doc, with the other stuff being from /aco/'s various threads:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bnGqZyDNVtFLpjsDaEOhXyhByMlNLXoOnLF9e9iIc2o/edit

I found it on /aco/'s xeno thread back in the day, pretty good stuff.

>Though I did think of a really fascinating/disturbing concept for an alien sex "surprise" I might throw in there just to break things up.

Explain, I'm curious now.

As for Idea B, I think I found the fic I was talking about. Mind you, it doesn't seem like it was ever finished and the take on it is a bit too serious for my tastes.

https://1d4chan.org/wiki/Aeric_Dalia

>>7229069
closest I've ever written was a short one shot with someone magically changing from female to male, and getting stuck that way.

http://pastebin.com/LR1neeSP
Tags: Fantasy, MTG, Transformation/Transgender, Masturbation

>>7229090
Specifically shemales? Or futa?

This is not me volunteering, because incest is not something I want to write about at all. I'm just curious. "Shemale" isn't a word you hear on this board that often.

>>7229090
Have you heard of our old buddy Nobody In Particular?

>>7228435
>First order of business after a marathon tender loving rape session with Jamie is to place an order for a new turtleneck to wear while cuddling on the couch and catching up on tv shows because Borealis cannot into multimedia entertainment
>Maybe a sweater dress, since those things are very easy to just peel off

http://pastebin.com/qib7Pkkn

Giantess, gentle, micro (roughly 1 in.)

Ricky's New Mommy update!
http://pastebin.com/ijiZnEiK
[Tags: MxF, Amazon, Gentle femdom, lactation]

sorry about lack of updates.
this is the part of the story about entering the nadir in the relationship.

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I feel like you could write a good story off of this.

Any takers?

>>7229535
So, adventuring party gets attacked by octopus/naga/tentacle monster.

While most of the other party gets tentacle squeezed and can't concentrate since their opponent has a giant floppy monster-dong, the party Barbarian doesn't care, and keeps going. Even when her tits gets exposed, even when the monster gets a sudden monster chubby, even when the tentacles get frisky, she keeps raging.

>>7229543
Frame it like a legendary epic from a long forgotten battle, of a party of amazons steeped in enemy territory who fucked/gotfucked their way theough entire armies, led by their glorious leader, a barbarian woman from a long past age whose savage ways were their only hope against the dark hordes.

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3000 word update, new content at "The roar of starship engines echoed overhead"

Worlds Apart:
http://pastebin.com/H03yuTbM
>no new tags but sex happens

>>7228327
Any specific reason for that? If you want an Asian/African MC I see no reason not to do that.

>>7228472
Sent you an email with the link last night.

I was going for a kind of "tall black guy visiting China" vibe. Even if people know 'of' something, they usually stare when they see it in real life.

>>7229556
It's not colour-of-the-skin so much as culture. Countries in those areas have a history of being colonies and might see what the UNN as creating something between a colony and a dictatorship there (not treating the Borealians fairly in boosting their ability to be able to maintain the ships that they have, allowing random traders to trade them junk, the Polars being held in the equivalent of servitude because they don't have the ability to move or contact anyone and don't have the resources to change their circumstances).

Basically, they might see the situation as the UNN using them as shock troops, but Borealia not getting a balanced benefit from the deal.

This would also be a political mission, to assess if the world is ready for any sort of tech uplift or whether they should mostly be left to themselves.

>>7229590
The main problem I see with this is that the very concept you are operating from is intensely tied into very current day politics and academia, which would bear very little resemblence to how things would be in the several hundred years in the future that snek sets his stuff, and any attempt to extrapolate how those things would be operating in relation to the nations you have in mind as such would involve obscene amounts of worldbuilding work.
This kinda feels more like a polisci/IR fantasy than a sex one that you want to explore here is I guess the thing

>>7229590
Given the year it's set in, I'm not sure how strong those sentiments would remain. The colonialism whose effects you're referring to wound down within the most recent century, and large portions of it are still in living memory; it's very much a fresh thing. Jump back 500 years and some of what became the colonial powers were fragmentary regions under the thumb of other nations, but geopolitical grudges from then are all but forgotten these days outside of academic curiosity.
Also as far as I'm aware, the Polars on earth aren't under any particular impositions.

The ethics of how the relationship is being handled would almost certainly be an issue to some major groups, though. Any desire to uplift them is going to be seriously tempered by how they're arrogant in a belligerent sort of way, so we probably want to slowly bleed a little of the less assholish human/krell/wider alliance culture into them first.

Prompt idea:
If no one has seen it there is an easter egg of a sangheili writing a love poem to commander palmer.

Try expanding on that.

>>7229630
You're correct, but I need a good bit of plot to get me going.

I think the general thing that Snek has been going for is that things have more-or-less settled down on Earth, I was just trying to find a way to include someone who would be interested in such a thing, and why not from an area that has dealt with it for centuries and still deals with it currently?

>>7229631
It depends where you go, but Africa still hasn't really stabilized and South America is still putting itself back together after the last century. I agree that it'd quiet down after several centuries, but this might be something that would be more valuable once humans discovered additional races in the galaxy, and thus might be something of a political movement in various places on Earth and among the various other human worlds.

I'd say it'd fall into oversight to make sure that we're treating them fairly, their own culture isn't dying, they aren't being screwed over by anyone via trade, and they can handle the social changes based on the new tech being given to them.

>>7229656
Currently from our perspective, as I said, it's probably ancient history at this point.

>>7229656
>but this might be something that would be more valuable once humans discovered additional races in the galaxy, and thus might be something of a political movement in various places on Earth and among the various other human worlds.
I still think it'd be honestly too long gone it'd be like expecting germans to have a unique insight on the Sunni-Shia conflict on account of the Thirty Years War. Five hundred years is a long time

>>7229669
>Thirty Years War
Hell, that was only four hundred years ago, and these days you're hard pressed to find people who have even heard of it outside of historical circles. I'd imagine a large proportion of US citizens don't even know what the Holy Roman Empire was.

>>7229679
They probably don't even know the country of Armenia even exists, never mind the genocide Turkey did against them 100 years ago.

>>7229700
In fairness, they are trying to pretend that it never happened.

>>7229679
>Hell, that was only four hundred years ago, and these days you're hard pressed to find people who have even heard of it outside of historical circles.
Hell, even the germans I've met don't know much more about it than Joe American knows about the French and Indian Wars. Like, they know it happened, but not much else

>>7229656
All it would take for the entire world to forget about colonialism is for one more culture to rise, conquer, and then not apologize for it like the Europeans did. The only reason current tensions have even continued to exist for so long is that the Europeans tried to apologize and take it back rather than riding their empires to their conclusions - that and the depressive period following the world wars created relative global peace, allowing people to focus on the grievances of the past wars and conquests in ways they seldom had the luxury to in earlier history. Unless they get from present to this future with absolutely zero war. The instant shit gets real again and people stop handing out sympathy is the instant everyone forgets who colonized who back before any of the current people were born.

Also, if I'm going to be frank and honest, Africa had very few stable nations or societies prior to the colonial era, and South America was in a state of near-perpetual wars between nations before and during the time Cortez first arrived. The idea of either of these continents as passive, idyllic, or submissive is incredibly misguided - the only real difference was the technology gap created by the forced march of progress in Europe under a harsh climate and Catholic funding for various innovation.

So like I said, the instant anyone stops apologizing and pretending the colonial era was something unusual or unprecedented (probably due to a larger concern like another global war) is the instant it becomes just yet another period of conflict and conquest in the long sordid history of human civilization - and one with mass smallpox vaccination, at that.

The only way anyone would still be going on about it is if there had been absolute peace in the present-to-future interim or the subjugated cultures had been doing absolutely nothing at all in the interim and had nothing else to think about.

>>7229700
>They probably don't even know the country of Armenia even exists, never mind the genocide Turkey did against them 100 years ago.
As a fellow of Ukrainian background, I sure do. We're both part of the 'folks pretend our genocide never happened' club. I've actually fistfought a turk over this

Yeah I'm inclined to agree that the timescale is a bit wrong for colonialism to be a divisive issue.
It's set in the 2600s so it would be a bit like the British factoring the Roman Occupation or the Viking Raids into their political opinions.
I've not gone for a Star Trek utopia, but more of a Starship Troopers/Halo kind of setting where the third world is developed and doing fine.

>>7229718
Because he said it didn't happen or because you did?

>>7229734
>it would be a bit like the British factoring the Roman Occupation or the Viking Raids into their political opinions
It would be like a continent full of literal Varg-tier retards.
"I dindu nuffins kill people burn churches christianity did european downfall gas the romans muh volk"
But in spaaaaaace

>>7229556

is...is that picture depicting [spoiler] loving missionary sex with the intent of procreation?

>>7229741
>Because he said it didn't happen or because you did?
The former. I disagreed. There was an exchange of words and also fists. I won

>>7229734
Hey snej, your latest fic and explination of borlean growth spurts gave me a really [spoiler]lewd[/spoiler] idea
So, like in the current story, you have a borlean and human who are childhood friends (to avoid repetition, maybe they're a polar and her best friend in a nearby siberian small town). So, at [teenage] they make love for the first time before her growth spurt. Then, since he's around for it this time, we get little scenes and lewd at various stages of growth;
>first scene, she's ~5 inches shorter (this is the First Time scene)
>second scene, he's still ~6ft1 but she's now only an inch shorter
>third scene, she's now 5-6 inches taller and friendly teases him about it
>fourth scene, she's now hit 7ft and delights in inflicting Marshmellow Hell whenever she can
>fifth scene, they're both fully grown, him 6ft4 and her 7ft5, and they're both very happy where they are, even if she's smol by borlean standards

>>7229750
It looks sort of halfway to Seventh Posture rather than missionary

Does anyone here know anything about bondage setups?

I'm describing one in a story and wondering how to support the head without cutting off the airflow. For reference, the rest of the contraption is like a set of stocks only it closes around the waist, trapping the arms by the sides.

>>7229767
Someone who was into bondage would probably say a variety of rings strung up to a big ring suspended by a chain. You know, nose, tongue, ears, lip, those godawful surface-of-the-face piercings, etc
A clever dom would carefully split the tension and support between each individual string so as to provide actual long-term support rather than just a short-term fantasy ending sadly with piercings ripped out and a drooping head.

A chinstrap with a string going up to the ring from each side would be the practical, non-BDSM-heavy, answer.

- t. actually repulsed by BDSM but nonetheless understand it

>>7229772
Hrm, from what I've heard it'd be a poor dom who'd try and use facial piercings as anchor points, any idiot can tell you that won't end well.

Anything that could be done without any kind of piercings being used? Preferably something that could hold up for a good while?

>>7229767
>>7229779
The simple answer IMO would be a U-shaped rig that supports but doesn't cover the face when face-down, but also supports the chin when it's facefuck time

>>7229783
Got a vague idea what you mean.

Do you think you could try and draw me a diagram?

>>7229749
Varg?

>>7229788
Lay your trigger fingers aside your eyes and lay your thumbs over one another on your chin, that's the shape I'm thinking of

>>7229798
Hrm, that was more informative than I thought it would be. Thanks, anon.

Now to describe this thing...

>>7229779
It's like you just stopped reading before the tension balance part.
>>7229783
It's like you just stopped reading before the chinstrap part.
>>7229790
Hello my friend are you enjoying this subreddit

>>7229806
>It's like you just stopped reading before the tension balance part.
Even then, trying to support some kind of weight on stuff as delicate as facial piercings would be an awful risk. I can't imagine anyone serious doing it.

>>7225284
>sparkledogs
whats that?

>>7229762
I like this a lot. Only thing I'd add is
>turns out he's really good at massaging her growth pains away
>turns out this also makes her extremely horny
I need moar guys massaging musclegirls in my life

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>>7229812
Ooh, I found a fic that I'm sure you'd love that's like that.

Unfortunately, I forgot where I found it. Pic unrelated.

>>7229806
Did I click on /v/ or something? People can't answer simple questions now?

>>7229762
I'd go for them [insert premise her] and needing to spoon for warmth when she's 5 inches shorter, leaving their first time for when she's just barely beneath him.

>>7229944
>I'd go for them [insert premise her] and needing to spoon for warmth when she's 5 inches shorter
Hunting Trip works, because Siberia, but I've got to say from experience that it's literally the perfect situation for First Time stuff, like really.
so delaying the trip/first time to till she's almost his height sounds good to me

Hey can the writefag who wrote the short about someone actually stopping the borealen rape train repost the link? I was interested in it but didn't get around to it.

>>7228472
>polar's haven't done anything wrong
Heavy squinting. While techniqually correct, as all the mcs accept the femdom aspect (that is what snekguy writes after all) and the manipulation the polars do, specifically the queen, the civilized polars still come across as scheming cunts. The pack of polars that got left behind is diffrent socially but the "civilized" polars strike me as the charismatic evil nobles who appear as decent allies at the start of the story and are only later revealed as manipulative douches.

>>7228550
Props to touching a tiger. But if you didn't have sex on it while it was tranquilized it seems like a waste.

>>7229468
Beautiful

>>7229503
>http://pastebin.com/H03yuTbM
Oh hey an update.

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>>7225066
Dunno if you guys are gonna like this, but here goes nothing. I recently discovered Shadbase.com and was inspired to write this shit. If you have suggestions as to other places where people might enjoy this kind of thing, please tell.

Tags: horror, non-con, breathplay, electricity, bondage, masks, homophobia, monsters, mxm, mxf.

http://pastebin.com/u/dirtbottle

>>7230035

You can call them scheming cunts, but at least they care if you like your femdom or not. Granted, by care I mean if you don't like it, they'll have you liking it in a day or two tops (without harming you at all), but it's a hell of alot more pleasant than how equatorials handle things.

>>7230244
also, they're more fun to cuddle

Uhmm... I've been considering a story about breeding ponygirls within a fantasy context, but not sure about some of the basic stuff

For example, elves would make great ponygirls since they live so long, so you can have the same one for centuries, and pass her down the family, but, wouldnt they also need a long time to train and raise?

Though I've seen that elves that mature at human speeds, and later slow down their aging, are becoming popular, but it seems TOO convenient, to the point it just feels... off

The other idea is with elves as the breeders, and humans as the ponygirls. It makes sense since we do breed a lot of animals, but they always have shorter lifespans than ourselves. A dog can live what, up to 15 years, max? Lets say thats 1/5 of a human's active lifespan, so having elves breed humans seems fitting.

But I do want to have elves as the ponygirls, though. I wonder what would be a good way to explain it...

I guess 'a wizard did it' would work best?

Would need a lot of props, though. Im thinking automata like golems or maybe intelligent undead to do the raising/breeding, in an area where time moves faster than normal.

Like the hyperbolic time chamber in dragonball Z, I guess.

The elves are taken there, and made to breed.
The offspring are separated from the parents as soon as they stop breast feeding, and raised in struct bondage, being given only the most basic instructions, maybe just tongue clicks and crop/whip blows as commands.

They are not really spoken to, so completely isolated from civilization, they dont develop a understanding of language.

They are kept in a very strict, permanent state of bondage.

I think the story would follow the life of a elven filly from birth, including her training and refular work after being taken out of the breeding grounds, as well as being taken back there from time to time to breed her.

I still think humans make a lot more sense and require less mental gymnastics and props, though.

Opinions?

>>7230127

That was intense mang. 10/10 cockteasing with the suspense and the jokes. Would read continuations of.

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I'm enamored with this pic. It was just a sketch by the artist, but it feels ripe for story.

It feels like whoever this woman is, she's in a position that is both vital and powerful, and that she enjoys what she does very much. Even the tubes coming out of her tits and such.

Hello EFG

So, people apparently read the last thing I posted here. No feedback tho. Something I've come to expect really; seems to be endemic to authors of all stripes on-line. So, I'll do a little begging here : if you have an opinion on a piece, please let me know what it is. If you have a critique, please share it. And not just for me, for anything and any author you read. Feedback is such a huge thing for writers, amateur and professional alike.

Anywho, this is a thing I wrote a few years back as a contest entry. I won, but recieved little feedback. I'd love to know what anyone thinks of it.

Tags : F/f, vacbed, costumes, tease, toys, office ladies (I suppose this is a tag that counts?),

Original site it went into the wild : http://www.latexstories.net/storieslr/alittlework.html

pastebin link : http://pastebin.com/aqkuN1Uw

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>>7230268
"A wizard did it" solves all issues like that. Magic, etc.

Basically, don't overthink it if the fetish is the most important part for you.

So awhile back I read a story about guy on a spaceship who gets captured by a first contact race.
Guy gets modified to be a breeding female for the race, but resists the mental programming.

Sound familiar to anybody? I lost the bookmark last OS install.

>>7230270
Thanks, I plan to do more. I would like to publish it to a site with a community, though. Would deviantart take it, do you think? Literotica?

You're the first person to give me a review, it means a lot that you like it. I'm not wasting my time, someone can jack off to this.

>>7230268
Does it have to be humans enslaving the elves? Maybe it could be a different race of less even elves. That could solve your problems.

>>7230395
Literotrica and StoriesOnline are both good for that.

can anyone reccomend stories about exagerated homosexuality, particularly from the perspective of a character who is unwillingly participating in it but slowly grows to love it?

>>7230492
I believe Chuck Tingle has a fine body of work in that genre

>>7230395
>race of less even elves
what?

I really have no idea what you meant, but wouldnt a race of dwarves or hobbits using the elves as mounts be ok too?

Heck, maybe goblins, because the demon lord won thousands of years ago, or something like that?

>>7230501
I presume he means like high elves using drow as ponies.

Elf racism.

>>7230493
link to a torrent?

>>7230492
go play Exalted RPG

>>7230493
I recommend 'Pounded in the Butt by my Book; Pounded in the Butt by my own Butt.'

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>>7230504
None that I know of, but they're on amazon for cheap- $2.99 at most.

As you could probably guess from pic related, they tend to be rather...interesting. But before you laugh, remember that he somehow won a Hugo Award for his work (which he wrote gay erotica about as well).

>>7230536
That's an old one. He should go for Pounded In The Butt By My Book "Pounded In The Butt By My Book 'Pounded In The Butt By My Book "Pounded In The Butt By My Book 'Pounded In The Butt By My Own Butt'"'".

No, that is not a typo. That's the actual title, taken directly from its page on Amazon.

>>7230539
He was only nominated for the Hugo, he never won it, and the nomination was a result of an internet campaign.

Returning to topic, here are some examples from his oeuvre that focus more specifically on nascent or long suppressed homosexuality:

>Trained by the Living Biker Train
>Turned Gay by the Living Alpha Diner
>Top Horn: Turned Gay by the Unicorn Pilots
>Professor T-Rex Teaches Me Gayness
he's branched into more directly confronting the inner turmoil of such personal emotional journeys:
>Angry Man Pounded by the Fear of His Latent Gayness over a Dinosaur Transitioning into a Unicorn
In others, the deeper philosophical aspects of his work have been made more accessible to the lay audience:
>Turned Gay by the Existential Dread That I May Actually Be a Character in a Chuck Tingle Book
There's also a relevant title where you can get a taste for his insightful approaches to current affairs and scenarios of topical import:
>Pounded by the Pound: Turned Gay by the Socioeconomic Implications of Britain Leaving the European Union

>>7229762
This sounds pretty good. Repost it in a month or so when snek isn't totally full up

>>7230361
I had to look up what a vacbed is, and now I'm absolutely terrified.

>>7230244
It's the attempt to make sure that the victim eventually enjoys it (and isn't totally destroyed)that's so insidious, they know what they're doing, slowly whittling down mental resistances until said victim is pliable.

>>7230252
This is a valid point that I'm unable to fight.

>>7230682

Also valid, but you tell me if you'd take that over what an equatorial would do you to you if you sneezed the wrong way.

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>>7230682
>>7230684
Why not both?

>>7230691

One of them has a significantly higher injury and mortality rate

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>>7230696
What's the matter, can't handle a few love bites, and lacerations, and a few broken ribs?

>>7230704


Alright, you caught me. Broken ribs are a bit of a turn off for me.

>>7230711
Pleb. Next thing you'll be saying disembowelment "ruins the mood"

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>>7230747
If you're not wearing a full body cast the next day, can it even be called love?

>>7230684
At least with equatorials you can shoot them dead and people will understand. Not so much the polars

>>7230756
They'd just kiss you and then you come back to reality in the middle of the orgy in full swing

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>>7230762
>Polar used draining kiss
>it's super effective!

>>7230769
>a common superstition among humans is that Borealans, especially the polars, have black magic kisses that can brainwash people

>>7230769
>No good fapfics set in the Splatoon universe
truly this is suffering.

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>>7230677
You're on /d/, and a vacbed terrifies you?

>>7230677

what's wrong with a little airtight latex squeeze?

I haven't posted for a while, but I'm trying to get back into my writing and chip away at my backlog. After this, it's back to my elemental monstergirl story.

First up, an old-ish story I've heavily revised as a warm-up of sorts. Specifically, it's a Kancolle fanfic I wrote for a fanfiction contest on another site. I'm well aware this doesn't fit with the typical subject matter of this thread, so feel free to skip over it if it's not your cup of tea, but I spent too long on this to just not post it anywhere.

The Admiral's First Night Battle is a Combined Fleet Exercise

Tags: Futa, Futa-on-male, Futa-on-Female, Threesome, Incest

Word Count: 6300

http://pastebin.com/ziimimyc

>>7230843
>>7230828
Hey it isn't a bad terror. Just a new terror.

>>7230864
If it has futa, it is /d/, so it is us. I don't think we are limited to fantasy/scifi anymore.

>>7230871
I was more referring to the fact that it's fanfiction. 99% of the stuff posted here are original works, (plus KanColle is fairly niche as well).

>>7230864
Holy shit you're alive, sweet.
Personally don't care for futa, but I was enjoying your elemental fic.

>>7230361
I'll take a look at it later. It's rather long and I don't have much time right now.

>>7230879
My current backlog/plan is as follows
1. Elemental story chapter 4
2. Finish Orc story
3. Hyper/multi futa story I've been putting off for 2 years
4. Elemental story chapter 5

>>7229830
Google is a friend.

Same for you, >>7229811

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2000 word update, new content at “Perk up Jamie, you owe me.”

Worlds Apart:
http://pastebin.com/H03yuTbM
New tags:
>sweat, muscle, female ejaculation, size difference, large breasts, abs that could serve as rumble strips for passing vehicles

>>7230930
>abs that could serve as rumble strips for passing vehicles

Your tags and what I've read about what you're writing make it not my cup of tea Snekguy; but that phrase made me Laugh for reals. Thank you. I'll have to look your stuff up if you touch on my kinks in the future.

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>>7230492
If I'm understanding what you're intending to say with 'exaggerated homosexuality', then go read Mentaiko's Priapus series. It's about a god's quest to turn all the world's men gay so that they stop fighting each other and learn to love one another instead (and also because he loves fucking straight guys). Aside for his fan doujins, which are consistently shitty for some reason, his stuff is pretty solid, though I have some gripes with the changes in his artstyle in the past two years. He's a good entry-level artist if you've never read gei-comi before and if you can't into Japanese I think all of the chapters are translated except for Priapus 5, which came out recently.

>>7230877
I don't think anyone cares if it's fanwork or original work as long as it's fappable.

>>7230939
Just imagine being between a polar and equatorial that are arguing and they end up pinning you between their stomachs. Furry dough belly to one side and hard smooth abs to the other.

>>7230939
What do you like? I've been trying to branch out lately, I might have done something more to your tastes. Done some lesbian bondage stuff, monster-on-female, some gay/trap stuff.

>>7230947
Gonna have to write that at some point, the catch being that whoever wins that fight gets to fuck both the human and her competitor, that's how they roll.

>>7230966


Snek, we already know how that's gonna end. Equatorial muscles are just for show compared to what polars have, they're objectively weaker by a significant margin due to the fact that theyre so defined.

Goddamnit Snek you are too good at what you do and appealing to what I want to read.

I fear the day you make a unhappy ending though cause man with the way you write heartbreak I probably couldn't handle it.

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>>7230973
>Polar defeating the Equatorial and breaking her in with some Borealan raceplay elements.
>take it you hairless bitch, now who's the dominant military power?

>>7230975
I try to keep things happy, but if I were to write a bad end I'd make sure you loathed the character first.

>>7230983
>if I were to write a bad end I'd make sure you loathed the character first.
Then that wouldn't really be bad end.

>>7230983

I was about to say that doesnt sound like something from a polar, but then I realized that's exactly what they'd say because they know the equatorial will cum buckets when they hear that right after being dominated.

Polars are some scary cats sometimes, christ.

>>7230984
Thats not true it would depend on the viewpoint of the story.

If Jamie had become a son of a bitch and totally POS it could still have a bad end to the story but he got what was coming to him.

That would just be a bad ending that you were satisfied with.

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>>7230997
I think he was talking more about Liz getting the innocence raped out of her by giant, spiny Borealan cocks and getting knocked up repeatedly like something Shindol would write.

>>7230973
I realize that these comments are far from serious, but I'm on a biology/worldbuilding bender right now so fuck it.

Technically, the fat/muscle ratio method of identifying strength is hugely species-specific. A human who looks cut is generally not that strong since it needs to be achieved via things like intentional dehydration. Many animals from colder environments however would class the level of definition on a strongfat human as being equivalent to our Mr Universe type bullshit, meanwhile creatures like rabbits are crazy lean and if they had as much padding as a human with dangerously little body fat they'd probably be at a serious risk of congestive heart disease.

tl;dr alien physiology is more than enough to justify the equatorials being strong while looking moderately well defined. You could argue that being active during the hot portions of the 'month' is actually something that would lead them to favor a leaner dermal composition to improve cooling.

>>7231013


I'd buy that if equatorials weren't literally humans with cat arms and legs. But, even if they magically did have that sort of physiology, polars are still going to win out because they live in way harsher conditions where increased size and strength are needed for survival instead of just for dominance and show.

>>7231024
Visual appearance is irrelevant to physiology. Hell, there's sub-populations of humans that have wildly different preferential body compositions and diets despite being actual literal humans; good example being stuff like inuit populations, who exhibit different fat type ratios to most human populations and are healthiest on a near-carnivorous diet, whereas a more conventional "good diet" is associated with comparatively crap health thanks to some genetic quirks in their handling of things like certain fat types.

Also environmental conditions have absolutely no impact on preferred scale or strength of creature; this is entirely a consequence of their specific survival strategy. You get elephants and rhinos in Africa while you see polar bears in the arctic. Meanwhile both regions also have their tiny, harmless critters like arctic mites or the mango fruit fly (well, harmless unless you're a commercial mango farmer).

This is all irrelevant since whether or not equatorials are really strong to go with their appearance is purely the whim of the author, but seriously what you're saying is incorrect on a purely academic level.

Hey, while we're on the subject of biology, what's the procedure for inducing lactation?

It's for a story I'm sort of doing, I'm filling it out. Pretty basic hucow stuff, you know.

>>7231073
Getting knocked up is the quickest/most surefire way. Though, continued stimulation over a long enough time can start lactation too.

>>7231073

hormones and nipple stimulation.

that's the jist of it

>>7231073
Generally speaking, physical stimulation in the form of nursing. Supplements and the like, things that interact with prolactin production and so forth can also help out, and you can get stuff along those lines prescribed if you're having trouble feeding your baby. Pregnancy and childbirth obviously has their own hooks into the hormonal side of things.

>>7231077
>>7231076
>>7231079
Okay, erm, what's the sort of timeframe for it? I mean, how long does it take before milk is being produced?

>>7231072

>Their environment has nothing to do with body composition or strength, it's only their specific survival strategy that does it! You know, the strategy that is a direct result of and designed to cope with their harsh environment.


Oh, ok. Could you explain that academic level you're on to me a little? Cause it looks like my understanding what an academic level is, is completely wrong.

>>7231080
You can just bullshit that using fetish/story hand waves.

>>7231084
Obviously, but I want some sort of idea so I can plan stuff to fill that time with.

The original author just had them spontaneously lactate just because, which really got on my nerves.

>>7231087

one to nine months i guess?

>>7231090
Fuck it, I'll just make something up.

>>7231072
I was under the impression there was such a thing as gigantism brought on my cold climates, examples being all the extinct woolly animals from Europe that died out after the last ice age. As well as, if I'm using the term correctly, abyssal gigantism that describes how deep sea creates get so big.

>>7231080
Varies from person to person.
For a story, don't sweat being overly accurate, just go with what suits the pace of the narrative. Avoid it happening overnight or buckets o' milk within a week or whatever and you're fine, to be honest.

>>7231081
>Their environment has nothing to do with body composition or strength, it's only their specific survival strategy that does it! You know, the strategy that is a direct result of and designed to cope with their harsh environment.
Survival strategy also covers shit like what it is you're hunting, or if you hunt at all, and scale=/=composition. That's why penguins and polar bears are wildly different in size and strength despite both inhabiting similarly frigid environments. Social animals may also deal with cold by relying more on huddling than by being huge and fat like more solitary predators. Your argument that the polars need to be bigger and stronger because they live somewhere cold and harsh falls apart when you notice that you still get tiny and weak animals in cold, harsh environments and big, strong creatures in hot, lush environments.

>>7231092
And now you know why people make shit up, because the realities are just unworkable.

>>7231099
Island gigantism is more pronounced than that really and is divorced from the relative temperature of the region, and the extinction of things like woolly mammoth was more down to a highly specialized creature being unable to adapt to a major change than a result of their size and cold temperatures being intrinsically linked. Mammoth were fairly comparable sizewise to the savannah elephant, which notably didn't go extinct because it ceased to be fuggin' freezing.

>>7231104
Nonsense. Reality is a mightily useful guideline for things like this. The trick is deciding how close to follow them.

>>7231102

That does not change or even dispute my argument. Just because their strategy could have involved other things but didnt, doesnt change what they are or use now. They are sapient omnivores who've had a necessity to be massive and strong baked into their evolutionary line since their existence thanks to their harsh environment, none of that cares about or takes into account what other animals typically do or might do.

>>7231109
>>7231081
Ah, I found it, it's called Bergmann's rule.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bergmann's_rule

>Bergmann's rule is an ecogeographical rule that states that within a broadly distributed taxonomic clade, populations and species of larger size are found in colder environments, and species of smaller size are found in warmer regions.

It's debated though, so it's just theoretical.

>>7231099
>abyssal gigantism
We don't really understand that one at all, we just have a label for it. Research on that tends to be slow since it's understandably tough to do fieldwork down there.

>who've had a necessity to be massive and strong baked into their evolutionary line since their existence thanks to their harsh environment
This is supposition on your part. For all you know, the size came from needing to hunt down bigass prey at the equatorial regions first, and they then slowly filtered into the colder regions becoming adapted to the temperature after the fact.

ITT: Debates on ecogeography, biology, and history.

I love this place sometimes.

>>7230828
I'm super claustrophobic. Those things are a gigantic nope for me.

>>7231118


You know snek straight up said polars came first, than equatorials right? In the beginning, everything was polars, then equatorials happened after some of them moved to warmer regions and eventually adatped to them.

>>7231119
Reminds me of the old days.

>>7231122
I was under the impression that they were all furry to deal with the really cold parts of the pseudo-month, but equatorials adapted to use a hibernation strategy instead while the polars are now restricted to the poles as they can't compete in the more verdant regions.

>>7231124


Welp, Snek's right here, help us out and settle this one Snek.

>>7231124
As in, polars were not always only at the poles; Ursi's remarks indicated they were forced there over generations, and they're only called polars now because that's where they're forced to reside.

>>7231124
Equatorial kittens being fully furred is supposed to be a throwback to when the whole species was that way, and the kittens still are to cope with the cold snaps better.

>>7231122
>>7231124
>>7231128
I wouldn't phrase it as 'Polars came first', but in the past all Borealans were furry like Polars, and those that lived in the desert regions lost much of the fur over generations as they adapted to the heat. Polars are definitely archaic as compared to Equatorials.

They share a common ancestor but they diverged as the populations migrated into different climates.

What you're left with are two related races, or maybe species, I've not really decided yet if they're sexually compatible.
I'm inclined to say that they're incompatible and thus qualify as two species because the quantity of kittens each race can birth is different.

>>7231132
That's correct.

>>7231133

>All Borealans were furry once

Eh, close enough. Though jesus christ, if you're going with that explanation, how in gods name did they exist at all with fur on the in the desert? They'd be roasted alive one day 1, much less entire generations

>>7231138
furred desert animals are a thing that exist on Earth

>>7231133
It's unusual to get speciation without some sort of hard population separation occurring, though them being highly divergent and having reduced fertility as a result wouldn't be a surprise.

>>7231138
Stay lethargic during the heat, then go out and land some big kills while the other animals are sluggish during the cold maybe?

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>>7231138
>how in gods name did they exist at all with fur on the in the desert?
Oh, ok.

>>7231139

I'll take your word for it. I guess losing the fur over generations would be a thing on how their specific evolution line dealt with the heat, rather than just find a way to stay cool with fur on.

>>7231138
either of
>>7231139
>>7231146
works as a response, and both would play in to the less fluffy ones eventually forcing all the fully fluffy ones to have to live just at the poles instead of anywhere, since the sexy abs cat amazons would increasingly be able to out-hunt the soft floofy cat amazons in the warmer regions

>>7231149
sand cats are adorable.
that one is clearly plotting how it will fuck some gerbil's day right up.

>>7231150
I was actually thinking they could have originated in a more fertile biome (maybe a jungle or lake) and then migrated out due to population pressure.

>>7231143
Yeah they share a common ancestor but the Polars were geographically isolated until recently, possibly for tens of thousands of years. I was going for a kind of r/K selection thing, where the Polars have one child that they expend a great deal of time and effort rearing, and the Equatorials shit out half a dozen little delinquents that run riot.

>>7231157
>Polars were geographically isolated until recently, possibly for tens of thousands of years
Fair enough. Litter size can be contingent on environmental conditions, which would be a justification for that without needing them to have diverged, so really you can play around and make it as you like.

One fun thing is how lion litter sizes potentially fluctuate in response to the size of litters of other members of the pride
https://cbs.umn.edu/sites/cbs.umn.edu/files/public/downloads/Lion_litter_size.pdf
if you can hack the academic tone, it touches on a number of different strategies and contributing factors to litter sizes of different species (as well as noting some examples of where a species is unaffected by specific factors). Someone sufficiently nerdy might find it useful for worldbuilding at some stage.
>c'mon autistically accurate alien preg fetish fiction, daddy needs his highly specific kink satisfying

Is there anyway to recover a pastebin? It contained a hinata/hanabi conjoinment story I really liked but now the link no longer works. This was the original link.
http://pastebin.com/7mDED62P
The original tags were Conjoined, and Cowgirl.

>>7231201
I feel like pastebin would lose purpose if stuff could be recovered once it was gone.

>>7231138
You should really be wondering how anything furry survives in the jungle, where it can be just as hot with humidity to boot.

Just like people are told to cover themselves from the sunlight while in the desert with hats, veils and loose clothing, 'furry' desert animals keep the fur from protection from the sun, to keep themselves warm in the freezing nights, and generally keeping their skin from drying out.

Hell, cheetahs have a whole system devoted to not overheating when they sprint across the savannah.

>>7231212


So what you're saying is full furry equatorials are possible?

>>7231201
Not really. You can always try a cache viewing program, but I just tried Waybackmachine and a few others with no results.

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>>7231213
The fur won't be as thick as a Polar's would likely be, seeing as how they likely have a very soft double coat meant for insulation, but Equitorials could totally be 'fully-coated' and still live just fine in hot areas, and would deal with solar exposure much better, assuming the rays they recieve are earth-like. Plenty of cats (and other mammals) of various sizes live in hot, dry areas while maintaining a coat of fur for the reasons I pointed out above.

Culturally however, if 'fully-furred' is a thing frowned upon in their society, who knows what the parents will do with the cub, and the parents might not be able to mate again due to them both likely having a recessive gene for fluffiness. Or, they could be rare but encouraged for their unique appearance. There's a lot, culturally, to think about as well.

>>7231219


Both ways are ripe with potential for good storytelling though. sounds like a fun future commission to me!

Thank you, mon frere

Speaking of cubs, Equatorials should actually have multiple tits if they giving birth to a large litter. The number of teats an animal has is directly tied to their average litter size. It's why humans only have two and cats/dogs have like six or eight.

>>7231224
The rule of thumb is teats equal to double the average litter size, with the maximum litter size (barring outliers) being the total number of teats, though this doesn't apply to all species by any means. Functionally all that is required is that the mother will be able to yield enough to feed all her young, which can be done by them taking turns.