/co/co/'s Bizarre Adventure - Telephone Avatar Edition

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An updated pastebin, since I neglected to do that before.

I'll re-post this thought I had.

I think all of Wernstrum's stand research should be driveled from the corpse part the WB has in their possession. It's been sealed in their labs and long since left there in favor of the more reliable jawbreakers.

Patrick sinks the Looniversity because whatever TA was making there was at risk of breaking loose, and also because "Nobody mustn't know the secrets we have buried there."

Then in part 7 Nightmare Bitters can be a corpse part guardian in the sunken Looniversity.

Whatever TA was making there can also be gone by the time we revisit the place, showing that the WB's ruins are being picked at by more than one group.

>>83509100
Sounds pretty workable. Maybe the corpse part could be shown, locked away, in part 5?

>>83509149
What part would it be?

Could it be just a mummified pinky the UR see in a glass case with chains wrapped all around it and sealing talismans with ropes tied around the glass case that extend all the way to the walls of the room? The WB had to do this since it would have... unpredictable responses to their concentrated evil in the air.

It's just another room the UR pass by though.

The Melody and Style labs would look similarly strange and left unexplored since that's not what they came for.

>>83509477
That sounds pretty good.
Oh, and they should definitely have the scorched - but much more intact than when it was last seen in part 1 - remains of the Mask there, as well.
(Also, a near-empty Hamon lab.)

>>83509607
Should the major locations of the first 6 parts be places where corpse parts are hidden?

The ruins of Eustace's farm, the site of the final pillar man battle, Fantasy Island, Danny the Street, the sunken Looniversity, and the ruins of Super Jail?

The corpse parts weren't there when most of those parts happened (the exception being part 5), they just found their way to those locations since powerful forces collided there.

>>83509707
Could do. Maybe the Hills Resort that the Eds took over rather than Danny.
Though... do we want to have it as an international race? I guess we'd have to, if we're going to use the Looniversity...

>>83509981
We were planning to have them race through the Old Country already with that whole Rolf climbing out of the hell pit business.

So what did you guys think of the thing I posted in the last thread that implied TA was creating the Lich from AT? I mean currently it's just a constantly growing pile of junk centered around a few pieces of supernatural paraphernalia collected by the TA (little more than a cargo cult shoggoth of wood, wire, string and staples) but once it has assimilated enough supernatural artifacts, well...FALL.

>>83510454
Whatever TA was making comes into play during part 8 when whoever is trying to erase the universe, right?

Isn't it supposed to be some kind of meta abomination?

It's hard trying to keep up with anything part 8 related since it's different every time I see it discussed.

>>83510545
Is a "weapon" (probably one of many) that Ethan retrieved during his journeys. There was a tentative outline 2 threads ago that places it after the final stone people/old toon fight.

Reminder that Stand battles are rarely directly confrontational, and that enemy Stand users will typically wait until they're sure their opponent is cornered to reveal what the hell their stand even does.

>>83510896
>what the hell their stand even does
Funnily enough, saying something like that triggers Patrick Stand's secondary ability

>>83511068
>saying something like that triggers Patrick Stand's secondary ability
>"You activated my trap card!"
>Sees that the fist of the opponents Stand is about to connect with his head anyway.
>"Oh tartar sauce."

>>83509607
>Part 7's post-final boss equivalent of Alternate Diego is the reconstituted Mask, now wielding the Stand [CUBAN PETE] in addition to Melody

>>83513146
As an added twist [Cuban Pete] is wearing the Mask, as opposed to Eustace.

>>83509477
>inb4 is the corpse's "rod"

>>83513267
I think I'd make it just an arm in the Looniversity.

The "rod" would already be attached to someone somewhere.

>>83513999
I think that during part 7, Mr. Nobody already has the super dong. Anyway, how many parts are going to be?

>>83514198
>Left hand
>Right hand
>Left arm
>Right arm
>Left leg
>Right leg
>Left foot
>Right foot
>Left eye
>Right eye
>Torso
>Head
>Ears
>Spine
>Heart
>Lungs
>Stomach
>Kidneys
>Liver
>Intestines
>Ears
>Tongue
>Balls
>Cock
>Middle finger

This a good list?

>>83514719
>each piece of the corpse has a number on it
>some pieces have the same number on them, so no one's sure what it means
>all the numbers add up to ...52

>>83514719
I think we should stick to 9 corpse parts to collect in the race while the rest have already been collected by Nobody.

>>83515020
Well except for the Liver, because...well, how do you think Captain Haddock ended up with [Storm In A Teacup]?

>>83515826
>Haddock beat up a corpse guardian and took the liver without realising it after a misunderstanding
>Nobody's aware that it's fused into his body until late in the story

>>83516003
>>Nobody's aware that it's fused into his body until late in the story
>Mr Nobody is tallying up the Corpse Parts
>"That's odd, it seems I'm short one of them."
>Suddenly there's the sounds of commotion from outside his office.
>"I'm sorry sir, but the president is currently tending to so very important business, I can make you an appointment, but you'll have to come back later
>"I CAN'T COME BACK LATER! THAT IS WHAT I AM TRYING TO TELL YOU!, I NEED TO SPEAK TO THE PRESIDENT NOW! AND I WILL NOT BE HELD UP BY YOU, YOU...YOU...YOU RECALCITRANT ROAD ROLLER!"
>It is as this point that road roller drops from the sky and flattens President Nobodies desk.

Cancer

>>83516998
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8aJw4chksqM

>>83516954
Well meme'd.
I mean that with no irony whatsoever.

>>83515826
Integrate it into the story.

I think the corpse parts are drawn to places where cosmic conflicts occurred at.

>>83517335
Like magnets to metal, supernatural objects such as this are attracted to places with residual supernatural energies.

>>83517405
Or Superman just really wishes he could've been there when it was happening to help, and so his lingering identity compels his physical body's remains to go to such places.

The conflict with Nobody might finally put his spirit to rest.

>>83517335
Reference to Haddock getting into a fight with some "cadaverous corsair" with funny powers while visiting some backwater town in Oregon?
Replace the location with any fictional supernatural site of your choice, we probably don't need more Gravity Falls references.

>>83517335
>first corpse part is found in Tucson, Arizona
>It's found by The Beatles, who entered the race in a flying submarine

>>83485299
Numbah 4 gets smacked back and hits the three trunk hard, this enrages Numbah 3 enough for her stand to produce 5 hulked out rainbow monkey monsters that begin mobbing Morocco Wuya. Wuya is able to take the hits because of a hard light barrier she set up and dish the damage back with lasers shot from the hornets making up Morocco's corrupted stand.
When Numbah 3 mobbed Wuya, she used 4 of the hornets from [82-99] to set up a barrier while 4 others got behind the monkeys and shot them through the back with lasers. Numbah 3 takes some serious damage from this.

Numbah 4 is back on his feet, Numbah 2 has gotten 3 out of harms way, but 4 is now madder than he's been in a while. He activates [FOUR MINUTE MILE]'s [WASTING AWAY] ability and loses a piece of trivia. 4MM gets a huge boost in power and speed, overwhelming Wuya. She didn't know there was anyone this strong protecting Plucky, but she formulates a plan. 2 of the hornets have entered the tree fort and are aiming for Plucky, her plan is to stall them here while the stand does it's job, if her host dies before her mission is accomplished, then she'll make sure Interpol finds out exactly who kill Morocco Mole.

As the hornets close in on Plucky, Numbah 4 is about to land a fatal blow to Morocco. Wuya feels victory will be her's no matter the outcome of this petty conflict. Suddenly both her hornets are struck down and there's a horrible ringing sound in her ears. The battle field is now shrouded in fog, Wuya can't tell where it came from. She sees a figure in the fog, and it's duck shaped.

Cut back to the UR

Some of them have bloody noses and scuff marks on their clothes. Taffy has coated the ground with a thin layer of cheese. Rolf comes back out of Bobo, the cheese immediately wraps around a foot that just stepped on it from the outer edges of its radius. Cartman's stand manages to get in some solid hits, revealing The Thief before he frees his foot and disappears again.

cont.

>>83518874
Rolf sniffs the air, then instructs Toph to calm herself and focus on what vibrations her stand picks up. Between the two of them they figure out the general direction The Thief is in, Taffy then makes his thin cheese layers make walls around that area, one of the walls is ripped open, but the cheese clings to The Thief, forcing him to be visible long enough for Squidward to trip him with a tentacle and Cartman's stand to beat on him some more. Rolf lands the finishing blow with his staff, they wanted to beat him up some more, but the UR notice what looks like smoke rising from where Sector V's base is located and start running there.

Back to the Wuya fight

Wuya is at first enraged when she sees a duck in the steam, thinking that Gideon betrayed his mission, but then Donald Duck emerges in his Paperink costume. She laughs at how stupid his looks until she sees [STEAM MACHINE] posing behind him.

[STEAM MACHINE] grabs two of he hornets as if they were stationary, this somewhat incapacitates Morocco's body (grabbing a stand with another stand does that). His body isn't completely paralyzed, but this is now a losing situation for Wuya since Donald isn't going for the kill like that blonde kid was. She makes a decision that a tactical retreat is in order and vacates Morocco's body only to find her spectral form being pulled by something. She's being sucked into a vacuum by Ford Pines where she remains trapped in a holding container.

In Patrick's office, the puzzle box begins shaking on the shelf drawing Patrick's attention. It begins to do something like a strange jig, then it shuffles like a rubiks cube and seals itself. Patrick lets out a "Tarter sauce, it took me years to solve that." before putting it in a drawer in his desk. Patrick decides to leave Wuya to her fate "She got herself trapped, she can get herself out, even if it takes her another thousand years."

>>83518874
>>83519547
Solid work, anon. I like it.

>>83519547

Kinda expected Tina to get some mileage in this fight but good stuff regardless.

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>>83508692
How does coco bizarre adventure work exactly? It's a fanfic or Fan Made Dungeons And dragons game?

>>83520201
I'm saving her for a dramatic reveal. It was her stand that took out the two hornets going for Plucky.

>>83520208
Sure.

>>83520263

Looking back, you did foreshadow that well.

>>83515020

9 sounds like a good number. Though it might be a bit hard developing clues to hide in all of them.

>>83521949
Wasn't 9 the number of corpse parts in SBR?

>>83522035

Well, 10 if you count both ears.

>>83521949
>>83522035
>>83522191
It should be whatever's plot convienat. We need to talk about it more.

Aside from arms, legs, torso, head, eyes, ears, and spine like the normal corpse, we also have his kidney, rod, and balls. We should wait and see if any more should be added or not.

>>83519547
The Urban Rangers return, they see [STEAM MACHINE] and they see a battered and beaten Morocco Mole unconscious on the ground, they start glowing with stand power, Donald is sizing them up as well. A voice comes from the top of the tree fort, it's a female voice, "Are you bozos the Urban Rangers?" They all look ready for a fight, menacing kanji is flowing out of the doorway, until "You're going to tell me... what happened to my son!" as Tina Russo Duck steps out of the shadows, dramatic kanji across the panel, close up of Rolf who looks shocked, begins to sweat and tremble while the "To Be Continued" appears if you're into that.

The UR, KND, and MM are all inside the tree fortress now. Ford has given Donald something and he's placed it in [STEAM MACHINE]'s furnace, a steam fills the room, it numbs the pain of their injuries and they begin healing, not at a super rate, but still much faster than they would otherwise. The UR begin to tell Tina everything, about how they've been fighting the WB, about what happened to Plucky, about how they just fought a giant monster to find out who did this. Dexter brings up Gideon Graves' file on the big screen, they know what he looks like and where he works. They're planning to go kick his shit in, but Ford chimes in that they don't have that kind of time. He's hooked up some of his own devices to Plucky and announces if they don't help Plucky within the next day his mind will suffer irreparable damage, and there's no guarantee they'll be able to find Gideon before it happens. Morocco is starting to wake up, the steam is doing wonders for him, but he's still in pretty bad shape, he asks what's going on. Ford tells him that when he didn't show up at their meeting place they went looking for him and found Plucky too. Morocco apologies and says they'll have to postpone rescuing Doof.
cont.

>>83522773
Tina cuts in and says that's not an option, at first Ford and Donald aren't sure where she's going with this, but then Ford realizes Doof has been researching stands and is an expert in the field who has made several advances with his inventions. They know Doof can make a machine to help Plucky and at least buy them some time to find Gideon Graves.

Then we cut to Patrick in his office again and that's already in the doc.

>>83519547
Nice, very nice, anon.
>Tartar sauce, it took me years to solve that.
Heh, I'm liking those little scenes in Patrick's office so far.

>>83522860
>>83522773

Still great stuff, man.

>>83520208
It's not a dnd-esque thing.

It's more like an actual story, as opposed to fanfic, as well.

bumb

>>83523899

It's kinda more what FusionFall wanted to be but couldn't muster up.

>>83510545
They'really not supposed to mention the Hey Kids! Monster (which was made behind Red Guy's back).
But the Lich of Tech (which Red Guy/Patrick knew of, but we're terrified of) I guess is fair game

>>83510642
It should be many.
Since aparrently some people don't like the Hey Kids! Monster

>>83517508
It fits

>>83525313
>>83525336
I just want to foreshadow there being something horrible in the Looniversity that pays off much later.

Something that would make Patrick visibly scared when he hears the UR have broken the containment. Scared enough to push the kill switch behind the painting of the clown in his office to sink the place into the depths of the Earth.

>>83525412
actually, it would be whatever item is linked to R&D, the clown painting is a link to HIM

>>83525772
I was trying to set it up so Patrick needed a double approval before sinking the place.

The painting swinging open is HIM giving approval for the decision to sink the Looniversity.

It's like needing at least two keys to launch the missile.

OK, this next stuff is all already in the doc, anything we need to expand upon?
>>83522860
>Ford tells the UR and Morocco that Doof is a colleague of theirs and currently held captive by the WB in their research branch located in Acme Looniversity

>Cut to Patrick sitting in his office, discussing this seemingly to himself while a prominent painting of a clown is seen behind him
>The fact that Morocco brought Tina to her son is a coincidence, a very troubling coincidence to the WB who don't like, nor believe in coincidence.
>If the guys from below exist, the guys from above must also exist, so they're worried Plucky is part of some divine plan to stop them.
>With Wuya’s failure, the pressure is on Graves' to finish the job, but actually killing someone with his stand is harder than scrambling their brains.

>Back at Sector V’s base, Tina begins briefing them about Acme Looniversity
>The WB caused her to lose her old job, then sabotaged her getting hired anywhere else, so when she applied for the teaching position and was accepted, she took it
>she's a single mom and this looked like a good job that came with the perk of Plucky getting a good education
>Turns out the WB just wanted to study Plucky since his father was an early stand jawbreaker test subject
>They wanted to see what kind of stand a second generation would develop
>They made a point so Plucky was never allowed to hear anything positive about his father
>Plucky awakened his stand for the purpose of helping people escape the WB.
>He was too young at the time to really know he was being heroic, he just wanted to help save his mom and other people the WB was keeping trapped.
>So he created his first hole using his stand
>Tina finishes briefing the Urban Rangers on the Looniversity’s layout

>The Urban Rangers’ objective is to fuck shit up and bring back Dr. Doof since they need his help making a machine to help Plucky by sending his stand into his dreams

Specifically I think this part needs to be expanded on. This should be the part in the story where it is made apparent to the readers that Squidward is a double agent. How does he contact the WB?

>>83526386
>Squidward is still a double agent at this point, he reports to the WB that the Urban Rangers are going to raid the Looniversity, a demon is sent there to pass this information along
>As the demon is standing around, his shadow elongates into the shape of Ms Bitters and [Slams] out into the real world.
>"Guah! Where did you come from?"
>Bitters is informed intruders are coming, so they stage a trap

>>83526386
maybe Patrick discussing how Plucky is a "Cosmic Coincidence", otherwise it looks fine to me
>>83526431
I don't get this one, Bitters appears when Squidward and the demon are meeting?

>>83526491
Here's how I tink it happens.

Squidward reports to the WB about the UR's next move. (this is the part we need to work on)

The WB sends a demon to the Looniversity to tip off Goodvibes or whoever is really in charge.

Bitters intercepts the demon since she knows when something foul enters the campus grounds.

The demon assumes Bitters is someone in the know about stands and delivers the message that intruders are coming.

Bitters is not actually in the know and plans the ambush as if it were for normal humans without powers, so all the security is focused on the actual entrances to the campus.

>>83508692
GM's Doom Patrol is so underrated.

No one bothers analyzing or talking about the thing because it doesn't neatly fit into a 150-200 page graphic novel and it's too old for clickbait purposes.

Any update on the fighting game? I can't keep practicing KOF '98

>>83527021
lotsa sprites and some movesets too

>>83526636
Maybe whenever Squidward looks at his handsome face in a mirror, he gets a direct line to someone at the WB.

>>83528460
>Squidward: Is anyone here?
>Demon: Damn, He's really handsome
>Squidward: what?
>Demon: Uh...Yeah, over here!

>>83528539
He uses a hand mirror, the UR just think he's talking to himself in it like he sometimes does while they're going over the mission and he repeats "Looniversity, right, got it." while keeping up his vanity act.

>>83526972
Modern bloggers would have a field day with Danny the Street, and the biracial hemaphrodite alone.

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>>83529404
What of Pollack's self-insert Mary Sue and first transwoman in comics? I'm surprised more bloggers don't care about her, but no less grateful. She kinda deserves to be forgotten honestly. She just wasn't good.

>>83529404
and the bitch with the melting powers, I recall finding a lot of blogs praising Doom Patrol solely because Danny and she appeared.

>>83529404
>>83529544
>>83529567
Part of me wonders just why /co/ likes it so much even though most of GM's storyline would be regarded as pandering nowadays.

We have a transvestite character, though a sentient street, Jane, a representation of mental illness, and many multi-ethnic agender/bigender characters. Then Pollack's run shoved transsexuality in our faces. And I'm very certain that, if it were written today, /co would be enraged at the thought of turning Mallah and the Brain gay for no reason.

Why is it so liked exactly? For it's surrealism? It's meta-ness? I feel like if it were written now, /co/ would be calling it Morrison's biggest blunder ever because of the points listed above. And I doubt /co/ would care for it's strange story either and complain about how it was just him being 2deep4you.

Morrison's Doom Patrol really is a mystery.

>>83529940
You gotta pander to something before every one else does.

Pandering for pandering sake always comes off as cheep, but pandering when there's no gain for the pandering, not even for ego stroking, that actually comes off as not pandering at all.

>>83528539
So what demon is Squidward's contact?

>>83530031
Do we have any actual speed demons in comics or cartoons? And I mean a demon who's whole thing is being fast.

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>>83529544
"Put a transexual lesbian on the supreme court" heh, sounds like the kind of bullshit tumblr demands

>>83530031
While it will be just a minor character, he could be the cockroach guy from Wunschpunsch (an old cartoon from Fox Kids)

>>83532128
Dammit, i wanted to do that!
Anyway, what is Goodvibes's Stand? He is fought along with Bitters, right?

>>83532321
Other than it's based on the Hip Hippo, we have nothing for it I don't think.

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>>83532391
there was an idea of putting a test on the UR while they fight against Goodvibes some threads ago, but I'm not sure how to translate that into a Stand.

>>83528962
We could work this into some earlier scenes so it doesn't seem weird here, and then have the reveal once it's over of a demon watching from the other side of the mirror.
Which one, though?

Bampu

>>83532668
>>83532391

I think a good ability for it would be something akin to the elder D'Arby. Let's say, entering the room he's currently occupying imparts a counter on each living creature, starting at 100. So long as the counter is active, the room's exits will become unusable even if there's a giant hole in the wall. Goodvibes will then start presenting questions either historical or probing in manner. The first to answer the question correctly keeps their counter still but all others take a penalty and a worse penalty for answering incorrectly and if a counter dips below 50, the student is considered a failure and is rendered into a catatonic state. It'll quickly become a battle where the UR are pitted against each others faults.

>>83535382
Interesting, but how would you beat it? Just pummeling it into submission seems... anticlimatic.

>>83535524

I was thinking a twist where the UR come to realize that Goddvibes isn't immune to the rules but only avoids point damage from the fact that he's giving the questions. From there it turns into Phoenix Wright style turnabout.

>>83535560
Maybe Taffy could be the one to make the deduction? In most fights so far he's just sort of... been there.

>>83535583

To be fair, that's mostly due to the feast or famine nature of his Stand. It's kind of a running theme for the UR as a whole, save for Plucky.

>>83535382
Geez, why not just go with a "yo mama" battle? Would be interesting to hear Rolf say "Your mother is so stupid; she counts the chickens before they hatch!".

>>83535695

Because it needs to be a Stand that also makes sense within Goodvibes' context as a teacher same as how we gave Bradley an ability that would allow him to easily keep command of a school full of potential or otherwise Stand users.

>>83535716
Why not make the battle a reference to the "Dirty Dozens" sketches from In Living Color?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=23zWG6ODKm0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AT_GuE5bcyc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dc4zcFnMlGs
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PU8cgxNRaIo
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zoCcdWZfAsY

>>83529404
It's too old for them to care.

And there are too many issues.

It would just be too haaaaaard for them, you know?

>>83535921
>>83535695


How would we make a Stand around Yo Mama jokes though?

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>>83537316
We already have a Yo MaMa stand though.

>>83537402

You cheeky fuck.

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How do you gets feel about the western JoJo ripoff, Diesel?

>>83535583
I thought I made excellent use of him in most fights I've paced out so far.

I've been trying to balance who gets attention with each fight, so the focus is always changing from fight to fight.

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>>83525313
>>83525336

>Finally decide to look up the Hey Kids! channel

This is some long term trolling from /x/ right?

>>83538028

I guess it's more that he hasn't had his "focus episode" as it were.

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Should we pester the drawfags again into drawing new characters and their stands?

fyi this pic was a long time ago.

>>83537986
>A STAND!

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>>83538781

>>83538760

The drawfags will come back to us eventually. It's just that part 3 had meme magic on its side.

>>83537316
The stand forces its user and an opponent into a [Yo mama] battle, where they both must duke out increasingly intense waves of [yo mama] insults against each other, where if one is unable to counter the other, they will be [burned] and break down in defeat.

Think of RPS kid from DiU only more ghetto.

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>>83537761
It was a very cheeky stand.

>>83538175
It's probably both that and a scam.

Ad revenue gets whoever's behind it a little more richer. What better way to make more people watch your little kid videos than by using a huge fake conspiracy to draw in more viewers?

It's a cash-grab disguised as /x/ shit. Technically it's also creepypasta, but these guy's are doing it for money more than just spooking people I believe.

>>83538675
Stock market focuses on him.

I'm pretty sure he's had focus before then as well.

So what's left for part 5? The docs doesn't indicate what's missing.

>>83539877

We're currently plotting out the events of the Looniversity raid and the timeline of such. First major fight is the Loonatics.

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User: Jonnie “Joy” Andersen (human version of Joy from Inside Out)

Name: [SWEET EMOTION]

Appearance: An chubby blue child-like fairy/angel that wears white pajamas and is a tad shorter from the user, she has a constant neutral expression of tranquility with sad droppy eyes. When it is used on someone other than the user, she appears as holding the victim’s shoulders from behind with its eyes closed with a dark blue aura around it. (If you haven’t noticed yet, she’s just a angel-like Sadness)

Abilities:

CORE MEMORIES: This stand can read other people’s deepest desires (or what they care the most) if the user's aura reaches the victim well enough (65cm of proximity will do). This helps Jonnie to manipulate its victims into liking her or to expose their worst fears.
MIXED EMOTIONS: [SWEET EMOTION] can drown the victim on negative thoughts by imposing its tone onto the victim's mind. In prolongated cases, it can lead to mind control of the weakened victim. On the opposite way, this ability can instead be used to enlight the user or the affected person with a handy resolve/epiphany or even allow someone to empath perfectly with someone else’s struggles.
FREE HUGS: [SWEET EMOTION] has a augmented resistance to physical atacks due to its soft body, but this also causes her to be incapable of doing physical damage. Her moviments are silent and soft, so even Stand users hardly sense her when she’s sneaking through them.

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>>83540345

Weaknesses: This stand can only focus on one person or a group of people at a time and its effects on the opponents will decrease if it tries to extend its powers onto too many people at the same time. The stand has no real attacks, just mental tricks and defensive effects, and some of those attacks, such as mind reading, are heavily based on the user’s range to the opponent. The stand is tied to the user’s state of mind and gets more powerful depending on the user’s happiness. If Joy gets too depressed or unmotivated, her Stand loses power and gets more concerned over Joy and when this happens, Joy might try to gain extra hope/resistance/determination through MIXED EMOTIONS’s emotional manipulation.

User's description: Jonnie is a sadistic, but seemingly innocent and cheerful, manic girl that takes joy out of others misfortune or out of their psychological struggle, especially when caused by her experimenting with [SWEET EMOTION]'s powers. These two make a great synergy together, kinda like a walking personification of Schandefreude. [SWEET EMOTION] is not a attack-oriented stand, but rather a mental manipulation/weakening one, so she would be great to use either as a sidekick for a villain, as a spy or as a villain trying to trap the heroes. As a good gal, Joy could help the hero into guiding him/herself with her spiritual resolving stand, kinda acting as a plot device.


I'm just dropping a fixed (and probably final) version of [SWEET EMOTION]

>>83535524
Maybe attacking Goodvibes/bling while the Stand is active counts as "cheating" and the Stand automatically retaliates (think of Star Platinum breaking D'arby's finger), despite looking like a punchghost it acts as a defensive Stand, while Bitters does the heavy lifting.

>>83539877
We're still filling it in.

We're sort've going chronologically through part 5 and just filling it in as we go.

It's pretty much 90% fights that are left to do.

>>83539950
>>83541515
What's the Looniversity storyline? Do we have an outline for how things go and who's fought there?

>>83536754

>>83541571
The Loonatics, Bitters and Goodvibes, CatDog and the Strays. More of a feel of evading opponents than straight up fight gauntlets. I think Yanni the Yanitor was there too, but he might have been cut.
IIRC, the other things we need to fit in are: the Looniversity's Corpse Part, the Telephone Avatar's creation, and obviously picking up Doof.

>>83541571
So far is something like this:
-Get to the Looniversity
-Use Revolving Doors to dodge the security/traps laid by the janitor
-Reach R&D, find Werstrom and Crocker discussing Danger Duck's state
-Fight the Loonatics
-Fight Goodvibes and Bitters, retrieve Doof
-OPTIONAL: at this point Patrick decides to sink the Looniversity to kill the UR/bury the "thing"
-Fight CatDog and the Strays while the the whole place is going through the drain.

>>83541672
Yanni boobytraps rooms instead of sending the UR into fights. Mainly so it isn't as boring and it seems like they have more things to do/avoid. Instead of fights, the UR get out of deathtraps in this one. It's more of a puzzle thing ala Jojolion or Saw than a gauntlet.

>>83541712
Revolving Doors attempts to evade traps would need to be foiled at some point so it's "fair". Probably Rolf opens a door and on the other side re a bunch of guards with rifles focused on them. Going through traps is a safer option in this case.

I figured the last one would be inescapable, and require Rolf to open a door, but fortunately there are no guards, possibly because CatDog got rid of them.

>>83541835
Yeah, there is also the fact that Yanni's traps become more inconspicuous and deathly each time they are evaded, so the UR probably try to "reset" the traps once they figure this.

>>83537986
i'm slightly bothered that we never saw not-DIO's Stand

>>83544291
I have to admit, I'm curious what it would've been too. Probably a Spawn ripoff or something.

>>83545476
what was the Stand's naming convention anyway? they had "Meta Hammer"(not-Star Platinum) and "Black Templar"(not-Magician's Red)

>>83545541

Probably just whatever the author thought sounded cool.

>>83545541
From those two names, possible Heavy Metal references?
Meta Hammer was the name of a Heavy Metal magazine I believe?
And Black Templar recalls Black Sabbath.
Though this could just be searching for a meaning when there is none. What were the other stand names? Were they named?

>>83545960
nope, only those two.

>>83545983
Ah, well anyway. I would've been cool with stands being named after a specific much genre. Possibly if it had continued, Diesel would've done different genre references.

I could see not!SP being called Heavy Meta Hammer after it's World abilities had been revealed. Dunno what that'd make not!Za Warudo. Maybe Heavy Diver?

>>83546253
Now that you mention it, have we made any group whose Stands names follow a thematic, a la 9 Egypt Gods?

>>83546922

The Loonatics' Stands are all electronica.

>>83546922
Some. I was thinking that, if we did the old cartoon Stone Men characters in part 8, all their stands would be named after old music, or possibly even classical music (like Four Seasons and Lotus Land. Things like that).

>>83529940
I like it because it is good in and of itself. It doesn't need to be sold as "All new all different" to work.

Also it deals with its diverse cast by acknowledging that it's a pretty weird crew, but countering the same statement by also establishing that the shit they see is even weirder.

Robotman either stops caring or just goes with it by the time they get to the Paris Painting arc.

>>83538175
It's an Indian company that does a randomizer for games/videos based on whatever is popular on the internet.

It's a very weird bot. Some dudes on /x/ claimed it was a test in true AI.

>>83547502
heh, I was gonna suggest that Ethan's elite follow some thematic in their Stands names. Speaking of part 8 (since part 5 discussion is kinda lazy today), are we keeping the name "Stone people" or we are gonna call them by other name?.

>>83548179
I heard that it is some sort of money laundering scheme

>>83547502
I like this idea.

I'm already thinking about what songs like Minnie the Moocher would be like as Stands

>>83548298
Well the Pillarmen didn't make much sense either, to be honest. But we kept the name.

>>83548432
Pillarmen still fit because we used characters that fit that theme. Stone Men may not fit the old cartoons schtick so well.

>>83548298
The name was picked because they are "as old as the Stone Age" which is really fucking stupid.

The original leader is Fred Flintstone, who is a Raoh style figure now, and has abandoned them to become a hero. He aids the heroes later on and dies due to Lose Yourself in Heaven bashing his head in with a nearby barber pole.

I guess they could be an extension of the Royal Order of the Waterbuffalo if Fred leads them. My only problem with it is that Fred Flintstone isn't even the oldest cartoon character. It could be that he was the latest in it's leaders, but wound up defecting after he realized how extreme they were.

>>83548298
I'd be less lazy with part 5 today if I weren't dealing with bad weather and windows 10 being a bitch deciding it wanted to crash and throw a tantrum until I finally let it install updates.

Now it's being a total bitch by being corrupt afterwards and I have to deal with it.

>>83548496
How about the Rotos[cope] men?

>>83548524
That'd make sense. Seeing as him leaving them makes it established that the "leadership" position is rotary. Which would be logical for a long lived people.

>>83548524
Maybe instead of their former leader, he could be their champion. If i remember correctly, it was suggested that the Harvey Toons jack in the box was the Stone people leader.

>>83548542
Thank goodness I managed to reschedule that darn update.

>>83548524
>My only problem with it is that Fred Flintstone isn't even the oldest cartoon character.
Flashback showing the Stone Men led by this stick guy?
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fantasmagorie_(1908_film)

>>83548844
I like that.

Maybe even El Profeta.

We do have to explain how these guys decided to dedicate themselves to protecting the fruit.

>>83549163
What does our fruit? the same that the Rokakaka does?

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>>83548783
Perhaps pic related for leader in this instance? The Alexamenos Graffitio could be considered the oldest "cartoon" ever I suppose. Either him or Kilroy, the famous graffiti guy.

>>83549331
>Kilroy with a Mr. Roboto stand
I'm hip. Sorry if the name was used already, there's so many I have trouble keeping track.

>>83550103
am not entirely sure, but i think that name is free.

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>>83549331
Kilroy could definitely be in. I wouldn't say as a leader though. He should be a guard of the Whatever Men stronghold. He's never seen except from peeking out from behind a HUGE wall Attack on Titan style. His stand is probably a memetic one, like Brain Damage or Lose Yourself. Dunno what it'd exactly do. Maybe everyone in the vicinity comes to believe Kilroy is somewhere he isn't, never noticing his giant self from behind the fortress?

>>83548552

I've been saying Technicolors for the longest.

>>83550770

Maybe something where he's capable of traveling through the borders of objects like tile or brick? Honestly, ONE MORE TIME would be the best Stand for him.

>>83550770
>everyone in the vicinity comes to believe Kilroy is somewhere he isn't, never noticing his giant self from behind the fortress
Like making small decoys of himself that make the opponent believe that said decoy is the real one, even when facing a second, different decoy?.

Question/reminder about part 5. We still have side stories from it we should do. What will be our equivalent to Purple Haze Feedback?

Would it be about Squidward trying to earn back the other's trust? I figure that, if Plucky becomes the new WB head, and begins running it legitimately, he sends him on a quest to take on a rogue Jawbreaker dealer gang, who may be seeking a missing piece of Atlantis' crystal?

Would the last gang be lead by Pearl Krabs since Mr. Krabs is our Tonio?

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>>83554325

I'm working on that right now. Essentially, it's going to be looking into how Interpol's handling things behind the scenes from part 4-7 and the exploits of the Clandestine Order of Clairvoyant Operatives, their Stand unit. /Co/Co/'s Bizarre Investigation is the current title.

>>83554325
I haven't put any thought at all into that. I had also completely forgotten about the Interpol side story thing in the sewers. I don't like the idea of just killing those guys off like that. I'll probably come up with something better by the time I get to wherever that is in the story.

>>83534002
Squidward could be holding a hand mirror, admiring his looks and dancing when he first meets Plucky, and again while on their way to the city, and again in the hotel before they're attacked by the Boogies.

>>83554632
Speaking of side-stories, I've been writing Corge Costar for a while now. Or coming up with more ideas/refinements for it. I'll post my fuller idea soon for review I suppose. I still need to decide who is in Mr. Pickles cabinet besides I.M. Weasel though. Any ideas/suggestions? The thing is themed on reboots and spin-offs by the way. I originally had them all be typical mustache twirling villains, but right now I'm not so sure.

I'm also trying to write new stands for Huey and Dewey, and make all their stand names fit a certain theme, but I don't know what yet.

>>83554993
>and make all their stand names fit a certain theme, but I don't know what yet.
Maybe a trilogy of books?

OK, where was I before this bullshit day happened?

Oh, right, speedy demon.

>>83530507
>>83530628
I guess he could work, it's a minor role.

We could expand on his role so that he's the one making the jawbreaker deliveries to Killer Croc in the sewers and someone the Interpol group takes out.

Then next is doing the Looniversity, I'll get into that properly either later tonight or tomorrow if I have power/internet.

>>83555049
Well, yeah, that's what I had in mind, but I don't know what'd fit in terms of names. Louie already has a stand that creates food that makes people incredibly violent. I'm not sure what name would work there, or what trilogy. If nothing else, they'll all have stands based on books from the same author. But then in that case, I'm not sure if Louie's stand should be called [FEAR AND LOATHING] or [NAKED LUNCH]. I'd still prefer something that fits a trilogy though. Before book titles, their stand names were based on John Carpenter's Apocalypse trilogy.

New fist of the bOrf star.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=avhHjvdCEuM

Seems relevant to us.

>>83555245
There could be also the titles of the stories in a same book, like the ones in The King in Yellow.

>>83555494
Beautiful. wait, who's the duck?

>>83555714
Wade from U.S. Acres. Sheldon is also from it.

>>83555748
oh, so that cylon-like thing was Sheldon

>>83555494
It just keeps getting better.

I have those feels that come from seeing a beloved comrade succeeding in a parallel path to my own. It's a strange sort of pride.

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>>83527021
I'm still doing it on Godot. Once I finish some more game mechanics, I'll post it on the Docs.

>>83526636
>>83526386
>>83526431
>Tina finishes briefing the Urban Rangers on the Looniversity’s layout
>Squidward has been looking at himself in a hand mirror during the briefing and repeats "Right Looniversity, got it." in an absent minded kind of way before one of others nudges him in the shoulder
>We see the mirror's surface, in it is not a reflection of Squidward, but that of a demon
>Squidward was talking to Maledictus Maggot (Wunschpunsch) without anyone knowing
>The transmission cuts out, "Damn, He's really handsome... right, got a job to do."
>Maledictus Maggot travels to the Looniversity
>He's not in real space, but a space only demons can travel through to cross distances quickly
>While he's standing around, getting his barrings, his shadow elongates into the shape of Ms Bitters and she [Slams] out into the real world.
>"Guah! Where did you come from?"
>"Who are you!"
>"I'm... I'm Maledictus Maggot, a messenger for the WB. They sent me to warn you that the Looniveristy will be attacked tomorrow morning."
>"What?! Intruders? Here?"
>Bitters casually grabs Maggot with one hand and carries him off through the shadows to begin the preparations
>Maggot is too terrified of her to speak

>We cut back to the UR a few hours later
>They're about to head out to the Looniversity, Donald is waiting for them at the base of the tree saying he's going with them since they'll need all the backup they can get
>Tina and Ford are staying behind to help guard Plucky in case any other WB goons show up

Then we get into Donald's backstory along the way which is already on the doc.

>>83554325
It'd be interesting to see side stories for other parts as well. A way to explore more situations with characters that don't show up often.

>>83557268
>They begin their raid at 4am since that's just the worst time of day for anyone who doesn't have cows to milk.
>Rolf approaches the Looniversity alone in the darkness
>He makes a door through the exterior wall of the Looniversity near the back of the campus
>Once he's in, he pulls out Bobo and the other UR + Donald come out of it, Taffy and Cartman were getting some extra sleep at the time
>Their entry point, as per the layout provided by Tina, is the mostly desolate and boarded off areas of the research buildings
>The UR pass by several doors that have been partially boarded off
>One door has "MELODY" written above it, peaking inside they see several strange drawings of distorted figures and the scorched remains of a wooden mask in a glass case
>The room directly across from it has "STYLES" written above it, inside are several ancient stone tablets with what look like dance steps carved into them, they are covered in thick layers of dust
>Another room further in has the name above the door scratched off, inside is a severed hand chained to a pedestal encased in glass with ropes tied around it that extend all the way to the walls, the ropes have various talismans attached to them
>Taffy and Rolf feel oddly drawn to this room, but Donald pulls them along saying this isn't what they came for

>>83557619
>One of the labs is not so abandoned, the UR overhear a conversation between two Looniversity scientists
>One is Wernstrom (Futurama) and the other is Crocker (Fairly OddParents)
>"How goes the atomic super men research? What's happened to Danger Duck? Why won't he wake up?"
>"I-I don't know. There's nothing wrong with him physically, and he hasn't been injured..."
>"An enemy stand, then?"
>"Maybe, but... I had Gideon look into his mind, and... it's gone."
>"Gone? What do you mean?"
>"I mean, his mind, his memories, his identity... they're all gone. There's 「LITERALLY」 nothing there… it must be the work of FAIRY GODPARENTS!"
>”Shut the fuck up, Crocker.”
>[closeup on a cockroach crawling over the comatose Danger Duck's hand]
>Taffy heard them mention Gideon Graves
>He charges in to roughhouse the scientists, demanding to know where Gideon is
>"Intruders? But how? We've been on high alert for hours!"
>"No matter, now they face the wrath of our second generation atomic super men!"
>An alarm goes off as Ace Bunny, Lexi Bunny, Slam Tasmanian, Rev Runner, and Tech E. Coyote appear and surround the UR

>Elsewhere, Bitters hears the alarm, she's still holding Maggots by the head and angrily looks at him
>They're at the front gate with a small army of security personnel
>Maggots says the intruders are all stand users
>Bitters doesn't know what the means and tosses him, hard, at a wall
>She then disappears to go find the intruders while the security begins fanning out across the campus
>Maggots is all smashed up and disappears back into demon space since he does have other things to be doing

Now I need to figure out the Loonatics fight.

>>83557259
Hank doesn't have a moveset yet right? I know jackshit about commands, but I imagined some moves:
-Hank rushes pass the opponent and kick his ass, sending him flying to a wall
-Super: Summons an horde of Propane Nightmare robots from the sky that punch/kick the opponent once before leaving, the final Propane Nightmare self-destructs dealing increased damage.

>>83554632
I'm looking forward to it anon. You got anymore details for it you'd be willing to share? Or are you actually writing the whole thing and will give it to us once done?

>>83557956
Well fighting them seems kind of like a pain.

What if the UR fake surrender and one of them busted out some ruse cruise talent to trick the scientists into taking them to some arena where the monsters and experiments fight to test how strong they are? When they get to the arena, Rolf makes them an escape as soon as his back is to the wall and the scientists get fucked over because the UR got away with minimal fighting?

We could do that and have the Loonatics come back in the tower rather than fight them to the death here.

I just feel the potential for stealth and evasion is super high when you combine Rolf and Donald's abilities.

Maybe I'll get some feedback on how to progress with the Loonatics fight tomorrow.

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And here is Patrick scene after Bitters is defeated:
> Patrick is standing next to the windows of his office and using a smelloscope pilfered from Farnsworth’s lab (since He doesn’t have a nose, there is a Groucho nose stuck in the tubes)
>”Ugh, that skunk girl’s perfume is still lingering in the air! I can’t filter the smells. Hold on, I got something *sniff* smells like…cheap incense? No, it’s…oh no”.
> Patrick’s face contorts in horror as he runs to his desk, “Sweet King Neptune, those boyscouts wannabes managed to break that darn thing’s restraints” He rummages through his drawers, looking for his mallet.
> The item from R&D is already on his desk and he's holding the mallet, ready to smash the item but pauses and seems to speak with himself: “Maybe it kills those idiots, but what will stop it from going on a rampage?” Then the antique phone in his desk begins to ring (The TA attempts to communicate with Patrick).
Cont.

>>83562729
Cont.
>Patrick, knowing why the telephone is ringing, lowers his mallet: “Too many resources has been spent on that thing, and this compromises everything!”, “If they defeated Chernabog and Bitters that means they are a much bigger threat than we thought…the Coincidence…what I’m supposed to do?” Then, the clown painting suddenly starts to swing wildly; Patrick notices this and raises his mallet again while looking defiantly at the telephone.
>”I DEFY YOU, TELEPHONE MAN!” He yells as He flattens the R&D item. The telephone stops ringing and there is a brief pause before an earthquake starts and the telephone rings again. Patrick decides to pick the telephone “Listen, we all must accept loses in this company. Besides, we have the system’s schematics registered… assassin, what assassin?”
>The Fax machine in the office begins to print CatDog’s contract (signed just the day before) He reads the document and runs again to the smelloscope, attempting to catch CatDog’s scent: “Fishpaste! I forgot about those guys *sniff* they are still there. Well, guy’s an expert, I’m sure he will succeed where Bitters failed *sniff* oh, and it looks like he got some reinforcements”.

>>83562561
What ideas do you have for it so far?

>>83537986
Fun fact, the guy made this comic now runs the company that published it. Thats why we ever got a 2nd issue.

>>83557619
I like it. Good work, man.
>>83562729
>>83562769
This is good, too. I like the smelloscope.

>>83560852
I think maybe not have the Loonatics come back in the tower, but have it as more of a pursuit/evasion scene than a straight up fight? The UR manage to Retire the Loonatics, but as a result of evading them.

Been thinking about Daffy's sons - I'm thinking if we use them in part 6, they should be minor allies (Dora agrees to get them out in exchange for their help) who end up turning on Dora and friends because they're complete nutcases, especially Woody.
Something like: Woody's their leader with the stand suggested in the last thread; Gandy's a weak-willed effeminate pushover who Woody plants drills on to ensure his obedience, who uses a punchghost that's not quite as good as Woody's; Alan's a passive type who prefers to follow orders and not get involved at the center of things, who's got a support Stand bound to his lute; and Condorito is viewed by everyone as a useless, lazy idiot, so they overlook him and his seemingly-shit Stand, which turns out to be really dangerous.
Woody probably gets fought twice - first when first encountered (more of an "outwitting" fight, where Dora and Suzie have to persuade him to not drill into their brains and kill them), and once as a proper fight nearer the end, when he completely loses it and goes after them. (Gandy and Alan just run off, having decided it's not worth it.)
In this last fight he's possibly sabotaged by Condorito, who then has that all-Spanish fight with Dora for... I dunno, reasons. I haven't thought that far.
Just, y'know, some thoughts I was kicking around on them.

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>>83557956
>>83560852
>>83562561

Best thing to remember for the Loonatics are just how well their Stands interact with one another and the team dynamic they have.

-Ace is capable of imparting Slam's pressure and either Rev's speed or his Stand's heat to any other member.

-Lexi is built for area control and can easily regroup her allies or box in enemies with MADEON and shoot off any number of guided projectiles or people so long as they contact the contrails.

-Slam's the group tank and can easily shut down projectiles or pin targets down with his pressure before going in for the kill. He's also capable of triggering Tech's HEARTBEATS and pushing it into a high durability state.

-Rev might be the most dangerous one of the group considering that he has a punch ghost on top of its natural speed increasing ability and has Lexi and Ace's abilities to keep him from overdoing things.

-Tech's their scout considering that HEARTBEATS activates upon damage, greatly increasing his durability and strength as well as allow his allies to more easily damage any target he's stolen living tissue from.

In retrospect, I may have put a little too much thought into this group. Still, it does make for a good Shit Gets Real chapter.

>>83566028

I don't know, the sons angle feels a little forced. It felt natural in Stone Ocean given that Dio literally went around laying his vampiric pipe all over Europe but LeTerally's message was to value to the self and ideals above all others. It'd feel against that philosophy for the Warden to go around collecting that brood.

>>83566856
I agree.

>>83566856
All of our part 6 feels forced dude. Nothing works well in it at all except maybe the Warden and Superjail. Otherwise everything feels very shoehorned in.

We also need a duck character in the art as well, to fit the theme of there being ducks in every part post 3. I don't see how Ludwig von Drake can be in anymore and there are no duck waifus or husbandos.

>>83566994
We could have the Duck Guy from DHMIS or Alfred J Kwak.

>>83567065
DHMIS references would work better in part 8 I think. Plus Duck Guy died in his original series. Possibly for real. We'd need to wait a few days to see if he survived or not before using him.

Also, remember this is a prison too. The character would need to have a believable reason to be in.

>>83567115
>The character would need to have a believable reason to be in.
Ah, well I can't really think of anything that would fit then, shit.

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>>83567115
>>83567205
How about Howard the Duck? He could be working odd jobs for the Warden, and maybe document the events unfolding in the prison as the protagonists make their way through it.

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>>83518575
I guess it's only natural my Beatles love would come to this.

>John, Paul, George, and Ringo (Yellow Submarine)
>Vehicle: "All Together Now" (a flying yellow submarine with innumerable gadgets)
>Stand: 「THE WORD」
>Appearance: None. Like Mikitaka, it's not clear if it's actually a Stand or just the 'power of music".
>Ability: A shared Stand. Allows each Beatle to transform any words they sing into solid objects. The objects resemble each word spoken, and they float out of their mouthes. The more of them that sing the same word, the stronger it will be. These solidified words can be used as projectiles, stacked on top of each other, or held.


Destructive Power: C
Speed: B
Range: B
Durability: C
Precision: A
Developmental Potential: E

>Role: Neutral party in Part 7. Are present when a corpse part is discovered in Tucson, Arizona.
>Mr. Nobody's Stand ends up bringing the 60s cartoon version into reality.

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>>83568202
What 「THE WORD」would look like.

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>>83566856
>>83566994
I figured it'd be reasonable enough since LeTerally seemed like a fairly "traditional" guy, what with the native willage schtick; it makes sense to me that he'd want to churn out a bunch of kids to honor their father. I figure most of them turned to crime because he was a neglectful douche who just wanted kids to satisfy his own ego.
That said, yeah, I really agree that the whole of part 6 feels off. It could do with refining, character reorganisation (especially all the fetish gangs, we don't really need ANY of that shit) and development of the motivations of the Warden and the origins of Superjail.
>>83567291
>Howard tries, and fails, to act as a voice of reason for the Warden
>pic related

>>83568202
>>83568211
Goddamn, part 7 is kinda stuffed with ideas as-is, but I really like this. Fuck.

>>83563505
Just the false surrendering bit and then escaping once they're in the arena.

>>83565838
So do they trick the Loonatics into triggering traps for them?

>>83566578
I was thinking that Tech and Slam could also have some imperfect form of medley or styles. They were all cloned for different reasons, but then given stands to keep them relevant.

I just want to see the UR react in horror to a couple of the Loonatics' twisted, broken bodies somehow reforming in a comedic way. Donald would recognize the power, but they don't have time to fight that kind of enemy.

>>83562729
>>83562769
Interesting. It could be an item, but it could also be a detonator for blowing up the supports under the Looniversity if we can't come up with an item.

Nightmare Bitters being the corpse part guardian of the sunken Looniversity is something I'd like to keep for part 7.

>>83566028
>>83566856
I think the sons could work as part of a larger Supermax segment. I didn't really like the idea at first, but with the idea of using Woody Woodpecker and the >>83568518 perspective, it's grown on me.

>>83568644
I think a chemical flask would work for the item. 'twould symbolise both R&D and the school aspect.

>>83568644
>So do they trick the Loonatics into triggering traps for them?
I like it. At least a couple of them should be taken out by their own defenses.

>I was thinking that Tech and Slam could also have some imperfect form of medley or styles. They were all cloned for different reasons, but then given stands to keep them relevant.
>Ace or Lexi Bunny have limited Comedy Melody, allowing them to recover from damage somewhat and fix damage to other Loonatics
>Tech has the Style [STROBE], which causes attacks to pass through him when he poses, stealing a small number of [living cells] from them
>Slam has [TORNADO MODE], reverse engineered from Pillar Men biology, allowing him to contort his body at high speeds
Alternatively, if you don't want to go with that, Slam's Style - if he uses one - should be [DIZZEE RASCAL].

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>>83536887

Just thought you guys should watch and research the old CN bumpers to see how characters from different cartoons and different eras interact.

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>>83568929
>Vote for the candidate that has a platform, not the candidate that is a platform

>>83568868
Hmm, Pillar Men biology. I didn't even consider that. I like it.

It makes these Loonatics that much more dangerous and worth avoiding and evading rather than fighting.

>>83568694
As long as it's not linked directly to Bitters since we do have some plans for her coming back in part 7.

We should probably have Patrick name drop Yeshmiyek when he bring up Bitters in his office before making the decision to sink the place.

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>>83567291
>>83568518
>>83568665
I do like the sons too. Not sure about >>83566028 idea though. I think that, if we're using Woody and Howard as his sons, his kids should be more similar to him I suppose.

I wanted Heckle and Jeckle to appear. Would they fit? They seem pretty similar to Daffy. I could see them similar to Ungalo, sitting in some posh, fancy-looking cell and drinking wine while their stands destroy the place.

>>83569402
Maybe it should be linked to Goodvibes? The UR manage to turn the tables on his Stand just after taking out Bitters, but shortly after they do, Patrick decides to break the flask, killing Goodvibes and sinking the Looniversity.
What should be in the Mode lab if they have one? Those crystals from Atlantis, various flasks and bottles, and the withered, hooked-up-to-tubes corpse of a Pillar Man (one of the old men from Kronk's New Groove?

>>83568518
That's a pretty odd idea though, him being a douche and waving away his negligence on that is lazy.

He probably was constantly degenerating mentally and kept returning to Tina. He'd bed any woman who looked like her in a pathetic effort to return to his old life. His mind wouldn't let him admit that she never left the old country, and so he ran away from confronting that by leaving the pregnant women.

>>83569661
My thinking was that Woody was the son most similar to Daffy until Plucky was born, so he got most of his father's attention and thus resents Plucky the most (as well as being the leader of Daffy's kids).
Alan is the easiest to scrap, I think. Gandy's classic enough that I think he fits as a character linked to Daffy, especially if we're thinking that Plucky was the only duck among his kids, but I don't actually care about him that much. Condorito I want to be in just for the sake of an all-Spanish fight, but he doesn't have to be one of Daffy's sons, I guess.

>>83569737
The problem lies in how killing Goodvibes leads to the Looniversity sinking into the Earth.

As for the MODE lab, yeah, there should be at least one small glowing blue crystal, the skeleton (or some other remains) of an unidentifiable animal (animal pillar man), and possibly a carving of Kuzco.

>>83568665
The sons shouldnt be functional in society. The only thing that keeps them useful, even if in jail. Is the potential they have to be weapons.

They shouldn't be in administrative roles unless they're idiot savants who are solely useful in that regard. A mentat.

>>83569823
Daffy didn't know about any of his kids though.
He especially didn't know about Plucky, who he sired shortly after eating the stand jawbreaker and leaving the old country to build his empire.

The sons angel just doesn't feel like it works outside of Plucky.

>>83569916
Daffy/LeTerally is insane for the most part. He suffers from some form of Korsakoff's Syndrome I imagine. He is unable to recognize his past memories at this point, and creates new ones to fill in the blanks. He forgot everything about a son, about Tina, about the many women he mistook for her while his mind crumbled. At the very end, he became M.E. LeTerally, a man with a different life from Daffy.

It'd be a neat connection with Crazy Jane in part 7, who is slowly losing her mind in a similar fashion due to taking on the corpse parts.

>>83569821
Maybe. I was actually thinking they'd be his legitimate sons, since he did love Tina, and it'd be another distinction from Dio.
The timeline I had in my head was something like
>Daffy leaves his native willage for the capital of the Old Country with his childhood sweetheart Tina and his friends Porky and Marvin
>Despite being appalled at the loudness and hedonism of the city, he is determined to make it work, and he and the others take exploitative, slave-like jobs as test subjects of what will become the Warner Brothers
>La Cucaracha awakens as a result of jawbreaker testing, despite the WB thinking nothing's happened, leading him to escape with Porky and Marvin, and become determined to create a world where such things do not happen
>Over the next 6-10 years, Daffy's sons are born (the last of them being Plucky), while he plots and his mind degenerates.
>When Plucky is 2 years old, Daffy fakes his death and leaves to become M.E. LeTerally and set up his plot; however, the WB recognises that he used his Stand to do so, and digs the sewing machine out of storage/forces Tina and Plucky into going into their custody. I guess the other kids are also captured but held separately?
>After a few years, LeTerally attempts to create his perfect world, but is defeated. Not too long after, Plucky helps the Looniversity residents to escape.

>>83569898
>>83569916
>>83570034
Well, I didn't know any of this shit. I was unaware it'd been established. It doesn't seem to be in the docs, though.

>>83570034
The implication with Tina is that Daffy left before Plucky was even born and before he even knew he knocked Tina up.

>>83569875
I was thinking they'd just be linked to the same artifact. If the Looniversity needs to be sunk, that means Goodvibes has failed and can be killed.

>>83570044
That time table is all wrong.

Daffy eats the jawbreaker, then within a year of that Tina is carrying Plucky, then Daffy leaves.

Plucky would be his FIRST kid if he has more than one.

With your time table Plucky would only be like 5 years old during part 5 when we have him being at least 14.

>>83569823
We should get "Baby" Huey as his youngest son and a legitimate retard. A retard who has monster strength and a stand.

>>83570161
No, Plucky would be 5 years old during part 3. There's, like, 10 years between part 3 and part 5.
That was what was said a few threads ago, anyway.
I didn't know any timetable had been established. I created that one to try and set things out.

>>83570197
This guy's got the right idea.

The rest of the sons would them have to be younger than Plucky though. And I'm not sure how that'd work.

>>83570197
We spent the better part of a thread a month ago discussing this.

Plucky would need to be at least 10 years old during the events of part 3.

There's ONE year between 3 and 4 and, at most, THREE years between 4 and 5.

Making Plucky 14 for the events of part 5.

>>83570226
You forget that there is a time gap between parts 5 and 6, by several years since Penny, who is a young girl in part 4, which is only a few months before part 5, is now a teenager or even a young adult in part 6.

If any sons were born after Plucky, they definitely would've had time to age. Plus we have "realistic" animal aging in a few places, like with Tom and Courage. And god knows what the Warden would be up to when he had his hands on them.

I'm against the idea of Daffy having other kids, mainly because it just feels forced.

Instead have it so a bunch of birds, in a final experiment by the WB, got injected with Daffy's DNA just to see what it would do.

Or maybe it's something the Warden had done just because he wanted to see what would happen.

>>83570147
So would the beaker Goodvibes is linked to fill with smoking chemicals when he fails to symbolize his failure, then Patrick smashes it?

>>83570282
Oh, wait, strike that, it's 3 years between 4 and 5. Still though, Penny would be quite a bit older in part 6. Warden would have had his prison running for at least a year or two, and he begins building it at the end of part. Construction could take 3 years or so? Just because the place is HUGE and lethal. Comedically, much of the story never takes place there. Instead it takes place inside Pure Imagination I believe.

>>83570236
That seems like... an unnecessarily tight timescale.
It's not like the timescale doesn't work anyway if Plucky's older, it just means that LeTerally takes longer to set up his scheme.
Also, some of the stuff in the doc seems to imply that Daffy left after Plucky was born.

>>83570355
The implication I got was that he left before he ever knew about Plucky.

Of course the timescale is tight, the events of part 4 pushed up the WB's time table considerably since the stand jawbreakers became known to Interpol.

The WB realized Daffy was doing things, big things, years before part 3, but sat back and watched. After Daffy was gone, they started putting stand jawbreakers into circulation to test their effects, then they had to devote resources to sending Interpol on a wild goose chase for 3 years before they finally tracked them back to the Old Country, where they had managed to become deeply rooted, even more so during the 3 years they bought themselves.

They had installations all over the world, but they didn't begin taking over the Old Country in earnest until after Daffy was gone.

>>83570483
The last conversation has Plucky mention Daffy abandoning him and his mom. I guess that was in error?
I don't know why it changes things that much, though - Daffy was abandoning Tina anyway, Plucky still never got to know Daffy since he left early on, and Daffy apparently faked his death, unless that was just meant to be Tina lying to Plucky.

>>83570656
Plucky asking why Daffy left can still work there, but neither of them had ever met before. Daffy didn't even know Plucky existed until part 5 and Plucky had never met his dad until then.

I don't think Plucky really knew much about the circumstances of Daffy's departure from the Old Country. His impression of Daffy was mostly based on what his mom had told him and the horrible things the WB let him know about his father.

>>83569402
Maybe it is linked to Bitters and she dies but, as the Looniversity sinks, she merges with the Corpse part (like Funny and the heart), She needs some sort of supernatural protection afterall, to avoid being absorbed by the monster at the bottom of the pit.

>>83569823
>Condorito
Damn, wherever I go I bump into another chilean. Is like magnetism.

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Instead of arguing about whose interpretation of backstory is the only one that's correct, have this.
Sorry it took so long, I had other stuff going on.

I think the Daffy's sons thing is a good idea since they'd add an extra dimension to the inmates, and it's fine for us to rearrange Daffy's backstory so that they fit in since it probably wouldn't affect Plucky or Daffy's characters.

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>>83572565
Anyway. Shall we get back to part 5?

>>83571905
Bitters is already the physical avatar of a god bound to the mortal plane.

I don't think they'd be able to kill her that way, nor do I think the corpse part would merge with her.

>>83572565
>>83572590
Great as usual. Alright, what's missing on the Looniversity section?

>>83573445
Most things, really. Working out the trap progression and how the UR moove through the Looniversity should probably be the first step.

>>83568868
>Ace gets caught in a trap, bending him backwards and snapping his spine, Knightfall style
>Squidward and Taffy are horrified at how gruesome it is, but Donald and Toph are glad to see one of their enemies taken out
>Lexi grabs him and abruptly bends him back the other way, smacking his head into his knees
>The bloodied, injured, but still alive and with his spine newly fixed Ace resummons his Stand
>The UR ohshit out of there

>Donald is beating on Tech with Steam Machine, but Heartbeats is protecting him for 0 FUCKING DMG
>Donald, increasingly pissed off, tries to punch Tech himself as well as using his Stand
>Tech does a "you can't see me" pose, causing his body to flicker with the power of [STROBE] and Donald to pass through him
>Donald is suddenly covered in cuts and scrapes from Heartbeats using Strobe to steal cells from him

I don't have anything for Slam, but since he's not a Pillar Man I feel like he'd have to get Lexi to fix him with Melody whenever he uses Tornado Mode.

>>83573445
We're right at the start of it. We still need to figure out how we're getting from one character plot point to the next.

Currently, the idea is the UR fake surrender, get taken to some fight dome, then escape from that before the scientists can make them fight the Loonatics.

Who among the UR has some ruse cruise potential?

>>83573811
>Toph
>glad to see

You better have a blind joke prepped for this.

>>83573929
Goddamn it, I rused myself.

>>83564435
>2nd issue of Diesel
Say what?!

>>83573820
Right now, they enter the Looniversity through one of Rolf's doors while the blunt of the security forces are stationed in the front of the building. I though they could be some spare hall monitors armed with fancy tech (like the ones from invader Zim or KND) roaming the halls, this forces the UR to keep using Revolving Doors to dodge the guards. Once they enter the first room, Yanni begins to laid traps ahead of the UR and announces through the intercom that they have been spotted.
>Who among the UR has some ruse cruise potential?
Probably Dexter, he's a genius after all.

>>83574291
Front of the campus.
It's a rather large property with multiple buildings.

So when the UR slip away from the Loonatics, they end up in another building, the one where Yanni is located within. He sees them on the cameras, right as he's able to call them in, he notices Dexter and puts the phone back down. This is a personal matter for him.

In Yanni's building, at least a couple of the Loonatics fall. The next building the UR get into should have Bitters and Goodvibes. Bitters might end up retiring a couple of the Loonatics through intimidation alone.

CatDog could also take one of them out if they still do that "murder everyone" thing after they've released the strays.

We still need to come up with where Doof is being held at and what role he plays there after if they don't just stuff him inside Bobo.

Wait a minute... that's a good idea for earlier. Taffy charges in, gets the alarms, Rolf has Dexter, Toph, Squidward, and Cartman go back into Bobo, fake surrenders with Donald so the Loonatics only think there are three intruders.

Once they're in the arena, Donald puts up a steam wall, the other UR members come out of Bobo and they get in some surprise hits before Rolf makes a door out of there.

>>83574890
I was considering the fake surrender/arena idea and thought that when Wernstrom and Crooker releases the Loonatics, these make a small demostration of their powers, making a lot of noise and alerting the guards in the building. Realising that they will be outnumbered, the UR fake surrender and Dexter taunt the scientists of the WB about the quality of their experiments, saying how they were all show and no actions, this pisses off the scientists who decides to drag them to the lower levels of the building where R&D is located, and tosses them into the arena/testing grounds.

>>83576037
That could work, but if they're taken deep underground, Rolf can't just make a door the first chance they have to bail because there won't be anything on the other side of the wall for quite some distance.

>>83577313
It depends of the layout of the arena, if its like an actual coliseum, they could just go through one of the arena walls and then through the tunnels and rooms until they exit through the coliseum's outer wall. R&D could be like a small settlement underground with different labs and living quarters surrounding the testing grounds.

>>83577589
Maybe it shouldn't be underground at all, but just another room deeper within the R&D building the UR entered the Looniversity from. It can be sunken into the ground so the seating is far enough elevated, but putting them underground means we have to spend a lot of time getting them above ground again.

>>83577809
>putting them underground means we have to spend a lot of time getting them above ground again.
Good point and HR was underground too, so we shouldn't repeat that scenario.

>>83577891
We could even change it to something like an armored gymnasium.

>>83558520
Inspired ideias are always welcome.

>>83572565
>>83572590
Very nice, I'm very glad you're going to help us.

Maybe Doof is working on whatever the "thing" is that TA has had commissioned. They get to Doof and as soon as he realizes they're here to rescue him he hits the detonator button he'd been hiding inside his titanium arms to blow the containment just as a parting act of spite to his former captors.

The UR hear the roars and the screaming and Doof tells them they really should be running now. Then we go to Patrick who smashes something, and that somehow triggers the Looniversity to begin sinking into the ground.

So all hell is breaking lose, containment has been breach and the higher ups have hit the kill switch, the researchers are all scrambling to save whatever they can and get out of there, and CatDog has had to kill a large portion of the security for either getting in their way or abandoning their posts.

>>83579693
Well, maybe not as soon as he realizes he's getting out of there, but as soon as they're out in the open, the exit is in sight, they're surrounded, and they need a distraction.

I imagine the "thing's" screaming would sound like Funky Boy's screaming from Redline. We never actually see whatever it is, and in part 7 there's signs of a horrific fight when whoever visits the sunken Looniversity, way beyond the scale of anything the UR did.

>>83579965
The monster should be behind some thick titanium-alloy walls (yeah fallout 3 reference, sue me), and when Doof blow the restraints, smoke and sparks came out of the crevises of the cage as the thing bashes against his containment, and all the alarms goes wild. The thing is never seen outside that metallic cage in part 5, but is hinted that it managed to escape its bonds and finished any poor fella that remained in the complex.
I'm not sure at what point in the timeline Ethan retrieved the monster.

>>83580585
Since the monster isn't there during part 7, he must've gotten it sometime prior to that.

I guess he didn't see any value in the corpse part still hidden there when he got the monster.

>>83574890

I'm thinking Rev gets got by one of the traps, Ace ends up taking a mortal wound from either the UR or the collapsing school, and Slam dies trying to save Lexi and Tech when they go to rescue Danger.

>>83581784
How many of the Loonatics survive?

Danger wakes up at the end of the part, but is he in the Looniversity still when that happens?
It could be he got the corpse part and that made him into a Wizard.

>>83581784
>>83582355
With all the Looniversity sinking talk, I forgot that Danger needs to survive that ordeal AND the monster escaping, maybe being brain dead until the end of part 5 spared him from being hunted by the monster.

>>83582491
Danger survives the part and turns up in 7 offering directions, or if we wanted to expand on it, he offers directions and runs a gas station/roadside restaurant the heroes stop inside when they get lost or need lunch.

>>83582653
yeah i know that, but right now the entire Looniversity is flushed into a hole and the Hey Kids! monster escapes containment. Danger is either a very lucky duck or there was something else that helped him survive the collapse of the Looniversity and escape the pit after awakening.

>>83582491
>>83582757

That's why I brought up the idea that at least one to two of them survive and say fuck this I'm out when the Looniversity starts going to shit, grabbing Danger on the way out.

>>83582757
>>83582820
Danger could just be EXTREMELY lucky. Like, his crazy malfunctioning stand that transforms him winds up evolving into our version of Hey Ya or something. Of course, this is why he never does anything afterwards. His stand renders him set for life. He never has to do anything.

The stand is being affected by Daffy's lingering presence, hence why it's weird/messed up now. Once he leaves, the stand suddenly "repairs" itself into the luck-themed stand it should've been, but La Chucaracha's shadow prevented.

>>83582968

His Stand was always transformative though. It was when the vestige of La Cucaracha awoke in him that Danger ended up succumbing to the genetic memory of LeTerally's last moments.

>>83582491
>>83582653
Well, he could just be someone minor in part 7, but that feels like a waste. Like we set something up with him and we forgot to give it a pay off.

If we wanted to make him someone major, there's always the corpse part having merged with him and turned him into the wizard option.

But as for him just surviving, I think his vegatiative state saved him. He had no identity for the monster to sniff out while he was potato.
The time between the Looniveristy sinking and Daffy's ghost moving on is only the span of a few days, so his body could survive unattended for that long.

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Has this been posted yet?

>>83583456

If we go with the idea that he became the vessel for the corpse part, he could be investigating them outside of the race itself.

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Does /co/co/ have any ideia of how Hank's propane nightmare is going to be like other than pic related?

>>83583456
Him not being involved is the joke I believe. He seems like he'll have further involvement, but he doesn't. Hell, at this point I'd say he just wake up in the Looniversity then get stomped by the monster without having a chance to do anything.

It's supposed to be a joke. Like Hippie-Hop from Kids Next Door.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v_FV7Po15qs

>>83583781
I like the other art of it, with the tanks on the shoulders

>>83583860
Can you post it? I couldn't find it on the booru.

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>>83583917

>>83583837

If we do go forward with just keeping him a one time joke in Part 7, I kind of like the idea of him and whichever of the Loonatics survive settling down and opening a burger joint.

>>83573811

>Slam activates [TORNADO MODE] combining it with [SKRILLEX] to become a veritable vacuum vortex but utterly helixes himself in the process
>Rev comes in using his Melody to spin him in the opposite direction, resetting all of Slam's broken bones and impacted organs

>>83583529
What the hell is that? CWC made a sonic-shaped fleshlight with crayola modeling clay? I had the idea that Chris-chan end up merging with Blonic to become his fursona, Sonichu Chris-chan

>>83584116
>Danger: By the way, if you happen to see my old "roommate" in those ruins, give him my regards...and get the hell outta there.
(Of course, at that point the thing was retrieved by Ethan)

>>83574890
>>83576037
>>83573811
>>83557956
OK, let's see what I can spin all this into.

>The UR are surrounded by the Loonatics
>This seems like a tight spot to be in until Dexter chimes in
>"Hmm, these look to be atomic super men, though the designs are much more streamlined than the original published work on them."
>Wernstrom is somewhat impressed some youngster knows what these are, "Well now, this is a surprise, it seems you aren't all half-wits after all."
>"Do not lump my superior intellect in with the stuuuupid headed masses, I am a man of science. Which is more than I can say about you."
>The other UR are glancing at Dexter, Cartman in particular with a "Dude, shut up" look while the others catch on what he's doing
>"I'll make you pay for that."
>"By sicking your knock-off creations on us? These are just imitations of the Farnsworth designs."
>"Imitations?! I'll have you know that MY atomic super men were cloned from a far superior stock than anything that wretched Farnsworth could ever hope to get his shrived hands on."
>"Even a stupid head could copy someone else's research. This only proves Farnsworth is just that much better than you since you were able to recreate his results so easily form his research papers."
>At this Wernstrom becomes furious, but then cracks a smile
>"Perhaps a demonstration is in order to show you just how superior mine are. Take them to the gym, my atomic super men. And someone kill the damn alarm, I want to enjoy watching you all die in peace."
>The UR are marched to the gym, a large dome-shaped building with an arena sunken into the floor which they are tossed into with the Loonatics
>Wernstrom and Crocker are both in a glassed in observation room
>Wernstrom gives the order for the Loonatics to kill them all

cont.

>>83585221
>>83573811
>>83574890
>Donald is the first to jump into the fray, Tech steps up to face him
>Donald is beating on Tech with [Steam Machine], but [Heartbeats] is protecting him for 0 FUCKING DMG
>Donald, increasingly pissed off, tries to punch Tech himself as well as using his Stand
>Tech does a "you can't see me" pose, causing his body to flicker with the power of [STROBE] and Donald to pass through him
>Donald is suddenly covered in cuts and scrapes from Heartbeats using Strobe to steal cells from him
>Wernstrom taunts them from the intercom system, "If you think stands are all my atomic super men are capable of then this won't even last long enough to give us any new research data. My atomic super men have not only stands, but access to modes, melody, and styles! They are the ultimate killing machines!"
>Donald is pissed off now, so much so that the arena begins to fill with steam
>Rolf capitalizes on the low visibility and makes a door in the wall
>They grab Donald and have disappeared by the time the steam has cleared
>"What? Where did they go? Find them, my atomic super men! Find them and kill them on the spot!"

>The UR are outside of the gym, security is everywhere
>They slip into another building
>We see the inside of the janitor's office where Yanni, the Yanitor is sitting, watching the monitors
>He sees the UR and picks up the phone to report them
>But then he stops, he sees Dexter with them and puts the phone back down with an insidious grin on his face
>He comes onto the intercom system "So, we meet again, eh, Dexter?"
>Dexter recognizes him from his voice, the other UR ask him who that is
>"He's just some crazy janitor who once tried to kill me."
>"Don't think you'll get away so easily this time, Dexter."

>Outside, Rev Runner is speeding around the campus looking for the UR, he spots them inside the building through a window and alerts the other Loonatics
cont.

>>83585559
>"Looks like you'll need to make a choice, Dexter. Either face my traps or face the wrath of the Loonatics."
>A door opens in front of the UR which they begrudgingly go through

OK, does anyone have any trap ideas? Now is a good time to post them.

>>83585599
Well, the first one are probably extremely simple and obvious and, as the UR dodge them, they become more stealthy and deadly.
Maybe it start with something like a vietnamese trap.

>>83585599
Not really ideas, but here are some inspirations.

http://sawfilms.wikia.com/wiki/Traps

>>83585599

For the first round, some classics. A few pressure switch activated arrows, false floors above spike lined pits, and the classic log on a string. As it gets stronger due to the effect of Yanni's Stand, I'd say things like carbon monoxide and near invisible razor wire start getting added to the mix.

>>83585699
>>83585842
Well, keep in mind they'd be made out of things you'd find in a classroom.

Maybe...

>The first room the UR enter is a math class room
>Dexter points out that they should watch their step since Yannie is fond of trip wires
>Sure enough, there's a trip wire
>The UR set it off at a distance and math compasses come flying out of the walls, embedding themselves in the opposite wall
>The UR proceed, until math compasses come from behind them
>Taffy barely had enough time to turn them into cheese before they collide with the UR's bodies
>Yannie comes over the intercom again "That was just a warm up for old times sake, Dexter. Don't expect the next room to be so easy."
>Another door opens and the UR go through it
>The next room has shelves of books like a library, but it's more of a storage room
>The UR proceed with caution, but the shelves come smashing together
>Yannie laughs, but then stops as he sees a door form in the shelves and the UR walk out of it unscathed
>"So that's how it's going to be, eh?"
>The next room is a chemistry room, as they proceed, the gas is turned on and the bunsen burners create a wall of fire
>Toph manipulates some glass and forms a barrier so they can walk through it
>The next room is empty, but "Rolf grows tired of this foolishness."
>Rolf makes a door in the wall, it just so happens on the other side is Ace Bunny
>Rolf quickly closes the door and walks quickly to the other side of the room, making another door, behind door number two is Lexi bunny
>Rolf quickly closes this door as well
>The first wall Rolf made a door in is destroyed and Ace Bunny comes smashing into the room, triggering the trap
>A giant log comes swinging from the ceiling, catching Ace in the face and snapping his spine
>Squidward and Taffy are horrified at how gruesome it is, but Donald and Cartman are glad to see one of their enemies taken out
>Lexi comes smashing through the other wall and see Ace
cont.

>>83586449
>She grabs him and abruptly bends him back the other way, smacking his head into his knees
>Ace, bloodied, but otherwise looking no worse for ware, resummons his Stand
>The UR ohshit out of there through the hole in the wall Ace made
>Yannie is enraged by this and his stand starts modifying the entire building

Gotta think how the rest of the Loonatics deal with this.

>>83581784
>>83584958
Gotta remember to incorporate these.

Maybe Rev runs through a hallway covered in jacks and broken glass. It'd need to be after Slam has had a shot at the UR and Rev fixes him.

>>83588104
I'm just looking for some more feedback/input/ideas before I continue with the Looniversity.

>>83588323
You may just have to hit the ground running, not many people suggest things during the middle of a part.

>>83590070
I am kinda dry of ideas right now, but the Loonatics encounter have to end with the UR finding Doof and fighting Goodvibes and Bitters before escaping. The question is: how they take down the Loonatics?.
Also, what is going to be Goodvibes Stand?

>>83590396
Goodvibes' stand is already decided as being that hip-hop hippo with the quiz power.

The Loonatics I think I'll retire when Yannie accidentally blows up the building when a trap goes wrong.

They survive it, but it retires them. We'll see Slam carrying their busted bodies back to the labs when the place is sinking to go get Danger Duck.

That's my plan if I end up doing this fast and lose the whole way threw on my own.

>>83590461
>Goodvibes' stand is already decided as being that hip-hop hippo with the quiz power.
Alright, so Goodvibes places a quiz on the UR while Bitters attack them from the shadows of the room/lab. To build some tension Dexter could try to answer the entire quiz for himself, trusting on his vast scientific knowledge, then the topics begin to move to Old Country related stuff that forces him to eat his pride and ask Rolf for help.

>>83590735
I'm not sure if Bitters would attack them alongside Goodvibes.

Bumping

What's the topic right now?

>>83592216
Working on the Looniversity, just follow the greentext.

Though with errors like
>threw
I really shouldn't do anymore tonight.

Right now the UR are in a hallway in a school building, Ace Bunny has just had his spine snapped back into place by Lexi Bunny after he got caught in one of Yannie the yanitor's death traps, so they are right on their heels and Yannie's stand has booby trapped the whole building. The traps don't care who walks into them.

>>83592207
I was working in the scenes after the Loonatics are retired:
>Both Yanni and the Loonatics failed to eliminate the UR, who rushes to the complex where Doof is stationed.
>Yanni loses it and plans to turn the entire lab into an explosive trap, but before he can do anything, Bitters manifests from the shadow of his chair and wraps around him.
>Bitters: “Why is taking so long to take down those kids? What!? They reached the (insert scientific sounding name) facility and you didn’t do anything to stop them?” She throws Yanni against a wall, knocking him down, before dematerializing. “Consider yourself fired”.
>Shot of Principal Goodvibes office, Bitters is already there and reporting Goodvibes of the janitor’s failure.
>Goodvibes: “What are they looking for? It doesn't make sense that they go through all this lengths only to kidnap a lowly scientist”
>Bitters: “That “lowly” scientist was designated to the (facility name); he is tasked to keep that thing under control. Don’t you see, old fool? They are here to kill it!”
>At the mention of someone trying to kill the monster, Goodvibes becomes shocked (a projection of Goodbling briefly appears alongside him) “No! They can’t touch it, they can’t harm it! We must deal with these intruders immediately!” He is visible angered.

Is hinted that Goodbling is the actual head of R&D (and probably another experiment, given how he originated in Billy and Mandy)

>>83592216
The last stretch of the Looniversity (Goodvibes, Bitters, CatDog and the Strays)

>>83592554
That's about... half of the Looniversity then.
OK, I'll take one more shot at making something up on the fly before I stop for the night.

>The UR are running through the halls, they smell gas
>Yannie comes over the intercom again, laughing
>Another door opens, it's either the gas or the trap room, Yannie wants to make the UR suffer as much as possible
>They dive into the next room, but before they even look around Rolf has made a door in the ceiling, they aren't dumb enough to not know the gas is still spreading
>Rolf is first up through the door, but ducks back down just in time to avoid a bad haircut from a buzzsaw blade whizzing through the air
>Yannie's stand is wise to Rolf's powers now and has prepared accordingly in all directions
>Donald smashes the saws away with [Steam Machine] and they dive out of the room into the hallways again
>Slam leaps through the window near them and begins spinning
>This is something the UR don't understand since it isn't a stand power (it's his MODE)
>His stand activates and the intensity of air pressure around him skyrockets
>He's now some kind of horrific tentacles spinning tornado of bad hentai
(I don't really get how his stand works, so I think just anything close to his body gets and intense power boost in impact)
>Saw blades and broken glass are airborne now and moving at high speeds
>[Steam Machine] and Donald wrapped in [3 feet high] are smashing anything that comes at them
>Toph and Taffy begin working on controlling items in the vortex while Cartman and Squidward's stands keep them all anchored
>When they have enough things to control in the vortex they begin forming them into larger solid chunks until they disrupt the airflow and stop the spinning
>Slam is all kinds of fucked up, he looks like he's been twisted like a sponge
>The UR don't even bother with a mercy kill, they just keep running since they hear something else coming
cont.

>>83592947
>Below them, Rev has entered the gas and gets TURBO charged going almost too fast to maintain control
>He's up the stairs and at Slam's location right as the UR duck around a corner
>Rev runs around in circles using his Melody to spin him in the opposite direction, resetting all of Slam's broken bones and impacted organs
>The UR catch a glimpse of this and go up another level, the gas is still rising
>This time the floor is covered in barbed wires, making it difficult to get the door open
>The barbed wires are also coursing with electricity, something they notice just as soon as they get on the floor
>Toph makes a glass plane for them to stand on, Taffy makes cheese wheels to roll it forward
>Taffy can't change too much of the barbed wires into cheese because the electricity keeps arching when he makes gaps
>The UR pause here, they need to get to Yannie already or just get out of the building
>They still don't know where Doof is
>Yannie must know where Doof is
>Find Yannie, beat the information out of him, but before that, they hear that noise again
>They watch as Rev hits the wires, gets tangled, shocked into a cooked goose, then shocked back to normal before crashing through the window
>Cartman notes there was something seriously not right about that bird and he's glad they didn't have to fight it
>The sprinklers turn on, making everything worse
>Donald has had enough of this, he grabs everyone and jumps out the window, then uses [Steam Machine] to scale the building
>Yannie's stand didn't account for this, but it is already making preparations for their arrival on the roof
>>It gets too ambitious with its trap making and they arrive before it's done
>Yannie's stand has been captured and they are going to get information out of him
(how they do this can be left up to the imaginations or less tired anons)
cont.

>>83593183
>Slam is also climbing the building
>Donald hears him coming and kicks a satellite dish off the roof to knock him off
>The UR now know which building Doof is in
>They jump from the roof to another roof top
>Toph creates some stepping places, Cartman screams the whole way, Squidward has transcended to a state of mind to cope with the situation
>Donald is so mad his laughing

Then I guess >>83592554 happens with the change that he plans to blow up the building the UR are going to. Also, did Yannie tell Bitters about them looking for Doof?

I'll continue tomorrow with them getting to Doof.

>>83593285
Maybe they overhear the UR talking about finding Doof, but Bitters assumes that they are there to kill the abomination that Doof is watching.

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Maybe one of the people working WB is Forte with [Mozarts House]
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0a6rKT4YzK4
The one thing I'm trying to work out is if he should use Melody, given that he is a living pipe organ.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rd0cT7Dnpt8

>>83593584
Well, they do ask Yannie where Doof is.

>>83593721
Also, the power of [Mozarts House] is this, as long as it's user is physically connected to the building they reside in, [Mozarts House] can manipulate any sound within it's range. This also affects Fortes [Melody]

>>83593721
>>83594367
Sounds good I suppose. Manipulating sound though may be too similar to Sunny D's stand IIRC.

>>83595169
Ah. fair point.

>>83593721
Melody's just toon physics, named after the WB cartoons. It doesn't really have anything to do with music.
Maybe he'd work for a tower climb obstacle.

>>83595669
Ah, now I just feel stupid.

>>83592947

The best way to explain Slam's Stand is that on it's own, it just creates a 3 cubic foot field of unbound pressure about him and when the tentacles emerge, they can give the pressure field shape and direction kind of like they're sculpting it.

>>83595696

To be fair, it's been a while since it was last brought up.

>>83592207

Yeah, it seems a little iffy since the quiz power is area based. She wouldn't want to get caught in that.

>>83596943
So anything that gets too close to him is just crushed?

Bump, I guess.
Feel like the Loonatics should get a little more opportunity to show off their powers, but I guess that can come between the Doof breakout and the Goodvibes fight?

>>83602011
I was planning on having the Loonatics (minus Rev and Slam) ambush them in another building or after they've gotten Doof out.

Which would make for a better moment? Them ambushing the UR before facing Goodvisbes, or them ambushing the UR after they've gotten Doof, causing him to hit the detonator to give them a distraction to escape?

>>83602140
Ambushing them in another building works better in my opinion.

>>83602447
SO you want them all to get taken out before they get to Goodvibes?

I still don't know where to work in CatDog and the Strays. Should we see them for the first time before or after Patrick informs us of their presence?

>>83603078
We see them after Patrick talks about them, though there are subtle hints that they're already inside.

I had the idea CatDog would have followed the UR in, then trailed off, found the Strays, and began tearing apart the faculty. After Doof is grabbed and monster is released, Patrick starts sinking the building, the UR take the main hall out of there, only to find CatDog and the Strays, who fight them at the very end. Of course, I'm not sure if that plot would work out or not.

Alternatively, the UR make it out of the building, and the Strays and CatDog are already waiting for them outside. CatDog is an assassin, all they want is the money for getting the UR killed. I think they'd help get the UR out of there, but once they're safe, they'd suddenly start attacking them. They have to be the ones to kill them after all.

>>83603430
So that's the reason why they start killing the guards?

OK, so
-Fight Goodvibes
-Fight Bitters
-Get Doof
-Ambushed one last time by the Loonatics
-Doof hits the detonator to make a distraction
-Patrick sinks the place
-CatDog and Strays clear the path for the UR's escape
-CatDog and the Strays try to kill the UR once they're all out

Is that what we're doing?

>>83604321
Yep, and on their way out they clubbed Uppercrust on the head. He probably rages after seeing "his" territory turned into a big hole in the ground.

>>83604449
Right, I had forgotten about him.

Oddly enough, Rolf clubbing him saves Uppercrust from going down with the Looniversity.

We should probably have a scene of him coming to at the edge of the huge hole and swearing revenge.

>>83606812
>He was readying himself to haze a newcomer in the fraternity, paddle in hand
>Being knocked in the head prevented him to partake in the beating, but saved his life
>He acts as if being denied the newbie's spanking was a huge crime and wants revenge

>>83606812
>>83607205
We haven't written Uppercrust's fight during the Studios, have we?

Would the Rangers have no idea who he is since, from what I got, Rolf just slams the door in his face as they leave. No one notices him.

They still don't recognize him in the Studios, but he remembers Rolf and helps fight them. During the battle, he is knocked out again and forgotten by the UR going "Who is this guy?". Or alternatively, Rolf pieces what he says together and points out that they saved his life and he should be grateful before knocking him out.

Either way, if he survives the Studios, maybe he could go a complete 180 on his personality and start to believe that the UR spared his life out of kindness, rather than simply not caring enough for him to kill him. He could cameo in some other part then.

>>83608217
Correct, the UR doesn't recognize him, but Uppercrust manages to catch a glimpse of one of them (probably Rolf) and he is the one that alert Jew Producer or Mok that they are the responsible of sinking the Looniversity (not really)

I need to remember to insert something about the UR hearing animals while in the Yannie building.

>>83604321
>>83593285
OK, so continuing from here >>83592554

The UR are now on top of the clock tower building and are working their way down through it.

(I can't find the details on Goodvibes/Goodbling's stand, so this is a problem.)

They are confronted by Headmaster Goodbling with his stand already out saying it's time for a pop quiz. Rolf is dismayed by this, having had poor experiences with places of academic learning. Cartman and Donald decide to just go for it and get knocked aside.
>"The time of reckoning has come, urban rangers. For it is here that we shall be mercilessly judged."
Dexter is more confident about it.

We need quiz questions now.

>>83606812
>We should probably have a scene of him coming to at the edge of the huge hole and swearing revenge.
>"I'll take my revenge on whoever created that thing in the labs!"
>His phone starts ringing, he freaks out and throws it into the hole
>"I mean... on whoever released that thing in the labs!"

>>83609087
Well, the Stand hasn't been fully defined but here's the current ideas:
>>83535382
>>83535560
>>83535921
>>83540567

>>83609274
I'm not sure if Uppercrust knew the existence of the monster

>>83609437
Well >>83535382 could work, but I don't like the game show aspect to it of penalties for not being the one to answer.

Maybe if you don't at least try to answer once for every 5 questions asked you get a penalty.

>>83609087
OK, so Cartman tries to bail on this when Goodbling brings up a pop quiz, but he can't. All the exits have a force field around them and numbers appear above the UR's heads. Rolf tries to take decisive action, but Goodbling's stand has some kind of intimidation thing going on. Goodbling begins with "You're on my turf now, and I'm not gonna let any neckerchief wearing, beet washing, turnip shaving country nincompoop tell Goodbling what to do. Now sit down and take your learning like a good little scout ripoff."

Then

Rolf is dismayed by this, having had poor experiences with places of academic learning. Cartman and Donald decide to just go for it and get knocked aside.
>"The time of reckoning has come, urban rangers. For it is here that we shall be mercilessly judged."

Goodbling begins his quiz, Rolf tries to answer, but answers wrong every time, by the 4th time, Dexter cuts in an answers correctly. He starts answering all the math, science, history, and biology questions correctly. Goodbling mixes it up by starting to ask questions specific to the Looniversity and the Old Country, questions Dexter doesn't know the answers to. Rolf is able to answer them, but Goodbling dismisses his answers as incorrect. Rolf is now mad and begins a flurry of his own questions that Goodbling is unable or unwilling to answer. The rest of the UR join in with questions about the WB until Goodbling's head number is at 0. He seems to be defeated, but then he gets back up, glowing with intense stand power, and says "Yo mama so hairy, the sheep bring her in for shaving!" and Rolf simply responds, "Yes, and?" (this being true) then clubs Goodbling when he starts sweating since his last ditch effort failed.

The UR finally beak into the room where Doof is. He's chained to a couch, a lumpy looking one. He wakes (it's still before 6am) and sees the UR "Oh, I uh, I don't remember ordering any scout cookies, but if you can get me off of this couch I'll buy some boxes."

cont.

Maybe another person in the SC area of Superjail is the Father from Clarissa
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jItz-uNjoZA

The Warden only put him there because the other prisoners would have violently disembowled him. He may be an absolute loony, but even he has standards.

>>83610401
The UR announce who they are, Doof is just confused until he sees Donald, still in his Paperink costume, and finally realizes they're heroes here to save him. Donald breaks the chains and Doof quickly grabs a suitcase with some things in it. They arrive at the bottom of the clock tower, the Loonatics appear and a shadow elongates behind then, Bitters repeats the orders to kill the intruders.

Lexi brings out her stand, Tech begins tossing ammo (rocks, books, other junk) at the grinning missiles, anything that comes into contact with them gets hyper accelerated and shot in the direction they're facing. Oddly one of them is painted at Ace who takes the hits using his stand and creates several floating objects that surround the UR, when Rolf tries batting one of them away, it explodes with momentum directly at him. Rolf avoids any serious damage because his revolving doors was active, letting it pass through him.

The UR are surrounded by Ace Bunny's geometric shapes acting like bombs and being shot at by Lexi, they can't dodge too well. Tech is able to pose his way through the danger zone and engage, complicating things further. Doof sees they could use a distraction and opens up one of his arms, he tells Taffy "Solid titanium" when he notices this, then pushes a button. We see the inside of Doof's lab, a lrage metal box with thick bolts keeping it shut is shown, there are explosives hidden in the hinges that detonate. An explosion up in the clock tower above them goes off, Doof says "I never forget to install a self destruct, and this time I'm happy to blow up my research because of that thing that were forcing me work on." The loud high-pitched roar screaming begins "Huh, I guess I built the cage stronger than I thought. We should probably be going sooner rather than later."

We cut to >>83562729

>>83611047
The entire Looniversity begins to tremble, the UR look at Doof "I didn't do all of that, it's the containment protocol kicking in." Bitters is grabbing her chest like she's having a heart attack before disappearing into the shadows saying "That fool, he's doomed us all." The researchers are all scrambling to save whatever they can and get out of there. We also see a bunch of empty animal cages. The Loonatics have given up on the UR, the clock tower has fallen down all around them and their instincts are screaming at them to get away from it because of what is still inside.

The UR are sprinting across campus now as the entire property begins to sink, curiously there are many guards on the ground who have bite marks on them and look like they've been attacked by animals. They get the property wall the surrounds the whole campus, they're at the font gate and smash it open, it collides with the face of some guy (Uppercrust) who was just heading onto campus, he gets a look at Rolf before blacking out, one of the UR kicks him away from the walls that are also stating to crumble so he won't get crushed.

The UR get atop a hill a little ways away and watch the place sink into the Earth. They hear growling, they look around and they're surrounded by animals.

Need to find the info on the Strays before I can go further.

>>83610401
Oh, that's good. I like the idea of a backup power in case his main one fails.
>>83611047
>self destruct
>not a "blow-self-up-inator"
>>83611878
That's pretty good. What about the attempted rescue of Danger Duck?
>>83610664
He should be included, get a really creepy fight, and be killed in a painful and extended fashion.

>>83612065
>Dora gets locked in a dark room with him
>he comments on how young Dora looks

>>83612138
I don't think he should be a stand user though. Not unless he had a jawbreaker.

It just makes it better if he can't defend himself against Dora as she MUDAMUDAs him for five pages. Could be an establishing moment for her character.
>"I'm not locked in here with them. They're locked in here with me."

>>83612138
Eugh.
I'm thinking that [LITTLE GIRLS] shouldn't be anything explicit, and shouldn't, like, grope the heroes, since Clarissa's pretty... "subtle" about that shit, I guess, in terms of showing it on-panel. It should be seriously unsettling and give off a "molestation" vibe without actually doing anything ~sexual~, though.
Also, they should keep punching him even after he dies, just to make sure the bastard's dead.
I fucking hate pedos, in case you hadn't guessed.