Spanking General: Civilized edition

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>>6768253
So fireball is apparently making a game (pic related). I don't know whether to get hype or just prepare for the inevitable cancellation.

>>6768284
Even if he cancels the project, I hope we can get at least some artwork produced for it. More Fireball666 is always good.

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>>6768284
>rpgmaker mv
Great, I donly know vx.

I should make a game once.

>>6768241
Sounds extremely complicated.

>>6768577
You’re a big guy.

>>6768770
Drop the baneposting already, it was never funny.

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>>6768577
Yeah, I think that's what stopped anyone from doing any modifications.

I did try to make the guide understandable enough that it wouldn't be too intimidating, though the first impression upon seeing S-Expressions might have killed that.

>>6768792
Was getting butthurt part of your plan?

I actually wrote a game myself, based on the old spanking quizzes on former Quizilla that could determine your (or someone elses) fate. It's a text only game, but it has a quiz-creator to create extra quizzes of your own, which you can share.

It's at https://github.com/0rny/Spanking-Quiz/releases the source zip includes the exe.

>Q23978152: The Ungrounded Calculator
>Do you have waaaaaaay to much to do to be grounded? Would you prefer a spanking instead? Great! I've got the perfect quiz for you. This calculator will determine what you should be spanked with, what position you should hold, and what you should wear during your spanking and subsequent corner time. If you don't like your result, feel free to remain grounded.
>
>How long have you been grounded for? Or, how many days worth of detentions do you have?
>What did you do to get in trouble?
>How angry is the person who grounded you? (Or assigned your detentions)
>Results:
>30 strokes of the cane on your bare bottom, with your hands on your ankles. You must strip naked for this spanking.
> Afterwards, go to the front yard and grab your ankles for one hour, with your butt facing the street. If anyone asks, tell them what you're being punished for. And yes, you will be out there naked.

>>6770119
Looks like a troll game to be honest.

>>6770129
Don't you run a VM just to play any of these games?

Most games I see are about spanking others, while I like being spanked more.

>>6770140
>while I like being spanked more
Well, Potion Wars is for you.

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Can't we talk about which fictional characters/races we'd like to spank/get spanked by?

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>>6770220
Tengus. Elves. All long-lived arrogant races made of females.

>>6770220
Elves are for spanking.

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>>6768792
Someone get this hothead' outta' here!

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>>6770220
Elves.

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>>6770220
Elves. I'll never thank the Anon who did that enough.

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Clearly enjoying it too much for it to be a punishment.

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>>6771089
Who's Lucy?

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Anyone know if that guy plans to make more Neptunia?

>mfw there's that Kancolle pool on Danbooru in which an admiral trolls the shipgirl by basically telling them to not do X because they'll get spanked otherwise
>they always do it anyway because they hate him
>it always backfires
>not only he get the satisfaction of trolling them but it's also heavily suggested he spanks them
>one stone two birds

>>6772004
>not linking the pool

>>6772187
Pool number 9231.
I won't put a direct link. I don't want to get in trouble, and also because there's no real spanking, just talks.

>>6770220
Anyone with a tail. Catgirls and co. react to grabbing their tails with arousal or fear, both of which would do.

As a guy who wishes for more wishes, doppelganger would also do nicely for just going down the list of all female characters who annoy me.

>>6772296
So this is the kind of people that enjoy The Lusty Argonian Maid.

>>6770887
>Barky doing god's work again after being bullied off Aotk
Thank god for Pixiv.

>>6772847
>after being bullied off Aotk

What happened?

>>6772955
I'm sure RobM is to blame again. He already harassed people on the mediaspk imageboard.

>>6773097
Details or gtfo.

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>>6773298
It was a dark and stormy night. All the members where in the crypt, busy sacrificing babies and drinking virgin blood, when Werid said "Wait a minute, Barky isn't here with us! He doesn't act like an edgy retard like the rest of us! He doesn't care about us, he thinks he's superior!".
So Robm stopped drinking blood directly from the virgin he was sacrifying, and swore to make Barky's life hell by harassing him constantly until he accepted to sacrifice a baby and suck Ai's cock.

Guaranteed 100% true.

>>6772456
Monmusu is as far as i go on the furry scale.

Non-standard sexual arousal (by touching wings, tails, ears, etc) is one of my biggest fetishes. Maybe bigger than spanking, because at least spanking is realistically possible.

>>6771660
i'll do more nep eventually but frankly i'm not really a fan of the franchise. i've never played the games and only seen a bit of the anime. i did those pics because someone indirectly requested it 2 threads ago, and the scenario is explicitly mentioned in the games apparently, and rom and ram are cute, and i felt like it. maybe i can look into the games or watch the anime and that will inspire me. i won't become "that guy who draws nep spanking," although i don't have an aversion to drawing it every now and then.

>>6773772
>Non-standard sexual arousal (by touching wings, tails, ears, etc) is one of my biggest fetishes.

i think you're describing sensation play.

>>6773861
Oh. Well, thanks for the drawings anyway.

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requesting edit

>>6773861
I mean specifically things humans don't actually have, such as wings, tails, horns, long ears.

>>6773861
Can you draw Misty or Roxanne getting Vine Whipped by any grass-type?

>Critical hit! It's super effective!

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>>6774306
That jizz covering her butt makes it too hard to edit, so I pass, sorry.

>>6773861
If that's how you feel, there's no problem. It's better if you do what you enjoy, after all.
Plus it's also better if you know who you're actually drawing. I wouldn't suggest visiting the genral on /vg/, through. They're constantly fighting about stupid stuff. Last time I checked it, they were all accusing each others of samefagging because someone said the English voices were good.

>>6774583
>They're constantly fighting about stupid stuff.

That reminds me of something but I'm not sure what.

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>>6774662
I guess it's something common to all Anonymous.

So how many of you guys are already VIP donators at Aotk?

>>6774729
>giving money to that shithole

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>>6774729
I became one ages ago when I donated for DiaperedAnime, but I haven't really done anything there in ages because I haven't really liked either place much since their revival.

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>>6774912
Doesn't it hurts like hell to pinch wings like that?

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So I found that :
http://chross.blogt.ch/forum/read.php?10,11068

A list of all the moments in the Wheel of Time were spanking is mentioned.

>>6774950
You should play the game... It's a pretty good one.
It's Bravely Default, and it might clear your question up a little.

>>6774992
I don't really want to play a game where the girls are all cute. I always end up wanting to spank them all.

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>>6774306
This is one of my first attempts to do something like this.

>>6775026
Did your slap liquify her ass?

>>6775026
What a nasty-looking bedsore.

>>6775027
I suppose it doesn't matter with what kind of liquid a bottom is wet before a spanking.

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>>6775035
Does the spanking hurts more if the girl's ass is wet?

>>6775038
certainly, it conducts better.

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>>6775041
I developed a new interest : spanking at the pool.

>>6774950
>>6774992
I have played that game. Trust me, she deserves it, whether or not it hurts like hell.

Anyway, translate guy here looking for the guy(s) who help me with my wonky japanese. I need your help with an upcoming project of mine, I translated 1-2 shimeji doujins. Last time I posted translations, one morron grabbed all the unpolished ones and slapped them on aotk, without crediting the orginal artist or humble me. Also I don't have shimeji's permission to publish it yet. Therefore I'll link the a complete pdf once I'm done, if I get his permission. But since some of you increase the quality of my translations/language by a significant amount, I'd like to email/like those people the wip to give me feedback, if they are up for it.

So who wants to help me out?

>>6775038
yes, though if you want to really raise the sting use skin lotion.

but, if you do use lotion they are more resistant to bruising.

>>6775026

jesus

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>>6774306

>>6775186

thanks

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>>6775114
I can help you out if you'd like... I can possibly even do typesetting if you aren't up for it.

>>6774306
I didn't like the jizz there, so I got rid of it.

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[hype intensifies]

>>6774231
For a moment I thought that was a t-shirt.

I was thinking "Where would it ever be acceptable to wear something like that?" before I realized it was a picture of a drawing.

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>>6773298
Barky left a comment on his last pic saying " thanks for all the comments, the kind words, the not so kind words, the insults and the insults for not speak english properly. Thanks for all of that and Bye."
There's a comment by Robm asking if he'd been bullied, since there aren't any negative comments about his engrish anywhere on the site, but he didn't respond.

He might have been pm bullied by somebody, but since he closed his tumblr the same day with the same message, it's more probable that he was harassed on his twitter and decided to just go back to posting in japanese.

>>6776015
aww yeah

>>6777357
He hasn't closed his twitter tho.

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hmm

>>6777581
shit, I meant tumblr obviously. He closed his tumblr. I didn't even know he has a twitter.

I'm not cut out for social media and all these fucking made up bird noises.

>>6779032
barkyhito.tumblr.com , but he hasn't post a thing in a while.

>>6777357
Given Robm's definition of bullying is "not licking someone's ass", it's obvious some poor sap who dared not to love Barky's broken Engrish will get b&.

>>6779317
His English is completely understandable. Being a dick for no reason is a good reason to get banned.

>>6779345
Hi RobM.

>>6779345
You read it here first, folks !
Being "understandable" means being "perfect" for aotk.

No wonder you have to much shit in your galleries with standards that low. You should always try to improve yourself instead of being satisfied.

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>>6777732
Is that Ellen Barker?

>>6777357
He's probably overreacting to someone correcting one of his many typos. I honestly wouldn't be surprised if that was the case.

Still, I'm surprised Barky cried so easily when ssccss and Fireball are around with worse English than him. The Lucky Star comic in particular was extremely difficult to understand.

>>6776015
At least Fireball isn't trying English. A bit of a shame, but hopefully someone will be able to translate it properly.

>>6775114
>I have played that game. Trust me, she deserves it, whether or not it hurts like hell.
I haven't. What's the story?

>>6775038
>maid+belt+panties
This hits all my fetishes.

Mandatory spanking picture.

>>6779357
Given that this thread is the home of one or two idiots who despise sscscc because he told them to fuck off, this reaction is, hilariously, understandable.

Besides, if you want actual broken English, go check Ducadimarte's pictures. She literally speaks in Polandballese.

>>6779407
>i-it's okay to be shit because someone else is shittier!
Seriously?

>>6779357
>you shouldn't be trying before you're perfect!

No wonder this thread has NO NEW CONTENT, asshole.

>>6779421
>things I never said
Yawn.
The aotk drones are becoming desperate in their attempt to maintain a hugbox.

>>6779421
Where were you 50 threads ago when I was trying to recruit writers for a VN?

>>6779448
he was probably licking barky's ass clean while shitting on everyone else

>>6779448
>Where were you when I was trying to get a bunch of people to do work for me

>>6779505
>he was probably licking barky's ass clean while shitting on everyone else
like a clockwork

>>6779448
Well I wrote the Kaguya story for the Touhou VN, but the whole thing was dropped.

>>6779535
It wasn't exactly dropped. I just got harassed, felt quite alone, and eventually lost the whole damn thing in a HDD failure.
I don't even know which version is the one put in OP. A sad affair, really.

By the way, I kinda liked what you wrote, even through finding which choice led to which part was a pain.

>>6779538
Not interested how fucking emo and alone you felt. If you can't commit to your own projects, how do you expect anyone else will?

>>6779544
Yep, just like >>6779478 said.

>>6779421
>No wonder this thread has NO NEW CONTENT
Let's do this.

Pick two characters, and I'll try to write a story about them.
But describe them a bit, I don't know every anime.

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Anyone has any idea who that girl is? She has a pretty fine ass.

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>>6779448
You can't really expect people to commit when they only have a slight urge to do something.

I also organized a project because it seemed like a lot of people were willing to get together to do something... When the project started for reals, it seemed like interest just fell through the floor because the initial "Fuck yeah! Let's make something awesome!" wore off. And honestly, while kinda discouraging, it's fine. It's not like anyone owes anyone else anything.

All it means is that I'll just slowly and leisurely hack on it in the background until something interests one of the originally interested people who likely still watch the project every once in a while with minor interest. Maybe someone will make something for it..! Maybe not though... There is never any guarantee either way.

There's no reason to force anyone to do anything (including myself) since it is just a hopeful volunteer project with no promises and no deadline. If it happens, it happens, but if it doesn't, there's no reason to get stressed out about it. The aim was for the project to be a fun thing to do with you /d/eviants, so if that stops being the case--I think we're doing it wrong.

>>6779768
>Fate
Hnnnnnngmuhdick

Out of curiosity, what project are you referring to? To be honest, we had a lot of them, and I think my VN was tied to the spankingsim for the numbers of people involved.

>>6779446
The irony.

>>6779446
>aotk drones
Complains the samefag who starts bitching about his favorite boogeyman and the site that once touched him in the badplace every fucking thread

you only bring up the site each time so you can derail the thread with your stalker fetish for robm, every single time
>inb4 denails about being samefag poster when every anon here knows you are
quick, make 5 more posts pretending to be different people

>>6779421
we can but hope

>>6779917
Typical drone, it tries to stir up shit again by answering a five hours old post. Truly pathetic.
>inb4 denails
What's a denail?

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>>6779757
Bismarck from Kancolle. See >>6774726.

>>6779843
>>6779917
>please notice me senpai
Meanwhile who's whining and not contributing? Oh, right. You.

>>6779768
People are quick to whine about the lack of contents, but ask them to help and you're left alone. It's always been like that, it's easier to cry than to do things yourself.
In the end, if you want something, you have to do it yourself and not give a fuck what other people think, because they'll always know better but the second you ask them to help, they'll disappear.

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>>6779768
I don't even know if I can post all the Fate pictures that I have, since she's not really legal.

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>>6779801
Hell's Angel.

>>6779962
I think that's because putting your own work out there suddenly saddles you with a lot more expectation than just keeping it to yourself. That's probably enough to stifle the desire to help for a lot of people.

Though, I don't think they are completely disinterested after that. They probably would be less reluctant to help with a less uncertain plan that all of the projects so far have had.

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>>6779993
Ha. That one. The one I cannot help with.
Have this as some kind of underwhelming consolation prize.

>>6779962
>not posting the same fucking pictures again and again = not contributing
There's a limit for much I can fap to old Keyneqq, Su, or even Fireball pictures.

>>6779962
Hey I know this it's a game but I wonder if Kancolle got an adaptation just like Kantaicollection if so please tell me

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>>6780297
>There's a limit for much I can fap
Weak.

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>>6780297
Scrub.
It's been years and I can still fap to Erika's pictures.
>that round ass
>these childish panties
>that scared expression on her face

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So I was wondering why people stopped posting spanking pictures on Twitter.

Turns out I'm an egotistical asshole and that Japan suffered a lot of earthquakes.

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So what's your favourite spanking scenario? I find myself enjoying the most basic of the basic, mother/daughter discipline punishments the best. I have a pretty varied taste, though.

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>>6781037
The one that borders on blackmails, where the spankee doesn't want to get spanked but is forced to submit.
Scenarii where the spanker and the spankee have the same ranks are interesting.

However, I can't stand stories where the spanker enjoys the situation and mocks the spankee. Can't stand it when the spankee is a masochist either. It has to be discipline.

>>6779370
Technically she causes armageddon, sounds like a reason for a spanking for me.

Anyway, started to edit one of shimeji's doujin's (the Aya/Youmu one) and need somebody to check my english/translation.Just send me an Email to [email protected] and I'll give you a link and the details.

>>6781125
I think you know my adress. I won't typeset but I can offer limited typesetting.

>>6780721
Must be nice to be able to just make porn for yourself.
>My OS is acting up, I know, I'll just draw her as an antropomorphic lady being spanked for it!

>>6781037
>scenarios
Two girls at the same time, side-by-side.

Enthusiastic consent, if done well.

Role reversal.

"i'm glad that the punishment is over- what do you mean it was just the warmup"

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>>6781369
>Two girls at the same time, side-by-side.
Like pic related?

>>6781037
I think usually my favorite scenario involves the dominant party getting way into 'discipline' and ends up going full lezdom on the sub. The spanker gets corrupted by her own lust, and the receiver is somewhat embarrassed to be into it as well.

Schoolgirl bullies/discipline are probably my favorite genre. I blame /u/ for not liking males spanking females.

>>6782275
Precisely. I only managed to do that once in my entire life and it was wonderful.

The draw here is hard to convey in the picture, but it's about one spankee having to listen to another squealing and being hit, making her viciously uncomfortable.

Also, 1+1 = 2.

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>>6782318
Do you mean that as in bullies being disciplined or the other way round?

Because I really like content that's completely unfair, like someone being punished for something she didn't do, and a bully spanking her victim sounds incredibly cool and right-on.

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>>6782336
>a bully spanking her victim
Now this is something I'd like to see.

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>>6768284
I though he was already working on one.

>>6782509
That's what it looked like, but it was never finished. Same thing with that storybook project of his. That's why I'm a bit concerned about the game he's currently making.

>>6782342

I mean, there are some elements of something a school bully would do, like leaving plainly obvious red marks before swimming practice, or blackmail, etc.

But I really want a mean girls-style gaggle doing that shit, and then most likely having the tables turned on them, Great Teacher Onizuka style.


If I ever get around to developing the neutron star game, I will definitely do that.

>>6782815
I'd rather have a boy in love with a girl but too young to understand that, so he bullies and spank her without noticing he's making her hate him.

>>6782336
Either bullies picking on their victims (who they can't admit to liking), or girls getting "disciplined", with the pretense quickly wearing thin.

I think I end up liking it when a bully takes opportunities to abuse her victim just out of sight of her friends, only for the bully to get caught by a teacher (who lusts for justice as much as she does young girls).

>>6783435
>who lusts for justice as much as she does young girls
SUCH A LUST
WHO?

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>>6784053
These are loose shackles. And her nipples are erects too, therefore she's enjoying it.

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>>6777732
Guess who's getting popular?

>>6783435
I like it when the bully lets her victim spank her when no one sees it, but has to keep her tough girl act in school, so she knows she deserves the cane next time she is coerced into giving her an atomic wedgie.

>>6784576
>wedgies
>spankings

I have no idea how I developed this fetish, but it's mine as well.

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>>6784906
they're basically both just butt + pain + humiliation, so it's not a surprise that a lot of spankos like wedgies

>>6784576
How's that power dynamic supposed to work?

I should really clean my code from all hardcoded mentions of spanking or anything else erotic, so that I can actually be able to ask on the bigger webs what's the issue here without having to explain that it's for a specific fetish hentai game.

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>>6785582
>Ctrl+F "spanking"
>select "replace all"
>replace "spanking" by "cuddle"
>replace "spank" by "hug"
>replace "whip" by "love"
>replace "cry" by "purrs"

>>6785694
"You'll need a harsh cuddling to get you back on the right path, young lady! A normal cuddling won't do today, therefore I'll be using this love to hug and firmely discipline you today! Now lift your skirt and bend over!", he commaned, swinging the love as he spoke. "Oh no, not the love please! Anything but the love!", she protested, allready purring. But her fate was decided. As she finally bend over her desk, she remebered the last time she was hugged that much. Sitting won't be an option for quite a while...

>>6785739
I'm so hard right now.

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>>6785739
I'm hard right now. I'd cuddle her. Before or after spanking her.

>>6785694
Given how much spanking is forced, it will not sound any better out of context.


>>6785739
> "Oh no, not the love please! Anything but the love!", she protested, allready purring.

And case in point

>>6785752
that dude's wrist is broken

>>6785792
She's a vampire so it takes a lot of effort to actually be able to spank her.

Also, he's a vampire so it's okay.

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>>6785800
If they're both vampires, does it cancel her resilience?

Does that mean that in order to spank a vampire, you'd have to become one yourself?

>>6785778
At least they won't be able to figure out which magical realm you're from.

>>6785816
>If they're both vampires, does it cancel her resilience?
I think it just takes a lot of effort out of anyone to be able to make her red, given that she isn't supposed to have a bloodstream.


They mutually control each other to some degree, which is why she's an underage girl and a shadow of her former self rather than the full-strength queen of all monsters.

But I'm making too many excuses for some guy on pixiv not drawing a hand on an arm correctly.

>Does that mean that in order to spank a vampire, you'd have to become one yourself?

Araragi's standard approach to combat with almost every supernatural creature seems to get wrecked until the enemy gives up, but it's a character trait and also all other supernatural creatures being stronger than he is.

> At least they won't be able to figure out which magical realm you're from.

They'd understand that it's a magical realm and get the wrong impression which one, which i doubt is better.

>>6785494
The bully (who likely follows the lead of another bully) bullies her victim, then feels really guilty as it conflicts with her morals. She visits her victim at home to apologize, but also offers to be punished, to relieve her guilt, to let the victim get even with her and perhaps be forgiven. She also says she can't stop bullying her, as she doesn't want to ruin her image at school, so she makes a promise that she will make up for all the past and future transgressions. They then hug afterwards and might become friends even. For the victim it also means some peace of mind, as next time she gets bullied by her it doesn't feel so mean, so it feels more like she doing a play, which is still painful and humiliating but not hateful.

Well, let see if I can write a short story about it:
Samantha is sitting at home, thinking back on her day on what she did. "This time I went to far" she thought. "Yes, Jaiden told me to make that nerd girl Hannah cry, or she'd tell Josh I stole his gym shorts right before the big game yesterday." Sam sniffed the shorts while she recollected "Good thing coach makes them play in boxers if they forget their shorts, heheh. He's so dreamy in them" and puts the shorts back into the pocket of her jeans. Realizing that distractions won't solve her guilt, she took a cold shower, then got dressed again. She's now only wearing a thong, her jeans and a t-shirt. "Do I feel a bit better about myself now? Doesn't seem like it." she sighed "I'll better go apologize to her, but I have to make her see that I'm really sorry".

It was a very hot summer afternoon, it must be 100 degrees(38 °C) outside. Hannah lives about 3 miles away. But on she went to see her walking barefoot. Samantha shrieked a bit as her feet landed on the hot asphalt where the sun shines. She went on for 2 miles while having plenty of shaded areas to walk on, stopping only to drink at a couple free drinking fountains as she didn't bring her wallet with her.

>>6786117
The last mile had almost no shade in it, it felt like her feet were cooking. Finally she arrived at her house, only to be met with a gravel path to the door. The gravel is luckily not hot, but hurts like hell after having burned her feet like that on the ways over. Sam grits her teeth as she walks this path. She rang the doorbell, nothing seems to happen. Sam then feared "What if she isn't home? Then I have to go all the way back and have done this all for nothing as she wouldn't know I did it." She shook her head "At least I deserve it, after what I did to her this is nothing.". Sam rang the door again. Hannah opened the door, jumping a few feet back in shock, exclaiming "W-What are you doing here! Don't tell me you haven't hurt me enough!". Sam expressed that she is deeply sorry and want to make it up with her. Hannah fearfully replied "This is a trick right? You're going to tie me up and bully me all day long now there is nobody around to keep watch?". Sam answered "The last time you ended up sobbing in tears, which is entirely my fault, I went too far. It broke me up inside and I feel I treated you unfairly. I know words alone don't cut it anymore, I caused you much pain and I shouldn't get away with it without at least feeling the same." Sam pointed at the soles of her feet, which look welted and badly burnt. "What happened to you shoes?" Hannah asked. "I left without them, to show proper repentance, can I come in.".

"I guess you must be serious then, want something to drink? I'm having soda." Hannah asked. "Water is fine, I deserve no more" Sam replied. After drinking the water on the couch, Hannah smiled "I can't believe that you would actually care about how I must feel. I guess I might be able to forgive you after a while. This means you'll stop bullying me right?". "No, I'm sorry I can't" said Sam. Hannah became scared again and gasped. "If I stop bullying then Jaiden won't like it and I have a reputation to maintain." Sam replied.

>>6786186
"What! You can't!" Hannah shouted. "I understand that this must come to you as a shock, but I can try making it less hard on you by throwing some fake punches, though the slaps in the face and the wedgies won't be less hard on you. I hope you can forgive me for what I did and what I'm going to do to you in the future.". Hannah yelled "And I have to be fine with this? I just have to suck it up and let me be bullied all the time? I don't know how much I could take.". "If it's any consolation it won't be done with hate, physical pain is something temporary while it can hurt a long time, it doesn't describe the psychological pain that comes with it, I hope that that will be less for you now, now you know it's mostly an act. I must look like a horrible person." Sam replied. Hanna nods. "Say, speaking about physical pain..." Sam continued. Hannah shrieked again. "I'll promise that whatever I did or will do to you, I'll let you do to me if possible, or an alternative punishment otherwise, as long as they don't find out at school. You get to get even with me, and I'll be able to live with myself." Samantha answered looking contrite.

"Ok, what do we start with then?" said Hannah grinning. "Let's slap my face first" Sam replied. Hannah recalled that when the bullying started it were only face slaps and the occasionally punch in the gut. Sam explained the best technique and posture to slap someone in the face as hard as possible while leaving a nice hand print. "Ready?" Sam asked with a heavy heart. *SLAP* Hannah slaps Sam's face hard leaving a nice print on the left side of Sam's face. Sam grits her teeth. *SLAP* Using an different pose Hannah slapped the right side. "Ow!" Sam yelled in pain. This continued until each cheek had five slaps.

To be continued tomorrow.

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>>6785739
that's hilarious.

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I want to spank an elf.

>>6786117
Still sounds off to me. I'm familiar with dominant masochists (i order you to whip me because it pleases me sexually) but discipline kinda implies power.

Female bullies can get pretty nasty. Doing shit that they generally do, then asking her victim for a punishment in return, then doing the same thing again tomorrow? Sounds like some sort of DID.

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It's Otogawa's birthday. Post spanking pictures.

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>>6787157
Here, two Kancolle girls.

>>6787157
>It's Otogawa's birthday.

Are you an Internet stalker?

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>>6787162
No, I'm a medium-strength weeabo who search daily for spanking pictures on Pixiv and know what "オトガワさん(user/8586181)のお誕生日" means.

Keep the pictures coming.

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>>6787172

do you know what happened to this board:
http://board.sweetnote.com/sentinel/
It is down since some weeks ago. Do you know a similar one?

>>6787071
What about true switches then? Besides follower bullies are lower in the hierarchy, in a desperate attempt to belong with a group, proving their worth or even to prevent being bullied themselves. And there are even bullies that bully because they love their victim to get attention from them. But yes, if they see themselves as equals then there isn't really a power difference.

But discipline among friends can be powerless too, just the fact of trusting someone with your discipline because it makes you feel better. For a friend to be asked out to help with your much needed discipline, would be like a friend giving a backrub because you have a sore back, or having a talk when they're down. It doesn't feel like power then, but more like having helped someone in need.

>>6787305
It's gone, with 3000+ of high quality spanking pictures lost from the Internet. Some of the pictures are on animeotk, but most of them are totally gone for now (of course they exist on several private HDs).

How hard and costly would be to setup a booru for spanking pictures?

>>6786930
i want to be an elf and get spanked, what a coincidence

>>6787770
That's interesting, I'm actually an elf gril and get spankings every day.

>>6787775
by Santa?

>>6787776
By qt knights. :3

>>6787775
wow, so lucky... is it as fantastic as it would seem?

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I'm surprised there's not a lot more spanking fanfictions. Most, if not all stories I saw were with Original Character Donut Steel.

>>6788479
Writing fanfics is ultra cringy tbqh. They're never good either.

>>6788495
Not with that attitude, young boy.

>>6788497
You mean to say if you just pretend they aren't shit long enough, you'll start to like them? I'd rather not try.

>>6788495
fanfics is a cringe term in general, if you want it to be taken somewhat seriously at least call it something like erotic literature or something

>>6787439
How about Gelbooru?

>>6788712
Gelbooru just has the "spanking" and "spanked" tags. It would be very beneficial to at least be able to sort by position and other such stuff.

Also, lots of western art here.

>>6788548
Divine Comedy is a Bible fanfiction.

Claiming that fanfics are never good, period, can only be done out of this kind of authoritarian purism that the authorial intent is to Never Be Sullied.

>>6786293
Sam's face was really red and painful. After getting a few punches to the gut, it's time for a wedgie. "W-Wedgie?" Hannah asked. Sam nods. "Like that stunt you pulled on me today, I was truly mortified, I thought back when you pushed me out of the locker room last week wearing only panties would be the worst in terms of humiliation, and you held the door closed just when the guys passed by" Hannah said. "But after today I don't know if I'm able to show my face again in school. You pulled down my pants and when I tried to grab it you pulled up my t-shirt over my head, exposing me to the entire class, then you gave me an atomic wedgie and twisted my nipples while somehow holding my arms back. " Hannah said. "Well to make it easy on you I'll just remove my t-shirt and jeans and I won't struggle." Sam started to remove her t-shirt revealing her large breasts. Hannah gasped. Hannah has never seen her breasts as she always wears her bra in the the locker room, while Hannah has rather small breasts that don't need a bra. "Like what you see? Don't worry I won't tell." Sam said. Then her jeans came off revealing her thong.

Hannah pulled up Sam's thong and as she pulled it over her head, the thong snapped apart. Sam shrieked, the friction of the thong snapping hurt both her vagina and anus. Sam drops to her knees hold her vagina in pain. "Are you ok?" Hannah asked? "I will manage, give me a minute" Sam replied. Hannah didn't wait and twisted her nipples like she did to her. "Ow! Owwie. But quite classy hitting your opponent when they're down, I appreciate that. Though I wonder if I'm a bad influence on you, I don't want you to end up a bully like me. I admire your innocence." Sam said. "Except, all this is not that humiliating for you as it's just you and me" Hannah explained. "As I promised, I'll let you do an alternative punishment. You know what, I'll let you treat me as a little kid and be spanked like one.That should be both painful and humiliating"said Sam

>>6788479
I'm not. Spanking is difficult to write about, it's a monotonous process and you quickly run out of synonyms; plus it's pretty predictable in itself. For the purpose of a character study, an elaborate bdsm session achieves a better effect and that is what most people do.

>>6788966
<Most autistic post of the thread award.

>>6788984
The beauty of calling the opponent an autist, a cuck, or proclaiming your support for Trump is that you directly admit that you lost the argument and have nothing to contribute.

>>6789002
Not to mention the failed greentext. Only a real idiot can fuck that up.

>>6789002
>>6789003
cool samefagging, bleigh

>>6773861
Learn better butt anatomy

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>>6788970
I wonder what you can do to break the monotony?

I've always thought writing about the emotional states during the spanking would be a good way to break out of the repetition, though it almost seems like a formula.

>>6789330
>everyone I don't like is the same guy
Pathetic as usual.

>>6788966
Divine Comedy is a CROSS-OVER fanfiction, since the author mixes two popular series of his time: The Bible and pagan mythology.

Now, you just need to notice that it's also a SELF-INSERT fanfic for the realization that the cringe is very old indeed. At least Dante didn't have the action happening in a High-School.

>>6786117
>>6786186
>>6786293
>>6788969
I like the idea behind this, moar?

>>6789716
You failed to notice he also put in Hell people he didn't like.
So cringy.

>>6789798
Yes, I'm still writing it. The story got longer than I expected, and it also takes some time to write, as it is the first time I write something like this. It seems best to write it when I get in the mood (and not get out the mood). I'm thinking of uploading it somewhere when I finish it.

>>6789969
there was no argument

>>6790073
>j-just believe me!

>>6790082
"more than one post disagrees with me therefore they are the same person" isn't an argument

>>6789003
>LITERALLY being this new

>>6790237
try again, bleigh

>>6790237
>wasting your time with a moron
Just post spanking, don't feed it attention.

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>>6768486

>>6790275
>mooom bad man disagrees with me!!

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Carrying the girl to the chair sounds fun.

>>6791569
Genuinely never thought of doing that before, also solves the think of should the spanker pull down the spankee's underwear to show control, or should the spankee do it to show obedience.

>>6789944
Not them, but seconding that it was appreciated

>VN features a ghost of your aunt or something to that extent
>extremely rude and assertive, but also instantly crumbles under pressure from men due to hardcore ingrained "women must be submissive to men" upbringing
>ghosts are capable of turning themselves tangible to an extent
>combination of the two means if you tell her she needs to be punished she will actively keep herself solid so that you can do it

>ask dev what will happen if you are playing as a girl
>naturally, your character will get spanked instead


can't wait until it actually comes out

>>6788969
"A spanking? I haven't had those since I was a kid" Hannah said. "Me neither. Though I remember getting many of them." Sam replied. Hannah sniffs her nose. "I would like to put you over my knee but you smell. I should wash you first." Hannah said. "You want to wash me? Sure go ahead." Sam said. Sam followed Hannah to the bath and got in. Sam sat down while Hannah sat next to the bath, with a shower head in hand, making Sam wet first. Then Hannah took some shampoo and scrubbed in her hair and washed it out again. Next she took some liquid soap and started to soap up Sam's body gently with her hands then washed it off. "That a nice looking bush you have there. If you're going to be spanked like a little kid you should look like one. Go sit on the edge." Hannah said. Sam complied and sat on the edge of the bath. Hannah took out her razor and shaved off Sam's pubes. "I can't remember when I last looked like that." Sam said.

"Well I suppose it's time now." Hannah said. Sam came out of the bath while Hannah took a towel and dried Sam's hair. Then Hannah sat down and draped the towel over her lap. "You can get over my lap now" Hannah said. Hannah remembered that spanking hurt much more when still wet. Sam then lied down over her lap. "Wow, this sure brings backs memories." Sam said. "Well, then I hope this will bring back more." Hannah said and gave her a slap on Sam's wet butt. Sam gasped a little, it certainly hurt a bit more than she expected, though it wasn't that bad. *SLAP* "Ow" Sam said. This certainly did hurt as Hannah slapped with full force. A volley of five slaps followed. Sam pressed her lips together while the spanking continued. Sam thought back on her promise. /Did I really sign up for this? What kind of bully lets their victim punish them actually? Though it's a small price to pay to put my conscience to rest./ Sam thought. After twenty slaps the pace picked up. Thirty more slaps followed. "Ow Ow Ow..." Sam said during the last fifteen slaps.

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>>6791916
What's this now?

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>>6792702
A new fad where we describe how our dream video game will be like.
>witches battle
>with you as a only wizard (should you pick a male character)
>game basically play like Sacrifice but with an investigation side to it
>you have to find a witch, kill her, and follow her ghost back to her lair
>then you have to ruin her lair
>it takes her powers away from her, and make her a simple human
>the witches battle rules state that once you're defeated, you become the other party's servant
>so each time you defeat another witch, you get to spank her anytime you want
>you're pretty much the nicest one around, if you're defeated, the game over screen explains that your soul is ripped from your body is used to give life to a creature that will fight for the witch that killed you
>also, pretty much all witches have horrible personality
>motivating you into beating some sense into them and break their arrogance
>there's still that little bratty rich witch that won't yield
>while others will surrender as soon as you start ruining their lair

>>6792702
>>6792727
It's a VN that's in active development by people I know, about seducing monster girls (such as a bipolar ghost, shitposting skeleton, chuuni dullahan, etc) to find a marriage candidate. There are multiple playable demos.

I'm trying to avoid mentioning it by name or directly linking to the developers, because it's too early for it to have exposure and none of the demos have spanking in them.

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>>6792770
>chuuni dullahan
What a pleonasm.

>>6792770
Bleigh is making a game again?

>>6792834
Is that the guy who made a vn with MMD pictures? No, this one has actual artists

>>6794459
Deviantart has "artists" too. I don't feel confident.

>>6792770
Then fuck off with your blogging.

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>>6779981

>>6794472
>Deviantart has "artists" too.
So does Pixiv.

>>6792770
>hey guys, there's this awesome game I know
>but I'm not going to tell you where to find out, I'm not going to post a screenshot :)
>lol
I concur with >>6794511 for once. Fuck off unless you have something tangible to post.

>>6789531

Good smut is almost nothing but buildup and characterisation, that's just how writing works. Your goal is to make the reader empathise with the character's arousal - descriptions of sex acts are the absolute bare skeleton of the scene.

This is why shortform smut is difficult in general. You need something prior to the sex to build up a connection to the character.

>>6794820
>Good smut is almost nothing but buildup and characterisation

Completely disagree. Ain't noone got time for that when trying to fap.

>>6794876
If that's the case can you fap to this story?:
Girl meets boy. Boy spanks girl. Girl cries. The end.

>>6794879
Can you fap to this:
u r ghey

>>6794924
Can you fap to this?
She assumed the positions, her pants lowered to her knees, shivering as he caressed her almost naked butt, shaking as he pulled her panties just enough to bare her buttcheecks.
And then he spanked her.

>>6794624
it's like people telling you to post your game in AGDG. the only reason that is ever done is so that you can have something to shit on.

>>6789531
Try this: write literally everything except spanking.

I'm serious. Write a scene from beginning to end without ever using a sentence that amounts to "he hit the butt, and that was extremely painful for her"

>>6791942
"Good, that should do for warm up" Hannah said. "Warm up?" Sam asked. "Did you really think it would just be a hand spanking?" Hannah asked. "Well not really. I suppose I do deserve more anyway." Sam said. "As much as I like pink like your bottom is now, I much more prefer red." Hannah grinned. Hannah put Sam off her lap and pulled her down over the chair. Sam heard her heart pound as she anxiously anticipated what would follow. Hannah reached over the bathroom closet and pulled out a wooden bath brush with a long handle. Sam gulped as she saw the implement. Hannah then grabbed a washcloth and rewetted Sam's butt. *SMACK* "Ouch!" Sam said. Before Sam knew it Hannah landed another swat on her other butt cheek. *SMACK* Now the wetness of the bottom really seem to increase the pain.

"Ow!" Sam exclaimed. *SMACK* A swat just landed a bit lower on Sam's butt cheek, near a sitting spot. "Ow ow ow!" Sam said. "We just started." Hannah said. A dozen more swats followed, while Sam's body adjusted to the current level of pain making it easier to handle after each swat. "Okay, those were the easy ones." Hannah said. Sam gulped. "Easy?!" Sam retorted. Hannah rewetted Sam's butt again. Hannah laid the bath brush against Sam's left butt cheek, tapping it a few time as if she's ready to hit a golf ball. "Ready? And a one, a two aaand a threee.." Hannah said. **SMACK**. Sam screamed in pain. This was a full force swat to her left butt cheek, it clearly left a red afterprint on Sam's butt. Now Hannah put the bath brush against Sam's right butt cheek. "So the right now. And a one." **SMACK** Sam shrieked loudly. "Hey what happened to two and three?!" Sam yelled. **SMACK** Hannah ignored it and kept swatting. Sam's eyes seem to be getting a bit moist. **SMACK** Sam tried hard to keep her lips together."How many more of those are coming?"Sam asked."Don't worry it's six of the best."Hannah said.**SMACK****SMACK**Hannah made the last two swats very hard and in rapid succession.

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>>6791942
>>6795300
thanks for the updates!

>>6795097
>Try this: write literally everything except spanking.
I was going to mock you and call you a motherfucking retard, but then I read >>6795300 and it's numerous "**SMACK**".

>>6796249
Well let me just mock him and call him a motherfucking retard instead. You too.

>>6796263
If you're already insulting him, I'm not going to join. 2vs1 is not loyal.

>>6795097
Whereas I'm *not* going to call you an idiot retard, but this is still poor advice. Expecting a spanking story to feature spanking is not a failing on the part of the audience. If you want to know how to frame a spanking story I recommend searching
http://www.thespankinglibrary.org/
and paying close attention to how the stories you enjoy handle it. There's a great deal of variation but 'steadfastly refuses to describe the spanking' is pretty damn rare.

>>6796324
That's not what "you too" meant. Case in point though.

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>>6796436
Funnily enough, I agree with him.
9 out of 10, the spanking itself is bad, whereas the real interesting parts are the before and sometimes the after.

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Who wouldn't spank that wolf?

>>6796699
Horo doesn't need a spanking. She's bro tier.

>>6796249
>>6796436

Like design, writing works off limitations. If I give you a blank sheet of paper and tell you to write the best story in the world, what will you write? Most likely you will be stumped, or do some half-assed attempts at putting The Planned Novel That Is In Your Head into words and fail.

I'm offering you a writing exercise. It's not even at all difficult. You have no idea how to write the sentence "he hit the butt" fifty times without looking into a thesaurus.

That's okay. Write it zero times. Also write any onomatopoeia zero times.

This will force you to find literally anything else interesting.

>>6796756
shit advice and opinions

never listen to faggots like this, just do your own thing

>>6796723
>Horo doesn't need a spanking
WHAT

>>6796772
>shit advice and opinions
Fascinating. Make counterarguments then.

>just do your own thing
We are literally seeing the results of people doing their own thing in this very thread, which is "SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK".

>>6796788
Just ignore the shitposter. He's been trying to cause shit for a while, attacking Bleigh and calling everyone a faggot.

>>6796788
i don't see you writing, mr. critic.
>>6796853
pathetic samefagging

>>6796788
When limited to text, those use action verbs like "SMACK" do well in describing the action as it happens. Which then can follow by an immediate reaction, descriptions of how they are handling it, effects, dialog...

>>6796756
What I did is writing a story line first of what I wanted to write, what is going to happen, and how the next scene would make sense to happen. Well as I said I'm new at fiction writing, the last thing I wrote was a thesis. But I read a writing guide halfway during the buildup, that while you know many synonyms you should actually keep it simple and consistent.

So actually the buildup provides a way to identify with one(or more) of the characters. Then crawl in their skin be able to imagine (or visualize) how it is would feel to spank or be spanked given the setting. So basically like fiction books do.

>>6796893
>you have to be a chef to criticize food
>everyone who disagrees with me is samefagging

Is that the only argument you have?

>>6797522
>>you have to be a chef to criticize food

how many times have you used this sad excuse now?

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>>6797522
I told you to ignore the aotk drone. It has been shitposting for hours, you're only feeding him by answering to it.

>>6797852
Oh, I see we have the boss of this thread here, come to tell what we are allowed to talk about.

Me, the motherfucker with 53 unfinished projects in various states of disarray: "I have ideas for three new separate spanking mini-games"

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>>6798497
I, too, know this curse.
This is basically me: http://www.commitstrip.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/11/Strip-Side-project-650-finalenglish.jpg

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>>6799370

>>6796756
I feel like we're talking at cross purposes here. You're right about onomatopeias, but you've got a bizarre fixation that 'describing a spanking' literally means each individual smack has to be depicted, which is like... I don't even... Fine, here's another way of looking at it: picture a story that had a good fight scene. Did the author detail every punch? Probably not. But the ebb and flow should still form a memorable impression.

>>6799956
Spanking is, prima facie, a process that is somewhat boring and repetitive. There is great excitement in doing it IRL, rhythmically, listening to strikes and yips, but it doesn't translate into text.

And yet people complain about running out of words that mean "hit" and use onomatopoeia and write things that fall in the exact same pattern every time. Ninety nine percent of all art is OTK, what the fuck?

Fight scenes have a bunch of dodging and counterattacks going on, imagine writing five pages of a knocked out opponent being punched in the face. Now imagine almost every single piece of media of this genre ending in that scene.

So I'm saying: try writing literally everything else.

I am doing this right now, but for a different reason. I mentioned writing an engine that features spanking a grand total of zero times so that I can actually pastebin code and not have people politely ask what does .Where(x => x.Spanking.Reaction >= this.PainLevel).Select(Squeal) mean.

>>6800050
Every sex can be boring if you're shit at writing.
>And he rammed his cock in her ass, again and again, yelling at the top of lungs "Who's your daddy now, huh?"
>She tried to breathe to ease of the pain, as he went in without lubrication, and right after a spanking on top of that.
Pretty boring, huh?

>>6800769
>Pretty boring, huh?
Wow, fascinating, and now you have arrived to the advice to skip describing sex in books, which is what authors already recommend.

Albeit for a different reason: the descriptions of sex produce some of the absolute worst literature.

>>6800848
No snarky comments on how awful and corny the description actually is?

Anyone has a Korrina spanking picture?

>>6800848
I think I see the problem here. You're giving advice for general writing. Fair enough, I don't actually disagree when it comes to that sort of material. But it is still poor advice for writing wank material. Which is the point of this thread.

It's all very well to pretend you're writing the great (insert nationality) novel, but unless your writing is already at a professional level of polish, why should I waste my time on your generic prose when there are thousands of professional authors who do it better?

There's actually published spanking erotica too, you know. Lo and behold, they find ways to break up the monotony other than 'writing literally anything else.' It's not this arcane secret you're making it out to be.

>>6802679
That guy's a troll who's been giving intentionally shitty writing "advice" since thread 1. It's best just to ignore it.

>>6802701
Shut up, Bleigh.

>>6802752
Hi aotkdrone.

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>watch Stardust Crusaders S2
>Bastet stand two-parter
>one of the objectively worst stands so far
>following the general "the shittier the stand, the smarter the user" rule especially hard
>basically two entire episodes of two super-magnetized old people following Mariah on foot as she flirts, gloats, does femme fatale stuff and tries to kill them with metallic objects in inventive ways
>did i say Mariah? I meant Mariah's bouncing butt

Jesus Christ, having spanking and role reversal fetishes was already difficult on its own, by the end of the hour i couldn't think of anything else.

>>6804358
Ironic shitposting is actually not shitposting, it's significantly worse.

>>6804377
Are your feelings hurt, blogger-bleigh? :^))

>>6804377
Just report and ignore the aotk drone.

>>6804618
>everone who doesn't like my blogging is a drone

you must be pretty lonely

>>6799831
>Hanako
You monster.

>>6805592
>stop liking things that I don't like!!

And this is how this thread dies. Spammed to death by RobM.

>>6806291
Fucking RobM always ruining everything.

>>6806327
Worse than Satan, Hitler and Saddam hussein.

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Jokes asides, Shigemi made a short comic on Pixiv.
>Youmu is lost.
>Alice arrives, starts licking Youmu's tears...
>... and then brings her home and starts spanking her
I don't even know.

>>6795300
"Ouch ouch ow ow ow" Sam said. Hannah grinned. "Say it!" Sam said. "Say what?" Hannah asked. "I know you're just going to let me believe it's over while you just have another implement planned you want to surprise me with." Sam said. "No, but that's a good idea, I can think a few implements I could give you." Hannah said. Sam looked surprised. "You mean you didn't plan anything more and now I just increased my punishment with my big mouth?" Sam asked. "Hahahah, just kidding. I did plan a few more implements I can treat your butt with." Hannah said. "Really? my butt is still sore it needs some rest." Sam said. "Fine." Hannah said. Hannah went to her school bag and removed her ruler from it. It wasn't a regular ruler, it was a quarter inch wide and thick. "These things don't break often" Hannah said. "But my butt..." Sam uttered. "Don't worry I can use it some other places." Hannah said. Hannah sat down on the bathroom chair. "Kneel!" Hannah said. Sam arched down and kneeled, with her knees forming a straight angle. "And put your hands on your head." Hannah said. Sam complied.

Hannah raised the ruler in her hand. *SWAT* Sam's eyes widen. A smack landed on Sam's bare breast. *SWAT* "Ow" Sam said. Ten more swats landed on Sam's breasts. "Ok, final two." Hannah said. Sam looked up. "On your breasts that is." Hannah said grinning. Sam rolled her eyes and looked down again. *SWAT* "Owwwiee!" Sam yelled. A hard swat landed on her nipple. "Now the other one." Hannah said. *SWAT* "Ow ow oww!" Sam said. "Hmm, perhaps that didn't affect you much. Stand up." Hannah said. Sam stood up, and as she was standing up Hannah landed a swat on her vagina. Sam yelled in pain. Five more landed on her vagina, then one on her clit. "Ow. That really hurt. Maybe I should just have shut up about my sore butt. At least it would just be my butt that's on fire instead of my entire body." Sam said. "Ok, butt punishment it is. Turn around and bend over." Hannah said.

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>>6806720
>*SWAT*
That sounds really dumb. Next thread will be named "Doorkickers Edition".

What's with your obsession with RobM anyway? Someone even went as far as impersonating him on mediasp.

>>6807248
>implying impersonation
That's as low as anyone can get.

>>6807319
Pretty much. But the question is why?

>>6807455
I'm talking about that retard claiming impersonation when it's obvious nobody would bother doing so.
Unwarranted self-importance much? What's next, claiming people insulted his nationality?

>>6807455
Because he loves to talk shit but can't back it up. Hence
>b-b-but it was someone else, i swear on me mum

He did the same to me, harassed me for days, constantly insulted me, and when I tried to report him, he got me banned. All of that because I pointed out he made a typo.

>>6806470
>I don't even know.
Well, those are 3-4 sample pages of his new book, he'll release on May 8th, therefore they don't make that much sense. So far he just posted a melonbooks link, seems like I'll have to create an account there too.On the other hand, I'm able to buy his first book then, since he hasn't put it on dl site AFAIK.

On a side nite, Keynew will also release a 80 page book the same day and Ao-san will publish his Reimu/Sukuna doujin. Sadly, I haven't heared anything from otgawa, expect for his statement that he'll probably post guest entrys in Keyneqs and Ao-sans books.

>>6807776
Not sure if sarcasm. Anyway, he has a pretty insistent stalker and I'm not sure why.

>>6807994
Keyneqq's book is about Kancolle, so I don't know much about it. Ao's is about Suzuna and Reimu. He really improved since he started on Pixiv.

>>6808098
Yeah, "of course" he has a stalker. No way he's just an asshole.

>>6808266
Yeah, maybe it's just that. It just feels weird to me that someone would get so assblasted about his ban that they'd wage a personal vendetta for months on end. But it only really takes one unstable autist, I guess.

>>6808369
Why do you answer to yourself?

>>6808378
here you go

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>>6808378
IMPORTANT NEWS: More than one person consider you an autismal lord. Acceptance is the first step for healing!

>>6808583
inb4
>y-you shopped it!!

>>6808588
Why do you keep answering to yourself?

>>6808681
Still not answering the question, I see.

What ever happened to that maid RPG guy, I really enjoyed that. I wish he updated it.

>>6809365
>maid RPG
Tell me more about that.

>>6809365
got fed up with the constant insufferable bitching ITT

>>6809365
Still working on. Sorry for the lack of updates. I made some progress on gameplay, now I'm trying to figure out what I want the core storyline to be.

>>6809568
Check out the github link in the OP, find Maid Spanking Game. At least I think that's what >>6809365 is talking about.

>>6810434
Good to hear, I'm very happy that the work isn't falling to the wayside, I truly enjoyed playing it. Thank you for continuing.

Also, to whom it may concern, someone should probably mention in the github or in the zip file for the maid game that you need the RPG Maker XP data to play it.

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>>6811079
Done.

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shimeji's new game

http://shimeji777.buzama.com/Game/Komachi/KomaEiki.html

>>6806720
Sam bent over. "That’s a nice reddish looking butt." Hannah said. Sam smiled a little and thought of it as a compliment. "Remember those Goatse pictures you've been sending me?" Hannah asked. "Y-Yes?" Sam said. "Can you spread your ass cheeks like that?" Hannah asked. Sam put her hands on her ass cheeks and pulled them apart, revealing her anus. "So why do you suddenly want to see my anus? Unless..." Sam said. *SWAT* "Owww!" Sam said. A swat landed on Sam's anus. After three more swats Sam started crying a little. *SWAT* "Oww! I'm so sorry!" Sam said. Ten more swats followed. A tear flowed over Sam's face. Hannah put Sam back upright. "Oh, are we crying now?" Hannah asked. Hannah licked the tear off Sam's face. "Delicious!" Hannah said while laughing. "I can't believe I agreed to all this." Sam said. Hannah looked at Sam confused. "I know I probably need this, as I hate feeling guilty like this. But I didn't think remorse would hurt so much." Sam said. Hannah looked at Sam while gently stroking her hair. "Good news!" Hannah said. "This will be the last implement for what you did." Hannah said.

Sam wasn't sure if she should be glad it's almost over or sad because there is still one more. Hannah put Sam back over the chair. Sam looked at Hannah as she removed her belt. Sam gasped. Hannah folded the belt double and started aiming at her butt. "Ready?" Hannah asked. "Sure, let me have it. I'll be glad when it's over." Sam said. *WHIP* "Oww" Sam said. A stroke of the belt landed on Sam's butt. *WHIP* "Owweeh!" Sam said. Yet another stroke landed on her butt. After ten more strokes Sam started crying. Thirty more strokes followed. Sam was now crying and sobbing uncontrollably. "Ok, final four" Hannah said. *WHIP* *WHIP* *WHIP *WHIP* Sam shrieked hard. The last four strokes landed in quick succession. Hannah hugged Sam and then gave her a soft kiss on the lips. "I forgive you for what you did." Hannah said. "Thanks, you're the best." Sam said.

>>6813422
"From all that punishment I need to pee." Sam said. Sam went on the toilet while Hannah sat and watched as a yellow stream emerged from Sam's vagina. "So, what bullying will I be subjected to next week?" Hannah asked. "That would be a swirly." Sam said. "A swirly, what's that?" Hannah asked. "Well your head will be inserted into a toilet bowl and then flushed." Sam said. Hannah's eyes widen. "Don't worry they will be clean...ish." Sam said. "They??" Hannah asked. "Jaiden and I will take turns giving you a swirly in every toilet in the girl's room." Sam said. "What!" Hannah yelled. Hannah grabbed Sam's hand and wrestled her arm in a hold behind her back. Sam didn't struggle. "I suppose you can do the same to me." Sam said. Hannah forced Sam on her knees before the toilet bowl, opened the lid and pushed her head in. "Wait! I haven't flushed yet!" Sam yelled as her head was pushed in. Hannah flushed while Sam received the swirly. Then Hannah put Sam in the corner on her knees. "Now stay here, I'll have to grab something." Hannah said.

Hannah went into the attic, rummaging through the stuff there for a good fifteen minutes and then found her grandfather's old cane. Hannah remembered that she was threatened many times with the cane for when she would be extremely naughty, but never received it. When Hannah returned with the cane, Sam was still on her knees facing the corner. Hannah told Sam to go back over the chair. Sam complied while looking anxiously at the cane Hannah was holding. Even Sam never received the cane, though she has heard how horrific it must be. "B-But you said it was the last implement!" Sam said. "I said it would be the last implement for what you did. This is for what you're going to do!" Hannah said while swishing the cane in the air. Sam gulped. Hannah put the cane against Sam's butt giving it a couple taps and started aiming where a stroke would land.**WHIP** "Owwww!"Sam said. Without saying anything Hannah landed a stroke on Sam's butt

>>6813493
A red stripe was clearly visible on Sam's butt. **WHIP** "Owww oww ow." Sam screamed. After six strokes, Sam was crying and sobbing. And yes, 6 dark red stripes where visible on Sam's red bottom. Suddenly Hannah's mom Stacy entered the room, seeing a naked girl with a very red bottom draped over the bathroom chair while Hannah is holding the cane. "What's the meaning of this?" Stacy asked. Sam stood upright and explained what happened. "So, you're the bully who ripped Hannah's clothes?" Stacy said. Sam nods. "Were you done punishing her?" Stacy asked while facing Hannah. "Yes, though she wasn't nearly as humiliated as I was." Hannah said. "I see. Come!" Stacy said. Sam and Hannah followed Stacy into the living room. Stacy younger brother was there. "Now, keep your hands on your head, Sam." Stacy said. "So look, this is what happens to naughty kids." Stacy said to her son. Stacy grabbed Sam's jeans and t-shirt' "I suppose these have to do to replace Hannah's clothes." Stacy said.

"My clothes? I can't go home naked." Sam said. Stacy pulled what looks to be athletic shorts out of the pocket of Sam's jeans. "Well you can wear that." Stacy said. Sam put on the shorts, it said 'JOSH' on the back. "Well time for you to go." Stacy said. "Are those Josh's shorts?" Hannah said. Sam looked at Hannah while she was led out the door. Now Sam was outside wearing only a pair of shorts while covering her boobs with her hands. It was getting late, though it was going to be dark in an hour. Sam briefly considered if she should wait until dark, so not many people would see it. /'No that's a bad idea, that would be too dangerous.'/ Sam thought. Sam ran for a good 2 miles. Some people looked and a car honked along the way. Suddenly she heard someone whistling. Sam looked and saw Josh smoking a cigarette. Sam tripped over a step, and fell, but was able to place her hands. "Nice tits" Josh said. Sam blushed a little. "Are those my shorts?" Josh asked.

What's with this shit?

who knows

>>6815411
"You...here?" Sam stuttered. "A little birdie told me I should be here." Josh said. "So can I have my shorts back now?" Josh said. "But I'm not wearing anything underneath." Sam said. "Not my problem. Perhaps Jaiden would like to know." Josh said. "No, don't tell her!" Sam said. Sam removed the shorts and gave it to Josh. /'Now I'm naked in the streets, good thing no one except Josh is around. Though I don't mind Josh seeing. I hope he likes what he sees.'/ Sam thought. Sam kept her hand at her sides, even though the swats she received on her breasts and vagina are visible. "Thanks, now turn around slowly." Josh said. Sam turned around and Josh looked at Sam's sore butt. "So it is true! You truly feel repentant." Josh said. "Yeah, I deserved it." Sam said. Josh gave Sam a swat on her butt with his hand. "Well see you in school, and have fun getting home naked." Josh said. Josh left smiling.

Sam went back on track. This time covering her boobs with left arm and her vagina with her right hand, but her butt was totally exposed. A cyclist passed and stared. Then she arrived at a big road. /'Oh no, it's parade day. How am I supposed to cross the road without been seen by everyone?'/ Sam thought. Sam was hiding in an alleyway behind a potted bush on a pedestal. She's in luck it appears a mask was left on the other side of the pedestal. /'Did someone of the parade left it there?'/ Sam thought. Sam grabbed the mask, it was a heavy mask and it required both hands to hold up as it had no head strap. /'At least no one will recognize me.'/ Sam thought. So Sam started to cross the road wearing only the mask with her hands holding up the mask. Spectators started clapping and cheering. Sam would have died from shame being naked in front of so many people, especially since her body shows that she received a severe spanking, but wearing the mask makes her feel she's anonymous and safe. Sam was halfway crossing the road as suddenly a hand grabbed her shoulder.

>>6816386
"That is my mask, we were just resting over there, you thief. Give it back at once" the guy said. Sam gave the mask back. "I-I'm sorry." Sam uttered. Sam blushed a lot. "Seems like you've been punished enough already so I let you off the hook." he said. Sam wasn't sure what to hide, but she covered her boobs and vagina again. Though the spectators already have seen her naked so now they see her face. Sam realizes this and ran as fast as she could into alley at the other side. Finally, she arrived at her home. She entered it, but her brother and his friend were there. "Did you go out like that?" Sam's brother asked. Without saying anything Sam ran to her room and locked it. Sam lied down on her bed. /'I don't think I've ever been so humiliated in my life today. And neither was my butt this painful before. But yeah, a misfit like me deserves it.'/ Sam thought. /'At least I don't feel guilty anymore, but oww my butt hurts. I'm glad tomorrow is Sunday so I don't have to sit down a long time in class just yet.'/ Sam thought. Sam thought back on her day and took a nap.

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Well that wraps the story up, it was longer than I expected it would be when I started writing it. About 6 pages full. I will upload it somewhere I guess.

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just had my first spanking... went pretty badly. probably won't do that again for a while.

>>6817313
>he fell for the "real life" meme

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>>6817529
New thread here!

>>6809804
Rekt.