>>14923813 Happy Appy after they start with the whole Forenzik shit. For absolute garbage, read the final scenes, where Happy Appy, a motherfucking sock puppet, is able to grab heavy guns and fire them.
>>14923813 "ALL HOPE IS LOST" is one of the shittiest pastas I have ever read, yet it was classified very high in some guy's "Top Creepypastas" infographic. I bet it was the same guy.
>>14923919 We say Jeff The Killer is shit because it's shit. Slenderman was actually creepy when it started, before all the shitty fandom started writing their own crappy theories as a fact and killed any form of mystery the Slender Man had.
>>14923955 >it actually pissed me off because it sounded like it might be going somewhere That's the worst part. When it starts to talk about stuff like the Happy Appy game, it's like "hey, this is a great idea", and it's very well written. You think the pasta has potential, but then you find stuff like "lol I know hez called forenzik bcoz he left a paper here xd"
if you are reading this, know that know matter how many innocent victims you claim or how much innocent blood you shed, I'm still coming for you in the end. All of the men and women you so slaughtered and disemboweled, I beat you to it. I killed them not because I hate them, I imagined those victims were you as I took their lives. It was the mere vision of you that made me kill them. I never did like you, you greasy-headed, grinning, smug, ignorant son of a bitch. My black eyes may look like I'm void of vision, but I'm not stupid. Just remember, the night that you creep into a poor girl's bedroom, you're gonna fall head over heals down the fucking stairs with your guts caught on the broken glass of the window that I smashed you into. Tonight, when I reach you, evil will battle evil, winner kills all, and the only one who will not get out alive is you. I'm coming for you. Sleep well...
>>14923920 Fucking happy appy was amazing, i was really getting into it, and then it started to go downhill and then when the narrator os like "oh guess what my house burnt down" and then he says "so i bought a new house, no on beleived me" I stopped reading shortly after
>actual happy appy show parts 9/10 >real world parts where narrator isnt watching happy appy -78/10
>>14928184 >dead bart was really good imo No it wasn't. The shock ending was good, but that's about it.
>>14923920 why did you make me remember that garbage just, fuck, why?
>I decided to start with the episode that contained “Miranda Lives”. The first episode, with a unreadable episode in the menu, had the title “Danny's Final” in the intro. However, the intro is different; it plays “The Final Countdown” by Europe while showing pictures of Danny fighting Happy Appy. Then it shows a clip of Happy dancing then Danny shooting, and then the clips fuse into one shot with V.S. in between. >The episode starts with Danny kissing one of the girls from the movie. He said “I love you, Jenny!”. Then it cuts to Happy dragging a body into his van. It turns out it's Miranda! Happy drives his van while the Psycho theme plays. Danny sees the van and flips the bird at him. Happy gets out and says “Greetings, bitch.” Danny takes out a katana, while Happy takes out his knife. They sword fight for a minute, then Danny flicks Happy's knife away with the katana.
>>14929227 I just wanted to read something similar to candle cove, and then it turns into a fucking apple puppet driving around in his van murdering people with fucking guns or whatever, also aphex twin makes a guest appearance for some reason?
>>14923888 That one scared the shit out of me years ago and I have no idea why. I was taking a shower and I thought I'd open my eyes after washing my hair and see Squidward staring right at me. Dat completely ridiculous paranoia.
>>14929900 It's not only because it's overused, it's also because it's very vague, like the whole "its eyes were... off. I can't explain it, they just had something uncanny about it". It's like describing a scene as "colorful", it's the most general adjective you could put in a description of a painting.
In horror, you have to leave some gaps in the plot, but just enough so it can be understood. You need to leave mysteries so the reader has to think about it. However, in the case of imagery description, you have to be an awfully lot more specific, specially if it's important to the plot or shock component. You can't just expect to say "it looked scary" and spook the reader, you have to describe more.
Why just hyperrealistic blod and eyes and not talk about how the pale skin seemed to reflect light like it has been recently tarnished with warm water, or how his lips looked deflated and void of any color, or how his eyes were sunken in his skull and shined like they were made of glass?
>but good creepy pastas wont have blood in it period imo Agree. If the pasta is basing it's spook factor on blood then you can be sure it is a bad pasta. Except TEH DAY OF ALL TEH BLOD, that was the spookiest thing I have ever read.
>>14930228 Well, of course you could be able to differentiate a gritty painting versus a colorful one, but you don't really have an idea of how they actually are. Can you imagine what do they represent? Maybe the gritty painting is about somebody sleeping peacefully in their bed, while the colorful one is about a psychedelic nightmare. You can't just say one adjective and expect the reader to accept that as a good description.
I have also seen some hyperrealistic paintings and while they are indeed amazing, I still find using just that adjective to describe an scene is the lamest thing you will ever find. It is more specific than "colorful", but it's still a simple adjective without much thought put into it.
Also, what's so creepy about hyperrealistic blod and eyes anyway?
I used to love lost episode creepypastas. I can still watch the dead bart fanvids on youtube and enjoy them
I wrote a really crappy one myself about a lost TMNT episode a few years back that I subsequently forgot about once the the LE genre went the way of the dinosaurs. then I was randomly browsing creepypasta shit on youtube and decided to search it and saw that a few people had uploaded dramatic readings of it, some with a few thousand views including a spanish one that has all these weird sound-effects going on and is genuinely kind of creepy
apparently someone had uploaded it to the creepypasta wikipage (and no, it wasn't me) and I guess it went from there to yt
>>14930389 Well, of course. It is all about personal style anyways, there is some people who love to describe and make comparisons and metaphors with absolutely everything in the scene and people who like to describe just enough to make a mental picture of the image. The first one becomes kinda boring after a while if it's abused (there are some authors who abuse this insanely, seriously. If you have read Eragon you will know what I am talking about, and that's not even half as bad as the worst ones), and the second one might go way too fast to create hype. It's all about finding balance and using each style whenever the situation requires it.
guys what's up with marble hornets? I've devotedly watched every episode until recently when is started wondering "is there supposed to be a plot in this"? Usually i pick up on plots both clear and implied but this series has stumped me
>>14923881 >Suddenly, Judy's fancy dress was gone, as if it was edited out with Sony Vegas. I figured someone pulled it with a string or a fish hook above the set, but there was no string or fish hook that I could see, unless they were doing a magic trick. You could see her breasts uncovered, as she wasn't wearing a bra, and her face was covered in cocaine powder. She didn't look surprised at all... was acting kind of like a tease, actually. I could feel an erection bulge in my pants. Fuck that other stuff, I was loving this tape.
>Pawn Stars is the most popular show on the History Channel. But, supposedly there was a bootlegged episode that bootleggers have been trying to get their hands on, but no one succeeded until one guy, did. A person by the name of Mark Addson went to The Pirate Bay. The computer he was using at the library was just recently infected with a virus, but he didn't know that. He decided he would download the latest episode of Pawn Stars. He kept looking on The Pirate Bay until he saw one called "Dead Pawn". Mark thought it was one of those names that HIstory channel comes up with, or that it could've been a really early name just for laughs, so he downloaded it anyways, not knowing what would happen. When the video started up, he saw what looked the normal Pawn Stars normal intro, except the it was reversed, Rick began saying, "I'm Rick, and this is my Death Shop. I work here, with Satan, who gave me the pawn shop!". It took a lot to scare Mark, and he thought it was someone trying to prank him for wanting to illegally download intellectual software, so he continued watching. The episode started up with Chumlee, The Old Man, Rick, and Corey having a conversation. Rick talks about sacrificing someone, and the other people with him take it as something normal, with Rick telling Chumlee that he will kill him, although Chumlee takes it normally. Still, Mark wasn't aghast, and he thought it was part of some morbid prank or that Rick recently bought some weapon (Like a gun or a knife) and was playing a morbid joke on Chumlee. Unfortunately, it was worse than that.The episode then cuts to Rick working at a shelf. After that, the video briefly cuts to a picture of Rick, but he looked kind of cartoonish, with his eyes opened wide, and there was unmoving static behind him.
>The picture only stayed there for a second, but the noises were intensively loud, and that caused Mark to jump up like mattress springs for a split-second. The video then cuts back to Rick, who finds someone with absolutely nothing to sell/pawn. Rick tries to shoo him, but the guy just stays there, and begins murmuring in a low, demonic voice. After the murmuring ends, the screen cuts to one of those rainbow screens they used to play back in the 20th century when TV stations went off the air. It shows static, along with different sound bits, of blood-curdling screaming heard. At one point, the screm becomes wavy, and shows a video that skipped a lot of frames. Eventually, though, it cuts to that clip. That clip was really the type of thing Mark dreaded the most. It starts off by showing Rick on the floor, clearly dead, with his intestines on his head, while Chumlee was eating his heart, and Rick's brains were wrapped around the Old Man's neck. Corey then goes to Rick's corpse and realizes what happened. He begins to scream at Chumlee for no reason, although in a different language, so Mark couldn't understand what Corey was saying. Chumlee then starts sprinting off towards a gun store.
While at the store, Chumlee asks for an RPG. The clerk eventually gives him one, and Chumlee pulls out a pistol and shoots the clerk point blank, right in the face. The clerk's brains gush out, and Chumlee gets away as quick as he could. When Chumlee returns, he shoots Corey and The Old Man with the RPG. The camera then zooms in, as if trying to capture every detail of what remained of Corey and the Old Man, showing horrifying things like Corey's head which just lay flat on the floor, with both of his eyes torn to pieces and located around the bottom. The camera then zooms into the the Old Man, and you wouldn't even be able to tell who the Old Man was. His head was torn apart, his organs and his brains were scattered all over the room by the RPG blast, and also fire everywhere.
>After the video, there was a picture of a notebook with unintelligible scribbles like actors replaced and dead. Mark is now aghast of reality shows, and has even quit watching some of his favorite reality shows, thinking they may have the same spine-chilling type of episode.
>>14930147 >Two days ago I suddenly snapped back to reality to find myself staring at my fridge, full to the brim with pudding pops. I screamed and tried to run but immediately fell to the floor as I was wearing two halves of Watermelon on my feet instead of shoes.
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