Fapfics featuring Jill Valentine from Resident Evil 3
Check them out please:
http://archiveofourown.org/works/7794544
http://archiveofourown.org/works/7794475
You can post reviews without an account necessary so I'd appreciate it if you did so. (You can also just leave the story Kudos if you don't want to leave a comment.)
>>732327794
How many times are you going to make this thread? Kill yourself
>>732327794
dude... again?
why don't you go over to >>>/lit/
oc you can't post you jill valentine pictures there. but maybe they can help you a little more than the tards here.
>>732328198
Fanfic isn't allowed there
>>732328381
sorry i didn't knew that, bummer.
well than maybe you should post to a different time? it's like 4am - 6am in the states right now. most people surfing chan at the moment are eurofags.
>>732328640
Euros dindu nuffin wrong
>>732328770
im one myself. i just guess that most don't want to read english written erotic fan fiction. especially if it is that much.
just want to give you some constructive criticism/ideas instead of posting the same threads over and over again without getting the attention you're seeking
>>732329227
>especially if it is that much.
Much what?
>>732329405
text. combined with the very short sentences it just not very pleasent to read. but like i said yesterday im not a writer and im not into erotic fan fiction. maybe the guys fapping to stuff like this enjoy this kind of writing.
if i could change something i would use more adjectives and go more into detail. i would also try to not make these huge jumps in the story.
>>732329735
They're two of my oldest stories but I'll try to keep that in mind.
https://fr.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=ph58b7bb1b40fb3
Anyone here?