shameless dropship plug Can anybody critique my store. not

I can only critique from a design perspective:

The black background of the logo and the brownish background of the site just doesn't come together.

Poor font choice in the product details lists.

>>1995282
Everything this guy said. Other than that, good niche and items

>>1996126
Everything this guy said, really.

>>1996138
>>1996126
>>1995282
thank you all for feedback

I've made some small changes.

>>1994968
On the homepage move the header image of the girl in the wedding dress BEHIND the main title, I commented on another dropshipper's thread: I don't like the idea of you having to scroll down to see the main content of a shop page. In fact I would crop it so you see less of the dress and more of the image is the hair... after all that's what you're selling: not the girl, not the wedding dress

I like the "fitting guide" idea -- great way to add value for customers, just work on your punctuation, I noticed there's some letters that should be capitalized.

From a design point of view things are a bit bare and spartan.

it's a good start: congratulations on actually being an anon who's trying something.

>>1995282
fpbp

do you get any sales at all?

selling shit on the internet is a meme thus far. not enough traffic.

Can I jump in on this?

https://blightystore.com/

The problem I currently have is my products are from Aliexpress - China. The delivery times using epacket are over 20 days. These kinds of products I doubt people will be willing to wait that kind of time for, so I may need to use British suppliers... though I can't automate sales with Oberlo

>>1994968
Looks nice, but you need 4 categories on the front page to be aesthetically pleasing

>>1994968
1) Why ..co.uk? You're limiting yourself to Brits.
2) Design is ugly, too flat. Find a better Spotify theme.
3) Logo/name looks martial, makes me think of SPQR. The subtitle is impossible to read as well.
4) The design really is bad, looking at the product pages. Looks unprofessional.
5) Remove "delivery time"

Nice work tho.

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Can you guys critique my site please?

www.fatale.store