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Hello, /aco/! I heard is X-mas!
Dropping pages of my comic.
How do you like it?
Seems neat
keep it coming, op
i like it
>>1081759
I remember you. Good stuff.
...I'll prepare the beams.
better not try to sell us the last half like last time OP
keep em coming
can we just get a link? If you want to shitpost a dozen threads while uploading this then just give us the link.
>>1081759
we had this thread before when aco was just starting, good comic though.
what other things have you done op?
>>1082106
Actually working in the 2nd chapter with a new girl and a different topic.
>>1082109
Are you still begging for money over it? Im not trying to be rude but keep putting out content till you start getting popular then do commissions and then ultimately like Dmitri subscription based.
>tfw you will never use magic to turn a good Christian girl into an obedient sex slave
>>1081761
>how this happened
>>1082190
Demonic magical powers, maybe
>>1082186
I know that feel, bro.
There are a lot of xtian girls that goes to waste.
>>1082208
Is that how it ends?
>>1082458
Nope. Actually it has 64 pages in total. :)
BTW, Merry X-mas!
Hope you enjoyed my art. Will be psoting more of my artworks here.
>>1082208
What is she dead or just uncontious?
>>1082595
I really need the rest of this. This is almost an actual fantasy I've had.
$10 to see the second half. And here I thought we were all friends here on /aco/...
>>1081761
how this happened?
It's "how has this happened?" Shite dialogue pull me out of porn faster than >>1081762
christian imagery... bleugh. whatever>>1081764
fek ugly kid. laughable. also anyone who's read the bible isn't a believer of it. Bottom panel works pretty well, except where the vag is.>>1081767
I've lost all sympathy for this character, and she looks pretty bad in the first panel. also unnecessary flashback.
>>1081770
THAT'S WHAT IM TALKIN ABOUT! Good dialogue, good visuals, in one momment you saved your comic.>>1081777
kyaaa...! ...kek.>>1081788
I feel in paradise. I feel as if as though I've gone to paradise, or It feels like paradise, not I feel in paradise. "How am I gonna explain this to my lord!?" Because you know, he's living in my apartment, and he'll know... It'd probobly work better if it was... I dunno "how can the pleasures of flesh be so much greater than those of prayer?" but I'm an egomaniac.>>1081810
kek, that D.
>>1081903
Another first panel I want framed, but what the hell is goin on in that second?>>1081998
That's really good.
>>1082003
no complaints>>1082007
perfect reaction.>>1082026
not a great internal but it's okay.>>1082081
already established that she "can't bear this pleasure"... but if that's the mind break scene, then it's a good transition>>1082108
Ok clearly not a mind break hence that last line in the last page was pointless. "Don't wanna go to hell!", missing a subject. I or you, or something. genitals look a little weird too.
>>1082776
>>1082150 genitals still look a little weird, but less so except the D... kek that D. if you have to have an arrow pointing to what blood is, then you've done it wrong. I'd recomend having it drip down to the floor, show the texture, colour it pink. nice means of getting her out of the hypnotised state, although there should have been more done with it in my mind, like her dialogue should have reflected her hypnosis.>>1082179
Works pretty well, maybe the eyes I geuss.>>1082189
"Blood, this bitch is bleeding" thank you captain obvious.>>1082194
problems with anatomy, but the angle works pretty well for confusion and distortion>>1082197
She's certainly proactive.>>1082203
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>>1082208
A few anatomy problems, and how the hell can this guy not tell what his powers do?
All in all, really good. Like there are a lot of things that bug me, it feels a little... weirdly light balancing rape and death against demonic powers and goofy shit like that, and the art has a few problems but all in all... 7/10. not bad.
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>>1082782
You sound fun. I bet you get invited to a lot of parties.
>>1082787
heh, why do you think I have enough time to do this crap on christmas?
>>1082761
Very few people are going to pay $10 for a single porn comic
Many people will pay like $1-$3 for a porn comic
So you charge less to make more money
However your art is very good and i like the style. Nice setup and portrayal of emotions as well. But dont let that go to your head... dont want to be one of those narcasistic commision artists
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>>1082721
Hello, anons! OP here! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Actually, you can get the rest of the story for just $3. Number of pages: 64.
More info in my blog: www.blackcatsan.blogspot.pe
>>1083384
well, again what bugged me the most was your writing. Whatever you write down, I want you to read back to yourself, say it back to yourself, think on it for hours, let the words that go through you become your fuckin scripture, because nothing can destroy a comic faster than bad writtin'.
Or just... you know... do a proofread. "So, that is" isn't a sentence.
>>1084337
:D I will be more careful with my writing. Thanks, anon.
Here! More of my art. :)
s'alright
>>1081759
black cat is a lazy name
>>1082882
because your a fucking autistic faggot