Is incase just phoning it in on the nonlewd pages?
Also is there a place for hybrid porn comics that combine interesting story but also have full on fucking?
>>89177953
It's a porn comic with a story and plot, and it does it well.
What do you mean by 'phoning it in'?
>>89178314
We had a thread the other day (that got deleted) where some anons broke down how his non-porn pages have some serious art hiccups like flat faces and shit line weight.
>>89177953
You should read Korean hentai.
Man Alfie has became such a bitch. I hope Incase pulls a story of her first time and what started her on the path of secret sluttyness.
>>89178359
Eh, as an artist I try to redraw everything with no copy/pasting, unless I am doing a character on the same background, but shit line weight is probably because he's rushing to get these pages out.
>>89178373
Who says I don't?
>>89178314
what >>89178359 said.
Plain Jane is still my waifu
>>89178394
What does copy pasting have to do with flat, 2D ass faces?
>>89177953
Look...we dont go to hus comic for plot....
>>89178418
I thought that was what you meant by flat faces, like, copy pasting features to save redrawing it.
>>89178430
I do!
>>89178430
I'm curious. I'd like some adventure with my lewdity. Or lewd adventure.
>>89177953
>Is incase just phoning it in on the nonlewd pages?
What's wrong with that page?
The faggot elf is desperate for a new fucktoy and the she-goat won't have any of that. I think it's amusing enough.
>>89177953
OK I've been reading Alfie and I've enjoyed it but it's not been full-on my thing yet, but that goat-elf lady right there has skewered me right in the fetishes. I want it to hurt me.
>>89178440
Are you... a woman?
>>89178440
So how is the plot and worlbuilding?
I'm not really interested in the lewd parts, but I still find Incase's art visually appealing.
>>89178502
No, just a faggy trap that adores Incase too much.
I mean, for example, I would LOVE some hentai like Boku No Picu, but with a fuck ton of story and plot, as well as all that sex.
>>89178516
I'd say it's good. But that's just me.
>>89178489
You and alduin.
That Elf is the greatest powerbottom I have ever seen.
Respect.
>>89178544
So you're a woman.
>>89178516
Pretty low at the moment but I detect that it's setting up some sort of adventure. They've been telegraphing it pretty hard.
>>89178564
I don't think it works that way.
>>89178544
>just a faggy trap
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>>89178547
I'm more into the pain than the bottoming but yeah. Unf. That is my jam.
>>89178587
You're a woman, Harry
>>89178516
It's pretty good. Not top-tier and a lot of space is reserved for the lewdness, but the characters are interesting enough to make you give a shit about what they're doing and the worldbuilding strikes a nice balance between having enough minor details to make it believable and being generic enough that mentally filling in the missing pieces is almost automatic.
>>89178516
It's about a hafling discovering her sexuality in a repressive culture. Some humour, some drama and some sex. Though InCase has been threatening some action for awhile now.
Bitch's be breaking out crossbows n' shit.
>>89178544
>>89178587
>>89178611
>>89178628
Thank you, this is very helpful.
>>89178359
>the art quality dips when there's no sex
>art on sex pages are still great
Obviously we need less story pages and more sex pages.
>>89178708
His goal for Alfie was to make a comic that had both good porn and a good plot, so I doubt he's going to mess with that balance a lot.
>>89178730
>a comic that had both good porn and a good plot
Ahh yes, the fabled Unicorn. Let us chase the beast together /co/mrades.
>>89178766
Perfection is not attainable, but if we chase perfection we can catch excellence.
>>89178605
Nah he's just a crossdresser
You've got to choose between beautiful, high-quality art or a consistent, four-page-a-week update schedule.
You can't have both.
I hope that goat lady doesn't have a dick.
>>89181457
What are you? some kind of fag?
>>89181457
You'll fap anyway.
We all will, and Incase knows it.
Can't wait for more best girl.
>>89181457
>Lady
She has no tits, and wide hips. She's a female(male).
One thing this comic needs more of is traps, maybe this is it getting done.
>>89182358
I don't see Vera in the image.
You must have made a mistake.your waifu a shit
>>89181457
Incase said a long time ago that the Alfie comic wouldn't have any futa content.
>>89182358
why does she need alfie to read it to her?
>>89183018
The power buttom elf is pretty much a trap.
>>89183392
I know, he /is/ one.
But this is Incase. We need more traps.
Trap on trap action would be nice. Maybe Goat lady(male) will acommodate.
>>89182358
Looks like Marco is a professional playa
Wake when Alfie hooks up with the hairy, smelly dyke friend of Marco's.
Oh maybe Vera fucks the other goat person in the woods.
>>89183211
She can't read.
It shows a disparity in education among communitys. Alfie is a working class halfling and she can read but plain jane is a working class human and she can't.
>>89183548
>when Alfie hooks up with the hairy, smelly dyke friend of Marco's.
Man I don't want to see this go down a NTR road
>>89177953
>>89177953
>Is incase just phoning it in on the nonlewd pages
as long as it's not gay shit..
why there needs to be gay shit anyway?
>>89186362
Because gay people like porn comics too? It seems a pretty straightforward concept
>>89186362
Because Incase likes gay shit.
>>89178373
no that shits just awful
Well I'm an amateur artist and I've started a porn comic that's story and character driven.
The response so far has been pretty good. I mean, at least by my amateur standards of viewership.
>>89186394
Well, than just make a comic 100% gay, don't mix straight porn with it.
>>89186521
What a faggot.
>>89186672
you are a weak fapper
>>89177953
Name of comic?
>>89185316
Oh, you better believe it's going there.
Why do you think we just had the whole "this isn't a relationship, I'm just fucking you for fun" scene?
>>89187320
Alfie.
Or Buttsmithy, if you're looking for something to Google.
>>89185207
but the note says she wrote a letter, and this letter was in response.
>>89187390
Thanks famalamski
>>89187401
She got someone else to do the writing for her, just like she's getting someone else to do the reading for her
>>89187401
I guess she had someone write it for her?
>>89185316
>>89187353
If it makes you feel better it'll probably end up going with Beanstalk saying
>Geez Marco I'm sorry your halfling gf turned out to be a little slut, maybe I can be your gf tonight?