OC Donut Steel Thread

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Was playing around with head shapes a couple days ago, and really liked one of the odd shaped ones. I'm still developing her, she's an Axe-girl that is prideful and fairly short-tempered.

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>>86669328

this is sunflower.

And his/her life is going to be wreck by bad luck and misfortune. She/he is only six years old.

>>86669404
She's cool

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just an average joe in liberal america 2052, he's sorta like a bird man

>>86671157

How does he drink the water?

>>86669404

Is her gimmick that a huge bruiser character grabs her by the feet and starts swinging her around?

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Demon/Monster hunter, reincarnates w/every death. Developed him over the course of four years.

>>86671157
Makes me wanna vomit. I hope that was the intent.

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Holy shit it's Saturday. I had to go to work today and my brain is still on "Friday Night".

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>>86669404
I dig the lumberjack apparel. Does she fall in love with a lumberjack?

>>86670003
Looks like it will have lots of cute adventures that will go horribly wrong.

>>86671157
Jesus, if that's an average joe, then what's considered abnormal in their world?

>>86671289
This sounds interesting. So is he the only one of his kind? Is the reincarnation determined like the Avatar or something?

>>86671349
I like rats. We need less mouse representation and more rats.


I've been thinking of 3-5 stories set in Atlantis. The first is about Suzy Sewage, an ugly duckling who wants friends. Also an environmental threat and secret WMD.

>>86672467
The reincarnation was brought on by a spell when he was nearing death from old age. He's technically immortal, but not in the usual sense. And with every death, he forgets his past life, which brings me to another detail that I can explain if you're that interested.

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>>86672467

>>86671157
Seems like a pretty cool dude.

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Kerrigan, a character I thought up a little while after highschool. Originally planned her to be a central character of an arc, she being a sleeper agent for the world most dangerous crime family that adopted her. Nowadays, I don't think that fits the design here, but I wanna keep it. Plus she hasn't been published so maybe I can change things.

Art is by the artist Rem, not me.

>>86672815
Aw thanks anon. She is a first draft design and I am aiming for that Chupacabra/Fiji mermaid look.

>>86669404
That's one girl that I wouldn't want some head from

>>86671289
Please ask me questions about him, he could always use more development.

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I couldn't resist

>>86676465
Is he the best monster hunter in the world? What makes his reincarnation so special? Is it the latent wisdom and skills experienced throughout history? How old is he anyways? How did he get this ability? Does each incarnation share the same traits?

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Shy singer/guitarist from Norway

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>>86672467
thank you for noticing a sunflower anon.

>>86676899
book of life is the best halloween movie in my opinion

>>86676959
1. Not the best, but he's pretty up there.
2. Rather than change from person to person, he keeps the same physical appearance throughout each incarnation, with a few changes.
3. His original incarnation kept an enchanted journal that detailed all the monsters he discovered and fought. I say enchanted because the journal i. never runs out of pages ii. glows whenever a paranormal being/entity is nearby.
4. In his current incarnation, he's 26, but overall, he's somewhere in the 800's.
5. Again, his first incarnation cast a spell that would allow him to reincarnate.
6. Physically, yes, but personality-wise, there are a few differences between each incarnation.

>>86677817
That sounds cool af. But if he keeps the same appearance, then what kind of mother gives birth to him? Is he even born or does he magically appear a baby?

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The Principality of Sealand!

>>86678627
Huh, catfish are cute when they don't have razor blade whiskers.

>>86678155
Well, throughout each incarnation, his surname stays the same, so he's usually born to a person of that surname.

>>86678681
In one of the earlier concepts for him I gave him whiskers. I removed them for that exact same reason, lel.

>>86678744
Oh, that would work.

So is he reborn immediately or is it a generational thing?

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>>86673374
fucking
carlos

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>>86677605
i wanna fuck her
she's cool in my book

>>86679000
It's usually immediately. It's possible that he dies even before he gets to the age of monster hunting.

>>86679233
wait, so how is it in each generation, he just KNOWS from birth that he's a reincarnated monster hunter?

>>86679261
No, at a certain age, he comes across the journal I mentioned before, and there he learns of his past, and re-trains himself from there.

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It always fun to post some new material in the OC thread.

I have a few character designs, one of a character I've shown here before and of two others I haven't.

The first one is of a young orphan named Lucifer, whose possessed by a higher power. He usually looks much sweeter and less wrinkly when he's not possessed.

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>>86679606

Next, his sister Lulu. Unfortunately, Lulu's current state has left her less like her normal self, and thus she goes by a different identity: 'Queen' Leila.

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>>86678627
some expressions

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>>86679649

And finally, his second sister Luccia. Luccia had the closest relationship to her brother, unlike Lulu, but that's not saying much when the trio were only together ever as infants. A great tragedy split them apart long ago. Luccia nowdays serves a high power that rivals the one that possesses Lucifer, and holds less compassion for him than she did in the past.

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i wanna draw a jellyfish girl OC. but if i did, chances are it might look familiar to another persons OC that i'm unaware of. any tips/pointers?

>>86680168
There are many exotic jellyfishes to choose from. Find colors, patterns, and appendages that stand out to you.

And maybe stay away from making it look like she's wearing a tam hat with dreads hanging, that's most likely been done to death.

>>86680409
agreed. should i make it look more of a cobra's hood?

>>86680168
Those tentacles on the jellyfish in the image reminds me of the bottom of a dress. So I'm imagine the girl's body is transparent and blue. Her hair is all tentacles. She wears a dress. Also I think that she shouldn't have a face but unless if you want her to have those facial expressions, then that's ok. So those are my ideas.

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The blue furnace - lord barathos

>>86680918
he's certainly bara alright

>>86680942
the hell is a bara

>>86680870
okay. thanks

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>>86680918
And His "bigger" rival, Ra'kric, Guess who is the villan and who is hero

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Hello, uh, first time posting on this kind of thread.

I am not too good at drawing females, and muscles, and not too good at hands or feet or realistic anatomy and such, but I had this idea for a character. She's a tribal-like warrior, and this is really just a first work about, so none of it is really final, but I wanted to make a tough looking gal with thick, long, wild hair and a menacing face.

pls advice and critique pls

>>86680168
I think you shouldn't worry about resembling someone elses work, as long as you aren't straight up tracing from them or copying them, similarities are a constant thing in the world of art and concepts, since someone, somewhere has done it before, usually.

>>86681893
Look up Amazonian from Dragon crown, she-hulk, wonder woman for reference, focus on the muscle as well as the hair

>>86681893
Ah drat, I dunno how to stop it from being transparent all the time.

>>86681915
Amazonian and She-Hulk might be a bit too swole for what I am going for. Wonder Woman can work though.

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Alright, I know something is wrong with this design but I can't put my finger on it, is it the leg?

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>>86681936
Try this

>>86682059
I really like this person's art even if it gets a little too smudgey on portraits but whenever I read their dialogue... God. Sometimes it's enough to ruin their art for me.

>>86682102
They write smutt for a living after all

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>>86682059
It d oes help a bit, though some references are a obscured. I think I got an idea on hoow muscles work, maybe, kinda. I mean I can see how the muscles work, but the problem is getting them drawn on. Also I might be laying them in a bit too thick. Still, even though they are hard, muscles are quite lovely just in how perfect they all seem to transition into each other, and lock in so ideally.

>>86682352
Glad to know, also, the hair look kinda grassy, might want to do something about that

>>86677605
I like her

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Been drawing my old thesis characters lately. Still have a bunch more I wanted to do but gotTA GO TO WORK.

>>86682450
Tips on changing that? I want her to have thick, wild hair

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>>86682610
I mean her hair look like gras with the linework, give it a bit of pointy edge like the hair on Jasper of SU, I didn't vut it down or change it's size

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>>86682643
I could give that a try, I also tried this, making it look 'poofier' Also I think I made her torso too long. I think the more I work on her the more I can streamline her musculature though

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>>86682793
Added a more pointy tipped hair style, I could make it thicker. I think I prefer the poofier one though.

>>86684052
Anotha one

>>86682044
Yes.

>>86672969
>Nowadays, I don't think that fits the design here, but I wanna keep it
Keep it regardless.

The design is suited for Kerrigan, the design is duality.

Kerrigan look normative and unobtrusive, not a person who is a sleeper agent. If I were to walk past her, I wouldn't expect her to work for the most dangerous crime family. And that's great for in-story, i.e., a detective pinning down the wrong criminals and as they plead for their innocence, the stoic and robotic Kerrigan is the true ruthless murderer behind the scenes. Until, eventually, evidence prove she were the killer.


Ganbatte, anon!

>>86680168
upside down nigga

>>86681148
Looks really cool, but he blends too much into the background.

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this is an oc that lives in the canon noncanonlands of my story

>>86688793
>that helmet
>those diapers

She's a little special, isn't she?

>>86689323
man thank god you've said "diapers" because I, as the creator, wasn't sure what the fuck that bulge was supposed to be
yes she is

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Okay, so been working on her pretty much all day. I still keep making her a bit too meaty around the neck and shoulders area, and trying to figure out how hips, breasts and calves work, but I think I've made something like progress.

>>86682044
anatomy

the shading and coloring

the edge

>>86692078
>>86692078
>anatomy
I want him to be muscular, but it probaly made him into a Battleborn Character
>The shading and Coloring,
it not finished yet
>the edge
He is suppose to look kinda edgy

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Bumping with something stupid.

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>>86690855

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Finished it today and I already know I will be redoing it in future.

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She likes bugs and long "walks" by the water.

>>86693604
O-Oh my! I feel honored.

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a spook I drew for a Halloween thread last night, going to redesign her outfit

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>>86693544
fucking noice shit my dude, saved

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>>86686696
Well I may have worded it right, but she is actually a good guy. I just havent ironed out the details fully yet. But I do like the comment on duality since as the story progresses, some still dont trust her so that will be al the more convincing. Thanks for the responses, Anon.

Art by Rafchu

>>86692282
oknow you are just making excuses i saw you post that same drawing weeks ago

get some loomis son

>>86692282
Use some reference pictures. Just look up muscular men or something.

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Am I wrong for thinking that War Machine felt like a donut steel to me for years? I knew he wasn't, but just say to yourself "that's not Iron Man, that's my original character War Machine"

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Made this girl a few months ago, I plan to make a super hero comic series with her as one of the villians but I wanna get more fans before that. She actually uses the ppwer of seduction to make men and women do her bidding. Her personality is kinda like Trixie from Fairy Odd Parent's when everyone but Tummy disappeared, or like Ember from Danny Phantom. She has an obsession with beauty and having people constantly worship her.

Where are y'all

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Kinda old news but here's Clover and sweetgrass.

Clover (right) is an ex-arena fighting champion who despite her small size was one of the strongest fighters around. However her true dream was to become a musician. After a train crash severs her arm, she sees this as her way out and finally pursues her dream. However, she's not nearly as good as music as she was fighting. She has a replacement metal arm that's telescopic (can stretch).

Sweet Grass(left) is a small town farm girl who's never seen the world. At a young age her legs were crushed under some fallen lumber. For her entire life she was bound to a wheel chair until an estranged family member gave her some robotic prosthetic legs. She's a natural musical genius and can copy songs or tune to other people after hearing them for a bit. Filled with a wanderlust, she agrees to join clover to help her become a musician with the condition that Clover will show her the world.

>>86698950
Cool design, but whats that purple...thing on her torso? The way its hugging her breasts, is it alive or something?

bampu.

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>>86701924
Beware-e-e-e~

>>86695920
1, I hasn't got enough critisim/tips to improve my OC
2, The hell is loomis?

>>86702199
Ha, joke on you, nobody want to steal my oc shit

>>86702305
this is to all of them, not just you

>>86702345
Its was a joke

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Was doing cylinder practice and made this. I like how she looks. She is a battle robot I guess. She gets poor reception in rainy places and can't function correctly. The previous image was way too large.

>>86693722
Why the freckles?

>>86702403
Looks like crime-fighting robot nanny.

>>86702949
She is now a battle robot nanny. Thank you anon.

>>86703089
give her a cute maid outfit

>>86702355
it's all good then

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>>86702414
Is there anything wrong with freckles?

>>86703230
Just seen in too many oc and most of them are from tumblr, and the artist put them there randomly to make the oc cute

>>86703240
Well I like freckles. And I think her face looks too plain without them.
Also she does not have them all the time...

>>86703282
Nah, It's fine, just to let you know and there also scars, tatoo, jewery to put on her face if you think its too plain

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>>86703300
Scars and tattoos are too edgy for her. Facial jewellery I'm not a fan of and I always forget about it. Unless the character is supposed to look Middle-Eastern.
I've got other OCs and other stories for that.

>>86703322
Like I told you, its ok, and not all scars are edgy, its the character that make them edgy not their look

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I do all my art on paper and my printer broke, so I just had to take a photo and edit it.

I made this for a written series I'm doing that has illustrations and stuff, I've been trying out a more cartoony style for it but I don't think I'm doing too well. I have more if anyones interested.

>>86698737
He pretty much is
>Whats this drawing Bobby?
>Thats my super hero character! His names WAR MACHIIIINE!!! He's just like Iron Man, except he's got TONS of guns and missiles and big lasers and hes super tough and only shows up to fight the really big threats!

>>86671289
4 years to create a generic design

I been thinking, for the longest time I been listioning to people on 4chan about how I should create my characters. At first my characters anatomy were mess up. They had circle heads, weird hands. Doted eyes, no nose or ears. And some other stuff. But my problem is now is that no matter what I improved, someone else points out to me another problem. And I now feel like I can't perfect unlike everyone else. My pic related is the best i can come up with. So I think that I can't satisfied everyone because they just keep telling me to improve things and I begin to get sick of it.
So all I'm asking here is, can I also tell you guys flaws too?

>>86703750
Pretty shit, it didn't even appear.

>>86700460
It's just a piece of her clothing, it's an occult symbol for something I already forgotten.

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Still drawing my villain characters from my school film.

Part of me misses working on my own film, the other part is really fucking happy I'm no longer doing projects where I'm accountable for 85% of the work and get to work with hired animation teams instead of just student volunteers.

>>86693753
spooky, why does she like bugs?

bump it

Everyone finished sharing their donuts?

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she is the star of a project i am working on atm

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Golem of Prague and Superman thing

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My OC as drawn by someone else

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>>86710410
Wanna fug her
>>86707670
Not yet, heres mine

>>86712711
Looks like cinder. Nice art btw

>>86710410
What's her deal? Savage Land? Female Tarzan?

>>86712860
I didn't draw him but I did get inspiration from him and Johnny Storm. He can turn that shit off and on.

>>86671289
You stole that from Resurrection man

>>86704860
They're pretty and easy for her to spot

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>>86703804
Sorry, it was late at night and I didn't realise that I didn't post the image. Also I don't like your critizum on something that I didn't even posted yet.

>>86716082
Do you have that character or anything in various poses.
She looks absolutely lifeless and bland, Sorry to say.

Would I be able to post my Tumblr to gain some followers? I'm making a comic and I want some people that wo be interested in it.

>>86716872
May as well

>>86716914
Aight
http://thecomicguywhose19.tumblr.com/

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My OC
Doesn't have any name or story.

>>86716571
I don't know what you mean by that. Like I don't think you can even make it looked alive. I think your asking too much for my capability.

>>86719359
I'm saying that it looks extremely stiff and the face is kinda just there, it doesn't show personality or anything.

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Couldn't resist drawing my goth girl oc, Lindel Dollice Quilten. here's her costume this halloween.

I actually wanted to do series of monster characters by the way.

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First time posting here. Hi!

Here's a drawing of an OC from earlier in the thread.
>>86672467

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>>86720084
And here's an OC of mine. Her name is Lota (for now). She likes hanging out with friends by the lake. She also happens to live by the lake. I haven't drawn her any friends yet.

>>86720167
>She likes hanging out with friends by the lake.

>haven't drawn her any friends yet.

That's a good start i hope she got a lot of friends.

>>86719600
Your asking for something that is impossible to do. Like how am I supost to bring an image to life?

>>86720748
By adding a pose and some facial expression. Is it that hard for you?
Some complete beginners like >>86720167 >>86720084 and >>86719645 have technically worse anatomy, but they actually look like characters, yours just looks like a lifeless object.

>>86721064
Post some of your work then, you smug fucking shithead. You post a whole lot of nothing and expect me to know how to apply it?

>>86721137
Not that guy, but you're acting kind of like a cunt after he just gave you a bit of advice on how to make your character look a bit more lively, how about you chill the fuck you, bud?

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Keep losing time but I finally freed it up.
Jimmy Dragontail.
>All people are born with tails of animals in the Chinese Xodiac.
>Each race has some sort of power or skill. Dragons control fire, Rats are tech smart.
There's a few ways it could go
>Something similar to a racing camp
>Road Trip to defeat the Monkey "king".
Here's anot older thread for some more insight https://desuarchive.org/co/thread/84980538/#q84983563

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i need a name for her

>>86721509
Why doesn't this exist? Pitch this shit to Cartoon Network or at least Netflix

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>>86721572
Kraa, or something with a K.
As for JDT, The characters we have so far are Jimmy:Headstrong and stubborn, Quite edgy towards most things, but is warming up to things like powers (and his estranged mother) as he goes along.

Snake Gal (Needs Name):She's Quite skillful within her abilities for her age, but very lazy,would rather take the easy way out,a bit vain, she teases Jim for laughs, but she means well.

>>86721572
Mary. She looks like a Mary to me.

>>86721572
How about pure sex

>>86721137
She's facing directly forward with her arms at her sides and her expression is a bland smile paired with wide, unfocused eyes. This gives us no read on her personality. She could be waving, or smirking, or winking, or holding something she likes. Anything to set her apart from a million other anime girls.

>>86721242
You know what? I don't care what this place thinks anymore, I have 12000 hits on my Deviantart and my watchers all love the stuff I do. All you guys offer are advice that doesn't tell me anything.

>>86722095
How? I could do all of that and it will still be impossible to bring the to life.

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>>86717128
I'm gonna post kne of my characters stories

She was only a child when her father become second in command during the Vietnam war, as the years went by the brother of Lihn, carried a hated toward the father when he discover documents relating to his betrayal. The father was secretly sending information to the enemy, the brother soon realize everything his father was doing so out of spike for helping the Americans he ratted out his father. They wanted too punish him for his betrayal, so they targeted his house leaving it dismantled with the father captured and Linh detained. At the time of the incident, The Vietnam soldiers were walking towards him(the father), while the fathers head was down bound on his knees, he glance up at that time too see his son was the one that turned him in. The father knew the plans of Vietnam plan to use Genos (modified super humans)as a strategy to defeat the Americans , by him knowing secrets between the Americans and the Vietnamese they use scared tactics against him too tell them any confidential information he was hiding. The general was getting impatient with the father,so instead of tormenting the father to get information from him, they would use his daughter for the final attempt to create a Geno. Lihn tortured lasted for the days as the father had to painfully watch because he was too stubborn to let any information go. The screams of his daughter had disappear, the agony he felt from not hearing his daughter was the last straw he had because he assumed she was dead.

>>86722560
Cont.

After he planned his escape from being chained up, he broke his wrist to slip out of it.The father got a hold of the bombs the Vietnamese’s were trying to use against their enemies. Too keep his information safe from the Vietnamese he sacrifice himself by bombing himself in the cave they were experimenting in. He prevented the attack on american and the general plans were eliminated. He kill all of the soldiers that was in the lab including himself before he died.The last thing on his mind that he regretted was not being able express how he cared for his daughter. 50 years had pass at that very moment the father gave his life to stop an invasion . Lihn woke up too find out she was programmed to had to complete her mission which was to destroy the enemy

>>86722371
I assume English isn't your first language, but it should be apparent that we aren't being literal when we say you need to bring her to life. It's a figure of speech.

"Lifeless" here means "unconvincing as a character, hard to interpret as a realistic person". She needs something to make the viewer connect to her emotionally.

>>86722371
12,000 hits?

As in.... 12,000 pageviews?

That's not a lot....

>>86722371
Tell me, how old are you? how long have you been on dA? Do you even have a Tablet? What the hell are you doing here on /co/? If you know so much about art, move on to /ic/.

>>86722592
>>86722560
Do you even speak Vietnamese? Lihn isn't a Vietnamese name, Linh is and that is actually a guy's name

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>>86722002
Mina:Jim's Mother, naive and harmless on the outside, but is quite street smart. probably hiding something. Very doting on her son to make up for time she wasn't there.

The characters have anot okay concept, but need help with execution as they don't have much art, anybody want to try their hand?
Even just giving Jim and Snek Gal a pallette would be great.

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>>86720084
Very nice! Saved.

>>86723945
I misspelled it but yes, I know Linh is a guys name, it means sport/soul. I just like the name yo.

>>86721137
>>86722371
I'm sorry but who are you? I think people are mistaking you as me but because everyone is anonymous, they can't tell apart so...

>>86721064
Thank you, I was thinking that what I made was worst then those three.
>>86722095
Oh so you mean expressions and body poses. Well what I made before is me copying from a template of a real woman body. I think once I've done enough of these i should be able to do them on my own. Thanks.

>>86724045
What? no, Linh have to go with Hon to Create Soul like: Linh hồn, Linh mean holy not sport.
And Vietnamese have many meaning for linh due to it's tones but not of them have the meaning as sport/soul, here are all the tones: Lính is soldier, Lĩnh is gain, lỉnh mean lost, lình is a type of herb, lịnh mean nothing

Sauce:I'm Vietnamese

>>86724185
Sorry I meant Spirit. Auto correct is a bitch. I will use it for Soldier since that's what she's supposed to be then. Thanks for the correction senpai. What do you think of the story?

>>86724269
Your story is kinda edgy while your character would look like she fit in a Slice of Life story, futhurmore, you are overcomplicating it, keep it short. Let the image express the action, not words, I want you to describe a story, not to describe a scene

>>86721572
Skibzy

>>86724304
My brother did the story and I told him to follow K.I.S.S. but he didn't. Also the character shows her after everything not during it. Her character art is just a rough draft. Can you follow my Tumblr and give me more advice? I need people like you.

>>86724388
Mate, You have to do this on your own, watch movies, read books/manga/comic, play video game, espically war kind. Learn from it, put yourself into your character's shoe, ask: what would Linh do? Would she spare a dangerous criminal who is pregant? Would she sacerfire herself to save a bunch of corrupt soldiers?

Don't just give out your tumblr and ask people to follow you and give advices, nobody seriously got times for that, espically on 4chan. You are on your own, don't just strangers on the internet, I'm just a guy who browse 4chan for shit and giggles

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>>86724485
Aight anon, you helped me alot with your valid criticism. Hopefully one day you'll become a fan. Thanks yo

>>86724526
Yeah, I will look forward to a girl name linh

>>86724565
It's sexy and you know it

>>86724577
what?

>>86721064
What did just say about my works?

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Been trying to add alot of effort into background characters for my stuff

Rate my Bear Bartender

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>>86724593
Nothing at all anon... nothing at all.

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>>86680918
Higher Resolution version
>>86724649
u wut m8?

>>86702265
>Get some loomis
God I wish people would fuck back to /ic/ if they're not going to help or explain their critique.
"Loomis" is referring to William Andrew Loomis(an artist and art teacher) and his art books that teach the fundamentals of drawing.
His books provide in depth instruction on head construction, body construction, anatomy, gesture drawing, and all other fundies that any artist worth their salt would have adequate understanding of. You can find his books here:
http://alexhays.com/loomis/
Learn from them anon, they'll be of great help to you.

>>86724812
Alright, time to read, btw I paint this as well >>86724692 which is why I also need some coloring tips too,
like, with paint tool sai, got any books that you can share with me?

>>86724608
Might be because of your super simplified style that you're using a lot lately. He probably just judged from that single picture.

>>86725293
Mmh I see..

>>86722371
Idiot.

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Oc main character here. His names leo. He's basically a battle pope, but instead of jesus he works for the sun god.

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>>86725194

>>86726454
Now look at what he is carry with his left arm

>>86726492

thats actually the icing on the cake that made me post here

>>86724618
Is it just me or is his glasses clipping through his mouth?

>>86726516
It not meant to be taken serious, It was kinda like some OC I made after finish MGR so cyborg ronin with a little bit of silly stuff

>>86726592

oh i know it was for lols, and its successful at that

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>>86726620
Want to see more?

>>86669328
i would, but im not feeling up to it artistically.
i think i need to head to /ic/ and learn more before i attempt threads like this.

>>86726750
oh shit bro thats pretty cinematic

>>86726784
Its not about art, its about the character

>>86726822
and i want to improve my art
a lot
so i don't have to have someone else do it for me

only thing is, i feel like im never really learning anything, just doing what tutorials tell me and practicing from the beginning.

>>86726848
Just post it, as long as its not dA autist tier, none of us will laugh at you, much

How does my style being super simplified and why?

>>86726810
See that guy with the axe?
>>86724692 (You)
This is him

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>>86712928
No. She's an Arena fighter who gains her freedom and ends up living with an amazon type tribe of warrior women, and eventually finds herself the owner of an opium den/brothel.

>>86725194
Is this a new chapter of TGT?

>>86726983
>>86681893
Tribals woman, all end with 3

>>86726987
Well,they are both from Devianart

>>86703877
Just remembered it's the symbol for goddess.

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Is this Edgy Enough? Can this armor actually be practical?

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This pic here is of Tallow made by Dabble. I wanted to draw her ever since I saw her here a couple weeks ago (or whenever it happened to be).

>>86720651
Hey, thanks! I'll probably do up some sketches tomorrow, hopefully.

>>86727190
i'll say this, its more practical than anything i'd download in an elderscrolls game but thats an extremely low bar

>>86727266
Woah my God! this is great, thank you so much!

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>>86727290
How about now? still practical?

>>86727309

as practical as "Dante From The Devil May Cry Series!"

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>>86727329
which one? Donte? or Dante?

>>86727373
dante(?)

>>86727407
oh good, so its cuhzayee then
what kind of armor mod did you even download?

>>86727373
Earth, Fire, Ice, Lightning, Air, Light, Dark, Demon, Shadow. Is that all his elements?

>>86727439
You forgot the most powerful of them all: hAir

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I'm on the same board as this guy now. I think /ic/ would be better for me there then it is here. Even doe I didn't start the drama, I just can't take the amount of, "Improve! Improve! Fix that! Make her lewl! Anatomy!" like I can't be perfect and can't make everyone happy. So I guess its /ic/ for me then.

>>86727431

the kind that triggers the likes of snarkeesian, brianna "small loan of daddy's money for an animation studio that never happened" wu and zoe "ran more trains on me than the MTA" quinn.

>>86727487
But I thought /ic/ were a bunch of critical perfectionists?

>>86727521
cbbe? or Unp?

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>>86693836
there we go, spooky 2
this ones makes her look much more her age (she's late teens and is sort of a preppy valley girl)

she needs a name, any suggestions?

>>86727556
bodyslide :^) but in all seriousness i never got to try UNP so CBBE

>>86727548
Really? Doesn't look like it. I thought ic is where all of the bad drawers go?

>>86727592

>the horseless headless horsewoman

>>86727592
How about Pepon? Its what the greek used to call Pumpkin, Pepon meaning "Large melon"

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>>86727617
Mein Nigger

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This was made on 11 of may, 2011

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>>86727717
This was redraw on 28 of august, 2016

>>86727622
I think there's a rule that you can't be complete shit at drawing if you're going to post on the board, but I don't frequent that place so idk. Maybe lurk for a bit and see for yourself.

>>86727787
Oh actuly I was thinking of /I/. Sorry.

>>86727654
>large melon
fitting

>>86728003
Take a look https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pumpkin

>>86727487
Yeah, that looks a lot better than your previous pic.
But really, do go through the guides on /ic/ because you have a really long way to go.

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From my tumblr. an EMO. any constructive criticism? no clue on what to finalise her body type yet, kinda leaning towards lean tho

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This is my shark. He doesn't have a name because sharks don't have names. His gf is a octopus.

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>>86730085
He has similar troubles to everyone else, and tries to get through life as painlessly as possible. Sometimes he has confidence issues, but hey, who doesn't

>>86730085
>>86730104
cute shark.

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>>86677605

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>>86693753

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Dumping my OC here we go!

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>>86730527
these guys are part of a gangster revenge story ive been cooking up for a while.

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>>86730547
Here they are in a more covert form

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>>86730572
both a vaguely based off my younger brothers.

>>86730582
There's one more character i wanted to post up but i cant find the dam image. Anyway the main story is gonna by told from the point of view of the third character who will be getting dragged into this revenge train these guys have going.

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>>86727008
She doesn't start off tribal. She is taken from her home and a series of events lands her thousands of miles from home.

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>>86730143
Thanks. I was thinking of doing just short stuf lf with him. Single panel type, dealing with his gf issues

>>86730741
now that sounds cute

>>86730777
Yeah, but can I make money from cute?

>>86730816
Depends.

>>86670003
what kind of misfortune?

>>86730816
Yes you can.

http://sheldonthetinydinosaur.com/

Start a tumblr for this character, make tiny relatable cute images like you're already doing, post them with a cute cheeky description if you want per image. Do it consistently, have at least 2 uploads a week. Maybe start a little joke ask box where the shark will answer people's dating advice in cute sentences. You'll build a following around that character eventually and be able to sell buttons, stickers, and in the far future, a plushie of him. It'll take a lot of consistent uploading though.

Share it on Imgur, Twitter and Reddit too, make a Facebook page if you want. Facebook is where cute shit thrives.

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>>86731022
Fuck. I need to take a course of self promotion or something. I have no clue how to use tumblr effectively

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My girl, fantasy heroine. Been writing her for years, had this done by a friend.

>>86677605
cute

>>86671289
I am curious what took 4 years. The design is essentially any guy from any show ever, and the idea is the same as multiple existing fictional characters. What makes him unique?

>>86710410
Dan Mendoza art? Nice, He's always immensely friendly at cons

>>86710410
isn't she sort of missing a vagina in that image? Not knocking it at all, just when the loincloth is that far across, should be showing some fluff at least.

I'm still working on my naked Muslim girl, that people seem to like.

Got some early work back on pages, fun to see where she goes.

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Main antagonist for something I'm working on.

Sorrry for the messy image, just did a quick drawing.

>>86731537
I don't have any experience to speak of, but I know that you have to stay very busy. Your followers need to see content from you consistently, and interacting with fans and other artists is important too.

Also, do you have any drawings where the girlfriend is more visible?

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>>86735152
I have a few

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>>86735677

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>>86735742

>>86735831
He must get some mad octopussy.

>>86735677
>>86735742
>>86735831
fucking adorable

>>86734463
That's pretty good, have you decided on a name yet?

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>>86735831
I'm a fan of sharks. Octopuses too.

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>>86732853
Nice. I've been doing the same.
I got this statue made of my OC.

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>>86739141
That is totally adorable.

I have a friend in college who saw one of my OCs, and is attempting to figure out how to how to make a bust of her, with the translucency aspect and visible heart inside her.

>>86733350
The 4 years was mostly spent on his backstory and abilities. He went from being an OP telekinetic teenaged edgelord in a realm of outright fantasy to a semi-immortal monster hunter in a world of hidden fantasy. That isn't to say he doesn't need improvement.

>>86726896
Are you and Atomictiki the same person?

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I've read some original WildC.A.T.s recently and boy is the comic shit. But because I am way to easily influenced, I've made a space team of my own in this style the same day. Cliche by design.

Left to right:
Jor-El Mason, human and a former soldier of the Sol Union, discharged for political reason. Idolizes superheroes and now leads this merc team.
Fireteam, specially engineered alien operative that can multiply himself up to four times, making him a team of five with some limited neural feedback between the copies. After a copy is killed, it takes a while for Fireteam to be able to replace it.
Still Shadow, a sneaky alien of indeterminate gender. Edgy as fuck.
Unnamed big guy, second in command, perfect commander although with limited imagination. Rarely needs to raise his voice.
Unnamed cat-woman, sports star turned gladiator turned mercenary. Typical savage fighter, although she likes being flashy as well.

They fight crime IN SPACE. And probably the alien empire that Sol Union (read: Earth and Mars) are a part of. I dunno.

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I drew one of my ocs as an anime boy for fun.

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>>86672969
>>86695370

Kerrigan being messed with by the superheroine OC Trebuchet, whose powers make her rather uncomfortable.

>>86727592
Ohh she cute. Love the idea but no name comes to mind.

>>86729999
Well is she human? Does her character and role affect her looks? Gonna need more info.

>>86730281
>>86730291
Nice.

>>86739311
The heart looks reminds me of death enemies from Odin Sphere.

>>86740797
I'm not familiar with Odin Sphere, but it does certainly have a video game 'aim here' feel about it doesn't it?

>>86740582
So...What is Finn's new Tumblr Adress?

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>>86727592
cute, did you do this one too?

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>>86740874
I'm so slow so I don't get it but if you're referring to the design then yeah, I did make him look tumblr on purpose haha. I wanted to deviate from the original design as much as possible

>>86741211
Woah she cute! Mind if I draw her?

>>86742837
go right ahead, man, ide love to see

I don't really have a picture because I'm not an artist but I do have an OC from a story I am currently writing.

He has spider like abilities in that when he activates his powers he grows four long spider legs from his back, and his face sprouts 6 extra red eyes. His abilities include super strength, agility, durability and reflexes. I more grotesque ability is that he can also fire a spray of venom from his mouth. The story its self is more of a horror/monster story in case you couldn't already tell.

>>86743844
How is spraying venom from the mouth effective?

Not really sure if this is the right thread for it but I'll ask anyway

I want to use drawing as an outlet for my self-loathing but I suck at it. I can draw a little but I'm not really good enough to actually make OC or anything. Assuming I only have about an hour every other day to practice drawing, how long would it take to git gud?

>>86743844
Sounds like a lame power t b h, not very original

>>86744248

What's so unoriginal about it?

>>86744760
It's just some guy that turns into a spider, that's not really novel or anything. If you're going for horror then I feel like that's even worse, it seems B-movie tier

>>86744930

So what should I change the powers or the genre?

>>86745056
I dunno man

What scares you? Work with that

>>86745056
Powers are fine. I don't think I've seen spider abilities done like that before so originality isn't really an issue, although I think the venom thing should be reworked. I also think the horror theme wont really work either, so I suggest changing the genre.

>>86740797
1.She assumes a human appearance
2.Yea, it actually does affect her

>>86727592
>>86741211
nice stuff, where do you post?

>>86738778
someone draw their babies

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>>86748889

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Speaking of horror and spiders, here's some stuff for a one-off body horror comic that I've been tinkering with. It's about a girl who is gifted a music box, that is, unbeknownst to her, cursed. From this curse, it is actually a mechanical spider that lives in the box. One night, while she is sleeping, the spider crawls into her mouth and lodges itself in her lower jaw, and latches her mouth shut. Once she manages to undo the latch on her teeth, she not only finds that it seems to have become a part of her, but that whenever she tries to speak, the music box plays, essentially replacing her vocal cords. From here, she must hide what has happened while concealing further changes that occur as the mechanical spider gradually grows and overtakes other parts of her body.

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shes super awesome and super powerful and i love her

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>>86669328
This is Tim Bird

>>86749530
hi tim bird

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>>86749544
This is Tim Bird through the ages. I don't have a bunch of pictures of just Tim, as most of the stuff I have of em is from my comic. Tim's just the most fun to draw of my characters, and I really enjoy his character.

>>86749613
10/10 would cancel after one season on comedy central

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>>86749656
I'll take it

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Nebula The Mechanic

Retired anti-hero who nows spends his days in a abandoned barn messing with gadgets and creating tools for his friends. One day he killed his best friend's baby brother, ever since then he changed his looks etc. to be forgotten and hide in his shame.

Ever since then he vowed to never hurt a being ever again

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Being bad at art sucks

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>>86720167
Did some fast and rough (and silly) sketching. Not sure when I'll get back to the Plant Pals for real, though.