Hey, /tg/, you guys want a storytime?
It's cute witch girls and a cool magic system.
This is good stuff, OP, keep it up
>>54807865
I will. It's just the whole delay thing's really disheartening.
This is awesome. Thanks for dropping this.
>>54808061
I'm glad you like it, anon.
How much longer is this? Don't have time to read it now, just gonna save the whole thread once you've dumped
>>54808161
4 or 5 chapters, IIRC
>>54808161
>>54808181
Six chapters, actually. Sixth just got uploaded today.
>>54808207
Just read the new chapter today and hilariously enough I thought it felt just like a dungeon fantasy campaign. This and dungeon Meshi have a very RPG feel to how things work without being gamey which I really appreciate
>>54808289
>RPG feel to how things work without being gamey
Tell me about it. I'm so sick of picking up a fantasy manga and characters and monsters having stats and shit.
Crikies. That was a sudden shift in tone.
>>54809017
Yeah, there are a couple more incoming. This is the big one, though.
>>54808325
Thought about it and a better way to phrase what I mean although I think it still carries through is; "This is a proper fantasy without the 'gamey' feel of current fantasy manga". Perhaps it's no coincidence that the more fantastic manga stories I see are aimed at the seinen demographic. But the feel of stories like these and the attention to worldbuilding and organic uses of fantasy elements is welcomed.
>>54809005
I like this aspect of the world. Justifies the presence of a magic guild right away.
>>54809134
>Perhaps it's no coincidence that the more fantastic manga stories I see are aimed at the seinen demographic.
What do you mean exactly, anon?
Done with Chapter 1!
And it only took... well, two fucking hours.
Why did I decide to do this?
Chapter 2
In which the number of cute witch girls increases by 300%.
>>54809195
Thanks for introducing this series to me.
Every so often, I wonder why I bother browsing /tg/ anymore, and it's discoveries like this that make it worthwhile.
>>54809330
That makes me happy, anon.
>>54809168
I've just noticed in my readings that the stories that have better world building and more consistent internal logic that isn't dependent on crutches like making it about video game logic have been in the Seinen demographic. Off the top of my head; Dungeon Meshi, Witch Hat Atelier, Alice in Borderlands, Gate - Thus the JSDF fought there (it's not great in the beginning but picks up several volumes in), Totsukuni no Shoujo.
Shounen series I can remember that equally consistent structures and no 'gamey' nature are things like: The Ancient Magus Bride. Youkai Apato no Yuuga na Nichijou, Birdmen, and of course Fullmetal Alchemist.
But what I've noticed is that even though I have equal lists for both Seinen and Shounen aimed stories, once I start to look at any bookmarks or lists of other series I'm reading/watching I find that the majority of the ones that fall into the realm of vastly inconsistent settings, tacked on magic systems, RPG logic, etc; they are mostly shounen.
Nothing against the age demographic because it's not like that stopped anyone from writing a good story before, but I've just noticed this for the last couple years as I've kept up binge reading manga.
>>54809514
It's just the current bandwagon due to the huge success of Sword Art Online and stuff like Overworld. Lots of imitators.
>>54809514
The issue here, I think, is that seinen is usually on its own merits. It's all about the manga itself and the way to make it successful is just to make it really damn good.
Shounen tends to have a lot of commercial concerns behind it. Games and dolls and clothes and shit and that can lead the authors to make some shitty decisions, profitable as they might turn out to be.
>>54809890
>other boards
Pfff.
This is very charming
>>54809981
Glad you like it, anon.
>>54809981
Charming to the point where I'm not even concerned about a young man with memory erasing magic living alone with four young girls.
>>54810093
God damn it, anon.
>>54809614
>Lots of imitators.
The SAO bandwagon is just a continuation of the .Hack bandwagon from the early 2000's. All they did was update the MMO references and game terminology.
>>54809685
>It's all about the manga itself and the way to make it successful is just to make it really damn good.
This applies to the monthly Shounen I see as well. Outside of FMA not many of them reach the same level of commercial success that weekly products do. Which isn't a bad thing in my book since it means not having to watch your series get a premature animated adaptation that either fails to capture the aesthetics of the series, and/or goes the anime-original ending route.
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>>54810240
Yeah this girl is just a bundle of sunshine and positivity.
Chapter 3In which the number of cute witch girls decreases by 25%.Just kidding.
>>54810297
Agete's a real cunt.
>>54810297
She's a type AB.
Coco is type O, Tetia is Type B, and Riche is Type A.
>>54810316
Yo, that brush is getting me worried. I mean, everything is still sort of light and fluffy, but these tone shifts come out of nowhere.
>>54810383
Eh? Where did that come from?
I like this
>>54810776
Good to know, anon.
>>54810784
One a scale of 1 to Dumbledore, how negligent is this man?
Chapter 4
In which Coco does great at the test.
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>>54811216
Forgot to answer to >>54811166
Well, the girls were witches before they were Quifrey's disciples, they can take care of themselves. But really he should have known how Agete would react to Coco.
This is really cute. Is it online elsewhere, or are you scanning it yourself?
>>54811339
I read it on batoto, which is also where I saved the images from.
Image limit reached, we continue at >>54811562
>>54810622
That was fantastic. 10/10.
>>54810927
>The Dada Mountains test site is at its highest elevation for the year
Uhhhhh
Reading bump
>>54809134
>I like this aspect of the world. Justifies the presence of a magic guild right away.
"If you doodle you can kill your mom!"
Makes me wonder if literacy and certain arts are forbidden/restricted to avoid accidents.
>>54809195
It's much appreciated anon
>>54810093
Yeah, I found that a bit worrying too.
>>54807524
This artist draws such soft girls.
>>54810517
I wish magic was this interesting in RPGs
>>54811188
Off the top of my head those runes look different than the ones on the professor's shoes...
>>54809928
w-why witch-sama is so sexy wet?
>>54817007
His is a ring of pure pillar runes around the float/wind rune. Hers also has some weird triangle runes and arrow runes with the pillars.
My guess is his are more for rapid speed rather than her more delicate ones.
>>54817319
Er, keystones for most of those instead of runes. Forgot the terminology.
>>54810338
They poop into outerspace?
>>54816773
Deliciously so