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giddy up,that doujin is offical now. http://www.comic-valky

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giddy up,that doujin is offical now.

http://www.comic-valkyrie.com/modules/web_valkyrie/teisou/
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Neat. The protag is now a girl?
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Ha.
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wonder how the plot will work

I mean the MC was a cheap hooker so I don't know how suitable he'll be for a non-h
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>>139859446
>>139859548
wonder if people will think she's gay
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So they decided to make a non-h yuri version of the doujinshi? I'd like it more if the the author will continue the original rather than this.
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>>139858274
Looks like the author leveled up his ART stat 30 times.
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>>139859446

I want my slutty man-bitch back.
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So the MC is a girl now? Thats sort of lame. The original was interesting cause of the idea of how a normal guy could take advantage of a situation where gender sexuality roles where reversed. When its a normal girl instead, shes just gonna go around being repulsed by everything and not really do to much other than be accused of being gay all the time. That premise just seems boring in comparison.

I don't see whats supposed to be interesting about this setup outside of better artwork.
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>>139859446
>girl

Whats the point
He better continue his original work
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>let's take the original premise
>and shit all over it
>but hey we have prettier drawings

Alright which one of you used a monkey paw to wish for better art?
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>>139860927
>better
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>>139860927

Original style was already preferable being more unique than this generic art we're getting.
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>>139861154
Original art was garbage
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Original art was kinda messy but it still had its charm

New art looks lame
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If mc is now a girl, does that mean Yuri is thrown into the pool of possibilities or is that just the author's weird way to not put in "too much" sex stuff?
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>>139861580
It will most likely be a SoL with some yurishit
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>>139858274
oh wow
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>>139861154
>generic art
lel fuck off to /ic/
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>>139858274
What's the fucking point if there isn't a guy taking advantage of the new world.

I hope this bombs and everyone involved feels bad about it.
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>>139861580
Does this mean the usual skinship between girls is going to be met with a lot of "no homo" between the cast?
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>>139858274
They ruined the art
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>>139861951
Roles are reversed, no skinship except between boys
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>>139862009
So we basically get a series where all guys are prudes, all chicks are open sexually and the MC is a prude chick (because that's how girls were in the original world) ?

What's the sellpoint? What's the punchline?
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On the bright side, this eyebrow loli is pretty cute.
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>>139858274
Sorry,doujin of what? What am I missing here?
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>>139862148
I'm guessing stuff like this. >>139862168

I'm not too sure myself but I'm honestly a little anxious to find out. Banchou was pretty cute.
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>>139860927
I for one welcome when a premise is explored more in different angles

I mean it's not going to take away the whore MC
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>CHANGE THE MC INTO A GIRL
>HE CAN'T WHORE HIMSELF OUT ANYMORE

WHYYYYY?
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>>139858274
Does it have a Mangaupdates-Page?
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here you guy anons
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>>139862500
Come to think of it, is is kind of a smart way to look at different parts of the world Amahara's built up. Now we have an MC for the doujins and an MC for the general audience.
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>>139864332
hopefully one day we get a timid male MC that gets taken advantage of by other girls and is made into a cuntwhore
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>left is extremely unique artsyle
>completely ruined for a generic look

Fuck this. I ain't fapping to the new one.
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>>139864624
Left is just bad art, not unique.
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>>139865003
The art was more than half the reason I even picked up the doujin. I liked the artist's use of expressions and heavy lines + distinct shading. The art of the right is just plain, empty, and speaks nothing but blandness.
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>>139864624
>unique artsyle

You're a fucking hipster. If it was actually stylized, sure, but it's just the artist not being able to do more than that.

He has great expression, sure, but you're not fooling anyone.
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>>139861216
Original art was crude, but perfectly serviceable and charming.

New art is nicer, but souless.
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>>139858274

I thought the one on the right was Boku Girl for a second.
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>>139865864
I see the resemblance but it's nowhere near as good.
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>>139865554
Expression means everything if doujins are bound to look similar to each other in style in order to sell. I'd just rather see that kind of artstyle from him, even if it's his best, simply because I like the way it's drawn. I cannot find any reason why anyone would defend right's artstyle.
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For the initiated
http://exhentai.org/g/831979/2f024c556a/
http://exhentai.org/g/841662/9bd5cfc8ad/
http://exhentai.org/g/886545/14da3b03c2/
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>>139865985
>there was a third one
Aw sweet. I had no idea.
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I can't read moon explain in detail what's happening.

Another nonporn adaptation of porn work?
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>>139860832
>>139860927
>>139863053
plebs
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>>139866181
>/u/
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>>139858274
>draw distance.jpg
one more for the folder
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>>139858274
>It's getting a thing now, better art
Yes! Oh boy I can't wait to see man-whore mc!
>It's a boob chick now
Well, there goes my interest. Tell me if the original mc ever shows up in the world later or something.
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>>139858274
>Fun new setting with lots of possibilities for humor

>Replacing the male MC with a girl

For fuck's sake.
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>>139866614
>better art
It's honestly not.
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One change that ends up ruining the whole thing.

What a waste of a good premise.
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>>139866614
>old MC in the background fucking bitches and making dosh
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>>139866680
Out of curiosity, how would a male MC work if the story was not porn?

I prefer the male MC, but I'm afraid he would turn into an awful turbovirgin dickless harem protagonist. If that's the case, maybe it's better to just make him a girl.
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Good thing I saved the three doujins so nothing will happen to them.
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>>139866734
It's not like it has to be porn to have sex in the story.
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>>139866734
Damn, you're right. If it was just the guy mc we'd have been complaining on how he's beta now instead of alpha.
I hope he shows up at least.
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Was the MC genderswapped when they changed worlds or were they always a girl in this one?
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That loli constantly molesting the doctor was pretty cute but jeez what a waste of a premise.
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>>139865160
The art is the only reason I couldn't fap to it.
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>>139866111
There's a fourth one that still isn't translated
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>>139866679
It honestly is.
The art is better but the style isn't necessarily.
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>>139867002

No gender swapping in the original but rather gender roles were reversed.
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>>139867304
The art is cleaner, the artist is arguably more... practiced, maybe? But it's not better. Art in porn needs not only be judged by the pure drawing skill. Take Kisaragi Gunma, for example. His art is "good", but it's also far more boring and less sexy than the art of many artist with more crude drawings.
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Link to the fourth one.
http://exhentai.org/g/910732/20fcdadfda/

Braids is so horny.
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For what purpose?
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>>139867732
Nice.
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http://g.e-hentai.org/s/6e73eb382f/869073-1, anyone got anymore reverse world/reverse rape shit?
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>>139867145
Where did you read this?
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