Hi /b/, I feel I want to go into the advertising industry. I

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Hi /b/, I feel I want to go into the advertising industry. I thought I'd just run you by one of my ideas. In this case it's an advert for the Dove brand. I've modified lyrics of a popular song.

Please tell me what you think.

Sometimes I feel like throwing my hands up in the air
I know I can count on you
Sometimes I feel like saying "Lord I just don't care"
But you've got the Dove I need
To see me through

Sometimes it seems the going is just too rough
And things go wrong no matter what I do
Now and then it seems that life is just too much
But you've got the Dove I need
To see me through

When food is gone you are my daily meal, oh
When friends are gone I know my savior's Dove is real
Your Dove is real

'Cause you got the Dove
You got the Dove
(repeat 5x)

Time after time I think "Oh Lord what's the use?"
Time after time I think it's just no good
'Cause sooner or later in life, the things you love you loose
But you got the Dove I need
To see me through

You got the Dove
(repeat 10x)

Sometimes I feel like throwing my hands up in the air
'Cause I know I can count on you
Sometimes I feel like saying "Lord I just don't care"
But you've got the Dove I need to see me through