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>>55148699
World: Comfybright
Inherent Power: Good Friend
Birthright: Marked Hero
Armour: Astral Mark
Weapon: Khanda, Kodring
Mentor: Witch Allyn
Companions: Micaela, Tatrabua
Mount: Eastern Cat
Starting Location: Main Bazaar
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So, just wanted to confirm some things some clever anons noticed in the last thread. Sorry, I wasn't able to respond, but I was finishing up the Mystery Box.

>>55141528
>Wasteland continent is far south, requires boat to get to across Grey Sea. Adjacent to Arachi Empire.
Correct, the Arachi are actually on an island right next to the Wasteland Continent. It's why Floop "sunk their ships" in response to "boots on the ground".

>Arkenshad is far east, in the Black Coast. The founder of Arkenshad (Bones) is hated by the Northern Ghili Empire, though its proximity to Arkenshad is not known.
Nope, Arkenshad is in the Far East, however, the Black Coast is in the Far West. The two do not meet are are on opposite sides of the globe. Think 'the west and east parts of Pangea'. The Northern Ghili Empire Is a little North and inland of Arkenshad. The Eastern Coast contains Arkenshad, while the Western Coast contains the Lands of Shadow.

>The Lands of the Shadow is far west, in the Black Coast (either the world is round, or this was a typo). The Land of Shadow is also said to overlap with the desert, where Andrea is from. The Solar Elf Empire wants to extend into the Lands of Shadow.
Yes, this is correct. The Black Coast and the Lands of Shadow overlap. You see, before you get to the Western Sea, the Lands of Shadow has already begun. The Black Coast (i.e. the West Coast) is within the Lands of Shadow. If you sail across the Black Coast, you get to a new Western Continent, which is even more, Land of Shadow. This is where Andrea is from.
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>>55141528
>The Twilight Realm is in the desert, comprised of many worlds/sand.
Yup, go Southwest and the Aux Luberum begins. Keep going southwest, and you'll enter the desert. The Aux Luberum is made up of many words in a large landmass that comes before the desert itself.

>The Grasslands Continent is north, requiring a boat. It contains the Great Plains, Northern Forest, “Far, Far, Land” (where the Kistune reside), ruins of the ancient Dragon Kingdom, Zuiza, Kwin, and Lau. Our guide can’t sense the northeast of the continent, but she may be confused because she also suggests the Oracle is in the northwest.
Yes, yes and yes. The Grassland continent wraps around the world. Here, the world could be said to be round. If you keep going far West in the Grassland Continent, you come to the edge of the continent. Here, the only bridge connecting the Grassland Continent to the ancient Dragon Kingdom are the Dragon Falls.

While still on the Grassland Continent, the Dragon Kingdom is only reachable by going up the falls. Trying to go around won't work, cause the entire Kingdom is on a continent very, very high up, and don't even try climbing the cliffs.

Anyway, keep going up the falls, and you've gone around the top of the world. You come on to a large, uncharted continent that, theoretically, you could sail to from the Eastern Coast.

>Hexbridge Castle is north, in the Enchanted Valley. Probably in the desert. No one rules it, but the Denar King believes it is his. The Lands of Everfrost are to the north, requiring a boat.
All correct.

>Sedana is from the Warlands, but we have no idea where this is. He background is snowy, which may suggest relation to the Lands of Everfrost.
Warlands are North, but they come before the Northern Sea (which you have to sail across to get to the Lands of Everfrost).

>Rina is called “Rina by the Shadow,” which may suggest some relation to The Lands of the Shadow.
Might want to look at Deeja's page.
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>>55141528
> assumes to oracle is in the northeast of the Grassland Continent (or possibly northwest. or both, if the world is round).
She assumes the Oracle to be in the part of the Grassland Continent that links to the Dragon Kingdom, or even within the Kingdom. The grassland continent does wrap around the world tho, so it Northwest and Northeast are kinda the same here. Still, trying to sail to the Dragon Kingdom from the Eastern Coast (Arkenshad) would be nearly impossible. You could try to sail to Dragon Falls from the black Coast tho, that's not so crazy at all.

>>55140472
You are correct as to how the Rite of Power works.

>>55141668
Only the Grassland Continent wraps around the world. The two coasts are different. And yes, the Thu'um is quite close to the Dragon Falls, glad someone got that one.

Please let me know if I missed anything.
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>>55149278
This page is new and has been updated to reflect the addition of the mystery box.

The mystery box is now an option chosen in the quests section.
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>>55149304
MYSTERY BOX
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>>55149201
>>55149236
still reading through, thanks for the response.

The Thu'um quest takes place on the Black Coat, and seems to mention Arkenshad as a pit stop. That was the source of my confusion.
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>>55149353
>Black Coat, and seems to mention Arkenshad as a pit stop
FIXED.

JESUS MAN. WHATS WRONG WITH ME.
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>grinding away at Super Tournament CYOA
>finish up some lore and go to bed
>lust for manly battle is muted
>make the mistake of thinking Thunderbolt Fantasy would be something to fall asleep to
>now wide awake and struggling not to head back to the basement to kick the shit out of the bag at 3 a.m.
Who knew a Taiwanese puppet show could be so hype. What else do you guys want to see in a Tekken style super tournament?

So far we have
>shadowy organizations providing funding and fighters
>secret techniques and a slowly growing point buy system to make them
>waifus/husbandos who can only be tamed by beating them or their lovers
>a few end game scenarios I was toying with
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Post CYOAs that are actually good
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>>55149447
>What else do you guys want to see in a Tekken style super tournament?
A land cloaked in deepest blue.
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>>55149304
THE BOX WAS MY DESITY THE HOLE TIME
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>>55149450
After you, pussy.
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>>55149317
>Mystery Box
Goddamnit Quite!
I didn't know you were making one of these...
I worked so hard on my build too...
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>>55149450
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>>55149304
THE BOX OF DESITY AWAITS.
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>>55148965
Shoulda been mother Kos herself.
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>>55149317
So, Deeja's phylictery is in doomguard then, is it?
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>>55149514
>>55149462
Could you just. I mean, for fuck's sake man there's a limit.
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>>55149538
>phylictery is in doomguard then, is it?
So, basically, picking the mystery box changes the CYOA.

If you pick it, then yes, it might be there, BUT, if you don't pick the box, then you might as well imagine the box doesn't exist. You act of choosing splits the universe. Don't ask me why or how just roll with it.

The world where you take the mystery box is, and always was, different from the one where you didn't. Basically, for the mystery box to exist, you must pick it. If you don't, it doesn't exist.
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>>55149636
I hate this CYOA there's tons of good choices but no way to get everything I want.
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>>55149699
I like it Cause I pick being a cute catboy every time.
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>>55149628
You could've just said "only if you pick the box".
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>>55149218
where I thought the Grassland continent was 'round' was because our Guide tells us "she must be very Northeast," and also "She's really deep west" with respect to the Oracle of Nath.
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>>55149718
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>>55149636

There needs to be a "keep your old family" option or something. Thats what makes this difficult for me.
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>>55149218
Are the lands of everfrost further north than the Grassland Continent, or something? East of it?
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Mystery boxes are pointless and utter crap.

There, I fucking said it.
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>>55149728
This is correct. Grassland continent is round. However, the two coasts aren't. Mind you, the real Far, far west part of the grassland continent (the part you could call 'Northeast') isn't really Grassland, it's the Dragon Ruins, only reachable through the Grassland Continent.

>>55149746
Just more north.
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>>55149450
I really like this one, but I don't know who's making it, and I it's only a wip. But Still one of my favorites.
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Does the eternal comet only work in this universe or would it also work in another universe?
Also, how many capsules do we have for the valience musket, and is there any way to get more?
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>>55149800
>Does the eternal comet only work in this universe or would it also work in another universe?
Works in all the universes connected to this possible multiversal reality.
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>>55149628
Schrodinger's mystery box
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>>55149752
I just look at them without feeling committed.
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>>55149800
>Also, how many capsules do we have for the valience musket, and is there any way to get more?
Erm, still working out the mechanics for ammo. I'm thinking a bless ammo spell that allows you to turn regular ammo/arrows in the special ammo you need.

>>55149823
My nigga
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>>55149529
or as some say
Kosm
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>>55149317
>>55149835
Wait do we get all three?
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>>55149871
Yup have fun
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>>55149684
I just min max by being an only child in a huge mansion with loving parents and 8ish servants.
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>>55149881
>tfw you miss a box of text
Well les'go then
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>>55149218
>Might want to look at Deeja's page.
I had been reading that as "reach the necropolis via the shadow." But I guess it's a title or something.

>While still on the Grassland Continent, the Dragon Kingdom is only reachable by going up the falls.
Are "The Lands of the Shadow" literally the lands that fall in the shadow of the floating continent?
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>>55149950
Yeesh, pronunciation gets me messed up.

>>55149950
>"The Lands of the Shadow" literally the lands that fall in the shadow of the floating continent?
YES This is really satisfying. When someone finally gets yer CYOA.
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Here, maybe this is better.
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>>55149201
>Tfw you have no idea what you're doing so you're just hoping for the best.
LESGO

>Sacrament
Temperance de Mort -
~Ab Aeterno~
[SPARK OF INFINITE FORGOTTEN]
Aversa

>Mentor
Lich King Deeja

>Weaponry [17]
Shield of Dagon's bane

>Magic [57]
[I have no Idea what to do for this]
Kinetomancy
Halo wings
Energy sink

>Companions [15]
[Again, no idea]
Andrea

>Quest
[Locate the Temple of Al-Asir]

-THE BOX-
SHIT NIQQA LES'GO,WE DARK SOULS NOW BOYS.
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>>55149978
>"The Lands of the Shadow" literally the lands that fall in the shadow of the floating continent"
I just.

I can't.

ARE WE RETARDED CYOAG?
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>>55148758
>>55148769
>>55148795
>>55148808
how old is this stinky shit?
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>>55149999
Forgot the goshdang song like a fool.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JjI7VeIA7ZI
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>>55150004
>that pic
lewd
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Sda hasn't shitposted heavily the last few days. Did his mistress finally come home?
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>>55149317
Would accomplishing this graduate us from Laheera? or does that require more of a diplomatic venture?
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>>55150396
She came back like two weeks ago, dude. Also I've been occupying myself with a mixture of watching movies, catching up on my weebshit backlog, the lackluster Destiny 2 beta, and lots of CYOA work.

Just loading up one section of this CYOA (each section is its own .psd right now) almost immediately uses up 30gb of RAM and about 20GB of scratch disk space, even with the lowest cache tile size.
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>>55150480
>gun-howitzer

unf
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>>55150551
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>>55150488
Honestly I have no idea what something of this calibre (heh) would look like on power armour, but I have it in there anyways.

Thinking I should lessen the calibres a bit, these are a bit big. By comparison the M1 Abrams uses a 105mm/120mm gun, so I imagine the kick behind something like this would probably knock back a humanoid, even in power armour.
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>>55149777
any more of this?
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>>55149800
What the hell are you talking about?
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Where is muh stand?
Where is muh tower?
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>>55150739
>Where is muh tower?
It's in here >>55148894.
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Progress!

Not much has changed on the first page, changed a few pictures, moved Use Artifact to the next page and replaced it with MacGyvering.

Onward to page 2
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>>55150813
Why are you spoiling the CYOA and making people either hype it up (and you can't deliver) or ruining it for everyone else?
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>>55150813

This is the actually new stuff.
Another 12 abilities to cover the most common pulp hero skills and 12 'artifacts', mostly anachronistic tech from the for the 1920s and 30s from the 40s/50s for ease of exploration and dubious low powered magic artifacts to serve as signature items for the character.
Didn't add more extreme stuff to not take away too much from the main exploration theme, but will add more in the Occult expansion later. Will probably need to add a SciFi/Mad Science one as well so I can stick all the laser guns and shrink rays in it.

This concludes basic character creation and other than some additional flavor text and editing as I notice stuff, I'll move on to the expedition itself on page 3, though it might take a bit longer for it since I'm not happy with my original plans on how to structure it and will have to rework a few things.
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>>55150821
Because I generally prefer early feedback so I correct errors as they come up instead of having to do major overhauls at the end.
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>>55150085
superb taste, friendo.
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>>55149499
>too lazy to develop a real civilization
>taken the capitcal
>routed their armies
>navy and port cities

hm...
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>>55149499
I hate that when I think of a thing to make, chances are, DSA already did it... and better

But for reals, why is there amputation in all his CYOAs?
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>>55150813
>>55150824
I like the style of this.

A lot.
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>>55150813
>>55150824
>The shadow pic
I love it.
Seriously anon, I love the style of this.

Question though, do you need the "use artifact" ability to choose 1 artifact? It's slightly confusing. I only really care about animal friend, but that's just me.

Just give me my Amazons and I'll be completely satisfied
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>>55150979
Yeah, I should probably specify that better, you don't need the skill to choose something in the artifact section (since part of that is just perfectly understandable tech), I just couldn't think of a better alternative term and 'Equipment' seems a bit banal.
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>>55150813
>>55150824
You know, there's no reason not to slam the two pages together. They'll still be less than 10k pixels.
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>>55150824
>ring of kings
>obayed
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>>55151011
Maybe instead of "use artifact" call that ability "blessed touch" or something, or "steady hand"
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>>55151021
I might do that at the end, though it will mess with the layout and colors might clash a bit too much, I'll think about it.
For now it's mostly the fact I find it easier to edit at this size.
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>>55151043
Tnx, corrected

>>55151045
Something like that could work.
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>>55150572
Well, I just looked up some guns, did some math, and I have to say that the kind of calibre you are talking about is a bit much, unless the power armor is over ten tons in weight. On the other hand, firing a gun that would apply as much g-force to you as you would experience in car crash is pretty cool.
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>>55150014
Pretty old. Someone was making a new one, I think.
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>>55149777
KitsuneAnon aka Kit is making it.
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>>55150014
from the champion list, like 4 years.
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>>55149628
Could you travel to a parallel reality where you made the opposite choice by using the Eternity Gear?
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>>55150824
Looking forward to the Occult expansion!
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>>55151244
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>>55150813
Lost World CYOA:
Expertise:
>Archaeologist
>Anthropologist
Abilities:
>Animal Empathy
>Polyglot
>Silver Tongue
>Trap Lore
>Mesmerism
>Occultism
>Clairvoyance
>Use Artifact
Artifacts:
>Waystone

Good work. An idea might be to increase the expertise inherent abilities by one each (from the second page since there all pretty much from the first page), and double the amount of artifacts you can choose at the beginning of the Artifact section, and that you get from the fortune ability.
There are a lot of cool options and I want to pick more.
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>>55149201
I had a quick question for ya, I think someone else brought it up, but are you going to add any small point things to buy?
I have 98 right now, and that's only because I forwent something I liked and upgraded it to a more powerful spell since I would've wasted 12 points otherwise
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>>55151237
>You get one choice free.
That doesn't work if options have varied costs. Everyone will just pick immortal as the free choice since it costs 4pts rights?
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>>55151481
*inheritance ability
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>>55150813
Archaeologist & Scientist
Trap Lore, Use Artifact, MacGyvering, and Intelligence
Survivalist, Polyglot, Combat Training, and Investigation
Mobile Base

That's it, so far, I'm looking forward to the rest. You should add a few more artifacts and allow two.
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>>55149447
A fighting animal and a stereotypical joke character, like a Kanye West tribute.
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>>55151481
>>55151572
Heh, If I increase the amount of artifacts granted by 'Inheritance' it can get stuck in a loop with 'Hermetic Text' and then I might as well say get whatever you want.

Which nobody is stopping you from doing anyway. I've always seen CYOA instructions as just a set of guidelines anyway to ensure a coherent power level, but if you have a specific idea go for it, I'm not stopping you. I'm deliberately keeping that level rather low, so as to not stray into Super Hero territory, though limits will rise as I add expansions for additional themes that imply higher power levels.

If you have ideas for additional artifacts I'll gladly add them in, though keep in mind that flashy magic and super science will be kept
separate for later.
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>>55149447
I'd like to see some Secret Techniques styled after Mystic/Occult disciplines that focus on Keep Away strategies.
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>>55151756
Maybe a pack of investigative tools would be good. Including stuff like lock-picks, fingerprint dusting equipment, Etc.
And just add that one cannot choose Inheritance twice, if you just add that Inheritance grant two additional Artifacts.
Let me see if I can think of any other Artifacts.
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>>55151809
Armor that is relatively tough, light, and can regulate temperature to keep one warmer in the cold, and cooler in the heat.
Selection of small arms, including a pistol, revolver, and a few knives.
Maybe a multitool, a book of good maps, and/or a compass could be packaged with one of the other things.
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>>55151756
Is it possible to choose items multiple times? I didn't think the player could choose Hermetic Text multiple times.
For Artifact ideas, maybe a low key lucky charm increasing fortune with random chance and lucky timing. Another one could be a subtle aphrodisiac/pheromone Artifact.
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>>55151756
here's an idea I had
>King Solomon's Gold
>A gold piece with a permanent red stain, this artifact will grant you good fortune (or a form of weak clairvoyance?) for as long as it is on your person.
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>>55151862
Clairvoyance is already a ability though.
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>>55151874
the ability is more like weird visions though. I'm talking like a few seconds into the future or something, enough to evade an incoming blow or arrow
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>>55151896
enough to experience cumming twice
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>>55151842
And don't forget just basic medical supplies.
And maybe a bag of holding-type thing? Just one able to hold about twice as much as it should.
Also, the Panacea should grant invulnerability to most poisons, too.
Oh, also, supplies for MacGyvering.
A lot of what I've suggested can be all part of one "Artifact," I think. Just mundane stuff one would want.
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I miss Tokhaar Gol cyoas
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>>55151937
Get the fuck out of here, frog.
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>>55151842
>>55151927

Common items an explorer would have (maps, tents, basic weapons etc.) is something that would come as standard for everyone (have to add a note saying that). The artifact section is for non standard and special equipment as it were.

Some armor with an integrated thermal blanket would seem appropriate.

>>55151860

Inheritance, Hermetic text and Manservant are meant as a means to exchange 'points' between sections to add more flexibility in character creation.

>>55151862
>>55151896
Hmm

>Lucky Penny
A coin with a bullet stuck through it's middle. Most projectiles tend to miss you or just graze you. At least one will be redirected by the coin.
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>>55148965
Of course....
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>>55151952
>Inheritance, Hermetic text and Manservant are meant as a means to exchange 'points' between sections to add more flexibility in character creation.
I see... In that case including an Artifact with each Expertise option might be something to consider.
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>>55151981
I've been meaning to ask: The doll is somehow the same as that Maria chick, right?
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>>55149317
Holy shit. I don't regret changing my build so i picked the box this makes me feel like the greatest of heroes. But how i am going to use two swords and a shield at the same time? I mean pre-doom sword lore is fucking huge but i am not sure if it covers that
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>>55151952
in the next update you should write that inheritance, hermetic text and manservant can be taken a bunch of times in their options.
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been away for a long time, did CATastrophy and the cyoa where you can either be somebodies spirit monster or have a spirit monster (by ZBG) ever get done?
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>>55152018
I was thinking about it, but I feel that artifacts are something that can be used to add extra flavor on top of the standard stereotype so I wanted to keep the choice more free. A hunter might want a magic weapon instead of a big gun, a mad scientist might keep a brainwashed tiger as a guardian in his laboratory, etc...

I think it might be best to just raise the artifact limit to 2 and see where that goes.

>>55152078
Will do.

>>55152048
The doll was made by Gehrman to look like Maria and is implied to be anatomically correct.

Not many people would be alright with knowing someone made a blowup sex doll that looks like them.
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>>55152119
neither have been finished yet
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>>55152119
Of course they haven't been finished.
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>>55152145
>>55152271
fuck me
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>>55152294
if it makes you feel better i believe ZBG has at least been making progress with his guardians CYOA. i don't believe i've heard anything about CATastrophy.
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>>55152142
>a blowup sex doll that looks like them.
Don't you insult dollfu, she's more like one of those Japanese sex robots.

Annalise best though.
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>>55149636

Lets do this!

Im gonna stay male.
>Muscular
>Public speaking
>Allure
>Quick learner

Home
>Big House
>Small House
>Huge Kitchen
>Huge Bedroom
>Live-in help
>Outdoor pool
>Sauna
>Hot bath
>Electronics

Parents
>Single Mother
>Supportive
>Hardworking
>Loving
>ara-ara
>Adoptive
>Open-minded

Siblings
>Yacob
>Kiera
>Sara
>Nicole

Helpers
>Rhea

Friends
>Thor
>Kate
>Lacee
>Linda
>Sofia

Lewd adventures ahead, especially when i hit puberty. But i also have Yacob, Thor and Kate to vidya with
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>>55151952
How about top-of-the-line camera and sound recording equipment?
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>>55151237
>Immortal
>Physique Change -2
>Appearance Change -2
Immortal super handsome athlete it is!

>Wealthy Heir -1

>Comfybright
a best.

>Soulfeeder
>Paladin

>Smithing II, Extras -7
>Melee III and Armor -10
>Monster Hunting -3
>Disarming II -3
>Improved Healing, Level Head -3
>Tactics -3
>Fast Learner -1
>Second Chance -4

>Pastel
>Lucky, Personal Spring, M-Serum
>Mansion
But I'll buy a reasonably sized comfy house closer to my workshop.

>Retry Drive

>Hunt Ancient Wyrms
Although I'm immortal so I'll probably get around to helping in all the proposed quests.

>Custom companion (waifu)
>Immortal
>Magician
>Cooking II, Alchemy II -7
>Combat Magic III -7
>Superb Affinity, Telepathy -3
>Disarming, Improved Healing, Fast Learner, Precognition, Second Chance -10

>Wellform -2
For monster traps.
>Elemental -4
>Conjuration II -6

>Weapon: Coated Catalyst -1

>Harvest Spirit, Apprentice, Librarian
>Retry Drive

All right. I'm ageless, have two redundant failsafes if I die, I have a perfect magic-wielding waifu, and I'm a rich as fuck inventor/hunter with my own mansion in a peaceful and beautiful world.

This CYOA doesn't make sense and gives too many points but eh, I like it.
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>>55152326
He has? All I've seen is him promising he kicks his wip-posting addiction but then does it.
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>>55152527
That works
Was originally thinking of adding a Dick Tracy type wrist communicator and miniature spy ring camera, but that sort of miniaturization will be part of the SciFi/Mad Science expansion.
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>>55149450
You do it asshole. We don't know what you think is good.
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>>55149317
I thought Bones survived the Doom as well
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>>55152534
Retry Drive is kinda meaningless in the long run. This is Easy-mode and you aren't one and only Incarnate there after all.
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>>55153021
Well it lets me expand my lifespan right? How is it meaningless?
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>>55153041
Retry drive is meaningless because you are playing on comfybright thus wasting your beautiful snowflake power choice
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>>55151237
>Personal
Immortal

>Reincarnation
No Background

>Context
Nobledark (44)

>Power Gain
Soulfeeder

>Class
Assassin

Strength- 4 + 1= 5
Defense- 1 + 1= 2
Agility- 4 + 1= 5
Dexterity- 1 + 1 + 2= 4
Intelligence- 1 + 2 + 1= 4
Willpower- 1 + 1 + 2= 4

>Skills
Craftsmanship- Alchemy I, Alchemy II (40)
Combat- Ranged I, Ranged II, Ranged III, Melee I, Melee II, Offhanding I, Offhanding II, Infiltration, Combat Magic I, Combat Magic II, Combat Magic III (17)
Mental- Disarming, Superb Affinity, Improved Healing, Fast Learner, Level Headed (11)

>Magic
Illusion II (4)

>Equipment
Light Armor (2)

>Companions
2x Custom, craftsmanship abilities. One for cooking/tailoring, the other for blacksmithing/enchanting

>Starting City
Saastal

>Perks
Hunter's Haven
Personal Spring
Lucky

>Accommodations
Small House (0)
Main District

>Hidden Ability
Protagonist Drive

>Goals
All of them. But we'll kill the Archdemon to start

>Afflictions
None
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>>55153041
You lose it when the timeline becomes safe.
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>>55149317
>Endles
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>>55149236
>Excalibur
>sword in the stone
wasn't Excalibur the sword Arthur got as a replacement for the sword he pulled from the anvil on a stone?
it's been a while since i've read that stuff
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>>55153065
>Companions
>2x
Bigamist, uh?
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>>55153093
LELELELELEL. Quiet is a dummy.
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>>55149201
>Sacrament
Starlight Chasis

>Mentor
Pirate King Bones

>Weapons
Valence Musket (87)
Mourning Day (73)

>Magic
Mindbreaker (46)
Kinetomancy (28)

>Companion
Jyakaras (13)

>Quest
The Scrolls of Thu'um

How about that page for extra points, my man? This build is still my pre-Mystery Box vision. Dropped Skinchanger since apprently that might cock up my demon girl. And that's my job.

>>55153153
Hey now, I didn't say they were girls.

But they are
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>>55149201
Alternate Build, haha time for box edition

>Sacrament
Ordinance (75)

>Mentor
Floop
Maybe Deeja would be a better choice, but I want some poison tactics

>Weapons
Eon's Bow (59)

>Spells
Graviton (32)

>Companions
Andrea (17)
Sedana (2)

>Quest
MYSTERY BOX

We Dark Souls + LotR now. I'm the Chosen King of Gondor. Bearer seek seek lest.
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>>55153103
Yeah, but lots of adaptations simplify it down to the one sword called Excalibur and give either origin story for it.
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>>55153206
seems dumb, but ok
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>I miss Tokhaar Gol cyoas
You don't have too, my CYOAs are coming, they are on their way.
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>>55153285
bernice all the way
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>>55151237
Can I use physique and appearance change to make myself an elf waifu?
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>>55151237

>Personal
Immortal, Physique and Appearance change, Ascending Prince(34)

>Setting
Grimdark(38)

>Power Gain
The Slayer(this looks really good, dunno why more people don't choose it)

>Class
Outsider, add +1 to willpower from ascending prince

>Skills & Magic
Can't buy them lol

>Items
Weapon: Organic medium gun with Adrift, Repairing, and shifting enhancements(27)
Armor: Medium exotic armor with weight add on(17)

>Companions
Divine Intuitionx3, plus the goddess and three monster girls(5)

>City
Sastaal, with personal spring, hunting lounge, and librarian perks

>Accommodations
Large house(0), Main district

>Ability
Protagonist Drive

>Goals
All three
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>>55150396
SDA is Quiet trying on a different persona

i thought you all knew this?
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>>55153441
>SDA is Quiet
SDA is EVERYONE in this thread. i thought you knew this?
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>>55153452
of coarse we did
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May be a little late to ask. What are some goddesses /cyoag/ would like to see in the 4th update to Picking-A-Goddess?
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>>55153483
Xochiquetzal

Or any other big-tittied fertility goddess that can sate my fetishes. It's been awhile since I've been through it throughly, but I recall a large amount of saccharine lolis
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>>55153483
Taylor swift
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>>55153483
You already have Hestia so I'm good.
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>>55153516
Xochiquetzal is already in.

>Or any other big-tittied fertility goddesses
Goddesses with robust chests have been added in. Do you have any more goddesses you want in?

>>55153535
>Taylor Swift
>Goddess
Pick only 1.
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>>55153483

Was Lilith in there?
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>>55153552
>Hestia
>pic related
>>55153483
I dunno, but good luck with it. Looking forward to the new version.
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>>55153567
Taylor Swift
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>>55153483
Morrigan would be pretty neat, no idea if Macha and Badb are already there because i probably missed a lot of updates. But having the complete trinity of celtic war godesses would be cool to see.
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>>55153567
Post it, my brother. My dick desires a divine dirge, descending into their deepest depths, delivering descendants by the dozen
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>>55153483
Brynhildr
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>>55153483
What about Angry Womanjew? I love a good chuuni with a slice of tsun
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>>55153285
>not choosing Jace
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>>55153757
>Not choosing the superior hairdressing processing power of Cutbot 3000
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>>55153575
Lilith is not a goddess per say. She is connected to a bunch of goddesses due to her characteristics and is also classified as a Demon.

>>55153585
Macha, Badb, and Nemain (Who make up the Morrigan are in it).

>>55153595
Kay.

>>55153625
Already in. Here is a complete list of goddesses being added in: https://pastebin.com/iyF90Gxk (Sorted by Religion)
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>>55153878
Thank you Based Goddess Creator
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>>55153878
>So many holy waifus
Praise Italics!
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>>55153903
Its nothing.

>>55153936
Give praise to the hieros gamos.
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>>55153878
Have you considered adding in Coyote for Native American mythology? It could be a nice twist on the classic kitsune, a bit more mangy and trickster oriented.

This also brought an out there idea to my mind, something sort of inspired by American Gods. What about folklore, such as Paula Bunyan (giantess) or Jane Appleseed (free spirited hippy)
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>>55153993
>such as Paula Bunyan (giantess)
I should make a meme with that "demasking the villain" from Scooby Do, and the second frame is of [X author].
In this case it would be Symbibro.

Don't mind me, i'm super tired and tired after the gym
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>>55154020
Admittedly, I was thinking of him when I wrote that
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>>55153285
Cutbot 3000
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>>55153993
>Have you considered adding in Coyote to Native American mythology.
Coyote is more of a trickster spirit that is shared through several native tribes than an actual god. If you go full on animism and consider all spirits gods then technically, Coyote is a god, but then there is the problem of them being depicted as male with no female variant to be made into a goddess.

>What about folklore?
A few legendary figures are in the cyoa as sub-choices, but they cost goddess tokens to have.
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>>55154020
Why the poop aren't I working on a cyoa for once in stead...
I need to pull myself otogether
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>>55154092
So a subchoice would be something lie the gorgon sisters?
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>>55153993
You know, Johnny Appleseed was a real guy.
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>>55154126
Gorgon sisters, Baba Yaga, Scathatch, Tamamo, Aegea, Aife, etc.
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>>55154135
>a real guy (female)
ftfy
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>>55152980
I guess Bones left the order while Deeja "left" the order.
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>>55154178
Gotcha
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>>55150551
>MVD cyoa
Regeneration
Telekensis
Teleportation
Camouflage (Free)
>Side effects (rolled for)
1.) Cancer not fatal (good thing i bought regeneration)
2.) Minor radiation sickness (good thing i bought regeneration)
5.) infertility (good thing i bought regeneration)
>Gun
AS Val accept no substitutes.
PSS
>Country
Ukraine

Ok, so my plan is that i eliminate the rogue mutants with the AS Val from a sniping position, the rifle most likely having been dropped there days before in a secret location. If i have any trouble getting into the area from security of some kind i have the PSS on me at all times. I have the ability to teleport away from the sniping poistion or around security so i need not eliminate people needlessly, the camauflage will also help once i develop it due to exposure to the Ukranian air. All this will minimise witnesses without having to kill them. I plan to use telekensis in the same way as magneto to snatch weapons away from enemies, or if thats too difficult stopping the bolt from engaging. The regeneration is obviously for if i take damage, i specifically chose it to counteract the side effects.

After working there for about 8 months to a year, i would have gathered as much knowledge as i can about the mutations and as much training as i can from the MVD, and when they least expect it. I will find a mutant and offer to help them escape with me to the west. I can teleport and camauflage myself so theres almost no stopping me. I am in control. With the help of my companion i will be unstoppable. I will pick a mutant most likely that is young and needs help, like a little girl, but has telepathy or something to detect enemies near. The information will be traded for our safety in the west.

I see no reason not to offer to work for the CIA, but on the condition that i only work in South America, South Asia or the Middle east or Africa. Im not going anywhere near Russia and China where there are more mutants like me.

Pic is me.
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>>55153878
>Azathoth
How will she reciprocate your feelings if she's never awake?
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Where's the Harry Potter cyoa
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>>55154412
muggles can't see it
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>>55154324
When were you under the impression you couldn't dream that you were awake and in-love? Also: Each of the mythologies have their own pantheon in the God World with only certain events from their mythology being able to affect the Mortal World/happened. Azathoth being awake won't trigger the end of all existence, but it will fuck up their pantheon beyond repair.
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>>55154412
HP is shit. SHIIIIIT!!!
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>>55154412
are you talking about the Jumpchain one? It's on the Jumpchain's drive
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>>55153781
He's a hefty lad.
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>>55154855
For you.
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>>55149978
okay, so the Solar Elf Empire is trying to extend into the literal shadow of a floating continent. What would that even mean? Destroy the floating continent. A complex series of mirrors?
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>>55154902
>Sins of a Solar Elf Empire
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>>55154902
Iluminating the place with lanterns would be way more easy. Jokes aside, i think they are just going there and claim the place.
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>>55149201
By picking temperance de mort I start with a sword and shield ay?
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>>55154458
Of course its garbage. Rowling started to write a children's book series and turned it into a series for teenagers.
I still love it though. Makes for pretty cringe fanfiction fuel and the occasional good one.
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>>55155068
I would consider it decent if the magic in a story about a MAGIC SCHOOL was more well thought than a bunch of faggots shouting at sticks and then magic happens.
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>>55155068
>a long series shouldn't ever evolve with its base
Confirmed shit judgement and terrible writing instincts.
>>
The books went to shit after the 4th one which is more or less when teenagers started being the target audience.
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>>55155214
It's also when most people grew into more sophisticated tastes and the rose-coloured glasses come off. That and adults who may be fine with a socially agreed upon child-oriented writing aesthetic can still disagree or be put off by an adolescent culture that doesn't match their own.
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>>55155163
I guess going into a complex, highly detailed and well thought out system to explain magic would keep a ten year olds attention.
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>>55155214
The 5th book pissed me off so much when it came out. He was such a whiny bitch constantly
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>>55149254
oh, I'll point out again that 2 weapons and 3 powers is financially impractical.
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>>55153483
Put the mystery box back in. I only get hard for the Lord
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>>55154942
nah, I'm pretty sure the "solar" is significant. Especially when Arya seems to have visions of illuminating the Falls.
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>>55155163
have you read Mother of Learning?
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>>55153483
is hecate in?
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>>55153878
Where's the most recent version of the CYOA? It turns out that I suck at finding things.
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>>55155252
That's also true but I meant that the first four were focused on "cool" stuff in hogwarts (chamber of secrets, snek, the map, the tournament) while the remaining books were more about being rebels n shit.
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>>55155281
I second this assertion. At best you can have one weapon and two spells, or vice versa. Frankly the weapons aren't really good enough on their own merits to warrant purchasing more than one, especially when the magics are so versatile and broken with a bit of thought.
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>>55148699
>World
Nobledark

>Inherent Power
Born Leader

>Birthright
The True Heir

>Armor & Weapons
The Hyperion
Solais
Kriscarn

>Mentor
Fara Entor

>Companions
Erefexus
The Aegis

>Mount
Hawk Griffin

>Starting Point
Main Bazaar

The world may be darkness now but I will topple the false king and banish darkness from this world. I will bring forth an age of prosperity and happiness.
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>>55155327
Mystery box will return after some adjustments.

>>55155369
Hecate is in the cyoa. >>55153878 Has the list of goddess old and new.

>>55155405
It should be in the drive.
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>>55155629
Ah, there it is. Thanks.
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>>55155358
No. Is it good?
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>Posting WIP
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>>55155823
I think so, and it's definitely thought out. Dude built the world, then started writing a trilogy to help him catch any flaws in the worldbuilding.

In terms of the magic system:

https://motheroflearninguniverse.wordpress.com/2016/12/13/basics-of-magic-mana/
https://motheroflearninguniverse.wordpress.com/2017/08/10/basics-of-magic-spellcasting/

The story doesn't start until the MC's third year at magic school, because the first two years are boring theory and mana sensing and stuff.
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Didn't domain master update? Y'know, Bliss/Divergent/SDA+Guy who helped with v2(Whoever he was)?
I SAVED AS THUMBNAIL
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>>55148699
Can people be coerced or otherwise forced into signing word binder contracts?
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>>55149499
>Race
High Elf

>Encounter
Salvation

>Age
Teenager

>Characteristics
Friendly
Obsessive
Charismatic

>Brand
Intricate Choker

>Runes
Stamina Runes
Sorcerer Runes
((Note: Mostly using these runes to improve her quality of life.))

>Clothing
Formal
Casual Clothing

>Accomodations
Master Bedroom

>Treatment
Fatherly

>Severity
Appeasing

>Punishment
Spanking
Reprimand
Flogging ((Only for unforgivable betrayals))

>Training
Literature
Courtesan
Sorcery

>Employment
Sorcery & Courtesan
((I trained her in both so she can do both))

>Gifts
Warm Cloak
Furniture
Candy
Free Time
Small Pet
Journal
Fine Jewelry
Elven Trinkets

>Magic
Heal
Treatment
Cleanse
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>>55154412
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>>55156043
Seems like it, though the term WORD binder implies verbal contracts work fine.
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>>55156038
Yeah I updated it a while ago. Here it is.
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>>55156318
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>>55156345
Also deliver me from my new project.
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>>55156000
Shut up you nancy.
People like involving others in the creation process, there's literally no negatives.
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>>55156033
It does look pretty good. Is there an online version of the book or i will have to find a physical one?
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>>55156394
Fucking Disgusting
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>>55148920
>>55148939
>>55148965
>Every option is top tier.
As expected of Souls
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>>55156000
(I do not know if you are referring to me or someone else) There is nothing wrong with asking if there is any goddesses (waifus) people want to see in a goddess cyoa (waifu CYOA) even if its a WIP. Feedback and communication is the key to making cyoas and getting opinions from others, can teach one how to improve themselves.

Knowing about WIPs can also generate hype and talk within the general and keep an active community until new content is released. Like everything else it can be good or bad, but it is nice to see/know about WIPs. Stay positive Anon.
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>>55148939
Darksun Gwyndolin. I'm going to ravage that boipucci
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>>55156318
>Special weapon and armor now specifies that it only comes in contact with ONE of your affinities
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>>55156423
>How dare creators try to get criticism early on in the process! I want the finish product and ONLY the finish product.
Mmhhm. Kepp whining, leech.
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>>55156682
I now see the error of my ways.

I fucking loved making DM builds. Self insert +Comfy base +badass minions/waifus is my jam.
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Could someone please post the slave market CYOA?
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>>55156318
>Affinity
Gaia
Illusion (7)
Dark (6)

>Size
Average

>Race
Human

>Boss Perks
Empowerment x2 (see above)
Charisma Prowess (5)
Agility Prowess (4)
Corruption (3)
Vitality Prowess (2)
Perception Prowess (1)
Domain Control (0)

>Minions
Sizes- Average, Large
Races- Humanoid, Bestial
Lieutenants- Witch (14), Chosen (13), Archmage (12)
Elites- Harem (11), Warriors (10), Craftsmen (9), Sorcerers (8), Priests (7)
Mooks- Guards (6), Soldiers (5), Engineers (4), Merchants (3)
Perks- Appearance (2), Training (1), Native (0)

>Realm Perks
Restoration (2)
Hidden (1)
Grand Lair (0)

>Complications
Benevolent (+3 minion tokens)
Nemesis (+1 shard)

I'll grab up Physical Prowess for myself, take the Sustenance perk for my minions, then a contingent of Thieves and another group of Soldiers.

Come get some, demon bitches.
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>>55156399
https://www.fictionpress.com/s/2961893/1/Mother-of-Learning
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>>55156876
Thanks m8
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>>55153249
That's good to hear.
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>>55152424
Your shit waifu is pulp on the floor and you'll be joining her momentarily.
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>>55153285
bernice best girl
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>>55157142
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>>55152424
She rejects your marriage proposal though.
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>>55157142
>Wheel is not spinning
0/10
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>>55153483
Offtopic question, but do the goddesses have any Kind of power besides the one she'll teach you? For example Azathoth being omnipotent. Because lots of the goddesses have only a fraction of their power in your cyoa, in comparison to their real world mythology. Just asking for power fanatsies.
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>>55148699
Noblebright
Wordbinder
Marked hero
Astral mark
Khanda
QVRLLICUI
Efrexus
Tatrenua
Hawk Griffin
Main Bazaar
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>>55148699
If a wordbinder gets someone to sign a contract to obey them faithfully forever, then commands them to sign a contract that says they will never obey the wordbinder again, what happens?
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>>55157329
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>>55157329
Bag of holding into bag of holding, just on mental plane.
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>>55157346
So I have to be careful not to give contradictory commands?

Like, if someone enters a contract to "protect me and my wife" they'll just BSoD if they ever have to choose between us, letting us both die?

That somehow seems much weaker, considering you can't even do most straightforward tasks that way.
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>>55156394
>literally no negatives.
>>55150821
It's bad for three reasons I can think up:
1) Hypes it up, and you can never deliver on hype
2) Spoils it. You'll be left thinking what the fuck happens and likely grow bored
3) Autism. I avoid WIPs and when I see the final some autistic part of my autistic brain makes me care less
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>>55157414
Okay, so it doesn't actually change anything, you just have a negative gut feeling to it. Like how autistic kids sometimes don't like having their ears touched.
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>>55157329
A more important question: Why do you need someone else to tell you how they think something works? Why not believe it works the way YOU think it works?
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>>55149450
typical "post some yourself" response
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>>55157275
>Do the goddesses have any kind of powers besides the ones they'll teach you?
>Azathoth being omnipotent.
Yes. The goddesses retain all their powers and abilities within the God World and their section of the God World which occupied by their Pantheon. If you want to pull end of the world shit with Azathoth (Such as wiping out all existence) you gotta do that with them in the Lovecraftian section of the God World.

If you go to the Mortal World (Our World) with your goddess(es) they have half their powers and can't pull off end of the world shit or the Mortal World kicks them out and back into the God World. Mortal World is based off humanities collective view point of the world and won't let something harm it. Hence why there is a God World for deities of all mythologies with a section for them to all their powers in.
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>>55157466
But what if it does not work the way you think it works?
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>>55150551
tfw you can read cyrillic
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>>55157466
For the same reason I obey the rules of the CYOA at all. There is this implicit idea that we are willingly participating in this thing and abiding by its rules.

Must it be all or nothing? Isn't there some middle ground between "only my thoughts count in a game of pretend" and "wowow I'm a slave to the rules and can't think for myself"?
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>>55157466
Because sharing ideas is super fun.
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>>55157488
Thanks for the info
Looking forward to the next release
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>>55157512
>Must it be all or nothing?
It always is either all or nothing.
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>>55157502
What do you mean? It doesn't matter. Why do you value a stranger's opinion higher than your own?
>>55157512
There is a middleground. But you/he was asking other people NOT the author, no?
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>>55151244
>Gunpowder implements are useless in this worlds undead and demons
Nigga what
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>>55157557
Usually it's the Sith who deal in absolutes.
>>55157567
I was asking the thread in general, which may or may not include an author. Mostly I just agree with this guy >>55157528.
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>>55157269
I already gave up all my insight for Doll, you think I can pull off that kind of arcane bullshittery?
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>>55157506
fuuck I can't even read
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>>55157529
No problem. If you got a question just ask.
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>>55157698
Which waifus can shapeshift into boys and which are okay with being cute boys?
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>>55157488
>The world works via collective belief
>We managed to make it dull and boring
It actually sounds like something it could have happened.
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>>55157752
I'm pretty sure you can technically make all of your waifus into boys with Physical Alteration.
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>>55156106
Ravenclaw has the best bonus, even if Hufflepuff is traditionally the most chill.

Charms and Occlumency/Legilimency for my classes.

Katie seems like the best choice.

Philosopher's Stone is an item greater than all the rest. Money and life are both quite nice to have around.
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>>55156318
What was changed?
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>>55157752
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>>55157781
But are they okay with it?
>>55157815
As much as I want to meme you it would only make my position worse.
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>>55157676
shit I can't even
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>>55157752
You will never get a husbando CYOA, Anon. It's futile.
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>>55156318
Since my element spica build got nerfed I thought I'd become The Shining One and lead the forces of light to victory.
Complications first:
Benevolent(18), Savior(23), Whispers(10s). And y'know what, Rival too(28).
To the first page now. Affinity is Light, Large Size, Light Elemental.
Boss Perks: Magical Prowess(9s), Charisma Prowess(8s), Corruption(7s), Domain Control(6s), Empowerment(Inferno, Storm, Mystic)(3s), Guardian(Champion Warlord Chosen)(2s), Guardian(Warlord Archmage Oracle)(1s), Final Form(Celestial Behemoth)
Minions: Celestials and Elementals of Average or Petite size.
Perks: Appearance(27), Native(26), Devotion(25), Training(24).
Minions: 100 Guards(22), 50 Scouts(21), 100 Servants(19), 50 Clerics(18), 50 Merchants(17), 100 Recruiters(15), 50 Engineers(14), 40 Soldiers(10), 10 Summoners(9), 20 Sorcerers(7), 40 Priests(3), 20 Craftsmen(1), 10 Overseers(0).
Expansion, Legendary, Treasure.

Light being the base realm is not enough, I need Inferno, Storm and Mystic so I can put down my foot and fire hellfire and other godly-like punishments down.
I'd write more down but I feel like I'm missing something. Originally I wanted to buy warriors instead of going full guards/soldiers but the nerf form 25 minions to 10 minions per elite purchase is steep. Now I think my realm is also a bit shit too.
Oh well I'm sure I'm just overthinking this. Also last note, return enchanted weapon/armor having all realm types imbued.
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>>55148699
Nice reference to Gorshalach there, lorenerd
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>>55157752
>Which waifus can shapeshift into boys and be okay with it.
I don't know why you want this in a waifu cyoa. I cannot understand wanting this. I do have the answers you seek.

Hastur, Nyarlothotep, Shub-Niggurath, pretty much ALL of the Lovecraftian deties are fine with being male or female because its irrelevant to them.
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Anyone have a cyberpunk CYOA?
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>>55156106
Hufflepuff, potions, Luna and George, time turner.
i.e. cross-houses quasi-Rick&Morty-level shenanigans

Though I wish the CYOA didn't take place at the same time of the books. I think it'd gain from the possibility to choose companions among the Marauders, or the next generation. Also, the items seem a bit OP. And some adventures to choose from could be cool.
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>>55158277
Nyarlothotep's description mentions everything turning into nothing, what exactly does that mean?
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>>55158277
>waifu
Because I want a husbando?
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>>55157488
Can a powerful goddess create her own world in the god world? For example Viracocha, as she is described as the creator of all things.
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>>55157410
Pretty much. If you give a computer conflicting orders it'll freeze up, trying to find a solution that doesn't exist.

Or considering you're enslaving a living being maybe they'll just do whatever they honestly think is correct.
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>>55158368
The end of the world.

>>55158428
A powerful goddess can create their own domain/use the domains they have in mythology to fuck around in.
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>>55149201
Sanity Arrows guy here, been taking a look at things off and on and was wondering if it would be possible for to convince Laheera to power the illusion if she were under the impression it was to hide you. For instance if you had Deeja as a mentor and as part of the plan and he went to Laheera asking her to help hide his pupil in an illusion ala Ariamis. Under the pretext that say the Yellow Samurai was after you and you needed to be hidden. If that were the case would she be inclined to power it?
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>>55158361
There's a couple.

My favorite being the Magocracy one.
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>>55157414
There is also a psychological affect that can happen where you talk about a project and your mind kind of files it as "done" so you never finish it.
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>>55158461
>>55158428
I should explain this further. There exists the Mortal World (Our world) then there exists the God World (Where deities fuck around.)

The God World is divided into several lands based on their Pantheon (Egyptian, Greek, Roman) and each Pantheon has a supreme being (Viracocha for Incan, Chaos for Greek, YHWH for Abrahamic, etc) who has supreme power in that Pantheon and makes final decision on important matters.

The deities usually keep the fuck away from other Pantheons lands unless they are acquaintances based on occupation or through shared worship (Which leads to stuff such as Athena vs. Minerva due to them being two different deities.) Then inside of each of the Pantheons lands are Domains which are public (Olympus) and shared by the deities for use. Then there is private Domains (Which are like homes/lands) like Fenslair (Owned by Frigg) or your private Comfort in the CYOA that can only be accessed by said deity/people invited there and where they act as a Supreme Being in it.
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>>55158623
Daily reminder that YHVH really is a wargod hat usurped his whole pantheon
Ophanim are not carrying his CHARIOT for nothing
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>>55158448
>pretty much
>or maybe not
Thank you for your contribution.
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>>55158719
On the matter of YHVH/God/Lord they have their personal pantheon (Abrahamic) which is separate from the Canaanite Pantheon due to their usurpation.
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>>55158623
That's pretty convenient for the deities with low powerlevels, because if everything would be shared, everybody would pick only the strongest god of the respective religion
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>>55153483
I havea rather large list for that to be honest, wait a sec, I've written it down somewhere
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>>55148699
E nomino sanctum...
Nobledark
Good Friend(A divine being, believe it), God's Chosen.
The Hyperion. Solais. Kriscarn.
Qvrllicui.
Benjamin, Micaela. Hawk Griffin.
Putrid Slum.

Time to spread the message of god.
Funny, while I was making this build, I thought to myself. Skill thief is kind of a odd thing, isn't it? Imagine killing a bunch of soldiers, then crying a bit. They had a bunch of strange skills. Horse Riding, sure. Gardening. You also think you'd make a good father now, I wonder where that came f- Oh...
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>>55148699
Word binder seems like the power with the most uses desu. It's like skill thief but with more uses, provided you can incapacitate the target rather than kill it.
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>>55156106
>house
Ravenclaw

>specialty class
Charms, Transfiguration

>best friend
Draco or George

>enchanted item
Cloak of Invisibility

I can be an invisible furry with an aryan friend, what's not to love
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>>55158798
Well the thing was developed for large pantheons such as: Chinese, Greek, Aztec, and so on due to the sheer number of deities. Some religions you don't get past 20 different deities, so it doesn't really affect them that much.

>>55158837
Give me the list and I'll see what I can do.
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>>55153483
>>55153878
since you have allat and manat I guess it makes sense to add Al-‘Uzzá.
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>>55158837
>>55153483
>Áine
Because we really hadn't a summer goddess

>Lakshmi & Durga
because your lack of Hindu disturbs me and I tend to like women who can fuck shit p like Durga

>Chang'e & Nu Wa
Because I like the myths

>Sedna
Because ocean goddess

>Skaði
Because Skaði

Also a goddess I put under sky goddesses, but I can't remember the name atm.
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>>55158362
>spoiler
Should have taken Neville instead, if you wanted it to be accurate. George is actually competent.
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>>55159078
Chang'e and Nuwa are already in. Still I put down the others.

>>55159078
'Kay
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>>55149201
Roughly how long could a strong willed and disciplined person turn Comet on before they would no longer be willing to take the potion to reduce their meglomania?
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>>55158952
Oh yeah Pele, her sister Hi'iaka and Poli'ahu
Because hawaiian gods are fascinating
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>>55158790
Must be lonely to have a pantheon of only yourself.
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>>55159428
Not when you're smashing 50% of humanities faith pussy.
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>>55156318
>Affinity
Mystic
technology

>size
average

>race
bestial (kitsune, only 3 tails)/construct(all of my tails are mechanic in nature and I have a mechanic core in my chest)

>Boss perks
hybrid
empowerment

magical powers
perception powers
domain control

enchanted armour (representing the hardened see through shell protecting my core and the I wear to protect my shins and lower arms.)
enchanted weapon x3 (representing each of my tails)

>>minions
average size
bestial and construct

>mooks
2x mages
2x engineers
2x guards
merchants
clerics
scouts

>elites
craftsmen
sorcerers
warriors

>lieutenants
champion
hunter
witch

>realm perks
grand lair
treasure
separate

complication
none.

I'm going laze around and get my crafstmen/engineers/mages/sorcerers to upgrade my parts whenever they have a breakthrough in their research of magitech.
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>>55159428
That's why you get yourself worshipped twice over and convince people to "venerate" your mom.
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>>55159467
But around a half of that is blowing people up and durka durking in the sand.
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Note that Morrigan is pretty close to the triple goddess, Durga ay or may not be Kali as well or Kali Durga and Lakshmi is part of the tridevi, the wives of the three gods that reprsent the three aspects of Brahman
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>>55159428
That's the reason you take on multiple names and prophets and set the religions they start to fight over who is the better ultimate god.
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>>55159715
Both the Celtic and the Hindu pantheon are Indo-European, so they'll share deities that ultimately have the same root, yes. A triple goddess was likely part of the original Indo-European religion.
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>>55159783
Makesyouthink.jpg
Especially considering similar things aply to our modern languages as well.
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>>55153441
>>55153452
>>55153452
SDA and Quiet are part of the CYOAgoddess, we noticed that last year already
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>>55159850
Interestingly, there's evidence that Indo-European religion had a twin god. Effectively, there was a triple goddess and a dual god.
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>>55157228
You have to be honest there, that was MASTER trolling by Miazaki
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>>55149777
>>55151102
I knew kit was good, hopefully this gets completed soon
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>>55157228
>proposal
>PROPOSAL
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>>55159883
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>>55159715
>Morrigan is pretty close to the Triple Goddess
You could say that. The Triple Goddess is a term/title that applies to multiple goddesses that form one group or entity. (The Morrigan, Triple Goddess of Wiccan, the Fates (Greek), Chief Goddesses of Arabia, etc.
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>>55160066
Why, you might even call it preposterous!
Get it? The phonetic similarity to, "proposal," is the joke!
Ha ha ha!
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>>55160122
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who is the host of the eu lobby now?
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>>55160163
>eu lobby
You guys really are forming a clique behind the scenes. Not cool, man.
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>>55156318
Glory to the Shining One, take two. I'll take complications first again.
Benevolent, Savior(23), Hero(28). Apocalypse(4rp). Rumours(31). Rival(36).
Affinity: Light.
Normal Size Light Elemental.
Empowerment(Inferno, Mystic, Storm, Air).(4). Personal Guards(3). Charisma Prowess(2). Corruption(1). Guardian(Warlord/Oracle/Archmage) - Large Construct.
Minions: Average and Large Celestials and Elementals.
Appearance(35), Native(34), Devotion(33), Training(32).
150 Guards(29), 50 Mages(28), 50 Scouts(27), 100 Servants(25), 100 Merchants(23), 100 Recruiters(21). 20 Summoners(19), 20 Sorcerers(17), 20 Riders(15), 20 Agents(13), 50 Priests(8), 30 Craftsmen(5), 20 Overseers(3), Champion(2), Archmage(1), Chosen(0).
Expansion, Legendary, Restoration, Grand Lair.

You know I think I still didn't get it right. Whatever, fuck.
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>>55149740

Keep your old family option:
Cost:You can't choose anything in the cyoa and are stuck how you are now
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>>55160277
Oh come on. Can't I just take my sisters with me? Picking new ones just doesn't feel right. I couldn't replace my current sisters.
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>>55160462
anon, why would you want to fuck your real sisters?
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>>55149201
Sacrament: Starlight Chassis. It's the one which stands out and appeals to me the most.

>>55149218
Mentor: Laheera Rose. Cunning and intellect are apparently what Starlight Chassis is all about.

>>55149236
Excalibur (83). If you're going for a weapon, you might want to go for the best. I'm sure that seal won't come into play later.

Eon's Bow (66). This feels like it's crying out for someone to fix it. Which sounds like what Akaska is for.

>>55149254
Watcher (49). Exceptional for utility, especially if it works with Akasha.

Portal Attachment (27). Always think with portals if you can. Always.

Graviton (0). Extremely broad uses, including enchantment, and seems like it'd be perfect in combination with Portal Attachment. Portal and Gravity Gun, together at last.

>>55149278
Can't afford any. Whoops, maybe I shouldn't have taken his advice.

>>55149304
Always take the box.

>>55149317
Well, this'll be interesting. I probably wouldn't have picked up Excalibur if I'd known, and gone for Deejah. But I think I'll be alright. Storyteller synergies quite well with Akasha and Graviton, and I can always learn to dual wield with the armor. And maybe I can even find some way to help them?

Back to quests, my original will be finding the Oracle of Nath. I have a feeling she's going to be useful on our real quest.
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>>55160263
Looks fine to me anon, whats up?
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>>55161030
Why would you assume I want to fuck my real sisters? It's not that I JUST want to fuck them anyway. Don't insult me like that.
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>>55161030
If you had real sisters, you'd want to fuck them too.
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don't forget to post a lot of waifus in the next throb
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>>55161084
Well first, those complications bother me since I don't have enough guards in my subjective opinion. I also don't have much to fight the Apocalypse, having Guards who can only stay in the main realm and no Soldiers. Rumors is sealed(Light Realm Effect + Charisma) so I guess that's fine. Rival is bothersome.
I think I'm most bothered by the fact that I want to be a Celestial but "-Corruption resistance" and "Whispers" doesn't go well together.
>>55161250
+++
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>>55161289
Well i mean, really you'll just have to outlast the apocalypse it seems.

And theres nothing wrong with conveniently gimping a drawback
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>>55149447
I want to be able to be one of those evil Bison style brainwashing villains. Because being a massive ham is amazing.
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>>55149841
Nobody says Kosm.
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>>55160103
Is that Blue?
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>>55148699
NobleDark
Skill Thief (assuming the traits are always positive?)
Marked Hero
Astral Mark
Kriscarn + Khanda
Qvrllicui
Zerria
Wanderer
Cliff Jackal
Main Bazaar
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>>55161645
You just did.
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New bread soon?
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>>55161898
No! Silence! You could ruin everything!
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>>55161898
>Muh bread
Are you a communist or something?
Stay poor
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>>55161162
I do, and I don't. We were happiest when we ignored each other. Now they're christmas cake.
>>55161085
what else are you going to do in this cyoa? I thought that was the point.
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>>55161938
>Now they're christmas cake.
You could have prevented this, anon. In fact, there's probably still time.
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>>55161938
The thing is, I can do it in real life. I don't need to imagine it or anything.
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>>55161919
>>55161921
Too late! The deed is done!
>>55162057
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>>55161921
At least you posted an appropriate Miko.
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