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watching this short now- seems up /co/'s alley.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YcchrgJgryo
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bump?
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who is the target audience?

Angel Anaconda fans who constantly fantasize about getting revenge on Stacey?
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>>88035640

dunno but I love it
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>>88035233
>>88035640
Okay, so the demo would be 18-35 year olds, which is of course the most-consuming market in the '10s so it's got that going for it. It definitely has the John K. style which also goes well. It would definitely have to go to either Adult Swim or FX, though it seems more AS's cup of tea. This still also works since, with the exception of Archer, AS still brings in a lot of that demo with their adult animation lineup. It seems like it would be easy to animate on a regular basis, and would likely cost only around $90,000 an episode to animate fully, if less if the artist is good with their digital production. That's an estimate of the closest seeming animation style that would fit (Loud House).

Guys, this is funny as shit, just ignore the first minute or so's worth of the voice, it gets straight up hilarious.
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>>88036292
I'm just unsure on what the premise will be. Is it some nonsensical laugh-a-day about high school that sometimes has a paranormal or weird twist like Regular Show does or is she pretty much gonna be a ghost forever?
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I love all those expressions, very crazy, love it.
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Yeah, it's quite good. Takes the American high school stereotypes so far it becomes a insane fantasy world.
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>>88035233
It is pretty good.
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>>88035233
>Those expressions
>That style.
>Had a good laugh

I like it. More soon?
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I'm surprised there's been BofA art or lewds since it was posted a month ago
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>>88037616
BofA?
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>>88035233
good
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>>88036330
i think the the general idea is that she's a ghost forever, since the pilot/demos is just it establishing how things are gonna work if it ever got a show
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>>88037845
BofA DEEZ NUTZ
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>>88035233
nice find

thanks OP, you're a cool guy
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>>88035233
That escalated.
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>>88035233
I think some tropes might get old despite the self-awareness, but there are a lot of great one-liners, and I love how expressive the characters are.
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now quote your favorite line

>I'm allergic to bees you punchline
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>>88039200
>Don't you spit that out Ella!
>That's Yours To Enjoy
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>>88039200
>And just who in the jolly shit do you think you are you horse's ass?
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>>88039200
>dies
>sees legions of the dead
>feels pulse
Sh*t...
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>>88039200
>I'm not going back to wearing a nicotine patch and a set of earplugs every lunch hour like in middle school
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I'd watch it.
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>>88039360
That got me.
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>>88039200
>Make like a tree
>AND GET THE FUCK OFF MY BENCH
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>>88039687
I how the "mean girl" stereotype looks like some sort of insect.
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>>88039687
Ohhh, I think this is one of the guys who worked on Bunnicula.
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>>88035233
I can't tell if that's just the prototype voice, or if they'd keep it for comedic effect.
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>>88039687
Goddamn Ello is adorable.
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>>88039687
It's always odd suddenly seeing monochrome characters in full color.

I pictured the two on the left with their colour schemes swapped.
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>>88035233
Not a fan of her voice but I guess I could get used to it. I really like their expressions. Would watch.
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>>88039200
>Why don't you frickin' make me, Starbucks.
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>>88040499
>>88040601
>>88039687
I like her GIANT BUTT
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>>88040499
>[X] that ass
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>>88040601
Pretty sure that's a dude doing a falsetto. Remember the message in the beginning; voice and sound are scratch for proof-of-concept.
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>Elbows that red ghost fucker
Got a good laugh outta me, then again so did a lot of moments.
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>I need some sleep playing at the end

Great.


Shit has potential
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I've watched this so many times. I like how evil Jessica is, and the expressions and body language are amazing. Also the art looks pretty familiar. Not sure what it reminds me of though
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>>88040995
I dont know why but that ghost child with the lollipop gets a good laugh out of me each time.
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>>88040601
Honestly I think the voice kind of sells it.

It's basically an angstier Daria.
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>>88041024
Some parts feel like out of Ren and Stimpy
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>>88039200
>Prayer before test taking is still considered cheating
>Sometimes you just wanna lollipop their throat with a gel pen
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>>88040601
The voice is what makes parts of it funny
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Its sad that the best new animated series ive seen this year isnt even finished.
>>88037616
Sauce?
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>>88041180
You can definitely see a lot of John K style with the ghosts.
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>>88041108
That was a pretty funny part. Pretty much everything about Purgatory was funny, especially with how horrifying all the ghosts were while Becky wasn't having any of that shit
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>>88039200
>why dont you make me you living sterotype
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>>88040871
She has a pretty damn good ass
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I'm liking it so far. Good style.
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Might be my favorite take on the intentionally stereotypical mean girl. She looks so psychotic.
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>>88041245
Yeah, a lot they can do with purgatory, the fact that she just starts chilling with Lizzie Borden is great.
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Why did they use their one female voice actor on not the main character?
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>>88039200
>this is how the T-Rex drinks his chocolate milk
>hrrggglllgghhhhh!!!
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>>88041391
I could forsee her being a great antagonist, possibly dipping into supernatural shit herself in order to get back at Becky
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>>88041416
She probably couldn't pull off the right voice for Becky
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>>88041416
The one female voice actor sounds foreign so putting her on the character with the least lines made sense.
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>>88041416
I prefer the voice Becky has in this one, has its charm to it, dont think I'd want it any more feminine
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>>88041416
Because it's funny
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I really liked Becky's pants for some reason.

The whole thing was great overall. It's been a while since I've found anything this funny.
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What type of genre would you classify this as?
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>>88041404
Lizzie Borden's scenes were entertaining, but I know a little too much about the Bordens' history, so Lizzie's portrayal felt really inaccurate and it was a little distracting.
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>>88041696
Black comedy?
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>>88039200
"Oh my god. What happened to my 2 inch waist?"
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>>88041696
Slice-of-purgatory?
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>>88041642
Yeah, whats great about this its not just waifubait with becky and her fat ass, but its actually hilarious.
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Episode 2: Becky re-possesses her own body?
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>>88041713
In what way was it so innaccurate?
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>>88039687
It's a really good art style. You can have a sexy design like Becky and a super cartoony one like Sheldon or whatever his name was and it works.
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>>88041404
>>88041713
Why is Lizzie Borden a popular character? She showed up in Gravity Falls too and I hadn't even heard of her before that.
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>>88041822
Well, first off, Lizzie is portrayed according to the age everyone knows her as being, which is around her early 30s, the time the murders took place and she became famous. But she actually died in her late 60s. Why is her ghost so young? That's mostly what bothered me.

Secondly, I kinda always thought that maybe she didn't do it. She was acquitted and there is evidence that sort of suggests it wasn't her, though she mostly got off because there wasn't enough evidence confirming anybody at all and there is some cause for people to believe it was her.

And she was kinda a little too crazy, but I can excuse that because it's a cartoon, all the characters are exaggerated and crazy.
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>>88041979
I'd suppose it be the rhyme about her that makes her a bit more well known

>Lizzie Borden took an axe
>And gave her mother forty whacks.
>When she saw what she had done,
>She gave her father forty-one.
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>>88041979
Cause Lizzie Borden took an axe
And gave her mother forty whacks.
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>>88041979
She's infamous like Jack the Ripper, Ted Bundy, or Bonnie and Clyde
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>>88041979
>Lizzie Borden took and axe and gave her mother forty whacks
>And when she saw what she had done, she gave her father forty one

It is literally because her story became a modern nursery rhyme. Kids have been skipping rope to that for a century now. At the time her murder case was an international scandal comparable to the OJ Simpson trial.
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>>88042042
>>88042049
This must be a thing in places where I don't live because I've never heard of her or that rhyme.
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Becky and Ella remind me of my edgy friends from high school.
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That was pretty damn good actually.
Also, Jessica sounds a lot like Christa Miller, which is never a bad thing.

That Lizzie Borden cutting down the tree part worked so well.
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>>88042120
I live in Massachusetts, so she's part of the local history. And some people around here fucking love local history. My sis worked at the murder house for a while giving tours. It's a bed and breakfast now, you can sleep there.
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I want Becky to sit on my face
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>>88042120
I dont even remember when I first heard it, but I
liked to watch ghost hunting shows and all that paranormal shit when I was little, so probably from tv.
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>>88039200
>"i guess bad habits..."
>cheezy pause
>"...die hard"
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That was really good
There's never going to be anymore, is there?
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>>88042233
>That shoulder
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>>88042299
there will always be fanart
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>>88042299
I don't see why he couldn't make another one. It'll take time though.
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>>88042337
People usually dont make more of a pilot cartoon if it's not greenlit.
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>>88042405
You do if you like the concept enough. But I'd be fine if he wanted to do other stuff after this.
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>>88042405
this really isn't polished enough to be called a pilot
More like a concept animatic
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>>88042216
mfw >You're my bench now Jessie
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>>88042465
>That ass crack peek as she goes to sit down
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>>88035233
Rule 34 when?
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>>88042465
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>>88042465
>>88042501
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>>88042510

Maybe soon, let me finish my hot chocolate and think up some ideas.
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>>88042233
>shoulder freckles
Scandalous
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becky is a fantastic take on the anti social angry teen. the fact that things get to her plays a big part, she is not the disaffected know it all who silently judges everyone, like daria, things get to her, she gets angry and frustrated and fights back. she also doesnt go out of her way to fuck with others, she was willing to let the whole thing rest until they decided to rub it on her face. she is practical and self reliant, she doesnt go to complain about her issues or takes out her anger on others and there is a true core of care inside of her, you can see that in the way she tells her friend that she can enjoy her candy and shouldnt listen to bullies.
also she's hilarious and kind of hot in her own trashy way
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>>88042562
Ghost handjob while phasing through the guy's body

Just throwing out an idea.
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>>88035640
>Angela Anaconda
Alright, did anyone actually watch that show beyond the commercials and that intro to the Digimon movie?

I feel like none of us have actually watched it, yet we're all scarred by it.
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>>88042562
this
>>88042465
but with a male bench that keeps his penis.
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>>88042618
I used to watch it, nothing amazing but I'll always love the stupidity of that Digimon short.
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She reminds me of Marie Kanker
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Looks like an edgier Daria that is meant to resonate with all those "cool, hip, rad" alternative rebel girls where the MC is supposed to point out how totally uncool those girls that do follow the mainstream are so uncool.

I like it.

>>88039200
Shut up and look at my [distorted] DEAD EYE
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>>88035233
>the illwillpress screech at 1:40
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not sure how I feel about the voice. but I like everything else.
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>>88042587
>she doesnt go to complain about her issues or takes out her anger on others
Ay I like her too, but she was prepped to shank someone over a school bench.
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Love it. VA needs some work but it's obviously just a proof of concept and just the creator himself filling in.

While a lot of people are comparing it to Daria for obvious reasons with the disillusioned teen angst I feel like the humor and characters is more akin to something like Dan Vs., with the main character mostly driven by rage vengeance over petty things yet despite the issue themselves seem to be trivial the antagonist go far and beyond their stereotypical trait to near psychotic degree's and thus raising the stakes despite the stakes themselves seem to be a whole lot of nothing.
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>that selfie
>missing waifu
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>>88042233
>shoulder freckles
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>>88035233
I like it.

The characters are nice, the humor is good.
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>>88035233
>that credits music
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vTThyYf8zlg

fuck
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>>88042979
i mean that she doesnt whine about it to other people or take her anger on people who dont deserve it, like if she was a different character she could have gone to her house and take out her frustration on her parents of by being a bitch to her little brother.
instead she inmediatly took matters into her own hands without having to involve anyone else
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>>88042979
To be fair she was probably suffering from lack of nicotine, combine that with teenage hormones and encountering a complete bitch, it's a nasty cocktail of aggression.
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>listen to song during the haunting sequence
>YOU'VE BEEN LIVING LIKE A LITTLE GIRL
>IN THE MIDDLE OF YOU LITTLE WORLD
>fucking sick
>go to listen the rest of the song
>is nothing like the part i like
>i get like four minutes of shitty psicodelic rock instead

fuck, i thought i was going to get something closer to tom waits, now i want a whole song like that section
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>>88043180
I find it amusing how every song that's featured in Shrek will always be remembered for that, no matter what context they're brought up in all these years later.
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>>88039200

[HAWK SCREECHING]
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Fanart from what I think is a friend of the animator.
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Not so fond of this one; it really tones down Jessica's freakish aspect. Looks more like a normal cartoon.
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>>88043377
I think all the songs that were in Shrek were famous because of Shrek. All Star was pretty popular beforehand but yeah.
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>>88043485
Source?
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>>88043377
once a Shrek song always a Shrek song
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>>88043560
https://twitter.com/MagicBunnyArt/status/797980254153228288
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>>88043523
I like that the eyelashes give off a sorta devil horns effect.
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>>88043523
Yeah her grin is a lot less insane
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>>88043523
>>88043736
I think she looks like that a bit at the start. She just looks increasingly more insane the longer she's on-screen.
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>posted 1 month ago
>only 50K views
What the fuck is this shit?
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>>88039200
>Wow, Becky! You sure are hardcore!
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>>88039200
>I don't see your name on it!
>It's carved in the back. Like you, if you don't make like a tree, and gET THE FUCK OFF MY BENCH
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>>88043485
>>88043523
>>88043591
This woman has "Very Special Thanks" in the very short credits for this animatic.
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>>88044055
I loved how that scene played out, just the perfect timing after Jesse says that and Becky pulling out a knife, all because of a bench.
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>>88043945
It's an original animation on youtube. This is a generous amount of views.
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Becky Prim on Adult Swim when?
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>>88039200
>opens up closet doors
>sees waifu material including body pillow
WHAT THE SHI-
*cuts away*
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Oh wow
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>>88043377
The best rendition of Hallelujah comes from Shrek so you can't blame me
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http://toxicgummy.tumblr.com/post/152737333882/i-really-love-her-ok
http://toxicgummy.tumblr.com/post/152720495807/already-in-love-with-this-gremlin
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>>88044333
Can't fault him for bad taste in women at least.
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>>88035379
Man, I actually don't think I want the clip to be cleaned up.

The messy sketchy look really adds to her psychotic behavior.
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>>88044333
It's like looking in a mirror.
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>>88044333
The stereotypical popular girl's great, because she's so damn over the top, but I think I'd find the nerd increasingly grating as time went on.
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>>88042233
Cute. CUTE!
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>>88039687
>>88041884
The guy's name is Norville, right?
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>>88044642
Norville could be his last name.
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>>88035233
Holy fuck this is great.

I wonder how would an episodic plot would work. Would she be dead the whole series with the rest of the episodes being just her daily life dealing with bizarre dead characters? Maybe her death is a one-off joke that nobody brings up again.
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>>88039200
>You know how I feel about overblown and unrealistic nerd stereotypes
>Gyuh- Hiii Becky!

This was made much better for seeing the short relatively not long after being in a thread with some complaints about the "Obituary" pilot's handling of its nerd character. Norville or whatever his name is had the perfect introduction to excuse how overdone his character type is, and his perversion takes his character in a less often seen direction that makes for some good jokes.
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>>88044550
He doesn't really have anything to him as a character.
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>>88044642
His movements remind me of a muppet
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As amazing as this was, it saddens me to think that on the slim chance this gets made into a full fledged series, a lot of the charm would almost definitely be lost.

I mean, has there ever been a good pilot that turned into a good show?
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Can anyone else relate to this?
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>>88044642
I love his design. He reminds me of Psychonauts.
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>>88044794

>I mean, has there ever been a good pilot that turned into a good show?

Fairly Odd Parents if you focus on earlier seasons
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>>88044763
I disagree. He has waifu fagging down pretty well and I'm not used to seeing that satirized in a television type format.

I guess he might get old, but they could always just kill him off or have him possessed more often than not.
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>>88044550
I thought he was hilarious.
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>>88044826

As a benchkin, this cartoon both offends and arouses me. Please remove it from the internet, but produce lots of R34.
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>>88044794
I honestly could see this being a really good comic, way more freedom with the style, as much as I would love to see this be a full cartoon, the transition does risk losing the charm the pilot gives us.
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>>88044711
I imagine if it gets picked up each episode would probably be a mix of both paranormal shit and school stuff, probably exploring more of the twisted school body
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>>88042605

I don't really know what you mean by that.
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>>88044794
>has there ever been a good pilot that turned into a good show?
Ye... yes? Every good show?
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>>88044794
I said the same thing about the Adventure Time pilot back in 2007
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>>88044880
But if it were a comic we'd miss out on the voice acting and expressive movements.
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>>88044834
>Psychonauts
Ah, that's what his design reminded me of.

The suicidal cheerleader.
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>>88039200
>I'm here for your body
>Well, well...please be gentle

And it's not a line, but that deflating sound when the possession ends had me in fucking tears.
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>>88044898
Does that count as sex or masturbation?
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>>88039200
Make like a tree and get the fuck off my bench
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>>88044898
SOMEONE STOP THIS MADMAN
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>>88044898
Uncensored pls
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>>88044858
>He has waifu fagging down pretty well and I'm not used to seeing that satirized in a television type format.
It's like Helga (and to a lesser degree, Brainy), but a little darker. t's pretty good, though, and you're right, stalking on that level isn't shown so much these days.
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>>88044898
sauce?
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>>88044858
I could see him either being her go-to possession target, and her antics causing him to gain a weird reputation, or using her possession powers to jump into various people to do crazy shit with
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>>88039200

>*Deep breath*
>Ew.
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In an alternative cartoon universe:

>"Why don't you frikkin' make me, Starbucks."
>"And just who in the jolly shit do you think you are, you horse's ass? You really think you can fill my seat with your social disease?"
>Becky in the nerd's body continues negging on Jessie until Jessie is cumming is psychotic rage

Fuck it, now I just want the premise of the show to be nerd-boy is forever possessed by Becky who slowly transforms his social image into a hardcore bad-boy alpha male
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>>88035233
PORN WH-
>>88044898
oh
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>>88045101
>>88045023

https://a.pomf.cat/umohav.jpg

What next
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>>88045109
I'd like to see a variety of ghosts end up using him as their possession puppet and see how that fucks with his life.

Like, can you imagine being a highschool student and having a several month blackout and waking up with everyone thinking you're a psychotic badass?
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>>88045181
Thnks bby
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>>88035233
>WAIFU BECKY
ok i lost
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>>88044898
Why make Nerdo the focal point?
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>>88045181
Draw the bully girl. Doing something.
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>>88045294

Because he's fun to draw.
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>>88044711
Maybe it's just a school show, but she's a ghost.
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>>88045328
Exploring Danny Phantom's lost potential.
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I really like it, but I couldn't deal with that voice.
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>>88045181
Her making the camera her bench now
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>>88044898
OTP obtained
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>>88035379
I need more reaction images but I'm shit at mking them myself.
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>>88035233
You know what? I kinda like it. It's nice to see the bitchy genre-aware emo girl be the main character instead of just a side gag.
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>>88045181
Becky doing angry paizuri
moderate breast size, so it isn't really working
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>>88045181
Face sitting with the bench
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>>88045362
The voice was what made it work imo
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>>88039200

>I guess old habits.....die hard
>*dramatic lightning*

That was carlos tier and I still lost it
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>>88045416
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>>88039200
>In the flesh
>Or... in a flesh.
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>>88039200
>What about this oujia board I bought? I got it so we could ghost chat...
>You don't need that shit Ello...
>No damn spell check on those things anyways.
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>>88039200
>It's time to take charge of your life, PJ.
>I don't know if I have in- [SLAP]
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>>88039200
>>88045544
>Yeah...this is ours now
>Ours now...
>Ours!
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>>88039360
I like how her eyes turn red for like half a second.
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this could use a hellava more porn if you ask me. Definitely needs to get more out there.
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>>88039200
>Let's see if this little freak has anything cool to wear.
>Dun Doo!
>What the fu-
The delivery of that line had me in fuck stitches.
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This is great
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>>88039687
I imagined becky to have dark purple hair
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>>88045879
I think this will be a flavor of the month starting now. So expect lots of fanart.
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>Main character is a stoner transexual
Nope.
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>>88045963
It's a woman you dip
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>>88045963
bait
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>>88045963
i know you're baiting, but smoker's voice in high school isn't that rare
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>>88045962
It needs to wait two more days, The thicc redhead from Inner workings isn't quite done with her 5 minutes of fame yet.
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>was that you colonial farmboy?
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>>88045960
I just imagined her hair a darker shade of brown, or a dark reddish color, and kinda wanted to picture her pants as green. And I thought Ello would have lighter red hair.
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>You're my bench now, /co/!
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does anyone know if he sent this in to any studios?
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>>88046115
I admit to having paused on every frame of this.

Didn't take screenshots though. Maybe someone else did?
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If anyone is taking requests I'm requesting Becky getting molested by ghost hands.
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>>88046115
Dat ass
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>>88045544
I love how her eyelashes are animated.
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>>88046148
>Fresh!
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>>88046143
>Hope you like discount, off-brand jeans!
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>>88046264
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>>88046295
let's see that ass crack
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>>88046352
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>>88043732
I like the insectoid effect better: >>88046190
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>>88046264
>Hope you like discount, off-brand jeans!
I do actually!

And these pictures!

Thanks!
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>>88046499
No problem
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>>88045420

https://a.pomf.cat/wqnjjs.png
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>>88046556
>>88046410
>Unlucky
With an ass like that in my face the word would leave my vocabulary and never return.
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>>88046556
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>>88043523
I really love this actually.
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>>88044898
The efficiency with which people create and distribute porn is fucking superhuman and yet we still haven't all decided to not turn our planet into a garbage furnace...*unzips dick*
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some get a show of norville's closet
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>>88046580
Holy shit, he actually did mine, the fucking madman. 10/10
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>>88046580
Bless

>>88046632
There's something about porn that brings out an unexpected civil side to humanity.
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>>88046115
>>88046264
>>88046295
>>88046410
>>88046556
>>88046585
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We need more of the fat girl. She's cute.
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>>88046768
Agreed.
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>>88046768
Ello was adorable. But I couldn't nail her accent. It was so all over the place.
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>tfw becky reminds you of that girl you liked in high school

punk casually smoking cunt who will never leave my heart
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>>88046834
Sounded like some asian.

Reminds me of BMO from AT's accent.
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>>88046666
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>>88046865
It definitely had some Korean in it but it never felt defined enough for me to be sure.
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>>88046874
I wonder what the moonspeak says
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>>88046874
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>>88046874
WHAT THE FU
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>>88046909
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>>88046410
well now thats just great
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>>88035233
Why don't they ever bother to color these animatics in?
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>>88046944
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>>88046958
Too much work
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>>88046958
Because that takes a lot of time and ins't necessary.
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>>88046971
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Goddamn I love the mean girl's design.
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bretty good dawg, thanks for sharing the vid.
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>>88036292
>would likely cost only around $90,000 an episode to animate fully
Where are you getting this estimate from? I'm not an animator, but the art in this pilot is much more expressive than most of what I see on TV, so I imagine actually putting it into motion would cost more than it would to put, say, Infinity Train into motion. Unless the cost of production has nothing to do with how good it looks, in which case, da fuq?
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>>88046951
>Beautiful Darkness
That comic gave me PTSD
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>>88046874
Did he make that body pillow himself or does Becky closely resemble an existing anime character in this universe?
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>>88047110
You can custom order those things. Probably drew the design himself or commissioned it.
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>>88035233
>short
>12 minutes
Closed it immediately
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>>88047177
>12 minutes isn't short

What you, a hummingbird?
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>>88047193
>standard cartoon episode runtime
>a short
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>>88044794
Has there ever been a good cartoon that turned into a bad show?
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>>88045181
>>88046580
Dead links. Sad day.
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>>88046998
That dakimakura would make good merch.
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>>88047140
Man, I kinda wish I had an unhealthy obsession with an irl waifu and a shitton of cash to throw away just so I could commission a creepy custom body pillow. That takes dedication.
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>>88047177
Short film.

How new are you to film?
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>>88047264
Work for me.
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>>88047315
Sadder day.
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>>88047281
>animated short
>same genre as short film
>implying one would judge both under the same criteria
I would like to ask the same question of you
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>>88044794
If this was a series, I guess it could work with Becky being dead, and it being about her adventures as a ghost. But as mundane as it may sound, I would really prefer if this was just about her's and her friend's highschool life without her being dead.
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>>88047367
no, wednesday
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>>88035233
>Such great visual direction
>Finding myself terrified that character design and animation quality would be fucked into Brickleberry-tier if this series ever got picked up.

Literally too good to exist.
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>>88046714
how does she fit it all in those jeans
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>>88040734
>Starbucks
Is there context for that as an insult?
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>>88039687
those colours suck. Why are they so washed out?
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>>88047454
Stereotypical dumb white girl trope that they like Starbucks.
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>>88047383
It's Wednesday?
Could this get any worse?
Seriously though, is pomf.cat down, or is just me?
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>>88047454
she's calling her basic.

Sorry you're not hip to the times grampa
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>>88047370
There's a Best Animated Short category at the Oscar's, though it's really a holdover from the days of Looney Tunes.
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I've been looking at way too much ABDL porn. When Becky sat on the bench's face with her fat ass fitting into those tight jeans, I couldn't help but imagine it was a full diaper.
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>>88047501
Here
>>>/aco/1027752
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>>88047503
Kids these days and their Beastie Boys and five dollar coffee, grumble, grumble
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>>88042194
>Massachusetts
Dude, I live here too.

/co/ meetup when?
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>>88047222
Standard cartoon runtime is 22 minutes you tard.
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>>88047558
>Academy Award
...so do you know ANYTHING about film? Like at all?
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>>88047635
The 22 minute runtime is often made up of 2 different 11 minute segments.

Also, this show would be perfect for the Hot Topic crowd. Then again, I said the same thing about Moral Orel, and it never got any merch.
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>>88047640
Oscar's is the nickname people give it, guhhh
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>>88047635
That's two episodes you tard
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>>88047247
Simpsons
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>>88047633
There was only like one theater in Boston and maybe one in Providence that showed Song of the Sea for a weekend, so I assume the same will be true when The Breadwinner comes out. That might be a good time and place.
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>>88047670
My point is that if you think it matters in the slightest, you're a pleb of the highest caliber, nothing you said had anything to do with that. You can't even keep up with a conversation on the internet, you definitely don't know shit about film
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>>88036292
In 03-08 Adult Swim definitely. But not so much their style today.

98-02 Mtv might have had it as well.

But I cannot really see this coming on any channel these days.

Maybe if Nickelodeon ever tried having n Adult Swim type of thing on late at night that was something other than nostalgiafagging the 90's and made content for 18-34.
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>>88046768
>>88046834
I actually wanted to see more of alive Becky and Ello. That bit with her putting the candy back into her mouth was actually adorable. Like they really care for each other.

>>88039200
>Bassandra!?
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>>88035233
If this gets greenlit they better not change Becky's voice actor
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>>88047698
I meant to say "pilot," not "cartoon." Oops.

>>88047730
>>88047734
It's weird seeing such a friendly post juxtaposed with such a mean one.
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>>88047177
>>88047222

Are you a literal retard?
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>>88047763
>But I cannot really see this coming on any channel these days.
Netflix? Amazon? Hulu?

Or fuck, just color in the art, get better VA's, and make it a YouTube thing. As limited as the motion is, the show still looks much better than, say, Family Guy.
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>>88047769
I like that Ello was basically her moral compass. Trying to keep stabbings to a minimum.
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>>88047769
But now they can ghost chat.
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>>88047799
> the show still looks much better than, say, Family Guy.
That is no victory.

I agree though, even as an animatic the expressiveness of the characters is surprisingly fluid.
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>>88035233
>Becky's thick thighs straddling that wood in the carpentry scene
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>>88044794
I thought the pilot of Gravity Falls was genuinely funny. Much moreso than the first episode they turned it into later on.
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>>88047793
>I don't know the difference between a pilot and an animated short
The retarded person here is quite obviously you
>>88047787
What is truly weird is how much cock you suck, fag
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>>88047799
You have not named a Channel anon.

fucking channel
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>>88047871
lol
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>>88047799
Hulu yes, but not so much Netflix or Amazon.

Netflix is still throttling Dreamworks dick for all their animation and Amazon is not into post 13 year old animation of any kind.
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>>88047861
The pilot's punchline with how they finished off the gnomes was funnier, but I guess they wanted to be able to bring them back later on.
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>>88047819
:(
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>>88035233
That has to be one of my favorite renditions of the bitchy popular girl archetype
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>>88047950
A lot of the random jokes were better, and definitely for an older audience.
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>>88047854
I've never understood why people feel that mouths and legs need to move in order for animation to be good, when we have animation on TV that features moving mouths and legs, but not expressiveness.
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>>88039200
>A reminder to students that praying before a test is still considered cheating
>>
Great stuff. I liked the mean girls and the nerdo the best. Obviously they're tropes, but they were done in a very fun way
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>>88044055
>that foreshadowing
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>yolo balloon at the memorial
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>>88048412
I had like two different students from my school die while I was attending highschool and this was a pretty accurate if humorous portrayal at how the student body reacts to this kind of tragedy.
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>>88046834
It was Australian for like the first 2 minutes.
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>>88048412
>that tasteless fucking poster from the art club

This is the best pilot I've seen in a long time and it's not even finished
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>>88039200
>"Like uhm, Chirp!"
and
>"something. doesn't. Bode."
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>>88048412
Damn, how old is this short? YOLO was a thing in 2012. 2013 at the latest.

>>88048457
When it happened to me, the whole school went into mourning even though most of the students didn't know her.
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>someone throws a crumbled up piece of paper on her chalk out-line
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>>88048457

Honestly now that I think of it, this definitely feels like the movie Heathers if it was imagined by John K.
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>>88048518
Halloween of this year
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>>88048528
I got Heathers vibes too
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>>88048457
Ha, we had FIVE students die while I was at high school.

First year was a toufer, as was the last year, no one died my sophmore year though. Though I remember two seniors getting in a fight over a sandwich and one of them getting a broken jaw that year.
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Anyone know what else the creator of this worked on?
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>>88048609
>over a fucking sandwich
Absolute madmen
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>>88048635
Bunnicula and The Goon movie according to tumblr.
This short film too
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ptx7IPENoYE
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>>88048528
Nah, that would probably be even cooler.
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>>88048679
So he's a traditional animator AND he does CG? Really cool, cartoony CG?

This guy deserves a show.
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>>88048518
>When it happened to me, the whole school went into mourning

You died while you were at School?
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I think if this got picked up it would ignore that she died. It would be a fresh start. There's a lot more that you can do with her being alive than a ghost. She can still die in other episodes.
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>>88048679
I guess the raccoon ghost floating behind Becky in Purg is a cameo.
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>>88048675
lunch at my school was filled with madmen of the absolutest calibre.

I remember my junior year, the freshmen got free lunch taken away, and had to eat in silence, after, amongst other things, one of them was caught giving a blowjob to not one but TWO other students under the lunch table. I never found out if the two receiving blowjobs had known about the other or what.

I don't even live in the inner city or anything, this is just the shit that happens in a military town in the south.
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>>88048679
What a talented man.
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>>88048731
woah
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>>88048731
>I never found out if the two receiving blowjobs had known about the other or what.
I feel like it would be kinda impossible not to know.
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>>88048731
Ah, good, another reason to never move south. I always need those in the colder months.
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>>88048788
I'm not entirely sure if it was at the same time or not, like if they only got caught sucking one off, and then admitted to sucking off the other one, I'm not sure. On one hand, that seems more likely than blowing two dudes, but why would you like, drag the other one down for no reason? And the story kind of made it sound like it was at the same time.
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>>88048818
It was probably at the same time. You wouldn't snitch on someone else I don't think.
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>>88048838
You also wouldn't blow two dudes in the middle of fucking lunch in the middle of the fucking cafeteria, or break a dude's jaw over a sandwich, and yet here we fucking are.
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>>88048871
You wouldn't blow one dude in the middle of fucking lunch but it happened.
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>>88048883
>You wouldn't blow one dude in the middle of fucking lunch
well hey let's not get ahead of ourselves there anon
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>>88046909
That's Farah Faucet, isn't it?
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>>88048412
>>88048457
Isn't that kind of an asshole thing to bring to a memorial? I mean, YOLO is supposed to imply that since you only live once, you should enjoy life to it's fullest. But if they're already dead, it comes off more as mocking.
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>>88049108
Yeah, that poster was the Lesbians Kissing poster of the 70s, everyone had it
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>>88049150
Yes. You'll note many other things in this short that were jokes.
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>>88049150
I think that's the point.
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>>88049164
>>88049165
I'm talking about the guy who saw this really happen >>88048457
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>>88049150
Well, high schoolers ARE dicks
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>>88049150
The whole thing was incredibly meanspirited, anon.

Why did that strike you as out of character?
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>>88049150
Yes. But 1: this is a cartoon. And 2: teenagers have very little sense of tact.
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>>88049186
I doubt that guy was in school when YOLO was a thing
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>>88039687
I thought shed have blue hair
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>>88049226
That's because she looks similar to Marie from EEnE.
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>>88049186
That'd be me. We didn't literally have a YOLO balloon (I graduated before yolo was a thing) or anything quite that bad. But, there was this strong sense of awkwardness. People that didn't know the deceased very well building awkward ill-fitting tributes and blatantly crying out in the open even though it didn't make much sense for them to be that sad, the faculty trying to be supportive and encouraging but it just not coming off as very genuine, popular or showy kids trying to put on a good face by pretending to mourn when they really didn't care, actual friends of the deceased being the only people actually grieving but doing it very quietly and in private, people trying to say good things about the deceased but being unable to do so and then ending up portraying the dead student as something they weren't, that kinda atmosphere. Just kids not knowing what to do who had no experience being solemn or respectful.

We had a memorial plaque with all the names of students that had died while in attendance of the school right next to the trophy cabinet. No posters or balloons, just names, but it was in just the kind of place in the main entrance hall just like Becky's memorial.
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>>88046908
closest I can figure is あらがとうの先輩 Older brother Senpai
google corrects it to ありがとうの先輩 Arigatō no senpai "Thanks senior"
I can't find the second kana. It looks like ら without the top stroke, it might just be drawn wrong
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>>88049150
The whole pilot is a dark comedy so that's the joke
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>>88035379
>>88041391
>is incredibly cartoony, over-the-top, and psychotic
>has hips and a booty
Goddamn... I want this to become a show for Jessica Kimly alone!
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>>88047177
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>>88043945
Share stupid.
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>>88035233
those were the best 12:15 min i had in a very long time
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>>88046264
That break my sides.
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>>88047730
I would be down for this too. There are a LOT of MA people in the thread I guess
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>>88035233
Karl is cool. Check his "Roadkill Redemption" if you hadn't seen it yet.
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>>88047083
That's a midrange episode cost for something drawn digital as opposed to something hand-drawn in the John K. style. Ren and Stimpy episodes cost an adjusted $190,000 to produce, but I think the bulk of those costs are slashed when you consider that we're going from hand to digital where assets can be reused, and the style toned to a more cost-effective range. $90,000 is a conservative estimate.

I picked R&S rather than Spongeob, which costs ~$500,000 per episode, because a lot of that gets dumped into the talent rather than the actual show's production overhead. I'd wager that it costs less than $100,000 per episode for SBSP, but when you consider how many people have to be payed more to be retained, the price creeps up. R&S had no 'big-name' talent behind it, so the costs were fairly stable. It's difficult for me to find a show with a similar art style that gives the numbers per ep (or season and extrapolate) but that's my ballpark.

Of course a pilot has its own upfront costs that push it forward, but I'm talking once it's in full production and has a staff.
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>>88039200
BUZZ BUZZ
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>>88035233
Bretty good.
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>>88035233
Fuck this shit is good
The humour is top notch, the art style works wonderfully with the tone, and the general idea has a ton of potential.
Also, Jessica is probably the best take I'd seen on the cliche "bitchy popular girl" character type, why is everyone so obsessed with writing these kinds of characters as down to earth and straight as possible anyway?
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>>88040499
>>88040606
>red head
Welp
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>>88050704
Nah. To animate an episode with the amount of animation and unique faces that you'd want couldn't be done for many episodes. It would basically be hand drawn as you'd be doing every frame by hand RandS style. It would be ridiculous. No show on today has the level of motion that you'd want with this.
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>>88047769
Will Becky give Ello a Ghost Blow Job?
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>>88050883
Only if she has a wang
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>>88042159
>Ella
>edgy
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>>88048457
I think about 5 students died when I was in high school. 2 an hero'd, 2 got in car accidents, and 1 died in some kind of bonfire gas explosion iirc. I didn't know any of them, but it sure got surreal by like the third death. Small town too.
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>>88048811
If you hadn't noticed, the drama up north seems to involve death a little more often, especially of the macabre variety.
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>>88051015
hero'd?
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>>88051057
Oh for fucks sake, not this again...
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>>88051057
an hero. Commit Sudoku.
Suicide.
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>>88050861
If we want this to go to production, let's be realistic. This short is a FANTASTIC elevator pitch, but it will have to be toned down if we are to see this anywhere other than this singular Youtube video.
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>>88051112
Eh, I could easily see it on [as]. Besides them not liking shows that actually look good.
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>>88051085
ah.
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>This is how a T-Rex drinks
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>>88046944
>That one taken from inside a ceiling vent
Impressive. I hope his hidden talent for espionage is touched on later on the show.
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>>88050704
>where assets can be reused
I hope just backgrounds and props. The style is what makes it so damn good.

>and the style toned to a more cost-effective range
Boooooooooooo! I'd rather they keep it exactly like this and color it in than change the style.

Thanks for explaining your numbers, dude. When you say "the talent," do you mean voice actors? I don't think SpongeBob's core creative team demands more money than Ren & Stimpy's, but I could be wrong.
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>>88050861
Could we eliminate the animation entirely and keep the unique faces? Maybe?
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>tfw had that Ghostbusters fantasy since I could remember
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>>88040499
Red hair, thicc booty, wicked humor, and cute best friend.. These are all positives.
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>>88041391
Best psycho bitch I've seen in a while.
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>>88051887
Yes. Tom Kenny pulls in more money per episode than A. Any of the other cast B. He deserves for his bland voice. He's the 3rd highest paid dedicated voice actor in show business (when you take out the Simpson's cast).
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>>88040601
>>88047272
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>>88052699
Is there, like, some sort of website where I can find out how much VAs get paid?
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>>88052778

The link is fuckhueg, but it's the first thing that comes up when you Google 'how much does Tom Kenny make per episode'.

https://www.google.co.jp/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=2&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=0ahUKEwjq7Iizw9DQAhWBebwKHXzADGsQFggfMAE&url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.facebook.com%2FBill.William.Willem.Liam%2Fposts%2F10201461948649560&usg=AFQjCNFfRvKsn0Wvbm5gu6IvA1FS65VuDw
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>>88040256
It literally says right there in the video that
>scratch music and sound used for proof-of-concept only.

I doubt the creator plans to voice the whole thing by himself, after all
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>>88048718
She could be like Kenny or someone from Superjail or something, die if it suits the episode and then just be alive next ep like it's nothing
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Part of me knows in my heart that if this were picked up, it'd have similar animation to Bunnicula (and not just because he storyboarded on that show)
I just mean it'd be a show that looks fantastic in stills but the actual animation is a bit lackluster
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>>88053366
So don't animate it. Keep it like this, but with coloring and better sound.

I'm gonna force this idea into all future discussions of this show because it's brilliant.
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>>88039687
Funny, I'd imagined her as the blonde and the preppy girl as brunette.
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>>88051870
I think it's more likely from inside a locker.
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>>88048385
DEEPEST
LORE
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>>88053490
you know, that is something that could be done and im impressed it hasnt been done yet
if one guy can do this by himself it really shouldnt cost a lot to do something just slightly better with, say, 3 animators, same shading, same animatic style of animation, maybe just a tiny more cleaned up
it suprises me noone ever went with the idea to some producer and convinced them exclusevely on how cheap it would be to do
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>>88047819
>>88047769
Honestly the ghost-ness doesn't seem all that permanent to me.

If it became a show I can see her dying in the pilot but it being back to normal the next episode. Kind of like any time eustace got captured, experimented on, exploded, died, stuck with some monster in courage. Or any of the zaniness from Billy and Mandy, such as reversing time till their prelife then death.
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>>88056109
Well it's a pilot, so it's easy to assume that it could be the premise, but yeah there's not a lot of indication it could just be a random plot that isn't consistent with the rest of the sow.
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>>88056109
The concept seems heavily themed on her being a ghost
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>>88035233
that was fun as hell

definitely better than first RS animatic
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>>88050820
>why is everyone so obsessed with writing these kinds of characters as down to earth and straight as possible anyway?
I appreciate when the "bully" character can be written with a bit more humanity and/or depth, if they're going to be taken seriously as a character for the long-term. Pacifica Northwest, Courtney Gripling, etc.

But in a purely comedic take on the trope like this? The psychotic approach is perfect.
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>>88053068
They could keep something similar though. To be funny.
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Is Ello asian?
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>>88056958
no her facefat just makes her squint
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>>88056958
Her scratch-track voice actor is Asian.

Otherwise, I don't know. I'd kind of expect some cartoon version of Asian physical features.

Does "Ello" come from initials "L.O."?
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>>88056958
then she'd erro
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>>88048679

>that bit where she gives him the moon pie treat

I wasn't expecting these feels from this animator

I have a feeling OP short would get fucked if it was placed on Adult Swim or something, it's not EDGYYY enough for them based on their current material. But it's just dark and profane enough to never get on CN, Nick or anywhere else. It's a child with no home, even if it does get funded.

10/10 though, would watch Becky's sad weird life as a teenage ghost. Animation is top notch, haven't seen anything this expressive and emotive since... I dunno, The Maxx maybe? It would be a nice breath of fresh air in the industry.
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>>88057903
>Too dark to fill the Adventure Time slot, not unrepentantly awful enough to fill the Mr. Pickles slot
Cruel world we live in.
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>>88057903
Fuck it: Netflix original.
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>>88057903
It could always get thrown into one of those late night experimental sections on AS. It's kinda sad that AS and CC are kind of our only hope for adult animations. I mean there's fox, but no one really wants to end up there.
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>>88040249
It remainded me more to mighty bee
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>>88051057
God damn I'm old. Even 4chan meme's are starting to fall off into antiquity.
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>>88035233
After watching those animation projects about the edgy twink forcing someone to kill himself and the tumblr girl who sees dead people, this one is by far the best supernatural dark humor cartoon of the three.
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>>88058965
>the edgy twink forcing someone to kill himself and the tumblr girl who sees dead people
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>>88051051
Yes. You say that like it's a bad thing.
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>>88058329
Thats why the Cheerleader Bitch felt so familiar.
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>>88056106
I would buy it if it were as good as this.
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>>88059182
>the edgy twink forcing someone to kill himself
I know that one:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5LQe5nR2CgM

The tumblr girl I dunno
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>>88051896
If you want nobody to watch it sure.
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>>88059398
>Skirt!
forwhatpurpose.txt
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>>88059479
He's a mentally ill murderer. Most of them have some facet of strange fixation on women.
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>>88039687
id sniff beckys asshole
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>>88049162
That poster is from the 70s? Those ladies must be grannies by now.
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>>88059512
What would Becky's ghostly asshole smell like? Dust? A chill wind? Regret? Poo?
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>>88056958
Looks hispanic to me but could be Asian.
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>>88046115
aw yeah
facesitting redhead
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>>88059619
>Looks hispanic to me
Ello > L.O. > ...Linda Ortiz

Well, that's OK.
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>>88059398
Found it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0l940bPkV1o
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>>88043444
Trips of truth

Amazing use of sound effects all around
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>>88059922
>>88059398
OP has no finished production values and uses stock sounds and STILL seems more professional than either of these
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>>88035233
I liked it a lot. I want more but my soul is already feeling the crushing blow of never seeing this realize its potential

Also reminds me of Golan and I get crushed by that too
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>>88039200
>quack

https://vimeo.com/31698996
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>>88060943
It only came out a month ago, Anon. Don't give up hope so easily.
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>>88047380
I think the best way to go about it is the way Space Dandy does it. Characters die frequently and supernatural shit can go as far as the world being destroyed, only for the next episode to reset them all yet still somehow maintain a very slight bit of continuity going forward.
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>>88060943
Still surprised that it was by the Drawn Together crew
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>>88059672
>Becky will never sit on your face
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>>88060859
Becky Prim is actually a good concept with enjoyable characters and well written humour.

The other two are just boring and generic.
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This whole thing was amazing and I've followed Karl on any social media I found him on because of it. Definitely the Bunnicula dude.

Could you guys imagine how butchered this would be if it got picked up as a pilot and "changed" to be better for TV audiences? Think: Bee and Puppycat pilot vs actual show. We're talking straight up butchered.
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>>88048679
.....So anyone going to do anything with her?
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>>88064187
>>88046580

I'll give it a shot when I get home.
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>>88039200
>BEE AWARE
busted a gut laughing that
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>>88066419
I love how shallow and sanctimonious it is, as if most people need to give a shit about bee allergies.

Reminds me of this girl who died in high school while driving a car. There were a group of student who role-played being dead for a day (people weren't supposed to talk to them) to "raise awareness" about road safety.

Then it turned out the dead girl had been huffing paint. Whoops!
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>>88039687
I will too, and I kind of want it to be nothing but ghost adventures now, just haunting the school and righting perceived wrongs that are really just inconveniences for her, sometimes getting pulled back to purgatory, sometimes possessing different students, even stopping a shooting
There's so much for it to give, I hope it doesn't just go the SoL bland route
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>>88056106
You're forgetting the other half of the equation: speed.
Sure working solo is cheap but it's also slow
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>>88066881
>stopping a shooting
Because she knows shooters always get killed by police or themselves and she doesn't want that emo fag coming into purg to bug her there.
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>>88042618

I thought it was funny and I liked how unique the animation was. It was nice seeing a cartoon that wasn't SUPER CRAZY Johnny Test artstyle or Rugrats artstyle.
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>>88066983
I figured it would be more like she's people watching or possessing someone eating a lunch they only serve once a year and the shooter interrupts it, like oh my god, do you mind!?
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>>88048679
That's fucking hysterical. I love the racoon's
>seriously? like what the fuck?
look throughout the whole thing
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>>88060859

This one's >>88059922 isn't terrible, but could use a little polishing.
This one >>88059398 is absolute shit.
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>>88066917
thats why i mentioned they should hire maybe three more guys

but anyway that never stopped the venture brothers guys and they have way bigger production values
>>
bbum
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>>88049520
>I can't find the second kana. It looks like ら without the top stroke, it might just be drawn wrong
It's ri. When printed, the two strokes are merged.

>り

So I read it as "senpai's thanks," what with the の particle.
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>>88044550
I thought he was supposed to be hated
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>>88070693
I think he means in a sense he's not entertaining anymore. Like a character you hate is fine but a character you hate to watch is bad.
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>>88035233
Why are there so many damn indie cartoons based on ghosts and high school students?
Are all these fuckers just dedicated danny phantom fans or something?
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>>88070954
Because everyone's been in high school and everyone's been a ghost.
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>>88042618
I watched it

Angela a cute
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>>88070954
I think those are just general ideas that are common to draw upon.
Stories based in high school are exceedingly common.
Pieces with supernatural slants are fairly popular right now, and even more than that taking a standard background and adding otherworldly things and themes into them to mix things up is an ages old idea.
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>>88070954
I guess the high school premise is ripe for that coming of age story where you're old enough to deal with more adult problems, but not old enough sensibly avoid them.

Builds on the conflict of forcing mismatched people together that most people can relate to.
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>>88046834
>https://a.pomf.cat/wqnjjs.png
Just an accent
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>>88071099
>>88071293
>>88071356
But I swear to god they are all the same fucking cartoon
>Teenage kid in high school either is or sees ghosts
>Bitchy popular kid stereotype
>1 to 2 nerdy outcast friends
>Wacky hijinks
I get that there is nothing new under the sun but for fucks sake at least try.
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>>88041696
Cynical Comedy
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>the bee is in purgatory too
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>>88071567
That's what people like. That's why all anime are set in a highschool.
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>>88044333
>left arm holding camera
>left arm scratching chin

Whut?
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>>88071756
His right arm is twisted behind his back
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>>88071567
I feel like people are more self-aware of the tropes now than they were in the past.

But yeah, it was the go-to formula for a while.
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>>88041201
>Sometimes you just wanna lollipop their throat with a gel pen
I didn't get it.
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>>88071984
A lollipop is a stick stabbed through a piece of candy.

She wanted to stab someone's throat with a gel pen.

I think.
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>>88072045
>A lollipop is a stick stabbed through a piece of candy
I'm aware.

>She wanted to stab someone's throat with a gel pen.

>I think.

Eh.
Kinda a reach.

Anyway fun cartoon.
I knew girls like both back in middle and high school. They're both insufferable but the cartoon was well animated and funny.
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>>88071793
That's better?

Okay. Far be it from me to continue questioning cartoon physics.
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>>88072122
Yes. Like many things in this short it's meant to be ridiculous.
>>
this character was stolen just like that vivzie bitch
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>>88072271
literally who?
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>>88072485
you stole my character you dingus
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>>88044921
Boy that's got to feel surreal now huh?
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>>88061857
This
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>>88051923
>>
test
>>
Bumping because I love this short and more people should see it.
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>>88053366
>>88053490
do you guys think adult swim would pick it up if they just kept it at the animatic stage like this, with some colors and a little more polish? It would certainly be interesting and cheap.
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>>88075773
I'd watch it. I think the rough appearance of an animatic actually adds a lot to the experience. This school is too crazy for normal animation.
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>>88075773
Just needs better voicework and sfx, and I'd be sold.
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>>88041814
Episode 2:
>(Becky shows up in another body tge next day)
> "What happened to the other one?"
>"Freak was weirding me out too much, so I got rid of it. One of the perks of possession and being dead is that suicide is a totally acceptable option"
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>>88042015
>Why is her ghost so young?

When you're dead, you can be any age you want.
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>>88075773
Considering Comedy Central has a series which is just a bunch of moving animatics

yeah
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>>88042979
She strikes me as the type to slash across her face or arm and create a large cut as serious warning to leave rather than go straight up into stabbing.
If they gave her any more crap she'd probably put out her cigarette on their skin
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>>88072695
It was.
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>>88044711
Perhaps it's one of those shows that always "resets" at the end of each episode, like she'd be alive and ticked off at something else in the next episode.
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>>88045181
Not lewd, but I kinda want to see a drawing of Becky punching the popular girl really hard across the face, like brutally hard.
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>>88035233
>waifu Becky
He's "our guy"
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>>88076801
She's break her fingers on all those teeth.
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>>88077067
I had more of a hook in mind actually, punching her straight across the cheek.

Also, I don't think she'd care if her fingers were broken. To her it'd be absolutely worth it.
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>>88035233
I don't know why, but Jessy's creepiness is extremely arousing to me. Just... damn.
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>>88077519
Jessica's head is pretty much all teeth. You can't avoid them.
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>>88077569
Still would love to see it drawn.

I get the feeling Ello would be freaked out her hand is so messed up, and Becky would just stare at it casually thinking "huh, I guess it is..."
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>>88075773
>It would certainly be interesting and cheap.
Indeed. But I'd only watch it if Karl has full control over the script. Most writers for "adult" cartoons are pretty mediocre when it comes to comedy.
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Jessica's big smile reminds me of Freaky Fred.
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>>88078680
Also Yzma.
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>>88071808
>But yeah, it was the go-to formula for a while.
The op is the third cartoon to be pitched this year with that exact formula.
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