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Previously on /cyoag/: >>54923649
Pasta: https://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu
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Last thread's low-effort OC with some edits. Snuck in an extra option.
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>>54937346
It's called Westboro (yes, not the best name choice ...), and it's a pretty clunky mess with a horrid translation. But if you like brutal cyberpunk ... it's good. Brutal violence, oppressive aesthetics. Controls are weird, but combat is fun, short and brutal.
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>>54938107
Mystery box. To be taken after making the first choice.

Note that it's totally optional and changes the genre and theme of the CYOA if you take it.
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>>54938112
Brutal brutal brutal.
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>>54938253
I can't mention its brutal brutality often enough. Brutal.
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http://www.strawpoll.me/13707742/r
I find it both amusing and satisfying that Tok is being beaten at his own game.
And pitiful.
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>>54938364
I voted for Tok because of your post. I will always support a bullying survivor. I'm sorry.
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>>54938435
... you do know that Tok has a background of bullying /x/, right?
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>>54938435
Don't worry, you got me to counter your vote with that post, because I'm an insufferable contrarian.
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I didn't vote, all those cyoas with [contest] tag are shit. Even the other low effort cyoas on that subreddit are better, or at least more original.
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>>54938453
You. I like you.
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>>54938445
I did not know that. Now I regret voting for a bully, thereby hurting his victims by endorsing his behaviour.
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>>54938616
Ask him about his telekinesis tricks and /x/ when he shows up again. He's always proud to tell that story.
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>>54938064
Post my cyoas.
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>>54938646
>Autist goes out of his way to show other autists that what they believe is autistic.
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>>54938107
Shiba.
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>>54938666
Satan stop catposting.
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>>54938646
Yeah... Convincing crazy people to put "magic" rocks up their butts isn't really hard. They do that all the time with little outside input.
Taking four years to do it is actually kind of... What's the word? Underwhelming?
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>>54938749
Because no one wants to be a nigger
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>>54938749
>bkack
>kack
You've sub-consciously answered your own question.
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>>54938764
I secretly do. I can only confess this on /cyoag/ but I have fantasized more than once about being a black warlord or diety of an arabian desert in a fantasy world. I can't explain this. I have never seen a black person irl so maybe they have some mythological appeal to me.
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>>54938749
As long as they're cute girls, sure.
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>>54938749
>Straight hair
>Small nose
>No prognathism
This character isn't black. She's some polynesian or maybe an arab.
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>>54938749
I'm impartial about black, but delicious brown is criminally underrepresented.
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>>54938844
>Black
>Arabian
Your ignorance is irritating to me.
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>>54938886
>prognathism

Don't go there. If japanese anime girls can be drawn without collapsed maxillas then black anime girls can be drawn without prognathism.
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>>54938844
Mythological big black cock you mean.
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>>54938749
They can be cute when they have lighter skin. I think any waifu section with more than one human should have a nice light skin girl.
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>>54938906
That's one of their major identifying features, so it being absent makes them look nothing like the actual thing.
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>>54938902
Isn't it all the same? Aren't arabs basically black people with a more mocha skin?
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>>54938749
They're ugly so no, I don't include them.
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>>54938749
Doing things that don't interest you in the name of social justice is a recipe for poor creative expression. Do things you actually like, and don't be ingenuine with yourself or your audience.
That said, I've seen some cute chocolate. They won't be character's in the CYOA I'm making, though, because it does not contain any characters. It's more of a power picker.
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>>54938925
No, Arabs are more like white people with more mocha skin. They're Caucasoids. Even if you just limit it to physical appearance, the only thing that makes them look different other than the skin is the long noses.
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>>54938700
Is this worth the 15 or so dollars?
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Anyone got that point buy yandere CYOA?
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>>54938162
I remember the kiddie fiddler cyoa that was made as a reaction to this.
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>>54938931
What is your cyoa about and can I use it to fulfill my fantasy of the week: running my own nightclub which doubles as a hotspot for all sorts of paranormals and supernatural creatures?

Also, Therese > Jeanette.
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>>54938749
I had an Egyptian girl in KAIFU. Does that count?
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>>54938616
Vote for the future! Vote for what could be!
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>>54938931
Anon it's bait. Ignore it and move on. He's been at it a few times before.
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>>54938749
>black
>posts a non black character

Also no, they're fucking ugly
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>>54939004
Unless one of them has a benis, you won't get my vote.
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>>54938898
Casual.
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>>54938970
Not him but it depends on how much value you place on visual novels. If you like VNs, I felt it was above average in terms of presentation and writing. I paid $15 because the devs are cool guys and I wanted to help them out, but otherwise I might wait until it's on sale.

There's a small amount of /v/ meme humor thrown in there but overall I thought the writing was of high enough quality to recommend to people not familiar with visual novels. Just remember that the core theme is you're viewing a cyberpunk world from the perspective of an uninvolved citizen, not participating as a main character.
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>>54938993
Egyptians are related to Berbers/Arabs, so no.
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I deleted my post about black characters in cyoas. The majority of you were very civil but it broke my heart to read some of the more racist, neonazi responses. Thank you for taking the time to answer me anyway.
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>>54939061
How about this?
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>>54938991
Did Therese remove the cushion from that chair before sitting in it? Otherwise, she's really short.
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>>54939088
Blacks aren't allowed to play my CYOAs.
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>>54939088
please leave and stay gone
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>>54939117
>Not having a chair with REALLY high sides so you can feel young again
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>>54939061
>>54939100
It amuses me so much that some anons here will call them ugly when literal models like that wouldn't even breathe in anon's general direction. Sour grapes.
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>>54939132
I'd rather not be subjected to the smell of shea butter and chitlins, so I'm good with that.
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>>54939004
>mfw I can only vote once for SDA
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>>54938918
It's not the skin really, a brown 2D girl is cute too if she's drawn like the rest. It's when you put the black features that they turn hideous.
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>Eronomicon has 102 votes
Fucking contrarians.
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>>54938970
If you like cyberpunk, VNs and enjoyed games like Snatcher and ROM i'd say yes.
The lowest price I've ever seen was 33% off so not much.
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>>54939185
Does second place get a prize?
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>>54939073
I think I've learnt I'm into VN's with something beyond lots of text. I'm really looking forward to the Miskatonic VN because there's walking, and this one has some crafting drinks mechanic. I gave up after 40 minutes of reading Fate/Stay Night, didn't even get through the intro.
My favorite part of RPG's is reading and talking to people, solving issues with diplomacy first.
>>54939004
I'm picking Junko. Also how many options do I need to include in my not!Waifucyoa in order for it to be good? Right now I'm only at two, then the waifus. I'm hoping I come up with something to add after the waifus.
Also thanks for the guides. I remembered how to do a thing with shadows, and how to do those fancy borders.
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>>54939199
They get Reddit gold... whatever the fuck that is.
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>>54939004
I want a waifu with too many eyes.
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>>54939100
The darker the chocolate the more refined it tastes and the healthier it is.
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>>54939216
It means you get a shiny icon next to your name and when people look at their account they see you got a bunch of gold and upboats.
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>>54939202
Go for it then, but keep in mind that the drink mixing is generally very basic and easy. It exists to serve as your only real way of influencing the story by sneakily getting characters drunk and changing the amount of money earned at the end of each chapter.
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>>54939202
A waifu cyoa can never be "good". Still, to be functional as a masturbation tool I'd say you need at least a handful of options.
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>>54939202
>Also how many options do I need to include in my not!Waifucyoa in order for it to be good?
If it's a waifu-centered CYOA, quality over quantity, to be honest. Write more for less characters, since the whole point of the thing is to appeal the characters. Flesh them out and take the space to make then interesting.

I would say that any less than 6 ish is a bit too small. I wouldn't say there's an upper limit, though.
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>>54938064
Can we stop calling waifu pickers "cyoas"? We don't call furry erotica "anthropomorphic animal romance novels" either.
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>>54939243
>Waifu CYOAs are used as masturbation tools
But i thought waifu CYOAs were used to imagine the kind of stuff you two would do together. You know like Holding hands
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>>54939004
Cute, quiet and emotionless albino waifus please.
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>>54939234
I am okay with this. I like having multiple options to solve the problem.
>>54939250
>Write more for each person
Can do.
I was more asking
>How many sets of options do I need, outside the waifus?
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>>54939007
If I'm going to be honest, I was really only using it as an excuse to complain about Andromeda. I'll stop now.

>>54938991
It's just a piece of /trash/ that involves directing the evolution of an ecosystem of alien parasites. It's more of a Zerg/Nid or Resident Evil feel by default, but the toolbox of biology that I intend to hand the players could theoretically be used to create some sort of spooky underworld of classic movie monsters to attend your attempts at club ownership.

But it's garbage, and a long ways away from being presentable.
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>>54939296
I actually think waifu cyoas are cringetier autism. Then again I'm only recently able to play them. Now that I've become /fit/ and have a succesful job I feel worthy of the girls. My heart goes out to the girls who get soulmated to people like the fatposter though.
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>>54939284
can you kill yourself
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>>54939369
He can, but probably won't.
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>>54939345
I'm a big, kind person with lots of love to give. Who are you to say I'd make a bad partner? Fuck you. I'm going out for taco bell and a caramel macchiato.
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>>54939297
I've got plenty.

>>54939324
>How many sets of options do I need, outside the waifus?
I can't really tell you how many sections you need to include; that entirely depends on the quality of your presentation. If you can flesh out a likeable CYOA in one section, then do it. A good and immersive setting along with good context and likeable characters is all part of the formula
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waifu cyoas =/= masturbation cyoas, there are some waifupickers with barely any lewd material

>>54939391
unfortunate
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>>54939324
>How many sets of options do I need, outside the waifus?
What world do your waifus exist in? You need as many options as are required to establish their context, while not so many as to bog down the actual "point." Ideally, those contextual options should also provide the player some incentive.
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I wish I could draw, I need pics of weird things like bearded toads in an anime style.
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>>54939428
>waifu cyoa
>good and immersive setting
>good context
>likeable characters
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>>54939297
>write a brick
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>>54939492
There are waifu CYOAs with more substance than plenty of other non-waifu CYOAs, anon.

The bar for quality isn't exactly high.
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>92 posts
>11 are CYOAs
>2 are replies to CYOAs
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>>54939625
Spamming CYOAs make threads die faster and don't encourage more builds.
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>>54939568
U wot m8?
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>>54939428
>If you can flesh out a likeable CYOA in one section, then do it
I can't.
>setting
I'm trying.
>>54939443
>world
I'm adding that don't worry.
>player some incentive
Haven't figured that out yet, sorry. Only that it's nicer to be here than outsid.e
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>>54939625
(you)
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>>54939625
thanks for adding one more useless post
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>>54939625
>1/8 posts are reposted cyoas

This is a problem.
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>>54939625
Go hog wild and post CYOAs and builds.
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>>54939678
>multipurpose lazer "tool"
>Modular shotgun
>Express pistol

Fictional universe: the nasuverse
shock suit
money
Gold
ai companion
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>>54939625
Here, I'll post this one just for you.
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>>54939666
Push yourself, then. Study how to write better and write lots.

Just don't go down the "pandering" route. Do what you want to do the most, and let the merits of your work carry the quality.
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>>54939708
We've gotten a fair amount of OC this week. You can't expect every thread to be full of it.
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>>54939897
If you don't take Total War you are a little baby.
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>>54939809
>Pandering
Don't worry I'm not.
Sadly I ended up with wayyy too much character art and not enough for the other stuff.
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>>54939935
>Sadly I ended up with wayyy too much character art
Story of my life, though I do this intentionally. I like having lots of art to choose from, and you never know if you'll need it for future projects anyways.

Pick the ones you like most and use those.
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>>54939196
What's the name of the game? Guess I'm finally buying it.
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>>54939763
isn't that far too many gifts?
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>>54939958
Great character art is a diamond dozen but it's a lot harder to find other stuff. I need houses, I was hoping to get six options because otherwise this is really gonna suck.
I like being able to choose, too, since I don't really plan characters. Just look at the image and let slip the hogs of war.
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>>54939998
The big red letters, bro.
http://store.steampowered.com/app/447530/VA11_HallA_Cyberpunk_Bartender_Action/
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>>54939998
It's in the upper right of the screenshots, VA-11 HALL-A.
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>>54940080
Huh. That's actually a neat way to present game names.
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>>54940055
fuck, misread it

remove Money, Ai and Gold
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>>54940096
It's the name of the bar.
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>>54940102
still one too many
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>>54940187
the express pistol too then
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>>54940222
her's your mystery box
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>>54940260
>get two guns and a shock suit
>get transposted into a universe of my choice
>but have to deal with a warzone first
good enough- who knows, if i do some cool shit i might get to become a janitor or something
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>>54938844
>never seen a black person irl

You must live in an Asian country? White countries are flooded with the damn things. Let me tell you, you are not missing out on anything of value.
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>>54940291
actually, there arent many warzones in fate from what we see, at least not large ones- theres the one archer goes redman for but thats it

so i might even end up at one of the HGW then
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>>54938064
>Moralism (Pr -15, Pu 0, Re +30, M 0)
>None (Pr -15, Pu 0, Re +30, M 0)

>Free Blood Magic (Pr +35, Pu -75, Re -20, M 100)
>Abandoned Refugees (Pr +50, Pu -75, Re -20, M 100)
>Unregulated Gateways (Pr +65, Pu -105, Re -5, M 100)
>Experimental Diabolism (Pr +65, Pu -105, Re -5, M 200)
>Expedition Protocol (Pr +45, Pu -95, Re -5, M 200)
>Unregulated Mana (Pr +45, Pu -80, Re -5, M 200)
>Living Maintenance (Pr +70, Pu -55, Re +20, M 150)
>Limit Research (Pr +55, Pu -55, Re +20, M 150)

>Sorceror (Pr +55, Pu -55, Re +20, M 150)
>Attack E, Defense E, Speed E, Wit A (Pr +55, Pu -55, Re +20, M 240)
>All Sorceries (Free)
>All Conceptualism save Forgery
>Parasitic Engineering, Total Reset, True Destiny

>All "Unaligned" (Pr +55, Pu -55, Re +20, M 155)
>Hysteria, Darius (Pr +55, Pu -55, Re +20, M 0)
>All Reformists (Free with Re +40 by the end of the build)

>March of the Bogatyri (Pr +55, Pu -55, Re +30, M 0)
>Darker Skies Ahead (Pr +55, Pu -45, Re +40, M 0)

Our armies are non-existent so I'm relying on which require indirect methods (our new friends may be able to provide firepower). The biggest challenge will be re-introducing blood magic under the guise of moralism. My S level intellect, capable followers and clear examples of conventional magic's failings give me a chance, but not a very good one.
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>>54939923
>type
Blade, I'm thinking just a simple long two-handed spear will do. Maybe I'll pick up a sidearm later.

>Passive powers
Doing a pure warrior, anti-mage build. Some nerd in a bathrobe starts chucking sparkles at me, he's gonna get stabbed.
x500 durability (-19)
x40 strength (-7)
x20 speed (-8)
x2 reaction/perception (-3)
immunity to magic attacks (-60)
sensory overdrive (-3)

>active powers
spells are for manlets but I'll take summon equipment (-15) just for the +10sp and a sweet cape. According to the guide I only need 11sp to keep my weapon out and passives on indefinitely, so that'll do.

>drawbacks
There are advantages to an anti-mage build, it seems.
For every week I don't fight, I lose permanent SP which I'm not really using much (+30)
When I lose a fight, I lose an active power for a year, too bad I got no actives (+30)
I have made a couple CYOAs (+5)
someone I love will die, joke's on you she's already dead and anyone else would probably die in total war anyway (+15)
and guess who has enough points to take indefinite growth now? (-80)
and I'll take 5 years off my lifespan (+15) to pay back the cost of summon equipment.
If I need any more SP than that, I'll train for it.

>apocalypse scenario
Total war, bring it on. I don't know much about monsters or demons or any of that, but humans are familiar enough to fight fairly.

Fite me
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>>54940702
Shit, forgot magic resistance prevents me taking actives. Forget indefinite growth and summon equipment, but also forget all the drawbacks I guess. I'll take my chances fighting the old fashioned way.
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>>54940524
Okay, but remember to kill Prometheus.
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>>54939678
Multipurpose laser "tool"
Robot maid
Nanobots
Money
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>>54940882
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>>54939061
>>54939100
>>54939220
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5rKETOKAO0A
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>>54940803
Dido did nothing wrong
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>>54939678
So you pick 3 gifts or is that two since it says you get a comm device? Then the guns, or a gun, or you use gifts on the guns? Then you get those red gifts that give you two gifts put take away one for some reason instead of just one gift to begin with. What what what.

This is confusing, or am I just autistic?
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What does /cyoag/ think of about cyoas inspired from and bassed on MMOs?
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>>54941016
As long shit is explained properly it is ok.
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>>54941016
what way?
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>>54941016
I love bass and MMOs.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KoeRB5ZmXkk
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>>54940928
Agreed, the whole point of the build was to be a reunionist in all but name.
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>>54941016
Shit.
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>>54941052
There is classes, but all of them have different skills, abilities, weapon uses, magic, etc that can become a long and branching list.
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>>54941006
You aren't retarded, at least not from this, you aren't, it's just worded poorly.
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>>54941016
There are few things in this world which unironically trigger me more than video games, cyoas, books, etc. that end with a variation of "it was all a dream". If an mmorpg cyoa is just that, anon playing an mmorpg I have zero interest in it because ultimately none of it is real even more so than usual in a metasense. Now if the cyoa takes place in a real world or setting that for some reason obeys mmorpg rules, you have my attention.
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>>54941100
so just RPG things?
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>>54941122
>that end with a variation of "it was all a dream"
What if they start with that?
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>>54941157
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>>54939802
>Type
Blade. Halberd for the versatility
>Passive powers
Strength x100 (144)
Speed x50 (129)
Durability x500 (110)
Perception and reaction time x2 (107)
Magical boost +20 SP (87)
Sensory overdrive (84)
>Active powers
Grand illusion (77)
Boost (48)
Ultra element (20)
Summon equipment (10)
>Total SP
85
>Drawbacks
17 Years off of my life (Ya want to live forever punk)
>Apocalypse
Doomsday

Going to be ridiculously strong, fast, durable with max passives and boost. A lightning halberd that should be able to pierce anything with my strength and speed. A set of armor that will be used if I can't survive it with my durability and with 80 SP I should be damn powerful even with the lack of tier 3 active powers. I'm aiming to put Lucifer's head on my wall after we annihilate hell's forces on earth.
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>>54941006
you pick 2 gifts
you can pick 4 gifts if one of them is a red option
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>>54941122
>cyoas, books, etc. that end with a variation of "it was all a dream"
Name one CYOA that does that.
Dream Prince doesn't count, that's the point of it. It doesn't "trick" you as you're implying.
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>>54941122
>None of it is """"real"""" so none of it matters
Honestly can't tell if this is bait or just another person with autistic beliefs.
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>>54941268
That literal mmorpg cyoa where a scientist has a nuke implanted in your VR device. You either beat the game and return to your boring life or you lose and your real body gets nuked. It had an interesting system for beast races though.
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I was going to end my cyoa with hinting that the player's adventure may or may not be a dream and it's up to him if he wants to wake up or stay there forever
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>>54941268
The original version of goddess cyoa that unleashed an enormous shitstorm kind of had it.
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>>54941268
Pokemon Personified Plus+. If you get big dose of the vitamin D.

>>54941122
>>54941126
>>54941052
>>54941063
>>54941049
Note taken and it will happen.
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>>54941343
No it didn't. It had JHWH saying the other gods weren't "real" but they still kind of were.
>>54941322
Never heard of that.
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>>54941379
What will happen? The "it was all a dream" thing?
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>>54939410
You are still the best conceivable waifu, fat chan.
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>>54941323
All of mine have either started or ended with a dream. It's a convenient way to drop you into a story, I think.
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>>54938064
Does it bother anyone else that if cyoas were real then it would be way more likely for succesful, beautiful, etc. people to get boons than regular anons? In the sense that they'd be likelier to draw the attention of waifus, patrons, etc.
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>>54941466
No
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Once you go black...
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>>54941466
Nah
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>>54941016
I want to fuck Shiroe.
Both male and female.
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>>54941540
Once you go ape...*
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>>54941466
I can't say that it has.
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>>54941558
would you fuck anything other than an ape, anon?
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>>54941466
Why would more boons being given out to those who've proven themselves worthy bother me?
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>>54941466
In many CYOAs you get to redesign your body. In such a setting, what reason would a patron have to favor a beautiful person? I also don't think that being successful in our screwed up world would make one more likely to attract the attention of a patron. If anything I think the opposite would be true.
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>>54941579
I think that most people in general are kind of fuggly.
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>>54941579
are you gay?
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>>54939132
>Eat this shit because it looks pretty
>No
>You must be so mad
KYS. Beyond that statistically women near always try to pull higher. By dating sites even if average you're like a full point lower than average.
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>>54941466
We would get all the "The deity/patron/whatever pick you because you are one deviant motherfuka" cyoas and those are normally the more broken and pvp friendly. Beautiful successful people would totally lose the cyoa wars
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>>54941558
...your mom has YOU.
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>>54941579
Mentor, Lover, Friend, (Rival)
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>>54941558
It's considered rape
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>>54939088
Nigger.
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>>54941579
>>54941540
Would you stop spamming your degenerate tastes already? We get it, you like black.
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Where is the megacorp cyoa?
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>>54939088
cucc
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>>54941466
Nah. Gods/Wizards are fickle so chances are you have equal opportunity of powerfagging.
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>>54941585
Yes,a human
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>>54941656
An insult to TES orcs. TES orcs have honor and can into metallurgy.
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>>54941630
I'm not that deviant though. Most of us aren't. Sure, I like shota and loli and certain types of vore. Amputation and the likes are fine too but is that really deviant? Who knows what kind of shit normies get up to.
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>>54941712
>Fucking humans
>Fucking 3D Shit
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>>54941656
>we wuz orkz

No please,orks are much better than n卐ggers
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>>54941712
but humans are apes anon
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>>54941540
>the obvious airbrush on her face
>obvious greenscreen with blur to attempt to make it look more realistic
>high contrast on her lower body to make her look darker

jesus christ is this a photo from 2002?
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>>54941629
That anon didn't said you have to ate it, just that is dishonest to not call it pretty. I mean, you just admitted it is
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>>54941766
They are called humans in Africa
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>>54939802
>Magic
>Summoning Overdrive (3)
>Grand Illusion (10)
>Time Warp (95)
>Indefinite Upgrade (175)
>2 month, 2 week wait (160)
>Weekly Fight (130)
>Loss Penalty (100)
I'm assuming that Indefinite Upgrade removes the low cap on Magic while keeping the higher rate of growth. The first months will likely kill me but at least I'll die ignorant of the potential lost to greed. Once I power up I can enter a virtuous cycle of training ever quicker for as long as my will holds out. I'll still try to hide from stronger foes and only ambush those beneath me until I clearly have an advantage over everyone. If needs be I can afford to lose Illusions and Time Warp but without Indefinite Upgrade I will have to start from scratch.
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>>54941766
Not true
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>>54941720
>>54941760
You guys are right, I apologize to the orcs.
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>>54941742
You prefer 2d women? Fucking unimaginative filth.
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>>54941760
Why are orcs so sexual anyway?
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>>54939132
>sour grapes

That implies I would want them if I could have them.
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>>54941766
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a2t8Zn3FW1k
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>>54939802
>>54939923

Magic Variant [20]
x100 strength (16)
x50 speed (31)
x500 durability (50)
x2 perception (53)
Magic immunity (113)
+20 SP (133) [40]
SP bolt (139) [45]
Eagle (165) [65]
Boost (194) [90]
Dead loved one (179)
Lose fight, lose a power (149)
Everyone hates me (99)
Monster Mash

Should be able to fly at 180mph, be too damn hard to kill, and all that jazz. Just make a fortress of solitude. If the speed boost affects flight too then I'm able to fly 9000 mph at max speed.
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>>54941793
um
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Human
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hominidae
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>>54941741
>I'm not that deviant
>I get off to little kids getting their limbs chomped
Never change /tg/
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>>54941820
Because you have no taste
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>>54941854
Well, I can quote Anonymous.
I'll quote you if you give me your name, phone number, address, and social security number.
Hell, I'll even order you a pizza.
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>>54941830
Meant to pull magic immunity, was going to replace with some other shit but forgot to go back. Redoing it right now.
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>>54941854
So why are they shit, anyway?
Do you know all of them personally?
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>>54941854
>Shit can be shit and still be appealing
And the posts you replied to never argue otherwise, the only thing close to do it is the insecurity oozing in your knee-jerk reaction to a post that, at no point, argue with your position you are defending ("defending" from the zero(0) attacks to it)
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How does this look for a "quest"? I've got about a dozen more I'm going to make, but before I do, I wanted some feedback on how this looks. The full page will have a bit of exposition on the top explaining how the system works, and the other quests I'll make. Basically, you choose as many as you want (as long as you have the setting requirements), then roll a d20 for each quest you chose. After that, you go to the next few pages, which have the quest modifiers and results. Different perks you chose at the start add/subtract from your score, then you compare your final number with the quest results. 3 possible endings result in 3 different outcomes. If you succeed, you get the quest reward, if you fail, you get the quest failure, if you end up in between the success and failure numbers, you get nothing. Each quest has different numbers determining the outcomes, along with what perks effect them.

I want to know:

>Is this to complicated?

>Do you like it?

>What should I change about pic related?
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>>54941933
>>54942085
Please, could you both go to /pol/ and shitpost there? Thanks
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>>54941830
>>54941897
>>54939802

Magic Variant [20]
x100 strength (16)
x50 speed (31)
x500 durability (50)
x2 perception (53)
+20 SP (73) [40]
SP bolt (79) [45]
Eagle (105) [65]
Time Warp (190) [120]
Dead loved one (175)
Lose a fight, lose active power (145)
Everyone hates me (95)
Monster Mash

there we go, fixed, realized I forgot to retool after posting last time. I don't think there's anything else I would spend 5 points on and since I'm going full stupid I might as well have a tragic origin story.

Still, with the flight and potential of speed boost affecting, I would fly 11,000mph at max.
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>>54942139
>asian
yes

>black
no

>native american
no
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>>54942135
Fuck off, it's the black poster who is shitposting here. They came here in wanting to start such a debate.

>>54942139
>You're an idiot if your tastes differ from mine

Not being attracted to black people has nothing to do with intelligence.
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>>54942139
>think only people of one race are attractive. While I admit white people tend to be more beautiful on average,
Christ. Right over your head as you type it, huh? That's the point, Kimosabe. Whites are the rule not the exception like anyone else.
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>>54942073
>Is this to complicated?
No.
>Do you like it?
No.
>What should I change about pic related?
Grapihcally? It's fine, I guess. The text isn't hard for me to read. You could thicken the border around the image used a little, but my main gripe would be that the ropes are uneven and leaning to one side a bit. I just don't like it personally.
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Whole thread should be deleted by a mod.
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>>54941933
And they are the 13%
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>>54942139
Tastes vary and are often very subjective. If you're not attracted to black features then you're going to find all of them ugly. While objective standards of beauty have some weight, I don't think steel wool, massive nostrils, and prognathism are part of them.
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>>54942211
It would do /cyoa/ and /jc/ both some good to be purged for a week or two.
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>>54942211
This whole general should be deleted. It does not belong /tg/. I used to be against removing it but after this thread I can't ignore it anymore. We were a mistake.
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>tfw your progress slows to a crawl, because numbers
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>>54942112
>>Stating my reasoning is knee-jerk
It is, when is completely irrelevant to the post made. Is like replying to "nice weather today" with "Plants are green because chloroplasts you mother fucker! Stop denying it and kill yourself"
Is a sound reasoning? Yes, is factually correct? Totally, Is a knee-jerk reaction? Absolutely
>Doesn't need to be said.
Kinda does, otherwise you are "disproving" an argument that was never made, and that's not very impressive after fourth grade
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>>54942073
I like the art, I love cheesy movies.
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>>54942253
>Delete thing
>We
Get out, false flagging faggot.
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Next time, don't take fatposter's bait.
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>>54942339
What an epic troll XD
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>>54942253
It's really just one shitposter who decided to hijack this thread with images of black people. It could happen to any thread on /tg/ and is not a reason to close a community. Mods should just remove the problem by banning the nigposter.
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>>54942276
Too tired to do this right now even on the off chance I convince you otherwise. I'm just going to call you a nigger and tell you to go fuck yourself. Go fuck yourself, nigger.
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>>54942339
Who took fatposter's bait, you dumbposter?
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>>54938364
>Find it both amusing and satisfying that Tok is being beaten at his own game.
If Toks game was begging for votes you would be right. Every thread I see SDA begging and whoring for votes and you reward that behavior.
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>>54942363
Wait, SDA is Fatposter?
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>>54942375
Fatposter has pretended to demand black companions/have a black fetish before.
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>>54942387
>and you reward that behavior.
And they with a CYOA. Supply and demand. Carrot and stick. Honey or vinegar. All the same.
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I both love and hate this place
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>>54941686
Gloryhole, would literally be less horrible than my current job and I imagine I would learn to earn well. Just need to find a good spot.

>>54939678
Hypernet, AI, Gold
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>>54942451
That is my standard emotional state in life.
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>>54941686
>gloryhole
What is the downside?
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>>54942375
90% of these threads is fatposter talking to himself.
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>>54942420
Thankfully, no.
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>>54942611
His rolls of fat have gained sentience?
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>>54942387
>>54942444

>>54939004
Good evening stardustanon. As a friend of busiestamazon from the role reversal sub, I have asked her to disqualify your entry from the contest for vote buying.

It is simply against the spirit of the contest to offer services in return for votes, even the production of a new cyoa, rather than allow a decision based upon the quality and enjoyment of the entry itself.

Thank you for the entry, however.
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>>54938364
>Tok is being beaten at his own game.
On the looks of it, I'm not loosing this contest because SDA made a better CYOA then me. SDA is more popular and uses his popularity and promises new OC if he wins to gain votes, I think its smart and it does not break any of the rules of the contest. I accepted the rules of the contest the moment I entered and I don't feel bad about losing the contest in such a way. The one with the best strategy always wins and I don't care so much about winning, I was in it for the glory and wanted my CYOA alone to carry me to victory. It would have been fun to win and make my own contest using the first prize to make my own contest. But in a way, I might have lost the contest, but my CYOA did not lose to anyone else's CYOA.

>>54938445
>>54938616
>Tok has a background of bullying
So some people I drove aways from my fan base with The End got so salty they started spouting lies about me having a history of bullying people? Well I can only say I'm glad I purged my fan base and the salty lies you bring me only makes me stronger. Salt is in my blood and it is the substance that fuels me, thanks for feeding me your salt.
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>>54942728
>>54942720
Hello, Tok.
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>>54938947
Yes, they are white peole, just like you and me, friend.
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>>54942754
More like =/= the same.
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>>54942777
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>>54942792
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>>54942826
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>>54942847
Shame this will never have DLC for the other events mentioned. Still good shit though.
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>>54942777
>>54942792
>>54942826

Bond: I'm going with the dragon turtle because it's big and tough and nasty and nobody's gonna fuck with me
Perk: Strong Bond, raising speed to medium
Companion: Leenya Norocelli(the mermaid chick)
Events: the new age of Piracy

3/4 of the world's surface is underwater, there's far more adventure below the seas than above them. I'll be an ocean explorer, charting out the deepest, darkest parts of the seas.
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>>54942728
He's STILL! Making himself look like an autistic manchild! How can you anally annihilate yourself this much! I can't believe it.
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>>54939004
i like this cyoa already. will we get to choose a location in limbo to live in?
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>>54942968
Stop picking on Tok.
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>>54942728
>popular person with established fanbase wins popularity contest
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>>54941814
>Unimaginative to fuck imaginarie characters
Kek
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>>54943008
What? Who could have seen that coming?
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>>54942968
You could let CYOAs take you to any fantasy world you could imagine, but you choose to go to the salt mines
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>>54943022
He STILL can't make a better comeback than Salt Mines! Haha! Truly Tok you never fail to amaze.
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>>54942728
>lies
Bruh. You told us you spent four years trying to convince crazy people to shove rocks up their butts, and framed it by saying you did it because causing others emotional pain is entertaining. Hell, you just said that you don't bully in the same breath as saying that you're glad to make people mad because that's what keeps you going.

I'm not mad at you, dude. Just mildly confused.
And aroused, but that's probably the tentacle porn in the other tab.
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>>54939678
not taking a gun
robot maid
nanobots
money
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>>54943130
4 years? No? Did you refer to the story of Darth Gol in The End 4: Legend of the Shit Lord?
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>>54942720
Knew this was coming, actually.

If I am to be disqualified, then you are to disqualify the plagiarizing entries as well. The logic behind my campaign is that if you fuckers are allowed to plagiarize old content, then by all means, I am going to use my influence to fuck you guys over.

>>54942728
I am sorry, Tok, but Eronomicon and most of your other CYOAs do not hold up very well to my grading criteria.

I'm giving you a decent-to-strong D for it.
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>>54943222
... how often do you judge OC on that table?
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>>54943176
Sorry, I must have misremembered, and gotten number of youtube videos mixed up in there.
I have a very leaky brain pan.
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>>54943222
That one is probably Tok pretending to be someone else, honestly.
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>>54941659
Which one?
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>>54943222
>melon.jpg
Nice trips.
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>>54940260
>Guy picks The Culture
>You drop him into a warzone

You're the hypernet equivalent of that guy who threw his cat at the wall. I'm either floating in space without a suit or on stuck on a vessel being raided by transhumanist god people. D E A D.
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>>54943222
SDA supposedly disqualified for bringing in votes from /tg/ over to reddit, yet Tok has also done that and gotten off scot free. Not to the same extent as SDA's promotion ofcourse but still due to Tok's "Popularity" on /trash/, would have had an influence on voting.
Hmm, rly makes u think.
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>>54943222
looking at this makes me feel like i'm back in school. it reminds me of the rubrics they would use to grade essays.
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>>54943222
You may have the digits, but seriously lack taste.
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>>54943222
This pleases my autism, how many cyoas have you judged with that table? Would you be willing to share those reviews?
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>>54943222
You got more gradings SDA-Senpai?
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>>54943251
I made it yesterday in preparation for something big I may plan for later, friends.

I might or might not do it, but we'll see.

>>54943264
The first one? Possibly. But it's not entirely unreasonable that it's legitimately a redditor.

>>54943325
You mean to say TokHaar CYOAs have taste?

Actually, when going through this rubric, my own CYOAs did average.

>>54943346
Mostly my own. DSA's CYOAs do very well though, as do Bliss'.
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>>54943268
What is good balance personal stock and points? 80-20? 60-40? I want points but no want to lose company!
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>>54943358
Poor E, everyone always forgets you as a grade.
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>>54943358
If you do get disqualified, will us poor anons be punished by not getting our ghost waifus and sexcapade succubus?
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>>54943358
Your autistic chart is missing the most important question: is the cyoa fun? That's all that matters.
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>>54943358
So ... what about CYOAs that are meant to be convoluted and written with the intent of making it hard to see the hidden truth beneath? Is it really appropriate to punish this in the 'Conciseness' category?
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>>54943357
Sure, I'll post mine, but it's weird grading your own work.

>>54943389
Fuck E, what has it ever done for us?

>>54943401
We'll have to see. It might leave a bad taste in my mouth and I'll just spend these weekends sleeping like I want to.
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>>54943401
If he's disqualified despite having so many votes ... he still won the popular vote, he's just not the president, right? And that means limbo-waifus.
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>>54943222
>The logic behind my campaign is that if you fuckers are allowed to plagiarize old content, then by all means, I am going to use my influence to fuck you guys over.

Derivative works are not disallowed. In contrast, lewd versions of old favorites are encouraged. If they are not enjoyed, people are free to vote against them.

Hiring bots to vote for you without care for the other contest entries however, is not to the essence of the democratic process. However common that may be on 4chan, or whether you hire them with money or labor.

>>54943299
>SDA supposedly disqualified for bringing in votes from /tg/ over to reddit, yet Tok has also done that and gotten off scot free.

The point of contention is not asking people to vote in the contest, it is the purchasing of votes off 4chan in return for a thing of value.

The admission of the deliberate use of this tactic to punish what the person perceives as "plagiarism" all but guarantees the contest was entered in bad faith, and the votes are disingenuous.
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>>54943419
how many cyoas have you graded with this? do you save your gradings of cyoas?
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>>54943468
>redditor calling others bots when they are from a website where you are punished for disagreeing or having independent thought
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Waifus with a lot of personality that are fun? Is there a CYOA with a waifu like this? With a fun person that you'd actually want to spend your life with and won't be bored because she's just a gimmick
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>>54943371
estimating by real life standards never go below 70. Investors suck to deal with. Less so when giving to employees or penny stock, but even then chance penny stock could be bought up by a single dick.
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>>54943468
>Derivative works
There is a distinct difference between spiritual successors/derivative works versus straight up copying. This is a cheap way to get votes and, in your words, is against the spirit of contest.

>Hiring bots to vote for you without care for the other contest entries
Except that's not what I did.

This contest, like the rest of Reddit, is a popularity contest. TokHaar himself announced that he was going to win this contest purely because you guys suck his dick over there, and it's true. Had I not entered the contest, he would have been the clear winner as I am right now. You complain that I have many votes? He has more than twice the amount of votes of 3rd place right now.

Furthermore, /CYOAg/ is the main place for CYOAs. To not include these people in a -public- contest is preposterous. 80% of the content on both your and the regular subreddit come from here.

Let's face it, most of the content in that contest is garbage. It really wasn't hard to make something of reasonable quality in comparison.
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>>54943468
>>54943299
>SDA supposedly disqualified for bringing in votes from /tg/ over to reddit, yet Tok has also done that and gotten off scot free.
Scour the archives and show me a single comment I have made that said: "Vote for me!". I have never fished for votes on /tg/ or /trash/.

>>54943222
>The Spelling is shit
What do you expect from a dyslexian?
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>>54943579
I need to correct you, thrid place has gained a shitload of votes in the last two hours, like half again as many as he had before on top. He's 7 votes below Tok.
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>>54943579
Do you really consider length to be an important factor?
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>>54943539
i don't know but i'll post as many waifus as i can to help you in your search
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>>54943649
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>>54943468
>>54943593
Tok, why do you samefag?
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>>54943649
A yandere will not be a good waifu obviously. The only two waifus I know that are good life partners are
a) automation from insomnia
B) weird squid girl thing from weird gentlefendom monstergirl home caretaker cyoa
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>>54943579
>TokHaar himself announced that he was going to win this contest purely because you guys suck his dick over there, and it's true.
I never said that, I said I would win easily, because I am the greatest lewd CYOA author of all time. It is my haters that keeps saying reddit sucks my dick, I don't say it. I know that reddit has good taste and good taste is not dick sucking.
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>>54943632
Size matters, anon.
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>>54943468
>Hired bots
Come now, I read the other entries.
It was physically painful to do, but I did, so that my vote would be informed. I voted on SDA's entry because it was legitimately better than those... things...
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>>54943670
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>>54943539
you sound like a pretentious faggot
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>>54943631
I bet he's shilling somewhere on one of the futa websites.
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>>54943593
>What do you expect from a dyslexian?
I am, too. Perhaps not as severe.

Make the comparison again.

>>54943632
Read the rubric; length is just an indicator there, it's not a grade. It's just for reference.

>>54943631
Holy shit, what the fuck. I think I was looking at 4th place.

I hope it takes 2nd place. In which case, if I end up being disqualified, I would totally be okay with it winning 1st even though I'm not one for the content involved.

Such a large burst of votes is suspicious though, but that's to be expected with how this stupid contest works.

>>54943683
>because I am the greatest lewd CYOA author of all time
Unfortunately, as King of /CYOAg/, I do not grant you of this title.
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>>54943697
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>>54943700
Sorry, I didn't mean to come off that way
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>>54943579
>Let's face it, most of the content in that contest is garbage.

I had not realized you were such a toxic person. If that were the case, you would have been free to prove so without offering external incentives for votes.

That is the only issue here. There is nothing else "against the spirit" in this matter. Someone could have verbatim copied another CYOA and made it lewd, and won for the effort of doing so.

I shall thank you to check your elitism and entitlement. Good day.
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>>54943719
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>>54943683
Hey Tok, you realize that if you really do whine to the contest runner until they disqualify SDA, everyone here without a vote so far is gonna vote for that futa CYOA so they win and you don't, right? They'll all blame you for disqualifying SDA because it'll be your fault.
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>>54943742
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>>54943737
>Tok uses the word toxic because he thinks that'll make it seem like he's a redditor
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>>54943683
Just because you cram in a bunch of fetish lewd things doesn't make you the number one lewd writer out there. The number one lewd writer on 4chan is the lady Gobble from /qst/. She writes lewds that will give your heart a boner as well as your peen. Take pages from her and actually write lewd if you wanna be known for it. You don't really write anything.
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Can you namefags end your petty squables or take it to the discord? Some of us are trying to eat leftover Taco Bell while playing cyoas in peace.
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>>54943757
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>>54943358
Observations:
Length grade section unnecessary, could easily be another space in the top area under name/author
Special rules for graphics have inconsistent design to Length
Lacks enough dryness to emulate a formal rubric but not enough to have a personality
Overall: apply yourself
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>>54943723
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>>54943742
That's her! The squid waifu!
>>54943682
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The number one lewd writer is EDG for me desu.
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>>54943786
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>two fags spending an entire thread fighting over nothing while in my heart, Spacefuture will always be the one true King of /CYOAg/
>And before him, there was Dumbledalf
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>>54943769
Reap what you have sown my fat friend.
Reeeeeeeeeeeap.
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>>54943796
Yes, that he is.
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>>54943792
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>>54943713
You're still better than Tok, but I wish that you don't win, so that you will stop being Smugdust Anon
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>>54943806
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>>54943788
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>>54943832
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>>54943737
>There is nothing else "against the spirit" in this matter
Plargiarized CYOAs, for one.

This being a popularity contest, for two.

Giving free bonus "votes" to CYOAs with content and fetishes that appeals to the masses? That is among the most Reddit bullshit I have ever witnessed.

>check your elitism
Your posts reek of pompous hogwash who fails to see the failures of their methods of deeming acceptable content.

Get the fuck out of here.

>>54943748
>everyone here without a vote so far is gonna vote for that futa CYOA
I will switch over to campaigning this.

>>54943788
>Overall: apply yourself
kek

>>54943809
>Dumbledalf
All I remember from him was being a cunt about how all new CYOAs after him are shit.
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>>54943820
At this point I want CYOPet or Neptunia to win. The authors seem like nice people and the quality is good.
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>>54943853
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>>54943849
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>>54943796
Yup. I outright hate the premise of every single thing he's written under the EDG name, but damn if they don't get me off. He's also polite when he's identifiable.
Shit's pretty cash money, bro.
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>Tok wants to show us how much reddit sucks his dick
>SDA tries to cuck him
>SDA gets reverse cucked
>"I-I never really cared about the c-contest, you b-baka"
>Unable to make OC due to PSTD

All this drama, man.
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>>54943897
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>>54943713
>I am, too belong to the dyslexian master race. Perhaps your dyslexian powers are stronger then mine.
WHAT? I didn't think you where a dyslexian brother, holy shit the world is small. But wherever I go the dyslexian master race is dominating all creative communities, so I should not be surprised.

>>54943713
>As the king of /cyoag/ I did not grant you that title.
The title of "the greatest lewd CYOA author of all time" was never granted to me, I took it and payed the iron price!
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>>54943913
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>>54943468
>SDA Tells the truth
>Toxic person
>Elitist
>Entitled
>Probobly a racist
>Probobly also a nazi
About what you'd expect from Reddit.
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>>54943902
Meanwhile Celt and ZBG look at the thread, then each other, shrug, and then go back to violently fucking each other.
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>>54943941
Hush, they are allergic to truth! You can't just say that, you insensitive person!
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>>54943937
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>>54943941
I would argue that is trying to hard to be reddit to be real
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>>54938064
/cyou/ when!?
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>>54943958
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>>54943902
>Tok wants to show us how much reddit sucks his dick
>SDA cucks him
FTFY

>>54943918
>I took it and paid the iron price!
The iron price being OURS IS THE FURY
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>tfw you voted for acheld because he produces the best content out of all the people on the list
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>>54943967
Never, preferably.
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>>54943982
It's funny, because your picture implies lewdness, then veers away from it. Just like acheld's CYOA being in a lewd contest!
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>>54943946
Ah, ZBG, /cyoag/'s last hope. God bless his soul.
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>>54943972
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>>54943967
I killed Rosanon, so that they may return to yuri heaven. They're too good for this place.
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>>54943918
>>54943978
Both of you name your favorite ASOIAF waifu.
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>>54943870
All I remember from him was making some good CYOAs, how about that. Also petty of you to snipe some rando even I barely remember and try to ignore Spacefuture.
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>>54944018
Thrallherd and Spacefuture WILL return to us one day, dammit!
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>>54943967
ONE MONTH, SUBJECT TO CHANGE (TM).
I got all of my wisdom teeth pulled the other day, and trying to put in work while under the effects of painkillers is fighting an uphill battle.

>>54944056
Yuri heaven status = [pierced]
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>>54944095
Spacefuture's 'What Was Lost' manages to be better written, more interesting, and more engaging in a single page, than anything Tok or SDA have ever put out.
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>>54944062
None. I don't like any of these thots.

But book Ser Arthur is my boi. Fuck what the show did to him.

>>54944095
He was one of those people who whined about new content, actually.

Also, I just told SpaceFuture that his stuff roughly rates high on my rubric despite the fact that they're not very popular.
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>>54943796
>The number one lewd writer is EDG for me desu.
He is a really great author and writer, I wonder if he too is a dyslexian brother. I think his world building is second to none.

>>54943978
>OURS IS THE FURY
You may be a dyslexian brother, but you still have shit taste in houses (pic related).
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>>54944071
>Reincarnation: Otherworld + Keep Memory
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>>54944133
Yet you faggots will eat up our dogshit. You have yourselves to blame.

After all, I am the worst CYOA author.

>>54944165
I'm not a Baratheonfag. I'm a Daynefag. But the Baratheons are pretty good in my book because fuck the Targaryens.
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>>54944200
>Daynefag
>Doesn't waifu best alienfu
>>54944165
Ironborn pleb house Codd is true might
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>Tfw I just want ZBG to come here, wrap me in his arms and tell me that everything's going to be ok.
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>>54944071
>Nothingness
Groundhog

Time to study and internalize. Immortality through SCIENCE!
I don't want off this wild ride, I want to make the ride my bitch, and make the rails go wherever I command them. I'll see the end of the universe and beyond even if I have to figure out how to turn the sun into a engine to take our baby steps to the galactic level! NOTHING WILL STOP ME!
BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA!
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>>54944200
I mean you're not bad, and I appreciate your CYOAS. I eat up all OC. I'm just saying , Spacefuture is really good.
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>>54944230
>best alienfu
>An heroes

>>54944278
I agree, I like his stuff.
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>>54943946
>violently fucking each other.
>implying we have the energy to fuck with how much work I'm doing and how baked he is all the time
>>54944018
>ZBG, /cyoag/'s last hope.
Man don't put that kind of fucking pressure on me.
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>>54944291
She wouldn't have jumped if you had been there to stop her!

I'm glad we can agree on spacefuture though. Which other authors do you like? What is your favorite CYOA? Do you like the cowboy one?
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>>54944132
Wait, then who was that random guy I killed?
The phone book said his name was Ros, and I was so sure...
Clearly I'll just have to get the rest of them.
Don't worry, Rosanon, I'll make sure you're safe.
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>>54944307
>implying we have the energy to fuck with how much work I'm doing and how baked he is all the time
>implying that didn't just make you sound even more like a married couple
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So what the hell is going on right now?

Did Tok complain to reddit and tell them that SDA was cheating on the vote because SDA was beating him into the ground because Tok is a cry baby?
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>>54944307
Shit m8, he's on to us. >>54944403

Take the children and run!
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Tok x SDa

ZBG x Celt

Who else is there to ship?
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>>54944412
We don't know for certain who did it, and SDA is not (yet) disqualified.
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>>54944431
Rosanon x Angelanon
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>>54944431
Angel x herself

I'm still waiting for that yaoi author CYOA/OC btw
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>>54944431
Highlander x Angelanon
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>>54944133
Hell, I'd argue that in Tok's case it even has better waifus.

I'd rather fuck the Emerald Shard, the star of rebirth or do the spending the last days of your waifu's life CYOA with the black sun than be in the same room as anyone written by a cringy edgelord.
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>>54944431
>Tok x SDa
>ZBG x Celt

I need to know who's bottoming in both of these scenarios. For reasons.
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>>54944412
I don't know, I don't look at reddit.
It may be an elaborate ruse, a triggered redditfag, Tok, or all three. Until someone spoon feeds me evidence, my strategy is to ignore it and keep posting builds when a CYOA interests me. Hell, that will probably be what I do after being given evidence, because I'm a lazy piece of shit.
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>>54943946
>>54944431
>ZBG x Celt
What did I miss?!
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>>54944499
Both left most are the bottoms.
I ain't no bitch.
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>>54939004
You convinced me, but if you could also post those short stories about the angels from roomate I would try to convince other people to vote for you too.
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>>54944507
I don't know, you've been in the threads they were.
How did you miss them going full bromance the whole time?
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>>54944519
I'm fairly certain SDA is the one receiving Tok's miniscule peener
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>>54944307
If it makes you feel better I meant "last" in the sense of being a new author that consistently post in the threads an provides oc while not dragging everything throught the mud, not "last" in the sense of being the literally LAST thing that can prevent /cyoa/'s downfall.

There, I'll share with you a funny crow image so you can relieve some of that pressure by looking at it.
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>>54944566
No, no-Tok would be too busy giggling about how tasteless their union was to actually participate much. He'd still be lying there making weird noises long after SDA finished his butt stuff in seconds, got bored and went back to programming.
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>>54944581
So, like, more of a "Lastest Hope" kind of thing.
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>>54939802
>Weapon
Magic Variant, +20SP (Staff)

>Passive Powers (195)
X2 Perception (-3P)
X500 Durability (-19P)
X100 Strength (-16P)
X50 Speed (-15 P)
Absorb Enemy Magic (-15P)
Morph Disguise (-2P)
Spirit Weapon Cosmetics (-2P)

>Abilities
Mind Games, +15SP (-20P)
Ultra Element, +25SP (-28P)
Extreme Shapeshift, +40SP (-75P)

>Drawbacks
Everyone Hate You (+50)
Must Constantly Fight (+30)
Death of a Loved One (+15)
((Was bound to happen anyways one way or another.))

>Apocolypse
Total War

I will fulfill my destiny, and I will wipe out the meek of this world. I will then carve out a part of this world to be my own, with followers and servants in tow.
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>>54944581
>If it makes you feel better I meant "last" in the sense of being a new author that consistently post in the threads an provides oc while not dragging everything throught the mud,
Plenty of authors post anonymously.
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>>54944597
SDA doggirl presenting her butt, clearly in heat and rubbing against ToK, while he talks a big game but is too chicken to do anything but pat lightly. Both of them end up hot, bothered, and entirely unsatisfied.
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>>54944455
>Angel x herself
Jealous...
I wish I could go fuck myself.
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>>54944418
>Take the children and run!
We have children?!
>>54944499
>who's bottoming in both of these scenarios
I want to say not me, but I doubt anyone will believe me...
>>54944581
Alright, I'll try to live up to the responsibility!
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>>54944679
ZBG
The kind of guy to forget he has children with another man.
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>>54943358
>DSA's CYOAs do very well though, as do Bliss'.
How are mine doing well? Graphics I can do, I guess, but others? Am I too hard on myself?
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>>54944679
Well aren't you just precious
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>>54944720
Dude. What if zelda was a girl?
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>>54944720
I'm gonna guess you're Bliss.

Monster Hunter scored fairly high throughout and is the only one that got an A for graphics from me (both sub categories) so far. Only bad score I gave it was in world building. General writing was fairly straightforward but not really outstanding, but overall the CYOA is very positive.

Kingdom Crusher also did fairly consistently well. Dipped in mechanics cause it is a little convoluted, but I give you invisible kudos points for the effort and innovation.

I don't want to release rubrics of people's CYOAs I respect which is most, even the ones that score badly. Heck, Hero Academy overall scored average to above average but it's still one of my favourite CYOAs.

I just have no qualms with saying what I think about CYOAs like Tok's, whose work I genuinely think are sub-par at best. This is mainly cause he kind of deserves it.

Honestly, the reason I made this rubric was to assess myself from as objective of a standpoint as I could without asking someone to tell me. I want to aim to hit those As. I may also employ its use for something else, though.
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>>54944843
>I may also employ its use for something else, though.
What autism will be let loose upon the world?
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>>54944843
You are correct. I assumed you didn't like my stuff though. Honestly you can say what you want about my stuff or my personality, but I really don't pay those things much mind.

I like to make things my own way, with minor leeway for the preferences of others. I think I'll finish my last project then call it quits, because originality and interested settings are running dry.
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>>54944977
>I assumed you didn't like my stuff though
I post anon when I'm actually enjoying something.

>I like to make things my own way
As it should be.

>I think I'll finish my last project then call it quits
Godspeed. You had a good run.
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>>54944843
>Tok's CYOAs are shit, it's not like I like him or anything.
Your always such a cute smug tsundere, never change!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CiDuGE1t8lM
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>>54944977
Take a break if you want, I hope you'll come back one day
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>>54945054
SDA has always loved you, Tok.

And he always will.
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Damn, knowing that bliss may be leaving makes me actually sad.
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>>54945170
And i still have nothing to show to him because i keep procastinating...
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>>54944431
Highlander X her girlfren
What fuckin dorks
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>>54945035
Running the same power fantasy - fantasy setting is straining. I like self-inserts aswell. Something I'll do for my final project too. Still thinking of a creative power system, with elaborated skills/spells/abilities.

I have gathered overflowing artwork for it, and have the design down to a simple and easy on the eyes style. Just need to start writing and brainstorming about that system.

I always tend to fall back to domain master. It had a bunch of stuff I liked. Getting a castle, getting powers and loyal superpowered minions. I want to do something similar for this project but it's hard to make it original and not some clone.

Also I'll try a more bright setting this time. Less murdery and intrigue. More world building and fun activities. Anyway, speaking of worldbuilding, you said this was a weak point for me so, any tips?

>>54945081
I always take breaks. Inspiration and motivation hits like a truck. I try to ride those out and get the most mileage but I think it's running low lately. After like 9 finished works and 3 abandoned wips I think I've reached my limit.

I've tried teaching photoshop to others on cyoa though, maybe they'll pick it up.
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>>54945170
That wasn't my intention. I just wanted to let SDA and everyone else know I'll be putting my all into this project. Might be your flavour. It'll be pretty generic in setting but that is appealing to me. No spoilers.

>>54945199
I'll support you as long as if you learn or have fun.
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>>54945199
What about a collaborative cyoa where we show our collective appreciation for him as a (I hope not) final farewell?
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>>54945371
Thank you, when i finally manage to get my thing going i will show you my work. I already have the concept given shape so i just need to get on to it. I hope it will make you proud.
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>>54945447
I think you guys are cool so no worries I'll still be around. Lurking, shitposting or looking out for OC. I'm not that special for an appreciation cyoa but it would be awesome.
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>>54945274
>More world building and fun activities. Anyway, speaking of worldbuilding, you said this was a weak point for me so, any tips?
That's hard to say. If you're making this like Domain Master, then I'd encourage you to not focus on the world building, since something like Domain Master is more of a "setting-creator" type CYOA. There shouldn't be a setting in the first place.

Otherwise, it's still generally hard to give tips on world building because I have no idea what sort of vision you're going for. For me, it's an ongoing process that just builds up and accumulates over time. I always start off with planning the fundamentals of what places the reader in the world, what reasons they have to interact with other people in the setting, and then I build up everything from the social norms to the politics from that. And from then on, it's just a matter of me adding on things that I come up later, either by actively brainstorming ideas or when random "eureka" moments hit me while I'm driving to work. And I try not to leave anything out; if you're gonna build a castle there, how does it get the supplies? How close is it to a water source? Who the hell got the money and labour to build a castle? What type of people live there and how are they different from anywhere else? Maybe these things aren't very important to the CYOA, but it makes it real in my head as the author.

Basically, it comes to a point where I've put so much into the setting that I can just put myself there and the ideas just come naturally. The physics works itself out in my head and the people and customs and atmosphere become real.

I don't mention a lot of the things of my worlds in my CYOAs simply because there's no reason to nor is there enough space. All this excess is probably why I take so much time with making CYOAs I really care about.
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Super long CYOA here.

45

Rolled 16 Years Old - Boring.
Rolled Female
Rolled Average - Super Boring.
Elf (100) - I don't like elves, but I like immortality.
Space (150)
Water (Free)
Gravity (150) - Willing to change it to Ice, though.
Magic x9 (450)

>Buy a Patron
No thanks.

Book of Magic (55) - Might as well.
Book of Beginning Enchantment (50) - Seems useful.
Portable Enchantment Table (50)
Succubi's Delight (100) - I guess this just boosts looks?
Hammerspace (100) - Never deal with backpacks.

A lot of stuff here needs a description.

Ultima (250) - This costs just as much as buying the stats straight, I'd advise making it at least a little better since it's a one off.

Rolled Countryside - Super duper boring.

Str: 6
End: 6
Agi: 14
Mag: 59
Cha: 7

I wouldn't have those _5 tier items if there's no way to shave off 5 points desu.
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>>54945371
No worries. It's just that I like your cyoas and it saddens me that you may be done with them and with this place.

Anyway, best luck with everything, Bliss :^)
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>>54945525
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>>54945540
Fuck I didn't even notice, image limit. how often does that happen?

Well fuck it, I'm not lining up 14 images again.
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>>54945555
Never. Blame namefags
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>>54945555
>14 images
That sounds like the old version. Newer one (somewhere around 5 to 7 images) has been out for some time.
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>>54945567
Remember, anon.

You and I are not so different.
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>>54945525
>>54945540
That's the old outdated version, you turd.
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>>54945567
Speaking of, how's your filter faring, kind anon?
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>>54945679
I don't filter namefags, only keywords and filenames. My hate for namefags is purely platonic
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>>54945724
>>54945679
No, I'm SDA!
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>>54945679
>>54945628
Don't worry SDA, I'll pay attention to you.
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>>54945758
Yes. Now sacrifice your pet cat for me.
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>>54945758
Don't sacrifice cats, PLEASE!
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>>54945779
I don't have one.
Brb, gotta go steal my neighbor's cat.
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There's a new thread up, by the looks of it: >>54945882
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>Will SDA be disqualified?
>Will Tok be humbled by the reddit poll?
>Will the Futa CYOA seize victory from obscurity?

>Find out next week, in the exciting new thread, of /CYOAG/

Next thread:
>>54945882
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>tfw you saved GoT eps and was scared as fuck that you were gonna get spoilers, miraculously you don't get anything spoiled. Then watch the up to episode 6 couse you think something big is gonna happend on ep 7 and you won't be able to escape spoilers. When you finish your underware is full of cum and your penis demands that you make a lewd GoT CYOA: "A Song of Ass and Fucking". You search for hentai of GoT and you realize you do not have enough pics to make it happen.
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>>54945971
>You search for hentai of GoT and you realize you do not have enough pics to make it happen.

T_T
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>>54945971
I just keep a bucket near my chair to collect my sexual fluids.
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Hi, I'm the garbage idiot who started that bullshit reddit contest. Sorry to waste some space here on 4chan but I had to reply to this.

>>54942720
I don't have friends, I have no clue who you are, stop being a potato.

Anyone else who posts saying they know me, or speak for me, or whatever are potato.

Again, sorry for tainting 4chan with my presence, I won't be coming back to this thread, again sorry for bothering you /tg/
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>>54946643
So someone was trying to coerce SDA of all people by pretending to be your friend? Goddamn they sure don't know him.
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>>54946643
No need to worry about our space, we're not as toxic as people pretend. Thanks for clarifying.
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>>54946678
Bitsh, I am toxisity incarnate!
Intoxicity, that is.
Heh.
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>>54946698
Bitch, I just murdered an entire bottle of wine. Do I look sober?
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>>54938064
...So why did they lose to blood magic? When I compare cyoa's you hardly have any offensive spells in that one. About the only thing I like better are the waifus in blood magic.
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>>54946707
Start another, faggot.
I won't be satisfied till we black out or die of alcohol poisoning.
Shit's the only option I have right now to get some damn sleep.
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