Diaper Thread #130 [Insert something here] Edition

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>>1215748

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>Ryuuko poses for ABDl trading card photo

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>>1215794

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>>1215797

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So i like meru as much as the next person (besides that one other person) but man is it tedious to post the variants. Although they are super easy to edit up together to make other variants.

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>>1215811

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>>1215814

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>>1215817

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>>1215818

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Going to post a couple edits i've made. Going to do the ones i think are best (read: semi-decent)

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>>1215836

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>>1215841

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>>1215851
So you might recall an editfag in the last thread commenting how he wanted to get around to shopping out diapers of other pics so he wouldn't' be relying on the same few diaper pngs for editing. Yeah, that was me. Which btw, it's surprisingly hard to find good ones.

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>>1215870
>Q: Why did you edit in a diaper into a screencap for some random foreground/background character
>A: Because i can.

>>1215925
>but it's furry tho

>>1215841
Oh shit, I was going to request an edit of this pic one day. Good job, anon.

>>1215870
>diapered asian enf

Fuck yeah.

>>1215760
One of these days I'll get around to buying an outfit like that.

>>1215820
holy fuck that was adorable

>>1215794
wrestling for the mary sue spam title, which virgin will be the winner

How would you feel if there was a city devoted to keeping you in diapers?

>>1216358
you mean like a city of the robot nannies with various mechanical traps and conveyor belts and what not?
that would be fun for awhile until the mind numbing monotony set in and i wished for death every second

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>>1216368
Wasn't there also a short bit of writing about dungbeetle-like aliens that used human waste as fuel and had the entire planet subjugated to make them fill diapers?

>>1215811
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>>1215820

is there any more to this?

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>>1216377

also here is the gif version

>>1216375
jesus how terrifying

>>1215841
>>1215836
oh nice!

>>1216377
That set was posted to Meru's tumblr 12 hours ago. I don't think there's any more.

>>1216358
Sounds like story potential to me.
>you've just moved into town, ready to start your life, free and independant of your parents. >You got a well paying job, and everything's fine in the world
>but something seems off. Everyone around you almost seems too happy with their lives.
>shortly after unboxing your belongings, you learn that this town has it's own special law: all citizens must be diapered at all times.
>you're given your own pack of adult diapers to start off, and you are given a warning to never wear any other undergarments
>you decide that the punishment can't be that severe, and you just wear your usual panties anyway.
>eventually, you feel the need to go, only to realize that your house doesn't have a proper toilet built into your bathroom. Just a shower and a sink.
>desperate to not mess your panties, you grab a grocery bag and unload the contents of your bowels into the bag, and then tie it up and throw it in the trash.
>you do this for a few days, but also take notice of how police seem keep watch on every neighborhood every day and night.
>on top of that, your next door neighbor, who you've become fast friends with, seems to have disappeared overnight
>suddenly, one day out of nowhere, the police burst through your front door.
>"we've received complaints about an odor problem in the area, coming from your house, ma'am"
>the police proceed to check everywhere in the house until they find your collection of piss bottles and shitbags hidden away, and what you thought was out of sight and scent of anyone else
>the police then decide to give you a diaper check, and find that you're still wearing your panties.
>the police arrest you on the spot, and you're taken to the city jail for not following the diaper law
>the court proceedings don't go well either, with you being found guilty on all counts
>you expect capital punishment with how serious the city is taking your crime, but it turns out your punishment is much worse than that.

>>1216392
cont.
>you're taken to a room that's the size of a small preschool classroom, with what looks like an electric chair at the front.
>you look around the room, and see a bunch of adult babies look up at you, and you see that one of them is your next door neighbor
>you then come to the realization of what your sentence is going to be: age regression.
>you're hooked up to the chair, and a helmat is attached to your head.
>The executioner says "any last words, you big baby brat?"
>before you can respond, she suddenly pulls a lever and your head starts to feel funny
>your mind is being warped and your body starts to spasm from the effects of the torture
>you start to forget everything in life, your graduation day, your prom night, your first kiss, your tenth birthday, and the day you made it to the potty on time.
>after a few minutes, the executioner removes your helmet and unstraps you.
>your mind has gone to mush, and that mush is going from your head to your bowels.
>at that moment, your bowels nearly explode, letting out a massive load of fecal matter all over your clothes.
>you look up at the executioner and try to say something, but the only thing you can say is "mommy, I pooped my pants."
>the executioner looks down at you and says "it's ok sweetheart, let's go get your washed and changed into a fresh diaper"

>>1216375
THE PRODUUUUUUCE

>>1216505
>has been drawing for like 12-15 years now
>probably over 500 submissions on his deviantart
>hasn't so much as improved a tiny bit since the first one

How can one person actively stagnate so much? You must have to WORK to avoid getting better if nothing else but from the fact on how much you do it, how?

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>>1215820

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>>1216530

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>>1216532

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I'm fairly proud of this one. I was thinking about doing other variants (pink diapers, alt diaper designs somehow, pacifier if i can find a good one to use).

on the topic of lusamine fan fics involving her children. read this ive seen a spike in art based around her and family""""http://theoriginaldl.deviantart.com/art/COMM-Smothering-Mother-658770680

>>1215760
>I'll never be a diapered sissy

>>1216594
She's a hot, domineering, mentally unstable milf in a game franchise that spawns weird fetish porn on the regular. It was inevitable.

>>1215870
How DID Mulan relieve herself without getting found out?

>>1216583
ooooooh this one's lovely!

>>1216583
green and black diaper design, if possible

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>>1216702

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>>1216703

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>>1216704

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>>1216705

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>>1216707

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>>1216769

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>>1216583
pic related may have a decent paci, since you can probably rotate and such.

>>1216583
pink with red hearts

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>>1216622
Nothing is stopping you from buying some cute frilly dresses and diapers anon, go on and indulge your fantasy, you know you want to, don't be scared just slip it on your outfit and become a little princess that you want to be.

>>1216949
Well, you know, except for his genetic code, hormones, smegma-covered dick, sagging hairy beer gut, and his vulgar, raunchy, all-pervading male lust that leads him to indulge in grotesque sex fantasies.

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>>1216955
Just because you can't do it, doesn't mean you can set up imposings based on yourself *just* for the sole purpose of putting him down.

>>1216981
Maybe not, but the fact that he is exactly the kind of person I described (to the point where he may not even have other characteristics than those I mentioned) DOES mean that I can put him down.

AND, the fact that you're trying to encourage him and to interfere with me also means that you deserve shame and embarrassment for being a deranged freak.

But I'm sure you're already aware of this and that your response was merely a spontaneous kneejerk reaction. At least I hope so, for your sake.

>>1216991
>People who want to wear/get off to diapers are deranged freaks.

says the anon on the diaper thread.

>>1217016
not that guy, but objectively we are, can't help it however so just accept it

>>1217020
even so, that doesn't give people the right to kink shame.

>>1217026
Actually it does.
It's pretty much the universal requirement to successfully legitimize kinkshaming.

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>>1216991
>sagging hairy beer gut, and his vulgar, raunchy, all-pervading male lust
>the fact that he is exactly the kind of person I described (to the point where he may not even have other characteristics than those I mentioned)
Dude, you're projecting. The fact that you're sitting in a chair with a diaper on and a dick in your hand tells me that you're really not in a position to kinkshame.

If you're not wearing a diaper, why are you in a diaper thread? If your dick's not in your hand, why are you on a porn board? Perhaps I can direct your alternative "facts" back to a more appropriate board: >>>/pol/

>>1217029
There is no such thing as legitimate shaming, it's just being an ass for the sake of being an ass, not to sound tumblr but people should be able to enjoy whatever they want without getting shamed for it.

If he doesn't like diapers then why the fuck is he here?

>>1217073
>it's a fact

>>1217079
I'm not implying it, I'm pointing it out.

>>1217083
Proofs?

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Come on now people at least post pics.

>>1217092
No, give proofs for
>However, it's a fact that he is the kind of person I described, otherwise he wouldn't have made that post

>>1217104
>gives meme [generic internet fetishist] description
>durr this is how everybody looks like

>>1217073
>stop liking what I don't like.

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Funny enough i did a similiar edit job with a different aisha pic.

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>>1217122
So hey remember in v for vendetta when everyone is wearing guy fawkes masks? It kind of feels like that with Lifanias diaper editing pack.

sidenote, i try applying a grain filter to the diaper so it would blend in the rest of pic. I don't know it if it totally worked.

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Hey guys, when will you realize shitting on others for no reason but to shit on them is a core essence of 4chan?

>>1217125
Haha, Cyatomorrow must be very happy seeing his edit request getting done by someone else, he was very passive agressive about it not getting in and damning the moeblob trend.

You should play around with colour adjustment and brightness levels.

Notice how the bra is very dulled in colour, that's how white looks in that image, try to make it blend in.

>>1217196
Thanks for the advice. It was a just quickie but i might do what you suggested for practice sake.

>>1217196
If I weren't so anti-furry I'd happily concur with Cya.

Anyway I saw your DPD-chan edit yesterday and she's fucking neato.

>>1217196
>Cyatomorrow
god that guy is among the blurst of DA, right alongside Yami

>>1217107
Imagine having as little understanding of language and subtext as this
It's almost funny. Almost.

>>1217211
Yami's an entirely different kind of autismo.

Cya is a rabidly defensive whiteknight who thinks very highly of "the community" and wants to preserve the safespace where he can show off his selfies from any and all forms of criticism because he firmly believes that being a diapered freakshow should be normal. He even lost his job over this shit.

Yami is just an illiterate pedo with a fetish for swearwords.

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>>1217211
>t. RayKamiya
Yami is absolute cancer for sure, though.

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>>1217211
>yami
I'm honestly very tempted to send him that diaper cutout pack but i don't know if he would know what to do with it.

Another rejected pic that i liked enough to do.

>>1217223
seeing how you can't open work with those pics on MSPaint, he wouldn't do anything with it.

>>1217222
>RayKamiya
i don't keep up with the latest DA drama, could you give me a quick rundown on this?

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>>1217230
He's an autist from FTT who makes long journals about users whenever his fee-fees are hurt. He has a particular obsession for ranting about Cya.

>>1217228
fug this is bad

oh man

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>>1217229
>gimp? Sounds fucking gay.
>Adobe has a free photoshop out? whatever too much work.
His incompetence astounds me.

>tfw no wakfu diaper fic centering around Frida and the Sufokian bridge bunnies diapering each other.

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>>1217245
Don't tempt me, anon. I left that hell called "ABDL Fanfic" for a reason.

>>1217254
cause you're slow as shit, come up with awkwardly-written OCs and can't write more than three sentences of diaper content per chapter?

>>1217269
Exactly

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>>1217206
Colour adjustment is pretty quick as well when you're just trying to make it match something else.

>>1217209
Go home oldfag, oh and thanks, I sort of wanted to do more with the "outer plating" of the diaper, but couldn't come up with something that wasn't just dumb or removing the diaper look. Tried putting DPD on it in raised letters but it just didn't fit, thought about carving it in as well but thought fuck it at that point.

>>1217211
He's very hostile to anything hostile to himself or his beliefs.

he can make some good points, and then it all falls apart as he goes and attacks the person he argues with.

He's also classically one of those people that fight hard for their own right and to be respected by others, but does not respect others, it's a very illogical way of approaching things. "my way or the highway"

>>1217234
He certainly loves making journals.

>>1217223
>musclebutt
>diaperbutt
Stop, my penis is already erect!

>>1217274
the design you gave it works fine, if I feel that it needs more details I can always add them anyway

>>1217279
>penis
I knew it

>>1217291
sissy clitty*

>>1217295
[tremendous disgust]

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>>1217234
Ray and cya are kind of two heads of the same coin in a lot of ways. They're perfect for each other.

>>1217320
One of the first Mass Effect ABDL arts in a long time, and it's of Liara! But it's by RFSwitched, one of the most hit or miss "Big" diaper artists, and the commissoner asked for hypermess, "lel the stupid girl can't potty right," and sound effects.

It hurts.

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>>1217337
I feel your pain, anon.

>>1217339

Is it so much to ask to just have ME diaper art where the AB/DL and caretaker are just playing, in a chill way? The last ME diaper art I remember is that Miranda comm Rinnono had where I'm pretty sure she was mentally regressed and with an OC playmate.

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>>1217345
This one, for reference.

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>>1217351

And just so I'll stop whining, here's an ME pic I did like.

>>1217360
rageman said he was going to do all the squadmates of me2, never did.

>>1217337
Well, I hope you like Meru, because she did some of Liara

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>>1217374
Interesting to note was that he was asked to do 7 of them, while ME2 only has 6 girl squadmates. I guess the guy wanted Morinth too or we were going to get the first and only Legion diaper art. The commissioner skipped out on the other 3 I think. Which is REALLY disappointing because diapered Samara would be a dream come true.

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>>1217385
> Liara snooping through Shepard's Extranet history because she's a data broker. Incorporating lore and implied character traits into the fetish.
> The only mental damage present is the obligatory amount necessary for this fetish.
> The diaper resembles an Abena, but is redeemed by not being an exact copy and flowing well with Liara's coat.
> "Mommy," So the requester knows FemShep is best Shep.

Flatboobs or not, MY DICK IS MAXIMUM.

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>>1217398

And she actually slightly changed Liara's face between wet and dry. I forgive the Daria scat pics.

>>1217398
i think theres so fun stuff you could do with an alien character discovering abdl, like maybe their species develops so fast they're never actually babies, or something like that

>>1217390
>Legion diaper art
Please god yes

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>>1217418

I was always partial to the idea where some of an Asari's development milestones are out of whack compared to humans because of evolution or a natural 1000 year lifespan. Like by year 40 or 50 it's all settled down, but it's not uncommon for diapers to be necessary for Asari until mid 20s or even longer if you're a late bloomer. And if every Asari stays in diapers so long, some would LIKE wearing diapers again every now and then even centuries later. With some of them wanting to be babied and cared for, like back before their parents forced them to start changing their own diapers.

Then the human ABDL market/industry finds out about this part of the Asari and it all just falls into place. They get models EVERY species thinks is hot and who tend to legitimately get into the photoshoots and videos. And then many of the replaced human models and actresses get upset over aliens stealing their jobs. Then again in canon ME a fair few maiden Asari probably do work in ABDL stuff just for the fun of it/it's unique work.

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I'm taking a crack at coloring this. Think the diaper should have N7 colors like the jacket will or should I try for a "Paragon in the front, Renegade in the back" deal?

>>1216583
I love this pic. I love how smug and proud of her diapered body she looks. I'm dying to bury my face into her diaper as she fills it up.

fuck I'm gonna need a caption on that one ASAP

>>1217456
see i think it would be fun to go the other way, with a species that doesn't have analogues to human babyhood or diapers but like to be cared for still

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>>1217398
>>1217402

>>1217122
Ah, kinda wondered if my shit edit would show up on here or not?

do you guys ever find it weird that prior to a 100 years ago toddler boys were dressed up in the same clothes as girls?

>>1217651
You could see it the other way around: toddler girls were dressed like toddler boys

>>1217658
true but they wore clothes that today we would consider girls clothes

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>>1217651
It made sense in the era; when a toddler is in a skirt, still doing potty training, it's easier to just lift a skirt to change a diaper. It's also easier to start potty training, since the skirt is easier to get out of the way to go to the bathroom.

>>1217483
I'd say n7 colors

>>1217686
yeah i've read the wikipedia article to, i just mean its funny that what we in abdl would call sissy was literally the norm back then. for rich kids at least

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>>1216675
Here you go. Not the most eloborate thing ever and i think i might have done this ass backwards, but i think it beats me trying to do an elaborate design by hand (i mean there's a reason i'm editing this stuff together as oppose to just drawing art).

>>1216829
I can certainly try using it. Thank you.

>>1216943
I'll look into doing that as well.

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>>1217723
Bonus one. This was a test to see how i would be able to do a design for the plastic strip. I think it's a decent attempt. I do want to do a special design with tofu and/or goball as a sort of in universe thing. Having mixed results with that.

we need lusamine gladion diaper NOW

>>1217795
Pro-Tip: Artists tend to draw stuff you ask them to if you give them money.

>>1217858
but they shouldn't do it for the MONEY they should do it for the PASSION of creating PURE diaper porn art, or some other incoherant ramblings

>>1217254
The funny thing is that this is pretty close to accurate

Star DOES remotely spy on Jackie and cause a skateboard wipeout when she's with Marco

And ALSO inexplicably even though Star knows like only 15 spells, one of them is a summon diaper spell she uses once near the end of season 2 (she uses it on a dog)

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>>1217690

Yeah I'm giving it a shot, it's looking pretty alright but i dunno.

>>1217483

So I guess three questions.

1. Y/N/M on the diaper colors? I had the brown swatch leftover from trying to make her hair color so I tossed it on because it seemed alright when Meru did it.

2. Anyone know the process for making a sort of stamp/symbol thing I can import (In Photoshop but I may switch around)? Like if I wanted to have a transparent Paragon symbol on the landing zone or make things wetness indicators.

3. Is there an easy way to make not-shit freckles? These seem okish until you zoom in at all.

>>1216955
I'm small and I run a lot. I'm cute but I'm afraid of finding a dom

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>>1217934
I'd recommend swapping the red/brown out for black, fits the N7 color scheme better.

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>>1217887
>princessification spell
>diaper spell
>hair change spell (that episode where she rapidly changed her hair from pony tails to twin tails)
>clothing change spell

Star is checking all my boxes, I wish I had an open minded magical girl house mate, that'd make life so much more fun, though I doubt I'd be capable of fighting monsters like marco, I'd proberbly be kidnapped and she'd have to rescue me which isn't the worst thing, I don't mind being the damsel in distress even if that involved princessification hypnosis.

>>1217686
I remember having trouble getting my pants unbuttoned as a kid. They were always tight hand me downs so it wasn't JUST my dexterity, but waiting until I was about to burst caused a few accidents.
One time was when being babysat (笑) at my grandma's and, being a classy old lady, she didn't have any pants. So I had to wear a spare skirt of hers.
It was kind of interesting. Non-sexual, fairly long, plain colored. Just convenient.

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>>1218075

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>>1218076

>>1217874
artists need to pay their bills too they can't draw stuff all day unless they get money from people.

>>1218076
my dick has reached a 10.1 on moh's hardness scale

>>1217430
Or even better.

Legion doing diaper changing duty.

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Edit?

>>1218251
I second this.

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>>1216829
So i ended up using a a different pacifier (from a PoS pic) because it's at an angle and turning it would still make it look lopsided. Still, it's a good pic and I have it handy now for a future edit. Again thanks.

I'm not sure if i should make pacifier darker, lighter, or do something else entirely.

>>1215748
Can we get some sissy/abdl hypnosis in the mix
Thanks

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For all you Mass Effect and Blueberry fans, just realize this. Natalie Dormer is voicing an Asari doctor in Andromeda. There is going to be so much fap fuel of her it's crazy.

after seeing some ageplay videos on youtube i am ready to leave the fandom forever.

>>1218562
I found a really funny one with a guy with this boston accent "eh just feel comfortable poopin' in yeh dipahs" on hypnofetish though that was purely abdl though I did find a good one on there called "sissy baby girl" search for that not sure if I can link it directly because how the site is layed out.

>>1218562
>>1218592
Here you guys go, I'm too lazy to post them in thread
http://hypnohub.net/post?tags=Diaper

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The new meme character

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>>1217934
And now it's basically finished, barring me going back and failing to shade Shepard and Garrus's armor. I couldn't not try to shade his head because it looked awful in flat color. Took about 6 hours to color from start to finish, a lot of which is chalked up to me figuring out what brushes and tools do what and layers.

The Moral of the Story: Segmented armor can go fuck itself.

>>1217986
I went with gray ultimately, cause a black diaper looked real bad with the black jacket right there too. I dunno maybe I'll go back again and think of something else, gray still seems dull.

>>1218594
Thanks I've been needing to pad up my collection.

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>>1218529
Eh, I just posted that as an option for you to use, I'm fine with you not using it, it was just a pacifier that was of good quality that may or may not have been useful to you.

However, it's always nice when the pacifier matches the diaper (when they aren't wearing anything else) or something else they're wearing.

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herp derp
http://www.deviantart.com/art/WARNING-DeviantArt-SOLD-yourArt-will-be-exploited-665667852

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>>1218845
I figured you wouldn't be offended, but i like to be nice about stuff like that anyways. I went with a complete green paci to match the tapes, but i might go for something a bit more two toned (taking your advice and try to make it match the diaper). So yeah work in progress.

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>>1218967
I know people like it when the diaper matches the clothes or whatever on a character, but personally i've always been a bit of a fan of the contrast of a plain white diaper.

>>1218971
integration is key, especially when the character is looking confident; it's crucial to show that diapers are a part of their lifestyle and of their very person.

>>1218905
What's the point of posting that?
Is that supposed to be a problem?
Aren't you diaperfags doing the exact same shit by editing art of others and removing their site addresses?

>>1219149
What are you talking about Jerry

>>1219149
>some Norwegian cunt editing a diaper on a picture and not making any money off of it is the same as a billionaire dollar company being allowed to use a piece of art royalty free

>>1218905
Scroll down in that journal, it's not that bad.

>>1218635
>6 hours
>Daddy Garrus
Fuck off, Brave. This latest obsession is too retarded even for you.

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>>1219258
>brave
Who?

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So anybody know a writer that somebody can commission a decent diaper fic from?

>>1219441
>comission
>diaper fic

I wasn't even aware people still wrote diaper fics for comission.

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>>1219441
>>1219447
http://theunthinker.deviantart.com/

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>>1219447
Don't know anybody who does but thought I might as well ask in case there was instead of just throwing an idea out there and hoping a writefag likes it.

they're talking about ab on another board i visit again

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>>1218251
>>1218279
threw it together, also those pants are weird and fucky.

>>1219441
I'll write it

So, I'm thinking about going to a CVS nearby and buying some diapers, would they be worth it?

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>>1219452
TheUnthinker is pretty good about using language in such a way that they're pretty easy to get off to, but in terms of actual writing, he's kinda meh.

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>>1219475
You familiar with Girls und Panzer? Something involving Yukari being cared for and messing her diapers for Mommy Miho would be amazing.

>>1219479

Is getting them from the internet not an option? There's no instant gratification in it but it saves the risk of running into anyone you know.

I recently got some for the first time, but I live with my boyfriend and a roommate who works weird hours, so I ended up just ordering them from Amazon and HDIS. Packaging was innocuous, so there wasn't a problem.

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>>1219479
>>1219492
I mean, just get it bagged and park close. As long as you can just go alone and dont recognize anyone in the store, thats probably better than having it mailed and someone in your house opening the package.

>>1219501
Just ask them not to open your packages or get a P.O box

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>>1219490
Oh shit, I love the fuck out of GuP. Was even going to write something of my own volition if I got it.
Got any more for that idea? I might be able to work it into something.

>>1219501

Ah yeah, I hadn't thought about that. A lot of stores have that service now, that's pretty dang handy.

>>1219510
Yukari straddling her mommy's knee and getting bounced on it would be amazing.

I figure Miho would be her usual sweet and kind self but during play she could be a pretty strict disciplinarian while still keeping that smile on her face. Yukari loves that kind of humiliation from admitting she's a baby girl to getting spanked.

Also fluffly cuddling after everything else is over is always a plus.

>>1219488
>kinda
That's being generous. Dude is also a narcissistic psycho.

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>>1219510
For the diapers themselves maybe either camo pattern because Yukari's a military geek or those bandage bears Miho loves on them? Yukari could also just cuddle with one of those.

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>>1219547
>>1219557
I like your enthusiasm. Would Miho really be a disciplinarian though? I'd figure you could toss Yukari to Maho or Erika if she wanted some discipline. Imagine being babied by both the Nishizumis.

>>1219564
Not a super disciplinarian or anything I just imagine that she could to a little of it because she knows it gets Yukari off. She's still mostly reassuring and comforting.

Also both Nishizumi's, Yukari would probably pass out from joy.

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>>1219577
Alright, dubsman, I'll see what I can do.

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>>1219595

>>1219699
jesus christ...

>>1219488
Thank you and yes my storytelling isn't anything special but that's because people skip to the fetish parts anyways.

>>1219551
This is an oddly specific statement.

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>>1219724
Wish you wouldn't include so much babytalk.

>>1219471
T-Thank you!

>>1219471
Excellent. Now, we just gotta send it to her.

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>>1219740
It's something commissioners specifically ask for almost every time. But yes, I know how it can be distracting/annoying.

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>>1219792

>>1219724
Do you ever get bored writing the same descriptions over and over? Drool, tardie?

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>>1219838
I shift it around enough that not really. That's why I try not to take too many commissions from any one commissioner, it mixes up what gets emphasized.

Of course maybe you'll tell me that all my stories are too similar to you.

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And here's the pacifier version. Tried to have the colors match the diaper and i think it looks okay for the most part. Again, did it ass backwards than someone who knows what they're doing would do, but hey It works, i suppose. Next up i'm going to try the pink and/or hearts diaper next. Feel free to give me suggestions for other designs or something else.

>>1219855
Basically. They're all identical, clownish, and full of errors.

>>1219855
You're the Pink Diapers of stories.

>>1219938
Ouch! I mean I'm not a fan of his stuff either but that's a little harsh.

>>1219945
Have you read TheUnthinker? It's hilariously cringe.

What other diaper authors are out there worth reading? Any good stockpiles of content?

>>1215748
Stop posting niggers in this thread.

>>1219945
>“N-No! I notta tard!” Annie said, spitting all over herself as she did so. She stumbled and fell on her butt, continuing to mess herself as she did so. Her diaper turned dark brown, the telltale sign that she had pooped herself.

How is it not accurate?

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>>1219948
I think cowkites is good for fap stuff.

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>>1219950
>“N-No! I notta tard!”
I shouldn't laugh.

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>>1219948
Which ones are you reading currently?

>>1219950
>As Annie struggled, she just kept pooping. Her diaper got tighter and tighter as it filled up with her poop until it couldn’t hold any more and it began pushing out the leg holes and dropped on the floor.

>“Uh huh, that’s right Jentard. You’re going to be a big giant pooping retard for the rest of your life. How’s that feel? Sometimes I’m going to parade you around school and show everyone Jentard the diaper pooping retard. And you’re just going to sit there with that dumb grin on your face and make a big giant poopy in your diaper. Got it?”

>>1219950
>Her diaper turned dark brown, the telltale sign that she had pooped herself.

This is like describing poop as poopy and pooplike and poopish.

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>>1220012
not even my stories are this bad, holy shit, where do I start with this? That dialogue is rather below average, this person uses the word "poop" way too much.

The writing's a bit telly rather than showy. I mean, really, if you're going to write a scene where the shit gets out of your diaper and goes down your leg (And honestly you shouldn't be writing this to begin with) you should be devoting like a paragraph to describing that action. How does it feel? How does it smell? How does she react? What is her exact feeling before, during and after? You can't just say shit like "her diaper got tighter and tighter as it filled with her poop" and expect people to fap to that shit.

The diaper doesn't fill up with her poop, she's shitting into it. The diaper isn't getting tighter, it's barely trying to hold on as the weight pulls on the tapes, with the mess pushing to every corner of her diaper, invading every inch of her backside.

Fucking descriptive language, holy shit, use it. Poop is not an erotic word, either. Find a better one.

>>1219584
Somebody color this pls.

>>1220012

Wait, is this people mocking him, or is this legitimately how he writes; if so, hoooly shit is this bad. You can tell he wrote this one-handed whilst imagining a spaz shitting a 3rd of their body weight into their diaper.

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>>1220081
It's pretty bad.

>>1220093
>poop used 548 times
>tard used 86 times
SEO optimized

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>>1220093
>onomatopoeia

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>>1220112
There's a lot of that, too

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>>1220117
>her butt cheeks vibrated as she let out the loudest fart she had ever heard into her diaper

I don't even know what to say. This is a nightmare. I hate to trash an author but holy shit.

>>1220117
What do you expect? His fursona is a sewer rat. So many furries are pamperchus and people enable the fuck out of them.

>>1220132
Pamperchus and actual pedos.

>>1220117
>pfffft!
>loudest fart she had ever heard

>pfffft
>loudest

>>1220117
>>1220093
I wanna hear a dramatic reading of this.

>>1220117
>reading this
>comparing it to the glorious Tomoko story of years past

Truly, these are dark times we live in.

>>1220508
jesus christ how fucking horrifying

>>1219948
Goodtimes has a pretty good series on pastebin. Looks like he's gone on hiatus though so don't expect a resolution to the second one.
http://pastebin.com/u/GoodTimes

Besides him, Personalis is pretty fantastic. Dante's Infanzia was I think a little longer than it needed to be, and the ending was a bit cheesy, but it was still a great read. He seems to have gone on a hiatus as well. Hasn't posted anything in nearly a year.
http://personalias.deviantart.com/

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>>1220093
>>1220117
I don't want to be an elitist ass because there are much worse shit out there, but this could be so much better.

>>1220511
which parts are bad? how can i make it better?

>>1220522
the subject matter is bad and the execution is bad.

here's how to improve it:

1- pick something nice to draw instead of something horrendous
2- draw it well instead of badly

>>1220527
thanks

>>1220508
whats with the upswing in furry posts recently

>>1219949
Sorry Grand Wizard. Shall we burn a cross to appease you?

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Someone in the last thread mentioned /m/ and my immediate thought went to G Gundam. This was the result. I have to double check if there was any good Allenby Beardsley pic to work with.

>>1220834

Bretty gud. It need some shading to match the rest though.

>>1220508
Can we not.

>>1220518
Are you fucking retarded?

>>1220531
Good criticism taker.

>>1220679
You know where the fuck we are don't act like he's wrong.

>>1220945
>le edgy anonymoose
You know we're just tumblr with a more vulgar sense of humor now. Stop being a romantic.

>>1220527
Fuck off back to tumblr, furry. Your shitty goat characters were deleted and you'll be banned next.

>>1220953
k

>>1220117
You know whats the best? He can say the excess usage of "poop" and "hurr, tard" is due to the commissioner, but not the rest. Its all a ploy. You can't blame the quality of a story on the commissioner, only the subject matter. Every single caption and story of his lacks editing, commissioned or not. There's no proof reading implemented, its constant filler and repetition. He types one handed and spams his "stories", then justifies his inability to improve by saying we're all one person hating on him.

>>1220527
Take your own advice, furfag.

>>1220117
http://68.media.tumblr.com/ab48d61762e03153cb69c37f8f2e6f63/tumblr_o3scg9doHh1tvwlseo1_540.jpg

These are rich.

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>>1220981
Fucking witches, man.

Huh, I had no idea I inspired so much hatred from 4chan. You guys have made my day.

>>1221006
Try hard.

>>1221006
Way to be dismissive of some very fair writing critiques and prove the criticism about your personality to be valid. You do realize there are many different voices here, right? Lumping them together does not make you a victim of "big bad 4chan", it makes you look ignorant and laughable.

>>1221091
Well if you have some clear critique then I'm all ears.

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>>1221118
not that anon but see >>1220038

Try to show rather than tell.

>>1221118
See >>1220963
>>1220038

>>1221125
>>1221124
So your main critique is I need to work on show v tell? Honest question here.

>>1221128
Everything. Did you read all these posts? You need to learn to edit, reread what you write for starters. You're failing at basic grammar and spelling.

>>1221130
Grammar and spelling? I am making spelling mistakes in my stories? Again, honest question.

>>1220834
nice, but try to correct the outlines' color: they should be black instead of red

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>>1221128
Nitpicking on someone's everything happens to be a specialty of mine, so let me break it down for you.

Yes. But it's more than that. You need to quit it with the onomatopoeia, and use description to show us what's happening. If a character is the main character, we should get an indepth description that appeals to all applicable senses for the things they experience. If they mess themselves, that's feel and smell. Sight if they look down at their quickly drooping diaper. If they're looking at someone who's messing themselves, that's sight and scent. You can appeal to hearing on both of those, but it shouldn't be a big part of it. You shouldn't put the majority of the focus on the noise of the fart, which you do by putting in the onomatopoeia. Doing so invests the reader into the story and gives them everything they need to picture it in their heads. And don't put things like "The telltale sign that she had pooped herself." afterwards. We know what happened, and unless it's routine, a character won't phrase it like that in their heads.

Poop isn't an erotic word. Now I'm not even into messing, though I've written a scene or two with it, but poop is a word I avoid entirely, like shit. Use mess, or even "the filthy contents of her diaper" might be better. Dance around the topic. A little subtlety goes a long way. She can ignore the fact that her diaper is filled to the brim, but she cannot ignore the scent that clings to her nostrils and serves as a reminder. The scent of fecal matter is very strong, so that should be the thing that you focus on.

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>>1221154
I haven't really read your stuff much, though, so I have to go off of the posted examples. You need word variation. You can't just say "poop" every line and expect it to be good. You need to refer to it differently in different ways. You don't always need to refer to the fecal matter itself, you could spend that time referring to the smell and having one character enjoy it or try to ignore it. The scent might be the biggest factor of it depending on who it is that's done it. Some characters might find the smell the most offensive, while others might find the way the mess sticks to their skin or spreads through their diaper to be the best or worst feeling in the world. Some might take a moment to sit down and rub their bottom over it, while the other might do anything, just anything, to get a change. Others still might not even find those two the biggest factor, but the fact that they actually did it to be the core of it. Embarrassment and humiliation could lead someone to break down in tears a lot faster than simply having their backside marinating in their own filth. This allows you to both add characterization to the person (If the biggest thing for them is the fact that there's a hunk of shit pushing against their skin due to the diaper, and there's nothing they can do about it and that's enough to make them cry, we learn that they're a clean person who likes cleanliness, a lot more than "i have to poopy!")

>>1221154
Ahh, are you nitpicking anon? The fiery elf?

I agree with most of this. A couple points if I may:

The reason I focus on farting is I have a fart fetish. Fart fetish stories tend to have excessive onomatopoeia, I'm actually very tame. For an example:
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Aina-The-Fart-Over-553488349

I don't describe every messing in detail because I find it gets redundant. But yes, I should focus on other parts of it more often.

I disagree that poop isn't an erotic word but again, your point about subtlety is spot on.

Thanks for the critique! Very fair in my mind.

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>>1221174
Lastly, dialogue. What the fuck, man? I'm going to assume the "Annie" and "Jentard" characters were different ones, and not question how that would be a name change, but your dialogue needs changing. (no pun intended)

Good characterization would involve removing some of that dialogue. Get into Wendy's head, make her stretch a bit, enjoy the air touching her skin, give her a bit of joy that people are seeing her diaper. Make her stretch in a way that makes her diaper crinkle loudly so that people's eyes are drawn more to it, in case they didn't catch it. End with her patting her diaper a few times.

Don't say "I hate wearing big girl clothes." If you remove that, the next line about "The only thing I hate more than big girl clothes is pretending to be potty trained" could be forgiven. I'm all for casual diapers, but the way she talks about it is way too casual. Again, you could have her flaunt it. Make sure people get the smell, know exactly how it feels, especially if those characters are going to end up in diapers one way or another. You could have her take the last person and explain to them exactly how it will feel as they get diapered up against their will. Dialogue is an important part of writing, and it really needs to be more than "HEY I'M A BABY GUYS"

You also miss punctuation at the end of lines, and you don't actually have to vary the "said" lines. Wendy said, Levy said, Rick said, Megatron said. Use any other line than "Said" and it'll pop out at the reader, and constant variation can exhaust a reader, even if they don't realize it, as they'll be taking it as an indicator of something important.

In other words, the word "Said" is invisible to the reader and serves only to make sure you know who's talking. You tag every dialogue with that, and when something's important you can use something else. Asked if the question is important, exclaimed if it's loud and important, scream if the person is in extreme anger or terror.

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>>1221176
Yup, that's me. I didn't realize you knew of me.

I don't mean to come off as mean spirited (Though I'm harsh), but I like to be thorough in critiques, just as I prefer people to be as harsh and thorough with my work.

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>>1220861
Haven't ever done shading but i will try my hand at it. I dunno, i don't think it's going to turn out well so yeah.

>>1221140
I think i can do that.

>>1221195
>>1221199
No, you're fine(although you perhaps could have done without the 'what the fuck, man?')

For that last critique;

What story of mine are you referring to in the first paragraphs?

And for the second part, I'm aware of how 'said' works in stories, are you saying that I use it too little? I've always felt it's been my default.

>>1221006
Narcissism incarnate.

>>1221239
I was going off of >>1220012 which I thought were from the same character, but I wasn't sure.

My point with the said stuff was in >>1220117 when "Asked" came in a few times, and you used verbs like "Grinned" and "Whimpered" in place of speaking verbs, though I suppose the second one could work out.

That one was more of a nitpick than anything, I could be off-base on that one.

>>1221134
Read your tumblr. It's full of them. Learn to proof.

>>1221176
>fart fetish
And there we have it. Nevermind. Don't worry about your writing, Jentard. You are clearly doing the best you can.

>>1221263
I don't believe they were the same character.

Personally I've always thought of 'asked' as a neutral verb like 'said' but that's interesting. I'll look into that.

Either way, thanks for the critique. It's hard to get solid criticism as a writer.

>>1221268
Can you cite specific examples? I'm legitimately curious.

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>>1221314
>It's hard to get solid criticism as a writer.

Especially in this interest. Basic writing knowledge is all it takes to get worshiped. Honest critiquers are difficult to find.

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>>1221324
Amen to that

>>1221316
Literally the first caption on your tumblr you do incorrect structure on the dialogue.

>>1221338
You mean the commas? It's unusual but not grammatically incorrect. I do need to cut back on doing that though and I'm pretty sure I have. That caption is years old.

How do I stop my place from smelling like a shitty diaper.

>>1221347
Nope. Now you're being purposefully obtuse. You're beyond redemption, fartfuck.

>>1221407
don't walk around with a load of shit in your pants

>>1220117
>>1220093
>these are arousing to me

should i just end myself right now

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>>1221316
You know the main purpose of any criticism, no matter how constructive or not it is, is to reflect on it, look at your work and see if it applies?

Asking about specifics and details about every thing people complain about when it's broad and factually simple statements like "your grammar needs work", you don't ask for exerpts, you look over your text for grammatical errors, see if you can find patterns in what you do wrong, pay extra attention to the problem if you keep doing that same thing wrong over and over again.

Criticism is to help you catch things you were unaware of, make you question what you thought were correct, make you aware of things you just didn't realize, it's not for people to hold your hand and show you some imaginary objective truth and the right way to success.

Unless you are trolling people, which is fully possible given the behaviour, I have no doubt you really do think you're just asking for help and you want people to give you examples of grammatical errors to both have them show what they mean and to make you aware that "oh yeah, shit I missed that". It's meant well and there is nothing bad about it on the outside.

However, actually that kind of behaviour signals the exact opposite, unwillingness to improve, to only bother fixing something if people can literally put it in your hands and say "here is what's wrong, fix it", it's your job to fix your work, you have to decide if people are right or wrong, look over your work with the feedback in mind and see if there is any legitimacy to it and act accordingly instead of expecting everything spoonfed to you.

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>>1221437
It's fine to have guilty pleasures

>>1221324
Yes, you practically have to begged to get criticism and even then you get jack shit.

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>>1221437
Allow me to ruin it for you:

All of these characters are furries, the dude just conveniently glosses over describing anything about the characters that might indicate that. Or any descriptions of what the characters look like at all, really.

At some point I ran across his text game and thought it was alright. I'm pretty big into brain drain and messing so I could overlook the shoddier points.

But then there was a rat shitting in a diaper at the end. A second glance made me notice a laundry list of what the characters were supposed to look like and they were all furry.

Ruined any enjoyment for me, but I was more perplexed by how I read through a path without every running into one additional description the characters weren't human. How do you fucking dodge that?

(pic unrelated, here's some content)

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just why

>>1221460
There's a difference between having guilty pleasures and being sick in the head anon.

>>1221594
Jentard explained at last.

question: Is it possible for there to be a good ABDL writer? Or is this fetish doomed to have shit writers forever?

>>1221653
>shit writers
heh

>>1221653
Sure, so long as they're not of the "those who can't draw, write" variety. Some writers have a severe complex in this community because they want to draw, but are unwilling to commit to learning anything properly, so they settle for writing and then develop these massive inflated egos as a defense mechanism for their crippling insecurity and lack of motivation.

See: Manlyn, Owlcunt, TheUnthinking, etc.

>>1219699
Rellen has gone from "Ok artist still learning" to "Has gotten worse".

>>1221697
>Manlyn
Who?

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>>1221461
Nothing you couldn't figure out yourself. I long for someone to just break down my door and tell me every tiny detail that's wrong with my stuff.

...Which I get, luckily enough, because not all of my work is diaper related, and I keep a healthy writing pace with such savage editors in order to keep my writing somewhere above decent.

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>>1221653
Depends on your definition of "good." I really liked thisonecoolguy's works, even if they were replete with certain errors and stuff. Disappointed I never got to read "She Just Won't Change" but I enjoyed "Pamperess" well enough, even if the action could be better.

The May anon was pretty good, too, though I still haven't finished that.

>>1221708
Self proclaimed best writer around and drama queen, ABKatelyn.

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>>1221745
Well I've never heard of her.

>>1221750
Funny, since I hadn't either until she came into a thread a few weeks back and had jamjar sized shitfit.

>>1221697
Owlcan draws a lot, but he's apparently unable to learn. He's got the bad kind of perfectionism; the autistic kind. The kind that focuses on a clean execution at the expense of everything else. As a result he never grows out of his mannerisms even if he knows they're wrong.

He's only been drawing for two years though, so he could still improve, but it's painful to watch him try to change his habits only for it to result in a slightly differently-shaped foot or ear.

But it's not like he really cares anymore, he has bills to pay and a bunch of patrons who'll accept anything as long as it's done quick. No time to improve.