/cyoag/ - CYOA General

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>>54953123

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>>54953123
Scary cyoaas pleasfhjjjkk

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>>54953171

>>54953123
I still don't understand how "harmless" can be considered yandere

>>54953265
shes a yandere, but shes too self aware/scared/weak to do anything crazy due to it

>>54953296
In other words, she is a shitty yandere

>>54953345
as a yandere? maybe- shes probably better to be with/around than the average yandere tho

>>54953345
No. The purpose of a waifu cyoa is to serve as a masturbation tool. If she accomplishes that, she is by definition a good yandere waifu in a yandere cyoa.

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>>54953370
>The purpose of a waifu cyoa is to serve as a masturbation tool

>>54953370
>masturbation tool
thats what fetish CYOA are for- like Toks shit

Waifu CYOA's are masturbation for your heart boner

>>54953265
Yandere just needs to have a fucked up mind.

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>>54953387

>>54953393
If a half dimensional character written up in less than a hundred words by some sperg who last interacted with a living person two years ago actually touches your heart you probably have a serious psychosis

>>54953417
>Not filling the blanks around what it is already written

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>>54953123
>>54953129
>no best yandere
Shit CYOA

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>>54953123
I have a tremendous loreboner for settings where the world is split up in multiple factions that transcend national borders. Especially the first megacorp cyoa did a wonderful job with that. Any more cyoas like that come to mind?

Bonus points if the factions are not known to the common man. Imagine the templars running most of europe while the illuminati run america, etc.

>>54953417
>if a cropped picture of a generic anime girl drawn by a fat jap who last saw a woman IRL 3 years ago gets you hard you need help
>if a barebones setting and rudimentary plot written by a failure who failed English gets your mind racing you must have never read a good story

>>54953123
>>54953129
I'm still stoked at the idea of this getting any kind of update. It's been a while since I've had daydreams of being a yandere.

>>54953534
This is true.

>>54953553
>then what are you doing here.jpg

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>>54953123
Is the theme of this thread going to be "yanderes"? Is the guy who points out why most yanderes aren't yanderes bj

>>54953571
Accidental post. I meant to ask: is the guy who points out yanderes aren't yanderes but yangires or something here? I like that guy.

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>>54953123
>tfw no yandere bf cyoa

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>>54953417
>If a half dimensional character written up in less than a hundred words by some sperg who last interacted with a living person two years ago actually touches your heart you probably have a serious psychosis
>less than a hundred words

>implying

Did that empire revival thing get updated?

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>>54953638

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>>54953462
Nigga please.

>>54953571
...that's a boy and a girl, right?

>>54953651
>/r9k/

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>>54953676

>>54953578
Tell us the difference please.
Are "yangires" the ones that want to murder/murder-suicide her sempai? Those are bad. Juno is the absolutely worst yandere I've ever seen.
Except for the scene after meeting the mother where she (spoilers) reveals she brought a duffelbag of knives ready to get rid of Yuki's mom if she was a problem. That was good. That scene showed her being a yandere without stabbing at Yuki/anyone showing interest in Yuki.

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desu I think /cyoag/'s interest in yanderes was just a fad induced by a tiny but loud minority

>>54953664

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>>54953676

>>54953676
Canon? No, Bum and Sangwhoo are boys. In that pic? Who knows. Girls love to cosplay as boys so Bum might actually be a girl there. Your penis can safely erect, anon.

Does anyone else take an already made cyoa and modify it with choices and improvements to suit your likes for your personal use? What kind of changes do you make?

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>>54953571
That Bum is too pretty. Bum is supposed to be plain. Reeeee! Don't sexualize female (male) characters!

>>54953669
>doesn't call you onii-chan

>>54953720
ignore the immortality options when they have nothing to do with the cyoa's theme

>>54953747
To advocate for equality one must sexualize everything.

>>54953756
>Inmortality options are bad

>>54953791
Your posts reminded me of that Twilight tidbit, that vampires are forever frozen in the mental state they were in when they turned. One of the girls was turned shortly after being gangraped. Freaky shit.

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>>54953751
I'm not into incest, that's sick.

>>54953791
>you were enslaved by crazy elven females
>if you gain their favor, you can spend 2 points on getting to eat meat once in a while, 1 point to make them futas or 4 points to make them give you immortality

tok har lol

>>54953534
m8 if you get a boner from a bad plot you really do have issues

>>54953858
>boner from a bad plot
reading comprehension

>>54953522
Highlander's Deus Ex cyoa apparently has one. Didn't save it though.

>>54953669
RIP

>>54953887
not my fault you lack it

>>54953912
Highlander did a what? I ... I guess I need that ...

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>>54953914
;_;
The best die first.

>>54953927
It's about turning into the first true sapient AI in the cyberpunk future. Its not finished. You can ask for the WIP though.

>>54953938
It's a terrible day for rain.

>>54953265
Yanderes have to be crazy, and obsessively in love. No other requirements, any kind of insanity works.

>>54953971
Isn't every anon with a waifu a yandere by definition then?

>>54953971
that's only the obsessive type of yandere

>>54953983
Not all of them would be insane by a medical definition.

>>54953989
No, all yanderes need the love aspect. That's where the dere part is from. If they're just crazy they're a yangire.

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>>54953943
Needs a yandere option.
>>54953983
Considering how many waifus everyone has, we're hardly obsessive.
And we're not really crazy, just lonely.

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>>54953983
Why would you think that, anon?

>>54953998
I love you, yangire-chan. One day you'll be mine <3

>>54953998
love isn't necessarily obsessive you dolt

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>>54953916

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>>54953669
This fucking show I swear

off to another quality start

>>54954162
>past 20%
>start

>>54954252
Yes, that is what constitutes a start. Keep working those numbers, brainlet.

>>54954268
>past 20%
>that is what constitutes a start

>>54954287
look at him trying to put the numbers together!

keep trying sweetie

>>54954406
go open a dictionary some time sweaty

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>>54954129
?

>>54954463
>sweaty
aww, were you trying to copy words? just keep doing your best and stay in school!

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>>54954463
>sweaty

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OC, tentatively finished. I need help with balance.
1/2

I finally did something. Yay!

>>54954463
>sweaty

>>54954553
>>54954534
>>54954526
go take a shower, sweaty

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>>54954546
2/2

>>54954546
those ellipses are an eyesore

>>54954546
>>54954586
Oh hey, it's the cute Tiamat mom CYOA. I was wondering if that was still going.

>>54954671
How do you represent pauses in speaking that don't finish the sentence then? Ellipses are all that came into my mind.

>>54954546
bretty gud, keep going anon

>>54954710
not him but you probably shouldn't be doing that, it just makes your text awkward

>>54954710
You overused it

>>54954546
Lovely setting, anon.

>>54954710
Just end your sentences in regular periods. Only use ellipses for when you really have to emphasize a pause; they're really only used for dramatic effect to emphasize a point or something.

Also, put some padding on the text boxes. The text shouldn't be right up against the edges.

>>54954546
Can I fuck the mom tho

>>54954710
Were you trying to make the narrator sound like a synthetic voice running on a too slow CPU or something

>>54954788
>>54954807
Got it, boss.

>>54954830
Anon, no. You need to save your mom and make humans and monsters understand they are brothers and sisters.

I mean I guess the gods are your brothers and sisters too but they're dicks.

>>54954843
Put dick in the mom

>>54954017
So if not yandere for your waifus then having so many makes people like the crazy cat lady that keeps wanting to collect more?

>>54954546
Those body parts seem kind of gruesome for monster boys and girls. It's pretty good though. Just a bit complex.

>>54954856
Do not

>>54954892
Will
Must

>>54954710
In longer writing, you would have the narrator state it as her speech pattern. "She pauses awkwardly between each word, stumbling over them robotically one at a time, the tongues of men near foreign to her, and long distant in her memory."

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>>54954546
>monster

>colossal (60)
>Quadruped +2 power
>Godblooded

>Body Parts
Goring Horns (56)
Fanged Maw (52)
Spear Legs (49)
Hoofed Legs (46)
Extra Wings (45)
Feathered Wings (41)
Stinger Tail (37)
Coiling Tail (33)

>Perks
Extra Power (26)
Regeneration (20)
overdrive (17)
Aureola (13)
All Sunderer (5)
Fire Control (0)

Twilight of the Gods
7+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1= 15 power, 16 when in overdrive-i think i broke your CYOA, and now theres an untouchable tarrasque running about

BRING FORTH YOUR HERO KINGS AND GODS- LET THEM COWER BEFORE THE ENDBRINGER

>>54954546
You need help with your English too not that it's bothering me so much as I'm curious what your primary language is

Writing helps with that so keep at it lol

>>54954946
shit, bad at maths- 17 power normally, 18 in overdrive

still enough to turn the local mount olympus expy into a crater in one hit

>>54954946
>[Wizard] cast Cone of Cold!
>It's super effective!

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>Monster infestation
Who ya gonna call?

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>>54955011

>>54954998
oh fuck, just reread godblooded

might have to redo the build- see if i can get to 11 magic too

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the rest:

Duelist Paths:

The Quickdraw, you breath and your eyes narrow, your vision curls at the edges and the world takes on a gray tint as you lace your sight in quicksilver. By taking in the power of the wind you can sharpen your mind and accelerate your perception.

The Gust, you breath lightly and rhythmically as your legs flit through the sands, arm snapping off shots in wildly different directions with furious swings. By grasping at the wind around you your movements are pushed faster and guided while the attacks of others are softened or turned away.

The Trickshot, you seep your breath into the bullet and rub it for good luck, you load and fire, watching as the bullet bends in it's path and coats your target in a silver sheen. By breathing a little of your power into a shell you can imbue it with the power of wind to slow and weaken foes.

Fire: Armbreaker, shotgun.

Armbreaker Paths:

The Flame, you feel a spark alight in your mouth and you spit a gout of brilliant scarlet fire, burning the target to ash in mere moments even as the flames stick to your form like phantasmal scales. By drawing out the fires within your weapon you can breath fire and coat yourself in protective flames.

The , you .

The Passion, your heart hammers in your chest, blood burning with inner-fire as you find yourself pushing yourself harder and harder with nigh tireless movements. By taking in a little fire you can charge up your stamina and fill your muscles with overflowing strength.

Earth: Sharpshooter, rifle.

Sharpshooter Paths:

The Sandstorm, .

The Hawk, .

The Clay, .

i'm too lazy to finish it. so if anyone wants to use my ideas go ahead.

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>>54955021

>>54955011
probably to some weak puny humans - youd need at least some kind of legendary hero or demigod

if only there was a CYOA for that

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>>54954546
Gonna do a quick run through of this before bed; theres quite a few typos and in the future you could probably polish the formatting a bit in terms of text boxes and stuff but its a pretty good first effort my man and I'm 8 CYOAs in an still have bad formatting myself so its not the end of the world

>Monster

>Gargantuan
>Serpentine
>Plantlike

>Sensor Horns
>Terrifying Mien
>Fanged Maw
>Engulfing Maw
>Coiling Tail

>Extra Power
>Extra Speed
>Regeneration

>All Sunderer


I think I'm going to leave it there, but I think either we've got too many points to spend or you're going to end up with a lot of "do everything builds".

>Twilight of the Gods

But in any case, I'm a giant monstrous eel made of seaweed and kelp that devours all in its path, from schools of fish to whales to eventually the gods.

>>54954946
>>54954968
Stats go up to 11, and the only thing that can break that limit is Niké. Still with something at 11 you can smash Babylon into a crater. But then again you can smash anything into a crater with 11 power. If the gods will let you, that's another thing. Feel free to put the points you used on useless power into magic and speed.
>>54954948
My native language is Spanish.

>>54955082
You English is pretty good, esse.

>>54955082
>If the gods will let you
if 11 is "beyond the Gods"

then 11 power + 11 magic means the gods cant do dick

its good to have aspirations esse,
me? im going to have waffles

>>54955078
Well you're a first gen monster straight from the mother, and the expectation of you seems to be titanomachy, so you'd be a pretty damn standout monster.

>>54955082
Did you do a Spanish version, by chance? Would be curious what just the introduction looks like and I've never seen Spanish in such a context before.

>>54955137
The gods presumably exist in multitudes, though. I think that's what people keep forgetting.

>>54955187
Spanish in my CYOA? I dunno, maybe for an April's Fools, but I want my CYOAs to reach the maximum amount of people and this is an English website after all.

>>54955239
Could you please do the intro from the first image but in Spanish though? Just those 6-7 lines of text, as a separate image, for the sake of example of what such things look like in Spanish.

>>54955295
You seem autistic. What do you want him to do that for?

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>>54954546
fixing my endbringer

>Monster
>Colossal (60) 8,3,7
>Biped - 9,4,7
>Godblooded

>Body Parts
Goring Horns- 10,4,7 (56)
Fanged Maw- 11,4,7(52)
Grasping Arms(free)- 11,5,7 (52)
Extra wings + Weaving Wings - 10, 5, 8 (47)
Taloned Legs (free)- 11,6,7 (47)
Weaving Tail- 11,6,10, (43)
Extra horns + ornamental Horns - 11,6,11 (38)

>Perks
Aura (free)
Aureola (34)
Overdrive (31)
Regeneration (25)
Wind Control (21)
Lighting Control (18)
Pheumaphagy (11)

>Shastra Astra
Gloriole (6)
Judgement Bolt (0)

>still immune to physical attacks by everything except monsters? check
>now also immune to magical attacks by everything except monsters? check

the gods may be many and i one, but i will reduce their armies to ruin, grind their halls to dust, and break their bones like matchsticks

>>54955295
I'll write it in Spanish here, sorry but I'm not going to make an image for this:

¿Cómo... acabaste aquí? Aquí no vienen... las almas. No pueden. Humano, tienes que ir al lago; a Kur. Sino...

¿No sábes? Eso es... malo. Demasiado tiempo aquí y seras prisionero. Como yo.

Rápido, corre, a lo alto de la montaña. No te mereces quedarte atrapado aquí. Nadie lo merece.
...
No... ya es demasiado tarde. ¿Por que te atraparian aquí?¿Solo para herirme? Lo siento... es todo culpa mía.

Pero queda una opción. Podría hacerte un nuevo cuerpo. Con el podrías ascender por encima de este falso cielo, a su mundo. Pero no puedo hacer humanos. Está prohibido.

Ahora, ve a mi vientre. Soy madre... otra vez. Que felicidad.

I'm asking for a friend but could one of you post some Warhammer Cyoas if it's not too much trouble?

>>54955225
>The gods presumably exist in multitudes
but they still shouldnt be able to harm someone with 11 str/magic and godblooded- since they would have less str/magic

>>54955492
thanks anon, I imagine this is the only time I'll ever see spanish used in the context of a monstergirl cyoa

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>>54955636
FUCK THIS CYOA, FUCK IT AND WHOEVER MADE.POSTS IT

>>54955604
Two gods have 11 in a stat. Enlil has 11 power, as king of the gods, and Enki has 11 magic as god of magic. It's the reason why they're the head honchos of the pantheon.

>>54955082
>ellipses
>spanish
It all makes sense

>>54955696
guess ill need overdrive for those

>>54955636
>patienciant

>>54955726
You need Niké, overdrive doesn't increase the limit.

that's something I should state when I balance some things.

>>54955774
oh, huh

oh well, guess its a temporary +1 speed then

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>>54954546
>Monster
Gargantuan (80)
>Biped
God Blooded

>Purifying Horns (77)
Wise Mien (74)
>Fanged Maw (70)
Grasping Arms x2 (65)
Hoofed legs (63)
>Weaving tail (60)

Aura
>Aureola (56)
Soul Bond (54)
>Overdrive (51)
Regeneration (47)
>Extra power x 4 (27)
Extra magic x6 (-3)

>Gloriole (-8)
Nike (-12)
>Trumpeteer (-17)

Freedom

Power 11
Magic 11
Speed 4

All I need is patience. The waifu will come.

>>54954546
>come into my womb
That's about when I closed the image.

>>54955797
>All I need is patience. The waifu will come.
More likely than you think, when/if I make the second page expanding onto the 3 final choices, there will be waifu options.

>>54955802
Nice, we all needed to hear about your blog.

>>54955797
Fuck, forgot
>Notorious (+3)
Since this >>54955034
>>54955021
>>54955011
is here, might as well write the waifu too.

>>54955852
Thanks anon, I'm happy to hear your opinion of my opinion!

>>54955797
>-17
dont you need positive points at the end?

can i interest you in a local even happening at babylon/mt. olympus? a peaceful protest to initiate conversation about monster oppression and god privilege, bring friends

>>54955802
Very well, how can I word it so it's less creepy? Leave it at "Come into me"?

>>54954546
Well let us become a god among men.
Asusual, let's take drawbacks first.
Broodling should be fine. [120]

Let us become a monster. (it's not like dragons cant lewd the worshippers so no harm in being a monster with the right size.)

Size: Lets call it Huge. Getting 3 stat points for 20 points isnt worth it.

Body Type: Im not sure what dragonoids fall under. Quadrupeds maybe?

Monster Type: God Blooded. Of course.
1 horn: Purifying Horns [3]
1 mien: Mesmerizing Mien [3]
1 maw: Fanged [4]
2 leg: Weaving Legs [0] + Hoofed Legs [3]
1 tail: Weaving Tail [0]
Extra Wings+Weaving Wings [5]
Thats -18 for [102] so far.
Now to max out magic and power, I need 2P and 6M . Thats 8*5 for 40 points. I'll spend that on Perks Extra Power Extra Magic. (I assume I can take those multiple times?) Now I'm slow but literally undamageable. [62]

Other Perks.
Spell tongue [6]
Mimicry [3]
Aura [0]
Aureola [4]
Regeneration [6]
Since I have spellsoul, lets also take Ice Lightning and Toxicity. [10]
I.... dont really know what Pneumaphagy does but I guess I'll take it. I have spare points. [7]
I have 6 spare points. I guess I'll spend it on 1 speed boost?

Astras :
Spellsoul [8] If I have spellsoul can I get the other elemental astras? I assume it mets the fire/water/earth/wind control requirements.
Gloriole [5]
Land Waker [7]
Thats -20 for a grand total of [1] point leftover.
[P11 M11 S3]

Twilight of Gods. How can I fear them when they can not eve touch me? I shall lead both men and monsters for the sake of their freedom.

>>54955882
>how can I word it so it's less creepy
its fine as is IMO- fits tiamat (its tiamat right?) and the whole CYOA well

>>54955882
no way around it really, though "come to me" may be a decent alternative for ambiguity's sake

>>54954546
>Stats
11 mag
5 spd
1 pow
>Monster girl
>Diminutive +3 mag +3 spd
>Other +1 perk +1 mag
>Crystalline +3 mag -1 spd
>Body parts
Sensor horns -4 +1 spd
Grasping arms -4 +1spd
Mesmerizing mein -3
Insectoid wings -4 +1 spd
Weaving wings -5 +1 mag (extra wings)
Weaving legs -3 +1 mag
>Perks
Spelltounge -6
Spellsoul-8
Aura-3
Aureola-4
Gloriole-5
Soulbond -2
Trumpeter-5
Extra magic(x2) -5
>Twilight of the gods

Do you see that tiny light near the army of monsters that is turning everything in to ash? Yep that is me, and we are not going to stop until the gods are nothing but a memory. Poor mom holy shit.

Nice CYOA but maybe there are too many points? i mean i have 11 magic and i have a lot of leftover points.

Question: Did the cyberpunk cyoa (the good one) ever get another update?

>>54954546
Monster
Colossal
Other
Chaotic
Tentacle weaving arms, terrifying mien, engulfing maw

Power 9
Magic 10
Speed 3

Pneumaphagy
Extra magic
Spelltongue
Aura
Aureola
Overdrive
Regeneration

Trumpeter
All sunderer
Niké
Theopagy

Notorious

Twilight of the Gods

>>54955882
It's fine like that. Mother of Monster giving unsettling vibes is natural. If people are baby about it it's their own business.

>>54955882
How about not forcing vore and unbirthing?

>>54954546
>>54954586

Monster

>Size
Colossal (-40/60)
- 8 Power, 7 Magic, 3 Speed

>Body
Flier (Free)
- 7 Power, 7 Magic, 6 Speed

>Type
Godblooded (Free)

>Body Parts
Horn: Ornamental (-4/56)
Extra Horn: Goring (-5/51)
Mien: Wise (-3/48)
Maw: Fanged (-4/44)
Wing: Weaving (Free)
Leg: Talons (-4/40)
Tail: Weaving (-4/36)
- 10 Power, 10 Magic, 6 Speed

>Perks
Extra Power (-5/31)
Extra Magic (-5/26)
Spelltongue (-6/20)
Mimicry (-3/17)
Aura (Free)
Aureola (-4/13)
- 11 Power, 11 Magic, 6 Speed

>Shastra Auras
Spellsoul (-8/5)
Gloriole (-5/0)
Trumpeter (Free)

>Drawbacks
Notorious (Free)

Freedom


I understand what's happened, more or less.
One day, the Gods may need to be cast down once again, their temples erased, their followers slaughtered, their divinity crushed beneath the heels of a new power. The birth of this new power may even force such action, should their reactions be too unbending.
But for now? What 'monsters' need is a land of their own. A sanctum, free of the Gods' influence, to live and grow the way they were meant. A place to return to their natures once more, severed off from humanity and the Gods' minions.

I will be their promised land.
I will take root in the oceans and become a continent unto myself. I will reshape my body into a small world, for them; one that will provide for them and support their needs. The light of my soul shall seal away those who would come to desecrate this land, by force or by magic. Even the king of the Gods himself should be prepared to risk annihilation, should he not respect this peace.

But should we be left alone, that peace will remain. I have no need to conquer the world or claim the portfolios of the Gods for my own. I have no desire to massacre humanity, once born equally to other kinds as they once were.
I simply wish to nurture the little ones that come to me from a world that rejects them at every turn.

>>54956001
it seems implied that the (you) in that cyoa is a soul, not a solid body

>>54955912
>Nice CYOA but maybe there are too many points? i mean i have 11 magic and i have a lot of leftover points.
Yeah I have to reduce the amount of points by a lot. I'm thinking of putting it at 70, so that you have to pick up a couple flaws to reach 11/11/x stats.

>>54956030
Idgaf, I'm not indulging in his sick fetish.

>>54956035
>inb4 "lol, why use the newer version when the old version made you way more powerful, that's dumb!"

>>54956061
Why does people keep biting the bait?

>>54955912
>>54955891
>>54955797
>>54955489
>>54955078
>>54955976

so we have

>giant invincible (or close enough) demon titan that can match the God king at his own game
>jormungard as made by swamp thing
>mage titan that can become literally invincible/super sayan
>tinkerbell if she was the avatar and was high on warpdust
>godknows what, but scary as shit
>a living continent bird thing

1/2 of these can match most if not all of the gods- local pantheon is fucked

its what they get for making mom sad

>>54956061
>fetish
no sexual so not a fetish

>>54956061
It's not presented in a feitsh manner anon
there's no description of it beyond being taken in (whatever that means) and reborn (which is not described beyond the result)

you're reading too much into it to such a point I need to accuse you of liking it yourself despite being in denial, for the sake of banter

>>54956070
That, I fear. Well, I'll couple it with some improvements to sweeten the deal. Will waifus keep me from being shredded to death for a nerf?

>>54956086
>I need to accuse you of liking it yourself
Sounds like you're getting disability checks.

>>54956127
yes

people who want waifus wont take drawbacks and wont be OPOP

people who want to play the badguy from FGO/godzilla will pick the drawbacks but no waifu

>>54956035
>>54956127

Or, hear me out here... You make the waifus very expensive avoiding >>54956070

>>54956127
also, i think the main issue is how ridiculously strong Godblooded is

>>54956127
Who even gives a shit about the
>WAAAAH U GIVE ME LESS POINT DUMB MEANIEEEEEEE
posters?

>>54956127
You need to attract an audience of people that understand the concept of balance and don't choose what cyoas to play under the premise of assuming it's all really going to happen to themselves.

>>54954546
So yeah. The colossal and Gargantuan thing really isnt worth it though.
For Gargantuan, you get 3 extra stat points for 20 points, when you could buy them for 15. Colossal is even worse. You get 9 extra stat points and a 5 point free astra for what is essentially 60 points.
It's really just a negative for people who want to be really really big.

Well, otherwise it was pretty fun building though.

>>54955882
Leave it as is, I think it suits the tone.

>>54956154
Best idea. I love being rewarded for not taking waifus.

>>54956164
Yeah I thought of it in "point scarcity" context where stat points are precious, and you're sacrificing 2 of them for immunity to those weaker than you. In here with 11/11/x flying around it's too OP.

>>54956127
No, I hate the drawbacks so I'm not picking them and I don't want a waifu. I'll just post the old version every thread.

>>54956075
>tinkerbell if she was the avatar and was high on warpdust
I got a laugh imagining that, don't forget about the tiny roars of war though.

>>54956193
Anti self-insert fags are in denial.

>>54954546
Power Total: 10
Magic Total: 10
Speed Total: 10
Type: Monster
Size: Colossal - 40
Body: Flier
Monster: God-Blooded
Horn: Goring Horns - 4
Horn: Purifying Horns - 3
Horn: Extra Horns - 1
Mien: Mesmerizing Mien - 3
Mien: Wise Mien - 3
Mien: Extra Mien - 1
Maw: Fanged Maw - 4
Arm: Grasping Arms - 4
Arm: Extra Arm - 1
Leg: Taloned Legs - 3
Wing: Membrane Wings - 0
Tail: Weaving Tail - 4
Perk: Extra Power - 5
Perk: Extra Power - 5
Perk: Extra Magic - 5
Perk: Extra Magic - 5
Perk: Extra Speed - 5
Perk: Extra Speed - 5
Perk: Spelltongue - 6
Perk: Mimicry - 3
Perk: Aura - 0
Perk: Aureloa - 4
Perk: Soul Bond - 2
Perk: Overdrive - 3
Perk: Regeneration - 6
Shastra Astras: Gloriole - 5
Shastra Astras: Trumpeter - 0
Drawback: Ravenous Hunger + 15
Drawback: Bane + 15
Drawback: Notorious + 0
Sight: Twilight Of The Gods

I'd rather take Broodling instead of Bane, but i'm not exactly confident i could survive six years with Notorious along with it.

>>54954546
Holy shit he actually added a Monstergirl option! The absolute madman!

>>54956241
>all the mountain sized monsters joining their earth shattering roars in unison
>this rat sized fairy somehow has an equal effect

>>54956267
look at this looser, he isnt even immune to everything

11/11/11 when in overdrive, holy shit-
take nike and you have the strongest possible build for one encounter

>>54956193
Why wouldn't you play CYOAs under the assumption your build becomes reality? That's like being able to choose what to be reincarnated as and you choose to be a mute crippled chinese girl.

>>54956304
That anon is a self-loathing masochist.

>>54956296
One thing! And hey, if i'm taking on the gods i gotta atleast match them right?

>>54956070
>>54956127
>inb4 "lol, why use the newer version when the old version made you way more powerful, that's dumb!"

Don't even reply to these retards. You'll never please them

>>54956357
Maybe you shouldn't peddle needless nerfs so you can masturbate to how hardcore you think you are?

>>54956304
Because you also want to play cyoas that have an unfun premise. Like those 10 year prison cyoas.
What I care about is the ability to make creative builds that are uniquely yours and are in turn fun for others to read.

>>54956374
>Want to play prison CYOAs
Why? They're boring, mundane, and are all copies of each other.

>>54956374
>Because you also want to play cyoas that have an unfun premise.
>Not self-inserting in them to see what you are willing to endure

>>54956390
There are transcendent versions, like the one that takes place in space.

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>>54954546
>power 6
>magic 11
>speed 7

>monster boy

>normal
>biped

>elemental: fire

>ornamental horns (96)
>mesmerizing mien (93)
>grasping + weaving arms (85)
>extra wings + weaving wings (80)
>weaving legs (77)
>weaving tail (73)
>extra horn + purifying horn (69)

>>54954586
>fire control
>extra magic (64)
>extra speed (59)
>extra power (54)
>spelltongue (48)
>aura + aureola (41)
>soul bond (39)
>regeneration (33)
>spellsoul (25)
>sunflare (18)
>extra magic x2 (3)
>extra speed x2 (-7)
>extra power x2 (-17)

>broodling (3)

>freedom

Not sure if I'm allowed to buy the extras multiple times but I had a ton of points leftover.

I want to be found by a cute boy and I want him to raise him until it's time for me to devour him. Fulfill my wish, mama!

>>54955011
>>54955021
>>54955034
This will probably always be my favourite CYOA in terms of graphic layout and style. I love the way skills are displayed with the background character.

>>54956417
Still found that one boring, though it's at least an improvement over the rest of its ilk.

Still, I agree with >>54956414 when in the rare cases I make a build for a prison CYOA.

>>54953123
Anyone have that cyoa where you need to stay underground for a couple of years and you can buy a bunch of features, such as food from a fast food restaurant of your choice or a roommate who's a Mayo clinic doctor, and you get like a million dollars after you've completed the wait?

>>54956414
What I mean is that you don't go: " I would not enjoy any of these options, therefore I will not play this cyoa, which I see as an additional choice instead of just not engaging with the work."

>>54956354
>One thing!
and everyone who has 11 in str/magic

>>54956374
>Because you also want to play cyoas that have an unfun premise. Like those 10 year prison cyoas.
Uh yes and? I play them to make the best of a bad situation.
I don't see how it's a "fun" build to read how you pick the shittiest food so you can fuck the model. That's not what I'd do for sure.

>>54956464
Not doing that doesn't preclude self-insertion.

>>54956452
which one

>>54956503
I just described it to be best of my ability, except actually maybe it wasn't supposed to be underground, also it's designed to be a comfy CYOA. Can't remember the name.

I also think there's another feature where you get a huge library with like every book in the world or something.

>>54956478
Well I never mentioned "self-insertion" however you choose to define that. I simply dissaprove of the idea that choosing what cyoa to play is another choice like in the cyoas themselves, taken for optimized results.

>>54956545
>I never mentioned "self-insertion"
That's the premise of the conversation, though. See:
>>54956193
>don't choose what cyoas to play under the premise of assuming it's all really going to happen to themselves.

I love cyoas that let me be a special snowflake because even though I tend to have humble ambitions I appreciate the comfort and security those powers give me. I'm not ashamed of that.

>>54954546
Monster boy
>Size
Normal
>Body type
Biped
>Monster type
Wind Elemental
>Body parts
Ornamental horns (96)
Wise Mien (93)
Grasping arms (Bipeds get a free arm choice)
Weaving arms (89)
(Monster boys can trade a maw for an arm slot)
Extra wings (88)
Weaving wings (84)
Weaving legs (81)
Amphisbaena tail (77)
Extra tail (73)
Weaving tail (69)
>Perks
Extra power (64)
Extra magic (59)
Extra speed (54)
Wind control (Elemental gives me this free)
Lightning control (51)
Overdrive (48)
Spell tongue (42)
Regeneration (36)
>Shastra arts
Sirocco howl (29)
Judgment bolt (23)
Spell soul (15)
>Stats
5 power
7 speed
10 magic
>Freedom

I may now be a monster, but my Soul is and shall remain human. I will use my magic and speed to hunt monster and men alike for money.

Good cyoa but it seems we start out with too many points. maybe decrease it to 75?

>>54956127
>Will waifus keep me from being shredded to death for a nerf?
Would any of the waifus be strong enough to keep me as safe (and autonomous, in the sense of her not forcing me into something) as being godblooded w/ 11/11 power/magic would?

>>54954546
Another "11/11/x invincible monster" would just be boring... Fuck it, time for vore

>Monster Girl
>Colossal 60
Biped
I am great, and beautiful, am I not?
>Godblooded
>Ornamental Horns, Extra Horns, Goring Horns 51
>Mesmerizing Mien 48
Gaze upon my beauty, unmatched by others.
>Extra Maw, Engulfing Maw 45
Gaze upon my beauty - and become part of it.
>Grasping Arms, Weaving Arms 37
>Extra Wings, Feathered Wings 32
>Weaving Legs 29
>Weaving Tail 28
See my perfection. Do you not wish to join in it?

>Extra Power 23
>Spelltongue 17
This greatness, little one, can be shared by you.
>Aura (Free)
>>Aureola 13
>Pneumaphagy 6
I am not of this world - I AM a world. Come, little one, enter me and join my world.

>All Sunderer -2
Do not flee, large ones; those who would harm me from afar, I consume from afar.
>Spellsoul -10
I command the seas and skies; this world itself wishes to join me.
>Gloriole -15
All who would harm me - behold my majesty!
>Trumpeter (Free)
Grow, little one, and then come to me.

>Maneater 0
I hunger, little one. Take one more step - and come into me.

>Freedom
I bear no hatred - those who will come, will come, and those who must not, will not.

Power 11
Magic 11
Speed 5

Can Pneumaphagy bend the 11 cap, to edge me over other 11 stat monsters (by eating others if necessary) rather than any 'actual' benefit, or would I need Theophagy for that?

>>54956667
to get over 11 you need the aura that requires overcharge

the only way to harm 11 power monsters is with 11 power monsters

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>>54956589
Brother.

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>>54954546
>Monster Boy
>Colossal
I'm a big guy.
>Other
>Chaotic

>Weapon Arms
>Tentacle Arms
>Grasping Arms
>Membrane Wings
>Coiling Tail

>Extra Speed x6
>Aura
>Aureola
>Overdrive
>Regeneration
>Pneumaphagy
>Gloriole
>Niké
>Trumpeter
>Theophagy

>Broodling
>Notorious

>11 Power
>6 Magic
>11 Speed

The world has 6 years. 6 years to find and kill me, before I am ready. I need no magic when I am power incarnate. I am the reaper of the gods, and it is their time.
I shall create everything anew, but won't you stand with me? My brothers and sisters?

>>54956768
Forgot to add
>Twilight of the Gods

Fuckingdamnit

>>54956768
>6 Magic
risky move

>6 years
6 weeks is stretching it brother

so the CYOA is basically pitting the Eldrazy vs the Amonkhet gods

>>54954546
>>54954586
Power: 11
Magic: 14
Speed: 3

>Monster Girl
>Size: Colossal
>Body Type: Other
>Monster Type: Chaotic
>Body Parts: Terrifying Mien, Wise Mien, Weaving Arms, Weaving Wings, Weaving Legs, Extra Tail (Weaving Tail)
>Perks: Extra Power (Free from Other), Pneumaphagy (Free from Chaotic), Extra Magic, Spelltongue, Aura, Aureola, Soul Bond
>Shastra Astras: Trumpeter (Free from Colossal), Spellsoul, Gloriole, Theophagy
>Drawbacks: Notorious (Free from Colossal)
>Twilight of the Gods

Now unless I fucked up during build creation this should be fun.

>>54956585
I didn't mean to attack the idea of using your own desires and preferences with that sentence, only the idea of playing cyoas like they're really happening which makes choosing to play more wish fulfilment ones the better choice and makes people prefer unbalanced previous versions over more fine tuned finished versions because they can get more stuff.

>>54956843
These are Mesopotamian gods.

All these people picking Godblooded are basically Kingu.

>>54956822
I have no need for magic when my me presence warps reality. I am the Ordered Chaos.
As for the 6 years, let them come. Mother shall steal me away and then it's a game of hide and seek.
The longer they take, the stronger I become.

what's your favorite wish fulfillment cyoa?

>>54956843
Which cyoa?

>>54956867
>Magic: 14
cant, cap at 11

>>54956880
i mean yes, i was reffering in terms of powerlevels/how fucked they are- literally every single monster can match the enki in combat, and the others cant even hurt them

>>54956890
I- i dont think theyll have time worrying about you little one, 6 years is a long time when you are dead, and that part is happening sooner than later

>>54956768
You don't have enough magic for gloriole.

>>54956923
the one everyone is doing right now

>>54956942
...MOTHERFUCKER.

>>54956954
:P

>>54956954
Whenever you're forced to say motherfucker, you're really just calling someone daddy.

>>54956926
>cap at 11
Oh. Correct.
Still take those bodyparts for style and flavor.

I don't understand. Why do people pick the monster boy option if they're not planning to waifu/husbando a human?

>>54956981
dignity

>>54956981
It is a more confortable form.

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>>54956968
"Choke me motherfucker" doesn't carry the same feel as "Choke me daddy"

>>54956978
fair, honestly the cap is kinda dumb- anything beyond 11 is kinda redundant anyways so why not let someone have that 21 strength Nike build like a madman?

>>54956981
speak for yourself, when you are the size of typhon it becomes pointless to look humanoid, its not like it will fit anyways

>>54956981
I plan to cast down the gods and unite monster and man. I think it's fitting that I have a combined form, to represent what I plan to do.

>>54956981
They're fags

>>54954546
Does Trumpeter for the Colossal count against the limit of 3?

>tfw no mass effect cyoa

>>54957055
Explicitly stated to not count.

>>54957055
no, read the thingy

>tfw anon don't make no mass effect cyoa

>>54954546
Since you were planning on making a newer version, maybe you could consider the following; we don't associate smaller monsters with necessarily more magic but with more numbers. You could make the bonus of being smaller to have your offspring mature quicker and come out in bigger litters.

>>54957135
And then there is no reason to be a tiny thing if you are male

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>>54957066
>>54957104
I still remember that shitshow of an creator and his mass effect WiPs, boldly claiming it'll be the best thing ever.

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>>54955011
>Noble
Free monster Soul (Wurm)
>Physical (4)
Martial Arts
Willpower
Sixth sense
Athletic

>Weaponry (14)
Bladed Arms
Ancient Weapons
Spine Weaponry
Ancient will
Overcharge
All seeing Eye
Marksmanship

>Ethereal (20)
Pocketing
Unleash
Blessed
Recall
Indomitable
Healing

Str 2
Def 3
Spd 6
Int 4
Skl 15

There, let's call this a companion build to >>54955797 for now at least. Shit physical stat are a lot more survivable when you're more or less immune to magic, wield a wield a living, has several variation of expanded awareness and his under the protection of a nearly unkillable Monster-God.

Also noticed I misread the first page. I took the body stats as our base but we start with 1 in all stats before that, putting me at +18 now. Rather than dilute my build, I'll double down on Wise mien to really be the ancient master as old as the Earth itself, add extra 2 speed and add another set of arms. That puts me at 11/11/7 and 14/14/10 with Nike. Maybe I can't punch reality into submission, but I think I can get close enough.

... I'm starting to also think we either have too many points or we should have more things to do with them.

>>54955881
I'm alway up for peaceful gathering, but my Notoriety might draw an agressive crowd. If you're fine with that, I'll happily join you.

>>54956009
I don't feel the need for a sanctuary Anon, but I'd hapilly hang around with (on?) you.

>>54957161
That's why you get a waifu option.

>>54957193
So lets see.
>Big monsters get to be the fucking strong
>Tiny monsters get... more tiny monsters i guess?

>>54957189
>I'm alway up for peaceful gathering, but my Notoriety might draw an agressive crowd.

theres 2 gods who can even hurt us- and the remaining possible dangers are other monsters

its fine

>>54953620
It's not cute when a dude murders you for cheating on him

>>54957135
Why make them weaker and useless?

>>54957193
Not everyone even wants a waifu.

>>54957218
It's not cute, but it's justice.

>>54957175
I have heard tales of him. He namefagged talking mad shit for being an author.
He quit before finishing his only CYOA.

seeing as all the colossals get notoriety and have the gods made aware of them

how many bricks do you think have been shat at the slew of colossals that suddenly appeared

>>54956981
Why not waifu a human with your monster form once you become god?

>>54957233
There are two Babylons now, that's how many bricks were shat.

>>54957246
>with your monster form
because its like - the size of a mountain, and the dick is equally massive

only your mother is loose enough to fit a dong that big

>>54954586
So what does Theophagy actually let you do?

>>54954546
There needs to be an option to keep mother company.

>>54957282
>There are two Babylons now
thats going to come in handy after marduk/enki/whoever else gets flattened alongside the first babylon

>>54957289
makes you more effective against gods- full endbringer mode

>>54957233
Multiplayer is for retards.

>>54957283
>only your mother is loose enough to fit a dong that big
And proportioned apporopiately to take said dong without being burst apart by a giant fucking dick.

>>54957289
Theo means "divinity." Phage means "consumption."

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>>54957283
>only your mother is loose enough to fit a dong that big
GODS GET OUT REEEEEEEEEE

>>54957283
>>54957313
Don't lewd the dragon mom.

>>54957330
She's their mom too technically.

>>54957189
>wield a wield a living
wat wat wat.

>>54957313
>>54957330
i didnt mean Tiamat, i meant (your) human mother

although technically (and most likely in mythology) that is indeed how it would go

>>54957289
In essence, you accept what has become of chaos and your objective is to return the world to nothing, so that chaos might thrive again. For this purpose, you have the same ability as Pneumaphagy, but supercharged, as in the strength of anything you kill is added into your own (This doesn't let you break the stat limit, but gives you the perks and shastra astras of whatever you have killed.). The ultimate power at a price, but in this version of the CYOA, only take it if you want to be truly "eldritch", it's nigh useless for anything else.

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>>54954546
Monster
Colossal (60/100)
Serpentine
Chaotic

Terrifying Mein (Free)
Engulfing Maw (58/100)
Weaving Tail (Free)

Earth Control (53/100)
Ice Control (48/100)
Extra Power +3 (33/100)
Extra Magic +2 (23/100)
Soul Bond (21/100)
Pneumaphagy (Free)

Land Walker (14/100)
Age of Ice (8/100)
Theophagy (2/100)
Trumpeter (Free)

Notorious (+0)

Power 11
Magic 11
Speed 4

TWILIGHT OF THE GODS

>>54957403
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8cDa7yZeci8

literally yormungandr

>basically 75% finished with my CYOA
>just straight up give up on it due to lack of interest
why do I give up on everything life anons?

>>54957420
We are cursed.

>>54957420
Bad laissez-faire parenting.

>>54957283
I mean, you could have gotten yourself tentacles. Or just made yourself big but not gargantuan like me. Really being the 2 largest sizes has no upsides.

>>54957453
For you.

>>54957453
>not looking down on the gods, literally
>no watching as your shadow engulfs their city and your footsteps shake the ground

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>>54953123
How would you introduce your cyoa-given bf/gf to your parents? How would they react?

Is there a CYOA with a unnaturally long hair option? I love long hair

>>54957420
Cause you a little bitch.

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>>54957453
The upside is obvious.

>>54957352
> Wield a living weapon.

I really shouldn't make cyoa builds at 3am.

>>54957467
>Not crushing their pride by using a relatively small being to crush their every attempts.

>>54957469
the reason nobody is replying to your post is that there is no good answer

>>54957469
>IN YOUR FACE- "YOURE GOING TO DIE ALONE MY ASS"

>>54957469
Please stop posting this image. It makes me physically ill.

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>>54954546
Power-11
Magic-2
Speed-11

Monstergirl

Normal
Biped
Godblooded

Purifying Horns
Mesmerixing Mien
Fanged Maw
Grasping Arms
Membrane Wings
Extra Wings
Taloned legs
Stinger Tail
-Pincer Tail
-Coiling Tail

Extra Power X5
Extra Speed X5
Aura
Aureola
Overdrive
Regeneration
Pneumaphagy

All Sunderer
Thousand Cuts
Trumpeter

Notorious

Freedom

>>54957469
Like I introduced my other girlfriends. It's not exactly complicated.

>>54953858
truly, porn has always been known as the art where a good plot is the most necessary.

>>54957652
You cannot pick Freedom with Pneumaphagy. You have to pick Twilight of the Gods.

>>54957485
Being bigger than mountain would be miserable. You can't interact with people, you can't own anything because there is not enough materials and anything big enough for you would simply crumble anyway. You can only sleep and destroy. Planet is like town to you so you will quickly run out of things to wreck.
It's cool if it's your fetish but smaller monsters are obviously superior choice.

>>54957677
>I watch porn because it touches my heart

>>54957212
Strength in numbers. Quick replenishing after extermination attempts.

>>54957824
porn is the ultimate form of poetry.

Anyone have Conduit: Mu?

>>54957881
>Wanting to use your children as cannon fodder
>Instead of favoring invididual strength you choose powerless masses
>Daddy issues

>>54957469
"Hey mom, hey dad, so some kind of magic exists, and somehow I now have a girlfriend."

>Dad probably just ignores or laughs off my statement due to a mix of disbelief and not really caring either way.

>Mom is happy for me but will begin bugging me about grandkids in a manner only she would call 'subtle'

>Siblings just roll with it, older brothers maybe joke that reality had to break for a girl to date me, little sister just happy for me and trying to befriend my girlfriend.

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What the fuck happened to this?

>>54958080
The guy doesn't work on CYOAs often/is also updating the Little Anime Girls in a Dark City CYOA.

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>>54958080

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Another piece I found.

>>54957469
Well, if the gf is normal in appearance and people at large don't know about magic cyoa shenanigans happening, they'd react normally I guess.

If everybody knows the world suddenly fell into a bukkake of magic powers and weird perverted gods and outlandish sci-fi tech and horrific eldritch creatures and such, I guess they'd have bigger things to worry about.

>>54957416
>literally yormungandr
... which is awesome, I have no problems with it.

>>54954546
For Colossal size, what does it mean when it says that notorious costs 40 points?

>>54958276
notorious doesn't cost 40 points, colossal size does

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>>54957420
Because there is no real reason to even finish CYOAs, the attention is fleeting from posting, enjoyment is difficult to have with your own work sometimes, skills can be gained in the creation process but finishing the CYOA gives none.

I feel you senpai, happened many times, mainly for this reason here-

>Redesigning a CYOA for fun and better quality fapping
>Split the pages into separate PSDs to reduce slowdown
>Everything going fine, have all the choice boxes ready to put images into and change some text
>Start making it look fancy, colours, patterns etc
>Everything starts to slow down to the point I have to wait a few seconds to even see a change I made.

Literally haven't even put a picture on it, there aren't even that many effects, just drop shadows, bevels and gradients. what the fuck is this? Is there no way to fix this crap?

Any ghost or spirit cyoas

>>54954546
How does the extra effect work?

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>>54957763
> He can't interact with the people that lives within the extension of his soul
> He doesn't shape the Earth until it take a form satisfying to his magnificence
> He doesn't commune with the life that has grown upon his back, gently nurturing every animal, every tree and every human in his domain until they accomplish things he'd never imagined during his long, long life.

You have an awful lack of imagination.

>>54958406
I find that sometimes I enjoy my own fantasies a lot more if I "formalize" them by creating a CYOA around them

>>54958524
Yeah, I suppose that's probably one reason, I'm actually slowly trying to make a Self-Insert cyoa, something I can use to sort of plan daydreams and fantasies of being in a fictional universe or some autistic shit like that.

Anybody got anything light and comfy?

>>54958604
well I have a pillow

>>54958604
My bed is comfy

>>54958503
And a active imagination is the only thing you have going for you

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>>54954546
>>54954586

Power – 11
Magic – 11
Speed – 4

Monster, Other, Chaotic

Ornamental Horns, Grasping Arms, Weaving Arms, Weaving Wings, Coiling Tail

Pneumaphagy, Aura, Aureola, Regeneration, Spelltongue, Ice Control, Lightning Control, Toxicity, Mimicry

Trumpeter, Theophagy, Gloriole, Spellsoul

Notorious, Ravenous Hunger

Twilight of the Gods

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>>54958604

Anyone got that one cyoa where you can choose from 2 lists, and you get to choose how much of either you could get? First one had stuff like a warehouse that could recieve anything, second one had documentation to be anywhere, stuff like that.

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>>54958679

>>54954546
>almost done build
>can't decide whether to join the Monster Mash, join Enlil or fuck off as fast and as hard as I can
What do you guys think?

>>54958503
Take a step, giant shock wave and magnitude 9 earthquake kills everybody.
Gee anon, petting humans sure was fun.
Largest size should be overpowered because you sacrifice everything by picking it.

>>54954546
So, a small confusion... If you pick monstergirl/boy and a type other than biped, is that just what kind of thing inspires your still-bipedal still-humanoid form, or what?

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>>54958698

>>54958660
Forgot to add Colossal, but that's pretty obvious

>>54958711
I bet it'd turn you into something like a centaur.

>>54954546
>come into my womb
Okay, you got me hard.

>>54958406
I had the same problem in GIMP with the original version of pic related.

But this version is in done in PHP/CSS with a little database to keep track of all the content. Performance is great, but it's more difficult to do fanciful graphics. Dunno how other people think about it, for me the visuals just lack a certain something.

I know the colors are bad, I'll get around to it eventually.

>>54958776
>got me hard
'Achievement unlocked'

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>>54958790
And of course I forget the pic.

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>all these people making kaiju to show the gods what for

>>54958406
>what the fuck is this? Is there no way to fix this crap?
More RAM.
I had the same issue where I'd move an image and it took five seconds for it to register a change. Or I'd type and the text was lagging, or sometimes I couldn't even see the text appear until I hit enter.
Now I put the text layers from a section of choices into a group and apply the effects on the group as a whole, and I turn off effects while working.