So I paid some dunce to fix my resume up over a month ago and

>>1511089
A lot of places run automated checks on every resume they get; you might want to see if there is any negative info in the databases they use.

Send in this form, and see what comes back:
https://www.theworknumber.com/Employees/DataReport/report_request.pdf

>>1511091
How could I improve it myself?

Any suggestions?

>>1511131

-Work above education, mention your grades

-What are you applying for? This resume looks like a wide net resume.

-Resume says a lot about what you did, but not the effect it had, try things like "Saved company money% per year by..." or "Grew customer retention rate by this%"

-I know nothing about you, no hobbies section.

>>1511163
They said to get rid of the hobbies section

Why am I getting told all different crap

>>1511186
>Why am I getting told all different crap
No one has any idea what they are doing. Just wing it like the rest of us anon.

>>1511190
Ah yes, can you send?

>>1511186

Basically I never leave out hobbies, but some people find it unprofessional.

My perspective is, I include it because if a HR manager rejects me on the basis of a hobbies section, it's not a place I'm willing to work.

YMMV

>>1511089
Just from a glance, the formatting for this is garbo.

All this data in a big pike in the middle with only bold text to break it up. Consider using a two column layout. Keep it to one page.

You could totally start this off with a heading/intro/title page/formattingisn'tstandardhereanymore
"Trilingual Business Management student with experience in (pick best job or skill pertaining to selected job application).

>>1511089
grammar is shit. switching tenses. also complete lack of detail.

>>1511163
Bad advice

>>1511089
This resume needs to be fixed. You got ripped off.

>>1511275
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>>1511264
How can I fix it? Anyone here on HR or hires people?

use LaTeX

>>1511326
What is that?

>>1511326
>make beautiful document in latex
>'lol i cant open this in word send as .doc'

every time

>>1511604
Tell the to pay for Adobe reader so they can edit PDFs like a pro

>>1511260
This, it looks like complete shit and I haven't even read anything yet. Get a nice LaTeX template and redo it.