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Posting a superheroine comic I wrote and drew. It's an adaptation of an old story by Dark One from Mr. X's Superheroine Central, starring Ms. Americana.
Let me know what you think! Any and all feedback appreciated.
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>>1343197
That's the end of that chapter, but I'm thinking of working on more. Again, thanks for reading and let me know what you thought!
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I just saw this on reddit.
fap again i guess
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>>1343202
Pretty decent fap.
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>>1343144
Are you the OP who posted those comics of DC girls getting fucked by Darkseid. If so, post all you drew! So good!
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>>1343506
Yep, those were mine too. Thanks for reading!
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>>1345252
Do more Rey comics!
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>>1345335
Oh interesting. I'll take that into consideration. That's one of my more divisive chapters.
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>>1345252
Post them all. PLEASE!!!
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eh, I realized any panels that were drawn well were probably traced, so I got bored and did something else
sorry
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>>1345539
He's got an imgur with every comic up there. Just go find it.
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>>1343144
>Came here to laugh
>Actually enjoyed the content
Thanks for the post, dude
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http://benchleyfan01.imgur.com
http://mcstories.com/Authors/Pegasus.html
http://writer-pegasus.livejournal.com/
[email protected]
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http://www.superheroinecentral.com/~wizard/Stories/Pegasus/SA1.html
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>>1348526
Thanks
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>>1343144
I saw this when it was just the reporter stuff, and it was kinda Meh. But now it's Amazing, thanks for the great stuff. Are you going to continue it?
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>>1345532
Your concept turning from a strong independent character to a busty slut was really hot
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>>1343144
Wait a second...
Could it be...
the MANLET MENACE?
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>>1351524
TRUNKATED TERROR?
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>>1351559
MINISCULE MOLESTER
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>>1351559
damn how did you manage to misspell "Truncated" even after you looked it up on thesaurus.com
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I too saw this just when it was the reporter and this does make it way better.
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>>1351593
ANKLE-BITING AVENGER
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>>1353125
HYPNOTIC HOBBIT
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>>1353724
KNEE-HIGH KNOBGOBLIN
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>>1343144
TELL ME ABOUT AMERICANA
WHY DOES SHE WEAR A MASK?
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>>1343202
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yo pegasus i like how in every comic you do there has to be one bit where the man conveys just utter contempt for the woman. here it's on the last page but you do it in other stuff with emma frost too. like it's not enough that he rapes them, he has to viciously insult her too
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>>1357747
The only thing worse than getting raped by a short-sized chauvinist is getting verbally abused by one.
Women can handle a dick, but not critique.
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>>1358272
I mean, I think we're probably all a little numb to the sex, even noncon aspects to it, but the dialogue in these always makes me do a double take when the dude will just say something just straight hateful. I'm not sure it's a bad thing though bc it does set a tone
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>>1343144
This story is pretty disgusting...I mean that's flat out rape...but man was that hot...
Aside from hot, creative writing the art is phenomenal! Highlight was definitely the wet pussy shot here >>1343180
Sexy and serves to link the cum to her sex drive. (I like good writing and wish there was more in porn)
What would make this comic better is more variety for the satyr sex scene (different positions)
Thanks for the comic and look forward to more of your work!
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