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Fapfics featuring Jill Valentine from Resident Evil 3 Check

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Fapfics featuring Jill Valentine from Resident Evil 3

Check them out please:

https://www.archiveofourown.org/works/7794475/chapters/24597195/

https://archiveofourown.org/works/7794544

You can post a review without an account necessary so I'd appreciate it if you did
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>>737682616
Have you checked out the stories?
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Other stories to look through

King of the Hill:
http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094067

Recess:
http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094035

Scooby Doo:
http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094223

http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094224 (Same story but futa)

Weekenders:
http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094327

Resident Evil:
http://archiveofourown.org/works/7794544

http://archiveofourown.org/works/7794475

Mortal Kombat:
http://archiveofourown.org/works/9800783 (Futa)
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>>737682812
Reading one at the moment.
>>737682952
Might,just might,check these out later if I have the time.
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>>737683061
Thanks man
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>>737683517
anymore?
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These stories would be great with illustrations.
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>>737684549
MORE
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Anyone?
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>>737681990
man I really should promote my own shit this way. I only have 2 stories, but I'm proud of them.
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>>737686043
Link?
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>>737686168
Since you asked- I didn't want to horn in on your efforts lol

http://archiveofourown.org/users/RadleyCunningham/works

You can see which of the two people like more (because it has lesbians lol) but I love the other story too.
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>>737686341
Not about lesbians I think - more people have played Skyrim is all.
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>>737686721
lol that too I suppose.

Compared to Stardew Valley (and I chose a less popular character to write about as well lol)

I love Marnie though. I never could get on board with the whole "waifu" trend on the internet until her. She makes my heart ache. She's so fucking sweet, and you can't marry her, so I did the only thing I could do, (besides installing a mod lol)

I'm happy with that work though. I write some pretty vanilla stuff though. It's what I like.
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>>737687013
Whats the next step in your master plan of writing?
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>>737687319
I'm not really sure, honestly. I enjoy writing erotica, but sadly so few people leave comments or seem to be interested in critiquing anything so I can't grow/figure out if I'm doing okay. I'd like to write more. I have a few ideas for stories, but my knowledge of the universes (Touhou and Overwatch) is extremely limited, and I'd like to know more before trying to write something. I like to establish some depth and to keep characters close to their actual personalities than some.
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>>737688176
Maybe go for triple penetration? (AFF, AO3 and Hentai Foundry)
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>>737688176
I do know a lot about the touhou universe- I just have difficulty figuring out a way to keep it true to the source without being full-blown fucking weeaboo.

With Overwatch, I thought of trying to write a story about Roadhog/Junkrat mostly to see if I could write something poignant enough that people would look past the fact that they're not popular hotties like Mercy/Phara

thought I had the pic based on what I wanted to write, but I can't find it so here's a different pic
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>>737688338
what is AFF?

I have also posted on Fanfiction dot net, but that place is a weird mess and I don't know my stats over there. Occasionally I get a comment about it.
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>>737688910
http://www.adult-fanfiction.org/html-index.php

Come on famm. It's crazy old
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>>737689209
I'm new to most of this- I had my skyrim story written for a year or more before I shared it online.
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>>737688176
>>737689279
Also I understand your frustration. I have a Mortal Kombat futa story with over 2,000 views on AO3 and 17 kudos, but 0 comments.

I have no idea what the analytics are - did they like it? Which chapter did they stop reading at? Where do the views of the story come from?

On AFF, I have 6 reviews for it.
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>>737689554
I have made an account at AFF, thank you for the advice. I am in the process of figuring out how to upload there.

I do have a question for you- I tried to write a rape fic at one point, but couldn't do it. It took longer than most work I've done, and it wasn't even close to the same quality- it just read like some of the cringiest edgelord shit you've ever experienced.
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>>737689994
Make sure to post only one work on Games, then when it's knocked off the front page of the archive, post your second story.

Could I get a preview of it or what series/characters? I'll give you my general idea
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fucking hell AFF is stroking out- I registered but can't seem to log in at all.

It was Skyrim, some random female bandit POV against some giant dude that murdered all the other bandits in her group, knocked her out, and she woke up in one of the build-your-own houses you can make, in the northwest near Morthal (it wasn't the Dragonborn, but I wanted to use that house as a setting)

the dialogue was autistic as fuck.
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>>737690860
Well for something that's a brutal force of nature inflicted on someone, I tend to not use a lot of dialogue if I can help it.

In Resident Evil: Menage a Trois (except at the beginning) I didn't give Jill much dialogue, and I feel like a lot of writers in my position would give her stuff to say and I think works better that way the gameplay of RE3 didn't feature her cussing at the zombies or dogs.

If you're going to give the rapist dialogue, it needs to eventually humanize him or go full on dark with how you end it.
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>>737683757
who is dat?
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>>737691446
*and I think it works better that way as the gameplay of RE3
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>>737691446
that's pretty helpful, thank you very much.

I'm going to give your stories a read when I have time- I'll see how you handled the scenario.

Sorry for the delayed response, was switching my laptop to another room.
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>>737691930
Thanks brah - what also helps is that Resident Evil is a dark, mature setting

Skyrim features a beheading in the first couple minutes IIRC, so why can't it have a brutal/edgy rap?
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>>737692130
yeah RE is pretty fucking bananas. I loved the shit out of 5 personally, what a fantastic Co-op game! Sadly I have limited experience with the other games. I watched a LP of 7, and was disappointed with RE6 at about the 3rd chapter. Played way too much like Modern Warfare and the like.

Oh you might appreciate this pic I found years ago. Nobody else knows wtf it is, and I've had nobody to share it with.

couldn't find the right pic, have this instead while I bump lol
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>>737692444
>I watched a LP of 7,
>LP

We're clearly from different generations. Games nowadays are just getting a little bit too modernized with pointless achievements, Facebook, Twitter and Twitch integration
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>>737692915
I watched it simply because I didn't have time to play it OR the money lol

If I was a bigger fan of Resident Evil I'd probably play it myself. I do use youtube as a means to figure out if I should buy a game though. I watched some weird shit I saw on sale at Steam today, and it looked fun enough even after watching someone else try it, so I thought why not.

That's how I decided to get Stardew Valley, even though I've played almost every fucking Harvest Moon game from the first until they went full weeb with the DS generation. Fucking creepy ass loli shit ruined a perfectly good farming game.
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>>737693078
The SNES game was weeb as fuck though. Even as a kid I knew the mountain spa you could rest in explicitly was some Japanese shit
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>>737692915
sounds like you are just playing the wrong games
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Fapfictions featuring Rhonda from Hey Arnold

Check them out:

>Rhonda needs money and has to work as a street walker to help her family out (Make sure to leave a review if you want to see a chapter three)

http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095340

>Rhonda and her boytoy force Phoebe into a threesome

http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095195

You can post anonymous reviews without an account needed. Me and my co-author would appreciate it if you did:

http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=add&no=600095340

http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=add&no=600095195
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>>737693316
I'm generalizing, there are still some decent games - but there are still plenty of immersion breaking moments. One game recently asked me to give it a Steam review after playing it for awhile
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>>737693266
yeah but in 1996 or whenever I played it we didn't even have internet, so even if I was a weeb, I had no idea that shit was an epidemic lol.

It had a lot of Japanese influence, but it was still fairly fun despite that. I do see that game with rose-colored glasses though.
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>>737693551
I couldn't get into future Harvest Moons though once I realised they were all gonna be essentially the same thing.

Like how Animal Crossing on the Gamecube was great - but every subsequent sequel was just a rehash
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>>737693641
I think it attracts a certain type of person.

Some of them were fun but what killed them for me was how fucking ugly the people got.
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>>737692915
what anime is this
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>>737683757
yes
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>>737693979
Zonbi to Karakasa no Densetsu Monogatari
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>>737693903
>tfw reading a bad OC story on AFF or AO3, and their original character is so unabashedly bad it makes you seethe with how they can post it so openly

ANGERY
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>>737694239
*Kasa not Karakasa
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I just started reading your Menage a Trois story: I like how fast paced it feels just by reading it. Short, precise sentences. Very interesting style.
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>>737695070
It's one of my oldest (except for the ones I was embarrassed over writing that I deleted under another authors name) so be gentle
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>>737695308
don't worry lol- we may be on 4chan but I'm not going to be an asshole. Besides, I gave you my own name/stories so I'm happy to give/get feedback. No harm in being civil.

I think for the sake of permanency I may make comments ON AO3 instead of here. That way I can focus on reading and not worrying if this thread 404s. Also it'll stick around for you to remember lol
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>>737695436
Which story are you gonna post first on AFF?
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the one thing I would edit out, is that "Not out of sadness, mind you." part- it took me out of the story a bit, like if you paused a movie and explained what was going on lol
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>>737696052
to be honest I couldn't even log the fuck in, so I gave up on that for tonight.

If I do bother with it at another point, I might go with my Skyrim story. I would love more feedback on my other one, but this is my strongest story, and would like to put my best foot forward. Just a more sensible strategy.
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>>737696115
Yeah I getchya - a few of my older stories have a few moments like that.
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>>737696226
>to be honest I couldn't even log the fuck in, so I gave up on that for tonight.

I think AFF has problems late at night - server stuff or something. Hopefully you didn't register at the wrong time.
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>>737696252
I will keep that in mind when I comment- Do you have more recent work on AO3? I'd be interested in reading that for a comparison of your ability.

As I read this particular story I find myself imagining the artwork of Thor/Deep Rising, not the Purple Haze you've been posting lol
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>>737696226
Your Stardew Valley story is definitely a waifu story - and I've written one or two waifu stories. I just feel a little alienated because I don't know Stardew Valley all that well.

Some of the OC stories/blank slate character stories that I've read that worked usually develop the story from the beginning of the game/cartoon/etc
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>>737696709
http://archiveofourown.org/works/9800783

http://archiveofourown.org/works/9499943

For my truly latest, not co-authored stories.
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>>737696878
that's the trouble with fanfiction, the universes can really lose people who aren't too familiar with them.
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>>737697338
http://archiveofourown.org/works/8355631

Also just to shill it to randos

I'm not saying to extend it though (unless you think you could), but I had planned a similar 1 chapter story for an obscure Fallout 3 character. (Even though that game sucks). I just didn't get around to it though because I couldn't think of the throughline plot
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>>737688176
you should play touhou if you don't already
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>>737696878
just finished the RE story- jesus christ that's an intense read. Not usually my thing, but I was feeling generous today so I'm leaving some comments and probably a kudos because why not.
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http://archiveofourown.org/works/8355631

>Marnie's mouth was suddenly filled with a thick, warm liquid. She sat up quickly, pulling Farmer's cock out of her mouth. Farmer shouted in ecstasy as semen still shot out of him, catching on her lips and her face, startling Marnie. She coughed; the taste of semen was nothing she had ever known. A slim, silver string connected her lips and his cock, a mixture of saliva and sperm.
“Sorry,” Farmer quickly apologized after his orgasm had finished. “I tried to warn you. I didn't mean to... in your mouth--”
Marnie tried to catch with her hands the dripping semen trailing out of her mouth and down her chin. The sight was perverse and beautiful to Farmer. Her face was an expression of her usual sweet purity and confusion. It was almost enough to get him hard again.

I like when semen or spit is described as almost web like - very good descriptions
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>>737697722
honestly I've tried and the games get so frustrating. I'm a huge fucking weeb for the non-h doujinshi though, and I love the fandom universe. There are a lot of great stories out there, and that's what I'd like to be a part of.

I'm a big fan of Meiling and Sakuya- Meiling needs more love and I want to write a story about her/from her pov but I'm having trouble figuring out a plausible hook for Sakuya's bitchiness that hasn't been done to death.
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>>737697923
Thanks man
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>>737698360
no problem, it was a nice break from my usual youtube binging and venom-spitting here on 4chan lol.

I left a brief comment for you- I didn't want to get too long-winded. Also, I didn't want to make assumptions about your work, like I don't know if you ever plan on going back and editing a bit- I think it could really shine.
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>>737698566
I've thought about it - but mostly only went back for super obvious spelling or grammar mess ups.
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>>737698831
this is the shit I like. Good pantyshots with wide open legs.

You never get that anymore, even with real women. It's all asses with panty pics.
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>>737698566
also when you said intense, which part did you mean?
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>>737698111
shmups are a weird genre anyway.
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>>737698935
>You never get that anymore, even with real women. It's all asses with panty pics.

Especially the women (male)
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>>737688176
You should play Second Life and erp with people if honing your writing skills is what you are interested in doing.
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>>737699246
ERPing is for fags
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>>737698938
specifically the gang-bang I suppose lol

The introspection/Jill's thoughts were great, and gave me some insight like you mentioned earlier about writing situations like this.

Your style is much different from my own- dialogue seems to be my strength (from what few comments I've gotten tell me) but I like how much depth you manage to create without it.
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>>737699246
I have mixed feelings about devoting my time to another online game lol. I recently got the hell away from WoW and that took a great deal of effort (not recently, pre WoD) but I'd sooner kill myself than to fall back into that spiral of addiction that took all my time/made me gain a shitton of weight. No offense meant to second life intended.
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>>737699516
Thanks - nothing wrong with heavy dialogue, but its sometimes my least favorite part about books because nobody sounds like a real person.

Oh oh and be VERY careful with your tags on AFF:
http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/3690-story-codes/?do=findComment&comment=253563

It ain't like AO3 where you can put anything. The archive mods/janitors can be very specific
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>>737699630
ERPing won't teach you anything about writing erotica. It's like saying running D&D campaigns will help you with story structure.
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>>737699741
How big is the reader base at AFF? So far I'm not really convinced it's worth all the trouble I've had with it tonight lol. I registered, got the activation email and all that, and still couldn't fucking log in.
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>>737699852
man I miss playing DnD. Pathfinder too, they're basically the same fucking thing.
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>>737699932
Without shilling on /b/, my Mortal Kombat story got 6 reviews

0 comments on AO3

Without shilling on /b/, my Recess story got 7 reviews

0 comments on AO3
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>>737700157
I gave your other stories kudos as well even though I've saved them for reading later lol.

I don't know if you're the type that likes seeing kudos pop up but I always like it myself.

Sounds like AFF is worth it then- I won't give up on it completely. I have for the night, however lol.
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>>737699932
http://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=1296879057&view=story&zone=cartoon

Also just compare my views to AO3
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>>737700322
Your email service or browser might be fucking with the activation link - AFF has had weird HTML coding problems.
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ok for some goddamned reason I was logged in in incognito mode so I'm trying to upload now lol
You weren't kidding about the content tags, jesus christ there's shit I've never heard of there.
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lol I was so close to uploading and it spergs out- fuck this shit I'm done thinking about it tonight.

AO3 is the place I currently and will probably check up on regularly, so if you happen to be reading/choose to comment, please do that at AO3 if you would. I'd appreciate it.
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>>737701138
>lol I was so close to uploading and it spergs out-

Don't upload - just copy the text from AO3
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>>737699852
The reason ERPing on second life will hone his writing skills is because doing it means coming up with paragraphs of well-written erotica on the spot. The sheer repetition that many of its players have done this with different partners has had the expected result of making many of them damn good at it.

Sorry but you don't know what you're talking about in regards to that. At all.
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>>737701216
that's what I did, I just meant it almost worked- filled in captcha and it just keeps refreshing the page and making me do another captcha over and over.
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>>737701267
>Sorry but you don't know what you're talking about in regards to that. At all.
and which link has all the stories you've written?
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>>737701267
>Please jump down the rabbit hole that is Second Life so you can describe sissy cuckoldry, furry futa wangs, etc in detail

>>737701296
Another browser? Use a normal one without noscript
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>>737701397
>I have written stories

You must have confused me for some other person who made a claim that he had written a bunch of stories. That or you have poor reading comprehension because of your retarded brain.

>>737701515
You say that like you are above it and as if writing fanfiction erotica was somehow ever nobler. It wasn't.
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>>737701742
So you're a basic bitch that needs social interaction in everything they do and an ugly (and I do mean ugly) 3D avatar to write about diapers and how you change them
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>>737701742
go hawk your larping faggotry somewhere else, you butthurt manbaby.
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>>737701946
lmao OK fapfic authors filling in the blanks listen I am just giving you some information on something similar to what you do. It may be that some other person knows something you do not, like a similar community existing.

But if you wanna act like you are far above them be my guest. I am telling you that you aren't though. You are not saving any face.
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>>737702118
you're pulling all of these assumed insults out of thin air and sperging hard when you misunderstand the words we're saying to you- what do you expect us to do at this point?

I was civil enough at first, but I'm not qualified to be your handler/wrangler
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>>737702118
My problem with ERPing is that it rarely felt like I was telling a story - just some purple prose about how alluring my Night Elves eyes were in the dark and shit.

Also I couldn't fap.
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>>737702428
lol WoW rpers were all insane.

One of my friends from WoW had a bright future ahead of her, but she didn't spend any time looking into college after she graduated from high school, and spent her free time off of WoW doing this Attack on Titan RP bullshit.

I don't know how fat she is today, but god damn that was sad to witness someone literally throw their future in the garbage like that.
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>>737702670
Its not just the ERPers (or the even lamer RPers) - MMOs had a powerful grip on people.

My brother dropped out of college due to his WoW addiction - then summarily dropped the game several months after.
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>>737702870
I am glad he got away from it. That shit is like a psycho girlfriend who doesn't let you have a password on your laptop/phone and hates all your friends.

And if you think for a second that you can talk to other women (play other games) fucking think again!
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>>737702956
Ironically, an old girlfriend bought and paid for my first account to WoW (because I wasn't going to pay the monthly fee) just so we could play it together.

MMORPG design is fucking miserable.
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>>737702428
Sounds to me like did not hook up with the right people, most RPers in general of any kind think they have some little known intellectual hobby when in fact they are just socially retarded shut-ins. I can't speak on warcraft or the quality of the people there, have not played in like over 10 years.

Find the right person though, and the unique situation of having to write in improvisation with them will challenge the brain and improve your own writing I assure you, I've seen it happen.
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>>737703187
I'll concede that you might be right - but I think just reading quality books (The Classics™) is just as good.
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>>737703121
we had no idea what we were in for lol.

It's sad to see friends get stuck in these games.

I'll confess I've had this strong urge to get into something to pass the time this summer... Not WoW, but something. I simply can't find anything that appeals to me though, so I consider myself lucky lol.

I did play Path of Exile for a short time, but the end game is just not fun at all, and god help you if you assign a point incorrectly or try to play around with the massive skill map.
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>>737703391
Ugh, ARPGs. A genre that hasn't changed since Diablo 2 - beyond adding streamlined features. (Instead of having to go back to town to sell shit, use your dog! Instead of having to buy town portal spells, have it built into the character from the getgo!)
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>>737703598
I think a lot of people loved that because they played the living shit out of Diablo 2. That was the height of gaming for quite a while, and it had a lot of appeal. Battle dot net was a cesspool though lol.

It's shameful that Diablo 3 was such a fucking disaster.

I just wish people would give a company that isn't Blizzard a chance.
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>>737703811
>Battle dot net was a cesspool though lol.

D2 ERPing?

>It's shameful that Diablo 3 was such a fucking disaster.

Played that co-op. What a snore.

>I just wish people would give a company that isn't Blizzard a chance.

They do? Path of Exile is popular. Grim Dawn is semi popular - Torchlight 2 had decent numbers because it was cheaper D3 alternative.

I just think they all suck.
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>>737704018
there are a few, I'll admit. I don't know all of them, personally. I know that Blizzard came out with HotS in response to the rise in MOBA style games- just wanting to get their slice of the cake.

I've been out of gaming for a while now, and I can't say I regret it. I play an occasional game, and I've picked up a few things from the steam sale, but I don't know when I'll have time to devote to them.

Even Stardew Valley I don't play much anymore.
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>>737704164
I'm not cynical to vidya though - I know a lot of people are. My goal recently has been to play a bunch of games I get from bundles that have Steam Trading Cards (which I can then sell), or idle them if they're total trash.

Lots of trash - but some gems here and there.
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>>737704376
Crypt of the Necrodancer is a neat game that I picked up. It's sort of like DDR but with combat. It's pretty fucking fun once you get the hang of it.
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>>737704458
Didn't want to play that one because of the... GIRL... protagonist.

Outlast is a surprisingly good horror game. I avoided it for so long because people told me it was YouTube Streamer jump scare bait - but I got it in a Humble Monthly and decided to give it a shot. It's really not about shitty jump scares, but good atmosphere
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>>737704628
that's the default character- you can switch to others as you unlock them. They all have a different playstyle, which gives this game a fuckton of replay value.

If you're more of a 2 pieces of garlic bread type of guy (not judging) then you might not like some of the characters (which is mostly a fandom-assumed bunch of nonsense honestly, and it has never interfered with my own enjoyment of this game)

It's not nearly as bad as Undertale and that cancerous fandom.
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>>737681990
Resident evil 7 fucking sucks
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>>737704978
>If you're more of a 2 pieces of garlic bread type of guy (not judging)

What did he mean by this?
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>>737704978
>If you're more of a 2 pieces of garlic bread type of guy (not judging)

???
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>>737705117
I didn't know how to take your comment that you didn't want to play because of a "girl" protagonist. Sounds a little sexist, but I'm not here to judge.

The reference is in regards to the idea that there are only 2 genders and all this other stuff is bullshit.

I'm not even sure where I fall on this particular argument myself, so I'm really not passing judgement.

Some of the characters in Crypt are supposedly trans or binary or whatever it's called.
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>>737705434
I just prefer games not designed for women where you can play as a girl like Resident Evil 3 or Bayonetta.

>Some of the characters in Crypt are supposedly trans or binary or whatever it's called.

Cringe

Also one of my stories is pro trans, but I don't want to spoil which one and I tried not to make it uh, what's the word, preachy virtue signalling bullshit like most things I've seen related to LGBT crap?
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>>737705587
it can be pretty cringey, and some of the movement's loudest champions can be its worst enemies honestly.

It's hit and miss, especially on 4chan. I've enjoyed this conversation more than any other in the last several months, so I was reluctant to bring up something that could so easily devolve into hostility lol.
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>>737705831
Same - and yeah, politics can really turn people into animals when they disagree.

But don't use that garlic bread thing again that was so vague lmao. I thought you were saying I was somehow gay.
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>>737705831
Oh and post your skype if you got one
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>>737705964
I was vague, but I wouldn't just randomly insult a guy like that lol.

Here's the pic that started a huge shitstorm on social media.

No skype, sorry.
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>>737706309
timedwatcher at gmail
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>>737705587
Games where you can play as women aren't necessarily designed for women you half wit. What about all those horny teenagers? Like yourself and your stupid fanpics.
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>>737706801
>Games where you can play as women aren't necessarily designed for women you half wit.

I literally mentioned games like Bayonetta and Resident Evil 3 that weren't designed for women. Let me throw in Super Metroid too.

Crypt of the Necrodancer looked like it was designed for chicks from the getgo.
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>>737706876
I think the graphics of the game appeal to a crowd that likes certain "retro" style games.

It has good music too. I certainly won't push you to like it though lol
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>>737707040
I've been waiting on a decent indie bundle sale
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>>737707186
*for it to be in a decent cheap indie bundle
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>>737707229
I think it's like 6 bucks right now- I paid full price for it but I do not regret that at all.
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>>737707229
KEK
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>>737707229
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