I hope it is okay that I post imgur here, I don't want to fill the thread, but if it is okay and I have time I can get my lewd elsanna stuff together
also, looking for a recommendation on a non-AU, incest fanfic
Nigga, that imgur gave me cancer. Thanks.
So, canon? Hard to give a rec for that, everything is so shitty now. If you've read fics thrown here before, I'm afraid that's it.
eh, ok sorry, I won't post the rest. I've been gone a long time anyways and haven't read all the fics posted here, just happened to see a frozen thread and thought, wow, that's still going on, cool!
But are you absolutely serious? Couldn't you have posted something good?
I'm wondering how is it still not deleted.
So is anything besides Eating Habits worth reading?
It kinda moved fast from not-biting to biting, but when the only other alternative is angst dragged out for 30 chapters, I'll take plot that moves a little rapidly any day.
Also, businessfic updated.
Elsa and Anna meet and it's like no time has passed at all..
Sorry you got so upset, anon.
Maybe next time you can look away.
I honestly don't know who's baiting who anymore. The first posts were shitposts in reference to last thread, where someone complained that "any shit gets posted nowadays".
> She made it to college but what happens when Elsa bumps into Anna at a party, and finds out that Anna is now working as a stripper and with a child? Will Anna run away? or will she let Elsa in and let her help? What if Elsa doesn't want to help because Anna left her with no explanation? Will she just push Anna away if the girl asks for help? Dark themes, trigger warnings. Elsanna!
Eh, probably not, doesn't really instill optimism in me.
This reminds me, anyone remembers the fic where Elsa buys slave Anna?
It started with Kristoff paying the slaver for her and escorting her from her cell to the castle.
I liked it, it had none of the darker or angsty shit like Anna being raped by previous owners or something because she was freshly caught and still feisty, Elsa was awkward as hell and overall it was more of a comedy than a serious story.
That is all kinda of unbearable cuteness!
Cute. But it'll take more than halloween night to dress _all_ snowgies
Frozen's always so complicated for me.
I love the idea of Elsa being a lesbian, but I like her relationship with Anna being sisterly love rather than full on incest.
Unfortunately, there are no other girls for Elsa to be lesbians with, which leaves me with nothing but the vague hope Anna will walk in on Elsa eating sandwiches with a cute foreign princess at some point in the sequel.
I guess that's what we're all hoping for. I mean, we can't really have actual incest after all.
Or that lady in the blue dress giving Elsa the doe eyes at the coronation.
Final chapter of Sillage: http://archiveofourown.org/works/2553437/chapters/11801477
Eh. I think it had some good ideas (half-sisters seems like one of the more plausible ways to set up mAU Elsanna) and their early dates were pretty cute. But I just can't buy that they never talk for like seven years and then everything works out offscreen.
Ah well, it's nice to see fics finish at least.
Yep. "Show, not tell" disregarded so much there isn't even much "tell".
The only even remotely enjoyable part, buried below a mountain of idiocy and plot that just doesn't make sense.
I'm just going to wait for the "omg so cute" reviews to at least have a chuckle out of it.
I heard a variety of complaints about different fics but can anyone here actually propose a nice fic idea?
For me, I really liked how Tempest began (conqueror Elsa waltz in a country and demanded Anna as a present) but it turned into complete trash after 6 chapters or so. Yet I can't articulate how I wanted it to go.
I tried to think of something, but everything I came up with has already been done, so I give up.
>Yet I can't articulate how I wanted it to go.
It had a nice idea of Elsa healing because of Anna, and I liked the power imbalance between them, I suck that shit right up. But then it became so convoluted and philosophical I couldn't even.
I really liked how several fics began, but then they got deader than dead.
>convoluted and philosophical
Err, I'd use "pretentious" to describe it actually. The author reeks of a teenage kid who wanted to be deep and edgy yet could only come up with trite plot. Poorly explained emotional bonds as well. I kept being taken aback "wait, why are they becoming friends now?" "wait, how did she jump from being suspicious of him to trusting him with her life without any reason within less than 24 hours?" "wait, how come she fell for Elsa that fast?" And all those males-with-dark-past and oh-so-dangerous-and-shady.
At least it was an Elsanna story. Otherwise I don't see any difference in this and the other self-insert fics.
When the fic I like was abandoned, I wish the author would just finish it even if the ending would be mediocre. When the fic I like got a mediocre ending, I wished the author would have abandoned it while it was still great.
Depends. I'd take a mediocre or asspull ending over no ending at all. But if the ending is complete shit (het, het rape, or momentary het cheating) then I wish I could have broken the author's hands before they typed that out.
Have you read Anna Enchanted? :^)
Not that I know of, but there are several with a sort of imbalance between Anna and Elsa, whether it be in status or mortality, ie. Winter's Heart or Metamorphoses of Elsanna.
Where this is from there are lots of comments about how absurd it is. Bestiality? No Way!!
Make my ovaries explode.
Seriously, I never like butches, whereas feminine girls who can rock BOTH sexy dresses and a suit reduce me into an incoherent mess. I don't blame Anna for wanting to hit that.
No third party, it clearly says the contents are 2 shampoo bottles.
From the Frozen Fever storybook...
>rewrite of Something to Hold Onto
I don't know how I should feel about that.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11551611/2/Kissing-You update - ch1 was one of the best things from tumblr's last Elsanna week, apply directly to your troubled hearts.
>Something to Hold Onto
God damn I remember ripping that fic apart with a few anons here and on
snowchan. Is the rewrite any better or is it still illogical drama for the sake of drama with detail swept under the carpet?
At the core the story is the same but there's been various changes
Elsa's condition has changed from having a bullet in her head to a weak heart due her powers. Aurora is no longer a bitch but a friend of Elsa and Hans went to douche mode when he tried to assault Anna. Those are changes I remember from, the drama is still there.
>That's not what he said, and probably not what he meant.
Not the anon you replied to, but that was exactly what that post meant. He doesn't like having Frozen thread and is telling people to stop making these threads despite them obviously liking to do that.
Welp. All these twists and turns are getting tiring. It's like everything that could go wrong does, and it's starting to border on implausibility. It's also at almost 300k words and fuck me, I've read stories that were 10% the word count and had twice the emotional engagement.
And I don't trust this author's idea of fun, it will probably end up with someone's arms and legs getting broken, someone's skin getting branded with an iron, and Olaf getting raped with a carrot.
It's been a while, hasn't it? Though I think it was cuter when it was about Elsa and Anna awkward encounters at the start, I have faith it won't get too serious or angsty because of the political/war plot.
Huh, so there still is some amazing fanart I haven't seen yet. With a 20G Frozen folder you'd think that's unlikely.
>Found it: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10504206/1/Body-Slave
Damn it all, if you're going to set your story in a time and place where a social custom is normal, and make that social custom a central focus of your story, don't decide that your protagonists are the only ones in the whole country too noble to engage in that social custom. Leave it out of sight and out of mind if you have to, but don't go out of your way to describe how everybody I'm supposed to like magically agrees with my views on slavery, despite how completely unrealistic it is.
You're not paranoid, I've come upon quiet a few deleted blogs that used to post Frozen fanart. Same story with several dA and pixiv accounts. Hell, just think about all the fics that have been deleted in the past two years.
One that's currently updating?
There are a couple good ones, but they update once in a blue moon.
Wayfaring had 4 updates this year (thought that still amounts to 120k words, so it's not that bad), Beast last updated in June, Winter's Heart - in August, but it's probably going to die, I'm afraid. Weight of Snow in February, but it's as good as dead. To Thaw a Wild Heart looks abandoned. And let's not even mention The Clean Flame.
Fuck, I wish Joma was still writing.
And whoever the fuck was going on about that huntress Onion fic got his ass in gear.
The Queen's Murphy's Law.
>Anna won't find Elsa in time
>Elsa will transform and flee then go destroy some shit
>The fic will spend 30 chapters on Anna enduring tough shit and attempting find Elsa
>Elsa will freeze her heart
>More shit will happen which will take another 30 chapters
It's not like something unforeseen that is good could happen once in a while, right?
It depends on how Moana is like. If she's just out adventuring with The Rock and doesn't get a love interest we could get the same lesbian headcanons that Frozen got. Punzie was too aggressively heterosexual for that.
Even I'm a bit reluctant to ship her with anyone other than Eugene because of how well they fit together. But mainly I just don't want another Jelsa.
Don't you fret, Mouse will pair her off in the sequel, if there's ever one.
Ouat sure did a good job of portraying her as a stealthy turbodyke though, even if nothing came out of it.
This is nice artistic design.
That said, to be honest I feel that emotionally, in this situation jealousy would appear quickly.
I believe them working together on an activity would be more likely to lead to mutual acceptance.
Even if the Queen were reading out loud, that would bring more dynamism to the trio.
I like to think that Punzie joins in on the OTP when she's in town.
Anyone reading this?
I always fucking hated it when
the boss captured and brainwashed/controlled the hero's love interest in vidya and pitted them against each other. Can't say why, but I always responded to it with a mixture of disgust and incredulity, like, fucking really? No different here. Not like this story haven't been idiotic at times too. And I don't even know why writefags seem to have a boner for interspersing grim with cute. If you wanna write a gritty story fucking write a gritty story, don't include cute shit just for the sake of appeasing the readers because it always feels out of place.
Hey, i was in the previous thread where I mentioned that I was thinking of doing a story in which Anna had fire powers and I think I asked how how common it is for Anna to be given powers in stories.
I know the idea is kinda... meh, but the idea popped into my head and couldn't get rid of it, soI just had to do a story around it.
Anyway, I just completed that story, if anyone's interested:
Canon Arendelle, Incest,
Reposted and updated
The author said this is the final arc and the darkest one, and Goddess!Elsa is the big bad of the story. Before this chapter I was expecting Anna saving her, after this the only thing I'm expecting is that it'll end in tragedy or a bittersweet one AKA
Anna dying to bring Elsa back and staying dead
Regarding your question, if it is not your cup of tea, don't read it or wait until the story is complete.
Well that's a surprise /s.
>Anna saving her
I was expecting that to happen too. But apparently, the bad guys are never interrupted, it's 101 of storytelling.
True art is angsty.
>cup of tea
It kinda is, kinda isn't. The writing is better than most Frozen fics (thought that's not saying much, because redhead blonde redhead blonde cerulean orbs), but the characters are kinda flat and lifeless and rigid in the way they act. I'm a sucker for power imbalances that somehow work, that's why I even gave this a spin when it started. But after that torture session I just shake my head most of the time.
That said, Royal Commoner fucking when.
That situation in WP is very different from what happened in TQM
That scene in WP happened at the end of the story and while affected Elsa deeply, Elsa and Anna still relied on each other to keep moving foward. Also WP doesn't have the amount of reviews TQM has.
In TQM, we have now Evil!Elsa who among the first things she wants to do is to hurt/punish/torture Anna, and we're nowhere near the end, this is the problem here, despite all the shit it happened in previous chapters Elsa and Anna still stuck together and relied on each other, and now this isn't the case, Elsa apparently is gone forever and Anna will be brought to a world of living hell bc author said this last arc will be very dark compared to the dark things previous arc showed. The whole bond between them will be utterly destroyed by one of them.
And ppl already are expressing discomfort at this and won't stop reading anymore of this.
>That scene in WP happened at the end of the story and while affected Elsa deeply, (...)
It came out of left field like a motherfucker. WP, while nowhere near a masterpiece, still retained a sense of urgency. But with that last chapter it went like "ok, now we rape her, she keeps the child, happy end". Not to mention the bad guy managed to incapacitate a protection detail, iirc. It was fucking stupid and hack writing.
>Elsa apparently is gone forever
Well, I wouldn't say "gone forever", because apparently she retains her memories. And you know she's going to return to being herself in the absolute last paragraph of the absolute last chapter, while Anna dies in her arms. I also foresee at least 5 plot twists before it ends, Marisol dying and Gerda's crucifiction.
I honestly don't understand this weird fetish for ultra violence and abuse in fanfiction. Like, what's the fucking point of it all, in Disney? Do these motherfuckers run a contest to see who's the most edgy of them all? If I wanted brutality I'd read fanfiction for Asoiaf, or better yet - Asoiaf itself.
>Fallout: Equestria is a crossover fanfic between My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic and the Fallout universe.
I've heard of it. I want to say it sounds like distilled cancer, but it's probably worse.
People have too much time on their hands if they chose to devote it to this shit. WW3 is in order, to remind people what's really fucking important.
You're on a board dedicated to anime lesbians, the RIGHT WING DEATH SQUADS will come for you too.
How about RIGHT WING DEATH SQUAD lesbians?
Yeah this is the one but that artist made a colored version of it which is sadly not in their DA account.
You've lost me. Is it not coloured in the post there?
I didn't even know she had a dA.
Oh yeah, how stupid of me. My bad, it was there. Thought it was under the comic strip. Thank you.
Here's her account. I just noticed the artist is a girl. Not much yuri there, I think.
>The princesses saved someone they loved
>The true love characters save the princesses
>Anna saves Elsa from Prince Hans
But joke aside, does this make Anna the rightful ruler of Arendelle now?
And technically it's still incest because they grew up as sisters together.
>But joke aside, does this make Anna the rightful ruler of Arendelle now?
nah. Elsa's still in charge, just not the Queen, more like an Empress now that she has a really nice cassus belli at her glorious ice spewing gloved hands.
>And technically it's still incest because they grew up as sisters together.
I've got a feeling about it, but can't decide if it's good or bad.
And just what did Agdar do, that's supposedly so questionable? Something with rings?
God damn it I wasn't this excited for an update for a while now.
The author's said it will end happy, and it already (kind of) is, so I'm not sure what the twist is even about.
Unless ends happy just means Elsa and Anna are together even as the world falls apart around them.
Interesting, but complete bullshit. Elsa looks exactly like her mother. I'm sure they literally just tweeked Elsa's model to make her mother instead of making a whole new model. If they do tie Frozen and Tangled together, it would be unheard of for Disney, considering that princesses from different universes aren't even allowed to look at each other on the same book cover.
They all look pretty similar.
>If they do tie Frozen and Tangled together
That would be great to see. I wonder why Elsa and Anna still aren't officially part of the Disney Princess line.
>implying it will ever update again
Also, wtf is up with this carrot-and-stick mentality? "No PDA until you get better"? Not that I ever believed Celery knew what she was doing, tho. It was mildly entertaining because of the cute factor, but for most fics there comes a time when the writer introduces "serious" themes and usually ends up in over his/her head.
And basically all her other stories updated too.
Reminded me of Sillage when Elsa pulled "we can't be together unless we have a backup plan but since I can't think shit it's up to you Anna", I hated that part (da faq Elsa?) and kinda ruined the end of the story for me.
Kinda odd for Anna in aSiS to pull that move.
>ruined the end of the story
Try "the second half".
I don't know what goes through writers' heads, but I sure as fuck wouldn't pull such shit out of my ass, if I wrote anything that is.
Either the Gisnep marketing department doesn't understand rules of succession, or Elsa and Anna are married now.
Diarchies are a thing, I'm afraid.
Though two ruling princes would probably be a hard reform to sell in any 18th century European kingdom. Russia doesn't count - it was neither European nor a monarchy.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11688791/1/All-I-Want-for-Solstice-is-You (One Shot)
Seems like so many fics have epic lengths to them...I mean 300K? I stress out at just 30K.
I've actually written roughly around 30K and I feel like the story is about half way to the end. But now I'm feeling a bit....I dunno, dwarfed, like I should be writing the longer story.
Take note of the fact that the majority of longer fics are 80% unnecessary filler stuff, because these motherfuckers have no filter and absolutely HAVE to describe every single thing and secondary character, and who they are dating, and throw in Rapunzel, Ariel, Belle, and add every one of Hans' brothers and their innermost thoughts, and…
Does anyone know the name of a fic that was an AU where Elsa and Anna met on an archaelogical research regading the ruins of Arandelle, Anna found/snatches a diary where it tells the story of the princess Anna who fell in love with a princess called Elsa, Rapunzel was there too and ofc, lot of things happens Anna dies, Elsa is with grief sacrifices herself to prevent Arendelle's ending. It's revealed that Present!Anna and Elsa are the reincarnations of the two of the past, while PresentHans gets rid of a vial who stole Past!Elsa's powers courtesy from Izma (yes, that Izma).
Well, there's this, but...
I've long since believed that patreon is cancer.
Not only it enables idiots to flood the internet with commissioned futashit and sfm in exchange for money, it also makes people greedy and stagnated in their art.
I dunno man. It also helps a lot of struggling artists to devote more time to doing what they love. If people want to pay for it I won't mind. Though it is unfortunate that so many patreon supporters have shit taste.
Do you even try?
Ah, well, I suppose I'm biased, because it disappearing suddenly wouldn't hurt me in the slightest, and I'm too poor to throw money at artists anyway.
Now that I'm thinking about it there are maybe two people there I'd support if I could.
>so many patreon supporters have shit taste
Isn't it up to the account owner to decide what to do?
I suppose. It's unfortunate that fictional lesbians are such a niche.
>$2300 a month for drawing sausage shaded butts
Well, that's more than I expected, desu. I suppose Life is Strange brought in some new supporters.
Updated a while ago, but I took my time getting to it. Turns out it's jumping the shark: the fic.
I wouldn't be this salty if Anna got a new ability like Pepper in IM3 or whatever, but full stroggification is taking it ten steps too far.
Glad I didn't stop watching this artist.
Jesus fucking Christ I'm fucking done with this stupid shit. Is it so fucking hard to write one cuddly fic? Because this trite shit is sooo original.
Actually fucking prompt me, I'm going to write 100k of teeth rot.
Modern AU where Anna is a shameless party animal and constantly drunk dials Elsa asking for rides home at 3am. Elsa acts all huffy and irritated but secretly likes taking care of her sister
Modern AU, unrelated. Anna has just moved into town and needs to introduce herself to her neighbors. As she knocks on her next-door neighbor's door she's awestruck as the most stunning girl she's ever seen, Elsa, answers the door. Elsa invites her in for coffee, one thing leads to another and somehow later that night Anna is in Elsa's bed, basking in the afterglow of some fantastic lovemaking. But Anna feels a bit conflicted now because how is she supposed to tell Elsa that the reason she knocked on Elsa's door in the first place was to tell her that she is a registered sex offender?
Then also check out those FFN users: TuanTaureo, The Queen Of Winter (Metamorphoses, Stuck on You, Catharsis/Mimesis), Amnestyyy (pretty much everything),
on AO3: ciceu (be sure to check out her Malora fic too, it's fucking great)
And this: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11551611/1/Kissing-You
An Awkward First Something is also something that's still being updated.
Oh, On the North Winds updated out of the blue in summer.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10062175/1/Pieces, if you want something that's sorta-not-Elsanna, but I dare you to not see it.
ASIS updated too, but it's eh.
Shit, I gotta fix my bookmarks and finally do that pastebin.
Also, this: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10986960/1/And-Kiss-And-Kiss
Same situation as this person. But I was mostly just reading EiS.
Came back and I'm trying to read Tessellate and it just doesn't quite feel as engaging. Something about the words and pacing of the story just aren't as lively (or depressing, depending on the scene) as EiS.
Any other good angst filled incest Elsanna stories?
Are you not familiar with the works of our lord and savior Jimbabwe88, who led us into the wondrous gardens of bad writing and 36C cups mentioned casually in conversations?
He wrote Elsa's Year.
Everyday a surprise. Had no idea Ermuzibu drew Elsanna.
And a non-lewd sketch.
Pretend it's white too.
Not a white hair Anna pic, but it stood out to me as I scrolled through my folders.
I haven't been keeping up with it, but the idea is pretty fucking unique, with **Anna piecing the puzzle through her dreams**, and I remember it being pretty heavy on symbolism and shit.
Also, this fucking story: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11135948/1/A-Banisher-s-Dilemma
I'm glad it updated and popped to the front of ffn, would have missed it otherwise and it's pretty fun.
Aw hell I always forget.
I'd think not, but who knows?
Besides, what did she get registered for? Being Anna, I can imagine it being something ridiculous like streaking outside a primary school after getting high or whatever... Or maybe it'd be funnier if she'd raped a chick (she's not in jail because women can't "really rape", like men can't be raped, duh!)?
I'd rather not touch rape, but yeah, I was thinking it to be caused by some ridiculous misunderstanding, and now she's stuck with it because Jesus, Anna, I don't care how drunk you are, you can't pee in the bushes in front of a police station and flash the people on the street with your shapely ass!
But I've started on that other one with Elsa giving a ride to Anna for now.
Yeah rape's heavy and not the kind of thing I read, though I'd make for interesting post-coital discussion. What's the plot of the one you've started? Is it icest (icest is related Elsanna, right? Doesn't have to be canon, just them being sisters, right?)?
>the reason she knocked on Elsa's door in the first place was to tell her that she is a registered sex offender?
Will there be angst? Also make it a real offense, not misunderstanding. If you're gonna hook people with that piece of info in chapter one, tackle it head on instead of running away.
I thought it was a thing in some states, but all I can find now are anecdotes. Maybe it's a thing in modern Arendelle?
I'm afraid I'm not much of a writer. I just like thinking up silly prompts. Someone else is welcome to try though. I'm thinking Anna avoided jail because the jury thought she was simply too cute to put behind bars. The victim probably secretly enjoyed it anyway.