Requesting Reviews King of the Hill: http://cartoon.adult-f

>>738597546
You posted this leik yesterday. Pick a different one.

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Anyone here?

Lurking I guess

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>>738599480
You check out the stories?

I'm reading the King of the Hill one, it's fucking hilarious. OP is not a fag, I was gonna call you one but this shit is funny.

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>>738600724
I hope it's also erotic

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Anyone here?

>>738603000
ya

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>>738603059
You read one of the stories?

>>738597546
Are you a author of this or just a faggot who like drawn porn like me? 'Cuz this makes me criticies

Hey, for the Jill and Dario one, you should change the
Art right when they enter the warehouse, it goes from 3rd to 1st person without any warning, kinda confused me
So far so good

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>>738603393
Uh...?

>>738603430
Can you give an example?

>>738603594
Are you an author of those or just like porn and want a review?

Sorry, I'm have hungover and english is not my primary luangage

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>>738603699
Author of the stories in the OP and want reviews for them. There's links at the bottom of the story.

>>738603594
However things started to drag as Dario had grown increasingly more agitated hour by the hour. We had gotten into an argument and he snapped at me and it almost seemed like he was gonna throw his rations at me

It goes from the narrator talking to this where Jill is talking, feels weird
>>her unmentionables
Kek
Liking it so far op

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>>738603879
I'll save your post - and thanks

>>738603000
yep

>>738603808
Thank for patience.
So, I liked most of this, drawn porn can't be much realistic but it's understandable. I fap alot long story short. You know what they are saying. In porn you expect to be story but it's optional. It was kinda erotic but... The worst thing is when none of character speak. Better if character say "Uh" "Oh" and something like that than nothing.

If somethin' was not understandable I'll try write it simpler.

tl'dr
I fap alot, story not needed but it's more than ok if there is a story.

>>738604021
Finished it.
As a homosex man, I feel the need to fap to this,
Besides from that little mistake, I really fucking liked it op, you should do more stories, even non erotic ones

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>>738604286
Appreciate it, but I like to write erotic fap fiction because it's pure hedonism - I almost don't even get why somebody already writing fan fiction wouldn't do it.

>>738604634
Reading the secon one now,
>>it was like throwing steak to hungry dogs
I read this and I died,
Top kek

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>>738604758
I just hope it's still erotic.

The wind soothing her used holes, her asshole had still been leaking dog cum.
Should be...
The wind had been soothing her used holes, as dog cum had been leaking out of her asshole.
All in all really good op, you made me jerk it to stories, and I don't do that even with gay ones

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>>738606389
Thanks dog and I saved your post

What gay stories have you tried to fap to if you don't mind me asking?

>>738606644
Just some in general
Resident evil doujinshi is good, but a lot of them portray the characters as twinks, and I'm not into that

>>738597546
You had me at Hey Arnold.

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>>738606896
Then if you're into that bara stuff, I'm not sure how you could get off to my stories. Is it just because you at least think Jill being raped is hot?

>>738606922
Hope you dig them

>>738607219
Pretty much, when it comes to my jerking off, whatever gets me hard works
If you were to do gay stuff, just try not to make the, seem like huge complete fags
No "X-kun! I love you!"
More like "fucking cum in me X!!!!!!!!!11!

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>>738607542
I've thought about writing a sissy crossdressing Sonic the Hedgehog story, but that's it.

>>738607726
Do it.
But yea op your stuff is really good, I like it a lot
Doyl have a place where you post updates and new stories info?

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>>738608414
www.timedwatcher.blogspot.no

Haven't updated it in awhile. Been meaning to finish more of my CYOA before posting again.

I mean I want to do it - but then I'll have a scarlet letter of having written a Sonic fap fiction.

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>>738608635
A weird Sonic story where he's wearing pink and gets fucked by Knuckles.

>>738608741
It's better than that weird sonichu shit

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>>738609784
That's true kino though

>>738610340
"my little girl"

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>>738610495
I loved adding that to his character from what I saw in RE3.

>>738610803
Tbh,
Do one for excels from re5
Or re4 ada