Hey /b/, I need to share this with you, it drove me mad for too long >Be me 35 years old farmer >Live in a lone farm from everything >Was married with 2 kids before wife's death 3years ago and kids disappearance a year ago >Night before disappearance all was normal >Notified police, they said they will try their best >They said maybe kids just got lost >Kids never got lost >Didn't anyone except police >Be alone and depression kicks in Fast forward last October >Laying in bed in front of fireplace >Too cold >Smoking my pipe and fighting sleep >Eventually slept and woke up feeling disturbed to total darkness >Weird cause fire stays till I put it out in the morning >Nothing can cause its extinguishment >Stand to light fire again,too cold to sleep without >Step on liquid near the fireplace >Light fire again >Look down >I'm on a large bloody stain >No other traces of blood anywhere >Panick and gaze at the roof >Nothing is leaking >Take my rifle and head towards the door >Look outside, nothing alarming >Moon lights the whole area >Strong wind >I see a little light in the distance >A large blurry red dot >Wtf is that >See more clearly >There is a silhouette, a tall silhouette with the dot at its feet >Load the rifle and aim at it
>>602856813 Little background: My grandfather is british and come to Russia the old days,exiled from Britain (some governmental reason), my grandma is russian. The farm belonged to my grandma's family.My dad grew up in this farm then went to the US where he met my mother, I grew up in Seattle and after a long time marriage my mother died. My father went back to live in the farm to escape the sorrow.I stayed in the US, my life was there. But I got news my father committed suicide so I had to go to cake care of the farm. My gf at the time had problems and wanted to leave all behind her and decided to come with me.We got married at the age of 22 (we're same age). And we had 2 beautiful children. Anyways: >I took aim >Target way too far >Scared shitless >Silhouette just standing still >At the point of not knowing what to do >SHit greatest regrets for not fixing the truck, had 3 days to do so >Only one option left >Called my stock supplier,who is a good friend and knew my father well >Ask to pick me up >Needless to say, calling him at 2 am made him realize something was clearly wrong >Asked me what was wrong >No time to eplain please just come fast >Hardly breathing and shivering uncontrollably >Lock the door firmly >The red stain still by the fire >Grab ppipe and smoke to calk the nerves >Waiting seems eternal >I hear the wind outside and the cracking of the trees, adds fear but nothing abnormal >Have the door to open door and peek outside another time >Silhouette was still there but it seemed taller and closer, the red dot was also brighter >Fuck, rush back inside >Thinking about getting the dogs from the barn where I usually lock them, nope too scared for that >Smoking more nervously >Intense Impatience >Phone rings
>>602856813 >It's the supplier >He'll be a bit late, barren road, his voice is weak >Alright, I hung up and kept waiting >Put on soft music to keep myself distracted >Roars outside, some kind of beastly roars I never heard before >Wtf is happening, definitely not the wind >Panicked and stayed still >Dogs started barking furiously at that same moment >Had 7 dogs >Also mules started neighing >Cold is deeper >So frustrated, didn't wanna stay alone and didn't wanna leave fire warmth >Ah fuck it,Took a light torch and ran out from the back door straight to the barn >Get in and lock the gates >Thank God nothing abnormal inside >Feel much better with the animals company
>Dogs still barking >Start petting them to calm them down >Realize left phone inside >Shit too scared to go back and get it >Moment later, one of my dogs stood up and started staring blankly at a corner >Dog is trembling and moaning, most terrified face ever for a dog >Wtf is happening is this normal >Dogs start barking again >Hear a truck engine >Biggest relief in my life >Engine stops and I go out >Lock the doors on the animals and ran to the truck >Sat next to the friend >Friend is a strong russian bloke, saw him carry logs a normal human wouldn't even move >Usually no emotions and no expressions on his face >I see clearly now his terrified face >What's wrong? >No answer,he just started the truck and we left >Awkward silence, he was hardly focusing on the driving,his mind was absent >Ignoring everything I say >Fine I'll stay quiet >After a while he took a turn >Wait..we were heading back to the farm >What's going on >I start shouting and taunting him to say anything >CLose to the farm now >He stops and looks at me on the verge to cry >"Get out" >His trembling and pointing a gun at me >Walk out confused and with absolute fear >See his truck fading away in the distance
>Fuck I'm doomed >Quickly head back to get rifle back from the barn >Doors unlocked, made sure to lock them before leaving >Rifle is still there, but not a single trace of any of my animals >Get back in the house running >Fire extinguished again >Light it on again >The red stain just doubled in size >Fear seizing my body >Hear a bark followed by a strong scream >Goosebumps and hardly breathing >Go to windown to check the silhouette spot >Still there in same position I left it >Dots were glowing like crimson fire >Take phone and call friend to try and understand >His phone is off >Call police >All is off >Weird I still got transmission >Heart racing
>Decided only one way left out of this >Walk out >Head with rifle loaded towards the silhouette >Adrenaline rush >Walking faster and faster >Silhouette and dots start fading >What is happening >House if far behind me now >Look back
>>602856813 >Barn is on fire >Should I walk back or just leave >No close village no nothing >Run back, the barn is lost, no way to put out the fire >House door locked >Try hard forcing it >Useless >Go to back door, locked too >Gave it several kicks, finally broke >Got in,all black again, total darkness >First step in I feel stepping on liquid >Light the torch >Omg blood is everywhere now >Ran as fast as I could, heading towards the East >the main road is there >What a day >Never ever considered anything supernatural before >30 mins of running and finally at main road >Road is empty, normal since it's 4am >Waited a long time but a bit more relieved away from that place >Nothing made sense in my mind >Small car passing by >Didn't stop >Just realized who is insane to pick up a stranger here in the middle of the night >Trying too hard not to think about everything that happened >Too tired from all the running so layed down >Fell asleep I'm really shaking as I'm telling this right now, I just had enough of keeping it to myself, continuing
>>602856813 >Awaken by morning light >Light is recomforting >Decide to head back now that light makes vision clearer >Do not care anymore I need to see >Back to the farm >Door is not locked >Walk in >Not even a single drop of blood >Fire was on >Confused more than ever, it wasn't when I left running >Too much fear to feel anymore >Barn was burnt to ashes and no animals >Sat in the corner and smoke my pipe >Think I was high last night and the barn just caugh on fiee >Call friend to check >Omg phone is ringing >He answers
>Omg thank God you answered >About to tell him about last night >He screams and tells me not to ever call him back
>>602856813 Wtf so my conclusions were wrong, I was not high >Just decided to stay there for this day >Lost in thinking >There is an uncle who we did not talk (he had big quarrel with my father in the past) >Thought I should call him last hope >My life in the farm ends anyways, lost my animals and my supplier, and it's hard to find one >Call uncle at mid day >No answer Fast forward 5pm >Shit night is close >Call uncle again >Talk awkwardly >Finally tell him I need to leave and I need him to pick me >He lives about 3 hours away >Found it awkward and started asking questions >Told him I just feel uncomfortable there >Also told him about wife's death and kids disappearences >He seemed worried and said he will pick me up the next day >Finally a way out, but still the night is here . >Decided it's best I stay awake with rifle in hand to observe everything
>>602856813 >Didn't sleep at all last night >At about 1pm I started feeling the weight of sleep >Fuck no no >Woke up to the same scene >No more fire, door open this time >I put a first step in liquid >Lit the fire >Omg blood everywhere >Ceiling was dripping of it >Blood was outside the open door too, a large stain >Run out, silhouette is there, but it's shorted this time >This has to end now >Take the rifle and got to a shooting distance >Aimed and just shot 3 times >The silhouette crumbled >Run towards it >It's a small body >My youngest kid >Dead >I shot him >3 holes in his chest >His blood is leaking >Burst in tears >Swear I'm an inch away from madness >Left the rifle on the floor and ran to the main road >Nothing matters >I am fully conscious now, I can't be high >Arrive to main road and wait till morning
>>602856813 >Go back to where the body was laying >Rifle is there and blood too, but no body >About to crumble >Go to the farm >Just wait for uncle >Eternal wait in pain >He's here, nice guy >Gets worried I'm trembling and doesn't insist much >Drove back to his village >He lives alone >Said he was married >Pictures of his family on the walls >Didn't want to give me details about where his family was >Lead normal life, take up a job >All normal till last month >I decided to go back to the farm >Uncle said before I left: "All that come of darkness should be cleansed in fire" >Didn't get it >Uncle always talked in ways like this so it's normal,he was not perfectly sane >Had my own truck now >Drove back to the farm
>Be at farm in the morning >Walk in >The floor was scratched >Shit happened in here >Went to my room to take some of my shit >Be in front of bed >See a picture >Weird picture never saw it ever before >Hold it and see, about to faint
>>602861812 What the fuck did you just fucking say about me, you little bitch? I’ll have you know I graduated top of my class in the Navy Seals, and I’ve been involved in secret raids on Al-Quaeda, and I have over 300 confirmed kills. I am trained in gorilla warfare and I’m the top sniper in the entire US armed forces. You are nothing to me but just another target. I will wipe you out with precision the likes of which has never been seen before on this Earth, mark my words. You think you can get away with saying shit to me over the Internet? Think again, fucker. As we speak I am contacting my network of spies across the USA and your IP is being traced right now so you better prepare for the storm, maggot. The storm that wipes out the pathetic little thing you call your life. You’re fucking dead, kid. I can be anywhere, anytime, and I can kill you in over seven hundred ways, and that’s just with my bare hands. Not only am I extensively trained in unarmed combat, but I have access to the entire arsenal of the United States Marine Corps and I will use it to its full extent to wipe your ass off the face of the continent, you little shit. If only you could have known what unholy retribution your little “clever” comment was about to bring down upon you, maybe you would have held your tongue. You didn’t, and now you’re paying the price, you goddamn idiot. I will shit all over you and you will drown in it. You’re fucking dead, kiddo
>>602856813 >It was my father with my russian supplier in the back of the picture,and in the front my mother.They all look so dim and so sad, I look further in the picture.Behind in a corner, my dead wife was sitting in the corner holding my older kid.This was the room I was in. >I hated everything about what's going, fear rising. I tear the picture and walk out >Decided to burn the farm and everything about it >Leave with the farm in flames behind me >Never ever returning to this land >The picture still on my mind distracting me, my wife and my parents never met. >Went back to uncle's home >Big crowd in front of it >Burnt to ashes >Thinking about uncle's last words >I still don't get it >Uncle died in the fire >Went to Lithuania with the money I had left and that's where I live now That's all there is, I'm currently a waiter. I went to a psychiatrist and he says I must have had a mental problem. For the people who wonder, the farm was in Gayutino. I don't I'll ever go back there, ever again. I've been afraid it was all in my head, but not anymore. I'm sure of everything I saw, I still get nightmares of it. I need help
>>602862409 10/10 story 7/10 ending Kinda wishing it went off with a mindfuck or bang, but I like that realistic ending. Makes it feel more intense in the long run rather than a creepypasta. Which is good.
>>602863005 then why aren't you in jail for murder? why wasn't there any rescue attempts by the police on your family? The entire reason schizophrenia is a disease is because the victim is not aware of their delusions. I could be schizophrenic and I wouldnt know either. Except my life makes sense and I can hold it together. So there's less of a chance that I am.
because there's no way of proving anything you've said, and you believe it to be true so strongly, you've come up with a story that properly fits your delusions. That's what your mentally ill brain is doing to you. go see a doctor and start taking anti-psychotics. and it you dont want to take meds, go live in a cabin in the woods.
>>602863353 It's rural Russia, you can hardly get help there, also no family left. I was never schizophrenic, Also I'm leading a normal life in here, apart from the nightmares >>602863533 I want to leave it all behind
>>602864657 Not a copypasta, same OP from before, posted it when I just moved to Lithuania on /b/ and /x/, none were helpful back then. I got in contact with an anon who said he'd help me figure things out, and even persuaded me we go together. He never showed up the day we settled, and stopped replying
>>602864370 Stupid? stupid would be to live the rest of your life not knowing. IF this is true then i couldnt live the rest of my life just not knowing after all of that shit. He is now a waitor or whatever he said and he has no friends, so all he does is sitting around thinking about this shit. And after all what is a life really worth, and if you are lucky someone might make a movie out of your story. he should go back
Why do you think the supplier got spooked and told you to stop calling? What kind of scratches did they look like in the house? When you found your boy, shot 3 times, that was after he had been missing for a year?
>>602865968 Yea i know it wasnt you, didnt mean to make it look like it was to you. But seriously... how do you think you will manage to survive not knowing? Save up some money and go back, and bring someone with you, and im sure as someone else said, that you can pay someone. OR you can save up money wich im guessing will take a little while, try to make a friend meanwhile, someone who would go with you when you told him the story. Seriously do you think you can keep living your life just wondering? captha: ssoon
>>602866144 Background is regrettably lacking but the execution is situationally pretty good. Greentext is neither for nor really supports teriffic literary detail, its a minimalist syntax. Don't know if the lack of background harmed believeability but it definitely harmed impact.
>more spoopy if we care about the characters, real or otherwise
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