Should we be able to hear/experience his inner monologue

Inner monologue is usually lazy writing.

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>>84949336
Frank's inner monologue is usually pretty God-tier, though.

>>84949336
Would talking to himself, out loud, be preferable?

>>84949336
I could see that being the case in live-action, but as it stands, I think the movies could be a little more comicy so I want the inner-monologue. I remember liking the live-action adaptation of Rorschach's journal.

>>84950097
Yea.

>>84950097
Preferably you communicate the characters' thoughts without having him directly tell the audience.

>>84951141
His narration is a distinctive feature of his comics

>>84951897
>comics
Correct.

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>>84949311
It's alternatively called "limited third person," "intense third person," or "intense internal voice."

Now that I have your attention, everything except for Punisher and Uncle Scrooge is fag shit.

Let see if he is actually any good as the Punisher first.

>>84952074
Except when you are Lynch Dune

or a flashback ala

*Record scratch*
*Freeze frame*

Actually a whole Punisher thing told in that way would probably be AMAZING

>>84952266
I've got only two words, my dude:
Hella fuckin' EPIC!

>>84949336
Dark Knight Returns says hi.

>>84949311
That and i hope we get a spiderman reference in some shape or form

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Works for Max Payne.

>>84953740
y'know given how he's first concieved