May i ask opinions on this art and suggestions to make it suck

>>7042257
Blend their slime together better, less noticeable boarder

>>7042262
Thank you, thats an edit that wouldnt be too hard.

>>7042257
Learn not to make hairy lines. Grinding.
Proportional work. Grinding.
Fix how damn flat they are. Grinding.

Green's left boob is fucked. Her head makes little sense in 3D; if her lower "cheek ridge" is facing her left then her face should change appearance accordingly.

Your work is flat and your lines are hairy and their proportions are off. /ic/ has a sticky, use it. Grind grind grind.

>>7042270
Im pretty sure that i get the picture, you dont need to say grind 40 times. I get that youre trying to help but it comes across as super condescending..

>>7042270
Also, may I ask what you wouldnt change? Is there anything salvagable about it?

Anyone else?

>>7042307

Seems like most of what can be said for this pic has already been said. Good on you for taking on a new challenge, especially one that presents a lot of unique difficulties. I'm sure we'll be happy to see how you come along, you're off to a great start.

>>7042277
Poor fucking baby, he is trying to state the importance of grinding you shit.

>>7042257
More bulk at the base. Even combined they don't seem to have enough there for a set of hips, far less the usual pile-of-slime that slimegirls usually have.

Take this to the drawthread. Don't make an entirely new thread to get feedback on your deviantart post. Especially if you only plan to post a single image.