/Co/Co/'s Bizarre Adventure: Nobody re-made the thread again

I knew something was missing in the catalog.

Anyway, in the last thread the idea of a big clash before CN City came up, with Rex and Aunt May dueling. Who else should participate in the brawl?

OK, so now we have a thread again.

Another thread in a long long longlonglonglong long line of threads.

We're in part 7, a part you were excited about 7 months ago.

We need to begin writing things out.

Oh, I thought long and hard about if making this thread again would be worth it; turn out is so low now, the holidays are here and not going away for another few weeks, I have my own busy time to attend to as well.

But, and this is important, I was made aware of something. Something I didn't see coming nor did I think was possible. It has inspired me to continue on this dumbest of ever increasingly dumb /co/ projects of ours.

Yes, you know it well too.

FIST OF THE bOrf STAR UPDATED
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qOeCVoDx23M

We don't have any reason not to pick up our feet and throw them into the deep end once more with trying to get this idiocy rolling again.

I apologies for nothing and make no excuses.

>>88319944
What other stand users do we have available to us... Sam and Max could be there.

Navis would probably be near the middle of the front pack.

We could take that opportunity to have Navis and Cybersix fight since they both have big cat stands.

>>88320115
>We could take that opportunity to have Navis and Cybersix fight since they both have big cat stands
yeah, that was an old idea I wanted to use.

We also have Goofy, the Wizard, Jane, Tempo and Mojo Jojo available, there is also a couple of racers without Stands in the list that could get caught in the crossfire of stand users

>>88320557
It's a good opportunity for Pym and Hex to see really weird shit they can't understand and stay the fuck away from it.

Tempo is Quakewoman, right? It'd be as good a time as any to establish her.

>>88321036
>Tempo is Quakewoman, right?
yep, the same. Originally she was going to be a foil with Crazy Jane, but their Stands would get along

>>88321455
The clash before CN City is also a good place to establish Jane's stand, if not sooner.

Actually, we could establish her stand in the build up to the Aberdale checkpoint. I imagine there's some bottle necking right before each checkpoint as racers begin to converge.

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sad.

>>88321550
I think the racers are less spread in the first two checkpoints due to the shorter distance and straightforward path. In the route to CN City is when they spread in several groups looking for easier paths and then converge when they approach the checkpoint

>>88322290
Well they do cross a desert on the way to checkpoint 2, plenty of opportunity there for getting turned around. Some racers could try to trick others into thinking they're going the wrong way in the desert.

>>88322703
are there any racers that are retired on their way to the second checkpoint?

>>88323350
There should be some who don't make it to the next checkpoint for most of the legs of the race and also those who drop out after getting to each checkpoint since it's too much for them to handle or their injuries are too severe to continue.

As for who those racers are, any suggestions?

>>88323404
there is a guy called Krosh listed in the doc that supposedly is retired early on in the race, Spike Witwicky also appears as a minor racer and Mr. Garrison riding IT has been mentioned a couple of times.

>>88324065
I don't know who the first two you mentioned are.

How would we make them look like fully developed characters before killing them off or retiring them? Or are they just going to be fully int the background?

>>88324821
the first one is from a russian cartoon I think, the other is from transformers g1. They will probably play small roles like Gaucho or Dot Han in SBR

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>>88319982
Fist of the b0rf Star is still going after all. This gives me hope for /Co/Co/'s future as well. yay.

>>88319802
Nice OP btw

>>88325336
I know, right?

>>88325100
Where do they make their exits? We should come up with or pick which racers are not making it past phase 1.

-Dan Backslide didn't make it to checkpoint 1 in time.
-Shocker got captured and arrested
-The Beetles decided to drop out of the race on the way to checkpoint 3
-The Chameleon is a racer, he broke the rules of no attacking other racers at the checkpoints, but got around that because of his disguises and hiring Watt, he still failed to board the Iron Vulture to phase 2 and was disqualified.

Which other racers don't make it past phase 1?

Oh, and I guess it's kind of neat how Watt, the scientist behind the electric era of Chane's Strickland, is defeated by exploding pillar propane.

That just happened unintentionally.

>>88325833
Spongebob bites the dust somewhere in the desert thanks to Goofy and there at least one background racer retired when the Golden Gate Bridge is destroyed

>>88326803
I didn't catch that before, nice

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>>88327423
Right, the pants guy.

I keep forgetting about him.

Is probably a good idea to separate the racers between the important ones and the minor/background ones

>>88327913
when he says that his pants were dry clean only, he's talking about the robot or his actual pants?

>>88328384
The robot pants ARE his pants.

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Wouldn't all this go smoother if we had a Discord to bounce ideas in rather than these slow-ass threads?

>>88329345
No, it wouldn't.
I've told you before: there's no way to keep track of a discord discussion. Things would get lost and those of us who have been involved with this project who don't use discord wouldn't know what the fuck is going on.

It also prevents anons from calling out bullshit.

It'd also cause there to be even fewer people participating since not everyone uses discord or even wants to use discord.

At least with a thread there's a way to view the thread when it's over, process and collect all the stuff that was agreed upon, and condense all of that into the doc.

speaking of the doc, was it updated? I only updated the stand doc

>>88328671
so it blows up or something once it falls into the water?

>>88330683
Doc 7? Yeah, I updated that after the last thread die and before this thread was made.

Sure, it blows up, or shorts out and sinks.

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are we going to give additional powers to Hex Stand like Tusk's acts?

>Make a point to show Shocker being a smug asshole and rude to the locals. He treats anyone who he believes can’t take him in a fight like this.
what if he becomes the latest person that mangles Joshua?

>>88332424
What more could possibly be done to that man?
Isn't he paralyzed from the legs down now?

I think Pym's stand is the one that's going to evolve the most.
Pym gets a stand from a jawbreaker, then absorbs a corpse part in Paris which gives his stand additional abilities.
Hex gets a stand from a corpse part he absorbed before they arrive in Spain.

Also, for Shocker's stand, are we going with it looking like a small dog that lets him swap places with anything he's touched that is within 50m of his person?

>>88332617
>Isn't he paralyzed from the legs down now?
well, he still has the other half for crippling, or could end up like Plucky and join the vegetables aisle

>>88333476
Maybe he gets... really bad electrical burns? Dies? Comes back as a plant zombie and gets burned again?

>>88329470

I didn't know this was suggested before, I'm not who you think I am.

But those are fair points, was just trying to come up with a way to speed things up a bit somehow...

>>88335072
It's been suggested at least 3 times now.

Past experience tells that anytime a /co/ project like this is taken to a different site, all anonymous contributions to it will cease.
Anons just don't go to other sites to follow projects.

>>88334084
dying would be too much and would release him from the constant suffering

>>88338815
Gets infected and used as a "human battery" for the zombie coffins?

OK, it's up to someone else now to make sure the thread doesn't die in the night.

Because I really don't want to have to make another one.

>>88338877
I was talking about what would Shocker do to him, but after that I think anything could happen to Joshua

who are Cybersix foster parents?

>>88329345
But this is supposed to be a /co/ project.

>>88332617
>I think Pym's stand is the one that's going to evolve the most
first he can enlarge insects, then he gain the ability to shrink to the size of an ant (I think), anything else?

>>88339479
Worst I see Shocker doing to some random guy is insulting him and maybe slamming a door in his face or refusing to tip him for a service.

>>88341066
I was thinking they'd be those robots who were the foster parents to that orphan in Buzz Lightyear of Star Command. I don't have any pics of them though.

>>88343111
Does he get the shrinking/enlarging powers because of his fascination with the Varrick capsule, or does his power let him tame insects?

>>88343833
Yeah, his fascination with resizing stuff started after getting the capsule. He got the ability to shrink himself after obtaining the Hero's ribcage that was somehow embed inside the grail.
>does his power let him tame insects?
Right now he uses them to pull his makeshift chariot, so there is a degree of control exerted on them, but I don't know if it comes from his Stand, some kind of tech or just plain domestication

>>88343982
It'd be more like beast taming since he starts doing that in Spain in the middle of the race after Scud and DAVE destroy his vehicle.

>>88344036
and of course Hex achieves it before Pym could even put the harness on the ants

>>88344229
Hex activates what?

Pym's the one with the making bugs big powers.

Or do you mean Hex activates his beast taming skills?

>>88344605
Hex is a cowboy, ergo he know how to tame a mount better than Pym

>>88319802
no one fucking cares about this shit anymore

>>88344822
What kind of bug mount do think think he'd develop a preference for?

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Tulio's mooks should be these guys from Bear Story (only chilean shit to ever won an oscar)

>>88345835
at first could be another ant, then after arriving to the next checkpoint Hex insist on getting a different bug (as long as it can't fly)

>>88345950
Those look like decent mooks to me.

Hey, since Tulio's part of the story isn't actually a leg of the race, they could ride flying insects during that part.

Like a giant enlarged South American flying stinging whatever. Pym enlarges a whole colony of killer bees (I have no idea if those are in Chile or not) and then Jack controls them with his style (What are we calling it? Buzz Kill? Buzz Off?) and those insects make up the bulk of their cover while getting away from Tulio.

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>>88347015
Tulio's barge and the Iron Vulture engaging in a gunship battle with smaller fliers besieging the former sounds like a good idea.

>I have no idea if those are in Chile or not
nope, but there are yellowjackets

>>88347407
Perfect.

Now we just need to set up Jack's continued growth.

He's supposed to get a hint from Strickland people in Aberdale about developing a proper style.

>>88347453
he starts practicing in Aberdale after meeting with the Strickland guys, right? He could consciously use his Style for the first time on the way to CN City, who is he riding with at that point?

>>88347791
He rides with Sam and Max to Nowhere, parts ways with them there, then rides with Old Jack.

>>88348027
Is Old Jack involved in anything that happens in Smallville or Springfield, or he goes straight to CN City?

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Bumpy

>>88348263
Goes straight to CN City I think.

We need to use Springfield and Smallville to set up the background larger plot that's happening.

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can Watt's robot use electric attacks like the other Mk III units or it just resorts to melee?

>>88349917
maybe we can have both Jacks face an opponent on their way to the City or inside the city so Yellowjacket can showcase what he learned about Style

>>88350005
It should be able to send electrical shock waves through the ground.

We could have Jack and Old Jack get mixed up with the big bottleneck clash on the way into CN City.

>>88350715
so, who are they going to fight? should be a recurring character or a minor one?

>>88351257
I'm thinking since Jack isn't in it to win it, just to get material for his new book, and old Jack isn't in it to win it, just to prevent the corpse from being reassembled, they could stay out of the fights and only aim to finish within the time allowed to stay in the race.

It gives us a "I do not wish to fight you." opportunity (i.e. "I don't want no trabble").

So it'd have to be someone who is just hell bent on fighting for reasons other than the race.

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Off-topic but before I forget, that bear made by Dobson (does it have name?) should be an antagonist in part 8 with the Stand that was suggested for Fat Albert.

>>88351623
>it'd have to be someone who is just hell bent on fighting for reasons other than the race
Is there anyone in the current roster or the stand doc that fit that description?

>>88352735
None currently that I'm aware of.

You'd think there would be some people who entered the race just for the chance to fight strong opponents.

>They can’t really fight it with their stands’ abilities, so they resort to hitting it with their stands and using MELODY to not suffer any damage until Loki’s stand breaks
wasn't it supposed that Sam and Max would beat up Loki with their Stands rather than attacking the giant Amerika?

>>88354243
They do both?

Odds are Loki is riding around on it.

>>88354745
due to its size, it would be easier to aim directly for Loki

>>88355683
I don't object, but I also don't want to pass up on them smashing its kneecaps, or whatever it has for kneecaps.

speaking of Loki's stand, have we decided on what are its abilities?

>>88356264
It's fuck huge.

When it belong to Cartman it was only powerful when he was fighting people he thought of as greedy, so now that it belongs to Loki, maybe he's tweaked it to gain power the more he dislikes his opponent?

Something like that is an option.

>>88356405
so the Stand would spend a good portion of fight being an oversized punchghost and then will bombard everyone with lightning once Loki gets pissed off?
will Melusine interfere in the fight or she is still busy blasting the springfield residents?

>>88357322
I'd say she has no reason to interfere with the fight since Loki is only attacking racers, not trying to take their places in the race.

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remember breast quest?

dead like this stupid idea.

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So is Herbie still in this? I remember he was suggested as a background joke who just keeps walking and somehow avoids any danger throughout the whole race.

>>88357846
No idea. We already have Stardust slated for this part, I think two bullshit-tier characters on the power scale would be too much for one part.

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So, I've been thinking now that I'm almost done with some projects and have actually been able to sleep. What kind of crazy ass shit will Pym be doing at the end? One of the things I loved about SBR was how Johnny's growth was shown in his growing understanding of his abilities, and how they got stronger and more bizarre. Like we go from shooting finger nails to a giant pink robotic linebacker that punches people so hard they spin to death in alternate dimensions. I really hope we can work out a good ending for this.

>>88358038
Lots of stuff can be done with making things bigger and smaller, like making microbes huge or shrinking down to survive in a tiny air bubble and resizing after someone breathes you in to gib them.

Or do you mean making the powers different and crazier?

>>88358435
the idea of reusing the effects of the perfect Stretch and Space to beat the final antagonists has been tossed around a couple of times

>>88359057
I don't know how to represent that in text form.

Would that be something like Hex sees a guy jump as a bullet comes up out of the ground and shoots him in the rear, he pauses, loads his gun, then shoots it straight into the sky.
From the paneling perspective, Hex shot the guy through the bottom boarder of the panel and Hex understood that he had to shoot up a specific amount of time later for that to have worked.

That's super confusing in text form, but also a way for him to shoot whoever kills him in the head before he gets killed as preemptive revenge. Like a shot is fired, ricochets around the panel boarders on a page, then hits its mark later.

That's how I'm understanding Hex's stand right now.

>>88359350
for reference: http://pastebin.com/vYTvZPFP

>Perfect Stretch
>It is said that if one achieves a perfect Stretch, they can put someone in a state where they are doomed to forever move while at the same time remaining motionless. Robbed of all natural movement, they are stuck in a living Hell known as a ｢TWEEN｣ from which they cannot escape.

>Perfect Space
>It is said that if one achieves a perfect Space, they can put their enemy in a state that is separated from the rest of existence. Although they are technically still in the same universe, their ｢PANEL｣ will be one that only ever shows themselves. The victim will remain stuck in this living Hell known as a ｢CLOSE-UP｣ until the end of time, able only to think silently or shout into the void.

>>88359568
Hmmm.

So Pym could enlarge or shrink panels.

Well, this hit page 10 in a hurry.

>>88319802
no one fucking cares about this shit anymore!!

>>88364889
I think you care.

I know I care.

But I think you care because you bumped the thread.

We're on part 7 of 8 now, I just want to see this through to the end.

Anyway, here's hoping someone keeps the thread from dying in the night.

>>88359847
I'm not sure if he would be able to alter panels, and I thought that each one would learn only one technique, so Pym wouldn't be able to see panels if he pick the Stretch

>>88364889
But I do care. And some part of /tg/ cares too.

>>88352735
Can't believe we still haven't decided Dobson's place in part 8. Also, Dobson's bear is called Tom Preston, I think.

morning bump

Is Loki's Stand a remastered stand or just a heavily mutated stand?

>>88366963
I thought it was Dobbo, or Dobbo was Dobson himself, I can't tell since they are the same faggot.

>>88357704
who are the racers that got replaced by the people of Springfield? any names or just faceless characters?

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>>88369069
Is Dobson's Stand going to look like Ninty? Also, maybe we can make other people call him Dobbo to spite him in part 8, ie sounds like a petty enough name.

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>>88370441
this is the stand that was meant for fat albert, it has a lengthy description
>「BIG BAD JOHN」 or 「FATBOY SLIM」
>Appearance: a large, insectoid automatic Stand with a vaguely scorpion/"facehugger" look. Its tail ends in multiple tubes that it can stick into Fat Albert, and it tends to latch onto his arm like a gauntlet
>Ability: when 「BBJ」 inserts its tube tail into Fat Albert (ala Bane’s Venom suit, but fueled by fat), it radically alters his metabolism. It basically grants the user a buff to all his physical properties by rapidly converting calories into energy and vice versa. In short, it can drain Fat Albert's 「FAT」 to give him incredible strength, speed, and regenerative properties proportional to how much 「FAT」 it can take from him. The target will very rapidly lose weight during any use of these abilities.
>The effect can also be inverted, making Albert gain 「FAT」 much more rapidly than normal by eating, digesting, and gaining weight from food much faster (such as chugging down a soda or swallowing an entire chicken to regain some 「FAT」 in seconds).

>The Stand can insert and remove its tail with no harm to its user, or alternate to grant him bursts of speed and strength without burning him out too quickly. The Stand could also theoretically be used on others if Fat Albert permits it, but his build and reputation naturally makes him an ideal host.

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>>88370657
>The main limit is, naturally, the user's body fat as a fuel source. They must keep providing calories to fuel the 「STAND」 or it will simply drain them into exhaustion or death if not stopped, though the latter tends to be when Albert wills it (a possible suicide attack, most likely using it on an underling such as Mush Mouth to kamikaze his foe). Its effects are also purely physical. As needed by the plot, Fat Albert could force his Stand onto an enemy, plugging into them to drastically boost their physical attributes in exchange for draining their energy in the process, starving them out unless they remain almost completely still. Cutting Albert off from any food source or forcing him to exhaust himself would be an easy way to outdo him, for how quickly he burns himself out at full power.

>Destructive Power: B
>Range: B
>Speed: B
>Precision: C
>Durability: B
>Developmental Potential: B

the appearance given make me think in something like the sunlight maggot from Dark Souls, but it can be changed to fit Dobbo

>>88369069
Heavily mutated using demon magic.

Demons can do all kinds of weird shit in this setting if you give them the opportunity.

We need to give Ghost Rider a role in Springfield since he's an angel hunting Loki in this.

>>88370808
we should also elaborate on what he is doing after scaring off Backslide in San Fransokyo and giving the exposition to Sam and Max.

also, who was going to be the ringmaster in the parade?

>>88371449
I think Music Meister was suggested. Not as a stand user, just as a cameo.

Ghost Rider I think is an official entree in the race. He might only be able to access his full power at night.

>>88372045
that means that the fight with Backslide takes place at night, since he gives a penance stare to Dan and sets a turbine on fire before that.
What would be his powers? his canon ones?

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>>88372708
Canon to our fanfic or canon to the character character?

Because right now I'm just going with my vague knowledge of Ghost Rider being a guy with a flaming skull that lights up at night and sets any vehicle he's in on fire.

>>88373107
which Ghost rider is he? Blaze, Ketch or (heaven forbid) Reyes?

>>88373556
No clue, this part is full of characters I only have semi-knowledge of.

Let's just say he's on a mission from God.

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So should Ghost Rider be a racer or posses a racer?

>>88375353
what if he's a racer that was possessed before entering the race?

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>>88375500
That's what I was thinking.

We just need some average guy to be who he was possessing so that after Loki is banished and Ghost Rider departs his borrowed mortal form, the guy quickly runs off not knowing how he got to where he is or what's going on.

>>88375558
so he starts as an unassuming background racer until he arrives to San Fransokyo, where he burst into flames for the first time along with the turbine.
Should be one of the canon ghost riders or another character?

>>88375784
If you have a suggestion go for it.

He only bursts into flames at night, but during the day he should still have some super human abilities (because he got up on that flying turbine on his own).

So the sun is just setting when the fight with Dan is reaching full swing. That means the sun is also just setting when the battle with Loki in Springfield is climaxing.

>>88375871
>That means the sun is also just setting when the battle with Loki in Springfield is climaxing
Sam and Max should point out that the "burning man" only appears at night when they see him again.
Some background racers could spot a guy on fire on their way to the next checkpoint, and after the first stage one of them comments that the ghost rider sightings stopped.

>>88377009
So they could spot a burning man in the middle of the desert on the way to checkpoint 2 in Aberdale.

You'd think Ghost Rider would play a role in fighting zombies made out of wood.

>>88377585
The day after the ordeal, one of the town residents would thank the Strickland guys for helping defend a determinate portion of the city, but the foundation representative points out that the number of their agents was limited and they weren't in that part of the city, leading the inhabitants to wonder where all the fire they saw came from.

>>88377834
Does the zombie ordeal happen during the day or at night?

What time do the racers arrive in Aberdale? We assume they leave San Fransokyo at 10 or 11am, but we haven't yet fully committed to the time limit for this leg. I know it was discussed somewhere, but I don't think it was agreed upon and might not be in the doc.

>>88378792
At night, I think. The Beast's fight is supposed to give a typical horror movie feel.
The time limits for the first stage were suggested in the previous thread.

>>88378989
-Hill Valley City (Redding) to San Fransokyo is about 200 miles. - 2 hours time limit.
-San Fransokyo to Aberdale (Prescott) is roughly 750 miles - 22 hour time limit (there's a desert to cross here)
-Aberdale to CN City (NY City) is roughly 2,400 miles - 72 hour time limit

So, they leave San Fransokyo at10am and need to be in Aberdale by 8am the next day to still be in the race.

I assume they spend the day in Aberdale. That means there's a day to establish the atmosphere of the town and build up anything we have planned to happen at night.

We can have the day be overcast if it really needs a horror movie feeling.

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Suggestion for Part 8:

>Stand Name: [RUN BOY RUN]

>Stand User: Milkwalker

>Description:
[RUN BOY RUN] takes the form of a shadow-like humanoid.
[RUN BOY RUN] can pass through any translucent or transparent objects with ease, it cannot pass through opaque objects... With an exception.

>Living beings, regardless of whether or not they are opaque can be passed through, resulting in said being getting afflicted with an irrational fear.

>These irrational fears last for approximately 4-5 hours.

>A single target can be passed through numerous times, resulting in numerous irrational fears.

Milkwalker would seem on the outside to be sinister and creepy, but in actually would be revealed to be quite kind. He would feel as though it was his duty to protect innocent people from villainous Stand Users.

>>88380024
Part 8 will probably be even more difficult for me to work on since I knew even less about most of the proposed characters for that part than the ones for part 7.

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>>88380024
Nice drawing.

I like the character and the fact that such a villain-like Stand would be given to a good guy. Maybe he can be one of the paranoid/weird characters obsessed with Ethan's Cult at first, but decides to aid the main characters at some point anyway.

Speaking of part 8, I feel we should use this >>88370834 in it.

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>>88381847
I was waiting to post this when we got to part 8. But yeah, there it is.

Maybe Chris Chan gets struck with his own Stand at some point with a shitty copy of sonic or with a ant-eater character?

We should make a recurring gag in part 8 in which characters that try to mess with meme magic always end up being enslaved by their own memes in someway at the end (we already have Pepe, Ethan and maybe ME Leterally himself).

what happens on the Hills that causes the plant explosion?

>>88381104
Worse, half of them are from shitty webcomics, so it will be safer to just read some description found with google

>>88381847
I'm thinking on something. Is there any /co/ character that is a tapir?

>>88382037
I don't even know. Meme magic scares me at this point.

>>88382037
I don't know of any /co/ related tapir characters, but there are probably some. That whole myth about them eating dreams is bound of have been referenced somewhere in some cartoon somehow.

As for the explosion, it doesn't happen in the Hills, it happens in the Valley factory.

It was caused by either something Wander did (like maybe overloading the "suggestion box" causing the heater to explode) or something the Punisher did if we have him that early on in the story.

>>88382023
>ant-eater
that's a tapir, anon.

>>88382203

Meme Magic is one hell of a drug.

>>88383757
So bad that I linked to the same post twice instead of the one above it.

But anyway, part 7, phase 1 is ripe for the writing to begin, but I keep getting more shit I need to do. It's the holiday season and all that.

I'd like to be able to begin writing in earnest this week, but who knows with all the stuff I have to do.

>>88382203
>something the Punisher did if we have him that early on in the story
right now, the Punisher is first mentioned after the first checkpoint, during the travel through the desert

>>88319802
no one fucking cares about this shit anymore!!!!

>>88385174
So I guess the explosion will be caused by Wander over stocking the "suggestion box" which leads to the furnace. The Furnace overheats and the poor safety regulations cause that heat to catch the surroundings on fire leading to a massive chain reaction chemical explosion that destroys the whole factory.

>>88385216
I do
Fuck off

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Will there be a chapter detailing the backstory between TOM and Serenity like the one for Steven Steel in SBR?

>>88386181
Yes.

Where should we place that? What should we title that?

>>88386370
I don't know about the title, but it could take place after Nobody caught her and TOM has to strike the deal with him in Europe

>>88386872
So TOM recalls the time he met Serenity when he believes her life is now in danger?

>>88388378
yeah, pretty much. Though in this case, the one that was in a bad state was Serenity.

>>88388557
TOM probably recalls how, when he first met her, Serenity was either a recovering drug addict or brainwashed by the Church.

We need to think of how they ended up in the relationship they are in now. Maybe TOM was out of work at the time and Serenity was the first to notice his vocal powers which lead to his stand developing?
Maybe TOM broke up some "youth group" Serenity was stuck in using the power of his voice?

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Might be interesting to weave that Church of Gaming into Serenity's backstory.

Also last bump from me before bed.

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>>88389544
>the church of gaming was able to infiltrate christian groups in its early stage
I like it, though the references to its proper name should be avoided. So, it takes place during the events of part 6?

>>88392628
Depends on how old Serenity is during part 7.

But yeah, it should've happened a couple years ago at least.

>>88393516
She is in her late-teens as far as I know, I haven't found a explicit mention of her age. She could be older if the events of her canon story are linked with her dealings with this Church of Gaming cell

>>88393883
I think she was around 14 or 15 in the comic.

If we want to keep the "how old is your girlfriend?" lines in there with the same current intended meaning, she'd have to be 16 or 17.

and what is TOM's backstory in this?

>>88394532
Not sure yet.

A robot with a hypnotic voice who ends up with a great career?

>>88395883
Well, he is a robot with a Stand, does that mean that he is also connected to the whole jawbreaker-powered robot thing?

>>88396331
He might be, but he could just as well be a different model. The first robot with a stand was in part 5, so someone other than Membrane using Wernstrom's notes could've built him.

Or he could've been a normal robot until he was exposed to cosmic radiation while working in space.

>>88397166
or found a jawbreaker and tweaked himself. Whatever it was, he developed Space Oddity and used its power to quickly rose to fame as an event promoter then, for some reason, he encountered Serenity and pulled her out of the shithole she was in, namely the prayer group that was a cover for a faction of the Church of Gaming.

>>88397742
There needs to be a reason for why he did that and why she sticks with him though.

If she's just with him because he pulled her out of a shit hole situation, that's too shallow for my liking.
There needs to be some kind of mutual benefit going on here.

>>88397792
He may be like a parental figure to her, Serenity's parents were not role models either. The girl may be alone after the church fiasco.
By the way, here is a short version of how the whole affair of TOM and Serenity started
https://desuarchive.org/co/thread/86909726/#86986046

>>88398246
That's one of my posts.

Maybe Serenity gained some kind of perspective that let her see bullshit for what it is and she and TOM have an arrangement where she pulls him back if he every gets out of control with his vocal powers.

How much does Serenity eavesdrops about Nobody's plan? are we using the idea that she spots Nobody talking with one of his alt-versions?

>>88399309
Well she learns the trick to his stand (one of the tricks anyway), and she probably also overhears what he plans to do with the corpse and how it relates to erasing the concept of heroism.

Up until that point the importance of the corpse to Mr. Nobody's actual objective should be unknown. All Pym and Hex were ever able to find out is that there's a corpse that grants stands and other powers and some vague notion of a plot that's interpreted differently by everyone who they've interrogated.

Serenity learns that the corpse is the key to erasing the concept of heroism and tells TOM. Mr. Nobody confronts them and TOM is forced to make a deal for Serenity's safety.

During the Tulio arc, TOM has an opportunity to let slip what's happening to Hex and Pym. Hex and Pym are also informed by Scud that them getting stuck in Tulio's country was no accident which cements their conflict with him.

>>88400249
At the start of the race, the existence of some kind of ancient artifacts is revealed in the lines that TOM reads in his cabin, from that point onwards he should try to figure out the nature of said objects, with Serenity being the one that discovers what the Dada party is looking for after spying on Nobody.
TOM probably has a pile of books about relics in his room/office and he's making a list of the potential artifacts that Nobody is hunting.
Also, Strickland and Interpol are also investigating the race's true purpose and the Hero's corpse, should all those investigations meet at one point?

>>88401193
Oh, good point.

It should all come together in either Tulio's country or shortly thereafter. Navis is Interpol, that that gives her an exit from the story since she'd have to go report that... unless someone wants to kill her off there, I could go either way on her, but her getting away to report this and getting Interpol's WHOOP space fleet into action is something I don't want to pass up on.

A good exit for Navis would be her getting critically injured by Tulio's forces and the Computer in her vehicle doing everything it can to keep her alive during that arc. She recovers enough to get the information from TOM, but despite wanting to keep going in the race, the Computer forces her to retire and takes her to wherever the current extraction point for her is.

>>88401341
what about this?
>Navis is badly wounded, his car automatically drives away from the rest of the group
>A small portion of Tulio's henchmen gives her chase until they arrive to a cliff next to the coast
>The car drives off the cliff and plummets into the ocean, seemingly killing its driver
>cue her pursuers laughing and comparing her with the previous president that offed himself
I'm not sure if she actually survives the ordeal or not

are Strickland and Interpol working together or are they doing their research separately?

>>88401780
Navis is an Interpol agent being sponsored in the race by Strickland as her cover.

Yeah, they're working together.

The problem is Navis needs to be there when TOM flees with the other racers after he gets rescued from Tulio's pleasure barge. Or at least be there after that to get the information.

I just want fighter spaceships attacking Stardust in the finale fruitlessly, and the only way to get that kind of shit in place is for the information to leak, and this is the only opportunity that's been presented to get that information to the powers playing behind the scenes.

Who is making it to space anyway?

Too soon to know?

>>88403547
yeah is pretty soon, though the racers that are reaching the space stage so far are:

-Pym
-Wander (if he is going to be the one that gets the wish from the Star)
-Yellowjacket (so he can take the notes to finish his book)
-Haddock (He apppears in the President's office inside the Absolution)
-The Wizard (he becomes the true endboss)

I don't know who else

Oh, what kind of vehicle is Cybersix driving?

Motorcycle or some kind of Batmobile-like car?

>>88405023
did she rode something in her show or the original comic?

>>88405156
I feel it was a motorcycle.

It's been a while since I've seen the show, so I could be wrong.

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>>88405642
there was one in the comic at least

>>88406065
How tricked out do we need to make it?

For the first phase, a normal bike is fine, but then it needs to be made water traversable. Odds are it won't survive Tulio's onslaught unless it gets a serious upgrade at the robot town.

But thinking about phase 1, I could see her using it to dive on top of an jump from rival vehicle to rival vehicle.

>>88406736
well, we already have a vehicle with an hydrofoil running around, isn't too far-fetched that she turned the bike into some kind of water scooter with the spare parts given in Fantastic Island, and the seafaring modifications could be discarded once she arrives in Spain.

>>88407104
Yeah.

But anyway, I was thinking she'd pull off one of those in one side of the car out the other tricks during phase 1. Not sure where she is right before the first checkpoint. I'd have to check to see where she placed in the rankings if at all.

>>88407932
She arrives in tenth place in the first checkpoint, there are no lists for the other checkpoints.

>>88408055
We'll make those lists when we get to them.

Dammit, my mind is fixated on Cybersix now.
In this the WB were making Atomic Super Men, and she is one of them.
Mass produced super soldiers meant to infiltrate undetected and destroy other organizations from within. The Loonatics were just the super prototypes meant for combat to prove their worth as a resource.
So there's all these super soldiers in tanks in abandoned labs who haven't been woken up yet. No orders give, all blank slates. They sit there for years undiscovered until the Loonatics begin recovering them.

10 years go by and the mass produced stand jawbreaker powered robots are made. They end up coming to where the few Atomic Super Men were eking out a life and they realize they're all one and the same. The robots start helping the Loonatics track down any of the still tanked Atomic Super Men, Cybersix is one of them, part of an infiltrator series, she's fully grown upon being "born" (removed from her tank) and already has language and skills pre-programmed into her brain, but no people skills, so she spends a couple years being raised by a pair of robots.

The shit the WB was up to is shaping or influencing every part after they were taken down.

And none of this is relevant or revealed until late in phase 2.

Any excitement I feel gets quickly quelled by the quietness that fallows.

why Shocker rejects the Chameleon's offer in Aberdale?

>>88410409
Probably because of pride.

Or because part of the deal means he can't be in it to win it anymore.

Well here's a bump before bed.

Hopefully someone will keep the thread alive and hopefully someone will start making some progress.

>>88319802
You deserve a bump for your OP. Only one though.

>>88408460
I think we are going to have some WB labs built inside the pillarmen ruins in Chile

>The shit the WB was up to is shaping or influencing every part after they were taken down
yep, it was supposed that part of its technology ended in the black market, and monster that was at the bottom of the pit is still around

>>88410515
or he fears retribution if Chameleon is caught and a connection is established between them, Hex and Frank are already chasing him, he wouldn't want more people after him.

How much does Old Jack know about the Hero's history? He knows that there was a corpse part near the farm, but what else?

>>88413475
Maybe Shocker knows that nothing good ever comes from villainous team-ups.

>>88416251
Probably not much.

Old Jack knows there's a corpse and that if it is ever reassembled, something terrible will happen.

So, where is the corpse's leg? one part of the doc mention a giant bone used as a capsule but the fight between Spongebob and Goofy says it was in a dirt mount.

>>88417655
The giant bone wasn't completely unearthed until after the fight, so it looked like it was in a dirt mound.

>>88417901
but Goofy merged with the corpse part during the fight, why did he unearthed and opened the giant bone?

>>88418751
I think Jack unearthed and opened to the giant bone when he sensed the corpse part was gone just to check.

That section needs some tweaks here and there so everything meshes together better, but that's still a ways off in the actual work order.

I don't think Jack knows who the corpse was in life, just that whoever it was was a hero and did something to save the Earth at the cost of his own life by trapping whatever the threat was within himself and then scattering the pieces of his body.

>>88420275
I think that only Frollo knows the Hero's real identity.

Have we explained how the corpse parts were scattered?

>>88420584
I assume the battle between Superman and Stardust happened in space.

Then the parts of Superman's body fell back down to Earth like shooting stars.

Some stayed where they landed, others were recovered, and some ended up at the locations of past climactic battles due to the Hero's lingering desire to help.

Maybe STAR energy is also emitted by the sun, but it's too strong for humans to absorb and deflects most of the more diluted STAR energy from other sources from reaching Earth.

Superman was not of Earth and his body was more than capable of processing the undiluted STAR energy from the sun. In death his corpse still contains vast amounts of STAR energy.

Writing posts like these are when I need to remind myself just how weird this fanfic is and has become.

Ah shit. Page 10 bump.

>>88422473
I still laugh over how STAR was originally just a shitty pun and it ended up being the cornerstone for part 6.

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night bump

>>88426684
It started in part 3 with Genie mentioning STARlight.

Part 5 is where it got some elaboration and part 6 is when it became a full on quantitative story element.

>>88424163
And again.

>>88426684
most of the time we toss ideas to the wall and see what sticks, STAR energy being one of them. Is even funnier when seemingly unconnected ideas end up forming a somewhat deep lore (and /tg/ managed to piece it together)

>>88428568
A lot of what /tg/ did with their JUMP game was just arrange what we already had established into a playable format.

I fully expect there to be more random unconnected things to form "deep lore" later that we don't even suspect right now.

Though my mind is still on a scene where Pym questions Cybersix to see if she really is an Atomic Super Man asking why she looks human and that gives us the whole WB infiltrator plot they never managed to get going.

who is going to call Shocker a "pantyhose ninja"? (someone should also call him pincushion man)

>>88429253
The Wishing Star itself is one of those instances: it was part of the earliest draft of part 7 but then it was just the same star from Wakko's Wish, now is some sort of construct made of pure STAR energy, and in a previous thread it was suggested that the comet that became the Heart of Atlantis was a shard of the Star.

>>88429860
Pym is the one who originally thought Shocker might be a ninja when he saw him squaring off again Hex, so it should be Pym who calls him a pantyhose ninja.

>>88420798
How did the leg ended near the Bagge Farm?

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>>88430951
There's one specific part of this screen cap I ask you to ignore. You'll know it when you see it.

Eustace Bagge in his youth was a bounty hunter and once he tried capturing Superman who was framed by Superbatman who also framed Frollo for the murder of the gypsy girl Ty Lee.

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>>88431202
So that's why. Eustace had a connection with the Hero and so a piece of the Hero's corpse ended up on his land eventually.

We seem to be incorporating a lot of /co/ greentexts and stories into part 7.

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>>88431202
ah shit, Frollo is a prince (and banged a horse)

So Eustace found one of Superman's legs during his travels and kept it as a memento (or he didn't know that it was part of superman's corpse), I'm not sure how it ended inside the giant bone.

Did Frollo found the ribcage or someone else recovered it?

>>88432387
We might not be using that first part of the things you mentioned.

Do you remember the God Bone from Courage the Cowardly Dog? Superman's leg was inside the God Bone and Courage buried it on the farm. It was all some weird coincidence that Eustace had a connection with the Hero, but that connection helped with the God Bone finding its way there.

Frollo sensed the Hero's presence and deduced something of his old friend must've merged with one of the Holy relics he's been guarding.
He's correct in his deduction that it merged with the Holy Grail, though he has no idea which grail is the Holy Grail. He began to believe after Superman had died that he was someone who God himself had blessed or something and his opinion of his old friend gradually became warped as the century passed and Frollo continued to not die (because he had been drinking from the Grail during this time without realizing it).

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>>88432603
The God Bone was surrounded by dead dogs that were unable to stop licking it, maybe they become restless once the bone is excavated and the corpse leg is gone. Jack could be attacked by them if he goes to check on the bone.

>Courage could had become a Corpse part guardian in another timeline

>>88434143
So old Jack sense the corpse part is no longer in the land and is assaulted by the dog skeletons, finds the God Bone capsule opened, and then rushes to the City of Nowhere to confront the last people he was aware of having been on that land: Pym and Hex (they fought Shocker there).

>>88319982
Garfielf: Spped Drw

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x5g3t89Qrrk

Bumping before bed.

since she is in the same area, will Navis be attacked by the skeletons?

>>88427914
and again.

alright, any loose ends in the first leg of the race?

>>88440178
None that really come to mind.

The desert crossing and Aberdale stay could use some more thought though.

>>88329470
You can pin messages in a discord channel

You can make channels specifically to post links in and don't allow messages to be posted.

Not the other guy but it should be considered by the pace of the threads now.

Stand Name: The Boxer

Power - A

Speed - B

Range - D

Durability - C

Precision - A

Potential - C

The Boxer's punches can pierce through objects and people, and if the user decides to, can hook them and bring said thing to him. Hows this

>>88440424
Hex and Pym face Punisher on their way to Aberdale, how much fire they should exchange? Would Pym's car need repairs once they arrive to the town?

>>88440839
Taking a /co/ project off of /co/ is a slow, agonizing death for the project with not even a glimmer of hope for finishing it. You take it off of /co/ and you take it away from most people who worked on it since they won't go to other sites to work on something like this.

>>88441082
They should exchange fire until Shocker gets away.
Punisher wants to kill Shocker, Hex wants him alive for the bounty.

Pym's car is going to take a beating, but still somehow keep going.

What does the Punisher do using his edge MELODY in the desert?

>>88441495
>What does the Punisher do using his edge MELODY in the desert?
He is driving his Battle Van, which is a mobile armory, so he has a bunch of weapons at his disposal.
He could shoot at one of the windows of Pym's car, shattering the whole window and turning the shards into shrapnel that lacerate both Pym and Hex, this could be the first hint that something is unnatural in Punisher fighting method.
He could also use more ludicrous weapons that only work thanks to his ability, like the knife-shooting gun.
All the while he is adding an entry to his War Journal.

>>88442267
Let's take this a step further.

He shoots out the bullet proof, laminated glass windshield of Pym's car, shattering it, but none of the shards lacerate Pym or Hex (because they're not his target).

Pym wonders how the fuck that happened since there's no way anything should've made that type of glass shatter like a church's stained glass windows.

>>88442608
Punisher should never run out of ammo or need to reload while he's under the effect of his ability, and any projectile he toss doesn't offer wind resistance, making a fatman-like bomb fly like an arrow.
During the clash they could get one of Punisher's extreme weapons, and when they try to test it after the fight, it comes apart (or explodes).

on the topic of the desert crossing, what will happen in the encounter between Sam, Max, Vince and Loki?

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Does anybody know who made this picture? I had an idea way waaay long ago about making a stand for Eduardo based on this song and posted about it in one of these threads.

I'm not trying to claim ownership or say I was stolen from or some faggotry like that, but I'm really curious to know if my idea was used or if this was just a huge coincidence?

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>>88446450
As proof, here is the drawing I made for what I imagined the stand to look like, not that it can really serve as proof since anybody could have just copied it from that thread...

>>88446450
there was a suggestion listed in the doc for part 4 that ended being part of the Stands inside Hotel California, I think it was a coincidence that the drawfag paired the name with the character

>>88446516
I see, thank you!

>>88443263
Pym could get a hold of the knife gun that Hex shoots out of Punishers hands and he holds it up and looks at it and says "There's no way something like this should even work" and then describe exactly how it shouldn't work. Then it falls apart in his hands in the way he described.

When Hex is fighting Punisher in CN City he should remember this and say in all the ways how the rocket propelled chainsaw launcher should not work. He says this after he's forced the Punisher into his (Hex's) "pace" which causes the thing to blow up in the Punisher's face.

"Pace" might be something we can employ here. It's not like MELODY, it's like one character makes all the other characters around them behave in a certain way, like they fall in rhythm with this character and it lets the person decide the "pacing" of the events which lets them predict the outcome.

>>88447716
If Melody requires Belief and Timing, how does that translate to Frank's ability?

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>>88446450
That was me. I actually was inspired to make this from the [Fear of the Dark] Stand suggestion in the old Stand doc (which had a note on giving it ot Eduardo too) plus the ideia that Imaginary Friends from Foster's were actually Stands. The description was just too fitting. Later I found out that it was a thing even back in the part 4 threads.

Hope to see you back in here, your ideias are pretty good.

>>88448105
Probably similar to how you tell a joke to make Melody happen, but in Punisher's case, he'll have to say something over-the-top or witty to boost his MELODY.

>>88447716
Pace seems fitting considering part 7 is all about these kinds of 4th wall manipulation. Maybe Pym realises it works in a similar way to how Hex's manipulation worked. Also, maybe we could have Punisher use both MELODY and Pacing to make things go his way.

>>88448313
That's really cool, I'm glad you liked my ideas!

>>88446488
that is a pretty rad drawing, how come I never saw it in the booru

>>88448105
Frank Franks the Frank, that's how he know it'll Frank.

It's just Frank.

>>88448585
Pacing and MELODY could look identical in effect to the untrained eye, but while MELODY is about having timing, pacing is all about changing the timing.

A change in timing can really screw up an opponent.

Hex has Shocker in his sights on the way to SanFran, he says some stuff, does the show, the challenge, whatever it is that activates pacing, he gets Shocker into his rhythm and is predicting his ever move, but this is pacing for a show down between two outlaws, not pacing for two racers on the racetrack, so while he's able to get Shocker to do what he wants, it still backfires because of Shocker's stand and because of Shocker's Shocker Mobile.

Like Hex has him cornered and all of a sudden Shocker is replaced by the Shocker Mobile, which has a remote control function, and Shocker tried to run Hex down using it, and Hex's horse wasn't as lucky as Hex.

Should Hex have to put down his horse?

>>88448714
I don't know, I guess it wasn't clear that it was a stand or maybe because I never indicated which /co/ character it would belong to on the same post. Maybe they need to make a note of that sort of thing?

>>88448840
I thought that Shocker revealed his Stand in Nowhere (though none of the presents could see it besides Shocker).

>>88450327
It's always been the plan that Shocker uses his stand's ability to evade Hex in the first leg.

Hex can's see Shocker's stand, and it has no offensive abilities on its own.

Since no one has suggested anything else for Shocker's stand, I'm going with the one that looks like a small dog that lets him switch places with anything he's touched that is within 50m of his person.

It's a small dog because Shocker used to have a small dog and once stole a small dog from a pet shop out of spite.
Or maybe that was someone he was with. I don't remember.

>>88450593
>using a dog stand
>in the farm where Courage lived
>near a bunch of undead dogs
Seems alright, it should have a quilted appearance to match Shocker and his car.

>>88451327
I don't think Hex, Pym, or Shocker ever see the undead dogs.

And maybe he's only able to activate the ability when he says "Don't mock the Shocker!"

>>88451641
the God Bone and the dogs burial grounds are somewhere in the desert but is still in Nowhere.

>maybe he's only able to activate the ability when he says "Don't mock the Shocker!"
He says that earlier in the story when they call him a pantyhose ninja, does he activate his Stand there?

>>88451804
Yeah, but the undead dogs don't start popping out of the ground until after Pym and Hex leave, that's why Old Jack thinks they took the corpse part.

He probably doesn't activate it until the first leg of the race.

>>88452969
I know, but the place still has/had a lot of dogs around (I forgot to count Sam among them).

When he is faced in the farm, will Shocker use his Stand to mess with Hex and Pym or to run away? for the latter he could be shown dropping small objects on his way to the farm and then swap places with them once he is cornered.

>>88453277
I think he's trying to get rid of them at that point.

He's tried running and Hex just will not leave him alone in this race, so now he's trying to set a trap and take out his pursuers.

should we explain how Nobody got the Super Rod and the other parts before the race?

>>88454546
How many parts does he have before the race?

Aberdale - Internal organs
Nowhere - Left leg
Springfield - Left arm
Voya Nui - Right eye
Paris - Ribs
Sunken Looniversity - Right arm
Chile - Skull
Rio - ??? Heat? Spine? Left eye?

That's all the parts we have planed right now.

>>88454664
Fuck. I forgot.

Fantastic Island - Right leg

Do we just want to have the spine in Rio? Maybe have whatever other parts hidden in the ruins of the pillarman empire?

>>88454664
originally there were going to be a lot of parts the super scrotum being one and Nobody and his cronies already collected several of them in the background, the Super Rod being the most prominent, there was also the suggestion that Nobody merged with one of them (the heart?) as a parallel of Valentine.

>>88454815
The idea of having 52 corpse parts was dropped early on since there's just no way to represent all of them.

If Mr. Nobody has other parts before the race started then he got them either through chance or because they were easier for the Front Men to retrieve. The race is to gather hero types and send them in the direction of the corpse parts so they'll either collect them for him into one place or knock down any of the defenses so his Front Men can collect them.

>>88455120
ok, we still have to decide which part is in Rio.

>>88455160
I say spine.

Where is the left eye though?

>>88455388
it was suggested that both eyes were in Voya Nui

>>88455484
So Hex gets both eyes?

That some super depth perception he'll have going on.

>>88455687
or the front men (or whoever they fight on the island) get the other one, alternatively it may get lost during the fight in the ocean and is recovered by one of Nobody's henchmen after the racers leave the area, and a third option is that another racer gets the left eye.

>>88455800
The Front Men lead by Snake Eyes are taken out of the picture on Fantastic Island.

Gerald the sea lion is warping between two different groups of racers after Voya Nui since neither side wants the other to have the eyes in his bucket.

>>88456031
then who is the other side? Are they on Nobody's payroll or is a third party?

>>88456080
Good question. I don't have an answer since we haven't planned any of that part yet aside from the skeleton outline.

They'd need to be racers, so Aunt May and Goofy are candidates for this role in that leg.

Bumping before bed.

so, are we going to use the Corpse's heart or not?

>>88342717
Oh you mean an "everyone has ideas but nobody has the talent and/or patience to make anything of it" project? I agree.

First bump of the day

Should Old Jack be in contact with Strickland during the race?

>>88372045
I thought Loki would possess Music Meister and use him to wreak havoc in the parade, Wuya already displayed the ability to possess people in part 5.

>>88434351
did he get involved in the fight besides slicing Shocker's car?

>>88458648
I think that's the explanation for the heart shaped mark on Mr. Nobody's chest.

>>88461122
He might recognize the logo when he sees it, but I think he lost touch with the organization after Hank died and Chane took over.

He could reconnect with it if he becomes aware of Bobby being in charge now.

>>88461848
That's probably a better idea than Loki just shoving him out of the way and taking over.

So they have to force Loki out of Music Meister somehow.

>>88462121
I don't think so.

Old Jack shouldn't show up until near the end of that fight and tell them to leave this land.

Page 10 bump.

>>88462764
>So they have to force Loki out of Music Meister somehow
I think he runs away once Ghost Rider appears, at least that was on the doc last time I checked. No idea what happens with Music Meister once Loki leaves his body.

>>88464444
Yeah, that's in the doc, but the whole possession thing is new.

Could be Ghost Rider forces Loki out.

>>88464543
When he escapes Music Meister's body, Loki could shapeshift into something that slips into a storm grate, like a snake. Later on, he would complain that he was forced to swing in the sewers.

If Mojo Jojo and Hex meet for the first time in CN City, when do they fight for real (if they actually fight each other)?

>>88465954
Maybe they make jokes about how he stinks after hearing that.

Any suggestions for who is gonna be the Ghost Rider?

>>88469035
If the warped Amerika gains additional power when fighting people that Loki dislikes, then he would unlock the lightning attack after they mock him repeatedly in Springfield.

>>88470319
Some washed up Hollywood actor who's hair may or may not look like a bird?

>>88470986
so, we are using plain old Johnny Blaze?

>>88471068
Who he is when his skull isn't on fire isn't too important to the story we're telling.

Or at least I don't know if it is important or not.

I just thought if his host were a worn out actor, it might make for at least one funny gag if someone recognized him before he lit up.

>>88448840
>Should Hex have to put down his horse?
Probably, if it survives the attack but is mortally wounded, otherwise the horse could had died immediately.


>>88471512
It's only to know who entered the race (and probably retires once Loki is banished)

>>88473651
We should make it as dramatic and terrible as possible, the scene of Hex having to put a bullet in the head of his horse that now has four problem legs after getting hit by the Shocker Mobile.

>>88472752
Is there any /co/ character that fit that description? I can't think of anyone right now.

>>88475709
There are a number of minor washed up actor characters in various cartoons, but I'm pretty sure most of them were one episode wonders.

None in particular come to mind, just the character type itself.

Wait a minute... Has anyone here ever seen Johnny Bravo goes to Bollywood? He met his doppelganger there. Was someone trying to push for doppelgangers in this part?

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>>88476034
you mean Jiggy? There is a part in the doc where Nobody thinks he saw Johnny among the crowd

>>88477064
Yes, him.

Might be interesting to have him in this part somewhere, but he'd have to be older.

And if he's being possessed by Ghost Rider than he should initially freak out over his hair, then calm down when he realizes it's fine like in those pics of Ghost Rider JP.

Page 10 bump.

Bumping before bed.

Did the Ghost Rider actually entered the race or was he forced to do so by the spirit that possessed him?

>>88482177
The spirit that possessed him entered into the race since it knew its mark would come to it that way.

>>88484071
yeah, but the guy that is now the Ghost Rider, did he originally intended to enter the race or he entered under the influence of the spirit?

>>88484288
If it's Jiggy then he only entered because of the influence of the spirit.

Right now we have it so whoever is entered for Ghost Rider drops out after Loki is banished, so if it's Jiggy, that'd make sense since he wouldn't want to risk his hair getting damaged anymore.

>>88485174
And Mr. Nobody should say something like "Hmm, right, I thought he looked a little too husky." when one of his associates corrects him when he thought he saw Johnny Bravo.

who's gonna be the fool that awakens the Beast in Aberdale?

>>88487904
Probably Clarence, Jeff, and Sumo.

They wake up the monster and trap it in that monster house or something, then try to get help while all hell breaks loose and coffins start popping out of the ground controlling corpses like puppets with roots.

>>88487955
So they awaken it before or after the racers arrive to the town?

>>88488305
Could be right before or a few days before. They'd have no way of knowing the racers are coming until the day before their arrival, so they couldn't really plan to ask them for help any sooner than that.

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>>88488448
Then that chapter could start with them exploring the Beast's lair, then cut back to the present day.

Are we gonna use the idea of Clarence's Lil' Buddy getting filled with undead plants?

>>88488706
I'd like to use that, but I'm not sure how since the current power set of The Beast in this seems to be limited to controlling dead wood and plant matter.

>>88488759
>seems to be limited to controlling dead wood and plant matter
precisely, Clarence would had left his lil' buddy behind when they first entered into the Beast's territory, and plants and vines grew inside the doll.

>>88489357
So the doll becomes an avatar for The Beast, being his puppet body to lead the hoards?

>>88490440
I was thinking more of a regular minion. It could either be among the horde of plant monsters or lying somewhere in the lair, seemingly unaffected, and when Clarence goes to retrieve the doll, it springs to life, with the plant matter coming out through the seams.

>>88490912
So it's with the hoard and Clarence keeps getting i the way of burning it because he's an idiot and keeps pleading with the doll. It never works and he ends up burning it himself on accident when his grandfather shows up.

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>>88490947
>at first, he thinks lil' buddy was brought to life like Pinocchio
>only after the vines and roots came out of its body and lashed at him he realises that he became a monster
>He keeps trying to reason with the doll during the fight, as if it was able to listen
>When the lil' buddy is finally burned, Clarence hold its charred remains and cries like a bitch. He laments how it never managed to enjoy its newfound life before turning evil
>Jeff is about to tell him to cut that crap but Sumo stops him
>the day after the incident, Clarence holds a funeral for his lil' buddy

the plagued doll could look like pic related

>>88493288
I like it.

Hex and Pym are dealing with that while Navis and Strickland are going after the monster in the house. There should be a STYLE user among them since Bobby re-implemented that policy after part 6 since the pillarmen are still around.
The STYLE user should be someone who has been around a while, long enough to see similarities between Clearance's grandfather and Hank. He'll also need to drop some pointers to Yellowjacket since he sees him with the beginnings of a STYLE of his own.

>>88493616
I was thinking that during the whole ordeal, Clarence believes that his lil' buddy came to life by some sort of magic, but was cursed by the Beast shortly after, while Jeff constantly tries to explain him that is just a plant monster that got stuck inside the doll.

>Navis and Strickland are going after the monster in the house
you mean the Beast or the Monster House itself?

So, who is gonna be this Style user? will he survive the fight?

>>88494292
The Beast is inside the Monster House, manipulating the wood to make the house a monster house.

I don't know who the style user should be, but I guess they'd survive. I imagine it'd be the morning after, right before the race is about to get underway again, that Jack would get this advice about styles from them.

>>88494478
I see, I thought they were two separate entities.
Haddock is supposed to get involved against the Beast, how does he end up in the mausoleum?

>>88494556
He drunkenly stumbles upon it and lights his alcohol filled breath on fire to kill The Beast.

>>88494914
but was he part of the group that raided the overgrown graveyard or he ended up there after drinking in a bar?

>>88494978
He ended up there on his own, maybe he ended up there because after he got drunk he remembered some kids were in danger or something.

The order of events isn't solid yet.

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Hey guys. We could lurk >>88491925 for some Stand names if we need to. It's a pretty useful thread.

Just so you guys know.

>>88495466
Where would we fit that guy in?

Page 10 bump, again.

>>88499347
Again? Really?

I really don't like keeping the threads up like this when I haven't written anything.

>>88501210
You're fucking killing me here, guys.

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Well, this thread will probably not still exist by the morning.

Well, I can give it a bump before bed, but I'm starting to feel really stupid all by myself in here.

>>88497551
I'm thinking he is talking about Dobson (bear), which is going to appear in part 8

>>88495454
Haddock should stumble earlier into the graveyard and fight with some of the plant monsters, thinking he got into a bar brawl.

so, will anybody bite the dust during the plants rampage?

>>88509691
I was thinking of the chicken man.

>>88510547
Does he come back after getting even more drunk?

>>88511387
Have anyone in mind?

The idea has been brought up that some die and the Blue Meanie uses his stand to make people think of it as no surprise so the race can continue on as normal.

>>88512413
He supposedly beats the Beast and then takes one of the urns containing the Hero's liver. In his drunken stupor he probably thinks that the urns have booze and takes a chug from one of them, swallowing the liver.

>>88512943
So he beats The Beast, but the fire set by Clarence's grandfather is what finishes it off.

>>88513941
So it ends buried under the burning house?

>>88514360
Yeah, and then the Front Men come in and take the urns from the still smouldering wreckage.

Joshua was suggested to get fucked over in this section, what should be?

>>88515262
Maybe he gets a peg leg to further along him becoming a pirate and the wooden leg infects him?

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>>88515502
And then what? it could either:
-grow into a monster sticking out of Joshua's missing leg (and he would be dangling from the monster the whole fight)
-turn into a living battery for the coffins as suggested above
-turn into a half-plant, half-human freak like pic related

>>88516152
I think he'd be like a living battery dangling from a very large plant monster that feeds off of his desire to kill the people who have mauled him repeatedly.

He'd have some control over it, enough to point it at the people he most wants to kill.

>>88516860
>he'd be like a living battery dangling from a very large plant monster
like an anglerfish?

>>88517109
Sure.

Maybe the monster eats him while it burns in an attempt to harvest enough life energy from him to save itself.

>>88517535
>As the monster devours him, he yells "I am the victim here! I don't deserve this!"
>Sumo just wave him goodbye

but the question is, will that be the end of his suffering?

So what should the general look of these plan monsters be?

But even before that, as the racers are approaching Aberdale, maybe it should cut to Clarence and his friends doing whatever as Jeff narrates it before Sumo asks him what he's doing.
We focus on the kids up on the cliffs and the see the racers come into town, but they go about their own adventure and find the old grave yard and The Beast, it chases them, they lose it in an old abandoned big house, then they go to try to get help from whoever they can in town.

They're known liars, so the only people they think they have a chance at getting help from are the racers since they're new in town and don't know the reputation of Clarence, Jeff, and Sumo.

Are their any sibling characters in part 7?

>>88518348
>So what should the general look of these plan monsters be?
They should have a myriad forms, ranging from walking plants to golem-like creatures made of plant matter.

How much time passed between them exploring the Beast's lair and the racers arriving to Aberdale?

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>>88518898
crap, forgot example

>>88518334
No, Strickland will recover his splinter covered body and haul him off to one of their research facilities.

>>88518872
Not that I'm aware of.

>>88518898
Maybe 10 or 12 hours. The racers arrive in the morning and by night the kids are running back into town away from the scary plant monsters.

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>>88519230
>Strickland will recover his splinter covered body and haul him off to one of their research facilities
Poor bastard, at least he will be far away from Clarence, Jeff and Sumo, on the other hand, he will be probed day and night by the scientists in Strickland.

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>>88519230
Can these two be added?

> Stand user: Ben (CRASH ZOOM)
> Stand name: [Clint Eastwood]
> Appearance: An old home movie video camera
> Ability: [Clint Eastwood] can cause bizarre and morbid occurrences in its range, this happens when Ben uses the camera to make a movie, if anyone was in the range of [Clint Eastwood], they will be in Ben's "movie".The only way to dispel [Clint Eastwood]'s effects is to kill the user or destroy the camera (doing this will kill the user).
> Stats:
> Power: E
> Speed: E
> Range: B
> Durability: D
> Precision: E
> Potential: D

> Stand user: Kate (CRASH ZOOM)
> Stand name: [Painted Black]
> Appearance: A black hooded HP-Lovecraftian Summoner
> Ability: [Painted Black] can summon anything that is deemed dangerous, such as savage animals, murderers, beasts from hell, etc. Kate usually does this so they can be a part of her brother's movie.
> Stats:
> Power: B
> Speed: C
> Range: A
> Durability: B
> Precision: B
> Potential: C

>>88521994
I'm not sure about the name painted black since is similar to Nowhere Man's skill

>>88520808
Or at least until they're sure they've collected all the zombie wood splinters from his body.

>>88522283
Ok then how about [Happy Faces]?

I don't think is important, but how did the jars ended in the mausoleum?

>>88524845
They ended up there the same way any of the other corpse parts ended up where they are.

So no, not really important to the story.

In JoJo part 7 the holy corpse parts ended up where they are because wild animals were compelled to transport them across the continent.

In our part 7, Superman's corpse blew apart in space after trapping Stardust within himself and the parts scattered across the Earth. Some were found and moved, others stayed where they landed.

Ok I'll start writing something for the Aberdale section, how many jars are in the crypt?

>>88526719
They contain the internal organs so... just go with 10. We don't need to say what's in all of them.

>>88525047
So did the Beast gathered the organs or someone else did it before him?

>>88528942
The Beast might've gathered them in the woods, or someone else might've gathered them and put them into urns and The Beast ended up stuck guarding them.

It's really a detail I think would be better left as a mystery.

>>88529001
Alright, it was mostly to know if the Beast considered them a personal treasure or something he was tasked to protect

>>88529154
Maybe he views them as super nourishment and that's how he's gotten so powerful. He can't eat them or directly handle them, but he can feed off of their energy.

>>88529324
so all this mess is because they stumbled upon the Beast's cupboard. After everyone leaves and the Front Men arrive to retrieve the remaining jars, one of them should mention how some kids found the Corpse parts by accident before the government with all his paraphernalia, then his boss tells him to shut up.

>>88530274
Yeah, that's pretty much Clarence's existence. He finds something and it snowballs from there.

Snake Eyes would probably smack whoever was trying to get philosophical in the back of the head.

Well here's a bump before bed.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HKJXlQQI2ms

>>88532248
> Tfw the voice actor is the same one who did DIO

Should the scene start with Clarence and friends in the entrance of the crypt or skip directly to them entering the chamber with the jars?

>>88534301
I was thinking it'd start with them seeing the racers approaching town from a distance.

We never focus on the racers crossing the Aberdale checkpoint line, instead it stays focused on Clearance as Sumo and Jeff complain that they're missing the big race while Clarence reassures them that what he's going to show them is more interesting.

They go into this crypt and there are these jars with roots all around them, Sumo is upset "This is what you wanted to show us? Some jars?" and he grabs one to either open it or throw it when one of the roots grabs him and The Beast wakes up.

Maybe they run out while still carrying one of the jars and that's why the hoard comes to town. They could have the liver and Haddock "drinks" it while drunk before agreeing to go fight the monster for the kids.

>>88535373
so, Clarence found the crypt earlier, did he found it by chance or he was searching something else? and how big is that place? is there a single chamber or is a bigger complex?

>>88535664
He probably found it while chasing a small animal.

If it's a man made crypt in a graveyard, then not too big. They're also in Arizona, so it'll be sandy.

The Beast takes the remaining jars still in the crypt to the house for better protection as he waits for his forces to bring back the urn Sumo took.

how many Front men are there?

>>88537565
At least 13.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9ly35NQfZw8