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Previous Thread: >>55057791
Archives and other resources: https://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu
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posting second part in 15 mins
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This is probably technically better served in the other thread, but this is a criminally underrated CYOA.
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>>55072217
And the world.
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>>55072194
reposting because i forgot to spoiler
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>>55072445
Can I start hunting her down after this?
I want to call her true form cute.
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>>55072606
i mean, i suppose you could. i doubt she'd even still be on earth after that. she's probably in hell or some type of plane of oblivion, so i dunno how you'd go about chasing her there.
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>>55072445
Picking succubus!
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>>55072644
Well if she pulled the magic bullshit to turn me into a androgynous shapeshifter. I'm certain I can find some obscure ritual to find and track her down with my indefinitely long life.
Just need to find a good "moral" method of transplanting my soul, which probably won't be a thing.
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We need more waifu CYOAs.
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>>55072709
define "waifu CYOA"
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Pokemon Personified Plus+ CYOA when?
CATastrophe CYOA when?
Guardien CYOA when?
Tok's new lewd CYOA when?
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>>55072701
this is true, but what do you think she would do once you actually found her? i mean it's clear she doesn't exactly like you, so i'm willing to bet if she saw you again and remembered you her immediate reaction to you would be something violent. i mean the odds that you're there to do something nice to her or for her are incredibly slim and it's more likely you'd be there for revenge, so she'd be justified in that response. but also she's some kind of horrific eldritch demon so that could just be her nature to hate you and want to kill you. basically going for her doesn't seem like a good idea.
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>>55072748
cancer
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*coughs in "here's a wip, give me (you)s"*
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>>55072765
Do I sound like someone who cares about logic like that? If I do then I seem to be doing a bad job.
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>>55072445
>Picked bass, mic, case and pick without even checking the box
>Turned out more or less perfectly
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>>55072796
The pic made my day anon. Hadn't seen that one before.
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>>55072794
Side effects? Pfft... If i end up becoming a russian loli that shoots lasers or something it is going to be worth it.
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>>55072794
>>55072857
i also would like to become a cute russian loli. lasers optional however.
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>>55072794
>wip
go away
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>>55072857
>>55072877
>that feel when no russian loli imouto
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>>55072794
https://youtu.be/NrLyPk-YkcM
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>>55072904
;_;
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AVRdhg6biN0
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>>55072904
trust me, as someone who has a russian imouto

shit sucks
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>>55073114
Why does it suck?
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>>55072748
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>>55073136
catgirls a shit
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>>55073136
y no catastrophe
y u maen to us
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>>55073136
im disappointed you have neglected to label the squishy boobers
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>>55073152
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anyone have pictures of schoolkids with powers/ psychics?
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>>55073167
>liking shitty cats
>when dogs are literally better in every way
cuck
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>>55072064
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>>55073203
>Liking shitty dogs
>When cats are literally better in every way
cuck
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>>55073222
dogs
>loyal
>cute
>energetic
>will play with you
>will protect you
>can learn commands, preform tasks

cats
>lazy
>selfish
>fuck off when they dont need you
>dont care for you, you are simply a provider
>useless
>get fat
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>>55073203
>>55073273
I agree, but this is CATastrophe.

I am putting doggirls in it, though.
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>>55073273
I used to hate cats when I was young, but once you understand how different their methods of communication are to the dog stuff we're biologically attuned to as humans they actually are pretty affectionate. When they decide to sit in front of you and not look at you, for example, they aren't being spiteful, they are trusting you that you will not attack their vulnerable backs and are keeping a lookout for you.
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>>55073273
women
>lazy
>selfish
>fuck off when they dont need you
>dont care for you, you are simply a provider
>useless
>get fat
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>>55073152
>>55073167
>>55073203
>>55073222
>>55073273
>>55073297
>>55073308
They're all shit.
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>>55073337
I know you're more in need of escapism and wish fulfillment than most /r9k/, but try to keep your shit on your own board
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>>55073337
yes but

women
>can be fucked

cats
>should not in fact, be fucked

contrary to what you may have heard a cat is not fine too
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>>55073219

Genitalia
>Vagina (3)
>Embellishments (x3)
>Lubrication (x3)
>Musculature (x3)
>Cilia (x3)
>Lumen (x3)
>Plush (x9)
48

Shape
>Enticing
48

Chest
>Gifted
>Multiplicity
49

Influences
>Kleptozoological (Oversaturated)
51

Face
>Seductive
51

Flourishes
>Ourobouros Metabolism
>Godly Cleanliness
>Lactation (Bountiful)
>Aphrodisiac
>Puzzle Genitalia
>Aesthetic Mutations
>Carnal Atmosphere
59

Strategy
>Synergism
62

Dowry
>Title
>Nuptial Torc
>Primordial Woad
>Abyssal Ink
>Celestial Charms
>Seductive Array
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Bonds
>Drudge Throng
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Urges
>Mating Dance
>Throne's Shadow
>Cerebral Recurve
>Spoiled
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Stigmata
>Stigma of the Crystal Heart
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Ambition
>Desire of all Hearts
>Cherished Carnal Treasure
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Pedigree -1
Status -2
Allure 18

http://imgur.com/a/ApBd5
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>>55073430
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I wish to bring some news of my update to Time of Troubles, as well as apologize to those few that are still waiting for it to come out. I won't be able to keep my promise to release the CYOA until the end of summer after all.
There's only a few days left until summer ends, and it's extremely unlikely that I will be able to finish it until the deadline. It's mostly done, but the stuff that remains is quite difficult (though the hardest part - provinces and units - is already done), and once September begins I won't be able to work on the CYOA at incredible hihg speed anymore because uni.
I'm sorry guys. I can post a WIP if you want me to.
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>>55073544
>'m sorry guys. I can post a WIP if you want me to.
dont
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>>55073430
>Backstory
To be the best
>Teacher
Vincent Cruise
>Style
Counter engine (Technique)
>Special attack
Lightning shadow strike (Instant kill)
>Perk
Secondary style (Hard road, Power)
>First match
Emily Endow
>Second match
Maximus styles
>Third match
Cally Lynx
>Final match
Detective Ryo
>Rival
Lovely rival with Cally Lynx
>Results
First match: 2 wins
Second match: 1 win, 1 stalemate
Third match: Secondary style used, 1 win, 1 stalemate
Final match: 2 losses, 2 Energy used
Victory!
>Reward
Master of all you survey

Very cool cyoa albeit short.
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>>55073683
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>>55073694
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>>55073707
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>>55073722
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>>55073738
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>>55073755
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>image attribution/spoilers:
https://pastebin.com/zLGXYcCG
>Various typos, helpfully pointed out by other proofreading folks that I am very appreciate of.
>"Revenge" now explicitly mentions "hands" in case the connection was not clear.

I did the thing I didn't want to do by adding the note referring you Dream of Genie, but by lumping it in with the image credits and providing a summarized version it makes me feel a lot better about the decision.
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daily reminder that CYOAs are not games you play through, but mere conduits for escapism.
thus, the more points you have to get yourself powerful or comfy or whatever the CYOA is about, the funner the experience is. it's not a videogame you have to be smart when playing through or "competitively balanced". it's a completely personal wish fulfillment thing, and if any CYOA tries to be lolhardcore, you're more than welcome to Sartre it.

tl;dr this is the correct version of this CYOA.
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I had an utterly fantastic idea, involving becoming the imouto.

You're stuck with a CYOA author as your adoptive older sibling, until you can be purified. This is done by people, particularly those you have a strong bond with, giving you affection. What that is, and who your older sibling is, would be up to you. Hm... 6~9 choices for authors work?
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>>55073872
Sure go wild
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>>55073872
>with a CYOA author
Immediately discarded.
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>>55073872
>people put in time and effort that could be spent making an actual CYOA into making another "haha us guys am i right? /cyoa/ culture!" meaningless copypasted, unfunny inside joke drivel
please make something worthwhile instead.
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>>55073959
>CYOA
>worthwhile
That said, fuck the cyoa author cult.
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>>55072748
>Pokemon Personified Plus+ CYOA when?
When I find a way to quicker in making a CYOA. I'm trying Skelly. I'll deliver when I deliver. It will most likely happen, the moment you least expect it.

I'll probably have an offering out later today as an apology for taking too long.
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>>55073995
You don't owe anyone anything. Work on it at your own pace, and don't worry about the same anon who asks at the start of every thread
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>>55073790
beautiful GA
always like your image layouts and art choices
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>>55073995
>offering
It better be boipussy
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Anyone has yandere spaceship CYOA? I wanted to post it but apparently I didn't save it.
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>>55074065
Thanks, anon. I hope whatever I might make in the future is enjoyable for you too.
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>>55074043
Kay.

>>55074104
Is boi (girl) pussy valid enough?
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So, can I have an Interaction CYOA in this thread?
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>>55074309
boi (girl) pussy isn't boipussy. If I wanted boi (girl) pussy I'd fuck my sister.
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>>55074309
>Is boi (girl) pussy valid enough?
Wait wait, Italics really *is* a girl?
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>>55074349
>Wait wait, Italics really *is* a girl?
When were you under the impression I was a boy? I am a boy. I was referring to a cyoa update.
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>>55073872
>You're stuck with a CYOA author as your adoptive older sibling
I can't wait for this to started and then given up on, just like every other Author CYOA
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>>55073119
Because he hasn't conquered her with the dick yet.
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>>55074680
I was gonna say the same thing... I know there's at least two others in the work. never finished
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>>55074680
I think that particular anon is just a bit burnt out. If they don't finish it is pretty understandable.
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>>55074695
I got two, and neither have I, but I don't think it sucks.
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>>55073273
>implying you have the willpower to actually train a dog
>implying you have the willpower to take it for walks and otherwise burn off its energy

let's be realistic here, you probably can't even care for a cat, let alone a dog
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>>55073544
It's cool, mate. Your shit is good quality, I'd rather wait and get it well-done than get it rushed.
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>>55073077

what the actual fuck is this
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>>55074729
i already have a dog, and while its not trained thats more due to not knowing how to discipline it effectively due and pampering it as a pup

it does get walked tho
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>>55073273
Cats are softer, quieter, calmer, less demanding, don't try to lick your face, and kill mice in and around your home.
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>>55073872
>until you can be purified
Wait what?
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>>55074824
>don't try to lick your face
I can confirm that this is incorrect.
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>>55074765
A soviet combat loli.
Are you not entertained?
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>>55073872
Please make it kind anon.

I can't stand to be disappointed again

All I want to do is headpat authors for their nice work
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>>55074824
>and kill mice in and around your home.
>implying dogs cant also kill mice
get a yorkie

>softer
incorrect

>less demanding
because theyre never there
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>>55074680
good
author CYOAs are cancer and don't deserve to exist
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>>55074841
I want to be a girl with bigass teddies and waifu Symbiobro...
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>>55074956
>bigass teddies
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>>55074978
beg
ol
teddies
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>>55074879
>incorrect
I touched dogs and then i touched cats. Cats are softer.
>because theyre never there
I can assure you that cats will follow you around the house while you do stuff.
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>>55074978
Big
Ass
Tiddies
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>>55074879
seriously
if you have rat problems just get a ratter
fuck cats
>not literally tho
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>>55074956
>Someone wants to waifu me

Anon, I'm gonna need you to actually finish that author cyoa now

I just want to be wanted
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>>55075035
>I just want to be wanted
Post sexy pics.
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>>55075035
I'm not the one making it! I'm the one with the need.
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Has a CYOA ever been made into a video game?
What CYOAs would make good video games?
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>>55075164
The answer is always Traveller
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>>55075164
Note thise shitte againe
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>>55075164
i considered making a star dust inspired mod for endless sky...then i realised that was alot of work and im lazy as fuck
so to answer your question im pretty sure not
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>>55075164
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>>55075164
Towergirls, has long since begun evolving beyond its mortal bonds.
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I don't think Jesus would approve of that on a Christian image board
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>>55075283
JUST DO IT
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>>55074186
>tfw no choice of being a native and taking over the British empire
there goes my fantasy.
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>>55075164
If I had any talent or a video game making machine achieved via CYOA, I'd make a game of Broquest with numerous plots and random occurences depending upon your party makeup. Making no two playthroughs completely alike.
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>>55072794
Would there be an option to defect to capitalist pig-dogs? I don't want to go back to USSR.
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>>55075356
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>>55075356
I hate to ask for source, but I couldn't find it myself and would really like to know it. Mind helping me out?
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>>55074186
>Merchant
>Natural Phenomenon
>Tarabin
At first I thought the soldiers at the dock to be mercenaries hired my creditors. Turns out that the river had turned red as I came in on the river.

>Diplomacy
>Trading
>Leadership
>Engineering
>Management
Getting my plans across with an interpreter is hard and rousing these soft people is harder still. The harbour and shrine commemorating my arrival is certainly worth the effort.

>Mason
>Regal Bearing
>Quick Witted
>Regional Contacts
I was surprised to find the natives impressed by the masonic touches intended to remind an invited business associate of our brotherhood. A surprise I made use of during my first ceremony. In spite of the interpreter and my mediocre oratory talents they seemed in awe of my presence.

>Violent
>Greed
>Womaniser
I've learned the consequence of greed the hard way. Henceforth my wealth shall be that of the whole kingdom and theirs mine. If the unaccustomed philanthropy provokes my urges I'll go hunting, whoring or to the dungeons.

>Edwin Blake
>Annie Harding
Annie can translate until I master the language and Edwin can dazzle non-believers. Hopefully there will be time to learn from them before they grow bored and senile respectively.
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>>55073337
Counterpoint: cats can't take half of your stuff once they get bored of you.
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>>55076106
Counterpoint: You don't have to marry them.
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>>55075847
Bro, do you have anything of Scorn? She's my favorite symbiote.
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if a CYOA is for an existing setting

how much should the missions reference the plot/main story and how much should be OC?

actually, how much of the CYOA in general should be directly tied to the existing story (powers, things, companions) and how much should be OC?
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>>55076214
>how much should the missions reference the plot/main story/existing story
As little as possible if you want other people to enjoy it.
>how much should be OC?
Preferably everything but the base setting, some of the powers and companions
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>>55076214
only as much as nessisary for flavor and exposition
but >>55076308 is correct, if you write it correctly then a little is more then enough
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>>55076214
>>55076199
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>>55076440
is this a "what not to do?"

the setting isnt jumpchain, its a certain shitty franchise
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>>55073273
You've never actually had either, you just go by the stereotype. That's really sad, fampai.
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>>55076491
i have a dog right now

hes a little yorkie and hes perfect- but i think weve ruined him with our vices, hes lazy and always hungry
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>>55072064
Not gonna post the mystery boxes?
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>>55076515
mystery boxes get posted as needed
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>>55076521
Multipurpose Laser "tool"
Robot Maid
Shock Suit

Just fuck my shit up with dat dere mystery box 2
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>>55076515
A mystery box that gets posted isn't a real mystery box.
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My cyoa was supposed to be set in an alternative universe where (only) girls can cast magic and societies are matriarchal (something like a mix of timelines 144 and 45 of pic related) and the player can choose between becoming a magical girl and pretty much a catboy, but the longer I think about it, I'm more and more convinced that nobody would actually want useless husbandos (as a girl) or feeling useless in a relationship with a powerful being (as a boy). Am I correct? Should I just create a world where everyone can cast magic and gender differencies are mostly cosmetic?
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>>55073273
I have a retarded cat he basically wants 24/7 affection and meows constantly if he can't see me.
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>>55074186
Soldier
Natural Phenomenon
Sikander
Tactics, Diplomacy, Languages, Fitness, Engineering
Regal Bearing, Quick Witted, Modern Weapons
Greed, Womaniser
Jubair Hadi & Annie Harding

If I am to be god-king, I might as well style myself after a King worthy of legend. Rule from the top, claim what I desire, and hand down what will seem like wonders to my people. Monuments and aqueducts alike should increase my glory
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>>55076564
I don't mind getting a husbando, but yeah, nobody is going to want to be a useless catboy who can't do anything.
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>>55076554
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>>55076564
>would actually want useless husbandos (as a girl) or feeling useless in a relationship with a powerful being (as a boy). Am I correct? Should I just create a world where everyone can cast magic and gender differencies are mostly cosmetic?
yes and yes

unless its a fetish thing, then do what the dick says

>>55076578
>even cats have cripple-moe
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>>55076564
Make the magical girls rely on the men to recharge their powers using love.
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>>55076564
>pic related
ffs
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>>55076564
Just remove the boy options, half of the people here are degenerates that want to be cute grills, the other half either wants to be cute grill (boy) or are in denial about their degeneracy.
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>>55074186
eh found it myself
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>>55076611
The general is obsessed with magical girls and gentle femdom so I wanted to make something that would have both.
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>>55072217
Fabromancer. My wife deals with stress by sewing, so I've got a lot of cute homemade things which have a lot of sentimental value.
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>>55076564
>matriarchal society
>functional

Anon... that's too much fantasy even for a fantasy cyoa. Desist.
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>>55076564
How about you remove the magical girls and just have cute catboys doing cute catboy things with other cute catboys? Doesn't that sound wholesome?
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>>55076564
>being a weak pathetic man but somehow a girl takes pity on you and lets you fuck her sometimes
gentle femdom fags would suck your dick for that
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>>55076699
It's Magic. I Ain't Gotta Explain Shit

>>55076713
gays don't give enough (You)s to satisfy me
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>>55076611
I just don't want to be a girl, anon. I'm not gay.
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>>55076713
seriously stay on Facebook.
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>>55076564
Magical girls are the fucking worst. Wizards are cooler than witches anyway.
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>>55073659
-Arabian Realm: merchant trader, rider, lover
-Steampunk
-humanoid enhancement: humans can stay, add fueled-zereh and other races from Persian mythology, I wanna be a giant.
-sky islands
>>55073683
-melee master: saber
-wright prince
-Bard Prince: poetry
-Prince Charming
-prince of maps
>>55073694
-magnificent mount
-mount magnification: Chamrosh
-Opulent outfit
-Wondrous artifact
>>55073707
-I can deal with "easily distracted" I guess
>>55073722
nah
>>55073738
-Constance Hillington
-Zariea Sha'tul
-felicia sackhoff
-priscilla rockkingham
-taleri kassendel

-
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>>55076564
I can't stand settings where powers or magic or whatever are limited to one or split between genders. There's literally never a point to it that isn't wanting to make a political statement or wanting to create a magical realm. Moreover I've never seen any author actually tackle the enormous societal implications having a single superpowered gender would have.
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>>55076564
You sparked my curiosity (and my desires for magical girling) Make it as you said, i wanna see how it ends.
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>>55076564
Well I don't want husbandos at all, and I don't want to be a boy. Though I do have interest in becoming a magical girl in a matriarchal society.
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>>55076663
Have a newer version.
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>>55076796
magic is more common among women in cold war battle mage, but the lore there is that magic was only recently decriminalised.
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>>55073308
I'll never forgeta friend of mine explaining how bringing you dead animals is a sign of affection from a cat by way of ¨You are a bad hunter and I do not want you to die of starvation¨
Also, cats wrapping their tails around you when walking by? that's kinda flirting.
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>>55076843
Is this Angel?
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>>55076843
Just dress the catboys as girls and the problem is solved
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>>55076852
Thanks
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>>55076899
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>>55076860
No.
>>55076886
That doesn't solve the issue, I have no interest in having a pet either way. Pets are a responsibility I am not interested in.
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>>55073308
But I, as a human, don't recognize that as affection. That means cats are not good pets for humans. Most people take contact and visible pleasure in seeing them as affection, which is why dogs are the best pets.
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>>55076926
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>>55076932
>my preferences mean more than yours

Go away
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>>55076938
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>>55076855
Which would be ironic, considering men pursued magic far more than women in the most recent of centuries.
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>>55076926
I still don't get what the fuck dhalsim of all people has to do with blue magic. Also the beard looks good on him.
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>>55076954
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>>55076970
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>>55076983
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>>55076957
I don't see anyone casting Grand Bolide so i think there has been not many people pursuing magic.
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>>55076796
>actually tackle the enormous societal implications having a single superpowered gender would have

Thats supposed to be the fun (but complicated) part. I think it requires making a bigger cyoa, which is why first I need to be sure the premise is attractive enough.

>>55076837
I have a prototype cyoa with 6 waifus in WIP stage but real life won't allow me to finish it in the next month or two.
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Can anyone post the abducted by lolis cyoa?
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>>55076938
holy shit this writing is tiny. I don't have a giant monitor, I'll admit, but this is a bit much.
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>>55077023
wow. It's almost as if you thought I meant magic was an actuality.
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>>55076932
So what you're saying is that dogs are for stupid or lazy people who don't want to learn about how their pet behaves.
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>>55077081
Are you telling me that it is not?
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>>55077023
Magic doesn't exist. People still studied it, dumwad.
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>>55076932
>But I, as a human, don't recognize that as affection.
You can, though. The sounds "I love you" and "Je t'aime" are equally meaningless to you until you learn to translate their intended significance. Likewise, we are less biologically attuned to understanding dogs than we are cats but study bridges the gap. And it's not like dogs are free from misunderstandings either, since they understand a hug as an unwelcome dominance gesture out of nowhere while humans generally understand it as affection.
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>>55077060
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>>55076986
>tfw this is the best femdom themed cyoa in existence
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>>55077077
probs because the idiot posted a version only 740 pixels wide
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>>55077129
mystory bex
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>>55076957
>men were bigger in magic than women

the last time somebody said this the femewiccans had a revolt. not that it isn't true. just saying you should be careful.
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>>55076165
I got a couple of scorn pics. There's not a lot though.
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>>55077134
If you count that, pic related, and the other two CYOAs as being parts of a bigger CYOA, then perhaps.
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>>55077172
>and the other two CYOAs
give pls
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>>55077109
Most people are actually shit at understanding dogs.
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>>55077170
I'd post more, but I don't want to clutter up the thread, even if these are like, 2/7 of all the pieces of fan art I have of her.
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>>55077109
Please don't equate human language with animal communication. That's like comparing counting to seven by your fingers and curve scteching
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>>55076959
He's mimicking the firebreath of a dragon
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>>55077187
Here's one of them.
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>>55073868
I fucking hate you so much.
I just wanted people to make interesting and different builds, and you shit all over it with your fucking powergaming.
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>>55077193

Stop posting sluts and post best girl carnage
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>>55077260
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>>55077191
While true, from living 14 years with a dog, I can tell you, you both get a pretty good groove on how to understand each other.
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>>55077023
>>55077081

>>55077107
This. Whether magic exists or not IRL doesn't matter. Spooky stuff, people doing weird and surprising things and showing interest in paranormal in general - certainly does exist and existed since a long time. We may assume it's an attempt doomed to fail but there's plenty of occult traditions existing since centuries where people actually study and practice magic (or what they think, hope and believe is magic).
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>>55077099
Not him and it seems like you're trying to shitpost but I am pretty sure his message meant that cats are just less by default relatable to humans in terms of showing affection till you learn of the differences, while the way dogs show affection is more obvious from the get-go.
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>>55073868
>>55077249
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>>55077249
It's not interesting if you have to spend all your points for one good demon then can't do anything else. Everyone just makes the same build then.
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>>55077373
It's interesting when a big demon requires a big enough sacrifice that lots of little ones are a viable alternative.
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>>55077397
>Viable alternative.
No, no they're not. They're weak and can't do as much. Meaning that compared to other demonologists, you're worthless. And especially compared to mages. The only reason to go for weak demons is if you want to be a NEET, but that was what Soul Mate was for, not every other background.
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>>55077423
You can't really believe that. You're just making shit up to justify wanting more points.
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>>55077423
I am starting to think that there is only one guy complaining about this all the time.
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>>55077504
It's always one guy.
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>>55077504
>>55077538
It's generally not just one guy, but it is almost always no more than three.
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>>55073868
You're a boring person with a shallow fantasy life, incapable of imagining escapism that includes challenge and difficulty. I pity you.
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>>55073868
if you need all these points and shit to feel validated within your own fantasy

isnt that more a reflection on you?
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>>55077493
>You can't believe that
Sure anon, your tiny fairy that can play pranks is so amazing.
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>>55077672
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>>55073868
>media X has only 1 dimension that functions as a raison d'etre
Sorry, bub. CYOAs are not merely conduits for escapism.
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>>55077134
>being a disposable part of a harem is the pinnacle of femdom cyoas
sad.
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>>55077764
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>>55077780
The slime life seems pretty great, assuming slimes aren't hurt by you eating them and they understand your bewilderment as long as you never cross over into insult.
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>>55077249
Just remove the top 2 levels of summons so people don't feel compelled to go for them. Given the option most people would choose to become slightly deranged demigods over say a comfy celestial hermit simply due to the fact you have the option to do so and nothing prevents you from scaling down your ambitions when want with the demigod path whereas in the hermit route you would be hard pressed to scale your ambition up. The fact that there are also enemies around that might fuck you up adds an incentive to be more powerful as well.
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>>55076899
School: Odesium
Courses: Martial Combat x 3, Enhancement x 3, Tactics, Teamwork, Physical Training, Maneuvers, Magic Refinement
Companions and Classmates: Luvnya, Chanara, Znanje, Liene
Events: Battle Royale, The Great Hunt, Security, Research Proposal, Bodyguard, Blind Date (Kara'Tee)
Clubs: Educational Club (Enhancement), Paranormal Research
Drawback: Exchange Program (Lunestier)
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>>55077782
Well then this is going to mow your blind.
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>>55077815
The only thing stopping me from doing that is that I don't feel like editing it anymore.
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>>55076899
st.flares
year 1: unarmed combat and physical training
year 2: unarmed combat and duelling
year 3: unarmed combat and ki attunement
year 4: ki attunement and stealth
year 5: ki attunement and manoeuvres
bonus: physical x2 throughout all the years

companions
kengan because monk bro
chandara for the quest
kit (she's the reason I'm in st. flares)
mascot: duxix

event*

year 2: sports, battle of the arts
year 3: great hunt, battle of the arts
year 4 great hunt, basilisk den, research proposal, party planner
year 5: battle royal, bodyguard

*pretty much unreadable

clubs: disciplinary squad.
drawback: "bookworm", I'm using it to get zwole tho.
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>>55077830
The only thing that blows my mind is that you actually browse tumblr for shitty memes.
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>>55077910
>her penis
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>>55073430
>Backstory
Wrong Place, Wrong Time
"Well shit, going to the seedy part of town after a night on the town was a terrible idea, though it wasn't all bad since I met..."
>Mentor/Savior/Not!MommyGf
Andrea Winters
"Dotting aunt who spoils me AND saved my life, sign me the fuck up!"
>What is your Style, do you have grace?
64 Stances
"Ya know I thought power would be the best way to fight, but knowing just how to move right feels, right."
>SECRETO ATTACKU
Rising Death Cannon(Relentless)-I fucking love you for this mechanic
>Perk
Second Style
"I pay attention during lessons! I swear I wasn't just trying to stare a hole through that piece of fabric you call an outfit..."
>LINEUP OF OPPONENTS
Maximus Styles
"Oh god, I saw his tv show once. Once."
Levi Than
"You're a big guy."
Emily Endow-Lovely Rival
"Oh shit, I know her! She's girl that's been giving me death glares for a while now whenever I go downtown. Can't help but think I've seen her before that though..."
Lisia Rush
"Wait, isn't she like that slutty rock-star or something?"
FIRST ROUND
Style Switch -1 energy
"Holy jesus fuck shit, already had to pull out my secret switch up round one! I really didn't expect HIM to have any ACTUAL style; let's hope the rest of my opponents aren't so good."
SECOND ROUND
EZ Babby
"I see now why Aunty said that power was so shit."
THIRD ROUND
-1 energy
"I don't know what I hate more, her silence through the entire match, or the fact she won't even look in my direction now that I beat her."
FOURTH ROUND
-1 energy
"I, I don't want to talk about the fight Aunty..."
WIN
Anew Master-Master Of All You Survey
"You know what, I think maybe there's somebody who could use a hand in an alley somewhere. Wonder if I can find Ms. Glares-a-lot and ask her what her deal is while I'm on the prowl?"

Holy shit, when I first looked at my opponent's stats I thought I lost. It made me so hyped when I realized I could win just by the skin of my teeth!
Great shit man; short, sweet, and full of fun!
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>>55077815
He'd have to remove the top 4 tiers, because Third Eye with magic-based 6 and 7 tiers is popular too.

Hell, delete everything except Tier 2. That's the only way he'd get what he wanted.
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>>55077741
TOGETHER WE ARE STRONG
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>>55077943
Not this shit again.
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>>55078021
Nah, together you're good kindling.
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>>55077741
Do not insult the fairy.
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So, I finally finished something.

There's some extra stuff, but it'll probably come as DLC. Until then, enjoy and let me know what you think.
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>>55078045
A single page of paper can be ripped by hand, but a book can't! Humanity has achooved much my sticking together and apply teamwork.You're just limiting yourself with preconceptions, stup
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>>55078010
>>55078045
There's just something in people's minds that makes them strive for the highest numbers.
Of course a bunch of fairies aren't useless, but they're not impressive, they don't have pizzaz to them.

The problem of the cyoa is one of basic human psychology, every tier you remove just makes the tier below it the new top super one everybody wants.
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>>55078102
>not using twigs for your metaphor
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>>55078100
Page 2
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>>55077877
It's worse than that: I Google Image Search for shitty memes. How blown is your mind now?
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>>55078120
Page 3
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>>55072194
I don't see no theremin.
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>>55077811
Yeah, that one is alright. The other ones are pretty terrible though.
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>>55078136
Page 4
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>>55078158
Page 5
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>>55072194
Bass

Rainbow Pick
Mic
Overdrive
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Does anybody else think regeneration is boring?
It's the only place where abiogenesis is integrated in the perks, but it's a respawn vat.
With some tweaking swarming could be the cheating death perk.
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>>55078100
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>>55077129
>>55077149
Thanks friend.
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>>55078198
>quests have six traits
>lists only five in the intro
>shorthands in parenthesis differ from the ones used in the actual listing
Concentrate and try again.
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>>55078289
jesus fuck
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>>55078183
FIXED Page 6
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>>55078378
>>55078289
So it's a little messed up with the (M) shorthand in the intro, but let it slide ok.
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>>55078589
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>>55078396
I feel bad about that. I saw those mistakes when you first released them but had never heard of you at the time and just figured "that idiot can fix them themselves". If I had been a little more helpful they would have been fixed much sooner.
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>>55078734
>when you first released them
What do you mean? This is all new stuff. I don't think I've ever posted it before.
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>>55078102
The problem with this CYOA is everyone is thinking like him, going with the highest tier builds.
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>>55077951
This man... he UNDERSTANDS. Andrea Winters is the true woman of this CYOA.
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>>55078128
Point of mathematical order:
By this definition, snakes are gay due to hemipenes; One dude with two dicks fucking a woman is straight according to any other model.
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>>55078751
Yeah, I meant in this thread. Precious seconds would have been saved, if not for my hubris.
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>>55076564
Make the girls have a bunch of cool offensive powers and have the guys provide buffs for the girls. That way good males will be a rare commodity that females will literally fight over.
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>>55078100
Am I dumb, or do Alpha's set of three powers not exist?
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>>55078128
>these fractions
Penis ratio? Penis-to-what ratio???

A RATIO IS THE PROPORTIONAL RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN TWO ELEMENTS

WHAT ARE THE TWO ELEMENTS BEING COMPARED???????
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>>55078811
Ah shit, I put them in the mystery box that I decided I was gonna do later. Fuck, I'll need to fix that. I'm tired.

I. Can't. Fucking. Believe. It.
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>>55078840
FIX IT. FIX IT NOW.
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>>55078100
Oh hey it's been a while since I saw the wip for this.

[100]
So I dont entirely understand the sacraments...
>temperance
>temper death
It wants me to make death harder? Or to calm and moderate it?
Eh yeah ok. Why not. So I get a corrupting shield and Temperance de Mort which gives me all the knowledge of pre-doom swording.

Pirate King Bones. is he deathing. Can I temper him. I'm going to poke him with my predoom sword skills.

Equip: Shield of Dagon. [17/100]
Magic:
Mindbreaker [44/100] Can I mindbreak a skywhale?
Skinchanger [67/100]

Companion Rina. Is she death? Do I temper her now. I shall temper her. With headpats. Or maybe with the evil whispering shield. Whichever.

Quest: Temple of Al-Asir . It's gotta be easier to find on the back of a skywhale right?
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>>55076899
School: St. flares

Drawbacks: Bookworm 2X

Classes

Survival 2
Blue magic 2
Monster hunting 2
Martial combat 2
Tactics 2
Unarmed combat 2
Elemental magic: Fire
Elemental magic: Earth

Companions: Damia, Trap-catcher and Eloise Avery


Events: Battle royal , basilisk den ,security and blind date every year
Clubs: none
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>>55078888
OK FINE. HERE, I COMPROMISED QUALITY IN EXCHANGE FOR TIME MOTHERFUCKER.

>>55078924
This makes me realize I've given too many points and too few options.

You can't mind break a sky whale. Its brain is too big. If you took dusk mirror and underwent fusion, then you could.
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>>55079026
You just ruined my entire build. Also you did not give too many points. Rather I could only buy one truth and a regen. If I didnt take mort and had to buy a weapon on top I really wouldnt have much points at all.

What if. like. What if. I just. Like. Embedded the shield into it's body. Until it like killed itself from insanity. Maybe I'll just live on it's back eating it's flesh and it's rampage will eventually wander over the lost city.
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>>55079106
There are other ways to kill the Skywhale... Like, plenty of other things you could do.

Erm, yeah, I guess. Whoever's holding the shield hears the whispers. If the skywhale's got the shield on him, he's gonna go crazy. BUT, you're driving a mile-long monster insane. Around an inhabited land. Where you need to be as well.
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>>55079026
You fucked up the text in Dusk Mirror.
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>>55079026
>too many points
No such thing.

>>55079187
That's what you get for compromising the quality for speed.
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>>55078100
YES
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>>55079026
I DEMAND YOU FIX THE TEXT.
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>>55076970
The font in this image is definitely for ants.
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>>55079154
Bet that bugger has a hard time scratching his back. Besides, technically we can say dig a real big hole and cover it with Dogan. The bloody things unbreakable. Hell, do you think we can call something tent shaped (and sized) with barb attachments a shield?

Besides, it's fine as long as he's dead before he damages the globe. And what are the chances of that happening eh?
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>>55077249
I hate to break it to you author but when I read through the whole thing regardless of points the cyoa was reducible to

1. Pick your team
2. Get some jars and a familiar
3. Summon a big boy

The power scaling is such that it really is go big or go home.
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>>55079248
I got this right out of the pastebin, I didn't even think to check that shit. I'll just have to get around to grabbing a better version at some point
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>>55079106
Like, I don't see why you would do this? It just seems to complicate an already difficult task.

>>55079187
He's (>>55079210) got you there. Also, it's right, but the comma is supposed to be a period.
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>>55076852
Reversion to suicide...This CYOA is much darker than I thought
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>>55079282
Because if TV has taught me anything, and it hasnt, it's that bullying something to suicide counts as killing it. Or something. Plus, free transportation.
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>>55079294
It says Aversion. Reading it now. Not sure why you photoshopped that? It's already plenty dark for it to imply that the ship made it so you can't kill yourself and escape it.
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>>55079316
>Wanting to escape your ship waifu
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>>55079343
I already got a waifu. Two, in fact.
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>>55079343
I don't, I'm just saying, some people will be horrified at that.
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>>55079316
I linked the wrong one. I meant this one:
>>55076663

Aparently >>55076852 fixed this issue. Still funny though.
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>>55079026
For uh shits and giggles, can I mind control Aversa and Temperance? I mean... they have a mind of sorts yes?
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>>55078100
>>55078120
>>55078136
>>55078158
>>55078183
>>55078378
>Only one build
QUIET A SHIT
A SHIIIITT
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>>55079551
>Aversa and Temperance
Aversa, yes, you can try it. It'll work for a limited time, but don't expect him to not fight back. It'll take all your power and only last a limited time.

Temperance, no, too big.
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>>55079554
I want the ordinance but the mystery is not there
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>>55079580
What about Dagon. He seems friendly.

...

Heeeey. What if I uh. Touched Aversa and Dagon. Not that I would want to. But. You know. For science.
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>>55079661
>Dagon
He's dead.

>Aversa and Dagon
Nuffin/
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>>55078100
>Sacrament
Starlight Chasis

The sacraments are kind of vague and ethereal as hell. Not that it's a bad thing, but it is pretty different for an adventure CYOA

>Mentor
Pirate King Bones

Goddamn, I want Floop. But PIRATES. Bones is a cool mother fucker, as it the Lich King and Library. I wish they offered you more tangible
benefits, though. I get the impression you'll gain some of their abilities and powers, but it's not exactly stated so.

>Weapons
Eon's Bow (84)

>Spells
Mindbreaker (57)
Kinetomancy (39)
Skinchanger (16)

Only one critique in this section. Every thing is very unique, but the choices feel limited. I wish there was more. I guess that's the cost of having well-written, specific magics/items.

>Companion
Jyakaras (1)

I really like all of these companions. I could take any one of them happily. Andrea was my second choice, but her mysterious power kept me from choosing her, even if I love the idea of a companion who's not necessarily attached to you, but is more of a "recurring character" in your story. Jyakaras having a "darker future" isn't exactly promising either, but ah well.

>Quest
Search & Destroy: The Scroll of Thu'um

Gotta be honest, this quest is cool as hell, but I debated not taking it since it involves the Thu'um from Elder Scrolls, which I
could not be more disinterested in. But, once again, PIRATES.

I really love the aesthetic and atmosphere here. The writing is good, the imagery is good, the people are great. I just wish there was more of everything and that what we did have was less ephemeral and more specific. It kind of makes sense as an afterlife/dream adventure, I just generally crave very specific ideas concerning my capabilities.

Damn good CYOA. I've been waiting for this and I'm not disappointed. Even with the typos.
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>>55076899
>School
Lunestier

>Classes
Tactics
Teamwork
Manuevers x2
Arcane Magic x3
Blood Magic x3
Magic Refinement x3

>Companion
Chandara
Farhat
Mecherath

>Sub events
Battle Royal
Escort
Bodyguard

>Club
Paranormal Research

>Drawbacks
Bookworm
Exchange Programm
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>>55079738
>Damn good CYOA. I've been waiting for this and I'm not disappointed. Even with the typos.
<3

As for your criticisms, I agree with some of what you said. I feel like the choices, especially in the powers section, are kinda limited. Also! Something you might have missed is that things like Andrea's mysterious power and other questions in the CYOA have indirect answers elsewhere in the CYOA. They're hard to find, and, much like the nature of this CYOA, a bit ethereal and open to interpretation, but they're there.
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>>55079738
>Not taking Jakaras and Andrea together, and having a wholesome relationship with Jakaras while cucking her and meeting up with Andrea every time you two go on a dangerous mission and end up fucking the brains out of each other after the boss fight.
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>>55079912
Not enough points. Gotta put yourself first, anon.
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>>55078100
>Sacrament
Starlight Chasis

I'm not really in to many of the Sacraments, but this one seems like the best bang for my buck. Plus I get the feeling most of what I do will involve fighting Eldritch monsters anyways.

>Mentor
Divinity Laheera Rose of the Aux-Luberum

People seem to expect a lot from me as a member of the Starlight Chasis, having the Diplomacy to deal with the common man seems like a good investment.

>Weapon
Exalibur

On the off-chance I can awaken its locked potential.

>Magic
Sandshaper

We Gaara now.

Frostlorn

We Ice Gaara now.

>Companions
Princess Lusteria

She seems nice, plus her focus on melee combat compliments my from-the-back magic style. Plus she comes with a mount.

Tyr

Another close-combat type to help me, plus I'm pretty sure the Princess he is looking for is Lusteria. He is his own mount.

>Quest
Locate the Temple of Al-Asir

I'm not really sure what direct benefits finding this does for us, except giving us the Cosmolobe. Either way, it works well with my Sandshaper power and both my companions have their own mounts while I can make a Sand Titan to carry me.
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>>55079949
Get rid of kineomancy. Or skinchanger. You don't need both, either cover the weakness of mindbreaker. You're just wasting points.
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>>55079973
tl;dr we're the Last Airbender but instead of Appa we have a giant sand titan and instead of controlling air I am Gaara with a holy sword.

Also every episode is a desert episode.
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>>55079973
>Frostlorn
>Tyr
>Locate the Temple of Al-Asir
What the hell? You're literally making the dumbest decisions you could. You're making Tyr weak as hell in the desert, and where are you gonna find ice or cold water in the desert?

>>55080000
Is Tyr Sokka?
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>>55079714
But he's got a soul.
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>>55079714
>>55080010
He's got a soul, not body or mind. Mindbreaker only affects the mind. Which is why it affects Aversa, he's mostly a brain.
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>>55079993
I can't. I have a raging hard-on for both of those powers.

I might drop Skinchanger in the future, if I'm being honest. Much as I love some of what it offers, I'd under utilize compared to the other two.
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>>55080008
I picked those before I got to the Quest section, and I didn't feel right going back to change it. Maybe we can go deal with Urza after. Plus the Endless Desert is an Eldritch Location, the chances of you randomly finding ice flows isn't super bad.
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>>55080036
>>55079993
You should keep both. You could like use skin-changer to change your mass and get huge and then use kinetomancy, skinchanger increases your mass, and F=MA, meaning your original 10x limit for kintomancy is gone.
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>>55080037
>randomly finding ice flows
Sure, its not BAD, but you're wasting a shit-ton of points on a power you're never gonna really use. Get a weapon or something. You have no range pleb
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>>55080032
Interesting. I thought Aversa was also just a conglomeration of souls.
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>>55080074
>needing range when you control sand

anon please

also this image was in my captcha, 4chan has become 2lewd
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>>55080104
What're you gonna do when someone uses lotus flame to melt your sand into glass? Or flies above you? If you're going for a Gaara thing, Deidera took him out from above.
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>>55080128
POCKET SAND
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>>55079973
>comes with a mount.
Ox in the desert, that's gonna go over well
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I'VE COME FROM THE PAST, IS PPP+ OUT YET?
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>>55078100
>dusk mirror
when you take this does is spawn a second person secretly, or would i retroactively always have had a double? does this double pick all their own choices? or do they have to leech off of mine?
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>>55080197
Is that you, bench skeleton? No, no it is not out yet.
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>>55078183
Rise Companions in a nutshell:

>Hoh-Jo
Slutty sasuke character who's basically there to fuck and kill shit, and she's all outta shit to fuck.

>Deliah
Qt loli tease with a 5000-ton chastity belt.

>Arya
Will most certainly eventually kill you when she realizes her true identity as Nom-Ra, Eldritch Beast of the Sun.

>Jaykaras
Some dumb emo chick who thinks the world revolves around her. Get over yourself Jen, don't you know there are kids like starving in Africe?

>Lusteria
Lust is in the name. Basically desperate bimbo elf princess who's looking for dick

>Andrea
Bitch who fucks both you and your shit.

>Sedana
Dominating SDA

>Jack
Prettyboy non-threatening bitch for 13-15 year old girls

>Garret
Perfection

>Tyr
Pervered polar bear. Did you know MALE POlar bears rape female ones?

>Avesta
Emo wannabe loser

>Rina
Qt loli tease with a insanity inducing chastity belt.
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>>55080226
Same powers as yours. Different companions and mentor with a 50% chance of the same quest.

Your current human life is split into two reincarnates that enter this world, same memories as your current life, but her's would be female and yours male. It's weird but plot armor comes to the rescue.

Best not to think about it.
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This time, to stop the shitposter, here's the next thread, the same as the previous two threads, since it's been up that long.

next thread: >>55050664
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next thread: >>55050664
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>>55080276
That's not a real thread. I officially disown it. It isn't even named properly, nor does it have anything involving wild hogs
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Why are retards allowed to post?
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Since this thread is going to go under sooner or later, can I get some pictures of Monstergirls ready for battle? I need them for something...
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>>55080331
Because we don't want to exclude you
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>>55080128
Deidara beat Gaara because he attacked both him and the Sand Village.

Gaara is nearly unstoppable unless he goes against Madara/an Ootsuki.

>>55080170
It's a magic ox.
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>>55078100
Oh hey, this CYOA. Been looking forward to it. Wonder how many of my guesses about the lore were correct?

>Sacrament: Temperance de Mort
A goal I can get behind. That shield is trouble, though - almost not worth using given that an alternative unbreakable shield can be bought at a fairly low price (a(n) ice/lightning themed shield of cold/erratic hatred toward the living to juxtapose the fire themed sword of burning hope for the living would be appropriate - either artifact alone is potent, together are mighty. But to wield both at once would require a master's skill of mind and body. The shield could also teach pre-Doom shield techniques). Ironic that if Death is tempered, a shield would no longer be necessary.

>Mentor: Lich King Deeja
I carry the remnants of the Old World, and Deeja is one of the few who has the ability to remember it. Another possibility could be The Librarian Minerva, using the soul transferring spell to put my soul in my indestructible sword and wield it using my astral body - but is Death truly tempered if I have no humanity left to die?

>Weapons
Dragonskin Bow [14]
Eon's Bow [16]
Shield of Dagon's Bane [17]

>Magic: Skinchanger [23], Graviton [27]
Skinchanger gives me the strength and ability to wield all my weapons simultaneously (multiple eyes to aim, multiple arms to wield, plenty of muscle).

Graviton's enchantments might allow a small radius of everything they strike or block to be crushed by the overwhelming gravity. A cone of gravity directing all attacks toward the raised shield would be pretty cool too.

>Quest: Prevent the Summoning or Urza
Someone has to do it, and I just so happen to have fire powers to keep me warm.


I could also go for Starlight Chasis. Mostly because the thought of living truly forever as a human is troubling (just imagine Graham's Number lifespan as a tiny tip of forever). Or perhaps accepting death - and the Doom - is truly tempering Death.
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>>55080391
>Dragonskin Bow [14]
>Eon's Bow [16]
Why both? Why not just take lotus flame? You already have a long range and short range weapon. Still, the idea of using all those weapons and graviton as a giant titan monster or a small thingamajig with tons of arms is cool af

>have fire powers
What fire power?
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>>55080466
Is this just one anonymous person critiquing everyone's builds?
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>>55080486
I'm arguing with this guy (>>55080368) as well, but not the others.
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>>55080466
The Temperance sword mentions fires coming in a great blaze, but that could be read as its creation being heralded by a great blaze I suppose.

As for why two bows - more dakka.

>>55080486
Are we all just one anon?
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>>55078100
So...on a scale of 1-10 how bad an idea is it to choose the Eternal Comet and then have Laheera dump you on an empty planet and sit back and watch as you use the Rite of Power? While eventually you would grow too powerful for her to handle I figure that she should be able to force the Muddler down your throat when you reach (almost) her power level.
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>>55080569
Won't work. Eternal comet needs people to dominate to grow. If you're on an empty world, you'd eventually develop life-creation powers, which would make you go on to create life and then...

Laheera wouldn't allow you to do that to any life, not even ones you made.
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>>55078100
>Eternal Comet has several sentences about how the main drawback is becoming megalomaniacal
>"Oh and by the way, here's a potion that makes you sane again"
Does it ever say you *don't* get them instantly, like Ordinance's items?
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>>55080662
Potion has limited uses. And, even if you drink it, it'll only restore to back to your original sanity. Eventually, the megalomania will begin to grow again. And, you'll need more muddler, which will restore your sanity. Repeat.

Eventually, you'll run out of muddler.
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>>55080649
Does it require actual domination or merely the belief that you are dominating others? For instance if you were to be trapped in an elaborate enough illusion or hooked up in the Matrix and given leave to run wild would that work? I imagine eventually you'd break out of it but until that point would you grow as per usual?
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>>55080693
But it says it "fully removes the corrupting effect of the Rite" - implying that it changes the Rite itself rather than removing the symptoms like small amounts.
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>>55080649
Also this does make Eternal Comet seem significantly more inherently abusive then the text would imply. After all the text just has it as you setting yourself up as a perfect god-king with megalomania demanding that all worship you and obey you, this on the other hand sounds like you'd only be content if everyone were on their knees shouting your praises 24/7. The difference between Theion and Malfeas I guess.
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>>55080748
The effect, not the mechanism. You're just treating the symptoms
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>>55080748
Hmm, personally, I agree with this guy (>>55080787), but I can see how you would think that. The explanation was bad. Has now been updated to reflect actual characteristic.

>>55080733
Well, you're in a bit of a bind. See, there is a minimum limit in the power required to trap you in an illusion required to force the rite of power to grow by deception.

That amount of power is so great, that when you'd eventually break out of the machine or illusion (and you eventually will) your powers will be too great for anyone to even suggest the muddler.

>>55080765
See, you can create a spectrum of domination, one that goes off into a darker, more abusive side to the left.

You start at the origin point, and then, as time goes on, go on to infinity. Your megalomania is always growing, so, eventually, you'd go from Theion to Malfeas eventually.
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>>55080787
It says that "small doses" mitigate the symptoms, which would logically imply that large doses (like taking it all "at once") do something more.

>>55080824
A bit clunky, but more easily undertood.
Works for me.
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>>55080765
>demanding that all worship you and obey you
That in and of itself is pretty messed up, and yes, depending on how your power grows, you could become "a perfect god-king with megalomania demanding that all worship you and obey you" OR a man demanding "everyone were on their knees shouting your praises 24/7". But, both are inherently pretty messed up.
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>>55080824
>snaity
do you even read what you write, m8?
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>>55080824
>Theion to Malfeas
Ha, never knew you liked Exalted.
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>>55080824
Hmm, I realize that trying to game the effect probably wasn't what you intended but given that the entire power revolves around maximizing your sanity-strength conversion rate I kinda want to see to what extent it can be mitigated.

So you're saying that:
1. The Muddler requires you to be awake or active for it to take effect, so they couldn't just pour it in your mouth while you slept.
2.The transition to maximum Malfeas would come before reaching near-Laheera levels of power, as implied by her stopping your growth before the intended time.
3. Your "kingliness" would effect the universe passively such that you couldn't set up a double blind system, something like "after X days someone randomly chosen before your exponential growth will press a button which causes the Muddler to be injected into your bloodstream."
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>>55080914
You're pretty good at reading between the lines m8
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>>55080842
The first seems pretty innocent all things considered if we're talking about manufactured life. If at that point you are powerful, wise and charismatic enough that you could claim godhood then I don't see how it would be any different from the setup Laheera has. Provided that you didn't rule abusively.
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>>55080933
>the setup Laheera has
There's a key difference though. Laheera sees's herself as a bringer of peace, and a guardian of localized democracy. You see yourself as a god among men.
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>>55080841
>It says that "small doses" mitigate the symptoms, which would logically imply that large doses (like taking it all "at once") do something more.
Like kill you, maybe. Generally, overdosing on medicines has a negative effect, not a much better effect. Like, you don't take a hundred times the normal dosage of a blood clotter and become immune to bleeding. You just die.
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>>55080928
I can't tell if this is confirming what I said or just saying I'm reading too deeply into it.
>>55080945
Does that really matter though? While there is obviously the issue of how much liberty they'd have unless it would take literal years for you to power up until the end of the growth that'd be a very temporary thing. And if at the end of the day the result is a well ruled populace without abuse does it matter if the god responsible for it is altruistic or merely narcissistic and looking for praise? Kinda rhetorical there but it seems like the kind of thing that you would argue IC with Laheera about.

What is the timeframe for the Rite of Power anyway?
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>>55080914
>Your "kingliness" would effect the universe passively such that you couldn't set up a double blind system, something like "after X days someone randomly chosen before your exponential growth will press a button which causes the Muddler to be injected into your bloodstream."
I don't think it's that. I think that if you tried to do a delay effect thing by setting up a system and erasing it from your head, then your powers will have grown a lot since then, and will, eventually somehow find out your original plan, and avoid it.
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>>55081001
>What is the timeframe for the Rite of Power anyway?
Totally up to you. It only speeds up or happens when you flip the switch. Use it less, longer timeline, vice versa. And I was confirming most of it.
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What are some relatively recent (within a month or so) OCs that haven't gotten reposted often? I'd appreciate if anyone posted them because I've been away for a while.
Also, did Forest Home ever get a second page?

>>55077153
>you should be careful
I'm mad scared of autistic landwhales screeching at me through the internet bro
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>>55081001
>seems like the kind of thing that you would argue IC with Laheera about.
from reading her description, I think she'd shit on you.
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>>55080986
Except that when "taken at once", it "fully remove[s] the corrupting effect"
The two possible interpretations were that taking it immediately removes the corrupting effect (and since the symptoms wouldn't have begun forming, it can't just be referring to those), or that "taking it [all] at once" removes the corruption in a way different than just managing the symptoms.

It's changed now, though, so moot point.
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>>55081053
Nope, forest guy got a lot of positive attention and seemed really excited, but he disappeared.
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>>55081035
Kinda ironic that the power revolves around easy exponential growth power would be the one which makes it impossible to reach the highest heights of power. Unless the corrupting effects of the Rite could be combated slowly through natural means like therapy?
>>55081056
Nah, from the sounds of it she'd just explain very calmly why it was a stupid idea. Possibly over tea.
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>>55076899
>School
Odesium
>Classes
Martial training x3
Ki attunment x3
Elemental magic x3
Physical training x3
Enhancement x2
>Companions
Tash
Luvyna
Sera
>Events
4v4 Battle royal
Fund raising
Bodyguard
Every year I guess
>Clubs
Track team
>Drawbacks
Bookworm x2

Aiming for a ridiculously fast swordsman with wind, and lightning magic, Ki attunement, and enhancement. Pretty balanced group of friends with only three slots due to bookworm.
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Probably Hel, I like spooky things and the cold. And awful jokes.
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>>55080302
Have fun, anon!
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>>55081165
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>>55081145
>natural means like therapy
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
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>>55081178
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>>55081198
Semi-natural means like magical therapy and or soul surgery?
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>>55081209
Oh sure anon, she may be your loving wife, but don't you ever, ever forget that she was raped by a horse.
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>>55081226
Nope, can't stop destiny. You could just take the muddler and kill yourself, or get killed by someone else. There are solutions, three to be exact, but I'm not dropping hints. They're in the cyoa.
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>>55081227
>raped
>implying
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>>55081248
It's implied to be rape, yeah. Loki's intent was just to lure the horse away, and as the text says, he ran as fast as he could to get away, but the horse caught up, pinned him, and raped his mare pussy.

Dunno about you, but I wouldn't be able to look her in the eyes without remembering that this happened to her, even if it was way before she met you.
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>>55081165
Good lord there are so many good choices. I almost couldn't decide.
I'll go with Lofn, I don't go to women with emotional support anyway.
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>>55078100
>>55079973
Idea - use portals to always have sand for sandshaper. Or use the backpack from ordinance and carry a mountain's worth of sand in there.
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>>55081372
Lofn's a good choice if you're the stoic type.
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>>55081264
The characters are obviously just based on the norse gods and not actually them. There's a lot of things that don't really match up. I mean, for example, the whole thing with not everyone hating loki and him not being bound.
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>>55081393
I've always been stoic, if not her, I would've chosen Snotra. Thurd would be perfect if I got more than 10 mens worth of strength, doubt I'll win much against the daughter of Thor with that much strength.
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>>55081178
I did not expect this!

....Yeah, I guess this is life now.
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>>55080693
Couldn't you just use the Rite to get to nigh-Godhood, drink the Muddler, and then never use the Rite again?
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>>55081245
1. Find someone with Shearpoint and an Inner Gate attuned to you, editing away the madness as it comes. Admittedly would be the equivalence of sowing a bomb into your chest and giving someone else the detonator.
2. Soul Transpose into Dagon's Shield and be bathed in Muddler then be transposed out? Since seems to be actually unbreakable by a law of the universe presumably it could contain you indefinitely, though dealing with the dragon god inside might be a bit difficult.
3. Being BFFs with Deliah?
4. Pull an Andrea, selectively expanding your consciousness and then deleting the corrupted parts. Effectively committing continuous holy suicide.
5. Become a regular pincushion for Hohenzollern, reforming after each injection of sanity?
6. Search the Temple of Al-Asir for the means to create the Muddler and use the Cosmolobe to locate it? Though this rather depends on it being replicable.
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>>55081500
>1. Find someone with Shearpoint and an Inner Gate attuned to you, editing away the madness as it comes. Admittedly would be the equivalence of sowing a bomb into your chest and giving someone else the detonator.

We're the only person with the Sacrament post-Doom.
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>>55081500
>5. Become a regular pincushion for Hohenzollern, reforming after each injection of sanity?
I'll comment on the others in a mo but hot damn that idea is the tightest shit I've read in a while. Did not consider this before, but if definitely a viable way of getting muddler into you.
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>>55081526
>>55081500
He's right, it's just you.
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>>55081412
The time placement of Loki's binding is a bit ambiguous, though. It's important to remember all the sagas talking about Loki doing stuff way before he got tied down.
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>>55081531
Would you mind elaborating on exactly how that would go?
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>>55081571
Well, she is the greatest archer possible. An archer is a variable, defined by a quantity "greatness", which is measured by one's skill at hitting a target and other factors.

She is the greatest, simply because she had to be. Avesta's description elaborates on why. Thus, no matter how strong you are, she can and will hit the target (your mouth) with an arrow holding a dose of muddler.
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>>55081165
I love this. You've taught me that I can make a good cyoa without ten thousand hours in photo editing software. God bless
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>>55081500
1 isn't possible. 2: you have the right idea, wrong item and wrong use of the muddler. 3: works, but how do you know her power lasts forever? Or whether she lives forever, or whether her power has a limit or not? Unreliable, but will work. 4: Not what Andrea's done, besides, not possible due to not being an option in the CYOA or having a proper route that leads there. 6: Yes, the muddler is a known potion, it's not just the one. You're gambling on whether the cosmolobe has a location or not, you're gambling on.
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>>55081601
So up until the point where she literally can't imagine attacking someone as glorious and kingly as you she'll be able to restore you to sanity. Does the effect fade with distance btw? Could she just stand an effective infinite distance away and keep shooting you full of Muddler?
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>>55081666
Basically. You have limited shots of muddler (the numbered doses in the new description to be precise [>>55080824]), so, she has that many arrows. She also needs to be able to see her target, but, apart from that, it's a sure shot.
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>>55081683
...would the Cosmolabe grant her effectively infinite range? Or is it not detailed enough?
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>>55081724
Errr, I didn't think about that. I suppose that it might work in theory. If you could use the cosmolobe to map the entire path from her location to yours and show it to her, she could probably fire an arrow with a bow that has an infinite range.

Sadly, the only infinite range item are her arrows of light, which can't carry the muddler.
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>>55081762
Hmm. So how does this sound in theory:

1. You're put in sufficiently advanced illusion/matrix and begin your power creep.
2. Hohenzollern stands guard over you with Muddler carrying arrow.
3. At some point where either Laheera or some other sufficiently knowledgeable 3rd party deems the experiment too dangerous to continue Hohenzollern is signaled and the arrow is loosed.
4. While the arrow is in the air but before it lands you are awoken from the illusion/deplugged from the Matrix.
5. The arrow is already in flight, gg no re

With a side order of "use your phenomenal cosmic power to get to Al-Asir to see if you can get some more muddler" depending on if you chose that quest.
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>>55081875
In theory, could maybe work, but you'd have to wrangle Hohenzollern and Laheera into this insane plan. Also, who would cast the illusion? There are a few people in the CYOA who could, but I'm not dropping that so easily.

Besides, finding Al-Asir isn't that easy. Even for you, you'd need to find it the right way. The amount of cosmic power needed to find it is greater than the amount of cosmic power needed for any illusion that keeps you in the matrix. You'd break out of the matrix before you hit the power needed to find Al-Asir.
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>>55081875 (Laheera/Honhellozern)
>>55081809 (Deeja/Library)
People have suggested that you can find other masters, even if you don't pick them, and learn their secrets. Is that possible?
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>>55079026
>Sacrament
Ordinance -15
So i can choose any of these wonderful sacraments that grant me a bunch of neat powers or i can refuse them and pay to walk the same path that Eon walked... Alright i like it hard.

>Mentor
The librarian Minevra of Hexbridge
I want to waifu Laheera but diplomacy is not my forte to be honest, i think i will rather go and get my own personal castle and a nigh-infinite library with books of eldritch knowledge to boot.

>Weapons
Spear Eterna-14
A pretty reliable weapon that can be thrown or used to stab someone, it is not excalibur but it will do nicely.
Eon's Bow -16
If i am choosing ordinance might as well get another trinket of his.

>Magics
Halo wings -17
They are a shield or weapon that needs no hands and a way to fly so i can turn foes in to pincushions with Eon's Bow, i don't have many points to spare and this is pretty great for its cost.
Skinchanger -23
Shapeshifting and regeneration opens the gate for many weird stratagems and i Might or might not use it to be the little girl for a while

>Companions
Rina by the shadow
A bit fucked up in the head by human standards but she seems nice, who knows maybe things end well and we get along.

>Quest
Find the oracle of nath
Seems like a nice adventure with amazing sights to behold we will also need the prophecies in the future so if some tragedy happens we will be ready for it. That only works if she is still (mostly) sane though, but i hope that i won't end up doing this for nothing.

Alright so in what kind of mess i got myself in by choosing ordinance?
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>>55081938
Kinda surprised that Laheera couldn't do it, and I'm kinda counting on charisma buffs from small uses of the Rite to help the plan come together. While Al-Asir might not immediately be findable I can't help but think having cosmic power would grease the wheels a bit.
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>>55081991
You only get real-time updated instructions to the master you picked. The others still exist in the world, but you can't find em easily.

>>55081992
Tippity top build anon. Ordinance+Minevra is a good route. Solid weapons as well. Not sure if Rina is your optimal companion. I think you'd want someone with more offensive magic or more deadly strength to compliment your more precise abilities. Rina herself is a pretty precise fighter.

As for what ordinance really does, there are hints that are sorta vague in the CYOA, but the second meaning doesn't activate unless you take the required items/companions/powers as well. As your build is rn, you don't activate it.

>>55081996
She could do it, in theory, but she's just power. You'd need someone with very advanced illusion magic to shape the matrix. Laheera provides the battery, while someone else provides the shape. In fact, both are necessary.
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>>55081938
What about swearing an oath to yourself or something that basically invokes your pride to ensure that you will take the Muddler on a certain date?
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>>55081566
The cyoas version of loki definitely doesn't share the same past as the 'real' loki though. In the cyoa baldr is dead, so loki would be bound.
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>>55082127
It has Hel and an implied Fenrir, though.
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>>55082121
>What about swearing an oath to yourself or something that basically invokes your pride to ensure that you will take the Muddler on a certain date?
I actually thought variations of this out. I'll ask you a question in return.

If you made an oath to an ant, and you were king of all, would breaking it really even matter to you? Would it even be something you'd consider?

The future you regards the past you as an ant. This is true at any point in time in between uses of the rite of power (not including the time after a muddler).
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>>55079026
Rise: The Endless Desert CYOA: (+100)
Sacrament:
>Clockwork Dias
Mentor:
>The Librarian Minerva of Hexbridge: Last Lady of Ember
Weapons:
>None
Magic:
>Truth: Mindbreaker (-27)
>Truth: Lotus Flame (-27)
>Truth: Graviton (-27)
Companions:
>Deliah (-15)
Quest:
>The Temple of Al Asir

I found this enjoyable. If you're planning to update it I'd advise making the first companion (or couple) that you take be free, or lowering the cost somewhat. Drawbacks would be nice too, and/or something that can be invested into with the last couple of points that are left over (weak magical items costing 1-2 points each).
Thank you for making this.
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Rina, Hoh-Jo (Provided that she has typical kitsune powers alongside her smiting ability) or Andrea? If you could somehow get to Minerva perhaps she could point you in the right direction as well I guess.
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>>55082091
Any chance that you're willing to give a hint about what Ordinance is/how to activate it, or point towards where the clues might be?

Also, I'm sort of drawing parallels between Sacraments and Exalted here, what with the "draw the energy flowing through through the world inside your human body to fuel a cosmic engine and rise above all mortals and spirits", which I think is neat.
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>>55082168
>>Truth: Mindbreaker (-27)
>>Truth: Lotus Flame (-27)
>>Truth: Graviton (-27)
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>>55082203
There's a planned expansion for this coming soon maybe. If no one figures it out by then, I'll make it clearer in that or make it clearer in the CYOA. No point in details if no one sees them, eh?
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>>55082205
Would Lotus Flame actually help with the Rite's corrupting effects?
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>>55082205
Does taking this combination do something?
Also, what does Lotus Flame actually do, other then burn things and make you feel good? Is it a weaker version of Deliah's legendary sorcery?
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>>55073868
Hours late, but I still felt the need to call you a cunt.
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>>55082091
Well rina may not be the most optimal of choices to complement my strength but i kinda like her, as for the whole ordinance trigger the only things that i might think it would work are Excalibur and Lusteria&Tyr It doesn't matter anyways, i made my choices and i have to stick to them.
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>>55082260
>Does taking this combination do something?
Yeah it bumfucking OP is what it does, you were not meant to take all three truths, hot damn son, calm down. There is one quest-line tied to needed all three truths, but it also requires a specific other power, a weapon, a companion and a specific quest. Not that big of a deal btw, it's a tiny perk/sidequest.
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>>55082147
What about becoming am meglomaniac but not wanting to become stark raving mad?
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>>55082334
Both of those are just words. Your interpretation of the two will change as you do as well.
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>>55082333
>Yeah it bumfucking OP is what it does, you were not meant to take all three truths, hot damn son, calm down.
kek
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>>55082333
>There is one quest-line tied to needed all three truths, but it also requires a specific other power, a weapon, a companion and a specific quest
Oh oh, i know! Are they Watcher(scry), Excalibur, Arya, and find the oracle?
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>>55080362
How powerful is Arya? I realized that she has the highest magic stat of all, 8.5. Which is stronger than fucking Avesta, a legit eldritch abomination.

>>55082474
Why do you think she's involved in this at all?

Just what is she?
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>>55082333
>There is one quest-line tied to needed all three truths, but it also requires a specific other power, a weapon, a companion

>The 3 truths + 1 companion =-96
>The cheapest weapon + the cheapest power =-30
>You need 126 points at the minimum to do this side quest.
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>>55082551
FUCK I AM SO OFF GAME TODAY. Disregard that. I think I just spoiled the mystery box. Pls ignore this entire exchange.
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>>55082551
I legit stared at this for a minute, squinting where I thought you might be wrong. It boggled my mind when I first read it.
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>>55082551
Also, the 3 truth quest line is a really, really small benefit. Not something to actively seek this intently.
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>>55082580
Get some sleep if you tired, OK.
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>>55082264
Oh, don't worry, you'll have plenty of opportunities. Everytime someone posts the nofunallowed version, I will post the good one.
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>>55082591
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>>55081165
Hel is clearly the best.

She had me at insecurity and rubbing on her skeleton.
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>>55081165
>The goddess Nanna
>Literally my wife's son
>Lives in Sweden
Wew.
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>>55082874
Probably intentional.
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>>55081178
>>55081178
I choose the mystery box.
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>>55082922
It's a pretty good box
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>>55082973
Yup I'm satisfied. Submissive loving yanderes are always the best.
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>>55083019
RIP Clem, you were too pure for this world
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>>55081165
This writing is very xD
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>>55075220
Is this the only screenshot of this?
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>>55081165
Wouldnt pick any if eir wasnt on the list
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urgent request

need pics of sci-fi-esque men and women

preferably not too lewd, and higher resolutions
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>>55083284
We're on page 10 senpai, this will die soon.
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>>55083284
How about go to a character art thread
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