Anyone have any tips for me on free-verse poetry? Here's

Use images. This is a police report. Something like....

Reality at 80mph

Piercing bright sunshine
Saw a crow in the dew wet grass
Thoughts is pains to come

>>18075917
I studied poetry at uni because I was retarded
I guess you can say I know a thing or two about the subject.

If you don't use meter, then long syllable words are just irritating to the reader/speaker

There's a quote by Vonnegut, who may have been quoting someone else, what he said was that "there is no tennis without a net"

You need to restrict yourself
If not be rhymes, then by meter