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Black Female Superheroe Thread: IV

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We're creating a black female superhero, or superheroes. Maid ideas in development:

>Joannie Q. Kung fu woman who's taught martial arts by her Bruce Lee-loving grandfather. She uses her training to bust up local gangs and crimelords.

>Mechanica. Young poverty stricken girl from Ghana. While taking an engineering course at an Ivy League school she gets in a mechanical accident allowing her to talk to and manipulate machines. In addition to fighting crime she takes down dictators and stops human trafficking.

>Keanna Kendricks, a medium level reality warper that can't really control her powers. She's a Manic Pixie type like Haruko Haruhara, but a bit scatterbrained and too daring for her own good.


Previous Thread: >>94360452
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>>94371088
Please no more, the dream is over just check the last thread... it was horrible
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>>94371141
It was good up until around 400 post in. Maybe if this one is willing to stay civil we can see what happens
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>>94371088
I don't want to be here anymore we are done please don't make more threads
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Just stop. Here, this is the only good thing from those threads, Bounce, there. Fucking end it now.
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>>94371208
We are done please no more threads this is shameful
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>>94371208
People literally shitted on every artists except this one, they don't deserve anything
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>>94371195
>I don't want to be here anymore
Then why are you here?
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>>94371190
No it wasn't you're lying you're trying to grab their attention the thread is right there on the OP everybody can check the whole mess you all made
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So we still going with the albinism thing and the name? That seemed a bit iffy in the last thread.
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>>94371263
To warn the others, don't help these guys and before you help them please check their previous thread they bullied their artists
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>>94371208
>>94371243
We shitted on it because black people posts are trolls, this thread is a troll created by /pol/ just to get us to respond. None of this is real.
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>>94371088
Why did you leave out Bounce?
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>>94371305
Stop lumping everyone in the thread together. You're acting like you've never heard of shitposters
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>>94371088
Don't get fooled there's nothing but idea/writers here and they want top tier art

If you want bully then you're welcome to say but they just want to make a porn or write a story for Marvel/DC

The thing i, no one of them can draw
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>>94371268
People can see the thread was pretty civil up until the end. There's tons of brainstorming post before it went to shit
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>>94371373
>On the second thread they bullied Necro
>On the previous thread they bullied Sexyverse

So my friend, tell me... who's next?
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>>94371373
You are only one of the few guys who want to keep this thing alive and no one of you can draw so please let this die you and the ideaguys ruined this thing for everyone
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>>94371353
Move along
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Who is this?
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>>94371405
>they
You know this place isn't a hive mind right?

>>94371408
How was it the ideaguys fault? They seemed to be the ones most willing to work with artist
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>>94371408
that how every fucking /co/ creation ends. Theres not enough talent and too many fucking ideaguys wanting their own fetishes implemented.
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>>94371442
Some random OC throw out the blue to catch your attention it has nothing to do with this "project"
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>>94371405
The first one was a painful case of pic related.

The second one was deserved, since he always gets like that.
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>>94371442
Request made on /b/ to bait artists so they will draw the characters on the previous thread

didn't work tho
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>>94371442
These are the correct proportions for Bounce
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>>94371509
You are a ginormous faggot
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>>94371459
Ideas guys don't "work with". The muddy the waters.
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>>94371581
Do you draw?
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>>94371581
They "worked with" enough to write five characters and a basic story plot
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>>94371644
Ideas mean nothing w7o anything sustaining those concepts aka ART
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>>94371644
Characters that only they care for. no one else gives a shit about your infinite textwall people want art not your stories.
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>>94371601
Yes, boo.
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>>94371686
so draw you wiener, quit acting like a child
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>>94371679
>>94371681
I've gone in circles saying there were people willing to work with and pay artist in the last thread so fuck it. If you want to ignore people who actually were willing to partner up and make something fine
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>>94371709
I'm rubber, you're glue.
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What should the city be?
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>>94371810
A fictional Rust Belt city? Unless one is famous for producing tires
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>>94371810
We are done dude don't feed this lonely anon trying to keep these threads alive he's delusional
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>>94371810
It's over dude move on
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>>94371810
Probably something along the line of New York or Boston but let's face it no one here gives a fuck to continue this thing
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>>94371810
It doesn't matter anymore
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>>94371839
Hmm, there probably is one
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>>94371899
Goodyear started in Akron, Ohio
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>>94372020
Is Akron very urban?
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>>94372020
>>94372107
jesus christ guys please stop thi is pathetic
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>>94372193
Less pathetic than shit posting in a thread you don't like
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Damn this shit died real quick
I always knew /co/ hated black people
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>>94372681
It'll pick up again
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>>94372681
No. You know exactly what happened.
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>>94372798
No we will make sure tho show everyo ne what you all did to the artists trying to help you, you don't deserve anything
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>>94372834
Whatever OP
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>>94372798
Sure if you want a thread full of ideas guys and bumps because no artist is going to draw this ever again
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>>94372868
You are one stupid samefag
I'm definitely gonna draw more
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>>94372910
>Everyone who doesn't agree with me is a samefag
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>>94372910
Yeah sure you are going to draw more, go ahead and do it
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>>94372910

where the fuck were you when we needed oc? i bet this is nothing but a bait set by one of the "idea" guys
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>>94372910
>I'm definitely gonna draw more

you can't draw anon don't make a fool of yourself
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So what was the consensus on that love interest for Joannie? Does it even matter at this point, since this almost certainly isn't going anywhere?
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>>94373126
it doesn't matter
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>>94373126
People were talking about it, and things will pick back up
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>>94373147
We all know you are super mad about your bad idea
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>>94373164
>will pick back up, how? thanks to the writers?
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>>94373174
you need to face it we are done at this point nobody gives a fuck about this place anymore
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>>94373195
>>94373204
samefag
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It really is painful that everyone wants this to end the only people who remain in this place are the same writers who try to be the new duo of Steve Ditko / Lee

Please accept it, nobody wants this, they destroyed all the support they had in the last thread
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>>94373270
Everybody is a samefag to you
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>>94373164
>people

do you mean two writers? because nobody else gave a shit about those greentext ask anyone they don't read those

they come here for art not for your storie
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get back to /pol/
you're so obvious
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>>94373195
>>94373204
>>94373270
>>94373285
Dude just give it a rest already.
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>>94373286
get a life, shitbrain.
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>>94373327
I bet these are the same thirsty anons who just wat porn of these characters
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>>94373331
What's your excuse anon? do you really believe this thing will become the next summer hit?
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>>94373286
none liked your idea at all
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>>94373353
you need to change your fucking outlook on life, samefag
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>>94373354
How the fuck can you tell who's who? everybody here is writerfags at thi point
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Things just went from bad to worse
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>>94373370
That's all you know? call some random dude on the internet "samefag" because he doen't agree with you?
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>>94373399
It's pretty damn obvious who wanted to shit things up
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>>94373400
It's weird that people think shitposting has anything to do with the project
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Whar mah THICC porn?
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>>94373353
>people don't do things for fun
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Is crashing and burning in 4 threads a new /co/ record?
SuperMILFs was the best thing /co/'s ever made, it didn't deserve to die like that.
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This is just proof that /co/ is shit. Everytime we try to have fun and create something fun, shitposters and gibsmethat posters ruin it.


If you wamt porn of bounce so badly then pick up a pencil and draw it yourselves. Man, you're all pathetic. We make up a fictional hero and the first thing you virgins think of is "Muh dick".

Either dish out some cash or fuck off. Its not like any of you can contribute anything worth while except crappy text. If you can't contribute to a random thread, there's no way any of you pathetic neets can contribute to society
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/co/, normally I would say "Auf wiedersehen," but since what "auf wiedersehen" actually means is "'till I see you again", and since I never wish to see you again, to you, thread, I say goodbye!
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>>94372681
It died because /co/ wanted another fetish character
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>>94371442
Nobody, I just posted it for the thicc.
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cancer, the board
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>>94373877
Too bad, she's pretty great
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>>94373855
no
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>>94373815
butthurt OP
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>>94373744
how old are you? fuck
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>>94371810
I still like Flint for that maybe
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>>94372020
Maybe this is more appropriate? It's a bigger city?
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>>94373126
the Asian with no interest in marital arts?
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>>94373567
patience
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>>94371088
So has there been any concepts for Mechanica yet? Any references?
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>>94373126
>muh honor martial artist falling for a non-martial artist

I'm not feeling it
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>>94375830
I think they thought it would be funny? But yeah, i don't see it as important
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Is she the albino?
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>>94375843
Well it would be funny in a role reversal sort of way where she's the one saving him all the time.

But that could be done as friends rather than lovers.

I suppose I should say: why does she like him? What attracts her to him?

Is he a physically-attractive hunk? A sweet sensitive soul who is a friend to tiny animals? Is he one of the few people patient enough to put up with her hot-headed shonen-esque BS?
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still no fucking art for anything of this, great job guys
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>>94375920
hmmm, him being interested in animals might be cool. He'd have more motivation for traveling, and even maybe encountering otherworldly creatures
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I'm gonna be hiding and reporting anything that seems like sperging OOP
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Do we need some sorry of animal sidekick?
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>>94375960
*sort
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>>94375960
What sort of animal side-kick would suit black chicks and is allowed in a city?
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>>94376062
I think it probably depends on the city and if this is in the future or not
Should it be a real creature or made up?
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>>94376062
some sort of showy mutated ankle biter?
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>>94375960
Queen ghost may have a favourite animated paint-sidekick (maybe linked to a painted object she have, like a skateboard, or to a tattoo).
Adinkra may have some spirit inhabiting some contraption of hers.
Bounce may have the most normal pet ever.

>>94375734
Just references like >>94371269 and pic related.
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>>94376260
Cool, i may do more sketching
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>>94373636
Super MILFS sucked. There's never been a single decent /co/ creation.

Guy who wrote the personalities of The Watch here. I'm probably going to incorporate the characters into my superhero webcomic. The characters are good. There's a lot of interesting ways they can play off each other. The only thing they need now are bad guys.

Concepts:

A black woman who can steal, cancel, and transfer super powers. She wants to take the superpowers from the old and politically incorrect golden age superheroes (public domain heroes like Stardust, Daredevil, and Black Terror) and give them "to people who deserve them".

Massacre: One of Queen Ghost's brothers, leader of gang of superpowered thugs. Fancies himself a hit rebel and a "real" superhero sticking it to the man. He also pisses off Jun (Joannie) because he's designed his costume to look like her dad. In keeping with the theme of his family's powers he's got tats that shift and move on his skin and give him super strength. They can also "jump" off his skin which is a power his sisters can't impart on their drawings. Thin Venom's symbiote.

His gang is called The Sparks.


Any other ideas for bad guys? The Sparks need more members. And there's got to be another superpowered gang for them to have gang wars with.
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>>94376275
I think it's real cool that others can take on these characters in the public domain fashion
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>>94376260
>>94375960
>>94376062
>Animal sidekicks

Street Player's family has an abused dog named Leo that they got from a shelter. Leo used to be used to train pit fight dogs and is missing a bit of his ear and tail.

Anansi is Adinkra's mentor and sidekick depending on the mood of the trickster God. He can move around by placing his spirit inside a little robotic drone spider.

Queen Ghost's most used graffiti image is a large stylized unicorn and its basically her pet.
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>>94376275
The power transferer is interesting
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>>94376275
Considering your Massacre, you will also need something to represent "the man". Maybe some violent vigilantes, fighting for what they believe is restablishing order, making little difference between criminal gangs and small thing like tagging. While they want to protect "honest citizens", they have a "If it wasn't you, then it was your brother." mentality. They are not as bad as the Sparks think they are, but still quite bad.

Then you may have a less criminal gang, doing mostly petty things that may look cool to a teenager, that one member of the Watch may have sympathy for but will have to confront at some point.
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>>94377518
Why does that matter? Just ignore the shitposters
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Oh nice, I'm glad that's a thing
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>>94377556
I'm not sure if its a "thing" or not. I mean I've been behind most of the brainstorming and I'm just one person. I'm going do some writing on The Watch and The Sparks but I can't get to it right now because I'm busy proofing stuff I've written for my combination webcomic/webnovel.

So it's sort of a thing.
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>>94377623
No, a shitpost got deleted like right away
We have done protection
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So can someone give me a rundown on what this is? I can do a little bit of drawfaggery, and this is pretty relevant to my interests. What's the established lore so far?
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>>94377844
*some
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>>94377985
Do you know any of the characters? Just wanna know what you need
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>>94378031
I don't know anything, I just saw the OP and got curious. What's with all the dramaposting?
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>>94377985
Stand by for lore.


>The team

It's called The Watch as in neighborhood watch.A group of black women are trying to weed out the gangs and supervillians from their neighborhood.

>Kung fu

Her name is Jun and she's part Japanese. Her dad was not-Jim Kelly crossed with Black Lightning and she was raised Japanese. Bullied mercilessly for being Black in Japan her father taught her martial arts as a way to deal with her rage. As a teenager she started fighting in superpowered MMA battles and put her skills to the ultimate test fighting the Yakuza in the streets. She also had a brief fling with a not-Kamen Rider superhero who she might start dating again. She's in America for the first time in her life and on scholarship to a prestigious university. While in America she's decided to settle down in her father's old neighborhood to connect with her roots.

She's not connecting well. The neighborhood hates her worse than the schoolgirls back in Japan. They hate that she's a nerd. They hate that she talks with a Japanese accent. They hate that she has money and is successful. They hate that she's not a "real" black.

Jun is very disappointed that the neighborhood is the way that it is and has joined the Watch in a last desperate attempt to find something good and worth fighting for in her dad's neighborhood.

>Riki aka Bounce

Turned into a living rubber woman in an industrial accent. Once homely looking she's now capable of looking like whatever she wants and uses her shapeshifting to launch a successful modeling career. She's even started acting in B-movies that have hired her for more for her looks than her talent.

Deep down inside she doesn't feel worthy of her newfound fortune.
-cont
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>>94378150
Before the accident she was a single mother drawing welfare. She had a high school education. She worked minimum wage at tire factor.

She was a loser. She was the stereotypical single black female leech. She was fat. She was a joke.

And now she's a millionaire. Based on nothing but luck.

Riki has joined the Watch both to prove that there's more to her than rubber and to fight the gangs that are trying to recruit her son. She's willing to brave any challenge and any danger to prove to her son that her mother is not a loser. She'd die before he becomes a gang banger like his father.

>Mechanica (needs a better name asap)

She's going to the same university Jun is at. They bond over their mutual culture shock with America's black community. The abosom, ancient spirits of Ghana, have grown as sickly and weak as their people after years of warfare, exploitation, and corruption. They can no longer even manifest through the soil of Ghana, stained with blood as it is. So they have come through America and seek to set down roots through Mechanica, their human conduit.

Mechanica manifests the pantheon of her people through technology. She can summon Anansi as a computer program to hack systems. Her battle armor is a shell that Asase Yaa, Earth Mother of Ghana, possesses. Mechanica is a very meek and shy girl, totally not cut out for battle. But in the heat of battle Asase Yaa enters her and guides her, a courageous voice in the back of her mind.

>Keanna Kendricks

Too lame a concept to salvage.
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What about villains?
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>>94378044
One dude had hits idea panned
Turns out he was OP of the original thread
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>>94378169
Stop saying she was fat
It seems everyone agrees she was flat and skinny, then became pear shaped brick house after
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>>94378169
>Mechanica additions

Adinkra after https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Adinkra_symbols

Poor girl has people giggle at her name because they think it's a typical nonsense ghetto name.


The god Anansi is her pet and mentor and can put his spirit inside a little spider drone she created.

She's a Black African albino with all the concerns about vision and skin cancer that brings because "magic albinos" is a thing in Ghana culture.

She works with gold a lot because gold has magical value in Ghana culture. She's annoyed that people think the large gold jewelry she wears is "bling bling".
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>>94378236
Also, rikki is from when she was called ricochet
Her real name is Roberta Long
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>>94378260
>>94378169

>Tag

She grew up in the hood, the daughter of a single mother. She had to watch her brothers slowly drift to rival gangs and start fighting each other. Determined to bring peace both to her brothers and to the hood she uses her power to bring her drawings to life to leave painted guardians around the city, particularly in the abandoned places of urban decay.

She's always liked the old architecture of the city and always hated how the gangs would convert them to meth labs and crack houses. Now they're quiet, peaceful places where birds nest in broken windows and flowers grow from cracks in the floor.

They are places of safety. And woe be those that violate that safety.

Her drawings can't directly interact with the three dimensional world. But they can touch shadows which "count" as other "drawings" as far as her power is concerned. If one of her drawings grabs a person's shadow they can lift them in the air or worse.

The gangs are starting to figure out that her drawings need shadows to work and are striking back at night, erasing her work and reclaiming the places she kicked them out. She's going to need help to continue her fight against the gangs and so joins The Watch.

Tag's name was changed to Queen Ghost because in graffiti slang Queen=a skilled burner artist and Ghost=a burner that is hard to rub out or destroy. So she's an "unstoppable artist". It also ties into her graffiti creations acting like guardian ghosts to the abandoned places of the city.

One of her brothers is Massacre, leader of the gang The Sparks.

Her little sister wants to be a superheroine to, but she's only five years old and is too young to fight. She has similar powers but uses chalk and sidewalk instead of wall and paint.
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>>94378260
Isn't the black albino thing a bit much? Like, I understand the concept and the reference, but it just rubs me the same way as those tumblr 'diversity' images where they give half the cast Vitiligo for the sake of disability points.
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>>94378324
>Street Player

As in https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HJMw8cUGjwI. [Embed]

She has the power to control the ground in a limited capacity. She can "play" streets. This means she can cause a strip of ground to suddenly behave as if its a conveyor belt. She can only have one "street" active at a time but can use it to rapidly move herself, allies, enemies, or objects. She can impart a "static" quality to her street that lets it transport things up shear vertical surfaces (so she can "zip" up buildings) She can also impart a slight incline to her street to create a makeshift object launcher.

She's the owner of a local diner hoping to make enough money so that she can finally move her business out of the hood. At first she doesn't care about the hood at all but the Watch gradually convinces her not to move and join them in fighting to make the hood a good place to live in. She's the last member to join.

She's married and cares only for her husband and children and at first only cares about getting them as far away from the hood as possible. But eventually decides to fight for their home.

Her power represents her character's internal struggle. It can moves things away from her and moves things toward her.

She owns a dog named Leo she got from a shelter. Leo was abused and used as a training dog for pit fights. She has a particular hatred for gangstas that do dog fights because of this.


That's The Watch.
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>>94378331
>a bit much

No because

1. Albinos being hunted down and chopped into body parts in Africa to make magic talismans is a real thing. It ties into her origin as a carrier of gods that can no longer stay in the land of their birth because of corruption. She's "magic" by being an albino but is unwelcomed in her home. The gods she carries in her head are magic that are unwelcomed in their home.

2. Name another Black Albino besides that one Warren Ellis character.

3. She can relate to Jun over being a Black that doesn't fit in with the Blacks of the neighborhood. She's the most "African" of all the Black characters but she's constantly called white. She's constantly judged by the color of her skin by other Blacks and that's powerful imagery.
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>>94378205

From an earlier thread:

Graceful Lines (placeholder name) is Bounce's white stretchy rival that's more the traditional "super stretchy" as compared to Bounce's "super durable".

>Like Bounce she came from nothing. She was a midwest farmgirl. Unlike Bounce she tries her hardest to suppress everything about her roots. She works to suppress her southern drawl and it only comes out if she's stressed or surprised (such as in a wrestling match with Bounce). She's 100 percent devoted to being the best in whatever she does and sees Bounce as a rival in modeling/acting/and superheroing.

>And while Bounce has a pretty laid back and playful attitude the white girl is a testy type-A personality.
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>>94378525

Adhesive is Bounce's archvillain


>Accident has left her horribly mutated, constantly secreting a meta human grade adhesive. Wears a containment suit at all times (Like Peyton's Clayface)
>Post accident has left her mentally unstable and aggressive, has a mouth on her and quick to insult
>I went with the civilian name Susan (Sue) Wickly but feel free to change that. She could have these valves on her hand that were supposed to safely dispense the excess glue but she re-purposed them so she can fire it like a projectile. You could also do a thief angle with her ala "sticky fingers" where she can do Spider-Man style burglaries; sticking to walls, etc. I imagined her as a hot head and resentful towards Bounce because she didnt end up a freak like she did.
>I was thinking the company that took over the tire business Bounce's father owned has dabbled in several next generation materials and Susan is just another accident that happened when they cut corners. The corporation should have some sinister end goal of course with all of this but thats getting ahead of ourselves. Susan could have been one of the scientists that worked there

>Besides the obvious "Im rubber you're glue" thing, its something that could really fuck with her powers.
>Relies on kinetic energy to get going
>Metahuman grade adhesive completely immobilizes her preventing any sort of offense
>Victims suffocate from a glob to the face that cant be removed
>Skin peeling off when medics try to remove substance
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>>94378331
It's only pointless diversity if you don't show the additional concerns that albino people have to deal with, like needing to cover up in the sun or eye problems.

>>94378205
There are a few in this thread and in the prior threads. I've got a couple more I've brainstormed.

>Steelbelt: Bounce villain. Also effected by the explosion that granted Bounce her powers, Steelbelt slowly developed high strength bio-synthetic fibers that crisscross his body tissues. The fibers disperse force over the entire volume of his body, making him nigh impervious to most physical force.

>Peepshow: Ghost Queen villain. Remote viewer who can project her senses through symbols or representations of the human body.

>Reverend Babbage: Adinkra villain. God isn't dead, he just hasn't been built yet. Beware the old gods, who trap mankind in superstition and capricious rule. Beware the demiurge machines, who tempt the faithful from the True Path.
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>>94378324
I think I might give Tag a shot, she seems like the most fun. Any design cues for her outfit, or can I just freehand it?
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>>94378525
Does Graceful Lines powers linked to how Bounce got here or something else entirely?
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>>94378331
Yeah, in not sold either
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>>94378936
I don't think her origin was established
She was on the scene first though
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/co/ projects never go anywhere. Why do you all bother with this shit?
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>>94379050
Report and hide
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I'll post it again.
The problem with all ideas posted on this thread is that they look too specific to a time period or fashion trend, when they should look "superheroic".
Everything here just screams "modern superhero", when there should be no such thing, just "superhero".

They don't have an iconic and timeless design like Spider-Man, Doctor Doom or Captain America.

Although his designs draws inspiration from the death reaper, robots, knights, mages and the Tin Woodman, Doom doesn't seem to belong to a specific era. You can throw him in the dark ages or on a cyberpunk future that his design will work well. You can throw him in any scenario, you can make him funny, scary, pompous, heroic, and the character will work. Doom is the absolute perfect design.
Spider-Man doesn't look like an spider yet conveys the idea of a "spider man" very well, and, although he was created in the sixties, he seems modern to this day.
Wolverine doesn't look like a Wolverine. He wears fucking yellow and blue, he shouldn't be a badass, yet he is and his design works.
And they all work in different drawing styles. They look nice whether on Steve Ditko pencils or on the anime-like Capcom games.

You guys need to study more classic, specially Kirby and Ditko designs and understand better how superheroes actually work, or else you guys will end with a 2000's Luke Cage.
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>>94379098
Captain America is Golden Age as fuck, it's what made him stand out when they brought him back compared to the streamlined and primarily two-toned superhero designs of the 60s.

Doom did get redesigned when the did a cyberpunk future version in Doom 2099.

Wolverine has had multiple redesigns throughout the years and most artists downplay the head and boot fins, as they're seen as outdated design elements.
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>>94378716
>like needing to cover up in the sun or eye problems.
Not a concern when you're in a tank!

Previous thread had an Adinkra villain that is staunch traditionalist of the Ghanaian gods, while Adinkra is their renewal in a new form.
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>>94379313
That doesn't really give a reason as to why the traditionalist would be a villain, it'd make him a rival.
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>>94379313
Maybe the tank is like a mini house
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>>94379050
I'm having fun making stuff up and seeing other people making stuff up. Maybe I will use some of it in a superhero RPG, maybe not.
Anyway, it's a fun imagination exercise. And it's not like my RPG will get anywhere either, nor will any of my pastimes.
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>>94379409
Shouldn't even reply to them
But you are right, it's fun if nothing else
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Think since we have Bounce's design down, I figure her rival would have attire the opposite of hers?

>>94379409

Exactly.
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>>94379098
I don't know, I think it depends on what mood the thread is going for in this universe. The Milestone heroes for example were almost all very modern looking because it fit the tone of the series. If these stories are supposed to be more grounded and personal involving issues that plague their local community, it makes sense that most of the characters would look like they hastily slapped together a disguise to get the job done. To me it seems like The Watch would be more X-Force than X-Men, y'know?
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>>94379609
It was said she's be a bimbo as far as looks
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>>94379679
No wonder so many people dropped out of this project. Does everything /co/ touches have to be trashy fapfuel? Why can't Graceful Lines be elegant and straightfaced like an actual runway model? Why can't she wear an extravagantly ornate and fantastical outfits to completely outshine her enemies in the eyes of the public? Honestly, most of you would be happy if a drawfag just threw three ovals on a page with pasties where the nipples would be, and you'd have donkeys crawling from under the floorboards moaning "T-THICC!!!!" in ecstasy.
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>>94379813
Wasnt too keen on the bimbo aspect myself so this is a better alternative to me. Shed still be an opposite to Bounce so it works out.
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>>94379813
Nothing wrong with that
And Bounce is literally the only thicc on the team
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>>94379380
He sees her as a blaspheme, he wouldn't necessarily be a criminal villain as his main motivation would be her making a mockery of his beliefs.
Hell, if you want you could say his main motivation is to chop her to pieces to make power magical items out of her body parts, I mean she is a magical albino so it makes sense that a fanatic traditionalist would think her body parts would be the ultimate talismans.
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>>94380216
I like that a lot
Because of who she is in relation to the magic
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A nive way to see if you design is good is to imagine how Kirby would draw it or how it would look drawn by Ditko. Or draw it along classic designs and see how it works.
Could your character be on a silver age Avengers cover or it would stick like a sore thumb?

>>94379216
>Doom did get redesigned when the did a cyberpunk future version in Doom 2099.
You don't get it. That was the idea, otherwise it would just be "Doctor Doom in 2099", not "Doom 2099". They purposely made a timeless design onto a cyberpunk design.
Classic Doom didn't look out of place in 2099, as 2099 never presented something beyond what we saw in past comics.
It's interesting how Latveria itself blends tchnology with fairy tales aesthetic and Doom never looks out of place. In one panel he is in some dark medieval tower then in the next in some high tech underground lab with 60's furniture. And it just works.

And I don't think Cap looks that Golden Age. His first design perhaps, but his classical design is timeless and stylish. It does look more gaudy than, let's say, Spider-Man, but this fits the patriotic motif.
The most Golden Age-esque designs are forgotten heroes like those from Dynamite Project Superpowers series. Like future car concept's that scream the era they were made.

>>94379672
You have a point, but I believe creators should try and balance the "grounded" aspect with the "timeless" aspect.
Ditko's Spider-Man was pretty grounded, yet his design wasn't something stuck to the sixties. Meanwhile, Fantastic Four may be dated in the family side of the book, but the comics balanced it with the balls to the wall crazyness that were most stories.
Milestone heroes look pretty shit today and if they were rebooted, they would need modern redesigns. Heroes that try to be modern but happen to be stuck in the time period they were created need to be constantly reinvented and modernized.
The more modern it is, the more it get's dated.
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you people are garbage at this. I've been following these threads for a while now but it's still no better than the average tumblr fan fiction. The guy going on about how it doesn't feel timeless is right. This just feels wierd and awkward because it doesn't have a basic hook as her origin story. Also it'll inevitably devolve into a fap fantasy character. Lmfao tire factory and welfare?
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>>94381143
I don't think so, but i like that
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>>94380945
Doom 2099 was literally "Doctor Doom in 2099."

You're also forgetting that what is and isn't fashionable isn't necessarily short-term and is also cyclical. Pirate boots instantly date a design to pre-90s, which gives roughly 50 years when they were fashionable and almost 30 when they weren't. Using the Milestone characters picture earlier as an example, Icon is pretty grounded in the Silver Age aesthetic with a Golden Age throwback in the cape. Rocket is pretty much a typical Kirby design with a jacket on top, and Hardware is pure 80s.
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>>94378453
>2. Name another Black Albino besides that one Warren Ellis character.

Tombstone. Tobias Whale. Tons in indy stuff. since people like to think they're creative.
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>>94371088
Is this supposed to be a "we're gonna make a legitimately good black female superhero - better than what the big 2 can do," or is this just making a meme character?
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>>94381143
>Is described as Haruhi but black

Can ANYTHING be done to make this character not suck.

>>94379813
This.

She should wear only custom made fashion. Maybe stuff made of memory fabrics that change as she shifts form?

Graceful Lines could be apart of a larger "JLA" sort of superhero team, an established superhero team. They don't really deal with street level threats, and this causes the hood to resent them. But they got a point. They can't wave a magic wand and save the hood. Change can only come from the people, not from above.

Graceful Lines is still a jealous bitch and hates Bounce, but she's not evil. She's just afraid of being outshined by someone who's never "earned" her powers.
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>>94381500
It's mostly fapbait
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>>94381523
>fapping to negroes
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>>94381500
Originally it was a transparent attempt for OP to get pics for his THIC BLACK SUPERHEROINE fetish folder.

I came around and started talking about making The Watch, an all black all female team that would

1. Be the first team of its kind and thus scoop and shame all the SJWs that bitch about "muh representation".

2. Be composed of actual characters and not liberal mouthpieces.
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>>94381515
Hence her being a rival and not a villain to Bounce. I'm imagining Grace's color scheme be white and gold.
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>>94371208
Barbara Black Sheep?
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>>94381569
You could really cause some salt if you had one of them be aware of the quasi-fascistic/Ubermensch nature of superheroes, and be totally willing to play that up.
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>>94381747
Elaborate?
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>>94381770
Just think about the imagery that superheroes use.

Plus that they use their superior force to enforce their own morality and will, which is Nietzschean as well.

Not to get all Snyder, but I think he was on to something with the deification of Superman.
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>>94381600
Is thinking the same
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>>94381556
Nothing wrong with fucking a coon so long as it doesn't end in some weird half breed kid
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>>94381915
back to /pol/
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Alright, I took a crack at Ghost Queen. In hindsight I think the giant spray can on her back is a bit too anime, but I'm pretty happy with the rest of her design.
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>>94381515
Fuck haruhi, She was a bitch character and the anime was overrated as fuck.
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>>94381962
This is cool, i like the dripping
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>>94381962
I like the paint can, though I think an H-harness and two parallel tanks might work better.

Good job though.
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>>94371088
Affirmative Action, the super genius with an IQ of 80
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>>94381633
who?
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>>94381500
It's for fun and whatever else
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>>94381500
everything /co/ does is usually fueled by fetishist , rarely is anything done for the sake of it.
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>>94383166
is not for fun and you know it is just a couple of writerfags trying to keep this thing alive because they spend too much time writing their huge fanfiction
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>>94371088
WE
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>>94371507
>>94371507
>>94371507
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>>94381915
It's still a little weird being attracted to them in the first place
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>>94381962
That looks really cool
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>>94384027
Look you stupid asshole, we're going for a grounded Milestone Comics/Heroes thing. Not Kirby. Not Dikto. It's grounded. And this is like the tenth time someone has had to correct you for being a retard who just inserts himself into the conversation without understanding what people want.

Fuck you.
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>>94382144
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>>94381962
I like it.
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>>94379813
> Why can't Graceful Lines be elegant and straightfaced like an actual runway model? Why can't she wear an extravagantly ornate and fantastical outfits to completely outshine her enemies in the eyes of the public?
I like that better than the bimbo aspect. Not sure if a large flowing dress like that works aesthetically for an elastic character though.
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>>94384795
I think or was just to illustrate she is vapid in comparison
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Boom Box is a name for someone
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final bump before this project dies forever
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I was just gonna do a stick figure to joke around, but this came out
better luck next time /co/, polite sage
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>>94387108
We'll be back.
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>>94384928
We can do that without making her ridiculous. Perhaps she can wear extravagant attire which easily comes off with her normal suit underneath.
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>>94387108
I like it
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>>94387365
keep telling this to yourself buddy
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More like a Super-Ho thread, amirite?
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>>94385242
What about Ghetto Blaster
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>>94388745
I've always liked that slang
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>>94388745
Sounds more like the name for a villain. Maybe a Pied Piper of sorts who mesmerises the community's youth and ropes them into joining his gang?
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>>94384235
We're on /co/, we're attracted to anything even vaguely human shaped.
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>>94388745
>>94389451
I like that.
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>>94389451
Dies he have a boom box? Does he rhyme?
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Kung Fu girl update
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Why are you guys doing this? No meme answers, I legitimately want to know.
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>>94389836
for fun
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>>94389836
It's a fun little distraction from all of the shitposting and repetitive faggotry.
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>>94389836
Butthurt OP pls go.
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>>94376275
>ne of Queen Ghost's brothers, leader of gang of superpowered thugs. Fancies himself a hit rebel and a "real" superhero sticking it to the man. He also pisses off Jun (Joannie) because he's designed his costume to look like her dad.
I like that.

> In keeping with the theme of his family's powers he's got tats that shift and move on his skin and give him super strength. They can also "jump" off his skin which is a power his sisters can't impart on their drawings. Thin Venom's symbiote.
This clashes with his name though, as in Graffiti lingo "Massacre" is mass erasure of graffiti.

Could be separated into 2 characters (perhaps 2 different brothers of QG). Maybe they're rival gang leaders?
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>>94389836

Because anon you see there's a couple of writers, guys who can't draw for shit and only have their stories. They're trying to create something meanful like a comic book with villains and heroes and such but they're just two lonely writefags with no skills so they've to beg to any project coming to /co/ and o they choose this one but doesn't work because /co/ only wants lewds and porn, they don't even read comics.

>>94377623
They keep bumping the thread but don't be fooled is just these two guys who spend a lot of time writing stories with these "characters" so now they believe if this dies all their "hard work" will be nothing but useless. which it is.
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What about cops?
I would like cops to be competent for once, able to take care of regular non superpowered gang members.
The police chief would be a no-nonsense guy that know when take risks and when to pull out his men when confronted with a superpowered freak they can't deal with.
He could be first presented as a villain going after the Watch, until he decide to take them down not with superpower or weapon, but good old detective work to find out their identity. He will slowly be closing on them in the most mundane ways, but when he finally confronts them he now knows enough about them to realise they are good people and just keep on eye on them. Some "villainous" things about him we were presented earlier are revealed to be bias from the girls.

Though it would make sense to also have supercops at some point.
Maybe megacorps security forces/drones too.
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>>94390279
>tfw I wrote for short films with teams of people and nobody was even close to being as much as a drama queen as /co/ drawfags in these threads about their contributions
We'll pay some guy to draw it or if push comes to shove I'll convince my director friend to direct a short live action pilot about it. As soon as we're satisfied with the writing produced of course, which isn't even close to now.

Why are you so jaded anon?
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>>94387823
SuperHoes would be more interesting than this. Who wants to start SuperHoes?

Super powered prostitutes.
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You should put her in a wheelchair
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>>94390778
I mean, i do want that
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>>94390635
Is it even possible to have competent cops and (relatively) non-meta vigilantes like Kung Fu girl in the same setting?

Not that I dislike the idea but the whole neighbourhood going to shit due to gang wars doesn't scream "competent police force" to me.
We could have a couple of coompetent cops though, I mean Kung Fu girl's possible love interest was proposed to be a cop, but the police force as a whole would have to have either some level of incompetence or corruption, and I'd rather have incompetence personally.
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>>94390811
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>>94390778
Seems interesting too but I mean that's bound to be just porn... which I guess is a nice outlet for all the people who were only into this for the porn anyway.
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>>94390777
>director a short live action pilot about it

thanks for the laugh
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>>94390901
I guess at least they know about Nubia.
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>>94390844
Me and you, let's do it.

>>94390941
Of course it's bound to be porn, but that's okay. Porn with context and interesting characters is better than two randos fucking.
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>>94390948
It would obviously not feature any superpowers except if we manage to work in low budget ones like Misfits did, but if the writing is good enough the interactions and story aswell as good visuals should be enough.
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>>94390899
You're probably right.
Maybe a bit of corruption, some incompetence, and a lot of being under-staffed?
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>>94390999
I'll talk about it, why not?
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>>94391085
What do you think the origin should be? How they meet? United by a pimp or they know each other naturally? And how many of them should we have?
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>>94391074
Sure, I just don't really want cops and the governement to be too much of "the Man" personally.
Although I guess the anti-vigilante political stance from like the 80s I suggested here >>94389804 probably implies some level of corruption.
Either that or The Spark I wasn't as clean as we think.
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>>94391141
Butters' hoes avenge his death.
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>>94391141
The pimp could be like their Charlie sure
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>>94391141
at least 4
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>>94391236
Yes this could work, do you have more screenshots?
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>>94391236
That's what I like, this could be an expanded universe explaining Butter's secret business.
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>>94391236
tell me more
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>>94391141
One needs to have big booty powers. Her butt would be huge.
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>>94391236
We want those girls?
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>>94391272
>Prostitute Charlie Angels type superhero group
Loving this more and more. I want the pimp to be like Kevin Spacey.

>>94391293
Ideas for physical descriptions and personality types? I see one of them being like Karrueche.

>>94391346
>>94391387
>>94391412
I would call you all retarded, but I'm trying be a nicer person. Let's not connect this to an established show and universe.
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>>94391423
Anon, what constitutes as big booty powers?
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>>94391463
why not? its better than the thing we got so far
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>>94391463
I was mostly joking. But the nice pimp thing has to be played out as a joke. I mean you can't do a Pimp's Angel straight, or at least you can't really play the pimp as a good guy.

Or you know, he's Abraham Pimpcon, like he freed the hoes and now they willingly work with/for him to take down violent pimp and human slavers.
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>>94391484
Well, just something that involves her having a huge booty, whatever that could be
Booty Quake
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>>94391463
This calls for some visual references
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>>94391484
HULK SMASH but with booties, got me?
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>>94391568
Damn that sounds hot
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>>94391566
>already begging for art when there's not even 1 character
sheesh
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>>94391489
We just started a few minutes ago, of course it's better than anything we have so far.

>>94391543
I have no idea what thoughts the first part of your post is trying to communicate, but I love the second idea. He freed the hoes and now they work for him as free agents.

>>94391550
>>94391568
We can combine those.
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>>94391593
Pictures, actually pictures of people for ideas you ridiculous sperg
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>>94391543
I like that
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>>94391622
That's not how ideas work.
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Super prostitutes? Well it was fun while it lasted...Bounce was fine as is too.
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>>94391651
It is
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>>94371088

Someone with some serious obsessions.

She meets her younger self and a dramatic scene ensues about how much of a shit person has become over the years
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>>94391652
Why are we stopping that?
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>>94391674
No.
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>>94391691
yes?
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>>94391687
Develop. Why is she a shit?
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>>94391566
>>94391622
We need characters before references.
All we have so far is ButtZilla and maybe the Karrueche one.
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>>94391731
Yes at least that big
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>>94391704
Naaaah. You're talking about a character design without a character. Right now we have "fat ass prostitute" as our most developped character.
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>>94391688
Oh, for a moment I though Bounce was going to become a part of whatever this Superhos thing. Nevermind then, I was just enjoying the character and the supporting cast and be sad to see that go so quickly.
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>>94391731
I don't disagree
Pictures can get the ball rolling in lots of ways
Fashion pictures are full of character
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>>94391776
No, i think its separate which is fine. I like seeing the thread doing anything really. It doesn't have to be all one effort. I've been in it for Bounce too.
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>>94391777
Fashion pictures? We're creating prostitutes.
But there's a visual reference.
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>>94391843
here's*
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>>94391843
Like, if i liked that as a costume starter, i would wonder what power set that makes sense for, if any
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>>94391899
I have no idea what powers these would work for. Let's continue talking about characters. We have Buttzilla, thoughts on Karrueche type character?
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>>94392007
Well who is Karrueche, besides the picture
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>>94392007
Magic
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>>94391843
Water
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>>94391882
Strength
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>>94392036
Sorry, I got distracted. This is Karrueche.

https://www.instagram.com/karrueche/

>>94392068
We gotta have a magic character?

>>94392077
>>94392094
These are kind of generic powers. Let's focus on personalities.
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>>94392276
No we don't have to have anything, and yeah, they are generic as starting points
It's like a writing game
Also, once you have a power, you can come up with an origin which starts the characterization
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>>94392276
She looks agile
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>>94392345
I guess. But I rather use physical descriptions as starting points instead of powers and clothes.
I imagine the Karrueche hoe would be kind of uptight and controlling. Maybe OCD.

>>94392512
What would her sex specialty be?
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>>94392542
Acrobatic positions
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One of these SuperHoes needs to be Middle Eastern.
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>>94392580
Is that a sex specialty?
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>>94392760
The team, i think, should stay all black per the thread
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>>94392834
Being incredibly flexible? yes, yes it is
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>>94392848
What does SuperHoes have to do with The Watch or whatever these niggas is doing? The idea started in this thread but that doesn't mean anything.

>>94392871
I'll take your word for it. And it provides a power for her. She can be like Mrs. Incredible.
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>Superhoes
Welp, I'm out. Fun thread while it lasted.
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>>94393247
Bounce isn't apart of it, you fuck.
Read the thread before throwing sensitive hissy fits.
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Were my SuperHoes niggas at?
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>>94393432
Were? It was today, in this thread. Technically yesterday if you're a Eurofaggot.
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>>94393432
keep writing dude im here
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>>94393432
+1
waiting for more ideas
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>>94393432
I think the name should be Thot Squad instead
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>>94393735
>Thot
Meme harder, faggot.
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>>94393476
>>94393560
>>94393596
I meant where. I was thinking the Middle Eastern character could be lips oriented, but what superpower would that correspond with?

>>94393735
I love "Thot Squad" but SuperHoes is a great name because it's close to Superheroes. Maybe we should vote on it.
http://www.strawpoll.me/13619974
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>>94393750
How is Thot anymore a meme than Hoe? Because you didn't grow up with it?
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>>94393824
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Dance_Combat
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>>94393893
Dance Combat makes more sense with Stretch (temp name), our uptight flexible girl with Mr. Fantastic powers.
Maybe the Middle Eastern lips character could have breath powers. Her specialty is blowjob so she blows.

http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Breath_Powers
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Breath_Manipulation
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I'm creating references, but we need a 4th character.
We have
>A Middle Eastern blowjob specialist
>A black anal specialist
>A blasian flexible sex specialist
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>>94394459
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MqsTVPeiTvY

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ZKq2ptu7qw

>titles
you know what i mean
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>>94394564
Hand and footjob? I don't know. Maybe that can be included with Stretch.

I don't know why I didn't think of it before, we need a big tits character. Right? Have any ideas for that?
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I don't think I've seen you "idea men" embrace your mediocrity so fully in a thread, as you did on this one.
At least you're not delusional about it anymore.
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>>94394746
big tit are overrated the we need a fit curvy girls with all the junk in the right place
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>>94394807
What are you talking about? We already have a huge ass character.
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>>94394772
In the immortal words of anon "everyone wants to be an 'idea guy'!"
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>>94394829
i didn't say huge ass i said some kind of sporty chick with well tonned booty but not the kind of muscular fetish
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>>94394772
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>>94394892
That's terrible. Why would we need or want some flat sporty muscular toned person?
And does Stretch not fill that role already? >>94394100
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>>94371088
Middle Eastern Blowjob Girl Reference.
This thread is pretty dead, should we go to /aco/?
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>>94395416
/aco/ doesn't support projects and the mods will ban our discussion it already happened with supermilfs long ago
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>>94391568
Super Duper Sumo style Gluteus Maximus attacks?
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>>94395853
Seriously? There's always a Golden Girls thread up.
But let's continue on here then. We have physical descriptions/references, but Ass Woman and Lips Woman don't have personalities. And none of them have actual names.
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>>94395974
GG is already a comic, so they do fanart
Youre creating something new, which isn't allowed on their board
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>>94396080
Okay. Do you not have any ideas or opinions on their names or personalities?
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>>94396159
sorry no, im just throwing ideas but can't create a clear concept
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>>94396241
...okay
I want to discuss this some more but nobody's here. Guess they all went to bed.
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>>94371088
>Mechanica

That's already an ARMS character
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bump I guess
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>>94391543
>Abraham Pimpcon
Nice one
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>>94371088
I'm interested in Mechanica just because conversations with machines sound interesting...
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>>94397957
Too late we are doing the pimp squad
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>>94397977
Thot Squad
Pimp Squad
SuperHoes
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I planned to post something for this but got busy with house repairs the last 2 days. Is it entirely dead?
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>>94398968
it is. there's only two writers who can't let it go, the rest of the board already saw how awful these dudes can be.
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>>94398968
Pretty much. move on.
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>>94398968
You could join SuperHoes if you want.
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>>94398968
No one gives a fuck anymore so yeah I guess
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>>94398968
Don't waste your time here anon
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>>94398968

Yeah we are done with this it burned and crashed, these are its ashes
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>>94398994
>>94399018
>>94399037
>>94399055
>>94399083

I read through a little and I see what you all mean, thanks anons for telling me before I worked on anything for it. i'll put effort into other stuff

>>94399036
I'll read what was posted for it and see if I have anything to offer, if nothing else I'll hit up a drawthread. I need an excuse to draw
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>>94399143
Don't waster your time with the superhoes man it's the same shit
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>>94399143
It's not that fleshed out so far, but we have three possible character designs.

>>94399230
Let the anon make his own decisions.
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>>94399143
the thing is anon, the same shit will happen because it's the same people involved.

>>94399251
You see how this anon tries to get your attention? same happened before and then they will shit on you if your idea doesn't work with thier vision.
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>>94399143
Go the drawthread there's more interesting ideas
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>>94399143
You're welcome anon, but seriously here's only a couple of idea men trying to keep this alive no one gives a damn fuck anymore
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>>94399282
>the thing is anon, the same shit will happen because it's the same people involved.
I wasn't involved at all with this Bounce Watch shit
Don't lump us all together just because you're bitter and hateful
At least we acknowledge that SuperHoes is for lewds
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so is SuperHoes going with its own design or going to rip some idea's from The Watch?

i.e. rubber one, techy one, kung fu one, super-speshul reality warpfu manic pixie?
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>>94399251
>>94399332
>>94399763
Wait, so you're still holding on that someone will draw your shit? The point in understanding that this is dead, wasn't that one thing was just for porn, or not, it was that this is dead.

I really though anon here >>94394772 was right, but you really are delusional, and with even less "material" that you previously had.
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>>94399763
Jesus, just give up
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>>94397977
We can do both
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>>94398968
Not at all. Just more than one thing.
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>>94399143
Ignore the samefage
He is the butthurt original OP who's idea got panned
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>>94399763
They are all separate
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One needs mouth powers
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>>94399816
There is no "still". SuperHoes began in this thread a few hours ago by different people.
There's no connection to that other shit.
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>>94393432
Right here
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>>94400644
Middle Eastern one has mouth powers.
>>94395416
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Breath_Powers
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Breath_Manipulation
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>>94393824
There should be no middle eastern character. Why would there be?
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>>94394459
Needs a titties girl
And BIG
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>>94399143
Honestly man I don't know why you came here there's nothing worth on this thread right now just "idea" guys
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>>94400677
Why wouldn't there be?

>>94400734
Yeah, we've acknowledged this. Do you have any ideas for her? And why are you all up near 7am?
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>>94394746
One meds to be totally not fit, just one
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>>94400746
You're so fucking annoying, you know that? Of course there's nothing in here but fucking idea guys when you all drive away every artist.

An idea needs to be visualized to not be an idea anymore.
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>>94400800
what the fuck are you even saying
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>>94395071
Is stretch Buttzilla?
Because i think Buttzilla is more who she is
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>>94395899
yes please
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>>94400800
*needs
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>>94400847
No, Stretch is not ButtZilla.
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>>94400756
The mains are supposed to be black in this thread
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>>94400756
Hmmm powers for giant titties
Energy blasts?
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>>94400813
Its busy one dude from early on that had a bad idea
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>>94401011
just one dude that had a bad idea
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>>94400908
For the last fucking time. SuperHoes has nothing to do with this female black superhero thing. It was just something that by accident started in this thread but it's disconnected. It is not confined to the rules of the thread because this thread has no rules.

>>94400975
Energy blasts would work but feel kind of boring and inappropriate. Everyone else's powers relate to their specialty.
Stretch's specialty is being flexible as well as handjobs and footjobs. Power of flexibility.
Middle Eastern's specialty is blowjobs. Breath powers.
ButtZilla's specialty is her huge ass. She has vibration emission and super strength.
Maybe giant titties powers should be linked to milk or something?
Also, we really need official names.
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>>94401055
I think we should stick to it being a black thing for this thread
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>>94401055
I actually really like the Buttzilla name. Black porn stars actually have names like this sometimes.
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>>94401230
If you're going to keep it up with this bullshit I'm just gonna leave. This is ridiculous. There's no real reason for them all to be black. You probably just decided you have a black girl fetish now and want more content now that it looks like The Watch is over.

>>94401247
It's a silly name but we can keep it. Same goes with Stretch. But we need something to call the other two besides Mouth and Tits.
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>>94401262
The idea should stay on topic. Sounds like you are the one concerned about your fetish being met.
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>>94401262
Why not? black chits are hot
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>>94401262
Them being blakc is one of their biggest appeal thi makes them interesting
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>>94401262
Don't be that guy, take the ball and leave kinda thing
Besides, we'll just go on without you, like the butthurt OP
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>>94401293
There is no topic. This could've began in any thread, how are you not understanding that?
I don't care what race Mouth is but you have no good solid reasoning as to why she NEEDS to be black. Plus, I've already made a reference photo hours ago.

>>94401294
I don't disagree. Two of them are already black.

>>94401303
I assure you, anon, exaggeratedly sexualized black sex workers is not a fresh or interesting idea.

>>94401319
>Don't be that guy, take the ball and leave kinda thing
I'm extremely tired and I'm being argued against for no reason besides the fact this guy might be on the spectrum.
>Besides, we'll just go on without you, like the butthurt OP
I'm the one making the references and keeping everything organized.
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>>94401435
We jut want some hot black chicks with nice bodies don't get butthurt man
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>>94401435
I just donno why you can't make them all black, that's the point here
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>>94401435
>
I meaI'm extremely tired and I'm being argued against for no reason

n there's a reason, black hot females was the reason why we came here
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>>94401435
You ain't the editor do, and this thread is for black female heroes
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>I just donno why you can't make them all black, that's the point here
That was't the point. That was the point of The Watch or whatever the fuck these other anons were doing. The point of SuperHoes was porn plain and simple.

>>94401476
>>94401547
You're all autistic retards. I'm trying to be better, but I can't be nice to you people. I pray to god that none of your are above the age 16. Here's the reference for ButtZilla. Obviously you shouldn't keep the ugly pompadour type hair as part of the design. I don't care what y'all do with Mouth. I'm going to sleep.
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>>94401525
This
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>>94401739
It's part of the thread now
If you thought this was still 'yours', you need to step back
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>>94401739
I like that hair actually
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>>94401766
>If you thought this was still 'yours', you need to step back
Does anybody on this board have a brain?
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>>94401785
Did you not read the thread or something?
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>>94401799
I'll take that as a no.
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>>94401739
I think her butt could be even bigger, but this is great
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>>94401739
Maybe a name fort the mouth girl could be Suckah
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To anyone here for Bounce, is she basically done; anything else about her that needs to be done?
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>>94401927
I think she's basically done, unless there are still costume discrepancies
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>>94401927
What's her signature porn move?
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>>94401927
We never got a clear setting
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>>94402046
Probably twerking
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>>94401966
>>94402061
Her setting was probably never set cause the other heroines who would be in the same world never got done. Also recall her rival and archvillian needed work next.
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>>94402179
A lot of them are pretty far along. Fictional or real world do you think?
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>>94371208
This is amazing.
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>>94402334
Yeah, its hard to choose
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>>94402457
Here you go again believing there's any chance at this point
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>>94371442

Motifa?
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>>94402604
Who dat?
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>>94402179
Was her arch Adhesive?
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>>94399282
>it's the same people involved.
One of the writerfags for the Watch here, no it isn't.
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>>94402322
What do you mean exactly?

>>94402795
Yes and her rival is Graceful Lines.
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>>94403126
Like made up cities, or not
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>>94403126
Concepts have been posted >>94371269 >>94389804
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>>94402061
Basically your standard superhero setting. Perhaps with some points:

1. For whatever reason black superhumans aren't as common as superhumans of others races. Whether this is because black superhumans are less likely to interact with superpower triggers like rare radioactive chemicals or because they're less likely to carry the metagene no one knows. But it causes a lot of black resentment. Some even believe the conspiracy theory that the Man puts chemicals in the water to suppress Black superhuman potential.

2. The real reason is because Blacks are less likely to carry the metagene and the powers that be are terrified of the not-so-PC ramifications so they suppress this information.

3. Black Superhumans are encouraged by politicians to organize into paramilitary "superteam" organizations to basically serve as free disposable footsoldiers for their political cause. Think BLM and Antifa with superpowers. There's a link between one of the most prominent superteams in the city and The Sparks gang.

>>94403230
>Made up city or not

Made up city would be best. Make it Detroit-esque but with enough lore so that it is its own thing. Think like how Gotham City and Metropolis draw from several different cities.
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>>94403273
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>>94403298
This kinda sounds like /pol/ posting, not all bad though
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City name?
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>>94403694
Cowen city after one of my favorite pencilers and Milestone comics founder:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Denys_Cowan

>>94403659
Well good then. Comics haven't had any real political edginess to them since what, the 60's? Nowadays they just play at being politically edgy.
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>>94403336
Graceful Lines concepts arent here btw, its all Adhesive's. Otherwise, good job collecting these together.
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>>94403844
Oh right, not sure how I fucked that up.
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>>94403844
Fixed the text version by adding
>>94378525
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>>94403886
Another heads up, we abandoned Grace's bimboesque aspect and made her more of a fashion, vapid supermodel type like so>>94379813
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>>94403741
How about just Cowen then? Or Cowan.
The "city" part makes it sounds fake. And yeah it is fake, but you know.
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>>94403915
I think some bimbo could stay, but thats cool
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>>94403915
Added. Thanks for the heads up.
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>>94403915
I just thought, you know, plastic
Maybe she got her powers from botched surgery
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>Watching this shit fall apart when I could be writefagging to help save it
>When there were some good concepts but they were quickly buried under samefagging and bumping instead of actual art and writing critique and discussion

And I'll look down and whisper "No..."
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>>94404081
What good concept you feel got cut?
Pretty sure I picked most of them up, some got dropped because you can't put EVERYTHING in otherwise it just becomes Avatar EU, or because people didn't develop them after their original posts.
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>>94403950
Maybe she can act as so yeah, not to much body wise

>>94403982
Not sure about that, but we never got to her origins. Doubt it will have anything to do with Bounce's though.
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>>94404081
>Could be writefagging to help save it

You have no good ideas to contribute to The Watch.

>>94404210
Don't tie her into Bounce's origins. That's super lame. Her origin besides maybe being a poor midwest farmer is unimportant. What is important is that she sees Bounce as a rival and that she's on the local "JLA" level team that deals with major non-street level threats. The Watch would be the "Marvel Knights" or "TV Defernders" of the setting.

>>94403949
Cowan works.
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>>94404244
>What is important is that she sees Bounce as a rival and that she's on the local "JLA" level team that deals with major non-street level threats.
Does that team have a token black girl? Maybe one of the dropped concepts?
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>>94404081
how can you post such a sweet pic yet be so salty?
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>>94404279
That Kendricks "Black Haruhi" concept?

Sure. She could be a sort of slightly incompetent Johnny Thunder esque character.

Maybe something like a black genie attached to an awkward asian guy and their interracial relationship pisses off blacks, asians, and genies?

People are also salty over her being the one colored person on the team. Some hate her because she's a token. Some hate her because she's attached to an asian guy and is thus not a "true" pick. Some hate her because she's sort of the asian guy's servant slave by esoteric genie law.

Have fun with the concept. They're comic relief. And for a couple that pisses everyone off they're probably the most well adjusted and loving in the entire setting.
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>>94404176

I'm mostly just concerned you guys are spreading around your ideas too much. You should pick 1 superhero and focus on her, or narrow the cast to like, 3 girls and put them on a team with a clear indication of why they're teaming up and what they're up against. Spitballing ideas for 5 threads isn't going to make a comic. As soon as it gets to the point where everyone is like "so... does anyone else have any ideas?" it means you've run aground creatively. You need to either nut up and start drawing the damn comic, or stop making threads over and over before we get another Super-MILFs.

>>94404309

I have more, will post for "inspiration" purposes.
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>>94371269
Editorfag here, I'll explain the choices of name I made.

"Afua" is the traditional name given in Ghana to girls born on a Friday. It's a reference to Iron Man's Friday.
"Akuamoah" is a relatively common Ghanaian last name, and when I tried to search for meaning I ended up on a stupid astrology site that said "Akuamoah" was "the ingénue" and I thought it was fitting.
And then there's the classic aliteration thing.

>>94389804
"Milton" is Jim Kelly's middle name.

>>94403273
"Terri" was proposed in another thread by an anon and I think it's fitting with her connections to the ground (Terra). Walker because streets, and so some catty bitch can nickname her "Street Walker".
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>>94404380
Could be neat.
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>>94404390
Did you see the Super Hoes idea? That seems fun.
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>>94404390
Sweet, i actually think the pics are always good starting fodder
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>>94404390
I mean, we have a team of 5 instead of 3, we're not that far off.
DIfferent people have focused on different characters and it's probably better that way, it avoids the too many cooks thing to some extent.

As for why they're teaming up I think we're still going with something to the tune of this old thing
>Going by this >>94360991 Bounce origin the big corporation could be the cause of the accident. They could have hired local gangs to harass the
workers and sabotage the equipment. The same gangs being hired are the ones that >>94360887 brother joined. While Bounce tries to stop the gangs and looks into the sabotage she meets Tag. The two could team up taking down crime in the city.
>During their team up Joannie Q >>94360791 >>94360827 is wandering carrying her block of wood with her dojo's name on it. She comes across some street punks beating up an innocent person and calls them cowards for using their fighting ability to harm the weak. After she beats them in a fight she demands to see their master. She forces them to take them back to their hide out where Bounce and Tag are planning their assault on gang. The three team up and take out the leader leaving the scene for the cops to clean up.
>Mechanica could be spying on the newly formed team and meet them in the second arc. She is investigating international corruption, the same corporation that hurt Roberta and her family are doing the same on a global scale. This opens up the team to more world wide crimes and protect more than their neighborhood
Street Player being introduced later and reluctantly joining the team after they spend a lot of time in her restaurant.

> As soon as it gets to the point where everyone is like "so... does anyone else have any ideas?"
So not now then?
There have basically been enough ideas, there's a draft being written for a story.

This si thread 4 and I only joined in thread 2, I think that's the case of the guy writing the draft too.
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>>94379098
That's incorrect as fuck. Most of these heroes looked the part for their time, their designs only evolved over time as different writers tried different takes on them.
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>>94381515
Nobody said Haruhi, it was Haruko, FLCL. Which isn't that big of a difference but gets a better sense of how she fits into the universe. That being said, the OP that made her is long gone and nobody else cares enough to try and develop her further so whatever.
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>>94404390
>Pick one character or 3

Bounce

Jun (Better name than "Joannie Q")

Adinkra

Street Player

Queen Ghost

That's five. That's a middle sized superhero team.

>Clear indication of why they teamed up

It's clear why they team up. Pay attention. They're literally the neighborhood watch with different stakes in the community. Jun's dad was from the neighborhood. Street Player owns a diner. Queen Ghost has been fighting crime throughout the city solo before the team formed and focuses on the neighborhood because her brother's gang is making moves there. Adinkra is picked up from the college Jun goes to. Bounce is trying to salvage what little fraction of a family she has in the neighborhood (her son).

>Isn't going to make a comic

I don't expect anyone to do it for me. I'm posting here to see how my ideas for The Watch are taken. They're going to be a backup feature on my webcomic.

>Nut up and draw the damn comic

I see. You just want fap material. But me and like two other guys want to actually work on a setting.
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>>94404447

Super Hoes is fucking idiocy and you know it. As sexy as it is, who the fuck would buy that?

>A comic about superhero sex workers, written and drawn by anons who know nothing about black women or the sex industry as a whole

It's a funny one-off gag and might make a good villain crew, but if you try to center a plot around a premise that bad, God help you my son.

>>94404489

Points for collecting all those links. I can see you guys definitely have worked hard on this. All the same, where's the alleged story draft? Where's the storyboarding?

I admit I love the idea of crime fighters fighting corporate or white-collar crime, we don't get enough of that. Is this still set in Detroit? I really feel like it should be.
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>>94404560
I can't lie, i would actually buy Super Hoes. Sometimes its fun to roll in garbage.
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>>94404557
>Jun (Better name than "Joannie Q")
Jun is a male name in Chinese. Maybe "June" would be a good compromise.

>They're going to be a backup feature on my webcomic.
Are you Apache or another guy?
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>>94404560
>where's the alleged story draft
Some anon who I'm talking to on discord said he would do it. No guarantee of course but we (as a thread/concept) got started like 2 days ago. People here are way too eager.

>Is this still set in Detroit? I really feel like it should be.
Probably a fictional Detroit-like setting named Cowan.

I agree that the Superhoes could be recycled as a one-off gag villain team.
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>>94404244
Guess origins arent too important than. Just wanna see more of her and Bounce. May even commission art of them and post probably on the /coc/ board. Maybe anyways.
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>>94404560

>Story draft, story boarding

We're still in the planning stages.Or at least I am. This idea isn't even a week old yet.

>>94404489
I don't know about evil corporation shenanigans. That feel so done before, and I want to make the theme about neighborhood corruption and redemption. It's not outside influences that make the hood bad, its the people inside. It's about changing those people. Bounce and Queen Ghost are about saving their son and brothers from the gangsta life. Adinkra is trying to find a community to let the gods of Ghana roam freely in.

The corruption has to be internal so the redemption can be internal.


>>94404547
>Nobody else cares enough to try and develop her

Well I think "Nubian genie bound to a shy Asian master with a Johnny Thunder and Thunderbolt dynamic" could be fine as side characters on the same team as Graceful Lines. There's potential for comedy with them.

I do not see her personality being like OP envisioned. At all.

>>94404596
June works. Jun was a holdover of when I had her be part Japanese (a reference to the half black character of Great Mazinger Jun).

>Who are you

I'm the writer of: http://www.capeworldcomics.com

As you can see there's a lot of stories going on at it right now. And my artist is doing a comic about superpowered caveman. I got two text stories (one about the public domain superheroes Daredevil and Airboy and the other about superhuman children on a field trip) and a comic in front of The Watch so I'm not going to be able to get to them anytime soon.
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>>94404717
It would be a fun rivalry
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>>94404725
Hey, i say it's cool that you will still be thinking about it by then
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>>94393432
SuperHoes should be what people call them, not the official name.
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>>94404638

Really? I thought these threads have been up for at least a few weeks.

And why not real Detroit? Gives it an edgier, street kinda feel. Plus Detroit being the motor city and all, the "rubber" puns make more sense contextually.

>>94404725

>I don't know about evil corporation shenanigans. That feel so done before, and I want to make the theme about neighborhood corruption and redemption. It's not outside influences that make the hood bad, its the people inside. It's about changing those people. Bounce and Queen Ghost are about saving their son and brothers from the gangsta life. Adinkra is trying to find a community to let the gods of Ghana roam freely

You. I like you.

>Nubian Genie

That's kind of hawt.jpg

One thing I would suggest is making these threads a "African-American/black superheroes thread, plus Bounce OC work" instead of just an OC thread. More posters, less easy to ridicule.
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>>94371088
Those are all fucking terrible.

You made a female version of the main character of The Last Dragon, a female version of Cyborg mixed with Osiria from Overwatch, and basically Haruko Haruhara.

Well done guys. A lot of originality here.
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>>94404809
Either way, i think the idea is fun as fuck
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>>94404833
That's a great model for Bounce
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>>94404833
I think that's supposed to be the idea of the threads
Any black female hero ideas
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>>94404725
>It's not outside influences that make the hood bad, its the people inside.
It can be both. Having an evil corp doesn't mean that people living in the nighbourhood can't also be part of the problem.

>The Watch so I'm not going to be able to get to them anytime soon.
That's fine, I mean if you're just going to use them in your comics and slap your name on it I'm not really sure I'm too into it anyway, at least not before more stuff has been settled.
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>>94404897

I have more of her. Not much more, but stil.

>>94404873

These were kind of my thoughts on entering the thread. If you want to make a superteam you need rock-solid concept work, not "uhh some black girls with powers I guess." Especially since you will be taking flak for representation issues on top of writing about female heroes while being a bunch of dudes. Gotta basically have an impenetrable cast and premise for that.
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>>94404833
>And why not real Detroit? Gives it an edgier, street kinda feel. Plus Detroit being the motor city and all, the "rubber" puns make more sense contextually.
It's going to be not-Detroit or not-Flint anyway, but the other writefag thought a fictional city would give more freedom. I'm not married to either idea.
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>>94404926
Also all public domain
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>>94404897
A bit too far on the fat scale I think but I'm okay with it.
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>>94404897
Think we hitted a sweet spot with this look anyways.
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>>94404873
You realize none of the characters you're citing are original either, right?
The Haruko girl was mostly dropped 2 threads ago.

>>94404963
That's why the characterization and larger story matter more than "oh my God what unique powersets". Some aspects of that have been developped.
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>>94404984
Nobody mentionned that, but yeah that's kind of the nature of 4chan OCs anyway.
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>>94404989
As far as i know, she's the only one, so there is some variety
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>>94404873
>June like Bruce Leeroy

Besides them being black and knowing kung fu there nothing alike. You might as well try to say she's Bronze Tiger while you're at it.

>Akindra like Cyborg plus Osiria

Explain how a magic albino infused with the gods of her homeland and making bodies for them while being a shy recluse at an American university is anything like those two

>Haruko Haruhara

That character concept never got off the ground. It's been retooled into a biracial Johnny Thunder and his Thunderbolt group that are secondary characters in the story.

>A lot of originality here

There is if you'd just open your eyes and pay attention to what we're doing.
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>>94405028
>Some aspects of that have been developed.

We just need to add members to Massacre's The Sparks gang and maybe add one more super-gang and we'd have a story arc about The Watch trying to stop a superhuman gang war.
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>>94405012
Nice! It looks really good.
Its just a shame, you know, the not thicc enough thing.
But it's awesome and still hot.
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>>94405111
If we made her any thiccer, she be blatantly for fetish purposes only. Plus with this body type I think we can base her rival off as an opposite build of sorts.
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>>94404725
I've been trying to revamp Keanna's character to be something that sucks fewer cocks, I dunno how people think about this pitch:

Drop the reality bending idea. You can't balance that shit, you can't work with that shit, and honestly Scarlet Witch did it better anyways. It's just not that fun, as much as I like reality warpers in general.
Instead, Keanna's powers are built around slapstick. I'm not too sure as to how Bounce's "Hard Rubber" works, and if it's getting too close tell me, but the idea I had was that her body works basically like a cartoon character's, taking comical hits (but not much actual damage) sending her flying, sending exaggerated punches that cause her arms to stretch, and pulling out a ludicrous amount of tricks and doohickies from nothing.

Example: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kum1Z78mgzI

Anyways, her personality is somewhat chaotic to boot. I was thinking of making her personality something akin Homestuck's Meenah or Steven Universe's Sugilite, both characters inspired/voiced by Nicki Minaj. To put it best, she's chaotic neutral at its finest, generally selfish and fucking shit up for everyone for the hell of it, but not explicitly malicious. She's got a wry sense of humor, often taking the piss out of anyone and anything, using her comedy during battle to put her opponents off guard (or just pissing them off). Her work with the (Watch? SuperHoes? Not a fucking clue on what's going on with these teams) comes as some sort of court order a la 50 days of community service, which she does by helping her favorite super hoes.

Outside of the persona, Keanna is similar in character, if more down to earth in general. She usually speaks in AAVE, occasionally switching to a more Midwestern accent either when trying to look sophisticated or just to fuck with white people. I had the idea of her working parttime in a Dominoes for some reason. She'd probably be around 24, old enough to know better than to be fucking around.
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>>94405012
I really like it, it fits the nice midway between "THICC" and "GG levels of inflation fetish fuckery", though you could still go THICCER within reason.
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>>94404989

You've never spent much time around black women, have you?

>>94405057

I concur with anon that kung fu girl is a bit dull. Why not have her gain her powers from some old blacksploitation VHS and be super conflicted about it? Now THAT'S a character.

The albino one is... meh. Overcomplicated concept, but I want to like her.

>Ditched Haruko

Good. The less of lolsorandumb we have, the better.
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>>94405146
I was definitely thinking that about the rival yeah, very slim
But I'm just saying, i bet most all these girls will be slim to muscle fit, and it of a bunch if black girls, it looks unrealistic
From like, a community perspective
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>>94405146
>If we made her any thiccer, she be blatantly for fetish purposes only.
That's the thing, I think it fits her character to be borderline fat, and I have no interest in the fetish aspect, but I'm willing to let that go because of the stygma with fat characters on /co/.
I liked pic related a lot, but I think most people thought she wasn't hot enough.

The contrast with Graceful Lines works better if she looks a bit on the large side too.
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>>94405231
But also, those pictures are great and couldn't really argue with them
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>>94405228
>You've never spent much time around black women, have you?
I have actually, not Americans though.
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>>94405217
Its true, but we shouldn't be too shocked by the proportions of real black girls
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>>94405228
>Why not have her gain her powers from some old blacksploitation VHS and be super conflicted about it? Now THAT'S a character.
Really motherfucker?
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>>94405341
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>>94405238
How about we just make current Bounce a bit shorter and Grace taller? Kind of like Gogo Tomago and Honey Lemon from big hero 6.
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>>94405228
June's character points are that

1. She's the daughter of a Black Lightning/Jim Kelly hybrid that fought crime in the hood back in the seventies before moving to Hong Kong.

2. She's come back to her dad's hood hoping to reconnect with his roots while she's in America on a scholarship but finds fitting in hard. She's teased for being a college girl, for speaking with an accent, and for not being ghetto. That she's being harassed more than by the girls back home who mocked her for being half black makes her jaded against the hood, that and the high school named after her daddy is a shithole.

You don't get all that with "blackspoitation VHS" origin.
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>>94405366
Not my personal cup of tea. I've never liked the purple girl from Steven Universe look. But I'm certain a lot of posters here have saved it to their fap folder.
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Christ almighty what is wrong with you people
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>>94405460
Our mothers never loved us enough as children and we turned to writing and 4chan to cope.
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>>94405414
Yeah but... literally every other chick on the team is going to be skinny and/or short.
Bounce being a tall and larger woman contrasts better with lean/athletic June and short/skinny Adinkra.

I don't see Queen Ghost being anything special in terms of physique >>94403312, and we have nothing on that end for Street Player.
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>>94405642
I agree
The drawing is still great, since people are gonna do whatever they want with her anyway. I just thought it made sense.
Pretty cool to see her with GG
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So any idea on how Graceful Lines looks like? I imagine blonde hair with a suit that follows a white and gold color scheme.
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>>94405851
>The drawing is still great, since people are gonna do whatever they want with her anyway.
Oh no denying that.
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>>94405931
Sounds good. Should she be based off an existing runway model? I'm not really knowledgeable on those.
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Why don't you ride a (light) novel?
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>>94406315
because this is /co/ not /lit/
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>>94405416
Is she still half-japanese or full-black now?
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>>94406776
Full black, grew up in China instead of Japan.

Someone could revive the half Japanese rival idea though.
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>>94406024
I like that body for her, definitely
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>>94406024
Fine body base, but change the hair. Should be longer to be opposite of Bounce's.
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>>94407009
So we're bck to "how does long hair affect elasticity".
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>>94407106
I don't know where we landed on it being effected at all
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>>94407136
In ther small time where it was suggested Bounce could have elastic dreads.
Really though long flowing hair for an elastic character, how does it work? It it like another limb or thousands of other limbs?
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>>94407106
No not really, seems superfluous for both of them at this point. Just said long hair to be opposite of short.
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>>94407262
Yeah, i think it might muddy the use of the power set
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>>94407262
>>94407323
Well yeah but then just don't give her long hair. It's stupid if it's just hanging down while she's stretching the rest of her body.
Can't really thing of a stretchy character with long hair.
Besides Bounce's hair isn't that short.
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>>94401869
Or "Suck".
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>>94404560
SuperHoes is just meant to be porn. And who would realistically pay for any of this shit?
>A comic about superhero sex workers, written and drawn by anons who know nothing about black women or the sex industry as a whole
Nigga I'm black, which is part of the reason why I didn't want all the hoes to be black in the first place.
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>>94407381
Then Grace should have a short hair style as well. Something pixie like?

Also her suit should be a full body suit.
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>>94404638
>I agree that the Superhoes could be recycled as a one-off gag villain team.
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>>94407703
What? Could tie to the Watch dismantling a human trafficking gang.
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>>94407665
I'd say the exact short haircut is up to the artist.

Her suit's gotta be tied to her being a supermodel though, right? What kind of good supermodel one piece suit would look outrageous enough for her?
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>>94407565
That'd be good and simple too
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>>94407642
I said I'd pay
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>>94407781
Nigga, who the fuck are you? They're separate projects. Who do you think you are to think lesser of what we're doing? The Watch, Bounce and that Kung Fu bitch aren't any more special or sophisticated. We don't need your pity.
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>>94407926
I'm saying it could work, didn't want to piss in your cereal, sorry about that. I Superhoes gets off the ground more power to you guys.
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>>94407868
Suck corresponds with Stretch so I thought it'd be a good name.
Maybe Suck and Stretch could have matching costumes.

>>94407886
My bad. What exactly are you looking for out of this project? I think it's planned to just be porn.
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>>94407986
Yeah, its a porn/cheesecake concept, but doesn't /co/ complain they often can't have those things in comics. Sometimes silly sexy bullshit is just really fun.
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>>94407986
Would they also be related or previously aquatinted also then?
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We should have an OP plan before next thread
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>>94408068
>but doesn't /co/ complain they often can't have those things in comics.
I've been off of /co/ for 2 years, but I get what you're saying. Something kind of like Kill La Kill?

>>94408076
I guess so. Ironically I was the one trying to keep Suck Middle Eastern, but them being sisters with corresponding names and costumes is a really good idea. They could be half sisters though. We're basing Stretch off of Karrueche and she's half Vietnamese. And for all that shit yesterday the Middle Eastern girl I posted for reference has a black sister and is probably mixed herself.
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>>94408217
For sure, kill la kill even made sexuality and the body part of its message
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>>94408217
Nice. Any kinda sister angle is good bait.
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>>94408238
Okay, good. I'm glad we have a common ground. We're striving for something like Kill La Kill with this project.

>>94408266
I thinking half sisters. We need a personality for Suck though. Stretch is supposed to be uptight and kind of controlling.
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>>94408523
>We're striving for something like Kill La Kill with this project.
>this project.
I now get what's so weird about the turn this all took. It's another /co/co/.
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>>94408694
>It's another /co/co/.
?
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>>94408740
I'm guessing he means "it's basically plagiarism" but really Superhoes doesn't have to be, just similar themes.
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>>94408781
>but really Superhoes doesn't have to be, just similar themes.
Yeah, that's what I was thinking. Just similar in tone. I don't know what /co/co/ is.
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someone getting next OP ready?
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>>94407855
Thats not a bad base you know.
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>>94409834
Yeah, i like it
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new thread?
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>>94409448
>>94410101
lol
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>>94407106
Neat, we finally got some Afua art
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>>94408781
He means that it's going nowhere fast, and you're doing the equivalence of covering your ears with your hands and loudly going "lalala".

>>94410378
>finally
That image is from the second thread.
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