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/co/co's Bizzare Adventure: Fighting Game Edition

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(UPDATE NEEDED)
Past threads:http://pastebin.com/HfiHHQ4u

MAIN TOPIC: Part 4 Development.

READ THESE LINKS BEFORE CONTRIBUTING YOUR AUTISM
(ALSO, try not to suggest 1:1 copies of characters and events in JJBA)

>Canon Stand Info for the Ignorant and Forgetful
http://jojo.wikia.com/wiki/Stand
http://jojo.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_Stands

>Plot summaries and character list
http://pastebin.com/vbD28iMx

>Abilities and Stands
http://pastebin.com/vYTvZPFP
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QycIbBT6L7Ny5elmmnhI4OdQYk-yJ-mGJC6TrdwBii8

>Every part, in order
1 -https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IdBYK9zXpJrDc4vAIHnRLmZpPiKyxiIkj25oOTaaeF0
2 -https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KA0-Y_HnU_m6V5pwZ7fEtqGMnwm43NrshzANTcCxr34
3 -https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hDbP7BA0XBP3_3GW0uphroYjQdcW1EW5b37w-r_lsaI
4 -https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zn-D4aD-cBBfpBtfTLmVM_D9C1cGPYgDYRl_CCGbnsw
5 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UNm7KLXgWF0LMxCCq3VZ3O_VJ8vEqj7d22RjnDqVIEg/edit?usp=sharing
6 -https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l9034tpMm4EdF1NGzisA2bCXBDvUbx_vTR69hXjp_iY/edit?usp=sharing
7 -https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SDhmnLrv5dtVAZx2ewx1JKTsZVoXkE8LRw-8rK2gyhQ/edit?usp=sharing
8 -https://docs.google.com/document/d/10wx78PDHPNMygoTbFvihjTjPF-DwP1Ced8XKT3YNzUQ/edit?usp=sharing

>Phantom Scare: Chapter 1
http://pastebin.com/bsmui6f7

>Images
http://ccba.booru.org/

>Fighting Game
https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0BzsuKz5EhsUkQjlNaG5UQmxDcTA

>Vocaroofag's Dialogue
http://pastebin.com/ctG7NsC6

>/Co/Co/ playlist:「THE SHOW MUST GO ON」
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL0rToV4jvAVAnamBNW_KGUrKXvhTM7n0E

>M.E. LeTerally's Over Heaven: Chapters 1-3
http://pastebin.com/4mfBbVxS
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Ah, here it is!

Thanks for making a new thread anon
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Review fag didn't gave his hot opinion on dora's new stand
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>>81526839
I gotta say, I'm impressed with all the progress you've done /co/
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Imma go and change all the [] to 「」 on the docs is that okay?
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>>81527592
Go ahead, but just know you'll probably need to do it again when edits are made.
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>>81527749
we all have time to waste
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>>81527855
Yep, I just updated the part 4 doc with some stuff from last thread.
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>>81526839
I wonder if Scott could fit into Part 5.
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>>81526839
>Not using the clearly updated Thread List given in the beginning of the previous thread

Come one familia, it's not even hard to update yourself.
http://pastebin.com/R0ynsmEr
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>Jacknife isn't in the Part 6 party list
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>>81528110

It is still a WIP. Notice that other key characters like Lord Dominator and Judge Dredd haven't been added either.
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User: Ramona Flowers

Stand: 「B E C K」

Appearance: A blue bag with a star on it.

Abilities: The stand serves as a gateway to a realm known as Subspace. The user could either use Subspace as a container for certain items or as a shortcut to enter a location that the user desires, whether it's a distant destination, in a world created by another stand, or even in the mind of an individual. The user, however, can only move through the mind and is unable to alter it as it is treated as a normal location by the stand.

Possible ally for Part 5.
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Can anyone think of a good user for 「SLAVE TO THE RHYTHM」? >>81502816
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>Stand name: Triple Baka
>Ability: Each time it's user is damaged, it reflects the injury onto whoever or whatever attacked.
>cut off a head and you suddenly find yourself decapitated.
>Throw a car at the hydra, the crushed car is now flat as a pancake.
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>>81529467
Isn't that just Gold Experience?
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Can we throw in Weird Al and his ability to [ P A R O D Y ]?
>P A R O D Y "copies" the Stand ability of a target, often eschewing the ability and emulating appearance of whatever Stand it targeted. Take for instance the Stand Beat it, and it's ability to turn anything into a drum that emits high frequency soundwaves. Parody copies it, becoming Eat it and now it's ability requires Parody to consume items in order to emit soundwaves.
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>>81529467
So would this be countered by stands that do not damage the user but alter it?
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>>81529675
Weird Al is already in this with EVERYTHING YOU KNOW IS WRONG.
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>>81529818
Yes, as long as no harm is done directly to it's user.
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Did we settle on the corrupt cops for part 4? I was thinking on a Stand for one of them:

「TOOL」(American Rock Band)

Appearance: An orange glowing orb residing inside one of the user's eye, brownish spiked tentacles come from under the eyelids. 「TOOL」permanently blind the eye where it resides.
Abilities: When 「TOOL」user set his eyes on a person, said person will start to feel uneasy and desperate, a sensation that will increase the longer it's user keep his eyes on the target. When the user is in proximity of the target and makes eye contact with him, the Stand can 「mind rape」, inducing increasing psychosomatic pain and madness. If the user manage to break his target's psique or he gives up earlier,「TOOL」tentacles will shoot forward and wrap around the target's head, allowing the user to peruse the target's mind as if were a internet browser.

The user could be the interrogator of the department. Since the Stand is not suited for combat, He would remain on the sideline keeping the enemy subdued while a partner goes into melee.
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>>81530334
I think Part 4 is pretty much filled up right now, we could put it in 5 though.
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>>81530380
>>81530334

We actually do need a corrupt cop or two for the Part actually. This could work, but we might need to remove the eye contact & blindness aspect of it so it doesn't conflict with Powerline's abilities from Part 5
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>>81530334
I like this from last thread:
>Commissioner Loeb from Batman: Year One and Bonkers
>One is dangerous in our definition. Doesn't hesitate to shoot people, torture, etc. At first it looks like he's forcing Bonkers along.
>But then we see that Bonkers is fucking Bonkers.
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>>81530440

We could give that power to either Bonkers or Comissioner Loeb, whoever suits the Stand better.

There is also Bad Cop from Lego Movie, who I'm not sure if he will appear as another corrupt cop or will appear in another part of the series.
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>>81530527
>>81530536
Given the mind-fuck nature of the Stand it would probably be Loeb's. Bonkers would have something more clearly combat oriented I think.
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>>81530440
the blindness is actually on its own user, so when he fight the heroes, one manages to gouge「TOOL」 eye and, in a hurry, the user decides to transfer it to his other eye, rendering him blind.
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>>81530886
Oh I see. Well if that's the case I think its different enough from Powerline's Stand such that we won't have to change it, even if they do both utilize eye contact as a mechanic.
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>>81530660
We could just give Bonkers

>Zebrahead
>User has the ability to lessen or amplify physical force they produce, see, or sense.

From list of stand ideas that don't have users yet.
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>>81510218
I would change the horns thing to something where the horns make the object "stick" to any other objects like Velcro rather then as a paralysis ability. It has a bit wider application we can work with that way.
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>>81532949
Its not really paralysis per say but more like you can get stabbed by the horn and it wont do damage but still affects you as if its stuck in your body. Like if the horn shot up through your foot it would be like your foot is stuck in the ground but it wont hurt and there wont be any wound.
I kind of like your idea a bit better though, I might whip up a new proposal using it later. Is the healing sub-ability okay?
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>>81533378
Yeah, Using like the healing ability. It'll help us explain away the ludicrous wounds Dora and company will get, seeing as the actual part 6 was crazy gory.
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bumping again.

what's the general plot of part 5?

do we have one yet?
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>>81535127
Plucky Duck, son of Daffy Duck, goes up against a massive stand using corporation going by the Warner Bros.
He is almost immediately put into a coma.
Rolf and suburban rangers take up the mantle, and fight against Patrick Star, it's CEO.
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>>81535127
Daffy's illegitimate son, Pluck Duck, wants to bring down the enigmatic Warner Bros. organization in the old country. Rolf's Urban Rangers take up the cause and MASSIVE CONFUSION ensues thanks to a pink starfish and a trouser-less red devil.
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>>81535239
>>81535354
I was wondering, how long it takes for Plucky to be put in the coma? At the beginning of the story or after bringing down the first significant villain (probably the end of the first arc)?
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>>81535690
Beginning. He probably gets two fights before it to maximise the Confusion.
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>>81535690
When does he get out of the coma is what I'd like to know.
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>>81536097
It's probably just conclusive brain damage, Pants and Jacket may have just busted his head into a table while Red Guy hid behind the scenes.

I hope he only gets out of it right at the end, as Red Guy proudly stands over the defeated Urban Rangers. Then a small hole begins sliding across the ground, and out comes Plucky, ready to fight.
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wait a minute, from what i remember, plucky was the protag of part 5.

what happened to that? was it even ever a thing and am i just an idiot?
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>>81536676
Plucky is the protag, he just gets put in a coma.
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>>81536676
the themes of Vento Autistico is red herrings and mass confusion, Plucky going tomato is part of the gist.
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Back home, gonna through some more

>Agent Xero/Lacey Shadows (The Modifyers)
>Stand:「TWO HEADED BOY」
>Appearance: A robotic orb with a two faces on either side. Probably should look like some of the tech from the Modifyers.
>Ability: Any object that belongs to a person will carry their current 'sounds' as in anything that person is currently hearing or saying, allowing the Stand user to hear via that object. Often used as a means of acquiring information. For example, a jacket in the break room will allow the user to hear what a security guard is currently talking about.

Destructive Power: E
Speed: B
Range: A
Durability: D
Precision: B
Developmental Potential: C

>Role: Either a Part 5 ally/villain or a spy sent to infiltrate Superjail. Maybe infiltrate the goth gang as Lacey Shadows.
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>>81536676
It was decided early on that he gets coma'd pretty early in the plot. As of right now Rolf takes over as protag but that's likely to change if the discussion about the Eds a few threads ago is any indication. I'm personally for switching the "main" character every few chapters for the sake of hilarity/confusion.
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>>81536869
i like the idea of the switching main characters thing. that may be a little hard to write with though and the narrative might be a mess. if we could get it right though, it would be pretty cool.
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>>81536833
>A robotic orb with a two faces on either side.
Meant a face on either side.
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>>81536948
A measy narrative is kinda the idea, although you're right that we should be careful about it. I'm thinking avant garde shit like in the middle of a fight Rolf takes over the MC spot from Squidward or something, so feel free to reel me in.
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>there is still no playlist for each individual part
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Threadly reminder to read Jojo's Bizarre Adventure if you haven't already.

You'll gain a better grasp on stand powers, the concept of stands and the plot in general.
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>>81536948
>the narrative might be a mess
just like vento aureo!
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>>81537077
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>>81536335
So the "plot hole" idea is still strong then?

While thinking about part 5, it takes place in "the old country" right? So there should be a lot of characters from or related to "the old country" found in it.

Back to thinking about part 4, if TJ in the Recess gang has the TOW HEADED BOY stand, then I think the Recess gang should be at the heart of the child information sharing group (which needs a snazzy name).
They know a lot of the things that are going on in town, or at least have a lot of info on things that could be used as hints or clues to uncovering the LHC.

They should be the ones who spread the word to Madam Foster when the big shots of the LHC get taken down, and well before then Penny should get information from the Recess gang as well.
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>>81537076
Got any download links? Where to begin?
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>>81536948
maybe the Urban Rangers decide to split up, either for tackling different targets of the WB industry or because a raid in their hideout force them to separate (with a group tasked with the care of Plucky the tomato).
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So, I know Homestuck is NEVER EVER'd, but what about Problem Sleuth? I was thinking of some Stands for The Midnight Crew, but wanted to ask first.
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>>81537543
I think the discussion was had like once, but I thought people didn't want to include Problem Sleuth because it would sort of open a window towards Homestuck?

I think it's a crime we don't have at least one Hussie character, but on the other hand, I fucking hate Homestuck.
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>>81537664
We could just...NOT let it be a window to Homestuck. Solely allow Problem Sleuth characters and not allow any other say on the matter.

Seems easy to me.
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>>81537699
I mean, I agree with you, but it's really up to everyone else I guess.
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Is there a stand that can do this? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f4mb6gzu60U
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>>81537543
>>81537664
It's a damn shame how badly I want some inclusion of MSPA but fear the floodgates breaking open. I'm totally for Problem Sleuth.

>>81537699
I agree we can put our heads together and not go overboard if we try.
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Are there like 3 legitimate separate posters in these threads? I mean don't get me wrong, I appreciate that you keep your silliness to one thread now, the meem-literally got old fast so this is progressive. I just don't get how this thread has so much steam that it's up refreshed and saved from the garbage so often.

At least it's better than that gunnershit garbage.
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>>81537275
Strickland Foundation Jr. Division

Bawby is a top agent. But he's in his 20's now.
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>>81537664
>>81537699
I agree. Even if we don't go for Homestuck, or even Problem Sleuth, the Midnight Crews whole situation alone is perfect for including, I mean they have a whole plethora of time-based abilities. I am partially in love with Cans' ability to knock people around the calendar
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>>81537425
WatchCartoonOnline has up to Part 3
Kissanime has PArt 4

Other anons can give you the manga.
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>>81537543
i'm really sad too. since i really wanna include sweet bro and hella jeff.

but eh, having problem sleuth wouldn't be a problem at all.
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>>81537775
Im one.
Theres the MelodyFaggot
Theres the Stand reviewfag
Docfag
Other drawfags
Sandy
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>>81537809
If we DID include The Felt, they wouldn't even need Stands. Their canon powers are entertaining enough. Aside from Snowman, she's too OP.
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>>81537865
I'm an anon who's contributed stands/writing here and there. Currently writing the (possible) last part of Eds vs GoGo/Hiro.
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>>81537793
Nah, they wouldn't have a Strickland connection.

Maybe after the fact they would when Strickland takes an active study on the town and stand users in general, but they'd have no affiliation during the events of part 4.

And Bobby would be much older by then.
If he's 13 in part 1, and we don't know how many years are between parts 1 and 2, and enough years are between parts 2 and 3 for Tom to be born and age to adulthood or near adulthood, and there's at least a year between parts 3 and 4, Bobby would be much older than in his 20s.
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>>81537775
Don't want to brag, but I've contributed over half a dozen Stands and Stand users, so I like to think I've helped the cause.
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>>81537870
Maybe, this is a maybe, if we did include anything, it could be Slick with some kind of time-based Stand which would be hilarious, since he hates all the time bullshit
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>>81536833

>Judge Claude Frollo (Disney's The Hunchback of Notre Dame)
>Stand: 「JUDGES」(alternatively, 「JUDAS PRIEST」)
>Appearance: A figure shrouded in a long red rob. It's eyes glow and act as spotlights directed at the target.
Ability: Whenever the target commits a 「crime」 the Stand appears and causes an injury on par with the 「crime」. Since Frollo is very concerned with punishing 「sinners」, these can sometimes be quite severe. If the target steals something, an area of the same size as the item will disappear from the user's body, starting at the hand. If the user jaywalks, someone or something will walk over them.

Destructive Power: A
Speed: B
Range: A
Durability: C
Precision: B
Developmental Potential: E

>Role: Part 5 or 7 villain. Maybe the prison priest in Part 6?

>>81537425
https://www.mediafire.com/ArakiCollection#4gnihlcgwhw1p

>>81537775
I've contributed some ideas (notably a lot of Stands named after Beatles' songs), but I only recently started using a name. And I often forget to use it anyway.
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>>81537775
>>81537865
I'm usually correct misconceptions since I remember a fuck ton and polish other people's ideas. There's usually around less than 80 or so posters every thread. I've been meaning to scour through the previous threads for overlooked art for the Booru but laze too much about it. I'm Afronon in the Booru and intend to pick up the slack soon. I'm slowly saving old shit.

I remember one anon asking about the Night Prowler stand. Here it is.
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>>81537932
I thought we were referring to Part 5.

But yeah. in 4 no.

Shit.... Are we going to be the first people to make Adult Bawby?
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>>81538102
>Maybe the prison priest in Part 6?
Read the fucking pastebins.
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>>81537543
>>81537730
>>81537742
>>81537809
>>81537844
Well, how about I just share what I've got, and let people decide?

Spades Slick:
Stand: 「MIDNIGHT CREW」
Ability: Allows Slick to generate a knife from any object, but the object must have enough mass on par with a knife. For instance, he couldn't make a knife from a marble. It's too small. And if he did it from a tree, the mass of the knife would be taken from the tree. Sort of like how in Fullmetal Alchemist, when Edward makes a staff from the ground, it makes a small crater.

Diamonds Droog:
Stand: 「NIGHT OWL」
Ability: Modeled after the Dronegorg, perhaps. A typical sort of brawling Stand like Star Platinum.

Clubs Deuce:
Stand: 「WISE BIRD」
Ability: Causes mental stress and anxiety on opponents if he switches clothes with them, is most effective with headwear.

Hearts Boxcars:
Stand: 「HOME WITH THE MILK IN THE MORNING」
Ability: Whenever a luck-based event happens, Hearts Boxcars can put it in his favor. Flipping a coin, rolling dice, any sort of casino machine, causing opponents to trip, and so on.

Any thoughts?
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>>81538158
I...did
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>>81538147
I said I was back to thinking about part 4.

I think G.H. Hill would be the one to take over Strickland Goodwill, he'd be the guy on the phone who we never see.
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>>81532949
The return of the Toki Wartooth Stand suggestion with edits and stats.

>TOKI WARTOOTH
>「BATTLEFIELD」by Blind Guardian
> Appearance: A robot centaur unicorn with a rainbow colored horn
> Abilities: 「BATTLEFIELD」's primary ability allows it to cause horns to sprout from any object within a 4m radius. Objects that have sprouted a horn become ‘sticky’ allowing them to be attached to other objects and surfaces like Velcro. The horns are physical but can only be used to cause damage to non-living things, and pass through living entities harmlessly. Toki mostly uses it for arts and crafts and to carry stuff with him, but it has more offensive applications that he doesn't think of until his party members point them out to him.
>「ALWAYS」: 「BATTLEFIELD」's secondary ability which allows it to produce a rainbow colored ray from its horn. When this ray comes into contact with spilled blood or other bodily fluids, it converts it into a shimmering silver liquid with healing properties.

>Stats:
>Power: C
>Speed: A
>Range: C
>Durability: B
>Precision: D
>Development Potential: B

>>81537870
From what I understand it seems like characters part of this project are not meant to have their canon powers, just the abilities of whatever Stands we give them.

>>81538158
I think he meant just the general prison priest rather than THE prison priest.
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>>81538158
Anon calm down, I don't think he's making a 1:1 character replacement, he's just suggesting the character's role.
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>>81538158
No I don't think he's trying to allocate him to Pucci's role but as an actual Prison Priest which I think is cool as fuck.

>>81538197
Those aren't really song names but I like the abilities.
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>>81538244
Are characters even going to have stands during part 7?
Are they just going to have their normal superpowers (if they have powers) unless Superman's corpse gives them a stand?
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>>81538241
I like that
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>>81538282
There is a real song called "I'm A Member Of The Midnight Crew", and the rest of the names are lyrics from the song.

I thought it was clever. But meh.
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>>81538333
yep, they will have stands.
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>>81538333
we dont have too much capes tho..
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Are you people seriously willing to risk letting MSPA in? You give these autists an inch and they will go a mile. And right now, it looks like you're fixin' to give 'em that inch.
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>>81538333
No, no capes have their superpowers. Just Stands.

>>81538356
Song lyrics are usually used for sub-abilities rather than separate Stand Names. Give Spades the actual song and the other members different ones.
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>>81538396
Yes, we are.

We can very easily tell them Never Ever, or just ignore them. We have a straight block.
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>>81538396
Sonic is probably one of the most autistic fanbases that exist, and we have Knuckles.

I don't see the problem.
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>>81538396
Let's have a vote then.

I say Nay.
Do NOT open the floodgates. Unless you are willing to have those fucks be unmentionable villains in PArt 8 that only appear to die..
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>>81538450
as much as i would like to have a hussie character in, i really think it's best to keep the project as safe as possible.

i'll just go with nay.
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>>81538449
Sonic stopped being the most autistic when SonicBoom caused Chris-Chan to fall of the deep end. End this meme.

Homestuck and SU have cause much more autism. To say nothing of the horsefuckers.
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>>81538102
i thought we were giving the disney characters songs they sing, like, frollo would get literally Hellfire
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>>81538446
Well don't say I didn't warn you when these become Steven Universe RP threads.
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>>81538450
I say Yay. Problem Slueth is too far removed to open any floodgates, and if the homestucks wanted to be a problem they would have already tried.
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>>81538417
Alright, fair enough.

Spades Slick: 「I'M A MEMBER OF THE MIDNIGHT CREW」

Diamonds Droog: 「THE SINGING COP」

Clubs Deuce: 「THAT'S GRATITUDE」

Hearts Boxcars: 「JUST A FRIEND OF THE FAMILY」

Better?
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>>81538521
we already put SU on the NEVER EVER list so that won't happen, luckily for us
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>>81538450
I say yay. We already have Knuckles as a major Part 2 character, and the Sonic fandom is one of the most autistic fandoms that exists.
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>>81538197
>>81538282
I feel the same way, to make some name suggestions.

>Spades: He could probably keep that, but if you want to change it it could be「ACE OF SPADES」or 「GANGSTER'S PARADISE」
>Diamonds:「SIXTEEN TONS」(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zUpTJg2EBpw in case you're unfamiliar)
>Clubs:「MAN WITHOUT HAT」

I can't think of one for Hearts, but yeah.
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>>81538450
I say nay because i dont know who the characters are, there are more recognizable characters to have fun whit

feel free to ignore my vote if you think my argument is invalid
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>>81538554
Homestuck was also on the NEVER EVER yet here we are
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>>81538396
If the guy who suggests them comes up with a clever way to actually work them into the plot of part 8 I'm for it, but if it's another "suggest your favorite character and leave" scenario I say nay. We've given a whole lot of ground already and I'm still worried about shit exploding when we're making the final character selections for part 8.
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>>81538450
I say yay. It's not like we can't just say "Okay, Midnight Crew ONLY, any other MSPA characters get ignored."

I don't see how that's so hard.
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>>81538450
I'm down with them appearing. There's no denying they have unique abilities, and it'd be a shame to deny them the chance!
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>>81538390
Isn't part 7 supposed to be loaded with capes?

Is it just that we haven't gotten to really putting much thought into it yet?
I just think of it as being wacky races with some reality TV race show with challenges thrown in right now.
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>>81538628
I agree with you.

I mean look at the suggestion.

It's multiple fuking guys.

They'll probably interact or something.

Fuck that.

This is not Homestuck Does JoJo.
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>>81538396
>>81538521
We very easily got SU shitposters to fuck right off a while ago and they stay dormant. I honestly don't feel Homestuck is as invasive as SU anymore, and the fandom isn't so defensive but we don't even have to go with that. Problem Sleuth seems much more manageable and this idea
>>81538197
>>81538538
works them in well as minor antagonists.

>>81538450
I say Yay but I'm willing to revoke the shit out of it if things goo too far.
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>>81538715
It is Not!Xmen do Wacky Races.

We need different Capes in on this.
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>>81538678
The Midnight Crew was originally Problem Sleuth, though.

>>81538695
Well, we don't have a synopsis for Part 8 (since that's web stuff, I'd imagine them there), but they could run a crooked Casino of some kind, one that the protagonists have to get into and maybe uncover their scams. That, or maybe The Midnight Crew has information the protagonists want, but have to be beaten in order to cough it up.
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This guy >>81538728 has a point, why don't we reach a compromise and just add 1 or maybe 2 of them?
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>>81538728
And yet we have half a dozen Ed, Edd, and Eddy characters. Three of them being in TWO parts, no less.
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>>81538817
I'd honestly be down for just Spade Slick rather than his whole crew.
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>>81538806
Ooh, maybe a casino that functions similarly to Shakedown Road in Part 8? That'd be fun.
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>>81538806
Part 8 is shaping up to be the Webcomic focus, after all. It might work.
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>>81538842
Not to mention that I'm pretty sure we have like ALL of the Recess kids in Part 4.

Give it a chance, at least.
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>>81538867
Yes, this sounds legit. It fits right in with them!
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>>81538842
That's a false equivalence and you know it.
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>>81538799
I just wanted to use public domain heroes since identity was supposed to be a major theme. I'm not sure how it's a major theme since I'm focused on part 4 right now, so part 7 is still a ways a way to me.

Something about Stardust the Superwizard being summoned from Superman's corpse and controlled by President Nobody.

But right now I'm just trying to think of how the gala fight against Snow White in part 4 would work now that her powers have been changed since the greentext for that fight was written.
So part 7 really is off in the distance to me.
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>>81538867
Oh shit, didn't even think of that. Good idea.

It may not even need to be a casino. Could just be a "bad neighborhood". After all, a random street would have more traffic than a casino where people lose all their money.
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i'd prefer to play it safe and not include any ms-paint adventure characters.

if we do include any, the only one we should include is spade slick.
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>>81538842
Yes, and we are still discussing about it, some of us are trying to get rolf out of part 5 because to many Eds representatives

Everyone is equal here but the Eds got a head start because of popular demand
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>>81538898
Not really. How is this any different aside from it being four guys instead of three? Just because it's MSPA?
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>>81538450
I say yay. You talk about floodgates, but really, how many times has Homestuck even been mentioned in these threads? Three times, maybe? Yet we have Steven Universe shit every other thread. I think the Homestuck side of /co/ has proven to be civil about this.
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>>81538914
YES
Stardust the SuperWizard as the final fucking man.

He's OP enough for it to work.
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>>81538915
I was against them at first, but this COULD work.

Maybe we can make that chapter a CYOA.
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>Mojo Jojo's Stand wasn't [TOMORROW COMES TODAY]
Y'all a buncha cracked out fucknuggets
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>>81538936
Different anon here.

Rolf kinda works though since part 5 is set in "the old country" and that's where he's from.

It's set in "the old country" since that's also where Daffy was from and makes sense that's where his son would be.

As for mspa characters, I really couldn't give a fuck either way since I have no familiarity with them.
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>>81538915
I know we aren't doing a universe reboot but this sounds like a good alternate version of the Conman Coalition, like, there are guys that would have worked grat on the Conman Coalition but wherent there at the moment
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Let's settle this.
http://strawpoll.me/7301687
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>>81528666
>>81528056
>Scott Pilgrim in this bitch
please, it would finally make me interested enough to help out here
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>>81539044
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5lYZcIC6bqU
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>>81539048
I know Rolf work, but there are just to many Eds character
and to coin the frase of >>81538728 , this is not Eds do JoJo
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>>81539157
i remember hearing talk of him being a part 8 protag, nothing further then that though.
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>>81539130
I don't give a fuck.

I also know form experience that polls never resolve these kinds of arguments, they only serve to escalate them.

>>81539008
There was also this one image of a bunch of public domain golden age superheroes and one of them was just named something like "Scott". He didn't even have a superhero name despite having a costume and everything.
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>>81539246
Well if up to me, a poll wouldn't serve as a final say, it would just give a general idea of who wants what.
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>>81539130
>strapoll
com'on son
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>>81539246
It was Jack.

Or David.

They're all so perfect for this.
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>>81538500
>M-muh fandoms I don't like

Nigga fuck off, nobody cares.
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>>81538500
Homestuck is mainly terrible on Tumblr and Reddit. Here, it's basically as bad as most of the other fandoms.
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>>81539048
This is already set in stone tho.

Rolf is still in.

Also
>>81539210
Fuck you. I just said I liked the idea and wanted their chapter to be a CYOA.
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>>81539481
V-Man and the V-Boys.

I love ths.
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>>81528872

Maybe Grant Morrison's avatar in Animal Man, AKA The Writer?

I mean, that character had a thing to "manipulate" other characters with the pretense they were all fictional so he could tamper with their decisions.
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>>81539647
This goes for
>>81539594
and >>81539629

Too.

Every time you justify namefagging, you make Billy Mays cry in heaven
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>>81539481
I want Jack to show up in part 7 as the guy who just wrapped a bath towel around his shoulders and went "Let's do this".

He actually ends up winning the race if the Joker doesn't make it in for already having too much of an identity.
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>>81526839
Wow I can't believe they put me in this game
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>>81539647
Only things set in stone are part 1 to 4 Anon
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>>81539731
You're also the main villain in part 3.

Speaking of part 7 or 8 characters, I'm surprised no one has mentioned this guy yet.

Would it be possible to develop some sort of stand for him?
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>>81538799

>Robotman
>Ant-Man
>Chameleon
>Aunt May
>Mirror Master
>Doctor Destiny
>Mad Hatter
>X Men

Dude what?
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>>81539795
Since he is from superman, he could be a Corpse Part guardian in part 7.
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>>81539724
What always amazes me about faggots like you is how you go on and on about "autism" this and "autism" that and yet the way you just won't shut up about it makes you pretty goddamn autist.

You're outvoted nigga, so put a sock in it.
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>>81539830
Is Marvel more popular than DC?
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>>81539795
He could definitely be a corpse guardian.

>Prisencolinensinainciusol
>Prisencolinensinainciusol takes the form of a small, imp like stand similar in stature to Ballbreaker, covered in stars with a yellow band across it's head
>Prisencolinensinainciusol has the power to perfectly copy any stand powers in it's (very large) range, and instantly act them upon anything Mxylzpltk or Prisencolinensinainciusol can see within it's like of sight, regardless of previous activation conditions. For example, of Crazy Jane was within range, it could drive anything it sees without needing to touch it.
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>>81539861
His stand is DEEZ NUTS, it lets him warp reality in any crazy way he can think of as long as he can be easily thwarted.

Really, I just remember Gilbert Gottfried going "NUTS NUTS NUTS" in Superman TAS after he spent a montage building a mechanical monster only to be beaten instantly.
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>>81539876
What I meant was that there isn't a single X-Man with a confirmed role in the part right now so why call it Not!X-men?

I'm also not sure what you mean by this question. Are you referring to there being too many DC characters in comparison to Marvel characters? I guess you are right but that's just because nobody has been suggesting Marvel characters for roles in the Part. Its split down the middle between capes and misc comic characters right now, but there is still room for more to be added for either.
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>>81539954
>>81539861
i agree he should be a corpse part guardian.

i also like the stand abilities, simple but powerful.
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>>81540054
Speaking of Corpse Parts, are we gonna use the same set from SBR or pick a different number/type of pieces
>inb4 super scrotum
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>>81540202
I guess we could deviate a little from it.

I can definitely see Nobody having a horde of parts already when the race starts, each one having given a different member of his Brotherhood their stands before he swiftly removed them and hid then away for safekeeping.
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>>81540202
Actually someone said that instead of getting the Eyes we get the Scrotum
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>>81540202
I'd say mostly the same with a few alterations (gotta have the super scrotum) should be fine.
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>>81540202
>They find the super scrotum
>"Hey wait, I wonder where his dick is?"
>Switch to Nobody with a massive object wrapped in a blanket
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>>81540502
He's holding it like a baby.

But I still say there should be other things than just the corpse parts along the way (or out of the way) to temp racers with weak identities.
Like Chemical X for example.
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>>81539594
>>81539371
>>81539120
>>81539004
So, I guess The Midnight Crew is in? I know Strawpolls aren't things that set parts of the story in stone, but they still won.
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Is Steven Universe blacklisted because it's a gateway to autism? As much as I love the show, I can understand.
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>>81541039
yes.

steven universe has a really REALLY bad stigma and we don't want to invite that sort of funposting in.
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>>81540600
I guess they are okay for a one time battle, now if people wish for them to be turbo importan now then we will have a problem
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>>81541039
>>81541103
We've also been bombarded with a shitposter who spammed gem porn upon learning it was blacklisted, further defending our decision.
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>>81541039
Yes and a SUfag pretty much sealed the deal in an earlier thread when he couldn't take a no for answer
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>>81520106
>>81541039
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>>81541199
And this is what his boss looks like.
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>>81539875
I did. That was the point.

If my argument was the biggest against those guys, snce it got brought up the most, I thought I should have made it clear I got convinced for them.

Fuck you tho. Calling someone nigga is worse than calling them faggot.
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>>81539876
different anon.

Wasn't Doom Patrol Not!Xmen?
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Should we change chuckie's 「 Backstreet's Back 」 to 「 Baby Got Back 」 and Anne Gwish 「 Banned Forever 」 to 「 Toxic 」
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>>81541749
Actually, Xmen is Not!Doom Patrol.
>>81541773
Why?
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>>81539875
Shut up fag. Homestuck will never not be autism.

Cry harder.
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How does Weird Al fit into part 4?

Is he a member of the LHC or what? The rich people club manager? A performance artist who the LHC are about to kill before the heroes smash in to put an end to the LHC?
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>>81541815
I know that.

It was intentional. Just wanted more capes.

Really liked the suggestion of non-copyright heroes though.
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>>81541848
I think he's either an LHC member or some shmuck that gets scammed by the Eds or Stan.
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>>81541199
KEK
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>>81541848
The edds going out of their way to save Weird Al would be nice
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>>81541905
Originally I think he was supposed to be at the gala, also trying to steal the tiara.

That whole sequence needs to be re-written since EVEN FLOW and DREAM ON were changed completely.
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>>81541905
>implying Weird Al could be a vicious killer if he tried
Scam victim it is, then. We can make him a filler chapter to lighten the tension.
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So, I was going to make more stands to fill in the spaces for The Fog and The Toy in the Brotherhood of Dada in Part 7, but I can't for the life of me figure out who I should give them too.

Also, I remember a suggestion from last thread to repurpose Thrift Shop into part 7 after some discussion on Bugs, and to give TS from the redhead from Lee Nombrils. Should we go with that?
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>>81541820
>Has literally no argument other than repeating CANCERAUTISMFAGGOT

I think you'll find better company over at >>>/v/
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>>81542144
Still think Chicken Boo would make a better choice for Thrift Shop, except every disguise still has him clucking like a chicken. Would make a great fight in part 5.
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so laying off the latest chapters to fill in the gaps in the early ones. wrote a lot in Part 2's doc today while I thought on part 6

So in terms of the boss fight of part 6: let's say you/Dora reach The Warden. What sort of things do we expect from the fight? CAN the Warden fight by himself, or does he rely entirely on his Stand? is Dora pulled into his portal before she can land a punch, leaving her stuck trying to escape the pain dimension for the majority of the fight? or does Warden have the power to release things from his Stand (possibly as a result of Jacknife or some other plan of his), so he can pour out waves of demons, psychopaths, and robots ala the last 2 minutes of any Superjail episode?

Come to think of it, is the story's Superjail inside of his Stand, so that the reveal us that Dora is already there in the start of the story and he's basically a god there?

up until now, I’ve just been assuming he just throws the extreme cases into his Stand and the jail is actually a prison the size of a small continent

also: are we using Jared and Alice, or Warden enough of a reference by himself to just forget about them?
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>>81542243
It's really the only argument we need. Is it going to cause a shitstorm, will people try to force as many characters from it as possible, will they be cunts if we don't let their precious character in, etc.
>B-but look at all the Ed Edd n Eddy characters
No one is going to give a shit if we don't put Jimmy or Nazz in, but if we allow Homestuck characters there are going to be people who will have a shitfit because their favorite didn't make it in. The fanbase is too obsessive and cancerous for it's own good and this is coming from people making a Jojo's Bizarre Adventure project.
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>>81541952
>>81542081
So Weird Al is introduced at the gala, maybe his stand messes up DREAM ON and gives whoever is tangled up in it a second chance.

Then he reappears later about to be killed by the princesses because they want revenge when whoever is going to end up fighting them busts in.
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>>81542398
It might work as a good reveal that Dora is still his prisoner even when she thinks she's broken out of her cell.

I think the Warden is good on his own since the prison staff is already being filled in by other characters.
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>>81542398
I think it's that Superjail is inside Pure Imagination, but I see no reason why the last fight couldn't take place on the outside world, Warden just throwing crazy shit out of Superjail like missiles and the mentioned demons and prisoners.
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>>81542563
Aside from Jacknife, just who else does he keep in Pure Imagination?
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>>81542606
I always thought Superjail was Pure Imagination? Explains why the fucker hasn't been caught yet, despite kidnapping presumably hundreds.
>>81542563
>Dora finally escapes
>she's ecstatic she got out
>Warden taps her on the shoulder
>"Thought if you could get out, I should let a few others on a field trip too!"
>opens the floodgates and all kinds of nasty shit spills out of the portal Pure Imagination makes, capped off by a fucking nuke
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Is Candlejack a sta
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>>81542606
Pretty much everyone in Part 6, I think.
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>>81542398
I'm reading your work in part 2.

Is Nigel's narration box shaped like if you were looking through binoculars? I think it should be shaped like that.
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>>81542712
He's set up as a potential part 5 villain. Hope that reaches you, wherever you are.

Xavier Renegade Angel's still in 5, right? We spent so much time getting him in I'd hate to lose the wacky bastard.
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>>81542716
>>81542711
I thought the prison was an actual, legal prison and that Pure Imagination was a secret torture chamber for repeat offenders and users too powerful for the regular prison.
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>>81542823
We NEED him.
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>>81538102
And now an original corpse guardian idea I had!

>Sabrina Spellman (Archie comics, probably with the original design too)
>Stand: 「STRAWBERRY FIELDS FOREVER」
>Appearance: This Stand is rarely actually seen, as it usually binds itself to the area around it's user. When the user does show it, it appears as a semi-transparent apparition that is tinted red.
>Ability: 「SFF」binds itself to the landscape around it's user and causes special strawberry plants to grow. These strawberries look and taste amazing, but eating them causes a person to 「live with eyes closed」. This means they will become trapped in a world of their own memories, everything around them will appear exactly as it was in these memories. They become so absorbed in their past that they can't see the real world, and eventually die of starvation despite the bountiful strawberries in front of them.

Destructive Power: D
Speed: B
Range: B
Durability: C
Precision: B
Developmental Potential: D

>Role: Sabrina is a descendent of a long line of corpse guardians, and since the corpse part is located near her house, she has her Stand active in the land around it in order to help hide it. She usually sits in a dying tree near the center of the strawberry patch, which has an old piano next to it. When Cliff and Jane come across the strawberries, one of them eats one and begins reliving their past. It's then up to the other one to find a way to beat Sabrina.
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>>81542873
>anything about Superjail
>legal
Pick one. Warden's throwing people in there for pretty much any reason he wants last I checked.
>>81542898
>imagining Xavier and Rolf jabbering at each other for a whole chapter
Surely he'll knead the sweet sticky bun of success from the firm dough of our collective thought ovens.
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>>81542945
GET HER INNNNNNNN
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>>81542771
And Nigel has a lot of amazing lines that could be used in part 2.

"NO CREATURE THREATENS A THORNBERRY!"
when they're fighting the animal pillar men led by Louie.
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>>81542945
What if the Stand appearance is that of a Black cat that goes around "protecting" the strawberries?
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Jafar
>Stand: [In-A-Gadda-Da-Vida]
>Appearance: A scepter he always carries with him that can transform into a king cobra demon
>Ability: Anyone who makes direct eye contact with the serpent's gaze will fall under Jafar's influence. However, if Jafar is tricked into seeing the snake's eyes through, say, a mirror, it can stun him.
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>>81543198
uhh anon.....
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>>81543198
Jafar is already in part 3.

His stand's name was still being debated, but BLACK HOLE SUN was the name I saw that was most popular for it.
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>>81543253
Well then, I'll shut up now.
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>>81543276
You tried
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>>81543064
In the actual show Superjail, but this is an autistic fanfic which takes humongous artistic liberties.
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>>81542771
I assumed they were in there as simply blocks of text, what a comic would usually use as a narrator or Deadpool speaking in his head. I'm fine with the bino-vision shots if not over-used

>>81543186
having never ever watched the actual show and just doing my impression of an extra-British Tim Curry, feel free to run over some of my lines with those

>>81543396
I was so far assuming that for some reason or another, the government cracked down on crime and sold the jailing system to Warden due to his position/money/Stand/whatever

then he went mad with power. well, madder

but my main question is does part 6 BEGIN with Dora is Pure Imagination, or does she get yanked into it at some point for the finale. it sounds like we're on the right track in the conversation, just feels like that's worth ironing out before we could lay a finger on anything towards an ending
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>>81543700
I feel as if Dora should get sucked straight into Pure Imagination at the start.
It looks like Jailbot, and Jailbot's thing was capturing prisoners, so it feels like Frizzle should take Dora straight into PI, with them slowly realizing that the Warden's stand is literally the world around them.
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>>81539157
I believe Gideon is already being considered to be a villain in Part 5.

Part 5 needed more hipsters. So, yeah. Hoping to see more SP.
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>>81543700
The bio-vision boxes are to signify that it's an effect of his stand.

Check out some montages of him on youtube or something if you feel like it. His lines pretty much made the show a lot of the times.
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>>81543700
This is just my opinion, but Pure Imagination would carry more of an impact were it used sparingly as a place for serious troublemakers whom the guards can't keep in line. Escaping from a real prison is one thing, but just how do you escape from a pocket dimension in which a sadistic manchild has absolute control?
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>>81543700
Maybe The UN government stopped being able to just wave aside Stand users killing truckloads of people whenever they fought, and the fact that Gadget, the one thing that appeased them when donated by the Strickland fundation died when he tried to stop a Stand user,,, well let's just say that the Warner Bros. corporation killing and getting killed on a massive scale did NOT help matters either,

Maybe we have the Red Devil in Part 5 start wanton destruction. Our Man of Steel Metropolis fight.

After that, well. A SuperJail for Stand users almost seems logical, no? Who gives a shit if he's crazy, he can SAVE the world from Stand users.

Hell, thats why we go to a new universe. Because the original one will go through major societal changes since Dora breaks everyone out of Superjail.
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>>81544140
You have to keep in mind that over 99.99% of people don't have sand and thus can't see them, so most of what happens between stand users is on the same level as something like bigfoot or UFO sightings.
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>>81544119
That's where Jacknife comes into this and his power to escape from anything.

I thought PURE IMAGINATION would be the whole Super Jail setting.

His stand being pulled inside-out leads to some characters getting dumped in whatever world part 7 takes place on.

If Frankie is in part 7, she should be doing better than most since she has experience with stands like this since it's kind of like her grandmother's, but on a much larger scale.
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>>81544243
00.01 is still a lot of people
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>>81539157
You need a shiity book in order to help this shit out?
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>>81544243
Yes, but Interpol already got interested enough to send an agent as early as Part 3.

>An agent that gets his shit kicked in and waved aside.

>The appeasement gift that was Gadget gets killed in his first case as an "augmented" agent.

>The LHG was not only a group of serial killers. They were serial killers with INFLUENCE and POWER.

>The Warner Corporation was a Fortune 500 company that ended up causing a quasi-Man of Murder event.

I think that's enough to warrant attention.
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So J&SB go on a murder rampage against the LHC after gadget dies, right? We know they kill Cruella, but who else should they ice?
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>>81544335
I don't think it should've been Gadget's first case as a cyborg (that also contradicts a few things already in it), nor should they have sent him in knowing it was stand-fuckery afoot.

They would've sent in Secret Squirrel if they know stand shit was happening.

Gadget should've already closed a number of cases after becoming a cyborg, just not stand related cases.
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>>81544303
Not him, but I just think they could be fun side-characters.
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>>81544140
I wouldn't really want Stands to be some widely recognized presence in society or by the government. All the events in Jojo are pretty self contained and don't involve intervention and mention of the government or anything.

I think the Warden should just be some deranged lunatic, obsessed with imprisoning people and playing God. He was relieved from his previous job as a prison warden for being too lax and promoting chaos. He develops a stand somewhere along the line and takes inspiration from Daffy to pursue his ideal world, amassing his own personal staff of lunatics to imprison whoever the fuck he wants within his hellscape portal of a stand, PURE IMAGINATION.
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>>81544419
Whoever they could get their hands on.

Although you gotta remember they have a relatively challenged Stand. They''re going to be busting the LHC alongside the rest of the cast.

Cruella is as high tier as they get though.
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>>81544419
Don't they end up going after the princesses too?
J&SB meet Weird Al? (he's their current mark because he helped ruin the gala)

Weird Al inverts all their stand's stats giving J&SB the edge they need to beat the princesses?
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>>81544450
Society doesn't recognize it. They dont even fully understand it.

They just know it was fucky, and the Warden promises he can make all the bad people go away if they let him. The Strikland Foundation makes him the Jailer robot, and boom.

The story writes itself.
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>>81544433
True. He should be very experienced in using his new body. Enough to be able to adapt to fighting Stands.

So experienced fighter. But never fought Stands.

Im down with it.
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>>81544419
I'm thinking two of the Disney princesses (as separate fights), and maybe Jumba.
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>>81544547
I'm thinking that's a bit much considering they're supposed to be side characters. Maybe just Cruella and one of the princesses, max.
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>>81538197
I suggest only having Spades Slick, as to not overflow with a single story/group/ect

>Spades Slick
>[Good Morning]
>Good Morning is a Stand that can remove the 'time' from a event, preventing said event from completing (for example, falling off a building, by removing the 'time' of falling, Slick would remain suspended in air) and can implant that same 'time' onto someone or something else, to force that event on something else (so if he put the 'time' of falling on a person, the person would start to fall until they crashed into the ground, even if they were already standing on the ground, and sustain the damage Slick would have suffered from falling)

I borrowed this from the Stand I made for Wile E.
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>>81544529
Making him experienced also further highlights the threat of stand users.

>>81544500
And Strickland becomes the bad guy group. It's bad in a good way, it follows natural plot progression.

It's like a Cadmus thing.

But then we'll never get a follow up since part 7 goes into some alternate universe or something.
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updated the spoon drawing, added color and fixed the name from chicken dance.
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>>81544649
Part 7 is not an alternate universe. We agreed on this a long time ago. I'm not sure why there are still so many people who think it is.
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>>81544702
No we didn't. It is most definitely an alternate universe.
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>>81544649
LIKE POETRY
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>>81544678
also messing around with the hue setting to make jojo-esque color palettes is fun
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>>81544678
>>81544727
10/10
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>>81544649
It also stops them from overtly relying on the Strickland foundation to bail them out when things get tough.

I mean, Strickland is already responsible for Kuzco and the Pillarmen not ruling the earth. The deserve a chance to become villains.
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>>81544721
Since when? Every discussion about the matter I've seen ends with someone saying its not an alternate universe and everyone confirming it isn't
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>>81544633
Time based stands usually belong to main final villains on JoJo, dont know about this tho
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>>81544702
Because every thread it comes up in someone keeps telling me it's in an alternate universe or some shit.

Every single time.

I ask if we're doing a universe reboot and they say no.
I ask how the timeline is going to go down and I'm told it's now in an alternate, separate universe, not a reboot of the original.
I reiterate this and am told that this is wrong.

Clear that shit up already, because right now when PURE IMAGINATION gets turned inside out Dora gets spat out into some other Earth where that shit didn't happen and she's living the life of some other version of herself who is just on a camping trip.
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>>81544791
I think we should just go with what you said; Dora and friends get regurgitated into some other universe where Part 7 is.
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>>81544791
The ending with Dora is the same universe only with minor changes isn't it? Or does that still count as an alternate universe in your definition?
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>>81544791
So, the epilogue of part 6 takes place on an alternate universe but part 7 does not?
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>>81544846
Part 7 and the end of Part 6 are in the same universe. At the end TOM starts announcing the race on a nearby radio.
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>>81544846
exactly
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>>81544873
>>81544882
wat
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>>81544873
But Dora is hearing this radio.

She cannot be hearing this if she's in an alternate universe.

If she's in the same universe, then President Nobody somehow managed to use whatever powers he has to mess with people's memories.
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>>81544780
Ringo Roadagain
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i don't think a universe reset is necessary here. araki wanted to fix up what he messed up in the original timeline and a universe reset was really the only way to do so.

we aren't making the same mistakes araki did in the original jojo from what i've seen so far.

having part 6's epilogue either be in this universe or only have part 6's epilogue and nothing else be in an alternate universe seems like the best paths to go.
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>>81544923
Dora and friends are put into Nobodies universe, which is separate.
The main universe remains untouched, Dora is moved to a different universe with a different timeline.
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>>81544962
But I was just told we weren't doing that.

IS YOU IS or IS YOU AIN'T doing a separate universe for part 7?

Can part 8 be able how the two universes are colliding and the fabric of continuity is unraveling?
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>>81544995
I like that idea for Part 8.
It could be how we make Loss important, we show scenes of Loss imprinting itself on both universes, rather then just the Nobodyverse.
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>>81544923
Is it a difficult concept to grasp? Part 6's epilogue is in the same universe only Dora and everyone released from Superjail have been rewritten into it with slightly altered positions? Should we just scrap this concept then since its so confusing?
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>>81545082
>jojo
>scrapping confusing concepts
like hell
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>>81545041
hell yes.

We can actually build this up.
Have Loss in every major fight in all the parts.

We're writing this ahead of time.

We can do this.
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>>81545082
Why don't we just change it so that PURE IMAGINATION, when it got turned inside-out, manifested the desires of the people who were escaping and certain parts of the world became different due to its effect?

Memories pertaining to those escaping were changed and they're able to form new IDENTITIES because of it.
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>>81545147
This has been suggested before, and I'm not entirely sure I'm for it. We've already shot down the overarching evil before, and as much fun as it would be to have Loss be an ancient evil abomination or whatever, it also feels cliche.
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>>81544649
>>81544500
>>81544140
So what you're going for is
>It's becoming more and more recognized that mysterious, unsolved crimes and incidents began springing up in the past few years
>An eccentric jailer, The Warden proposes that he will be able to root out the source of this evil if given more power
>Strickland Propane supports the idea and is generally very well received considering how philanthropic the company is.

But then what liberties would he be given, he's a jailer, not law enforcement. And Jailbot isn't created, it IS the stand.

>>81545172
Considering Pure Imagination is a whole other dimension I'd assume it being destroyed would cause some collision of worlds or whatever. But then again, there doesn't have to be a reset.

Steel Ball Run was most likely going to be it's own story, Part 6 being the conclusion to Jojo, but Araki seemed to have changed his mind and just made it an Altverse.
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>>81545172
This is what I was thinking was happening this whole time. That's why I was confused by anons saying it was an Alternate Universe.
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>>81545194
We should have it appear in part 7 though just so it's set up for part 8. This is if we're doing the two worlds colliding thing anyway.

Part 8 could have parallel stories where events unfold at the same time, but unfold differently, and what the characters remember might not be what the world remembers (physical evidence of events), a LOSS on one or both's part depending on what it was.

Say in one world the character won a fight, but in another the character lost. Only the outcome of the world where the character lost is carried over, so the character remembers winning, but is still bloodied and beaten from the loss.
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I am wracking my brain trying to figure it out, but I really want to include someone with the Stand [Ballroom Blitz] involved in the gala battle. Mainly because, having not read too deeply into the story details yet, I envision both the gala fight and the fight in [Hotel California] to be completely hectic battles.
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>>81545290
How about no? We are doing unique stories for each of the parts, but we are essentially keeping to the theme or idea behind the original Jojo parts. What you suggest has nothing similar to part 8's theme and ideas.
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in this line of logic, here's my question

do we NEED an alternate universe? do we want 7 and 8 to take place in different realities because now they're all webcomics and comic books?

or can we just set Waifu Ocean in the same universe as every other chapter to simplify it, and not just because Jojo did it?

or are we afraid the anarchy of the world we'd set up by that point on top of a magical prison releasing all of its inmates would ruin that universe so we move elsewhere?

because unless we have some good reason, I see none to use the alternate universes (besides PI itself). just end the explosion ambiguously, then epilogue Dora, Gaz and friends out camping on the lam
or that they were kids all along, and their realities were warped in Super Jail because the Warden felt more justified or some deeply rooted self-sabotage premise
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>>81545290
Maybe have it so when something fisical happens to something ( like someone breaking a wall or cutting down a tree ) will suddenly affect the other world and the like
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>>81545410
We all knew that part 8 was going to be the most diferent to JoJo part 8
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>>81545270
Strickland becomes the "bad guy organization" in part 6, yes, but only the Warden and his Super Jail are fought.

We can avoid a reset and still have worlds colliding because of its destruction. The different possibilities start creating dimensional friction by part 8 leading to the lapses in continuity (our wall eyes I guess).

>>81545288
I'm confused about everything from part 6 on, I'm just going to roll with it when we get there and go back to thinking about part 4 now.
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>>81545415
I like wat >>81545172 said, it's not an alternate universe its just that the same one got modified a little
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>>81545270
PI is the Stand.

Having Jailbot be the robot procuring Stand Users also explains how they all got caught.
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It's fun how part 6 is more confusing than part 5, a part made to be confusing

Why don't we pull an araki 1 part "before it was cool" and make the universe reset on part 5
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>>81545172
i really like this idea.

it a good compromise between both sides. i figure we should go with this.
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>>81545499
its pretty straightforward though.

We were just explaning the context on why a Jail would be needed in the first place.
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I think I hit a roadblock on drawing page 10, every time I try to go back to it after the first 2 panels I am not sure what to do exactly

Also am I the only one who doesn't like Dora being in this at all? As far as Dora herself goes she's not even related to Jojo in any way besides the obvious DORARARARA which is about as far as the joke goes.

I think we would be better off entirely if we didn't have her in this at all, much less the protagonist. I realize a bit of work has been put into her but then again I also see that she has like 3 Stands/Stand abilities and that's honestly pretty boring.
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Looking through the final battles with the LHC (besides the fact that it feels really shoneny with the 1v1 fights, but whatever) I think if were going to give the LHC to the Conman Coalition, then Fred should fight Penny, Shaggy, Scooby and J+SB, but either Fred is too unpredictable and takes out Shaggy, Scooby and J+SB, leaving just Penny to face Fred, or Fred reveals a new ability of his Stand (possibly hinted at a new evolution at some point in the story before the final battle) and uses it to disable the others, leaving just Penny to fight Fred.

Or we go a similar route to part 4, and have it be just Penny facing Fred, and after she triumphs in her personal battle with the psycho, Scooby, Shaggy J and SB show up to include their own contributions to the fight (like how Okuyasu, Jotaro and Koichi did at the end) until Fred is finished off, maybe by Danny
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>>81545478
>>81545505
OK, so no universe reboot or alternate universe created because of PURE IMAGINATION (there can probably still be other universes if we end up doing the thing with part 8, but I'd rather leave that alone for right now).

So... part 4.

I'm thinking Jumba can be a rich inventor who is a member of the LHC. He makes abominations, maybe he's doing things with the stockpile of jawbreakers they bought off of Kevin.
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>>81545607
The number of characters that have to do whit jojo can be counted whit both hands

But really tho, do you have something you want to tell us about you and dora?
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>>81545607
>art roadblock
Post what you got and we can try to figure it out from there.
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>>81545628
this.... this could actually work great.

We always had the problem that the Conmen didnt have a real gripe with Fred.

I love it. Reminds me of the Seven Soldiers new edition.

That the reason they won was because they fought the battle together, but not at the same place or time.
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>>81545652
I just really really don't like that cartoon at all.

It's awful. I mean even the stuff we have blacklisted is slightly better and I mean like millimeters

>>81545677
h-here I go
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>>81545715
Well thats just like, your opinion man, also love your work dude
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>>81545607
Eustace put's on the mask, he's going to BOOGA BOOGA BOOGA, but the mask fuses to his face, he throws his head back in pain, then goes forwards on his knees, Courage approaches him cautiously to see if he's alright, then Eustace makes a lot of faces, crazy faces with his green face and scares Courage.

Muriel scolds him and he starts laughing.
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>>81545701
Exactly, not to mention going through the doc, as of the rough early draft of the whole part, the Conmen are pretty much every single fight, which I honestly feel is some serious bullshit.
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>>81545755
anon I have an order of events in my head but I just have no idea how to convey the drawing of those events

I wish I could draw like Jim Lee or Tim Sale
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>>81545607
Well Courage in Part 1 isn't Jojo related but we got creative. Johnny Bravo poses a lot. Tom and Daffy are a meme that really only got Jojo'd cuz Daffy looked like Kira, spurring this entire project. The Eds fit the SoL theme and relate to the Part 4 main cast. Plucky doesn't really fit outside of being Daffy's son. And Dora is a long running Crazy Diamond JoJoke.

They don't really have too be Jojo. They're mostly jokes anyway.
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>>81545607
I was personally excited to see what we could do with Dora as an action girl

I do prefer her old Stand though. the steps = power part, anyway

>>81545628
my personal ideal is that pretty much every good guy teams up on Fred in the final bout, and Penny gets the killing blow
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>>81545715
>>81545755

I think I know how to help.

Why not have a shot, a profile shot, of him putting on the mask?

THEN we do the
>>81545755
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>>81545701
>We always had the problem that the Conmen didn't have a real gripe with Fred.

wouldn't really be too hard to develop some.

ala scrooge's friend ludwig was murdered mysteriously,

stan receiving less customers at the mystery shack due to rumors of a deadly murderer

edds have a hard time finding people to scam at night due to said deadly murderer.
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>>81545788
This but at least the other characters have something more tangentially related

Dora kind of just feels tacked on BECAUSE of that joke, and her character has no depth I mean its a kid show to be expected but still

>>81545819
I could try this but I feel like I've done way too much profile shots in this thing already and I've only hit page 10

Everything is feeling the same and I've drawn Eustace way more times in my life than I thought I ever would
really I just want to draw parts 2 and 3 but we have to start with part 1
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>>81545715
assuming a painful transformation cue

"OOGA BOOGA AGHHHHHH!">>81545755
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>>81545858
Well thats the best part, even if Dora doesn't has depth we can GIVE her some

Also Dora is the closest one to JoJo really, i mean, its only a joke but it is a jojoke
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>>81545755
I thought the doc said we were saving green face until later?
>>81545858
Baby steps bro, baby steps. I always pictured the mask moment as a small panel of him putting on the mask and then a big dramatic panel of Eustace throwing his head back and screaming as electricity crackles out of the mask while it's fusing to him or some shit, if that makes sense.
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>>81545858
hmm

then how about go for a Dio-like move.
He just shoves that shit in his face.

Draw a panel where he seems to hesitate, as if he knows. But then next panel it just goes in like it was pie and he was te hungries man on earth, His hat gets muffed up, and you FEEL the impact.

Things just got bizarre.
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>>81545858
All Johnny does is pose but we made him a cunning and resourceful, Aztec Ass whooping catfucker. Everyone we've used has a really minor Jojo aspect we built a lot off of.
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>>81545945
This might be true but at least Johnny is a fun character outside of this

Dora just feels like wasted potential going against the Warden who is legitimately one of the better cartoon characters ever created
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>>81545989
Can you elaborate more on WHY she is wasted potential?
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>>81545858
I honestly never fucking saw the show for more than 10 seconds. I think her absolute lack of character could give us something to play with (shut up, pervs)

I like the idea of just by the title alone, we take "a girl who walks around a lot cuz shut up" and make her more like the gritty badass determinator/wandering yojimbo sort who never sits still because she's grimly trudging through her troubles

which was kind of why I liked her old steps = power thing. she literally can't sit still or she gets weaker, so she avoids sleep and rest to keep Stand's buffs up as long as she can. not that we can't just have her do that anyway, though, I guess
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>>81545989
i'm kind of in agreement with you on the main character slot, but i think since we've been developing her at least she should stick around as a party member. the only question is who would replace her, this is the waifu arc so everyone would be clammoring to get their waifu in, rather than the character most suited.
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>>81526839
I was just watching a Disney cartoon, and saw this smooth ass motherfucker. Thought of you guys.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VtNZrf-kzww
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here's a general outline of some freaky fred related stuff that i think would work.

>Conmen Coalition figure that their problems with murderers has to do with the Lonely Hearts Club and start to pursue them so they can resume making money and to avenge their friends.
>Detective Group is closer on the trail to Freaky Fred then the coalition is and starts to go after him
>Conmen Coalition continue crusade of LHC
>Detective Group could probably come across a few members of the LHC and dispatch them quickly.
>Conmen Coalition come across evidence of someone much more evil then the LHC.
>Detective Group probably have a few short fights with Fred here.
>Conmen Coalition come across undeniable proof of Fred's existence
>Detective Group lose track of Fred and have to find his hideout
>This is the point in which both the groups meet together
>Through their combined efforts, they eventually find Fred's hideout and Fred himself.
>Cue the final showdown with Fred and both parties.

sound okay to all of you?
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>>81546026
Something about a 6(?) year old just going places because reasons really feels anticlimactic as fuck

And her having 3 stand/stand like things is really pretty broken, she's kinda like our giorno right now

>>81546064
I guess a party member would work but as the main character she definitely feels lacking

We could put someone androgynous in the mc role since it's a waifu thing
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>>81546064
Thats why Dora was good for main character, it was to avoid the waifu wars of who should be the main character
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>>81546034
>>81546064
That's another reason I like her as the MC. She isn't waifu bait like the rest of the part is going to be. She's a pretty untouched character.
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>>81546067
The nifty nineties right?

Loved that one. Was on a casette tape I bought my gf. Have fucked to this toon.

10/10. Can confirm
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>>81546086
I like this.

Penny lands final blow though.
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>>81546105
Dora has only one stand though, the other two are items that can be used by anyone. Kind of like that Gucci bag Rohan had in that one extra story.
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>>81546086
Too many people fighting a single enemy. Fred is strong, no doubt, but it would make him seem ridiculously overpowered and the whole gang incompetent if theres ten people fighting him and he isn't instantly beat down.

Like I >>81545628 said here, I think it should focus on the detective group running into Fred, and Fred somehow whittling down the group to just face off against Penny, or reverse it with Penny facing him first and adding the rest of the detective group in to finish Fred, but having the entire main cast fighting Fred would be just a complete mess, impossible to coherently write/draw and make entertaining. Not to mention, my person feelings towards it is the conmen should stay out of the final battle, they can clean up the LHC, and show up to see the results of the final fight, but I honestly feel they should keep their mugs out of the last battle with Fred.
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>>81546262
sounds fine with me.
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>>81546135
>>81546108
so realizing that we never exactly established her personality (because as mentioned, shallow random kid cartoon), I'm still leaning towards her being sort of tough and quiet, but perfectly decent girl for a "drug" smuggling teenager. sort of a touch of Mad Max in that she won't fuck with you if you don't fuck with her, and will talk things out when she can, but will absolutely butcher you if you get between her and her goal
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User: Beezlebot/The Robot Devil

Stand: 「THE DEVIL CAME BACK 」(A nod to "The Devil went down to Georgia" and "The Devil came back to Georgia".

Apearence: A Robotic Demon with gold accents and a fiddle for a chest, the end of it's tail being a silver bow.

Abiltites: The stand can generate small robotic demons playing it's "chest", the demons are somehow related to the opponent, through some ironic means. For example, it will use an ice-cooling bot to beat a stand that controls ice, or a ironsmith bot to fight a stand that controls iron tools.
However, the stand can be beaten easily in a fiddle contest, which is extremely difficult.


Well, I tried.
Thoughts? Ideas? Want it to fit him but also don't want it to be incredibley broken.
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>>81546135
>tan loli
>not waifu bait
anon I have terrible news

>>81546246
fair enough

not sure it matters to you guys but dora is also incredibly hard to draw on model because of the fucked proportions
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>>81546262
I agree
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>>81546323
It didn't matter to you if we liked her or not
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>>81546317
The power is too vague, even by Jojo standards, and doesn't seem like it would be too interesting

Also the end part is just silly. Stands can only be beaten by Stands.
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>>81546323
>fucked proportions
I was the guy who drew Spookington last thread and I can confirm that Jojo posing with weird proportions sucks. If we're bumping her age though, I'd say we can make her body proportions easier to work with if we keep the head more or less the same.
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>>81546409
I guess you're right, I just didn't want to be too blatent with the generic fire and brimstone. Would something involving the seven deadly sins work.

And I was implying the stands would have the contest.

Or, you know, just do this.
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>>81546390
I guess but I really don't see what's to like in the first place.

>>81546429
I wasn't just talking of Jojo posing and such, I meant Dora's actual proportions.

On another note I hope I can have this page done by tonight
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>>81546299
>shallow random kid cartoon.
Did you really not watch Dora? That sucks. It's pretty memorable. But yeah, I like her being tough and quiet. And she should totally have an intense determination to reach the end of her adventure. It's all about reaching the end with her.

>>81546323
>Do you know where you are
Yeah I get that but she obviously isn't the level of waifu'd as /co/ is capable of. People don't froth at the mouth fighting for her imaginary hand in marriage like they do for other character.

Also we don't have to stay on model. Look at pic related. We can just style her up.
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>>81546453
One of the princesses already has a Stand based around the sins.
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>>81546530
had.

We rework if for this guy.
and BOOm.

Lieutenant for Red Guy.
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>>81546512
What i love about the idea of having about Dora as main character is the fact taht she will some times speak in Spanish just because
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>>81546530
Shit.

We'll, I could base it PURELY around the fiddle dealing. But I gotta ask? Can stands be taken away? Because I could make it to were if he wins he takes the users stand, like how the devil will take a person's soul.
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>>81546576
Snow White's the one with the stand. 7 sins, 7 dwarves, it works too perfect to fiddle with. Sorry pal.
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>>81546576
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>>81546608
>takes the users stand, like how the devil will take a person's soul.
That's Coraline Stand

keep trying pall you will get there
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>>81546615
someone took it out "pal".

We changed it.

I was sad about it.

We have a chance to get it back. Im taking it.
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So Jan Mouse sold her soul to the Devil. Is the Red Guy the "Devil" in this instance? Did she get a free trailer?
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>>81546608
Stands can be taken away, yes. Boy II Man had the ability to suck away a person's stand gradually over the course of three rock paper, scissors games, if the opponent lost. It even granted the guy using Boy II Men a semblance of the other Stand's ability, but it never fully took away a persons stand on screen.

Also theres Whitesnake, which can turn people's Stands into discs, which can then be put into other people.
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>>81546675
this could work.
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>>81546670
Even Flow is still the seven sins/dwarfs
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>>81546615
>fiddle
>>81546625
Fuck you're making it difficult.

>>81546682
I mean, it could still have stand-stealing power, but what would make it different?
How about if the user wins, the can get a stand of their choosing, so long as it's still related to the user in some way?

Again, I don't want to resort to generic hell powers, but I'm having a hard time trying to figure out what suits him without taking other stand powers.
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>>81546701
Just as well, would any other characters be tied to her decision to sell her soul to the devil? Did this happen before, during, or after the beginning of part V?
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>>81546752
>[Devil Came Back]
>A remote control Stand that plays a golden fiddle. The sound it produces is physical, and will link the Stand's fiddle to the target's soul. The longer the Stand plays the fiddle, the more the strings will pull the person's soul out, transforming their soul into strings. The fiddle can't be broken, but attacking it will cause the Stand to mess up playing and the process will reverse until Devil Came Back can start playing again. If Devil Came Back starts playing the strings that are made of the opponent's soul, it can play specific notes that will force control of the opponent's Stand.
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>>81546932
Do you want the /v/ audience?
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>>81546932
That's, actually really good Anon, thanks.

Now I'm going to steel it an claim it as my own idea.
Please don't take this seriously.
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>>81547066
Go ahead, I don't really care. I give my ideas and my creations to this project, fully understanding that anyone could claim them as their own. I take it as a compliment if someone else tries to take credit for my ideas.
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I'm probably going to take flak for this, but I'm going to say it anyway.

I find it ironic that Dora was picked specifically to avoid waifu wars and arguments over the protagonist of Part 6 and still managed to attract controversy for not being 'waifu' or 'interesting' enough. Which frankly only reinforces my belief that nothing will stall progress for this project faster than endless debate on who the main character should be for a specific Part.

We had this problem for Part 7 where nobody could agree on who should be the main character because no matter who was suggested they kept getting rejected for one reason or the other and nobody who said no bothered to provide an alternative. It was always 'I don't know who should be the protag, but X character just doesn't fit the Part' until some of us finally managed to slip Robotman into the role on account of his parallels to Nobody. Even then some anons still tried to get him kicked out of it without suggesting a better idea. We're better off settling for someone that works somewhat well and developing them into a satisfactory protagonist rather than setting everything back by trying to find the nonexistent 'perfect character' for the protagonist role.

Am I saying that we should take the current protagonists for each Part as fixed? Yes, that's exactly what I'm saying. Think of me what you will but as I've said before, if we get hung up on who the main character ;should be' for any of the parts we'll never get any of them finished.
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>>81547467
Not trying to be difficult, but if we worked by that logic, part 4 would still be focused on the Eds and the conman, and the detective stuff would be barely a background thought. I spent about two to three days arguing with multiple anons to try and push the Eds, mainly, to a lesser role, and even then it's obvious I barely got what I wanted, since the Eds are still, at least in the roughdraft, a huge part of part 4
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>>81547510
I would have to disagree on that point because the plan was always for the detectives and the conman to share equal screen-time, even if the googledoc did not reflect that at first. I will admit that I am probably to blame for the wrong impression since the way I laid out the original outline of the Part was shoddy and rushed.
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>>81547614
yea, I was always under the impression that the investigators were background players. particularly with Gadget's death fairly early on in the story, making him sound like a fakeout main
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>>81547510
I stopped reading these threads just when we thought of Jaw Is Unbreakable.

What's this about a detective and conman? Isn't it about the Eds trying to take down Freaky Fred in the Cul-De-Sac?
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>>81549136
No, Jaw Is Unbreakable is about Gadget and Penny coming to town to investigate the murders, with the Eds, Stan Pines and Scrooge McDuck on the side setting up a bet to make the most money in a month. This ends up leading to Gadget uncovering the secret behind the murders and getting murdered by Fred, which leads to Penny, Jay and Silent Bob, Scooby Doo and Shaggy, and the conmen gang to chasing down Fred and avenging Gadget, which ends up revealing an entire club of serial killers called the Lonely Hearts Club inside the town (Fred is not a part of it) and thus the major plot of the part starts as the gang tangle with the nutjobs of the Club while trying to track down Fred.
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>>81549288
Oh. That sounds stupider than the original plot.
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>>81549315
In a good way or in a bad way?
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Hey, people! Finally wroute the meeting between Taffy and Tom. I hope that it is at least acceptable. Please tell me if something must be changed.

Taffy is half Tom's size.
>Old Country.
>Tom is walking through the streets, looking for someone.
>Suddenly, something bumps in his leg.
>He looks down, sees Taffy.
>"Tom, is that you? Hey, it is really you! Haven't seen ya in ages! Come with me, I want to show you something. And you better tell me where have you been."
>Seeing no other option, Tom follows Taffy, who is walking to a café.
>They sit down outside, by the window.
>"So, Tom, my friend. I wanted to ask you, have you seen Jerry? He left 15 days after your last visit. I heard him mentioning your town, so I think that's where he went."
>Tom is startled for a second.
>"Tom? What happened to Jerry?"
>"Pal got killed. Was under one bad guy's influence, tried to kill me. I didn't want to kill him but..."
>"Huh. Well, that sucks... Jerry never let that rivalry go... Silly mouse..."
>Waitress comes to their table.
>"Do you want something, gentlemen?"
>"Your finest milk for my pal. And your best Maasdam cheese for me."
>Waitress nods and walks away.
>"So, what happened next?"
>"I got dragged into the most bizarre adventure in my life..."
>An hour passes. Tom retells part 3. Nor cheese, nor milk ever gets delivered.
>"And then, Genie revived Aladdin and died. They had quite a tearful goodbye. And I... I just left. I think that Eds were doing something in another town. I'll check it later."
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>>81549315
It is pretty convoluted, personally the whole conman thing just feels like needless side material, and all the scam victims as clutter, but I'm only one person and I can't fight a majority opinion. But the main reason why it's not solely about the Eds is because they were already in part 3
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>"Very bizarre adventure. Wait, where is cheese and milk?" Taffy screams inside."Hey! Where is our order? A freaking hour passed and there isn't anything!" Taffy turns back to Tom. "By the way,I wanted to show you someth-"
>Tom sees a waitress pointing a gun on them. Quickly ducks Taffy's and himself, simultaneously activating [ONE MORE TIME]
>"Hey, from where did that wolf appear? Is he one of yours?"
>Tom is startled. "You can see my Stand? But... Unless... You have a stand too?"
>"Oh, so that's what these things are called. Stands. I guess I wanted to show you what my " Stand" can do. Did you notice something about my attire?"
>Tom sees Taffy's hat. "Your hat... It is made out of cheese? Is it your stand?"
>"You are smart, Tom. Allow me to deal with the waitress. You will see how my Stand works."
>Taffy stands up, his hat glowing.
>[I DON'T WANT TO SET THE WORLD ON FIRE].
> Waitresses clothes have turned into cheese.
>"I can turn things to cheese now. It seems that it goes by layers, for I have tested it on a cupboard. All the wood became cheese, but the items inside did not."
>"And that is it? You can just turn things to cheese?"
>"Nope. I can also manipulate cheese."
>"What? That's silly. What you can stuff cheese into them? I can do it with a trombone!"
>[TOUCHE, MR. CAT]
>Cheese from the cafe is surrounding Taffy. As does cheese from waitress's clothes.
>"And Knockout. I can manipulate cheese fully. Except changing size. But hey, if you were hit by myriad pieces of cheese who are as sharp as a needle, fast as a bullet, dense as steel and weigh a ton each, wouldn't you be hurt?"
>Cheese drops the waitress cold.
>Tom and Taffy walk away.
>"Say, Taffy. When did you get your stand?"
>"A few months ago. Why?"
>"Eh, it's nothing. I think I will go now. Need to check a few things. See ya."
>"Tom... Goodbye. I... I'll go and think everything over.
>They walk away in different directions.
That's it.
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>>81549126
Really? To me it seemed like that all the mains (EEnE, Gadget, Stan & Scrooge) were intended to all have equal focus in the story from the get go, at least before we started working on it proper.

In any case I thought about it a bit more and realized that this anon's (>>81547510) suggestion to remove the Eds from the 'main character' spot is a bit different from what just happened with Dora and what happened with Part 7's protag because we already had three other potential 'main characters' to choose from for Part 4 (at least in my opinion Gadget, Stan and Scrooge were all candidates for the 'main main character' of Part 4). So there were already viable alternatives with decent development for the Part to choose from.

I didn't see any of that in the case of Dora or the debate about Part 7's protag, it was just people saying that 'they don't suit the role' and giving reasons why of varying quality, but not offering up any potential substitutes. If we switched protagonists from the Eds to Gadget it would at least be a step forward, but if we ditch Dora or Cliff without anyone to replace them as the protagonists we'll just spend more threads arguing over who to pick when we could have made it work fine with both of them in the protag roles.
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>>81549411
Fuck. I meant to say
>"What? That is silly. You just stuff cheese in thir throats. It is not that... well cool."
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>>81549360
I mean, it includes more characters which is nice.

But it just seems to much of a clusterfuck. Kudos for not copying Part 4 word for word with only name changes but this seems like adding more stuff just so you can say "it's not Part 4 guise."
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>>81549407
If you ask me the scam section is still in because most of us want to keep some of the 'non-serial killer related' portion of the original Part 4 in ours. "Not 1:1" rule or not, it wouldn't be Jojo with /co/ characters if there weren't some similarity to the source material/
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>>81549494
Well sure, the only issue is it's a bit too much, and again another of my same gripes, it pretty much has the conmen hogging the story. Theres a lot of work to do, but if we follow whats going on right now, that would give the conmen coalition practically every fight in the series, as they get the scam section and pretty much every fight involving the LHC. As I said, theres still a lot of work to do, and I think the biggest thing that needs to be sorted out is who gets to fight who in a way that we get a nice even and pleasant experience through the story.
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>>81549418
I've personally suggested ideas involving a cartoon character and a comic book character working together as the MC team (for example, Goofy and Daredevil, or whoever) I thought it would be nice chemistry. Also suggested the idea of characters being their first volume/silver age/rubber hose/old school in general personas in the part, just as a aesthetic choice.
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>>81528056
>>81539157
I'm surprised nobody's cracked a Scott Pilgrim vs 「The WORLD」 joke yet
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>>81549673
there's been a lack of stand based puns in general here. i had one in the filename for pic related and it didn't get noticed.
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>>81549673
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>>81549609
There were plenty of ideas for MCs of Part 7, but I remember Goofy and Daredevil being shot down almost immediately for being 'Too mainstream' same with a whole bunch of other workable suggestions until we finally put our foot down with Robotman, Crazy Jane & Mojo Jojo.

Really I'd be okay with whatever the majority of Anons decide. I've never been particularly attached to any of the characters that we've chosen as protagonists and would welcome a change if its something everyone agrees is better. But the anons I've seen complaining about Dora or the other potential Part 7 protags didn't suggest anything better, they just said 'No I think they should be kicked out because [Insert Reason Here], I don't know who should be the protag but it shouldn't be Dora/Part7Candidate'. In Part 7's case even if they did suggest someone that sounded like they could work their idea just got shot down by another one of those same anons who don't know what they want. As for me, all I want is for the project to keep up its momentum so shit actually gets done rather than getting bogged down by unproductive back and forth.
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>>81542945
If we end up using my Elsa suggestion, who ever draws the Stand could also incorporate elements of the early concept art, back when the film actually looked kind of cool.
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How are you guys going to out-bizarre the original? Because someone from 9-1/co/ doesn't think it would.
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>>81545270
Alright, i figured a way to explain part 6 superjail, consolidating all the ideas.

>Warden proposes a perfect prison to contain all the dangerous criminals and Stand users
>Superjail consist of two jails: a real one and Pure Imagination
>The real world Superjail is an ancient, ruined Panopticon, where Warden and his staff resides
>Pure Imagination is the actual Superjail, based on the show's jail
>With the help of the Panopticon, Warden can absorb anything in its confines into Pure Imagination.
>Warden plan involves using both Jacknife's Stand and the Panopticon system: rather than have a complete vision of the jail, Pure Imagination will be able to target the entire world.
>Strickland Foundation helps Warden through propane based tech, like jailbots based on Warden design.

Pic related is a Panopticon by the way.
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>>81537664
can we put sweet bro and hella jeff
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>>81549714
Fucking saved
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>>81551317
Who are the prison staff so far?
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>>81552028
So far: Vicky, Dredd, Droopy, Lord Dominator and the medical staff composed of the animaniacs nurse and Dr. Hutchison
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>>81552028
>>81552132
I wonder if there are staff member that don't know they are Inside a Stand, like people recruted to be "part Of the ilusion"
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>>81551317
Copied into the doc as Background Info because I think this could actually help quite a bit in fleshing out the beginning of the Part.
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>>81550096
If the anon who came up with this Stand originally could let me know if I'm understanding it right, I'd very much appreciate it.

>Moe Szyslak
>Stand: 「RUN TO THE HILLS」
>Appearance: A small cockroach like Stand with robotic features and long antennas.
>Ability: Anything that is crushed within it's range will spawn more of itself. They all act as a single mind. If someone crushes a beer bottle, more will spawn around it, possibly even inside the person. If a table is crushed, more will spawn next to it, pushing someone up against a wall.

Destructive Power: E
Speed: D
Range: B
Durability: A
Precision: C
Developmental Potential: C

>Role: Minor antagonist who just wants to defend his bar from all those crazy walking fashion disasters and their wacky robot ghosts and their screaming and their posing. It's just a big mess most of the time.
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>>81552918
Also, Joey JoJo Junior Shabadoo should be a recurring gag character.

Oh, and Moe could probably work for any part except 6.
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So the silence means that my thing is not good? Okay then.
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>>81553068
I'm thinking that Taffy might end up being too annoying for readers.
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>>81553151
Ho-kay then. What can be changed about him?
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>>81552918
sounds k to me.
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>>81546615
>>81546718
Originally it was something to do with butterflies and messing with someone's emotions.

Then EVEN FLOW was turned into something that shoots sin masks at people when Snow White calls them out on a sin.

This is why I keep bringing up the gala fight with Snow White needs to be re-written since it was originally written back when the ability was still about butterflies.
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bumping again

so what will the snow white fight be like now with changed powersets?
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What's jumpin, chick?
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Question: How much have we established about Warner Bros. for part 5? I've been mulling over Stand ideas for the Warner Siblings and realized they could work in Vento or serve as the Corporation's impetus for Stand research in Part 4.
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>>81555501
I think Ed will get hit with the Sloth mask. Eddy probably with the wrath mask.

I need to read the original draft and then Snow White's current powers to get a better idea of it from there.

Weird Al also needs to be at the gala and really peeve off the princesses.
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>>81551317
Going with thos, I see the early story working like this
>Dora is captured by Frizzle, and taken to the panopticon where she then fights Creepy Susie
>fight with Syd Vicious in the Panopticon
>Dora and Suzie escape the Panopticon, where they then encounter Pure Imagination and fight it
>they lose and get sucked into Superjail, which is when the real crazy shit starts happening, the fights with Gaz, other prisoners, and most of the guards take place here
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About the conpalin that Dora's Stand no longer has walking = power, can't we make it so that, the more people and the longer they are following her Red footprints the stronger she gets?
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So I'm looking at the part 4 doc and I think we need more with Stan and Scrooge in the scams section, at least equal with the Eds. Also, this may be because things are bare bones, but Stan gets shafted a bit in the killers section.
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>>81556602
I say we Nak Stan fight Jumba, and one if the princesses. Scrooge can fight one other princess, and Jay and Bob the final princess.
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>>81556602
Yeah, things are bare bones right now when the focus isn't on the Eds or Gadget since no one so far has fleshed out the other Conman Coalition member's roles in the story.

They should each have at least two big scams or fights before the gala.
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>>81557027
In fact, the Eds may have a bit too much to them. We can certainly make them a bit less important, considering they were in Part 3, so we can give things that were previously Ed things to the other two.
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>>81555555
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>>81557112
What the Eds have before the gala right now is fine, we just need to add more to Stan and Scrooge.

The Eds involvement with Gadget on Danny the Street could be played down or given to one of the others though since that isn't really stable.
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also wasn't totally addressed before, but when I wrote Tom and Jerry's fight, I was picturing him as short, but not full blown normal Tom short

Tom's knees or waist short
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>>81557425
People's heights need not be completely consistent with their show roots.
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>Protag is watching a television.
>Trailer for the new Sense of Right Alliance movie pops up

What part would it best go with?
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>>81558168
Part Five.
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>mfw this will be fucking great and cant wait for it to happen
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>>81558328
part 1 is already being drawn atm.
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Can we agree that the fight against Fred should be by Penny and J/SB?
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>>81559341
I think Penny should be the one to finish him, yeah.

The kid info network spreads the word about the LHC going down, Penny finds out stuff from them, the Conman Coalition are injured or exhausted after taking the LHC members down, Fred is probably still injured from go-go-Gadget-fuck-you.

I think there needs to be an elaborate trap set up by the kids and the conmen to get Fred onto Danny the Street where they plan to fight him, and Penny ends up being the one to take him down with help from J&SB as well as some of the kids, or allies of the kids.
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>>81552280
>I am a scientist, I don't believe in Stands!

we probably need someone from the staff in charge of the technological stuff, like the jailbots and the panoptic system.
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>>81559453
I like this. Everyone contributes, and Penny, Jay, and Bob get proper revenge.
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>>81559453
i like this a lot.

this should be what we go with.
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>>81559453
I'm down for this.
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>>81559453
>Fred fight stage 1
>Gogo and Hiro lure Fred in the right direction, with assistance from Gumball and the recess kids
>Fred fight stage 2
>the Conman Coalition (and Skooks and Scoob) lay a trap for Fred so he gets stuck in Danny with no escape
>Fred fight stage 3
>the actual "fighr", Penny and jay/Silent Bob face off against Freaky Fred inside Danny to avenge Gadget
Does this sound like a good plot of events for this idea?
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>>81560298
Should we include Danny himself getting payback for Fred murdering him?
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>>81540202
I say we divide it up based upon abilities.

>Arms for strength
>Legs for speed
>Eyes for various forms of vision
>Torso for invulnerability
>Heart for endurance

I dunno, it's workable and up for improvement.
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>>81560733
Well I think Speed Buggy (We're still using him, right?) should get the Lungs.
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>>81560666
While I'm not entirely sure how he would, that would definitely be a good send off for Fred, seeing as Danny's death was the entire reason Gadget came in the first place.
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>>81560298
We just need a scene of Penny meeting the kids network after her uncle dies, but before the fights start happening. They need to know her, or know of her beforehand.

Maybe after the Recess gang point the Eds to Kevin, Gadget approaches them with Penny and asks them some questions, and either Gadget or Penny is the one who asks about the hairstyle just as a passing question leading into Fred's introduction.
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>>81556602
I had the idea that the mystery Shack could get attacked at night, and Stan would have to find a way to use his Stand to fend off the intruder.
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so im guess im finished with my stats with some help from other anons

Jan Mouse
>bio: made a deal with the devil to achieve high fame and fortune, the cost being her blood

>stand:「BLACK MAGIC」from the famed band slayer
>appearance: a dark humanoid figure, mostly shadow like and demonic in nature punch ghost. the stands strength comes from the users willpower into singing and how she does it during combat

>abilities
Sub-bility 1: stand is able to repair the damaged body of the user in heaviest cases the stand user having severed limbs or even vitals ala head cut off. her ability is tied to the heart so if blocked off or destroyed ceeses regeneration/connectivity of body and cuts main blood abilities
Sub-bility 2: Stand is able to shroud itself on the user and make the user invisible and disappear out of exsistance in her own dimension for only minutes at a time
Main Ability:「RAINING BLOOD」The user can cut herself and and have her stand manipulate her own blood to form as objects and/or be used as projectiles or bombs. with sheer force it can decimate any living being leaving destruction in her path. blood is recyclable as stand has blood levitation powers in close proximity

>Stand Stats:

>Destructive Power: A
>Speed: B
>Durability: D
>Precision: B
>Range: C
>Learning Potential: B

sorry if it sounds like im trying to force her in, she does come from a music background and wacky clothes is her thing. just trying loosen the mood of overly popular characters in this project. i guess having a obscure character like her would be fun to throw in imo
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>>81562914
I like her anon. She was a good idea before this project was a project and still a good idea. She has great aesthetic and I'd like her in Part 6 somewhere. Maybe as a minor villain upon entering Anthro territory.
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>>81563056
thanks!
glad it all worked out in the long run
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Name: Roger Smith (American Dad)
Stand: 「LUNATIC FRINGE」https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uqUa_G1h3pw
Appearance: Robotic humanoid bearing motifs reminiscent of Soviet armored vehicles and equipment
Abilities: Lunatic Fringe has a handful of bizarre abilities. One such ability is to remove a target's brain and replace it with a 「MASTER RACE FRANKENSTEIN RADIO CONTROL」 while the still living brain is spirited away for safekeeping and study. The stand may also generate 「DEADLY POISON NERVE GAS SMOKE」which can be infused into objects such as wigs, ball point pens, cigars, cigarettes, and ice cubes, or delivered via autonomous 「DEADLY TOUCH TARANTULA SPIDERS」.
Weaknesses: Roger is a pussy.

Roger is a master of disguise and an assassin for the Warner Bros specializing in "sneak undetectable exterminations" on unsuspecting targets. His murders leave no trace of evidence and without fail appear to be accidents. To date, he has never faced another stand user head-on and has no intention of ever doing so.

Based on this: >>81537741 and this: http://www.bentoandstarchky.com/dec/dectionary.htm
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>>81560666
>>81561038
Danny's ability is to show images through windows and signs and whatnot, right?

Suppose Danny taps into the memories of the town and makes Fred see all of the pain and suffering he's caused over the years? He's unphased at first, even proud of his handiwork, until Danny replays the events of

>Barbara, my love was named,
>and her fair hair, a mane untamed,
>until one evening, I'm ashamed,
>I got a little... naughty.

and causes him to break down long enough for the others to finish him off. It'd be like a form of Ghost Rider's penance stare.
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>>81563772
Part of Fred's flashbacks are of him killing her and how he didn't feel any remorse at all despite her being someone he cared about.

Danny could show him his dear aunt Muriel if they just need a distraction.
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http://pastebin.com/Xa8Tc2ZC

The finale to the long fought battle between the Men at Work and the Big Hero 2 comes to an emotional and dramatic conclusion!

Hope you guys like this. Can't wait to write more stuff in the future!
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>>81564080
I must've missed the remorseless part when that got posted.

What if Danny gets a boost to his Stand and develops a temporary ability to summon the restless spirits of Fred's victims seeking Justice?
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>>81563772
>and causes him to break down
God, no.
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>>81546801
How about during? she's a relatively new slave to the WB company. One of the more reluctant fighters the party has to fight.

On a side-note. I REALLY liked The Devil and Daniel Mouse.

I really want her appearance to have that "You fucked this up" feel. She sold her soul to become famous, now she's being thrown as cannon fodder for a retarded starfish.
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>>81552918
>Beck (Tron: Uprising)
>Stand: 「VIRUS ALERT」(though I'd suggest 「CYBOTRON」, 「DEPECHE MODE」, 「ALEC EMPIRE」, or 「FATBOY SLIM」as alternatives)
>Appearance: A hovering disc that looks like a cross between a Tron disc and the UFO on the cover of that Boston album
>Ability: A Stand that can upload itself into any form of technology. It's strength lies in it's complete control over cyber space. No security system can stop it. It can shut down government systems, stop power plants, pilot dangerous equipment, and over charge your card with pizza deliveries.

Destructive Power: D
Speed: B
Range: A
Durability: C
Precision: B
Developmental Potential: D

>Role: Beck is a heroic program stored in a disc found by the protagonists of a Part. At first hostile, he agrees to help them after they show that they are able to defend the innocent as Tron would.

So I'm going to try to give the Recess gang Stands. Are they all going to have Stands, or only one or two? I kind of want to do some real writing as well, so I might do something for their introduction.
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>>81564238
Part of the thing we're going for with Fred is that he just doesn't feel bad about any of the stuff he does despite being well aware of his naughtiness.
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>>81549126
well to be fair.

Gadget dies at like the end of the midpoint.
He's far gone by the time the show ends. But his death is still fresh on everyone's minds.
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>>81549404
This might work, but you gotta remember at least 1 year happens between Part 3 and 4.

Then give it like another year between 4 and 5.
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>>81551317
It's a nice idea.

Have them fight more "mundane" foes in the Real Prison. But shit hits the fan in the SuperJAil
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>>81564224
I have a suggestion!

During the fight between SPOON and GENTLE GIANT, Ed should get the pants knockd off of him.

"Ed's trouser-less state must've jogged a single intellectual moment within the confounds of his brain."
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>>81564224
I love the dialoge in these, it's so JoJo and yet true to the characters. Great job.

Also, 「GENTLE GIANT」's battle cry should totally be "BALALALALALALALALA". And I could see Hiro and GoGo doing a double Stand beatdown at some point.

>>81564736
Seconding, because I love JoJo's over the top narration.
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>>81564736
>>81564825
JoJo's narration is a necessary component of life.

Writer here: if that's on the doc, please add that part of narration. Ed just goes the rest of that section pants less.
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>>81564825
Stone free looks horrible whit those eyes, liked her better whit only her shades
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>>81564238
>What if Danny gets a boost to his Stand and develops a temporary ability to summon the restless spirits of Fred's victims seeking Justice?
Danny's stand allowed him to become a literal part of the town. He could develop an ACT 2 ability to make others part of the area as well. Final battle can take place on a side street in front of a barber shop and in the end, Danny makes him a part of the street in the form of either a barber's pole, statue, or something.
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[WAIL TO GOD] is basically Spice girl.
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Sorry, my computer wasn't working and I had to use my brother's laptop.

I was thinking on this, but I hope somebody would help me:

User: Courtney (Total Drama series)

Stand: I don't have a name yet, but it's something related with perfection or bossing arround. I was thinking 「Bo$$」 (Fifth Harmony), but it's seem stupid.

Appearance: A man figure with a moehawk, wearing a white tanktop, and a red button shirt (To resemble Duncan, Alejandro and Scott).

Ability: The user selects any number of people and the stand manifest into them as a mark. As long they have that mark, they have to follow the orders of the User, otherwise they will be inflicted damage (Electric shocks, skin burn, break bones, whatever the user wants). The only way to get rid of the mark is to remove it from the body (If the mark is on the hand, they have to cut their hand). When it happens, the User will have the same damage inflicted. And the user can remove the mark or relocate it whenever she wants.

She can be an anti-hero, or a villan.
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>>81565530
Are you underage or something?
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>>81565530
seems kinda out of place and forced

just in all serves no purpose
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>>81565594
No, why?
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>>81565530
This is autistic, and I'm in a jojo thread.
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>>81565530
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>>81565712
>>81565808
Sorry, I was trying.
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>>81565530
Hmmmmmmmmmm.
Nah.
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>>81565530
Usually I'm all for more stands, but this seems kinda lame. Try again
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>>81565020
Well it's on the doc now.

The Gadget scenes still need to be worked in, so those spots are noted.
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>>81565855
that wasnt even trying

you need a character that fits jojo standards
(goofy stature, buddy system, over the top canon clothes design, storybackground etc)

she just doesnt fit, she sounds like more of a shitty waifu
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>>81565873
>>81565873
>>81565960
>>81566089
Thank you for your feedback, now I'll kill myself.
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Oc
I know it's not /co/ related but I drew it up during class.

I got the name of the user from the text book we were using.
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>>81566279
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>>81566314
Not gonna deny
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>>81566205
Keep trying anon, next time read the other stands in the doc, search for canon stands of jojo ( or watch the series you faggot ) and try to think why a character would work before posting it
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>>81559487

After reading that greentext I just reminded of Professor Membrane, in case we need another character who isn't from Superjail series.

I suppose he was sent there to study the supernatural effects caused by 「PURE IMAGINATION」 while rebuffing the ideas of Stands because they sound the insane babble that Dib would claim. He also would be there to help The Warden in tracking down and arresting dangerous criminals while being completely ignorant for the fact that the Warden is even more dangerous and deranged than most of the inmates.
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>>81549714
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If Jailbot is the Warden's stand, can Gameboy fill the role of Jailbot?
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>>81566585

I think Ms. Frizzle already plays the part of bringing criminals to Superjail.

However, threads ago I suggested Gameboy should appear in Part 6 as one of the prison guards. I also suggested he could have a cool fight with Gaz and Giffany due of all of them being vidya-related.
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>>81566667
I'd love to get him in this if only because of RVA's interpretation of him as a psychopathic murder machine who cares nothing for the lives of his companions.
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going to be reposting this from a few threads ago due to recent events

>When making a Stand:
1) Read the pastebin/docs to check that there isn't a similar ability already. In fact, try not to have something that mirrors a Stand in JoJo either.

2) Make sure the power isn't too close to what a character can already do in their comic/show.

3) Give it a song/album/band name. Normally it shouldn't directly reference its powers. Instead, pick something based on it loosely reflecting the Stand through the lyrics, feeling, or history.

4) Include the parts it could be in and reasons why it's a fit for them. Please refer to the pastebins to see what each part is about.
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>>81566414
I only have watched part 1 to 3 :^)
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>>81566926
>watched
You're a titanic faggot.
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>>81566811
there's also multiple unwritten rules here ie the stand has to reflect the user in some way. stands themselves are a reflection of the user's spirit.
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>>81566926
>watched
Read the manga m8

Or if you're a lazy faggot, go through the Jojo wikia first before you make a fool of yourself.
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>>81565530
Why tho.

Why do you think someone chopping off their arm is an idea they'd have?

wouldnt she just move it to their dicks?
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>>81566279
he... hes not wearing pants tho...
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>>81567201
If they chop their arm, the user will have her arm chopped too.
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>>81567227
He is, it's just very hard to tell.
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>>81567297
why would they go around chopping their arms off?

Isnt this just a reverse Lovers?


A guy would just start hurting himself to hurt her.

Do the electric shocks she gives shock her too?

This is a stupid stand. I want her to be a protagonist. Just so she can fucking suffer for this. Your waifu will fucking pay.
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>>81567297
Going by that logic if they killed themselves then she would have to die as well. It's laughably broken in both ways.
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>>81562914
im glad this turned out to be a pretty awesome and not autistic OC/waifu bait

she a villain? i assume she should because those abilities are pretty lethal.
she could be a rogue stand user seeking out to kill out others to feed on them assuming shes satans little helper in her backstory. just a side villain whos a major roadblock to the main characters?
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>>81557357
I think we can cut the Eds out of the Danny the Street scene entirely, Gadget can just call them about the Gala tickets later.

Currently the division of screentime in the Scam Portion is like this

>Ed Boys
PPG Fight (With Gadget)
Big Hero 2 Fight
Gumball/Recess Fight
Kevin Fight 1

>Stan
Billy/Mandy Fight
Madam Foster Fight (Sort of with Gadget)

>Scrooge
Flintheart Fight
Beast/Assassin Fight (With Gadget)

>All
Kevin Chase

So yeah the Ed Boys are getting a bigger portion of the fights for sure. If we want to add more to Stan or Scrooge we don't have a shortage of potential characters to choose from, its just a matter of deciding who to pick and how to slip them in. We could hand Gumball/Recess over to Scrooge or Stan I think, the Eds really only need to fight one or the other to get to Kevin. That way we'd only have to add one more fight.
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>>81567431
Either way she's hated, also

>Reverse lovers
Well, bye!
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>>>81567708
I say give the recess event to Stan.
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>>81567474
but again, why would they want to?

How about if they started jacking off?
Would she feel aroused?
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Alright, there's been some discussion on moving Thrift Shop to another user after some discussion on Bugs.

So far, the two suggestions are
>the chicken from Animaniacs (correct me if I'm wrong in this), as a Warner Bros employee
>Jenny from Les Nombrils, as the Fog in the Brotherhood of Dada
Which do you like? I want to know what we should do about this soon.
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So the plan for Part 4 now is to reverse the position of the Detectives and the Conmen as the focus of the story after Gadget's death right? So the latter portion of Part 4 will be following Penny instead? Scrooge we pretty much wrote out of the action using Shaggy & Scooby and I can't really think of a reason for Stan to be as heavily involved as either Scrooge or the Eds since he knew Gadget the least well. As for the Eds we could probably have them conducting their own investigation mostly offscreen and have Penny meet up with them later once they are ready to confront the LHC?
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>>81567569
An anon suggested having her be a forced lacky to the Devil in Part 5.

I like it.
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>>81567991
Yeah.
Pretty much
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>>81567996
The 'Deal with the Devil' would probably be receiving a Stand Jawbreaker I'd think. That is if the 'Devil' we are going with is the Red Guy
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>>81568049
It is.
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>>81567756
>>81567756
>Stan figthing a bunch of annyoing kids
>literally trowing money at them to leave
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>>81567991
That's pretty much it.
The main party in the second half us composed of Penny, Jay, Silent Bob, Shaggy, and Scooby. They should take out the majority of the LHC, with the Eds, Scrooge, and Stan coming back to take out the LHC heads and helping lure Fred into Danny the Street so Penny and Jay/Bob can fight him.
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>>81568101
Maybe after his break-in at Fosters, the Recess kids learn about what he did and go after him for payback? That could be how we introduce the idea of Coraline & Foster taking Stands from kids who can't control them.
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>>81566811
I'd also add some methods for coming up with powers that I use.

1) Look at the song lyrics. They can often be used to describe a power, and applying their meaning in different ways can create some interesting results.
2) Think of a power that compliments the character's personality, not necessarily something they already can perform. As Stands are an extension of the user, so should their abilities. Like how Ed's Stand causes someone to be easily distracted like him.
3) Think of a basic concept (the flow of time, how things grow, how fire is hot, etc.) and imagine variations of it, such as reversing or changing it. What could you do if time was stopped? Wha would happen if fire became cold?
4) Look up Super Stand Sunday threads in the /tg/ archive for inspiration. They're way better a this then we are.

>>81567984
Chicken Boo would work best. Maybe give Jenny the Pearl Bomb Stand from the doc?
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>>81567756
How about the Eds don't actually fight the Recess gang, they just get information from them?
Because they still need to talk to them to find out about Kevin.

But then how does Stan run a foul those kids?
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>>81568253
So a double match against the reccess gang? they do meet them before don't they? The recess gang point to the location of Kevin
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>>81567991
I was thinking about Stan earlier and wondering why he'd fight Mr. Burns, and I figured he could offend him at some point so Burns sends an assassin to off him. Would allow for that attack on the Mystery Shack idea, and it gives Stan a good reason to stick around for the assault on the LHC.
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>>81568328
>>81568338
In the original plan for the script, the Eds learn about Kevin from Gumball. It was the reward for winning the game. The Recess kids got added in later.
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>>81567431
Forgot to tell that it only applies when the victim tries to remove the mark.
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>>81568253
His break-in still needs to be developed.

It should end with him barging in on Madam Foster saying "I JUST WANT TO BUY YOUR HOUSE!" before getting tossed out.

>>81568475
I thought Gumball didn't know where the jawbreakers came from and points to the Recess gang as knowing.

I guess it could work, but I still want the Recess kids to be at the heart of the kid's info network.

Maybe Gadget saves Stan from getting beat up by kids and that's when he can ask them questions.
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>>81568538
He tries to remove the mark.

While jacking off. As he is orgasming.
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>>81568343
We kind of already did that with Scrooge. Flintheart sends an assassin after him. I don't think its necessary to give Stan a personal connection to Burns really since none of the other members of the Coalition have personal connections to their opponents.

>>81568563
If we have the Recess kids attack the Mystery Shack with the Stan inside it and have Gadget stop by to save him, we could have the Stan + Gadget interaction we need for him to be somewhat invested in stopping the LHC.
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>>81568343

So what character would be the assassin?
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>>81568707
>>81568657

Hmm, nevermind that then.
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>>81568258
Although I wouldn't just straight give Jenny Pearl Bomb since it doesn't fit The Fog all that well, your suggestion did give me inspiration.

>Jenny (Les Nombrils)
>stand: Radio Chaos (named after Radio K.A.O.S., a Roger Waters solo album)
>Radio Chaos takes the form of a feminine humanoid covered in gold chains around every place on it's body, from arms to neck. There is a square compartment on it's chest that can open up like a drawer door, and an iridescent smoke pours out of both this opening and the stand's mouth and eyes.
>Radio Chaos had the power to produce a colorful high quality gemstone from the drawer on it's torso, each stone having a long, sharp edge, making it seem similar to a dagger or nail in appearance. When the gemstone stabs into the flesh of a living being, it will grow thick spouse that root it into that being's flesh, and begin to slowly suck away the memories, stand, and soul of that person into the crystal. This process will heavily weaken the afflicted as it progresses, and it takes a rather short amount of time, around 20 seconds. When complete, the person who's soul was taken will fall dead.
>if Jenny removes the crystal from the corpse and stand into into her own flesh, she is able to access that person's every skill, memory, and even their stand power. If a charged crystal is smashed, the soul will return to the person it was taken from, reviving them.
>the drawer on Radio Chaos' chest also serves as a storage space for charged crystals, holding an unlimited amount of them to use as needed.
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>>81568657
If we set the Mystery Shack attack after Gadget gets his Stand this could be how he gets all the information about Jawbreakers he needs to go after the Eds at the restaurant.

Heck maybe Stan winds up taking him there after Gadget says he was sold the Jawbreakers by three suspiciously dressed young men.
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Stand name: [REAL AMERICAN]

Strength: A
Speed: C
Durability: A
Range: D
Development: D

[REAL AMERICAN] is a close-range humanoid stand that resembles the pro-wrestler Hulk Hogan and John Cena.

When the user is in a situation where he's either most likely lose, or will definitely win, he can activate [REAL AMERICAN]'s ability called [YOU CAN'T SEE ME], which briefly makes the stand and its user invisible.

If the stand user were to say something racist (ex: fucking niggers), or have his privacy violated (such as having his sex tape leaked), the other half of the stand resembling Hulk Hogan will completely disappear for the rest of the fight.
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>>81546067
>Someone has jerked off and had sex to this cartoon

Is Mickey too dapper to take down Daffy and Tom?
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I'm gonna try another vocaroo thing when I get home from work. Is there an updated version of the Father vs. Scrooge fight yet?
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>>81570248
afaik, no.
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>>81569657
It was strictly vanilla. I swear.
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>>81570332
Welp, if nothing's written in the next couple hours, I'll have to just make something up.
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>>81570610
do it.

Everything in this project is made up.
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Considering the new plan for the investigation team becoming the focus after the second half of Part 4, we need to remember that they should be taking out most, if not all, of the less important LHC members.
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>>81568657
Why would Stan even try to buy Foster's Home if he already has the Mystery Shack in this town?

I thought he wanted to buy it so he'd have a second tourist trap in a location where people don't know him.

Having the Mystery Shack in this just doesn't make any sense to me.
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>>81570939
Don't ask me, I'm not the one who brought it up.

I do think Stan should get the Recess fight though, having the Eds need to go through Gumball to get to the Recess Kids to get to Kevin seems excessive when they could just get Kevin's name from Gumball.
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>>81571031
Stan breaks into Foster's, the Recess kids hear about it and go after Stan, Gadget stops a bunch of kids from beating up an old man (from his perspective), questions the kids, Stan takes a liking to Gadget for the assist.
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>>81529562
Golden Experience has two separate abilities, both normal and requiem.

The normal ability is to control or manipulate DNA. (If I can remember correctly)

The GER's ability is erase an effect of an action but keep the cause of said effect.

Like on how Gio beats Devolio by killing him and leaves him in an endless loop of death without end.
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>>81571502
GE turned inanimate objects into living things, but to be fair the whole thing was bullshit.
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>>81571502
>that image
I'm still pissed that Eyes of Heaven didn't end with Johnathan sacrificing himself to kill Over Heaven Dio.
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>>81571649
Either part 5 is complete bullshit or the translations we got are making it bullshit
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>>81571775
the translators
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You guys are doing a great job, Maybe i should work on my own stuff you seem like you got some competent Drawfags here without me.
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>>81572140
We need all the help we can get, anon.

You, too, can become the「Gang Star」! But you can't give up!

In all seriousness if you wanna do your own thing you can, but just know you're always welcomed.
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>>81572140
We like having as much stuff as we can, man. If you want to take requests or something, go for it.
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>>81542398
i remember this
i put zubaz in the roster.
i kinda regret it now
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>>81566279
i wish i could pick up some of those drawing traits of yours
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REV UP THE NEW THREAD
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hey, you

new thread

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>>81573858
>>81573858
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