so what does /b think of my music? https://www.youtube.com/

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZuWkVqum6a8

actually surprisingly good
keep it up

>>737519158
Wow. I like it.
Got any more? Also, what software do you use to make your music?

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>>737519547
hey thanks fam, i will!

>>737519660
thanks fam! sure just check out the youtube channel, i upload all my shit there and on sc. i produce my music on fruity loops, its really easy to use and has a shitton of tutorials online.

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>>737519660
here's one without vocals

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R868lxxxBI0

>>737519158
The music's bumpin. Jazzy and snazzy. Smooth. But your voice is really obnoxious and your lyrics are naive and equally obnoxious. You might find it a little better keeping your vocals and music separate. Some music fairs better without someone interrupting it.

Don´t like...

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>>737520505
thanks for the honest critisism dude. i actually get similar feedback all the time, but i really enjoy singing and really enjoy writing lyrics somewhat meaningful to me. i guess my beats will just have to suffer under my vocals till the quality matches

>>737520662
That's a very positive response to criticism, and as long as you keep doing what you love to do, you'll find the right wavelength and that'll be your breakthrough.

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>>737521222
ha i'll take that compliment! i am very greatful for honest critism with actual thought behind it. it really helps one figure out on which aspects to focus on more.
and couldn't agree more, making music is therapeutic for me, getting a few people to actually nod their head to it or even unironicly like it is all the breakthrough i need :)

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It's pretty decent. I hated the singing, but that's just personal opinion. The music itself is on point.

>MFW someone asks for opinion on /b/ about something that isn't shit

>>737519158
Too much bass.

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good shit my nigga

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>>737521973
is there such a thing?
shitty jokes aside you might be right, i am only able to mix on headphones since i live in a shitty appartment.
i should at least once listen to it on some speakers b4 realising. i will try to keep that in mind

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>>737522031
much appreciated ma dude

>>737519158
You are pretty good, frand. 10/10

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>>737522175
i am not gonna lie, feedback like this gives me a bit of a chubby

>>737519158
shit fam, you just got yourself a fan, keep it up, and i hope to see you someday on a festival preforming

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>>737522538
holy fuck thank you fam! and damn i do too, gotta finish that bachelors for them gbp's tho.
in the rarest of cases of me actually someday having somewhat of commercial success with my music , i am totally gonna give 4chan credit for me pulling through. n-no homo

>>737519158
youre german

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>>737522888
da hast du recht. ehe + scheidungsanwalt für alle!

>>737522796
wenn du mal wirklich einen Auftritt hast, wirst du mich dort finden können

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>>737523180
summerjam 2018 ich kommeeeeeeeee!!!
aber in ernst, wenn du ausm ruhrgebiet kommst könnte das sogar nicht mehr all zu lang in der zukunft liegen. könnte mir persönlich unironisch kein besseres publikum vorstellen

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Not gonna lie, I am not a fan of rap so I may be biased. The vocals need a lot of technical work. When you make something, listen to that recording on as many systems as you can. You might find something you can improve. Like my three piece band, I'm the bassist, so when you make the mix, listen to it on your phone speaker, cheap earphones, sub woofer equiped stereo system, and finally a decent pair of headphones. Seriously, practice your vocals. Play with a goddamn tuner and metronome.

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>>737524332
great ear m8. yea you are totally right , i need a lot of work on my vocals. it seems like proper technique (stance/breathing) depends on the daily form instead of actual talent. i tried teaching myself from what i can find online but that brought neglectable progress. if anyone got any good vocalbooks/coachvideos help a tone deaf brother out.
>Play with a goddamn tuner and metronome.
100% right, i was being sloppy.

LOL Didn't expect to see you on /b/ Venuser

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>>737524739
you from /mu/? if so shame on me for promoting somewhere else

>>737519158
Pretty good, try dropping it on Mrsuicidesheep

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>>737525084
hey thanks for the hint! i had to google it and now the submission is already out :)

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>>737525360
Yeah i love how i first heard artists staring out on that channel, and now i hear them in the radio. I had also been around since 100k subs and now its pushing 7 mil subscribers, great community

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>>737525687
wow that sounds cool as shit. I only had the pleasure once in my life, of hearing/digging a band before they made it big. my inner hipster cried tears of joy

>>737519158
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0E6uX16D-lA

>>737524800
lol yeah but no one cares because most people in the /mu/ SC threads are shill cunts anyways but with shitty music

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>>737526958
haha sad but true. oh well there are very decent people and musicians among them tho.

>>737520407
The vocals are fine. They make your songs catchy

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pQNwVZEJO1A

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>>737527998
hey thanks :)
>>737528741
i show /b what i got

I love this! 10/10!

>>737519158
Stop singing.