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/efg/ - Erotic Fiction General

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This is the go-to place to discuss (and produce) erotic fiction of all types, from the fap-and-go fics to porn with a substantial plot. Drawfags are also welcome- illustrated stories are the best ones! For drawing requests also check out the /d/raw thread:
https://boards.4chan.org/d/catalog#s=/d/raw

Writefags, consider pastebin/titanpad rather than dumping for your stories. You can also use 1d4chan for /tg/-related smut

You are advised to tag your stories so that people know what they're looking at. This will attract more feedback from people interested in the themes you're exploring. Consider quoting the OP when delivering. This will make it easier to find (and critique!) the new stories in a thread.

People appreciate it a lot when you give them constructive feedback and criticism, so make sure to do so. We thrive on it. Don't be afraid to speak your mind about a story that caught your attention. This will help everyone in the long run.

Requests are encouraged to promote a steady flow of new content.There's nothing like a good request to get the creative juices flowing. Try to expand your ideas - a bare-bones request doesn't give us much of a good idea as to what you want. Have fun with it! Keep in mind that it might take some time to get to yours, and each writefag is interested in different kinds of things.

Remember to post pictures when possible to keep the thread alive, but keep image dumps to a minimum so that more OC can be posted.

Commission requests welcome.

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>>6980612
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I'd like to request a story about a madame who specializes in managing non-human, exotic prostitutes.
Mostly I'm looking for something focusing on her managing the business while having an intimate relationship with one or more of the girls in her employ. I'd like her hooker girlfriend to be a bit young and inexperienced, with their relationship developing from mentor/student into a romantic one.

It might be fun to have a scene in which a John can actually afford her services as well. Just sayin'.
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>>6999344
Anything in particular you might want to see from such a fic- specific types of girls, for example?
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>>6999330
Reposting my stuff:

Snek:
http://pastebin.com/DVTusz4B
>XCOM Viper, lamia, monstergirl, femdom, size difference, large breasts, light bondage, oral, vaginal, language barrier, bathing, teasing, kissing

Crashland:
http://pastebin.com/E6WVfvK1
>monstergirl, alien, size difference, large breasts, muscle, multiple arms, sweat, light femdom, oral, vaginal, kissing, female ejaculation, bathing, teasing

Snek 2:
http://pastebin.com/z2wJLg7V
>XCOM Viper, lamia, monstergirl, light femdom, language barrier, size difference, large breasts, light bondage, oral, kissing, boobjob, handjob, orgasm denial, teasing, vaginal

Pinwheel:
http://pastebin.com/gKNTw6pr
>monstergirl, alien, size difference, muscle, sweat, femdom, dubious consent, oral, orgasm denial, kissing, biting, handjob, light bondage, vaginal, hair pulling, 69, face sitting

If you want a more pleasant reading experience I set up an account on StoriesOnline.net, the format is a lot nicer than Pastebin, it has chapters and stuff:
http://storiesonline.net/a/Snekguy

I also have free Ebooks for Pinwheel and Crashland available for download on my Patreon.

I'm starting a new /gfd/ story in the Pinwheel universe, I think I need a bigger portfolio before I deviate so far from the usual formula with a horror story.

Splashdown:
http://pastebin.com/22tbp4XP

Tell me what you guys think of the setup.
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http://pastebin.com/az7VHHaF
cock vore, vampire, gothic, feet (minor)

http://pastebin.com/qmW0hW5r
witch, giantess, feet (minor), navel

pic is femdom.
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>>6999330
I got a lot of stories on my site arranged in fantasy (Nine Sisters), sci-fi (Web of Stars), contemporary (Shadowed Earth), and a number of other more specific ones (fan-fiction, an Exalted byline called Endless Gears).

As for genres... well, there are a lot. The bulk are in the fantasy and most are 10-15k word stories. There are a few longer ones including a 600k word weekly serial I did a few years ago (and I'm writing the sequel now). There are sweeter stuff and a lot more noncon in there. Word-wise, there is about three million or so words spread out among everything.

Sadly, it looks like my tagging system is friend, but the settings work just fine.

It's all at https://tsade.com/
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Looking for a story I once read. Universe in which people develop superpowers regularly at a certain age I think. They have different class rankings of powers, and the main character has like a Class A power, which is the highest class. His power is, 99% sure, copying powers from superpowered women he fucks. There's tons of scenes where he fucks all these superpowered women and copies their powers and get the ability to grow his dick, expand their bodies, super orgasms, etc etc. it's a fucking ridiculous story and there's like 5 chapters. Anybody know it?
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>>6999344
I'd like the boss to be a tall human woman in her mid-to-late thirties who maintains a healthy set of curves to entice customers. With said customers she is flirty but firm; she knows the business well enough to keep her clientele in line. With the girls she's even more firm, sometimes overly so, but acts that way to mask how much she actually cares for them.

For the romantic interest I'd be interested in something like an elf girl who is legally old enough to be working there, but who looks much younger. Bonus points for something like a drow or dark elf who has to be protected from sunlight, or is otherwise more delicate than the other girls and needs closer watching.
That's only if the author is cool with pseudo-lolita, of course.
Regardless, I'd like her to give off some sort of "needs to be protected" vibe.

Other than that, the rest of the cast can be as diverse as the author wants. Orcs, halflings, tieflings (or other demon-looking races), changeling, or the like are all fine.
It would be cool to have humans of different ethnicity to the local area being in the crew as well. If the area is white enough, then having an "Asian" girl might be as exotic as a half-gorgon.
Monstergirls are fine too.
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>>6999384
Never even heard of it. Sorry.
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I just found out about Chuck Tingle.

Should I feel encouraged or discouraged that he is apparently successful enough to get his own Wikipedia article?
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>>6999399
I say both simultaneously. You can probably write better which would lend you a faithful audience but you won't likely get a wiki page because you might not subsist strictly on erotic parody/lampooning to the point that you become a meme
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>>6999403
He writes so much. That one I took the picture for is a sequel to something he wrote like a week before.

Is his output unreadable crap, or is it merely bad? (I'm not looking up any of it on my Amazon account. I don't need those appearing in my suggestions.)
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By the way does anyone here use Hentai Foundry for stories?
I'm trying to get my stuff on there and no matter where I paste the text from it always looks like pic related, it just shits on the formatting and dumps it as a massive block.
I tried pasting from Notepad, Word, OpenOffice, Pastebin, Google Drive, no joy.
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>>6999522
I use it as a secondary repository. It looks like shit no matter what you do. You pretty much have to write directly to their shitty editor. I wouldn't worry about it too much.
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>>6999522
That site is much more art/image focused and cars very little for written stuff, so not much effort is put into that part of their site
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>>6999525
>>6999530
Yeah it's pretty bad, they don't even have an FAQ for the literature section.
Do you know if they allow links to external sites, or to downloads or anything? I could just link to my Ebook downloads maybe. I posted in the forums about it a couple of days ago but no useful replies so far.

Can't register on Literotica either, the only site I've had any luck with is Storiesonline, lots of downloads, lots of feedback.
How is Tumblr for this kind of thing? I'm just trying to cast a wider net and see if I can't get some more readers.
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>>6999540
I've seen some people use Tumblr, though it doesn't seem very well suited for it either.
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>>6999540
No idea.
Tumblr's issue is again that it's much more image focused. You're also not going to get much attention unless people reblog stuff or a popular tumblr reblogs your stuff. Also, Expect pornbots to subscribe to you if you put and kind of "porn" tags on stuff.
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>>6999549
>>6999551
Yeah it's a shame there isn't really a dedicated site for this kind of thing, it either takes a backseat to images or it's some horrific web 1.0 throwback.
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>>6999560
Funny enough what you're looking for is a furry porn site, granted nonfurry stuff can and is posted there too
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>>6999563
As much as the thought disgusts me, this guy's got a point. Fur Affinity is a surprisingly excellent host for stories. I've considered posting my stuff there as well, but even smut writers have some pride.
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>>6999566
I was talking about sofurry, yes that's actually the site's name
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>>6999566
>>6999568
That's actually very good advice, thanks.
I suppose monstergirl stuff might appeal to them and my Snek stories are borderline.
I can always test the water and report back if the feedback is positive.
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If you are working on a story or piece of art, please reply to this post and tell us a bit about it.
Build that hype.

You know, if you feel like it.
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>>6999572
Is there a certain point between animal and human that is considered furry? As far as I can tell all of your stories are furry.
Read the beginning of your new one.
I think part of the reason I didn't like Pinwheel as much as the previous stories(I was the guy hat said that before) is that Raz seemed very vulnerable compared to the other girls.
In fdom stories, for me at least, the more "perfect" and in control of every situation the female is the more enjoyable the story, but you like making the Borealans look like incompetent brutes compared to the much more capable, but physically weak, humans.
So you starting the new one with the pilot helping out another helpless Borealan kind of annoys me.
Of course these being more action adventures rather than actual fdom stroke stories I guess that doesn't matter that much.
Was looking forward to the horror story more, 'cause I don't think you'll have a vulnerable female lead in that one : p
Still will read all of your works and most likely enjoy all of them.
Keep up the good work.
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>>6999476
It's possible that he's someone who either wrote bad novels before, the supermarket ones, and now subsists on a combination of this an actual books that he enjoys writing in a fulfilling way. He probably writes these just to get something out and for some quick cash.
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>>6999572
sorry senpai but snek is furry
monstergirls are borderline

anything with a non-human facial structure (ie muzzle) gets thrown in the furry pile.
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>>6999769
The difference between furry and xenophilia is the fanbase.
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>>6999769
The thing about furry is that it has no single unified definition or one that everyone agrees upon. Aliens, fantasy monsters/races, robots, monstergirls, etc can all be furry and furry artists draw all that stuff. The funny thing with monstergirls is just how many of them would still have you fucking an animal vagina. Doesn't help that monstergirlfags are really insecure about their fetish too.
>>6999772
Furry is just a subcategory of xenophilia. The furry fandom actually came from scifi con fans.star trek fans.
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I just finished rewriting over half my warg (basically a demonic werewolf.) story... because we'll it just didn't sit right with me after reading it the second and the third time.

It contains some large penetration impregnation and birthing.

http://pastebin.com/vHa934MM

Give it a read if your interested and tell me what you think!
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wew, lads.

the internet went out for a while, so i wrote a sequel to witch-house, which you can find earlier in this thread.

giantess, vore, feet, navel, witch, girl-cum

http://pastebin.com/6q8SQZAP
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>>6999540
have you tried Archive of Our Own? (Ao3)
They encourage original works as well as fanworks, and there's all sorts of weird porn lit scattered through the place. It'd be a bit harder to build up a fanbase if you were just posting there, but then all your stuff could be in one place. There is usually a 3 day or so wait from the time you register to the time your account is active, is the sucky thing, but it's not like they actually screen for people, you just gotta wait.
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>>6999781
>Ravaged by the Roadside

Search for "cant" and "monsters" and fix them. It looks like you need to focus on getting the ' correct in possessives and contractions.

> She bites as her plump bottom lip
You use this phrase repeatedly, might want to do come up with a better term.

> "...That loud blaring of..."
This establishes a jumping POV in the middle of a paragraph. Please only jump POVs between chapters or scene breaks, it makes it easier to read.

Way too many sentences start with "She" or "Her". Your sentence structure might need to be varied a bit, you start a lot with "She <verb>".
> She blows deep sigh
"She blows out a deep sigh" may parse better

You use non-male terms to introduce your werewolf, slightly confusing.

In moments of stress (e.g., the rape scene), most people can't really get coherent and complex sentences. You'd be more likely to get single or two word sentences and expletives. Maybe a 3-4 word sentence, but if she is terrified, probably not.

Knotting, pregnancy, huge cocks, yummy. I love that bit. The casual incest seemed like it needed more build up before it happened, it is really rushed at that point. It's only been two days.

There are a number of echoed phrases "plump lip" is one of them, it is a distinctive enough phrase that you can only use it once.

I'd probably drop the sentences from the warg's POV, it would add to the tension of something about to happen. We'll know that he wants her from her response.

Why didn't he tear her pants off instead of tugging them?

> she grabs him by the head only to be silenced by his dick
I had trouble picturing this.

The emotional shift from terrified (during rape) to sardonic (“Hope your happy now, daddy.”) is sudden and doesn't really have a good translation. It seems rushed I know you have her introspection before that but I didn't quite buy it.

Please understand the difference between your and you're.

I think you would benefit but cutting your adverb/adjective usage in half.
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>>6999769
>>6999775
I gotta disagree there, there are many definitions of Furry and I'm sure it means different things to different people, but to me at least it means Disney characters, women with a dog's head and thick fur all over their bodies, overt zoological features like more than two breasts, things like that.

I admit that Snek is borderline, the Vipers deviate from traditional Lamias because of their more reptilian facial features, but I didn't design that character, and I tried to downplay the reptile features as much as possible, I gave them more human features like nipples and I downplayed the scales as much as possible by describing them as "imperceptibly smooth" or "like skin". But yeah I have to concede that.

Raz has no fur on her body, and Beanstalk has no visible scales, I described them both as having smooth, soft skin because that is what I'm attracted to, neither has an animal snout or multiple breasts, their physiology is completely human besides a few additions to justify calling them aliens that don't stray far beyond catgirl ears or multiple arms, so while I can see how someone might choose to imagine them as furries, and they're totally free to do so, that wasn't my intent when I designed them.

>>6999755
With the Borealans I wanted to create characters that were physically imposing, but actually quite emotionally vulnerable, I originally based Raz on a school bully I had growing up, and that's often the case with bullies. They act tough but they're usually quite insecure, and they're not always fully aware of how much they're hurting you.
You separate the Borealan from its pack and it becomes lost and unsure of itself, and they don't know their own strength.
Raz is always in control of the sex simply on the merit of being bigger and stronger than Stanley, but she's not smarter or more competent than him.
I'll definitely go back to that horror story later, I'm glad you're enjoying my stuff regardless.
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>>7000054
Thanks, I'll check that out.
At the moment Patreon is kind of my hub, most sites let me redirect there and they let me host epubs directly on the page.
I'm doing my best to get all of my work on all the sites I've signed up to, so the only thing people don't always have access to are the Ebooks, which I link to when they'll let me.

Pretty impressed with FA so far actually, their upload system is stellar and my stories are getting moderate attention.
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>>7000121

Whoa constructive criticism?

This is new for me! I have been trying to get some direction on how to improve my writing because at this point I have just been throwing out my stuff online and just seeing what sticks.

Honestly the 5k sex scene was probably minutes old in rough draft form but I really wanted some feed back.

I'll get to work trying to improve this now.
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>>7000163
We're actually very good about that around here. Improving writing quality is better for all of us.
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>>7000054
I've looked at the place, and my main impression is that the ratings are nigh-incomprehensible and that the tags on a story aren't always indicative of the actual content of the story. Sometimes you can't even tell if a given fic there is smutty or not without having to read the whole thing first.
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>>6999380
Thanks heaps for all the stories. I found your stuff a few years ago, and really enjoy your writing. Keep it up!
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>>7000054
The tagging is terrible on that site. It's completely open-ended, but only the author of a story is allowed to add tags to it. Therefore, you get severe under-tagging.

>>7000133
>many definitions of furry
It's furry if there are anthropomorphic creatures that are sexualized. The differences are what exceptions to that you are willing to make.
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this reminded me of Raz so i'm posting it

>>7000133
opinion on slimes?
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>>7000234
Well would you consider pic related to be furry?
Most people would not.
My characters don't have more animal features than this does (except Snek, but I didn't design that).
There are animal elements to the character, ears, tail, eyes, claws, etc, but the character is not an anthropomorphic animal, it is very clearly a human first and foremost with animal elements added on top almost as decoration. I'm not saying your interpretation of what a furry is is objectively wrong, just that I don't agree with labeling something as furry when there was no intent.

>>7000243
Slimes are definitely kosher.
Great pic.
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>>7000247
It's a lot easier to just let the furries claim what is theirs. It's not like there's a whole bunch of variety in their art. Anything bipedal with a human gait, human-like, fur-covered body, and a snouted but otherwise expressive face is furry. Everything else is not. I have never, ever seen a furry try to claim a monstergirl or any kind of xeno as furry.
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>>7000255
Yeah there isn't usually much confusion, and the mods allow monstergirls but do not allow furry, so there's a criteria there they're using to differentiate them. They'll remove Viper pics if you post them for example.
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>>6999781
>>7000121
>In moments of stress (e.g., the rape scene), most people can't really get coherent and complex sentences. You'd be more likely to get single or two word sentences and expletives. Maybe a 3-4 word sentence, but if she is terrified, probably not.

Gonna point out stuff like this... It's weird how the pregnancy from a werewolf/warg lasts all of two minutes. For me it's jarring that you don't follow wold/dog physiology. Also canines don't start knotting until their in, in fact only the tip is unsheathed before penetration.

It's weird that she isn't wearing a bra... trust me nobody with big ass tits is going camping braless.

Ps. it's an mp3 player, not a, the pronunciation starts with a vowel sound, that makes it an
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>>7000258
How close to furry would a story have to be to get removed?
Also will pic included get thrown deleted?
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>>7000121
Yeah, i guess that would boil down to the author not tagging things properly. Other anon is right in that the there isn't really a way for toher people to add tags except in bookmarks or collections (which i still don't understand)
But usually you can tell a fic is smutty if it's rated Explicit. It's either smut or gore at that point.
I guess the tagging system isn't always employed for finding similar themes in works, rather almost more as a content warning/heads up to readers. That's what i use my tags for, anyways. I don't tell them what the smut actually entails for some reason. Why do i do that???
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>>7000410

Yeah I am making changes to her reaction to the sex scene.

Ugh, I totally forgot that unique atribute of canine anatomy. I will correct this in the updated version.

Accelerated pregnancy is something I REALLY like writing and I struggle not to include it every time I write.

Hah fucking mp3 players...
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>>7000425
I've written gnolls and dragon on dragon without issue. The line has to be at least that far.
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>>7000425
That pic will get deleted for sure, the mods don't seem to care at all about the stories hosted off-site though, I don't think it matters, you can write about whatever you like..
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>>7000492
If the speed pregnancy is something you like then you should just write it, just tag it as such so people can skip if they don't like it.
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>>7000535

Hmm never thought that would be an issue! I guess rapid pregnancy would be a tag to throw down.
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>>6999352
Those snekstories were fantastic. You should add heartwarming love as tag.
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>>7000679
I'm glad you liked them so much, there's so much demand I might have to write a third entry some day.

New 2000 word Splashdown update:
http://pastebin.com/22tbp4XP

I'm experimenting with switching the third person perspective between the two characters, tell me how I'm doing.
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>>7000818
>another alpha
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>>7000872
Is that too repetitious?
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>>7000872
Sending alphas is probably a smart idea for soldiers. Also, there were only three of them so one of them had to be the alpha even it was only of that small group. Maybe she promoted herself to alpha because there is no more Borealan to compete with and the human is not going to be physically stronger than her.
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Is there anybody else that just struggles to death with linking scenes together if you start in non-sequential order?
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>>7000953
Why are you trying to be Tarantino?
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>>7000958
I'm not, I'm just following advice people have given me in the past like start at the smut first and work back, and it never works out.
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>>7000958
Not him, but it can be a lot easier to write that way when doing smut. I've done it a couple times if I know what I want out of the smut but haven't quite gotten the characters down. I'll write the smut first and let that guide the rest of the story.
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>>7000960
Well whoever told you that was a paste-drinking lummox. The build-up is just as important as the smut. It's an extension of the foreplay, and if you work backwards or in other obtuse ways, you're going to fuck it up.
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>>7000965
It's just I find it very hard to continue if the first scene feels like it's shit.
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>>7000965
There are no hard and fast rules in writing. The buildup can be just as important, but that doesn't mean that you won't sometimes want to skip around as inspiration takes you. I almost always write the beginning and the ending first, as I like to put the premise and the conclusion down on paper as quickly as possible before I lose it. Even then, it is sometimes helpful to stick if you hit a stuck spot. It's probably not best to always write the smut first, but if you're having a hard time getting to the smut at all, that might be helpful. I know that I've seen more than a few stories around here that seem as though the author forgot to write the smut and just threw some shit in. Maybe that's the case here.
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>>7001006
that's because a lot of fa/tg/uys have a worldbuilding fetish and pretty much all the the writers/regulars are /tg/ for obvious reasons
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>>7000960
>>7000965
Yeah I have to agree, I don't have as much experience as a lot of the writers here but I always write in a very linear manner, I don't jump around unless I'm going back to correct an inconsistency.

>>7001010
I can't imagine a scenario where more world building makes a story less enjoyable.
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>>7001040
Even back when we were on /tg/ we would get the odd faggot would get pissy the stories weren't just porn and no plot. They didn't stay long after it was made abundantly clear they were very much in the minority.
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>>7000960
I'm a strong believer in long-ass foreplay (story setup) before the actual scenes. Though, that is relative. I've gone 20-30k words before having a 10k sex scene, but I got burned out with some novels where I had too many sex scenes (Mummy's Girl, Puppy Mill) so I'm trying to find the right balance of porn and plot.

>>7000204
Thank you. Always makes my day to find a fan. :) I pretty much haven't stopped writing in '91, though the last few pieces have been for Patreons only (Puppy Mill 2, Omelas but that is almost serialized). I'm hoping to have new stuff every month.

For everyone else, if you like forced breeding, tentacles, and rough sex, you might consider my Omelas 2 story (https://tsade.com/nine-sisters/omelas/omelas-02/).
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Speaking of /tg/, I did a bit of archive diving- it's now been exactly a year since we were booted off there.

Makes you feel old, doesn't it?
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>>6999352
snekguy, i love your stuff, but in my opinion your sentences run on for too long very often.
for example, from splashdown:
>Moisture was plentiful here, they were practically swimming, he sucked air into his mouth experimentally and felt wetness on his tongue, but sunlight might be a problem under this canopy, if the canteens ran out of energy they would have to be filled conventionally, from a fresh water source, who knew where they might find one of those.
if it was punctuated differently, the different kinds of pauses would make it easier to read. for example:
>Moisture was plentiful here, they were practically swimming. He sucked air into his mouth experimentally and felt wetness on his tongue, but sunlight might be a problem under this canopy; if the canteens ran out of energy they would have to be filled conventionally, from a fresh water source. Who knew where they might find one of those.

anyways, please keep writing! you're my favorite out of the authors i see post here regularly
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>>7001121
Maybe we should make an attempt at a comeback next weekend.
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>>7001144
Good luck with that. The way I see it, the very fact we've lasted here as long as we have is going to make that a difficult feat at best.

Worst case scenario? Same shit happens that got us kicked off in the first place, only they follow us back too. It's a risk that's probably not worth taking at this point, and I'd rather not sit through mountains of shitposting yet again.
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>>6999352
Man. I really enjoy what you did with Raz and Stanley. I know they had their epilogue, but I would love to see more of this universe from their perpectives. Came for the smut, stayed up way too late for the story.
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>>7001154
I disagree. Anyway, the shit that got us "kicked off" was lazy modding. We had the change of ownership between now and then, so I have hopes for us yet.
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>>7001142
Thanks for the feedback and the example text, I'm trying to improve, so that's super helpful.
So less commas, more stops? I'll keep that in mind when I'm writing.

That's high praise, I'll keep doing my best!

>>7001158
The one I'm currently writing, Splashdown, is in the same universe, so I'll see what I can do, maybe I can fit a cameo in there or something.

Really makes me happy you guys are enjoying my stories so much, makes me feel compelled to keep up the pace.
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>>7001161
Yeah, but as far as I can see the actual mods haven't changed a bit since then- the last attempt to bring it back failed immediately when it turned out they never removed the autosage filter for the thread name.

But in any case, be my guest if you want to try and test the waters anyhow. Just don't be surprised if it's not to your liking.
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Just wanted to put out my other story because I would love some feedback on it to try and develop more as a writer. I think this has been the longest I have ever managed to keep on creating content in a long time!

Anyway, the story is titled,

Galaxy of Terror X-Rated Cut.

That was probably my first monster on girl scene so I wanted to revisit it.

It does have tentacle rape and it does have some accelerated pregnancy.

If you are interested give it a read and let me know what you thought.
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>>7001484

And then I forget to link it...

http://pastebin.com/xy4n6cNM
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>>7001487
That's like the most common fuck up writers have in this thread
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>>6999330

That discord link doesn't work, you guys need to make your invite links non-expirable or else they'll stop working once the time runs out.
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>>7001878
Sorry about that, use this instead.
https://discord.gg/vYwdHes
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>>7000893
it's only the second story, so no not really
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Does anyone have the Day in the life of the Emperor's Sons 40k fic? It was describing the initial parties after a slaaneshi warband got victory, and was really guro in places, but quite good.
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Requesting that the Hammerspace Dragon guy comes back and writes something else awesome. Or a girl raping a guy who constantly premature ejaculates.
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>>7002125
Also requesting something about this.

In a setting where Monsterboys and Girls coexist with humanity, a guy who considers himself straight is drawn into an orgy between multiple species and genders.
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>>6999350
Sorry, >>6999385 was meant to reply to you.
I'm an idiot.
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>>7002051
Check 1d4chan
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>>7002408
not him but after browsing the smut list and searching various tags I can't find anything that fits the description.
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Does anyone have the other chapters of this Hermione fanfic?

http://pastebin.com/yGY42mST

I think theres around seven of them. I read it all a while back and now I cant seem to find the rest. Thought I'd check here.
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>>7002427
Check the 40k fanfiction stuff. Not everything on 1d4chan with smut is in the smut list.
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>>7002437
The story doesn't seem to be on 1d4chan at all.
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Another 2000 word update to Splashdown today.

New content starts at "We must find shelter".
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I've wanted to write some sort of Star Wars thing. I was thinking it might take place during the Old Republic era, and it would focus on a Sith apprentice and his Master. Beyond that, though, I haven't thought about quite yet. Would something like this interest anyone?
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>>7002994
Sounds good to me, I always thought Ventress was hot.
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Ravaged by the roadside has been revised and I attempted to take the advice provided to heart as best I could, Enjoy!

Warg, Rapid Pregnancy, Non-Consensual, Large Insertion, Birthing, Knot, Rough.

http://pastebin.com/vHa934MM
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>>7003445
Nice work, I like this story there's a lot of energy to it.
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So, in my morning haze, I came up with an odd idea: Were-cocks.

Like a werewolf, but only the genitals change under the moonlight. Basically a side-effect of a werewolf giving you oral is that your genitals change into huge, aroused wolf genitals during the full moon, and werewolves cannot resist wanting to fuck them.
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>>7003857
does the knot get any bigger?
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>>7003869
That picture is just an example. It probably would once a werewolf starting going to town on it.
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>>7003876
not the picture, but your protag with a werecock.
does it swell to like, the size of a grapefruit after enough orgasms/transformations?
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>>7003880
I don't get the point of the question. The idea is that after a trsansformed werewolf gave them oral, their genitals turns into werewolf genitals that act as a magnet for werewolves, so the night of a full moon can wind up with some scary encounters.
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New update to Splashdown, forbidden love edition.
New content starts at "Zhari looked thoughtful".

http://pastebin.com/22tbp4XP

>>7003857
I don't usually like TF but that's some innovation right there.
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Also my Snek stories are now available in one combined Ebook in epub format, you can download it here:

https://www.patreon.com/file?h=6647983&i=548925
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>>7004057
>Borealans get off on dominating those weaker than themselves
>Borealans are also aroused by challenges to their dominance
>Humans by default prompt the first reaction
>Humans with a quick tongue or strong will are basically undiluted fetish fuel
Jesus, time on the pinwheel must cause some incredibly confusing feelings for most of the borealan recruits, especially since it seems they're primed to be xenophobic by the whole cultural superiority obsession they have going on.
Zhari's so deep in the human closet she's taking tea with Mr. Tumnus.
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>>7004138
And neither of them has been able to shower for who knows how long, so the human's scent will just keep getting stronger and stronger
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>>7004138
Imagine a Borealan that has to work with a civilian/non military human
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>>7004144
>There's an unspoken rite of passage at the training facilities where recruits go from ranting about their weak, infuriating human roommate while absent-mindedly pawing at themselves in the shower on the first day to fantasizing about pinning down and ravishing their adorable, helpless roommate while hoping that none of the other borealans discover their shameful perversion by the end of the week.
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>>7003445
Please work on your grammar and spelling.
Cuz' I want to see more, this is good stuff.
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>>7004057
What kind of expectations are there of borealan alphas? Subordinates are expected to obey orders and satisfy the urges of their alpha, but are the alphas expected to provide leadership, guidance and protection to their subordinates, or something along those lines?
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>>7004196
From the first story it seems they look to the alphas for guidance and the group seems not to know what to do in unexpected situations without alphas telling them what to do. Like the nonalphas lack initiative.
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Harpies: http://pastebin.com/gSdBUBWE

>I think I had a problem with the first half of this piece. I found it challenging to integrate satisfying description while also conveying a sense of speed and urgency. Do you think my attempt at finding a happy medium between the two were successful?

Tags: hetero, FFM, monster girl, harpy, hilariously lubricated vagina, shortstack, sisters, face-sitting, vaginal, hot-dogging, cunnilingus, the myth of the female orgasm, not mindbreak - just really tired, Wonderland
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The latest chapter of Lock, Croc and Two Smoking Barrels is here.

Chapter 24: Croc This Town
http://pastebin.com/n7wZkdNU

>Tags for the whole thing: croc-girl, sex, nudity, public nudity, exhibitionism, mild humiliation, cunnilingus, breath play, consensual, lovey-dovey, silly, violence, menace, animal death, Florida.

Coming close to the end here... I hope everyone's enjoyed it so far.
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>>7004286
It's worth it for the tags and puns alone.

>>7004196
>>7004209
It's not so much that they have no initiative, but that they're afraid to act without approval from an Alpha because taking initiative could be seen as a provocation. That's a good point though I should probably detail their role in the Alpha/Beta relationship a bit better in the stories.
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>>7004293
>That's a good point though I should probably detail their role in the Alpha/Beta relationship a bit better in the stories
I suppose so far we've only really seen the dynamic when they're busy establishing their superiority over someone, though that's kind of to be expected in a boot camp/frontline environment since that's geared up to bring the fight out in anybody. How they interact with someone more reserved/passive they've deemed to be part of their pack or taken under their wing could be interesting.
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>>7004182

Honesty if I have made any errors in Grammer at this point it is because I lack the skill to identify them. And the spelling ones I might have accidentally skimmed over since it's the second edit.

If you could point then out to me and explain what is wrong with it you will be improving my ability to write more consistently and accurately than before!
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>>7004323
You know the some of the grammar and spelling stuff can be caught if you write the story in word. or similar programs, then copy+paste it to pastebin.
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>>7004327

I did write in word... pretty darn sure it was free of grammer errors.
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Does anyone know whatever happened to the Cruise Ship of Theseus story?

Basically the idea was a guy who works on a space cruise ship gets injured, so his mind is uploaded to a service robot temporarily, but guests think it's a new model of server robot and they keep recommending changes which go through and end up making his robot body more and more feminine. I think I last saw mention of it in February, but at the time it seemed that it had been abandoned and another writer was going to pick it up.

I have the links to the first four parts, but the writer hasn't made any of his posts public so there's no way to see if he's written any parts recently.

http://pastebin.com/G25i9RZC
http://pastebin.com/V3HU0caf
http://pastebin.com/hQapyf7g
http://pastebin.com/f0hJG3Uq

I don't really browse these threads too often, but I've Ctrl+F'd my way through this and the last thread and the links in the first post and I haven't come across any mention of it.
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>>7004368
Try grammarly.com, they have a free service and catch a bunch of simple grammar.

Overall, it is much better. I'm not fond of present tense in general, which throws me, and the POV switches are still too rapid for *my* tastes (but not others). Good job on improving.
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>>7003857
>furry balls
Why?
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>>7004057
>Girl who got oral from a werewolf while drunk a month previous finds herself helplessly fapping her wolf-cock that transformed with the full moon, unable to find release.
>A female werewolf comes in through her window and fucks her silly for hours.
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>>7004310
Theoretically you could have a submissive Borealan pet who did whatever you told her to, assuming you could hit her over the head hard enough.
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>>7004368
sticking it in Word and running the spelling and grammar checker directly from proofing tools is finding a bunch of errors on my end.

the tense agreement checking is also probably getting scrambled since things like
>Her sedan has finally being completely starved
are pretty messy grammatically, it's a mishmash of the present progressive and the present perfect tenses; it should be either

>Her sedan has finally been completely starved
(present perfect; set in the present tense discussing events that have now completed)
or
>Her sedan is finally being completely starved
(present progressive; describing events that are happening right now)

also
>Her sedan, finally being completely starved,
can feed into either a present progressive or a present perfect form of the sentence, but that's getting a little fancier with how clauses let you play with time and tenses.

http://www.verbix.com/webverbix/English/be.html
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>>7004284
>Harpies
Going to have to check this out when I have time.
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Is there a way I can categorize the master smut list by fetish? I'm looking for the vore stories.

Pic unrelated (unless it's for describing my confusion)
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>>7004429
Ctrl+f vore

The master list has tags for a reason.
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>>7004376

I'll give it a shot thanks for all the advice.
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>>7004370
>4 parts
Wow I thought there were only 3. Nice find.

as for what happen to the guy, no idea. There was some anon on /aco/ who was writing their own version of the story and part one of it is here:
pastebin.com/ieXEkGKg

haven't seen part two yet so I don't know if it is being continued or what.
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>>7004370
>>7004491
Nice to see other people care about the prompt.
Wish it got to the meaty "SOMA" ethical dilemma where it's revealed the protagonist is a AI copy of the original worker, and must confront their sentience/downloaded preferences.
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>>7004284
are there more works part of the same setting?

gr8 work
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>>7004376

Enters ravaged in Grammerly, 50+ errors detected.

...

Fuuuck.

Thanks for the tip on this awesome free program though I am seriously tempted to pay for it for the more advanced stuff.
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>>7004918
I got 55 critical errors, but 90% of them were done on purpose for organic dialogue, 5% were purposely disregarded punctuation for narrative flow, and the remaining 5%... well, I've learned that "grinded" should be written as "ground." Even though it doesn't show up as an error in Word.

I'm sure the advanced program would have a lot to say about my usage of dashes and semicolons, though.

>>7004884
Wonderland? It's part of the Monster Girl Encyclopedia. I should warn you though, I take a lot of creative liberties because I don't really care for the setting - It's just a jumping-off point for me.
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>>7004884
>>7004938
Oh, and thanks, m8.
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>>7004938

My best error so far, naval rather then navel. Maybe I secretly want to write warship porn?

Toot toot!
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>>7004943
You wouldn't be the first!
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>>7004978
We don't need any more shipgirls porn, though. They're practically more popular than 2hu now.
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>>7005015
and we all know who the best girl is right?
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>>7005035
Midway, obviously. Codename AF for Cute As Fuck!
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Does anyone have any recommendations for stories that involve lactation? I'm thinking of situations like
>Woman wakes in the middle of the night, C-cup breasts tingling. Before her eyes, they grow two sizes, as they fill with milk. Thinking it's just a dream, she goes back to sleep. Surprised in the morning, we get to follow her around, trying to get through her day sloshing when she moves, occasionally feeling damp spots on her chest.

Too much lactation art focuses on an explosion of milk, whereas stories have the potential to explore the life changing effects of something like this.
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Odd question, does anyone know anything about rock climbing?

Could a bayonet be used as a piton?
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>>7005186
No. They're made for different things. Maybe to cut a rope, but not for climbing.
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>>7005186
Unlikely, blades are usually made so they're made so they bend when pushed hard enough, (easier to fix than if they break), a bayonet is short so it wouldn't be as bad. Wouldn't trust it to hold anybodies weight, especially to break a fall. No way would it be able to take that.
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>>7005195
>>7005204
Gotcha, thanks for the info.
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>>7005221
To be fair, if you're talking about those weapons your borealans use, I don't think those worries would apply. They're sci-fi bayonets after all. I doubt future blades would bend or break when stuck in a mountain...
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>>7005255
Heh. I imagine a bayonet for a Borealan is like a Human Bowie knife.
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>>7005255
If anything I would be more worried about it cutting through the rock.
I mean, the Betelgeusians are probably harder than rock, and these bayonets are meant for them.
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>>7004178
Would be hilarious, and also awesome.
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>>7005261
Yea, I was thinking along those lines after posting.
Snek, you have some explaining to do on in-lore bayonet and blade capabilities.
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>>7005261
>>7005255
Yep. I imagine a plasteel bayonet sized for a Borealan would support two soldiers without any danger of breaking.
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>>7005255
>>7005257
>>7005261
>>7005263
>>7005279
>>7005298
2000 word update, get out of my personal space edition.

New content starts at "I ain't climbing that tree you crazy bitch".

Splashdown:
http://pastebin.com/22tbp4XP
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>>7005500
Ooooh.

Quick question. Borealans love dominating their partners. How do they feel about being dominated?
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>>7005556
They will submit if a stronger Borealan overpowers them, and they will follow orders they are given, sexual or otherwise.
I can't say if they enjoy it or not, but that is the natural state of things for them.
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>>7005186
depends on the strength of the blade and the strength of the rock. bayonets are usually pretty good about not bending since they're piercing weapons expected to have to prang against body armor and also usually doubling as picks, levers and chisels in the field. combat knives would generally be a waste of time since they're usually more a utility item that also doubles as a slashing weapon in emergencies, and don't have the shape for piercing or resistance to bending needed for climbing. plus you'd be blunting an invaluable survival tool.

in a pinch (so, survival situations where you literally cannot go to get actual equipment), anything suitably pointy and vaguely strong like an antler, large construction nail/spike or durable piece of wood can serve as a climbing aid for driving into existing fissures and holes and using as a handhold.

anything high enough to warrant a piton, sheer enough that you can't use natural features either as gripping points themselves or for ramming home improvised climbing sticks, and yet fragile enough that you can drive a shitty improvised piton into the rock is probably something you just shouldn't climb at all and you should find a different way up.

if you're thinking about tree climbing where there aren't usable limbs and it's too large to get a grip with your arms, your best approach is the rope method as per https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/5/50/PSM_V19_D700_Tree_climbing_by_rope_support.jpg
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>>6999384
Sounds like "A gift and a test", I read part of it a while back here:
http://overflowingbra.com/results.htm?varname=847
Not completely sure though.
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>>7005565
Thanks, that's some useful info, I was gonna have the character climb the rock face but it seems like that wouldn't have been feasible with the equipment they had access to.
How do you guys know so much about rock climbing? Does Mikoyan leave his futanari dojins on top of mountains or something?
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>>7005575
There are several rock climbing techniques that are done with no equipment and just your bare hands too
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>>7005578
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>>7005500
Great update. Though I must say Zhari made the transition from barely tolerating McGregor, to barely contained lust for him pretty quickly.
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>>7005594
Ah, was the progression a bit fast?
I admit I'm trying to advance the plot a little faster because there's just not a lot for them to do in the jungle besides argue and fuck, and I thought people might be getting bored of the former.
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>>7005575
If you're looking for general resources, wilderness survival shows are pretty good. Bear Grylls might be especially pertinent since his background is special forces and due to that (and because it makes for good television) there's a focus on fast traversal and riskier strategies that might fit better with a behind-enemy-lines scenario. In text form (and without the hyperbole) the SAS survival guide by John 'Lofty' Wiseman is both exceedingly comprehensive and very concise, not to mention by a former SAS soldier and later survival trainer for the regiment, so it's a good starting reference for anything along the lines of crashlanding or splashdown.

Also here's a picture of a sexy alien for /d/ relevancy
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>>7005604
I see what you mean. Just seems like her desire for McGregor went from 0 to 100 in no time.
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>>7005632
You could say that's due to how many issues the Borealans have from their society and culture shock/differences that being around humans has on them
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>>7005632
Rather than a slow build up of mutual attraction like with my previous story I kind of wanted to go for a faster, dirtier relationship, McGregor doesn't know anything about Borealans because pilots don't get sent to the Pinwheel, so he doesn't understand how his cheeky bantz effect Zhari, and she's too proud to explain anything to him.
So they're kind of feeding off eachother and building towards a breaking point.
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>>7005632
From her reflections on her time in training, she sounds like she's been repressing a thing for humans for a while on some level, and until now had maintained that in part by avoiding contact with them beyond the essential. Forced proximity and stress could be making that switch flip pretty fast.
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>>7005643
Neat. I can imagine McGregor waking up at night because Zhari attempted to use the cover of darkness to conceal her 'activities'.
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>>7005617
Survivorman is objectively more hardcore, though.
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>>7005571
BASED ANON.
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>>7005828
That works too, I just haven't seen that in a while so it wasn't top of my mind. iirc the survivorman stuff was less sexed up so it doesn't help as naturally for tension or writing action scenes, and if you want more in the way of techniques and methods to inform character action text resources are much more useful.
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I've got a fresh story for you guys.

Witch's Familiar
>http://pastebin.com/twMnS7VC

Tags: incest (adoptive mother and in a dream), horror, rape, light gore not portrayed sexually

I do plan to write more for this, but it had been being worked on for far too long so I wanted to get it out here before I continue it.

This one is not for everyone, but I know there's a few people here who've been enjoying kind of, fear boners so hopefully you guys dig it.

picture unrelated
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>>7006398
So I know pic unrelated but I went on a bit of a quest to find the original. You can trace it yourselves, but I found 1) the deleted hentaifoundry original with some background, and 2) a story based on the image, both accessible via Wayback Machine.

You're welcome.

https://web.archive.org/web/20140522081259/http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/faustsketcher/174102/One-Hell-of-First-Time
https://web.archive.org/web/20130403065119/http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/AnonyMPC/8955/Summer-of-Succubus
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>>7006398
It's good to see you're still writing, Monster. Overall I like this one, it has the usual Monster hallmarks of being quick in a I'm-not-wasting-your-time sort of manner and engaging from the onset. You also do a good job of letting your worldbuilding occur as part of the story, rather than stopping to give exposition. That's a difficult trick to get right, so kudos.

However, I do a few complaints. First is that I think this should be longer. You've always been good at getting to the point and keeping the story on track, but I feel like this one could use some more time to build up. You have a solid foundation here, and I believe taking the time to expand would make it all the stronger.
Mostly I want to see more of your two leads. We see a good deal of Larazod, but Vivalian comes across comparatively shallow. I understand you're going to continue the story, but I think with this being the opening it would be beneficial show us her motivations and a clearer idea of her goals. Also, and this is just me talking, I'd love to actually see her casting this spell. It just seems like that'd be a cool scene: her trying to figure out how to "attack" and such.

There are also a few minor typos, specifically a few extra quotation marks and the use of "patreon" instead of "patron." All easily fixed.

In terms of style, I can't help but feel the dialogue gets a bit anachronistic at times. The setting feels medieval, so the boy saying things like "cool" feels a bit out of place. As does the use of panties for the witch's underwear, while I'm on the subject. That's a rather recent type of garment, all things considered.
But it is a fantasy world, so something being anachronistic for a real world medieval story isn't necessarily so for a unique setting.
Just my two cents.

Anyway, I think you've got something solid to work with and I look forward to seeing where the next entries take us!
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>>7006398
>pic
HOLY HELL THAT'S AMAAAZING
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>>7006511
Honestly, it's the picture on the bedside that I love most about this picture. It just brings it all together.
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It's hard to write erotica nowadays due to Amazon's policy of pay per page. I write for Amazon, under kindle, anyone can. Few can make a living out of it.
All I can say is, it's a female oriented market.
Women like dinosaur porn and I mean alot.
So, if you're new and don't know what to write, just write about a talking t-rex fucking a chick.
I know, I know how does that even work. Doesn't matter write it.
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>>7006529
Personally. I think the succubus is too much into it. Seems and feels like a threesome. Like she's hen of the nest sort of vibe.
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>>7005571
DAS IT MANE

You rule. Thanks dude.
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>>7006398
Saw that image the other day.
Gave me the idea of a story where a couple wishes for an angel to bless their marriage, only for a consummation demon to be summoned instead. The succubi ends up guiding them through their awkward first time, with adorable vanilla lovemaking guided by a hint of lewdness.

Maybe as a wedding/farewell gift, she leaves her up a cup size and increases his stamina...
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>>7006610
I always pictured the couple in this picture as brother and sister considering the tears in the boys eyes as the demon forces him to live out his fantasy that would have never done because it'd leave his poor sister scarred.
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>>7006569
I was thinking of uploading my stuff to kindle self-publishing since they accept epub format, and I've already converted all my stories.
You think I'd stand a chance?
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>>7006635
see >>7006484, that's pretty much what's happening
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>>7006569
I would love to write porn for amazon but it sounds like you just want more trex fucking fiction produced.
What's your work look like>

>>7006635
This is what it looked like to me, except maybe that it wasn't his fantasy.
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>>7006610
>>7006635

I thought it was two boys, and the Succubus transformed one into a girl and forced the other one to fuck her.
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>>7006647
Not him, but make sure you check what kind of content they accept. I know incest and noncon are banned, probably more stuff as well.
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>>7006696
Content seems to be fine, I'm just wondering if it's worth doing, I've got a good library of stuff to upload now but I can't say if there's an audience for it.
Also I'd need to make covers.
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>>7006672
>you just want more trex fucking fiction produced.

Maybe. No. Yes. I want a lawyer!
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>>7006715
Do you actually have published work though?

I'm curious as to what level I should be aiming for.
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>>7006723
Of course I have published work......stuff
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>>7006723
You mean erotica? You gotta be willing to follow Amazon's rules. See, you their bitch nao.
Nevertheless, here's two examples.
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>>7005186
>>7005221
>>7005204
>>7005195
/k/ommando here.

Most of that is true, but I would also note, not all bayonets are made equally.

I haven't tried it myself but a spike bayonet off say a 91/30 or chinese sks could concivably be usable as a piton. Ultimately the answer is "depends on the bayonet and the quality of the steel it was made of".
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>>7006723
>Do you actually have published work though?

Go to Amazon, search by the tag "Parsela"
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>>7006759
I'm seeing a few "21 pages" things here, what's the word count for that like?
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>>7006768
Don't buy that book. I was high. Please don't,
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>>7006768
>>7006775
Heh, "Autoerotica".
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>>7006768
How the fuck does that even work?!!!
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>>7006775
How do you make your covers?
Is there some repository for public domain art or something? I can't find anything that isn't covered in watermarks.
I was considering just paying some furries to do it for me.
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>>7006809
Use what suits you most.
My opinion? Use photoshop.
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>>7006809
Do what I'm doing, trace anime in paint dot net.

Halfway through this one right now.
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>>7006775
Legit though, what's the word count on those.
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>>7006838

2000 to 15000. Depends on what I feel like writing.
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>>7006569
>pay per page
Fuck. That sounds worse than per word. They're rewarded for short paragraphs.
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>>7006841
Thanks, I'm over here trying to write fucking novels and shit like a retard.
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>>7006844
No, a machine decides what money you make using words that the reader reads.
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>>7006752
What are Amazon's rules, btw?

>>7006846
I don't know what to make of that sentence.
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>>7006845
If your story needs to be novel length to be told though, you should make it novel length.
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>>7006851
Amazon has very strict laws. All characters must be adults, no incest, no pornography "They decide was is porn and what isn't" when it comes to writing. Basicaly, if you have to put a story before writing smut.
Of course you can write anything else other than smut.
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>>7006845
Novel is 50000 words.
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>>7006856
Fucking why? They make their money on selling you shit, not advertisements, so it's not like they stand to lose money. Are they just moralfags? Weak.
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>>7006853
Yeah I might just focus on writing for length,

>>7006856
>no porn

Fuck.
How did you get away with "automotive erotica" though?

I was literally preparing a story about two elves who are strongly implied to be twins murder fucking their way through an entire town.
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>>7006860
They keep a share of your income. Rather, they decide what you should receive. You don't receive the full share of the money. Sometimes is 70% but most cases is just 15% of profit to you. That's how it works.
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>>7006865
>How did you get away with "automotive erotica" though?

I wrote a story. Car takes her to a fancy restaurant, orders a bottle of Chardonnay. You know, stuff.
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>>7006868
No. I mean why do they ban underage and incest? Moralfaggotry? It's not advertizers.
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>>7006873
I don't know.
But, it's their site so.
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>>7006869
Ohh, so there's no actual sex scenes then.
Smuts my jam.

>>7006857
Yeah, I'm happy to know I can just dial it back to 10-30k.

Might remove a lot of the sex scenes from my !not pokemon and elf stories and see what I can upload.
Income supplementation is the essence of economic freedom.

Have a wip, /efg/
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>>7006877
>Ohh, so there's no actual sex scenes then.
>Smuts my jam.

No, there IS sex. Otherwise there wouldn't be in the erotica section. All stories have sex. And yes, even the car one.
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>>7006878
Well that's something to work with as well, do you think I could get away with !not pokemon fucking?
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>>7006879
Depends.
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>>7006873
Moralfaggotry + profit margins. The potential profit loss from not including several things is probably much lower than the potential backlash of normalfags when/if they find out their nice mostly family friendly site hosts shit from degenerate parts of the internet.
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>>7006873
>>7006886
It'd be interesting to see if there's another e-reader company which doesn't have those hang ups.
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>>7006398
>>7006678

>"Why don't you get down and dirty with your friend? He seems to be enjoying his new body a lot. Don't you want to use this huge cock I've given you? No matter who it used to be, a boy cannot resist a fuck like this..."
>"Nnaah! huge cock! GIMME THAT HUGE COOOOCK!"
>As much as he didn't want to do it, the boy felt his resistance slipping.

Now THAT sounds like the work of a devil.
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>>7006398
I have to disagree with:
>>7006500

IMHO, you have great scenes, a good story, and have everything well ordered. The only thing I can see needing improvement are the transitions; you don't need to overhaul the whole thing like Anon is suggesting here.

To me, it looks like you came up with the story, worked out a good, effective outline, and then wrote the important scenes. But the transitions between those scenes feel a bit rushed, largely because they sort of just end and the next one begins. The obvious effort put into said important scenes makes the transitions all the more noticeable.
A few clearer distinctions between moments and POV shifts, maybe a few more sentences a acting as establishing shots, and I say you have yourself a darn good yarn here.

Other than that, I like it, it's interesting, and I want to see more.
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>>7006879
Bestiality is banned, so probably depends on what your characters are like (and if any reader reports your story).

>>7006888
They exist, but they have nowhere near the audience size of amazon.
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>>7007029
Oh, and I should probably clarify since we started with dinosaur fucking: for whatever reason you can have non-existent animals like dinosaurs and dragons and tentacle monsters, but not a dog or whatever.
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>>7007033
So what about a unicorn?
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>>7007056
Unicorns are fine. Demon Dogs are fine. As long it ain't a real horse or dog it's fine.
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Update, we got some tags now.
New content starts at "McGregor walked up to the curtain of vines"

Splashdown:
http://pastebin.com/22tbp4XP
>light bondage, sweat, reverse rape, femdom, biting, licking, scratching, rough sex

Maybe I went a bit far?
He deserves it though, doesn't he?
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>>7007066
So amazon is run by faggots. Big surprise.
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>>7007114
Oh, brilliant.

I'm sure McGregor's fine, as long as he doesn't get eaten. Or something.
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Anything with shapeshifters similar to slimegirls?
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>>7007114
Noice
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>>7007303
Now, when you say slime girls...
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>>7007392
Suu is best girl.
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>>7007397
I wish she used her ara ara tittymonster form more
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>>7007417
Seawater Suu? Me too. I want to see even more forms, though. Well, more Suu in general. Suu doing cute things.
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>>7007114
I hope she doesn't go to far. Not liking her to much so far. But I didn't like Raz much in the beginning either. Can't wait for more.
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>>7006569
>dinosaur porn
I wrote one of those. :) It was fun and one of my best sellers. Well, the rest of the dino sex stories weren't.
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>>7007303
I got this idea for a post-apocalyptic story where humanity gets turned into monster boys and girls:
In the ruins of a hospital, slime people encased in different kinds of suits (hazmat, gimp, riot armor) attempt to live civilized but gloopy lives. They aren't fully goo, just living bones encased in a dull colored gel. They can still reproduce and make goo-babies which grow up, resulting in overpopulation of individuals. Which leads to their tradition where teenage goo are sent on a kind of walk-about in the city outside the hospital.
The story should focus around this teenage slime girl who likes studying old pre-apocalyptic human anatomy. She gets randomly selected for an "Expedition" and encases herself in a latex catsuit, a gas mask and a crimson wig. She heads out into the city and encounters a pair of amazonian sister and their shared husband, a half-giant (or adeptus astartes). One of the sisters is pregnant and is about enter to labor, neither her sister nor her husband know what to do. Slime girl steps in with her medical knowledge, saves the day, then gets inducted into the Half-giant's harem as Nurse. They have orgies and then go off on adventures.
>I don't feel like writing it, but it's a fun idea for me.
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>>7007392

I mean, I've read the following which had VERY similar shapeshifters to what I'm looking for

Arms of the Ocean (women were water based and apparently had hearts and brains which could very well kill them if these were injured)
Body Shifters (only about 3-4 loosely interconnected stories, but just about what I was looking for)
Color of Air/Water/Sea (alpha chad thundercock space captain is absorbed by shapeshifter who merged with a female space cadet after fucking once... more animal shifting than human shapeshifting)

NONE of the women were slime, yet they could melt, shapeshift, and could stretch themselves easily as if they were slime.
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Trying to write stupid girl romance fantasy fiction, does this sound like something
It's pretty much a scene describing her reaction at being captured by !not black haired fabio after fleeing her village to escape the draft.
He takes her virginity in exchange for her silence but then turns her in anyway, only for it to be revealed that she wasn't being drafted into military service but instead recruited into a magic academy because of her hax latent powers.

It's meant to be camp and kinda crappy.
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>>7007114
Lovin' it. Something about their dynamic makes me hope that McGregor gains the upper hand in this.
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>>7007114
>mumbling rape justifications to herself
oh baby
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Are there anymore heartwarming stories featuring loving and caring monstergirls giving things like positive reinforcement to their human husbands.

Those are really one of the beat type of stories am I right?

Stories like this: >>6980624
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>>7007994
I writing one as we speak, but it's not done yet.
And the women don't start out as gentle.
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>>7007994
There's a slime girl one by Smutomancer that ends with that sort of relationship. I can't link to it since I'm on my phone, though.
It has a long title, I know that.
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>>7007994
Depending how gentle you want, my stuff probably fits the bill.
Usually starts off not gentle but gets there as the relationship develops.
You might like Crashland:

http://pastebin.com/E6WVfvK1
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I need some inspiration for a story idea I'm working on. Basicly its about sexy warrior girls who draw out energy from things like there boobs or erogenous zones, and they use this energy to purify villains. I'm wondering if theres some real world inspiration i could use for this idea? Like maybe body massages or rituals or something else.
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>>7008139
There's an anime with pretty much this exact idea. Just replace warriors with ninjas though.
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>>7008139
>>7008144
There's a dojin too called Power Play by Yamatogawa, it's very good.
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>>7007794
I'm hoping he's not into it, until he realizes how ashamed she is to be doing it/having feelings for him, at which point he absolves to prove having a human fetish is nothing to be ashamed of.
At which point his mouth lunges for a nipple.
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>>7008159
She might end being more protective of him now too.
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I need more written warhammer smut, I've exhausted 1dchan and hentaifoundry. Where should I look next?
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>>7008411
Also requesting a day in the life of a slutty SOB constantly trying to get the space marines she works with to brutally fuck her.
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>>7002051
Anyone know where to find this yet?
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>>7008414
Ah, the lusty space marine....

"I fuck, for the Emperor!"
And those chaos women soaking wet and defeated, though sexually satiated.
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>>7008431
In my head cannon "Lusty Space Marine" is a contraband magazine distributed amongst SOBs. Being caught with it isn't Heresy or anything, just like being caught with booze.

LSM contains very little actual nudity, just snapshots of Space marines asses while they're in their armor.

Also it probably has advice columns

>How to get your battle brothers to notice you
>One weird trick to keep your hair snow white
>How to not get caught staring in the showers

The idea of a bunch of horny SOBs constantly trying to seduce maxum-dong-wielding space marines who aren't remotely interested is hilarious.
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>>7008411
Do you have any requests for specific scenarios or pairings?
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>>7008454

Would love to see a SOB progressively getting more and more slutty. From starting to notice how hot the Space Marines she works with are, to trying to sneak a peak in the showers, to not wearing underwear and hoping they notice, etc.

Thanks m9.
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>>7008473
I think it might work better from a religious angle. Maybe it could start with a Sister at mass, hearing how the marines are descended from the Emperor (he made the Primarchs from his flesh, and the marines from Primarch flesh), then her growing lust would come from her seeing more and more of the Emperor in them.
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>>7008495
That's an even better idea. Are you offering to write it?
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>>7008500
I'm not sure. It's a fun idea, but it's been a long time since I've written anything and I'm no too good at female POV.
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>>7008513
You could do a male POV watching it unfold. Or a third person story,
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>>7008519
Well, I may give it a try, but no promises. And it'd take at least a week even if I do manage it.
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>>7008529
It's fine. In the mean time does anyone know where I can find more 40k smut?
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>>7008532
Google, maybe? It's hard to figure out exactly what to search for, though. I found one or two things on fanfiction.net that way, but porn is against their terms of use so they may have been removed since then.
Looks like literotica has a few. I opened these links and they are stories.
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>>7008548
Forgot muh pic
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>>7008548
Oh no, there's plenty of porn on FF.net. You just have to look around a little on the mature tags to find it. Not helped by the fact that their tag and filter system is atrociously bad. Like most fiction sites it seems.
Otherwise there is Archive Of Our Own but good luck finding *anything* smutty there.
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So apparently the new fluff from the HH books says that the wolves on Fenris are actually humans with extensive genetic engineering.
I'd like to request a Fenrisian woman getting raped by a pack of wolves and giving birth to a boy who becomes a Space Wolf hero after the chapter chooses him to join their ranks.
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>>7008558
In my experience a good 50% of Archive of Our Own warhammer shorts are in Russian. The rest are either too long-winded, solely feature OCs, or are just bad.
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2000 word update, love is a battlefield and this is Verdun edition.

New content starts at "Her juices were soaking through her shorts".

http://pastebin.com/22tbp4XP
>light bondage, sweat, reverse rape, femdom, biting, licking, scratching, rough sex, oral, female ejaculation, hair pulling, tail job (is that a thing? I don't fucking know)
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>>7008564
>HH books
I try to ignore those as much as possible, or at least apply a judicious measure of the official line that all Black Library stuff is only canon insofar as they are stories that are told within the setting, and are as likely to be propaganda, legends, or misinterpreted chinese whisper stories as to be actually true.
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>>7008662
>chinese whisper stories
I'm using this now.
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>>7008558
All found on the first page.
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>>7008743
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>>7008743
Well if you set it to romance tag you get like 44 results and some of the descriptions imply fucking.
Granted, one of them includes incestual Brother/Sister Space Marines buuut whatcha gonna do.
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>>7008743
Didn't even notice that top one. Someone wrote a 63,000 word story about warhammer digimon.
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In a thread like this a long ass time ago there was a green text story of a Demon seducing a paladin, a rogue joining in and getting pegged/killed. Anyone have it?
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>>7008798
>pegged
Aaaaw
>killed
Naaaaw
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>>7008743
I like how the second one misspelled "some".

Twice.
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>>7008635
keep em coming.
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>>7008798
There was also a story about some adventurer who went to kill some slimes, failed that, met their queen and then she somehow followed him to his home.
Dunno if there was any conclusion. Maybe the writer dropped it.
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>>7008798
no but i have some of the other ones from those threads, the more lovey dovey ones

http://pastebin.com/waewePUH

http://pastebin.com/rmiQ8sPB

both are futasuccubus / Fpaladin
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>>7006759
Hey anon I searched your stuff, do you actually make money from these or is it just a hobby?
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>>7009460
Hobby.
You can't make money unless you're a big shot like Chuck Tingle.
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>>7009460
Of course that doesn't mean I don't make money.
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>>7009495
I just googled chuck tingle, that shit is hilarious.

>Pounded by the pound: turned gay by the socioeconomic implications of Britain leaving the European union

This experience might have given me the drive I needed to finally write something for uploading.
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Does anybody know of any high traffic erotic fiction communities?
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>>7009511
Other than the one you're posting in, no. Sometimes I wonder if any even exist.
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>>7009511
I've been searching around.
StoriesOnline is the best so far, that gives me the most views and downloads, I've gotten a small amount of email feedback but not much, mostly scifi autists complaining about my fictional technology.
I can't even register on Literotica, the site layout is shit, the webmaster is useless, the codes they gave me for account creation don't work.
FurAffinity is actually really good and I've gotten a couple of Patreon subs from there, but in terms of traffic I've only gotten like 200 views per story.
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>>7009546
What is with furries and their disposable incomes?
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>>7009522
That's disappointing.

>>7009546
I might check them out, I really do need a lot of feedback to get better. Probably going to take a creative writing class just so I can start finishing stories for once.

I think I could make some money from patreon with my pokemon porn but I also want to start a youtube gaming channel using it to advertise and would hate for it to be linked back to me irl
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>>7009546
I just have my links on the masterlist and a WordPress blog that gets a bunch of visits on and off.
And some on my DA account but my viewer count is low enough there that no one has ever bothered taking them down.
Considered HF but that place's community is a festering wound and AFF is just an outright shithole so find other places to upload stuff just feels dumb.
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>>7009573
Patreon is pretty hard to make money with, it seems to be mostly art that gets a lot of support there, the highest payout I've ever seen for literature was $30 and that guy had all kinds of bullshit paywalls and incentives.
I got some awesome dudes sending me $5 a month though, I guess it's all about exposure but I calculated that only about 0.017% of people who viewed my stories subbed me on Patreon, so I wouldn't depend on it, just treat it as encouragement to keep writing, like "hey if these guys like my stuff enough to become patrons I gotta keep pumping out stories."
Maybe having a website where you host your stories would be more beneficial, you could get ad revenue that way, but if all your stories are in one place and not on websites like SOL and Lit you'll get no exposure.
I have yet to try Kindle self-publishing, but I will probably try that soon.
I don't think I'll ever really supplement my bennies with my writing but as it stands I can get a guilt-free Steam game or a Warframe cosmetic every month just doing what I enjoy and getting people off, and that's a pretty great situation.

>>7009585
DA and Tumblr seem to be quite low traffic for stories, I didn't bother with those, I've gotten a lot of views just from posting here though, and really anywhere else I upload completed work is an afterthought, all my input and feedback mostly comes from /efg/.
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>>7009590
I don't think my highest viewing single day viewing count has ever exceeded 20 on WP so it's not like I'm getting a ton on traffic. Even on a regular basis.

And the DA stuff I practically uploaded for shits and giggles sake since porn is just straight up against their rules and they still haven't been deleted. I get more followers on DA for just marking a bunch of stuff as favourites than anything else it seems.
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>>7009590
I'm planning out short sci-fi story, it's essentially maze runner but with 1000 year old kawaii anime slut clones battling their way through a rape machine maze.
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>>7009559
when you live with your parents and don't have children to feed or anything of value to maintain, you can spend all of your mcdonald's salary on stupid shit.
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>>7009603
Cut off half my post, fuck.
I wanted somewhere to promote it, patreon seems like an alright place to do so.

>>7009604
Someone post that picture of the fur fucker with a child, guy was proud of the one time he had sex.
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Well I'm going to write about werehorses. Seems it's a recent kink women have been having.
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>>7009614
Thinking about it now it seems weird that stephanie meyer thought werwolves were the correct route with were horses as an option.

Fat sweaty manchildren are into sexy werewolves.
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>>7009607
The way I do it is I use Patreon as a hub for all the sites I post on, so I put the completed stories up on SOL and FA and then I put links to my Patreon at the end of the story telling people they can download free Ebooks and read stories that are in progress, not just because I want people to sub, but because the site layout is nice and they let me host Ebooks directly on the page.

I wouldn't say Patreon is good for promotion exactly, not unless you have an established community there already, but it's certainly where you want readers to ultimately end up.
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>>7009620
Thanks for the explanation Snekguy, I might have to start signing up to host sites then.

Literotica, hentai foundry and furfinity seem like the place to go.
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>>7009623
Oh yeah I tried Hentai Foundry, they get a lot of traffic but their text entry form for uploading stories is horrible and blitzes all of your formatting.
It's some security thing to do with BBCode.

Maybe you'd have better luck than me, I don't know, but when I try to paste text it just butchers it.

Definitely try StoriesOnline.net too that's where I've had the most luck. My stories are currently holding the 8, 10 and 21 spots in their top 50, and they're all at about 4000 downloads now, the webmaster is a bro too.
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>>7009632
I didn't know stories online existed.

Do you post the full stories there or just smaller ones?
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>>7009639
I post all my stories there, they're very good about formatting and chaptering, there's an approval process but it's very quick and someone actually goes through your text and formats it for you.
Their tag system is a bit of a pain, so just read through them carefully and make sure you're happy with the tags before you post the story.
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>>7009644
Awesome, what's the average length of your stories?
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>>7009648
I'm writing my fifth story right now.
It varies but as I write more they tend to get longer, the last one I wrote was 35,000, the one I'm working on right now is 13,500 so far.
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>>7009632
literotica?

it's basically monstergirl stuff so you could try 'touch the fluffy tail'
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>>7009655
Nah I've been trying to make an account there but the account creation codes they send me don't work and their webmaster doesn't respond to my emails.
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Patreon is good if you want to start a youtube career but I doubt anyone starting fresh will have the chance to make money of out of it.
Unless it's a very unique theme.
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>>7001182
I've found this also true. If what you're saying takes more than a breath, the sentence is too long. I was constantly doing mental edits like swapping commas for full periods, & occasionally semicolons; anything to break up whole-paragraph single-sentences.
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>>7009678
Yeah I super regret not getting into it as a teenager, I had the opportunity too but never uploaded my videos out of fear they sucked.

Hundreds of hours I've spent being hilarious on skype that could be earning me revenue money right now.
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>>7009683
Ok, I've been trying to improve that with my latest Splashdown updates, I hope the difference is noticeable.
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>>7008635
Come on, don't run away. Finish the fight.
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Literotica is easily the best place if you want to see your story get tons of traffic. Just beware if you want to post anything darker be very careful with your wording it seems. Take for example I have a story were a woman has sex with a zombie, approved. My galaxy of terror story has a woman having nonconsentual sex with a giant worm, rejected maybe because I used the word rape at some point?

Xnxx has a story section that is actually quite active that I have been submitting my stories too. Not a bad place to get your writing out and they will let you post anything but it takes weeks for them to publish it on their site.

Hentai factory can't even hold a candle to the other two in terms of raw traffic. For example I have one story hitting the 10k view mark on xnxx whIle at HF it hasn't even seen 200 yet.

Stories online needs a subscription to get the most from it... so that won't work for some people like myself. What annoys me about this is that they are also putting up barriers for potential viewers... so that's bad if you are looking to get your story out there.

Tumblr, ugh maybe when the moons align you MIGHT get the odd like on your work... mostly just lots of follows from porn bots. It's best to just just use that place and throw a link to another site for your story so you redirect any possibe traffic to a place where they can rate it and comment.
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>>7008529
>>7008532
Still not committing to writing anything, but if I do, do you have any preference of chapter for the marine(s)? I'm thinking Blood Angels would be a solid choice since they're supposed to be the most handsome.
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>>7009838
>My galaxy of terror story
Tell me you put it up somewhere else?
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How do I write stuff with the characters immobilised and being penetrated by a machine?

Like (but not exactly the same as) pic related.
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>>7010017

Giant worm humping, large insertion, impregnation and birthing are invloved in the story.

http://pastebin.com/xy4n6cNM

Pretty sure I already linked it here or maybe that thread died.
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>>7010061
I've not been keeping up with the threads much lately, but this looks like my sort of thing just from the tags.
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>>7010061
Is English your first language?
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>>7010109

Oh man, that is easily the worst question I can see being a writer...
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>>7010159
Tell me about it. Back in the /tg/ days one of my readers was convinced English was my second language, but in reality that's what my Masters is in.
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>>7010163

English is my main language... Yet all of my writing ability has come purely from trail and error since I didn't even complete high school
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>>7010168
Ah, okay then. I didn't mean it against you, it's just that the sentences in >>7010061 occasionally get a bit rambly, and there's a few too many adjectives in odd places.

Seems similar to how one of my friends writes, and English is his second language (he's Indonesian, they don't have tenses).
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>>7010171
I think I know what you're talking about. I used to tutor students from Nepal from time to time and many had similar issues.
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Update, new content starts at:
“I'm not done...you're still not obeying me.”

There won't be an update tomorrow because it's my birthday and I have to see my family, but I'll have another update ready on Monday.

Splashdown:
http://pastebin.com/22tbp4XP
>light bondage, sweat, reverse rape, femdom, biting, licking, scratching, rough sex, oral, female ejaculation, hair pulling, tail job, kissing, orgasm denial, blowjob

Place your bets, who will win? The plucky human challenger in the blue corner, or the Femme Fatale from Boreal' in the red corner?

>>7009232
>>7009818
Objective: Survive
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>>7010182
my birthday is in 3 weeks
I hope I can finish my story by then
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>>7010182
>>7010288
Happy birthday!
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>>7009890
Blood angles or Adeptus Astartes. Either or. Also do you have a blog or something?
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>>7010353
Nope, nothing so fancy. I mostly just lurk around here these days.
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>>7004286
The latest chapter of Lock, Croc and Two Smoking Barrels is here.

Chapter 25: Croc is Dead
http://pastebin.com/n7wZkdNU

>Tags for the whole thing: croc-girl, sex, nudity, public nudity, exhibitionism, mild humiliation, cunnilingus, breath play, consensual, lovey-dovey, silly, violence, menace, animal death, Florida.

Plot's happening.
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>>7010182
>On occasion she would recruit an underling to pleasure her, but it was basically masturbatory, they did what they were told to do and they had no will of their own, lest their will offend their Alpha.
Seeing how some kind of physical disparity is basically guaranteed in any given pairing and yet going by Raz and her father Borealans do form family structures alongside the pack power system I'm wondering if the Borealan equivalent of true love is as much to do with the weaker party having a will that the other can never quite break as it is to do with liking each other's personalities and affection.
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>>7010353
time to repost blood angel serfs? time to repost blood angel serfs
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>>7010384
it might be more political marriage style too
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Is there any site like pastebin that keeps basic formatting (italics, etc)? Like a more anonymous Google docs, maybe?
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>>7010488
None that I know of. But making alternate Google accounts for docs is easy enough.
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>>7009498
> shit professionals have half-assed inspiring competent amateurs

This is how I started voice acting, & I'm way, WAY better than about 1/2 of the Street Fighter V cast. The sort you can do is try.
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>>7010706
Pretty sure that's how a lot of people get started.
>Everyone sucks. Fuck it, I'll do it myself but better.
or
>why is no one doing/making X? Well if they aren't going to do than I fucking will.
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>>7010711
Wanting to fix what Terry Goodkind did to fantasy is why I started writing.
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>>7010024
Start at the penetration point work your way backwards until you get to a decent starting point.
Describe how it feels to be opened up like that with a solid paragraph of description. cover things like warmth and depth, how it affects the rest of their bodies and finally how they feel about it (oh no I won't be able to get married, etc).

I'm writing a story with a similar theme atm as well.
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>>7010738
Terry goodkind is such an interesting beast, on the one hand his rape pits opened up teen literature to gratuitous ass and tits but on the other his conan the libertarian series set a low bar for political fiction.
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>>7010738
And I started because I got tired of waiting for a request to get filled.
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>>7010925
I restarted in earnest because I'm a talentless loser desperately trying to convince myself that there's at least one thing I'm good at, even if it's as marketable as herpes.

If I give up on writing, I might as well die.
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>>7010182
Happy birthday, anon! Well done as always!
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>>7010925
I started because I earn minimum wage and would like to bump that up slightly with a second income stream.

I also read the garden of evangelion as a 12 year old and erotic fiction has been my jam since.
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>>7010399
given how competitive/aggressive borealans seem to be I was wondering if there's a tendency for alphas to want to develop their subordinates both to make their pack stronger and to create the challengers to push themselves to get stronger in turn, making challenges and imposition of control a natural and desirable part of their interaction rather than purely confrontational

>>7010182
happy birthday, man
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>>7010925

I started because I always found the sex scenes in too many stories were just kind of vague and never got into all the really messy gooddness of a good fuck.

Plus I really enjoy the challange of writing and developing my own personal style.
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Guys, I have this terrible feeling that the real money is in gay porn but don't want to write gay porn.

What do?
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>>7011021
Don't write for money.
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>>7011021
This >>7011029. Also, the real money is actually in furry porn. That being said, see above.
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>>7011029
>>7011033
Money is the primary drive in my life anons.

Fur porn it is.
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>>7011037
>How far do you have to walk down that road before you see where it leads?
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>>7011037
You do know that there are many, significantly better ways to make money than writing internet pornography, right? Hell, become a drug dealer. You'll make more money for less time. It's probably more respectable, too.
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>>7011044
Anon please, we've all seen the pits of the abyss and refused to blink long ago.

>>7011046
I was once a drug dealer, there's really not a heap of money in it if you don't want to put yourself at risk of arrest or violence.
If they legalize pot in my country I'll open a store and sell the shit out of that, because I know retail and hydro but until then I want to make money doing something I enjoy.
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>>7011046
>Hell, become a drug dealer. You'll make more money for less time.
Haha, no you won't
the margins in drugs are dogshit, and the risks are pretty large. On the other hand, there's plenty of inexplicably wealthy perverts who will pay excessive sums for badly drawn fetish porn.
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>>7010182
non consent splashdown scenes are WAY hotter than mixed consent/ gfd pinwheel scenes

at least imo
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>>7010182
also, happy birthday!
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>>7010386
I want a story for this.
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How the fuck do i describe cat ears?

Seriously, do they have two sets of ears or do they replace the ears on the side of their head with cat ones on top?
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>>7011237
or they get long fuzzy elf / cat ears
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>>7011249
Yeah I'm probably gonna go with elf ears instead, easier to draw for the cover artwork anyway.
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>>7011237
Two sets of ears is always dumb.

coming out the sides of the top half of the head works reasonably well both in creating a distinctive, recognizable catlike silhouette while also making sense as to where the hell the ear canal can go.
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>>7011267
>Two sets of ears is always dumb.
They're okay if you give regular humans an extra set of human ears where you put the extra set of cat ears on the cat people.
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>>7011267
No. It's still dumb. Ears should face forward or forward and to the sides, not down.
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>>7011478
yeah, facing down is dumb. placement is okay though.
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>>7011267
>Some physical quirk is dumb
Most are, until you apply some logic to it.
I mean, you can argue for or against something being efficient, but in the end it doesn't change the fact that it still exists.

In my homebrew, rabbit-people have two sets of ears, but they're practically deaf with their normal ones since they're used to only using their rabbit ears.

I mean, when you start applying logic to animal-people or monster girls it all just falls apart. Like, why would cat-people even exist?
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>>7011665
>Like, why would cat-people even exist?
Convergent evolution from a feline ancestor!

>>7010332
>>7010931
>>7010966
>>7011138
Thanks peeps!
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>>7011237
Whatever you want. Outside of hard sci-fi, applying real biological limits on fantasy characters is a waste of time.
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>>7011741
Hell, even the real world has evolution and hold overs that are dumb or badly designed.
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>>7011218
someday...
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>>7011803
If anon does that SoB x Marine story then bits of this might show up.
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>>7011681
>convergent evolution
>not ancient aliens
>not justifying the Ancient Egyptian obsession with cats and cat goddesses
You're no fun.
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>>7011815
Actually when I was trying to design a cat alien species my friend linked me this horrible Egyptian sphinx cat thing.
Look at this monster.
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>>7011829
Hairless cats are disgusting.
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>>7011829
>>7011830
Even I wouldn't fuck these things.
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>>7011832
Wait for this one to 404 or it won't be archived.
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