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How's Your Webcomic? #370: If You're Going to Make

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You've got a webcomic, right? Share your WIPs, concept art, pages, scripts, story ideas, whatever. Give and get comments and critique.

At least remember to post the goodie bag
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Scrub Authors GOODIE Bag
Here’s a short list of sites that any new webcomic artist or writer will find handy:
>*-Struggling to find that perfect FONT? Create your own using this link;
http://www.myscriptfont.com/

>*-Don’t forget to brush up on that ANATOMY:
http://artists.pixelovely.com/practice-tools/figure-drawing/
http://www.quickposes.com/pages/timed

>*-What’s a list without some reference STOCK IMAGES?
People: http://senshistock.deviantart.com/gallery/
Scenery: http://www.shutterstock.com/

>*-Here's a big fat compilation of CHARACTER DESIGN REFERENCE:
http://www.pinterest.com/characterdesigh/ (surprisingly not a typo)

>Links to get a rough WEBSITE started up:
Easy to use tumblr webcomic theme: https://www.tumblr.com/theme/39018
Do’s and Don’ts for starting a site: http://pastebin.com/kNR2W5mV
>Contact sheet if anyone wants to put information down, like their site and webcomic:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwfOSHXfrgvcf--PkPz9jXL6p5RqIsrYvXYwgQpgT3k/edit#

>DISCORD CHAT going on:
https://discord.gg/rXMbdqP


>Wise words from John Cleese:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5xPvvPTQaMI [Embed] [Embed]

>Invisible Ink:
http://courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_1.pdf
http://courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_2.pdf
http://courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_3.pdf

>Paper Wings
http://chrisoatley.com/category/podcasts/
https://web.archive.org/web/20140625035030/http://paperwingspodcast.com/

>Fonts for your webcomic on Blambot:
http://www.blambot.com/

>Writing Resources:
http://www.cienciasecognicao.org/rotas/wp-content/uploads/2013/12/Robert-McKee-Story.pdf

>Guide to promoting your comic:
http://miss-melee.tumblr.com/post/143483233951/

>Comics for makin' comics!
https://www.mediafire.com/folder/9pf1nwwa92lbp/Comics_for_making_Comics

https://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=how+to+draw+comics
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reposting this
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So much for the new pic lol
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Well there it goes the new cool pic they did last thread
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Basically done
Also! I just realized that all my fonts were wiped after my hard drive died, and I can't be bothered right now to find it, is this stock CSP font look alright?
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>>92986705
it looks fine, but it's...... not very comic-y. Got any sans-serif fonts in the default ones?
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>>92986958
these are the fonts that fits that description
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>>92987201
Ooh I like all of those, in increasing order. I have reccommended gill sans in these threads before, but it PARTICULARLY suits your art style
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>>92987247
how's this?
Doesn't look half bad actually
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>>92987332
love it. i've loved that font ever since pokemon cards and i love it now
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Finished my pic from the other thread. It turned out okay. I'm happy with the way the character turned out but the BG was still lackluster (which my goal was to not make it that...) at least I didn't do all white like usual.
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>>92987955
this is completely fucking awesome
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>>92987955

Speaking of all white, I finished this one today too. Although this was more the result of my wanting to just draw a finalized version of some concept art.

I did learn how to do text outline in Manga Studio which is the super exciting (for me, since I've lamented not being able to do that for years.)
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>>92986403
>>92986474

New Pic is for Losers. Old pic is safe and familiar.
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>>92987982
>>92987955
I seriously love your stuff, I'd offer critique but fankly I'm not good enough to. You got any inking tips?
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>>92987955
amazing, rest of you retards need to erase whatever you're planning to post and redraw it before you embarrass yourself
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>>92988132
>erase whatever you're planning to post and redraw it before you embarrass yourself
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>>92988080

I'm still learning myself. The best thing I can tell you is practice line weight variation. It can be very subtle but a thin line in the right place as opposed to a thick one can make a world of difference (and vise versa.)
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>>92988132
kill yourself
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>>92988316
Mfw I pretend I can draw
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>>92988132
>rest of you retards need to erase whatever you're planning to post and redraw it before you embarrass yourself
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>>92986044
>2480x3508
>3.34 MB
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>>92988132
Not before you erase yourself.
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>>92987955
The box is unnecessary, especially with ramming into your otherwise great composition and the gradient that feels a bit tacky. Your lines have that moebius-like feeling can be confident without such obvious digital effects. People use it to add "pop" to art that isnt so good otherwise so I automatically get such connotations.
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>>92985854
>If you're going to make a thread do it right
>Doesn't include the HYW acronym in the title so that it doesn't pop up in search
Come on, man.
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>>92983807
>>92985203

Thank you my man. I'll try to rework these poses.
As for Ezekihell's expression, it's more apathetic than anything. He's passionate about music and his friend harry, while a good singer, is not really a competent musician. The joke is that he sometimes play the bass parts on the studio releases. So Ezekihell's more like in a "serious mode" all the time.
Oh and Marie's short and fat. So yeah, that's why i draw her that way, but thanks for the body construction advices.

Also, reposting my shit. I just woke up so i'm not going to post the changes yet
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>>92985436
Harry's girlfriend is the owner of a popular bar in paris. They got disposable income, man.
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>>92991282
https://tapas.io/episode/709850

forgot link for my comic. I am stupid.
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>>92985854
This is /hyw/ #373.
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>>92991396
maybe it's time we lost count. Who care what thread number it is.
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reworked the poses for ophélie and rachel.
I'm better at drawing when i wake up, man. That's good.
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Not sure if this scene reads quite well so far, am I jumping around with shots too much?
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>>92991670
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>>92991677
I considered putting more on this page, but however I cut the scene up the page-by-page pacing felt awkward I decided giving the titular character a whole page to herself might be appropriate
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>>92991690
It reads well. You got two characters well established here so it's not a problem. You don't go all random with your scenes so it's okay. I'd be unreadable if you put establishing shots everywhere like some people do on their comic. When i draw a comic, i think of it like a movie, i establish the scene, then I see where i can place my virtual camera to work on the scene i'm writing. I really try to think like a film maker since this is the only way to do it for me easily.

bottomline, it's all good. And i like the scientist girl. It seems it's going to a place that's more lighthearted dark humor than fucking depressing dark so it's alright in my book
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I'm currently writing 2 comics, a one shot porno comic about pirates, and a long term fantasy comic. I've run into a little bit of a problem that I feel like I can really expand on. I accidentally made my "villain" a villain of because the plot says so rather than a real villain.

So, what I mean by this is; he's an honest to god good military cop who just wants what's best for the Empire. He doesn't drink, smoke, or really have a family (I honestly think writing him I made him asexual on accident) except for his father, the leader of the Grand inquisition, who would physically and emotionally abuse him and even go so far as to whip him with a cat-o-nine for stepping out of line. Because of this, he's stern and hard on the outside, but has a real enjoyment for childish and whimsical things like candy, toys like dolls and wooden trains and specific pancakes (Purple Bunny Rabbit Pancakes), however he feels like he can never really enjoy these things because of his position and rank, and because of his father. So he's an adult with the authority of a captain, but the brains and ideology of a child, believing in ideas of chivalry and honor. So, I guess the real question is, what now? Should I make him the main character or should I change him? And if so how?
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>>92988132
Since when is this a competition? Fuck off
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>>92992053
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In the very beginning stages of doing a new draft of a script about coming of age and people's relationshsips with holidays during the turn of the millennium. Hoping it'll actually work out this time.
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>>92992507
sounds boring already
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I just keep drawing sketches and I'm happy
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Side character: His name is Smoke

The basic idea of my comic is like Naruto during the chunin exams, kids have to fight/do missions and stuff to get grades etc.
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>>92993781

This guy looks pretty cool, I love his design. I've only watched a bit of Naruto but your idea sounds pretty cool. Can't wait to see more.

I have a question for the thread, is it possible to be your own critique? I know its better to share stuff with people for critique, but I don't really know anyone I can share stuff with. Plus I'm not sure about posting stuff online.
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>>92994077
From my (albeit limited) knowledge and experience, it's not a good idea to be your own critic.
You'll either be too lenient on yourself, settling for mediocre even though you can do much better. OR too harsh, not looking at the things you did well, so you can keep them.
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>>92993781
Reminds me of Boku no Hero Academia with the forearms. I'd like to see a western take on the premise of young super heroes going to actual super hero schools.
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>>92994689
We had one of those, and it was criminally underrated
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>>92994689
>>92994963
Aren't there several but a lot of them just don't get talked about due to obscurity or being terrible. It certainly doesn't seem like a totally ignored subgenre. Between tons of creators growing up with Potter and superheroes there's likely a whole bunch of comics and stories that aren't well known due to lack of proper promotion.
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>>92994963
I forgot about Sky High. Damn its been a long time.
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>>92994963
that movie was l i t
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I had the really autistic idea to try making a comic about wild pokemon trying to survive. I don't want the pokemon to have internal dialogue or speak in pokemon language. They'd just say their names and use body language. I really don't think that a comic with little to no speech would be very engaging, though.
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>>92995190
>I really don't think that a comic with little to no speech would be very engaging, though.
You poor, ignorant fool.
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>>92990057

You were right anon. It does look better without the box.
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>>92985854

When do you have to worry about your work being too similar to another story?
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I'm going to make a comic about a big guy and small girl talking about videogames and it will be a success!
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>>92995939
Never. Your execution will probably not even resemble that other story's unless you're straight stealing imagery from it. Even accidentally stumbling on the same character archetypes and story beats can yield wildly different results that appeal to totally different people.
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>>92994077
You should be able to criticize your own work, it's part of improving as an artist/writer. As you learn more about your medium, you'll be better able to notice what doesn't work well in a picture/story as you make it, and you'll make changes accordingly. Still, you'll never be able to catch everything, especially if you're still learning, so getting critique from others is also helpful.
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>>92990851
the acronym has never been legitimate
though it doesnt hurt anything
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>>92996298

Yeah I agree, you should be able to learn from your own mistakes, I just wish I knew some writing group I could go to, I was a part of one, but the leader stepped down and no one wanted to replace them, so the group stopped.
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>>92985854

ahem, I made this page this mourning in hopes of becoming the new paid artist for moonlit brew, I made this page in less than 2 hours start to finish in my own weeb style which you can see me struggling to come up with in this video where i recorded myself messing up over and over again in the beggining because I forgot how to anime and manga and it took me a whole second to channel my inner weeb: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IXCOmHPB6io&feature=youtu.be
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>>92997197

im pretty proud of the page art but I dont like the way my word balloons turned out and need to re-do them, I tried to do the same word balloons I did for my FATES CHAOS project and it doesn't look right for the weaboo style i came up with to mirror the original artist take on the... manga? webcomic? ...manga webcomic? does this actually belong on /a/ now that i think about it?
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>>92995391
Welp, I know how I'm spending my afternoon
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>>92992012
there's nothing wrong with a sympathetic villain. The important thing is that he opposes the main character. The protagonist can totally be morally inferior to the antagonist, i mean everyone loves watching Zenigata fail to catch Lupin
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>>92993781
So in other words the GOOD part of Naruto. Cool man
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Do we do writer/artist meet ups in this thread or does that go in another general?
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>>92998126
You can try to do that here, I don't know of any other place to do that
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>>92998126
You can post here. Just the other day I saw a "Work on your writing thread" around here, which I think would also be an appropriate place to post.
Do you have a sample of your work up anywhere?
I'm mostly an artist, but I would also like to do a little writing and vice versa if I had to work with a writer.
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>>92998496
I don't have any work posted but I put my e-mail in the name field. We can share samples if you'd like.
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>>92993689
Shame mystery train ain't getting greenlit.
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>>92997321
You know /a/ is gonna call you a faggot and send you back here.

The only time non-nips are respected by /a/ are those who made it into the anime industry.

Such as Shindol himself (A New Yorker) and a Brazilian man who draws Shoujo shit.
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Pipsqk,
You should redraw tails gets trolled as your comic practice.
You'd be to lazerbot like murata is to ONE
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you guys having artblocks?
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>>93001882
No, I'm just grinding out page sketches right now
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>>93001882
nah just sudden commissions
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>>92997321

quick fix... i can do way better word balloons than this... but i really need to do the next page of FATES CHAOS first then I will fix these word balloons. ^^
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>>93000516
this could be godlike
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Does this character look "cute"?
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>>93003338
With a bit of work, I maybe can fap to this.
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>>93003338
Kinda, more creepy cute than anything. Adding some eyebrows could go a long way
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>>93003338
I personally feel as if she goes beyond the yandere aesthetic and heading for the psychotic range.
I guess it's the fact that it looks like she's almost biting her lip while at the same time smiling. Looks kinda creepy.
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posting my comic.
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>>93003830
cute but some of the lines cross into other characters and objects and need to be cleaned up
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>>93003338
not very, mainly due to lack of eyebrows and small pupils. if the features were more delicate though, it's possible.. cuteness could be attained.
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how can you tell if you're going to make it or not? when is this going to pay off?
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>>93003338

Yes.

Looks like someone who has a gentle soul, but has suffered a lot (Is his/her nose cut off?) and/or has some beastly features.
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>>93004679
Ideally, you're not supposed to care if you make it or if it will pay off. You should only care because its a story or gag you want to make.

That being said, I also worry the same thing, because I have huge plans for what im working on.
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>>93004850
This. do it for you. all successful things are done that way
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>>93004679
Once drawing itself becomes its own reward.
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>>93004850
>I have huge plans
What are they guys? Putting it out there makes it feel more real. Someday I want to have a sort of studio suite where I can work on my comic and other artists are just rooms down. Eating lunch together and discussing ideas, sometimes we'd be missing a few people because they're pushing deadlines. I can imagine staying there all day.
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Can you just self-publish an issue and sell them at cons or should you have an avid online following beforehand?
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>>93005289
>tfw art school was just like that.
I almost wish I didnt graduate the other day, because now we're all going our separate ways.

Anyways my plans are to gain such a huge following I could pitch it as a short tv series or video game. Mostly video game because I've had this idea since middle school
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>>92987955
The right arm/shoulder looks just a bit off, like it's coming out of the center of her back. Maybe twist the back/breast a bit more to fix.
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>>93004311

Thank you anon.
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>>93003830
Wayward Vagabond is that you?
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>>93005401
it kinda depends on the con. there are some where people happily go around buying all kinds of sight-unseen comics, but most of the time you need some fame
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Hello there fellow anons. You guys seem to have more experience on this so I wanted to ask you about hosting comics.

What do you think is a good option or what are the pros and cons? Like I know you can pretty much selfplublish with your own website or with tumblr, but there is also tapastic and webtoons and similar. What are your opinions?
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>>93006078
I still support the free comic hosting sites meant for hosting comics.
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>>93006078
Just don't use tapas or whatever if you intend to ever have publishing rights because they're a shady business.
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>>93005868

No! Just a guy that look like him. At first, i trying to redesign him to make him to go far away from his design.

But all of them were pointless. So, i have to deal with the jokes.
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>>93003830
Gimme the link to that shit dawg.
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>>93006483
http://character-limit-blog.tumblr.com/

Here you go.
[WARNING]
This comic might confusing and crazy and stupid.
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>>93006252
Has there been problems with those sites already? Or is it because of how they "profit" system works?
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>>93007176
There was a very shady right of first refusal clause added to their terms of service a while back. It basically said that for any comic on the site, they had the right to make an offer within 30 days of that comic being given an outside publishing offer. Right of first refusal is something most publishers have to pay creators for, so this was seen as a shady way to restrict creators for Tapas's own gain.
Thankfully, they removed that clause, but a lot of their trust with comic artists has been broken.
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>>93007483
I see. Checking on the issue now, seems Tapas says they wanted to "help" creators because sometimes they accept unfair offers, but if that's the intention they should probably just offer advice in that area instead of outright sounding shady. Thanks for sharing.
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>>93007862
>>93007483
honestly, hearing the full details of that, i like them a lot more now.
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>>93007884
The road to hell is paved with good intentions.
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>>93007977
and the road to heaven is paved with well-meaning mistakes. and also believing in jesus. point is we dont know. it's best not to trust any of these large organizations very far
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Sketching out a rough draft for some cover art
Thoughts?
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>>93008283
good setup! i think both of the right legs that are visible could use a bit of tweaking vis-a-vis the knees
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>tfw main dream is to have a successful webcomic with a thriving fanbase
>tfw been creating stories and characters all my life
>tfw don't want fame or attention, just to make stories that people get addicted to. Want to see them feel things for fictional characters on a screen.
>tfw times are changing
>tfw people only read comics now if they are progressive enough
>tfw no latinx trans* poc queer omnisexual characters
>tfw if my comic does become popular, then risk having a fandom like SU, HS, or Undertale
>tfw possibly having to watch as your fans tear each other a part because someone didn't color the skin dark enough
>tfw what's the point
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>>93008710
Dude don't give a shit what kind of fans you might get or whatever just draw what you like and people who like it will read it. The moment you try to pander to anyone but yourself your comic is no longer yours.
The chances of you becoming like Homestuck popular and having a rabid fanbase are slim to none.
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>>93008710
no matter what it seems like, there's still more of us than there are of them, and neither of us have any money. i have to quit an average of three comics a year due to inclusion of trannies in a way that I can't just ignore. You're fine, Sisters. Make a comic I'll enjoy.
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Haven't been here in fucking forever.

Trying to finish up my page after weeks of freelance. Worked one a few pilots and helped work on a scene for a show in the Middle East.

Might but working on a the first season of some upcoming cartoon hopefully.

BUT ANYWAYS. Nearly done with this. Just need to recolor/work the background on panel 3, finish his body on panel 1, sidewalk on panel 5, and the rest of the final panel.
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>>93009383
Glad you're still around!
>working on pilots
not surprised at all.
>show in the middle east
what?
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>>93008283
Here's some stuff I noticed about your poses, hope this is useful to you! (and that you can read my chicken scratch)
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>>93009489
pips may have left us, but you are nicely filling in his shoes, burgundy-line guy
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>>93009525
I've been here for a while, I just took a break
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>>93009482
Yeah some cartoon show that's made in Jordan. Just a couple of sequences since they were looking on the job site I browse for someone to finish where their storyboard artist couldn't for some reason.

Don't think the series is released or anything since I can't find it anywhere online so I'm keeping hush about it out of respect.
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>>93009489
Holy shit thanks Anon, this is great.
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looking for writer
*raises pinky*
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my comic's been on a bit've a hiatus of late but here's one've my newer pages
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>>93011150
style looks familiar, but I do not remember you. this is pretty fucking gnarly. i love how he has a mouth despite being a mass of tentacles
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>>93003675
>>93003750
>>93004342
>>93004725
>creepy cute
>psychotic
>suffered

All things I were aiming for, thank you anons.
The lack of eyebrows and small pupils are a specific/deliberate character trait, although I was not intending to make it look like she had no nose, more of an upward angle, i'll have to work on that

pic related are more (slightly dated) examples of the design
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>>92985854
Hey guys, for anyone reading Boys Land in these threads, I wanted to share this page/poll just in case you missed it or haven't seen it yet.

http://www.strawpoll.me/13107063

We'd like to use the results to understand how people feel towards some of these characters so far.

Also, if you haven't given it a read yet, we got lots of content right now and we're gonna be heading to our finale of the first arc soon! About another month and a half I think and we'll be done.

http://boysland.thewebcomic.com/archive/
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>>93011886
i voted!
but man it was hard to pick, because i love the main two so much, but I love mr glasses kid a ton too. and the villain that always gets hurt is great
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>>93008710
You know, dont give a fuck about this shit. It was stated by a lot of people that if character is TRIGENDERED HELISEXUAL TRANS-FEMALE MANGOKIN just to pander to "progressive" tastes, then this character is not good.

I, myself, have similar sort of problem with comic story, but I don't think that my problem is interesting to spew it out.
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>>93011959

Yeah! Thank you for voting and for reading up to this point, the fact you love any of them means we're doing something right haha!

This really makes my night gracious anon
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>>93012195
i actually feel better about these modern problems since people are more vocal than ever in opposition thereof, and downright unified
even pinkos like the kids in the hall or tina fucking fey are ripping these folks a new one. have you seen the latest season of Kimmy Schmidt? you should. makes you feel better.
>"I'm trans-ghost"
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>>93012243
i just hope someday people feel about my comic the way i feel about yours
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>>93012296
Share with me what your comic is please, I'd like to read it if it's up somewhere.

Honestly, I don't have a ton of time to read a lot of comics, but I'd like to look at it when I have time.
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>>93012267
Sorry, my english is retarded and I haven't seen a Kimmy Schmidt.
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>>93012356
well jeez now i look like a suckup. i'm only gonna expose myself because I feel like you might actually like it. if you havent already and decided it's the poops.
http://kiwidayn.comicgenesis.com
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>>93012361
t'is a show on the Netflix. starring that cute girl from The Office and basically all of the early-00s SNL cast in various cameos. it also has fucking Simka, and a a hilarious sassy gay black man. oh and most recently the cop from The Mask
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>>93012405
Oh ColdFusion! It's always great to see you in the comment section, the writer and I love to hear from you. (and anyone really, but y'know you're a regular)

The style is cute, I'll bookmark it and give it a read as much as I can
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>>93012525
yay! It's always nice to make that connection with a fellow fan of retro-styled stuff.
Saturday morning lives on in our hearts, r-right?
there's over 2000 of the shits, i don't.. expect you to get through much
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>>93012647
Haha yeah, I keep the nostalgia burning in my heart and always remember what it was like to be a kid.

I saw lots of updates in the archive, yikes, 10 years of content! haha I'll do my best
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>>93012707
it goes all the way back to 2002. but aint nobody needs to read that pencil-mess. I mean I didn't see all of original dragon ball until yeaaars after the end of DBZ aired, and I think I'm not alone in that. fuck it got weiiird at the end.. goku went to some kind of demon world but it wasnt the same hell that's located under snake way..
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what would you do with a god-tier artist at your side?
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Go ahead and laugh. I know you want to. All of this will be redrawn digitally and uploaded tomorrow when I get my new tablet. Old one was a shit and broke down on me.
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>>93013047
Feel inferior
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>>93013047
draw action-packed porn
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>>93013047
>God tier artist by my side
>"By my side"
>I am not the god tier artist
I'd probably hide in embarrassment of my own art's inferiority.
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>>93013125
>that feel when your truck, tree, and mountain skills are that of an elementary schooler but your pokémon skills are highschool tier
it's okay, you can still get better. i dont wanna laugh.
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>>93013047
I am top tier bby
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>>93013047
Probably have them do all the line work and then I'd do everything else. Thumbing, framing, writing, toning, lettering, you name it. If i'm getting supported by an amazing artist, I'd do anything, probably even pay em
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why is art so frustrating? anyone else yell in frustration everytime?
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Ok real talk time, What kind of arstyle are you guys strving for? I've seen many try anime and "realistic" styles? How about a more tumblr "calarts" style?
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>>93013382
>tumblr "calarts" style
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>>93013047
I'd simultaneously hate and love him, like I already do with the people I know that can do my art style better than I can
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>>93013547
I mean it's appealing and suitable for comics, surprises me no one here takes that approach
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>>93013578
slay yourself queen
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>>93013578
That shit's overdone and ugly, man
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>>93013382
>>93013547
those are two different things...
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>>93013382
I'm trying to draw like spritecomics. like you know those clay models they made of the Mother characters? they were trying to sculpt sprites.

shit like Adventure Time and Ebichu came out after I started but damn if there isn't kind of a similar kinda thing going on. except they're actually good.
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Back to work on the next part. I haven't drawn the older girl in a while, so I totally forgot her design.
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>>93013876
fuckin kawaii
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>>93013382
Mainly pseudo-anime. I'd really like to have a style that's a blend of Kaneoya Sachiko, Yoh Yoshinari, with Funamusea's character design sense, and a bunch of other influences thrown in.
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>>93009383
This is cool as hell
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>>93013951
whoa. cool
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>>93013382
I'm still working on coming up with my own unified style. But from the other times I posted my art on this website, people were really receptive to the way I use thick lines so I guess something like that.

In my head it's like something that's kinda grafitti styled but im still trying to get it down
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>>93013382
Whatever the fuck I'm doing here. Working to improve my style. Fix and experiment to get it just right. People like my shading, so that's a plus.
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I'm redrawing the beginning of my comic since I've kinda became a ways better throughout my years of college,than when I first started it

I managed to finish the first half of the first chapter, but I'm not gonna upload until I finish the 2nd half. Probably won't finish it until this summer is over because, well, life is getting in the way of me just drawing.
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>>93014117
>3
They're actually CALLED cult control?
I love that got-caught look on her face.
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>>93014179
And then here's where I'm at.
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>>93014132
I like your cute faces too
also even on the simple ghosties, you've gotten the angles on the eyes just right
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>>93014184
Yup, a simple name for a simple police/military unit
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>>93014132
i'm a hell of a while too late for this, but the logo seems a bit cluttered
i like the idea, but it looks less like it says "Witch's Hill" and more like it says "Witch's HiⅡ"
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>>93014357
Got any suggestions for a fix?
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>>93014398
maybe erase a bit of the top part of each letter - just enough to separate them from the dividing line while still keeping it obvious they're horizontally aligned with the letters above
there are already stylistic notches in the letters so i don't think it'd look too weird
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>>93013376
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pPaEdvCs1C8
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>>93014521
I'm so glad that guy moved away after fifth grade
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>>93014457
???
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>>93014603
looks good to me!
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>>92997321
Weeb drawing style, and clearly you need to work on anatomy (not that you have no sense of it, just clearly in beginning stages of learning), also find the dialogue where everyone on this page talks with a heightened arrogance annoying.

But I do like how the red window with the tree flows through the page in and out of several panels.

Also you mentioned the word balloons. The grey border on them in weird? Try just black solid lines without varying the width. I dunno to be honest the whole style screams cringy webcomic, and changing the bubbles isn't going to change how you chose to draw it. You seem maybe ok with that? You called it weeaboo yourself?
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Heres the second rough page of the pokemon comic. I have never drawn an automobile till now much less a side profile of a person in a truck so this page is especially tistic.
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>>93014845
Don't reply to Bones, he's a troll and/or idiot. Critiquing him is a waste of your time
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And the last page of the first chapter. I'm gonna be using >>92995391 as a reference seeing as how I just came to the sad realization that my shit is just "Gon the Dinosaur" but with a charmander.
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>>93015112
Oh is that person is known? I haven't been on /co/ in forever. I doubt they could be a troll though putting that much effort into creating something. Their explanation of pride makes it seem like they want to try, so wherever they are at craft wise they still deserve a critique to work on whatever improvements?
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>>93013382
A bit late to the party here but I'm personally trying to get a blend of not-so-realistic and cartoon-ish styles you could say. I don't want it to be the typical (and overdone) anime style although that is the best I have got after years and years of being mostly a weeb.
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>>93011376
I don't often post, the last thing I posted was a few superhero characters and that was a couple've months ago, glad ye like Merelaghul, he's a prize dick. hahah
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>>93013951
my dick is hard
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>>93013382
Genndy and/or Mcrakken style.
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>>93013382
I suppose mine would be a bit of a mix with Kouta Hirano, Berserk and Bleach.
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>>93015213
you can tell by the specific stuff he does that he's definitely fucking with us
nobody believes it at first, but you'll see eventually
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>>93015312
>merelaghul
oh that's a good name. i wish i had things like that in my comic more often, i actually have some good names set aside for them
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>get lonely when working on comics
>tab back to 4chan
i can never get shit done
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>>93013951
Awesome man
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>>93017044
Same. 4chan is too interesting to work on cartoons.
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its going ok. i hope i can make something that hasn't ever been done before.
>>93013951
this looks interesting af
>>93009383
great camera angles
>>92995822
would love to know more about that glove
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>>93019013
pic unrelated right? if you aren't still in grade school this is embarrassingly bad
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>>93013047
Bitch, I'm already god tier myself. I'm one of the best artists in the world. Why would I surround myself with inferior faggots?
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>http://royallolicomics.blogspot.com/2017/06/tea-love.html

Not going to lie, not only is this the shittiest thing youll ever read in all of hyw history, this was probably the most unpleasant experience of my life rushing this. This was basically worse than getting a cavity filled while doing math hw at the same time.

At least not all is lost.... i feel inspired to draw something that doesnt make me want to vomit upon viewing now.

Im basically going to stop writing love shit and doing comics in general for a while....
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>>93019013
that's... actually weirdly cool. looks like a neat spaceship sculpted outo f a rock. at least from the thumbnail it looks really good, then up close it's quite wobbly. which is a talent on its own.
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>>93022197
seems like a lot of work to do for something you clearly didnt care about
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Little Lety the Vampire is our award winning webcomic, and now has been pitched by Cartoon Network. Take a look at her: www.littlelety.com
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>>93023949
fucking cute as hell. good luck on the pitch
that worm is an extremely unoriginal design and I don't even care.
is that a possum? fuck i love possums.
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Is Tails Gets Trolled unironically the greatest webcomic of all time?
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Guys, what do you think about books with /co/ style art?
It's mostly words, but there are drawings included

If it's good, would that be something you'd be interested in?
Let's so 20,000 words or below.
Light novels, if you will.

Doesn't cost money, it's free to download and read, but creator has a patreon for people that want to support them.

I'm asking for polling purposes.
It's not out yet.
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Goddamn I'm gonna have to go back and rewatch episodes of pokemon now to remember what the world is like
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>>93024598
yeah man, gumroad is the way to go with that
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>>93024691
enjoy!
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>>92997321

finished a new page last night, just getting online to post it, heres a video of me making this page from scratch: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iFSaYCwlwD0

This is the end of chapter 1, I hope you enjoyed it, something very important... and historically forgotten happens in chapter 2 so get hype! That is, if im even able to pull it off, because its just so epic and been done and yet not been done at all ever so many times before, if that makes any since. I dont want to talk to much about it until I start posting pages. Also people are telling me to put my pages behind a pay wall and just have the first chapters of my projects for free, but the rest you have to pay a dollar a month to see on patreon. Im seriously considering this... But what do yall think?
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GOT MY TABLET FUCKING FINALLY
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>>93014845
>>93015112
>>93015213
>>93015939
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It's been a while since my tablets been down but more Ghost Puncher content is on the way!
Lots of story stuff has been being planned and there are many exciting ways this story is going to go.
As far as art goes, I have redesigned Atlas to be less generic looking.
His original design was very basic and cookie-cutter, with a red jacket, jeans and sneakers.
With this new design, I gave him a Ghost Buster style jumpsuit with spooky patches on it.
The back of the jumpsuit will have a pretty sweet logo on it, but you'll have to wait for it.

I much prefer this design and I hope you do too!

Stay tuned.
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>>93026801
Here's the old design for comparison!
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>>93026801
A bit of nitpick but the color of the "Ghost" word doesn't look good over the pink gradient. Is not that it gets lost per se, but it's just not the greatest contrast with do much light in the middle. Maybe if it had some inverse color strokes like "Puncher" does, but seeing the flames I'm not sure how it could work better. Have you tried other combinations?
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>>93023815
... was this supposed to be an ironic Fuck U?
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>>93026801
>>93026821
loomis
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>>93027296
It works best against black and other colors
It won't be used against pink often at all, only in this instance
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So I may actually go ahead and re-do a bunch of my earlier pages cuz they're 3 years old and I wasn't really sure what direction I was going. Example
2017-2014
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>>93027397
no way dude, it's just.. you agreed when you posted it that it was kinda crap, and I can tell you didn't even care while you were making it. YOu even put in little author's notes making that clear. So... why do something like this, that must have taken forever?
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>>93027499
The composition on the left is way better, but the colors on the right are way better.
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>>93027546
The bright yellow sand looks kind of silly though, doesn't it?
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>>93027499
I agree with this anon >>93027546 left looks way better but the colors are a bit too dead even for a desert. Although the old one is a bit too bright I would say, how about something in the middle?
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yo, witch hill guy
catching up now
your backgrounds keep gettin better.
and i love how frustratingly unhelpful the ghost is
page 8 of chapter 13 has a typo, somethings instead of something
I'm really intrigued to see where this goes
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>>93027614
>>93027546
Somethin to this effect?
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>>93027709
Yeah like that. It looks better.
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>>93027613
bright yellow sand is what you should have if the sun's out (complete with super dark shadows)
what you have on the right looks like sulfur dust. it's bright piss yellow despite the dull lighting
the left is more correct coloring for the dull overcast day, so yeah. it's definitely an improvement
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>>93027709
see whereas this looks like the sun has come out more
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>>93027750
>>93027724
Decided to try anons idea of the sand getting desaturated toward the bottom
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>>93027963
The desaturation works well too, gives more of a "distance" feeling.
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>>93027539
I wish it was done way quicker, but i guess even crap making can take a while. Forever to me anyway would be like a month of work. This took 15 hours.

I did it because its a bad habit to post WIP or leave things half way done Also, i really wanted to hear from tentacle guy again....
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>>93027963
interesting, this makes it look like the sun's coming up in the distance.. or it would, if it also got darker as it got desaturated
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>>93028018
I suppose. It's just.. as you pointed out, it's no masterpiece.. and that time could have been put towards something you genuinely cared about. I don't mean to discourage you, at least you put something out. That puts you ahead of everyone who hasn't. I'm just curious about your motivations that's all
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>>93028018
>even crap making can take a while.
everything you make is crap until you take the time to learn and make something better.
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>>93027963
Accidentally baleeted my post, but yes, looks much better. I still like the hazy blues and greens of the original, but this works in a different way.
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bump

so this is why it was said to just make these on weekends
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How do you fuckers find the courage to post your comic in new places, especially ones with cynical, volatile communities?

I'm always scared that my small fanbase means I might accidentally build up a hatedom before a fandom if I'm not careful where I share.
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>>93029612
Mostly by not giving a damn fuck and just hoping people will like what I'm doing, which is in turn something I like.

>especially ones with cynical, volatile communities?
Well this is a good practice place
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>>93029457
this thread was made late on sunday
besides lots of stuff is going on
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>>93029612
>post your comic in new places, especially ones with cynical, volatile communities?
I don't! nobody knows me, but nobody hates me.
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You just gotta post man. Thats all I can say. There are tons of artists who get mad hate and/or get memed on but still post regularly. If they express genuine criticisms, improve what your bad at. If they just hate on you for existing, ignore them. Once you let yourself get baited, they won't let you leave unscathed.
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>>93029612
Just go for it, man. You'll never no until you share it. You really shouldn't worry about hatedom, its more likely people will just pass over any small comics they dislike than take the time out of their days to hate on them
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Crossover kino
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Some of my characters interacting.
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>>93029612
Don't post often. Just a little taste. See what the reaction is. Then fade back for a while so people forget it.
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>>93029612
The biggest hurdle every artist needs and should get over is the fear of rejection.
Many of us were given praise as children and it warped our sense of reality.
If you throw yourself out there and take the worst of the worst with stride and learn from it, the only place you can go is up.
Don't be afraid to show your stuff off and be told it's shit.
A single person pointing out your comic or art is garbage is more constructive to your journey as an artist than 10 people telling you it looks great.
You've gotta fundamentally change your mindset and how you look at your own art.
And also don't be Tom Preston.
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>>93030120
Who the fuck is tom preston
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>>93030212
Google it, read up, and learn how to never behave if your comic becomes popular.
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>>93030212
He is also known as Dobson
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>>93030433
>>93030239
I actually went to Encyclopedia Dramatica to read about him and ended up getting pissed off by the site itself. But still, inflation is degeneracy.
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>few hundred fans
>want to start a Patreon
>no idea how to do anything, what to offer patrons, what to use Patreon for in general, etc.
Fuck this shit's underwhelming and I have like no experience in stuff like this.
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>>93030605
*overwhelming
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>>93030605
offer them lewds of characters in your comic for $5+ donations
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>>93030605
Early pages are a popular reward, as well as WIPs, bonus art, and streams
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>>93030764
To be honest I've thought about that, but I've heard that drawing lewds/porn can have a negative effect on your reputation, and I want to make a living off of my art without only being known for porn.

>>93030785
>Early pages
Can this still be a decent incentive if you don't have a consistent update schedule?

>bonus art
My only problem with this is that I don't want anything locked behind a paywall, (unless I do do porn, in which case maybe only the 18+ stuff would cost money/patron status,) but I've heard of people offering to take requests from patrons.
Is that a good idea or does it get too easily out of hand if you start getting a lot of patrons?

I don't want to offer something I have to go back on should I get lucky and build a large following.
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>>93030595
I personally found the bad webcomics review funny
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>>93030605
>few hundred fans
bot followers don't count fag
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moving on to lines I guess
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>>93031030
Why would I go through the effort of making fake fans if I was gonna stop at hundreds?
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>tfw too busy with school work
>loves video games way too much to work on webcomic
>Absolutely incapable of staying in my chair drawing for extended periods of time


Guys,how do you do it? I just can't focus long enough.
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>>93031844
tell myself i cant play games til each comic is done, then I get a day off anyway (gotta take time off from drawing).
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>>93029930
>Ghost girl
Looks like I have more competition.
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>>93031844
I just set a goal and lock off anything until I reach it.
Until I finish X, no vidya or tv.
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>>93032201
>>93031079
Ghost party
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>>93032932
That's not a ghost
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>>93034129
artist's hope and optimism: rekt
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ghosts are hot tho
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I know it's pretty late in the threads life, but these are the ruffs of some MC's I've been conjuring up lately. Without knowing a bit about them, how do they look?
I know the lines and anatomy are a bit wonky, but these are early, early ruffs. Do they have appeal? Do they have the wanted atributes of webcomic characters?
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Do you guys think my cover page should be bordered or should I fill up the entire page?
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>>93035924
more than a bit wonky, but ... frankly no. They look like a new cartoon on comedy central that will be canceled in 13 episodes but actually turn out to be really funny, like Life and Times of Tim
i realize you didn't ask for proofreading, but the word is rough. Your comic's going to need all the help you can get (and we are right here to give it, buddy), so juvenile spelling won't do any favors for its overall tone. If you're below 3rd grade like that, it's best you drop your WIPs by us for some proofreadin'.
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>>93035924
oh and it's also Ariel. Aerial is a british word for an antenna or an adjective meaning in-the-air. Unless that was an intentional thing, like a pun or like she has really shitty parents.
in case I'm just gettin' you down in the dumples, I can at least say they have a lot of personality and I can really see this working as a story.
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>>93029930
>>93032201
>>93032932
But can you write a comic about a ghost girl that tops this(pic)?
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>>93036185
I have no interest in spooky waifus
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>>93036123
>>93036155
Both those spelling errors were intentional. Not sure why I stuck with ruff, just easier to type out I guess. But I wanted her name to be as "in the air" as possible. I was thinking of changing it to just Arial, but is Aerial an outright bad name? Cause I kind of like it, but I'm not attached to it
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>>93036185
you know it, son
and i'd call it R-Yurei-D 4-this
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>>93036326
nah it's just that, like in your post, the gag was not apparent. (insert 'air apparent' pun here) Sorry for assuming you were a tard.
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>>92985854
Still working on the next chapter. Just finished the outline today, got a couple weeks to do the rest.
>>93032201
I like your ghost.
>>93035924
>Do they have the wanted atributes of webcomic characters?
I don't think that exists. If a "webcomic character" got a movie or were adapted from a book, ect., would they still be a "webcomic character", or would they turn into a "movie character" or have been a "book character" all of a sudden? Characters aren't really specific to mediums, characters are characters. Appeal is what happens when the audience feels a character is relatable, so to make an appealing character, give them a trait that real people have. Make them believable.
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>>93036372
Cool, she's been developing a jetpack her entire life, and her brother is the strongest man, pick related. Just a couple of character niches. Maybe I'll post a little more when the thread is a little fresher, and I get some of this webcomic stuff figured out
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>>93036717
Fuckin A, I must have been holding the tablet upside down
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>>93036717
reminder these threads are filled with literal children
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>>93037171
what are you, my parole officer?
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>>93037171
It's good to be reminded, but what does that have to do with anything?
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>>93037492
Anyone looking for serious feedback or discussion should go elsewhere, you are taking advice and suggestions from kids who don't even have testicle hair yet. Kids that barely know algebra, and they're supposed to know shit about creating something meaningful.
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So I just had the greatest idea for a webcomic! The story is about a man who fights monsters and wins all battles with one kick. It'll be called "One Kick Man". The protagonist gained his seemingly infinite strength from doing 100 jumping jacks, 100 crunches, and 100 bicycle kicks every day for 3 years. He loses all of his hair due to the stress from the regimen. Also, he meets a cyborg who becomes his apprentice and they live together.
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>>93037808
Oh, yeah. I already understand that this is 4chan. But people in these threads are beginner webcomics, and I don't even have my first panel drawn out. Seems like a good place for some discreet inquisition
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>>93037814
>ONE KIIIIIIIIIIIICK
Seems legit, I can dig it
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>>93015085
This a pretty decent start. How long have you been drawing?
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>>93037808
there's some pretty damn impressive kids around, guy. take a look
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Hello my 4th dimension-deficit brethren. It's your animation brother from another mother.

Just created my channel trailer and what I hope will be a good introduction to my channel. And what I hope will soon be a bi-weekly ongoing animated series.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pEvrF1n-pWI
Let me know what you bunch of /co/cks think.
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>>93037808
Son, if I need someone to do algebra for me, I'm going to go to a math teacher first and a kid second. Who else is going to have it fresh on their mind? Anyone outside of school promptly forgets it.
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>>93038776
can you summarize for those of us kinda busy?
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>>93038426
27 years
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>>93032201
>>93032932
There can always be more ghost girls

>>93036185
Mine's not really "about" one, she's one character in an ensemble.

>>93038776
It gives the impression these are actual real stories you animated, rather than things that are BASED on real stories. Kind of misleading, unless that's what you're going for. Either way, I like your stuff a lot dude and wish you success.
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>>93038824
I'm telling stories about some of the wild shit that can only happen on the internet. I'm sort of Tron-ing it up by showing a visual representation of everything we do.

A lot of this is just going to be me talking a lot about and introducing people to internet culture but every two weeks I'll be uploading the next chapter in an ongoing story about a girl treking around the internet and trying to be the first person to make 1-billion friends/followers/subscribers.
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>>93038952
sweet. love it. checkin it out right now
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>>93038950
>It gives the impression these are actual real stories you animated, rather than things that are BASED on real stories. Kind of misleading, unless that's what you're going for.

Honestly I've been struggling with this a lot lately. This might sound kind of ridiculous (and hopefully maybe some of you can prove me wrong) but people just don't like fiction on Youtube. They like let's-plays and blogs. So I'm considering telling a fictional story AS a blog.

I try to keep my stories as plausible as possible because I think the shit that happens here is pretty fucking fascinating (and some of the videos on my channel actually are about real events). Because of this a lot of people tend to think what I'm talking about is true and I'm KINDA considering letting them believe that.

If I tell this story as blog it might drum up a lot more interest and I MIGHT be able to keep it from blowing up in my face if I play my cards right.

If I introduce more fantastical elements then the fiction nature of this channel will become obvious to people who are paying attention. Then I never have to actually outright state that what I'm making is fictional and just let people figure it out for themselves. Some people will be pissed but hopefully more people will stick around.

I don't know. It's something I'm still kind of on the fence about.
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>>93037808
who 30+ here? maybe I'm getting too old..
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>>93039110
>27
I'm getting there man. Not too worried though. 30+ is too old to make it big as a rockstar but not too old to be a successful author/artist/cartoonist IMO.
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>>93039110
>>93039132
these days if you haven't made it by early 20's you're NGMI, sorry grandpas
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>>93038776
>>93039104
okay I love this premise. I feel like I wanna contribute stuff to you. I could talk for ages about old idiosyncratic websites I remember that are fuckin' gone now.
Not sure I dig the pixar style but .. fuckit, I'm subscribing
>>93039110
sadly yes. any grrls want to settle before it's too late?
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I am barely learning to draw, but I want to practice making comics. I already went through Understand Comics and Making Comics.

What's the best size for a webcomic page? I want to "adapt" Grimm's fairy tales to comic format, but i have no idea of how big the page should be.
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>>92985854

How do you get thicker skin? I want to create a comic but I'm afraid of getting doxed for all the embarrassing shit I've posted in the past.
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>>93039108
wait, it's fiction?
i mean, do you NEED fiction in this situation? are you really going to be able to write something better than reality?
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>>93039150
You little fucker, you made that acronym up didn't you.
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>>93039173
for drawing size, go 3000 px wide or above. I went below, and I've never stopped regretting it.
for display size, somewhere from 900 to 1200 px wide is the best to resize it to when you're done.
vertical space is, of course, infinite.
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>>93039194
Thanks.
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>>93039171
>I could talk for ages about old idiosyncratic websites I remember that are fuckin' gone now.
Fucking please do. I'm about to start uploading 3 videos a week and I'm goign to need shit to talk about.

>>93039186
It's a mixed bag. Some of the stories are real events that I'm just trying to give my own perspective on, some are based on real events that I have no way of proving happened and I'm just going to embellish the shit out of and some are just 100% made up because I feel like they need to be told (the only two stories that are in the 4O4 Tales playlist fall under that category).

Do you think I need to start making more of an effort to label what's real and what's not?
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>NGMI

What did he mean by this?
Seriously, I've begun seeing the term in drawfag threads and /ic/, but I can't figure out what it means.

Is it "Not Gonna Make It"?
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>>93039243
Ohhh I see, so it's true stories plus legends. since it's unprovable shit anyway since it's gone
right, awesome. remind me to bring up Pure Color Animal Park sometime.

naw naw you don't have to label it, if we're talking about legends, rumors, innuendo, people know what that is. the important thing is none of it is shit you completely fabricated to make a good story
and if there's speculation, it'd be nice if you phrased it that way, but it's clear you know what you're doing
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>hey guise, how do i draw, and how do i start a webcomic? :^)
>5 guaranteed replies
>I need motivation, i cant go on!
>5 guaranteed reples
>hyw, should i add a bow to this generic animu girl i made? :(
>5 guaranteed replies

>actual webcomic
>0 replies
>why the fuck did you post this shit here?
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>>93039330
Have a pity (You)
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Anyone remember that one time someone got triggered over a middle schooler's Instagram account and then raided it? What ever happened with that?
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>>93039259
>not in the know on spicy ic memes
ngmi
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>>92991805
Yeah, I like to think of choosing shots like moving a camera around a scene too. It only starts to get difficult when I don't a clear layout of the location and have to figure out the character's physical location and surroundings as I go.
Glad you like the girl, since she's gonna be the other main character to this story. I have a little depressing comedy planned, but overall I'm going for a sort of Invader Zim-ish tone with the humor.

>>92991677
And here's a few more pages
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>>93040846
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>>93040859
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Mine is going ok. Still no Patrons, though, which I desperately need in order to fund more pages and stuff. Here is the latest page, by the way, and if anyone is interested in checking out the motion comic, then it's here as well.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=21GyViLeK7Y&index=2&list=PLn4NfsYzRWhrPIDNf77qb4mjcAnB0JIm3
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>>93040872
nice backgrounds, how long did tha troom take u?
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>>93040920
Thanks, I think it took about an hour for the sketch.
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>>93040906
>Mine is going ok. Still no Patrons, though, which I desperately need in order to fund more pages and stuff.
>He needs money to get his webcomic going
Well. youre fucked
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>>93040906
>Still no Patrons
you need to step it up beyond this uninspired action shonen mimicry if you want patrons
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>>93041339
Seriously, you should be looking just about anywhere but the comic itself to get money.

Patreon is nice way to generate revenue from things that don't typically but it's really not something you should depend on.
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>>93040906
>no patrons
You really should try posting your comic elsewhere, as it seems the only place you have it is DA. DA really ain't a great site to find or read comics on, even a Tumblr would be better suited. Try even making mirrors on other comic host sites, like Smackjeeves, Webtoons, and Tapastic to expand your audience. Remember, unless you're already popular, your audience isn't going to come to you, you've got to come to your audience
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>>92988132
Jokes on you, I'm animating
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>>93003338
She looks deranged
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>>93039110
I am. I'm doing alright. But I think I'm too old to become a superstar. I can't really think of anyone in recent years who broke out after 30.
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>>93034129
uwotm8?
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>>93042064
Andrew Hussie did.
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>>93043432
And look what it got him. He's dead.
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>>93043566
Only because he made the very, very poor business decision to try making a game and not continue banking on his Homestuck cashcow.
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>>93040906
Draw porn comics, get so many patrons you won’t make your comics your primary job.
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