/cyoag/ - CYOA General

>>54611980
You are already dead.

>>54612092
DC is better than Marvel because DC has Power Girl

>>54612126
ok

>>54612126
Isn't power girl a massive slut who the writers intentionally have mainly/only date black guys?

I came here for the hogs. Where are the hogs?!

>>54612126
>DC > Marvel
Thank god it's opposite day

>>54612092
Marvel CYOA:
Mentor:
>Dr Strange (+6 Magic Points, +4 Psychic Points, +2 General Points, +10,000,000):
Magic Powers:
>Utility Magic Rank 2 (-3 Magic Points)
>Summoning Rank 1 (-1 Magic Point)
>Temporal Magic Rank 1 (-2 Magic Points)
Psychic Powers:
>Telepathy Rank 1 (-1 Psychic Point)
>Precognition Rank 1 (-1 Psychic Point)
>Domination Rank 1 (-2 Psychic Points)
General Powers:
>Immunity to Ageing (-1 General Point)
>Transmutation (-1 General Point)
Gear:
>Shield Generator Tier 1 (-4,000,000)
>Lair Tier 1 (5,000,000)

>>54612126
>DC is better than Marvel
Very true.

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>>54612261
I can be your hog tonight, anon

oink oink

>>54612092
The balance in this cyoa is fucked up.

>>54612634
W-will you look for truffles and m-mud bath with me, too?

>>54612412

Where is the immunity to aging? I can't see it on the sheet.

>>54612559
Very untrue, actually

Scumbag

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>>54612092
ever hated someone so much you wish they never existed? well for the low low price of [insert large amount of cash here] you can make that happen!
with this one simple transaction your archenemesis/traitorous ally/ex will be killed before they are born
*cash upfront- as if this is successful you wont need to order the hit in the first place

Name: Mord- not really, but no one uses their real name unless they have a cool one like "Dr Doom"
>Mentor
ghost rider

>powers
magical:
temporal magic: 2

physical:
agility:2
durability:2

general:
projection magecraft: 2

>Gear
Utility belt:2
Guns:1
Vehicle:1 (sweet armored car, has built in james bond gadgets)


time to get filthy rich, or get fucked up the ass by butterfly effect, or have some gods/eternals pissed at me for messing with time too much

>>54612780
Enjoy your leftist garbage. It makes no difference to me what you like.

>>54612747
general powers are off sheet stuff

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>>54612126
You are 100% correct.

>>54612789
Time to retire, immediately. I mean, if you can affect time so that you jump timeline and people don't really have the enemies or have to order hits, then money are also not a problem. Your logic is like that that gave rise to those funny machines that operate on interaction of weight, pulleys, levels and whatnot to do basic, very simple things.

>>54612126
DC is better than Marvel for shitload of reasons. Though I still prefer my manga

>>54612859
>if you can affect time so that you jump timeline and people don't really have the enemies or have to order hits
its more "give me $10,000,000 and i will shoot tony stark as a baby"

its not reality warping, its killing someone in the past- naturally whoever ordered the hit will no longer remember tony stark and so wont order the hit, hence upfront money

>>54612855
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY

I will save this for further reference against gays. I'm not actually gay.

>>54612954
>I'm not actually gay.
Whatever you gotta tell yourself to sleep at night, faggot.

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Remember, kids.

It's only wrong when SDA does it!

>>54612882
Honestly, the best thing about manga is their variety and not being overly dependent on shitty gimmicks like marvels constant events.

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>>54612921
Apparently the file size limit was lowered since I found this CYOA since I can't post page 2

Guys let's dress as superheroes and touch penises it's gonna be hilarious haha

>>54613000
Dude, it's done, drop it please?

>>54613006
When you save an image from 4chan and repost it, for whatever reason the file size increases. I recently published OC at around 6 and a half MB, but in reposts it's 7 and change.

>>54613000
Don't bring that shit back up. It's your own fault for constantly replying to shitposts.
It's pretty obvious that most of them just didn't like the idea of a textbook styled cyoa. Replying to them won't do shit. It's like trying to argue with someone who doesn't like waifu cyoas.
What you should actually do, is just tone down/completely remove that background texture. That goes completely against what a textbook looks like. It just makes people expect something, that it's not supposed to be.

>>54612248
That's She Hulk...

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Again, a friendly reminder

If you don't want anybody to like your cyoas go ahead and:


>have it be about cyoa "authors"
>involve rolling in a big way
>involve mystery boxes in a big way
>involve being a little girl in any way

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>>54613000
>give me attention
yeah nah, suck a dick please.

>>54613098
Figured it was both?

>>54613137
You had me, then you lost me.

I like mystery boxes, and I just see the whole "little girl" thing as a meme.

Rolling can go hoark on a buffet of dicks though.

>>54613137
(You)

>>54613005
True, with exception that there's one more important poin when it comes to manga - it's still nowadays being in biggest part about story, not pushing socio-political agenda - a thing that dominated Marvel writing and turned most of the characters and storylines into shit.

>>54613006
Naw the sites interaction with jpg is weird and the file ends up growing in size between upload and download

>>54612749
Why is this post considered shitposting? Because it's sarcastic?

All it is really saying is that SDA's design misstep was subtle and minor, not really their fault, and will easily self-correct as SDA gains experience with the aesthetic. All this wrapped up in the playful criticism of SDA's unwillingness to accept the possibility of a mistake on their part.

Honestly it's incredibly tame, friendly, and flattering as criticisms go.

>>54613005
>shitty gimmics
Like big eyes and super-deformed style?

>>54613137
>have it be about cyoa "authors"
Arguably true, though may be fun from time to time.
>involve rolling in a big way
Absolutely true.
>involve mystery boxes in a big way
Wrong.
>involve being a little girl in any way
Wrong though excessive use of such may be harmful for a CYOA.

I think you mistake "if you don't want me to like your CYOAs" for actual "anybody to like your CYOAs". Whatever I may say myself about elements you mention, the truth is that people on average don't mind the first point and enjoy third and fourth if done right and to claim otherwise is either lying, being newfag or stupid.

>>54613082
You have some sort of third party data being tacked on when you save something. That's not good, dude. Bring your computer to the STD clinic.

>>54612092
Is it possible to buy Seed 2 twice?

>>54613202
same reason any post is considered shitposting

>>54613006
well if you won't post all of it then don't post anything you cunt

>>54613285
Specifically on the initial upload, not in general. >>54613201 phrased what I meant much better than I did.

>>54612092

Not sure the Paragon/Renegade things line up. I mean, considering Reed's history I doubt people would ever find 'I used to work with him, now I'm a villain' remotely surprising. Heck, it likely gets you a free high five from Hank Pym.

>>54613238
You don't know what a gimmick is.
Also, ironically manga is way more diverse in regards to style.

>>54613285
tell that to tamagotchi moot

>>54613137
I enjoy rolling dice for cyoas, because I'm a compulsive gambler.

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>>54613097
>just tone down/completely remove that background texture
There we go. That's what I'm talking about.

I agree, anon. Noise is the issue, but this doesn't really add up to a cataclysmic failure people are making it out to be.

>>54613143
Sorry.

Papa SDA*

>>54613202
A sarcastic shitpost is still a shitpost. Thus I will shitpost along as merry-go shitposting goes.

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>>54613006
>>54612921
Had to resize it

>>54613201

What's hiroshimoot adding to jpgs?

>>54613374
>but this doesn't really add up to a cataclysmic failure people are making it out to be.
What are you refering to? I don't recall you making anything lately that'd be something utterly horrible. Did I miss something?

>>54613375
>resize
You are adorably helpless

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>>54613400
Bitcoin.
He's using us to launder his money from his sex-slave trade. If we all stopped posting and re-posting, he'd go broke.

Is it GoT time yet

>>54613459

From the kind of stupid shit I've seen people do, I'm slightly inclined to believe this.

>>54613441
You missed a shitstorm last thread.

Apparently my design choices for my last CYOA made it a failure. It was horrid; even made one anon blind in an eye. They bullied me and chained me up, screaming that I made the ugliest CYOA in the universe.l with every swat of the paddle.

It's metadata. 4chan strips most of it when uploaded but the upload still can't be above a certain amount. Even a brand new computer would increase the size of a file saved from here.

>>54613374
I think it would be helpful to have more of those sidebar comments and info you see in modern textbooks, like the blue box you have beside a title, but i don't know how you would actually do that without increasing wasted whitespace significantly.

>>54613457
I hear that a lot

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>>54613566
>They bullied me and chained me up, screaming that I made the ugliest CYOA in the universe.l with every swat of the paddle.

>>54613566
Gonna check it out. Did you perform graphical equivalent of Eronomicon or something?
Sorry, couldn't help myself

>>54613602
I wanted to have more but that risked space and I didn't have enough alternate portraits of the students. They were originally intended for the actual textbook and would give more useful/insightful trivia.

>>54613659
Again, I don't know what to do about space, but as for the portraits maybe you could instead use an illustration of some key aspect of their description and link that? Or maybe even an unexpected illustration that is linked to the character by the text description, that reveals a hidden side to them? But the whitespace/margin really is the main thing hindering it and not easily solved.

>>54613289
Do you merely enjoy being vague and unhelpful, or do you really not know?

>>54613655
I looked and found nothing in particular, beside some file you've deleted and some random textbook pages that don't seem to be CYOA. What gives?

>>54613315
Then 4chan is adding to images without our consent. Why do people not use png instead?

>>54613566
But did you enjoy it

>>54613707

I looked too, Sandra didn't post the cyoa with his name.

Some anons were just upset that they can't read cursive, from what I've been seeing.

>>54613747
People didn't like the plain white background and limited design.

>>54613441
The cyoa wasn't particularly bad, just one particular decision. SDA enjoyed getting bent out of shape over it for some reason.

>>54613747
Can you link that CYOA then? I want to know how he fucked up if at all.

>>54613374
An isolated failure is just a failure, no big deal about it. Are you sure you are not adding that "cataclysmic" part yourself, for the drama?

>>54613727
I'm not sure if tinypng could actually make it small enough to repost. I might try it as an experiment, but I don't know if people will widely adpot it.

>>54613566
the biggest problem is the existence of the older version. It's more complex and shiny. People going "it's too basic" really mean "I want it to look more fancy like the original version".

>>54613799
It's just the redesigned magical mentor one.

>>54613727
See: >>54613593
You are getting upset for literally the opposite reasons as to why it actually is. (You) are doing it. It's a privacy measure in addition to a help against the strain we put on the sites. Please be more insufferable.

>>54613869
Meh, then it's really nothing much to complain about. S;ⱭA, you've made it sound like actual bif-scale drama. Correct that one bit people are bothered with if it's such a problem and let's move on.

>>54613903
People got bothered at SDA calling everyone a shitposter and a moron for not liking the new design, but I wouldn't call it a big deal regardless.

>>54612092
>Mentor:
Tony Stark
>Powers:
Genius 1 (nanomachine specialty)
Alien Tech 2
>Gear:
Nanomachines 2

So. I don't even really know what I have here with Nanomachines 2 boosted by Alien Tech 2, but I know it's good. It's basically a blank check on what I can do. I'm thinking, between 10 and 12 power points, and they're all general so I can spend them on anything in or outside the cyoa, but I still can't go beyond the relative powerlevel of the cyoa. My versatility is limitless, but it's gonna take a long time to learn to use that versatility to its full extent.

I'm tempted to go full ham and rant about NANOMACHINES, SON, but I honestly just wanna be the chillest mid-to-high tier hero ever and hang with Spidey.
>Galactus is here!
Uh, yay? Oh wait, this is bad, isn't it?
>He's the Devourer of Worlds!
Devourer of Worlds sounds like a metal album. Like a concept album.
>You need to take this seriously!
I know, and I'm trying. But everyone here looks like a circus reject and there's more spandex here than in my slash fiction erotica.

>>54612248
>>54613098
>>54613175
Both of them do.
Because that's what a feminist would do, obviously. Pic s

>>54612665
Comic book balance is fucked up, so it's fine.
Honestly the best, easiest path to power is to just take Genius 2 and study the shit out of everybody with powers.
Even if you can only fully understand and replicate 1% of the superpowered people, you could easily turn yourself into a god.

>>54613336
I think it has more to do with their general submission to law and order, rather than any sort of hero/villain ratio.
You can be a hero and still break the law.
Cap did during the first Civil War.
If the Punisher was on here he'd be like 95%–100% Renegade, and he's one of the best heroes out there.
Meanwhile Doom (who is generally a 'villain') is sitting at 30/70 because he does follow his own code, even while ignoring everyone else's.

>>54613374
See? I told you once you had calmed down a bit you would be more accepting.

>>54613882
I've disabled all the piggybacking metadata mechanisms I don't like, thank you very much.

>>54613869
That's not the problem, though. I liked most of the rework; it just wasn't 100% successful. I gave feedback when asked but apparently once you get your back up it's hard to relax and see no everyone is attacking you.

>>54613882
You realize that "then" implies an "if", right?

>>54614028
I also gave him feedback and his response was perfectly civil. I also don't remember any concrete advice that he was ignoring. Just going 'it's too basic' or 'it doesn't look nice' doesn't help, so I understand why he responded the way he did.

>>54614064
Feedback and advice isn't really the same thing.

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I dig the hell out of this one. I do kind of wish the hometowns gave you a bonus, but that's just me being greedy

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>>54614135

>>54614135
Yeah, I found it sort of odd that they didn't. I can see how it might have been hard to decide, though.

>>54614135
It seemed like hometowns might have at some point with them mentioning Dodland being the pkace with guns and whatnot.

>>54614028
Yeah, I've gotten him snapping at me when I'm trying to talk to him and he's got people yelling at him. He's always apologized when I explain myself, though.

To out myself as a fucking hick, don't go petting stressed animals, and if you do, don't get angry when they bite you. They'll calm down eventually.

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>>54614152

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>>54613799
this'n

>>54613869
>the biggest problem is the existence of the older version
I knew this would be a problem but I didn't really care about those type of complaints.

>>54613903
I like how the new design is, but apparently I'm not allowed to disagree with people. That allegedly triggered a lot of people.

>>54613953
I never once disregarded any piece of advice that I thought I agreed with, and provided my rationale to counter. But if the response is "it's shit" then I don't really have much to go by, anon.

>>54614064
>>54614164
Portray me as a doggirl and we gucci.

>>54614164
>don't go petting stressed animals
It'd be nice if people stopped tugging on their tails claiming they're helping.

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>>54614191
I haven't used this page yet, but the author put it out afterwards

>>54614164
It's really just human nature. The best way to get through to him is to make your point succinctly and move on, the longer you go on the easier it is to make a slip that will discount your whole argument. Most of the authors put a lot more though into their shit than we give them credit for, criticism does get through.

>>54614164
When they're supposed to be part of human society, like a house pet, you don't get angry. You just put them down or put them out.

If you're an animal that happens to be a thinking person also? Maybe have the foresight to leave before biting another human being. Having the self control of an animal is the kind of behavior that will stick in peoples minds and form their opinion of you. Similarly, a tendency towards self-control, patience, or kindness will go far.

>>54612829
Chenurio
Small arms, psionics, social skills and navigation
Assault rifle, garb, grenades, pistols, nanobots

>>54614244
I don't put this name on to be kind, anon.

>>54612092
Mentor Johnny Blaze (Ghost Rider)
[5M 4P 3G 10mil]
Magic Powers: Temporal Magic both ranks.
Physical Powers : Healing Factor both ranks
and then i have 2 general points left for Genius rank 1 and Durability rank 1. Basically my super power is not dying and getting infinite replays.

I kinda want both lair and teleporter but Im down by 1m. Hm. Well lets get teleporter. It's not like teleporting myself into a wall is going to kill me. With the remaining 4mil lets buy utility belt tier 1 and 2. Pocket space is always good.

So yeah. I go around hitting replay a lot. Deadpool levels of regen. I'm smarterer than I was. And you know Johnnyboy's probably not going to bother burning me with guilt if I have deadpool regen. I mean, he wouldn't want a second crazy super regen maniac out there would he?

Look, can you folks quit with your gay relationship drama, the cringe is starting to get physically painful

>>54614244
>Similarly, a tendency towards self-control, patience, or kindness will go far.
If only we expected the same of anons that we expect of authors.

>>54614244
Would you put down a useful workhorse because it bit you when your retarded inbred, fetal alcohol syndrome cousin slapped it's ass?

>>54614294
Those with more visibility and more to lose have more incentive to police their behavior; this is natural and nothing special or strange.

>>54614306
A useful workhorse isn't a house pet, moron.

>>54614351
Yes, and?
Reality is not analogy.
Though, that might be a fun CYOA.
Choose a common analogy or coliqualism to become literal truth.

>>54614212
>I never once disregarded any piece of advice that I thought I agreed with
The thing about advice is that you don't always agree with what's good for you.

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>>54614291
Come, child. We have such sights to show you.

>>54614135
>Hometown
Impiona

>Affiliation
Samhaille for Utredning av det Overnaturliga

>Skills
Biology (free)
Observant (12)
Athletic (11)
Marksman (10)
Assassin (9)
Charming (8)
Stealthy (7)
Thief (6)
Polymath (5)
Psychology (4)
Alchemy (3)
Hardy (2)
Trap Making (1)

>Companions
None

>Assets
Safehouse (0)

>Dark Power
Obsession- Hypnotism
Eldritch Attention- Illusion

Not exactly the kind of person you'd expect to be associated with the premier scientific society, I'm nevertheless one of the field agents with the most autonomy. You wouldn't expect a scientist of this caliber to also be a charming rogue, a peerless thief, and a ruthless assassin when the situation calls for it.

Working out of a safehouse near to a Overnaturliga hub, I'm sure to bring my colleagues live specimens, eldritch tomes,
and research obtained in my hunts. So long as I produce results, questions are kept at a minimum. It's really for the best, due to
my little problem.

It started out with a slight predilection for manipulating the human mind, one of the mysteries shared by biology and psychology.
We are awash in dark and evil, what makes a human go on? What motivates them? Is it chemical or something more? To that end, I became obsessed with hypnotism, reprogramming humans and attempting to reprogram some monsters, to test the limits of the conscious. My pursuits went a little too far when I read the De Vermis Mysteriis. I gained a talent for Illusion magic to complement my hypnotism, but at the cost of angering the cult who were the original caretakers of the tome. They've been at my heels ever since, seeking to rip the knowledge from my mind and utilize my body for some other purpose.

>>54614425
That's part of the statement, anon, and I wholeheartedly accept my subjectivism, but it's part of the merit of an author to accept what they believe is best.

>>54614404
Never did I see someone agree with someone else so violently and contemptuously.

A true testament to ignorance.

>>54614227
Why on earth would anyone think pulling on an animal's tail is a good idea?

>>54611980
Is there a cyoa with diablerie?

>>54614490
I don't think it's your acceptance that is getting you shat on, but your bitching.

>>54614517
Try Diablerie CYOA. It's pretty good.

>>54614497
Ok, so is analogy useless?
If not, what place do you think it has in communication?
May I hire you to write fortune cookies?

>>54614542
You're arguing about opinions that I haven't expressed.

>>54614518
>I don't think it's your acceptance that is getting you shat on, but your bitching.
Very true statement. I don't deny this.

Just don't deny that some people here deserve to be bitched at. Whether or not I'm one of those people is irrelevant of this statement.

>>54614578
Most people's friend or foe systems don't seem very reliable. And the way they talk sounds more like excuses than anything.

>>54612829
Mountaintop Hold

Language (Mashangshi)
Social Skills
Psionics (psychokinesis)

Membership
Friendly Noble
Housing X3

Matea Tekla
Armin Arbor
Irvine Teodor

>>54614575
That isn't an argument, anon.
It was a passive aggressive series of questions.
I'm sorry about that. We should practice more patience and kindness instead of mindlessly calling each other ignorant.

>>54614618
Arguments can be made with questions. Those and many other devices fall under Rhetoric, which you can look it up if it interests you.

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I come here today to take some ideas and suggestions.

Need to think of some classes you could pick and what bonuses they would offer. Like theater 101 giving you a charisma boost, cooking to learn how make grad feasts, magic class to gain a free magic skill, etc.

Any ideas?

>>54614745
I will, thank you. It is always good to learn.
Oh, and the next time I try to shift an analogy, I'll try to start it by saying something like "I feel like it's more like X." Do you think that would help?

>>54614829
I think you sound like you're completely butt devastated. The only help you can get is by sucking off a shotgun.

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>>54614784
Watersports gives you an endurance boost.

>>54614784
Martial arts club giving you ki control.

>>54614853
Now now. Most perceived inflection on this anonymous text and image board is projected.
If you find despair, anger, or malice in my words, perhaps you should look within yourself.

>>54614909
>No u
No u!

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Since the last thread people were making requests for their favorite ones Empires to be included, I suggested that they write a Summary with a similar length as the CYOA before.

If any Anons are up for it, post em' so we can have a community addition/dlc.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PZ1PaPBa7GU

>>54614829
That may help, yes. It may be even more important when suggesting an alternate metaphor to avoid one that overlaps to well with the one that you want to replace.

>>54614784
Bonuses can only be balanced for the context in which they are given.

>>54614948
Yes, that sounds like a good idea. Thank you for your time.

>>54614934
An empire of cute wolfgirls

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>>54614995
Just give a creative description and let's add it Anon.

>>54614960
Well pitch me ideas then let me gauge the balance, mister sassy pants.

>>54612126
Idustury wars are stupid, but at the current moment I agree that comics wise DC > Marvel

also DC has the better fighting game

>>54614976
And you for yours, sir or madame.

>>54615042
Didn't mean to sass. Was hoping you would provide a hint at what sort of bonuses we were looking to fit in with, or tell us if you hadn't decided yet and anything is potentially fitting.

>>54615041
Definitely going to choose >>54614995 and become a cute wolf girl.

>>54615041
The Cutewolfgirl Empire

"This is the empire of cute wolfgirls. It has cute wolfgirls in it."

>>54615044
>also DC has the better fighting game
The only reason this is true is because Infinite looks like shit in several aspects. I still wouldn't play Injustass, though.

>>54615042
Usually a pitch includes reasons why the subject of the pitch (the class and bonuses) is particularly suited for needs (framing context and intent) of whoever has the power to accept that pitch (the author, you).

>>54614784
Uh, maybe give some information as to what stats/skills are fair game? Otherwise it's just kind of shooting in the dark.

>>54614135
>>54614161
>>54614163
The idea was that you're more experienced with the monsters in the homeland description. ie Krahevnians specialize in fighting corporeal undead while Fomorians are more knowledgeable about fey, etc.

I'll make that more explicit if I ever get around to updating it.

>>54615109
I'm actually of the mind that injustice 2 is a pretty solid all around fighter.

>>54612829
> Items > Housing
> Tale twice for... a 3-room with a roommate.
>roomate
>room
Should I take this to mean a 3-room with a HOUSEmate, ie. we each get 1 room with 1 shared room? I'd hate to be forced to share a bedroom after paying the extra point.

>>54615144
Thank you, that's very kind of you. Prompt response, too.

>>54614287
that's not how general points work, but I guess maybe they can be used that way.

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>>54615159
We'll agree to disagree, then. It's not a game I'd say does many things well related to its actual gameplay, and its EVO showing didn't raise my opinion of it. It looks nice, though.

>>54614135
>Diavolstanca

>Covens of Haralia

>Determined
>Observant
>Athletic
>Combat Training
>Charming
>Assassin
>Stealthy
>Hardy

>Arsenal
>Amulet
>Magic Weapon
>Safehouse
>Cover
>Wealth

>Angel Channeling

I was an orphan who ran away from the orphanage, following the instructions from the voice in my head. I was eventually attacked by monsters and almost killed, but saved by members of the Covens. They did understand there's something or someone connected to me and accepted me.

Now as a trained adult I serve as their executioner against monsters and other enemies of the Coven.

>>54615044
okay okay, half the characters are irreparably ruined because of shitty writing by SJWs and heroes constantly fighting other heroes in mega crossover events.

That's fine. It's fine. We can just kill off the ruined characters, then bring back time-travelling versions of them from before they were ruined.

But we have to make it socially responsible, right? So now the white male characters are going to reveal that they're actually gay, and living a lie all this time. Also the women time travellers are going to be ugly, and the male leaders will step down to let the ugly women lead. That will free up the former male leaders to join groups of diverse muslim and black knock-off heroes.

And we have to make it interesting, right? So the old time-travelling team can fight their former leader's new black/muslim team in an all-new mega crossover event!

Marvel!

>>54612829
City: Mashangshi
Skills: Medicine, Software+, Psionics(Mind Reading and Control), Social
Items: Garb(Formal - Mashangshi), Housing+(Mashangshi - single room), Education+(Mashangshi), Computers, Money(Matea Tekla), Friendly Noble, Medical Equipment
Companions: Venkate Wash, Lisa Sabbadin, Matea Tekla, Irvine Teodore

Live well, be good to my wife, protect mine, do good. Medicine should serve as a lucrative front for just about anything, and I have the connections to stay safe.

>>54614784
Human Reproduction giving you 98% chance of not getting pregnant while using birth control correctly.

>>54615532
It already works that way.

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>its another "shitposter-kun manages to finally bait SDA again" episode

You people seem overly conditioned to support anything SDA does.

>>54615549
Only as much as every class in this hypothetical CYOA that hasn't been published yet already works that way.

>>54615573

I can respect stardust and some of the other stuff he's done, but the only thing I really support and feel hype for is his catgirl deal in the works, and possible doggirl dlc.

>>54615573
Pretty sure "you people" is actually a very small but vocal number of people.

>didn't think the new font fit Magic Mentor very well
>didn't shitpost about it because it doesn't matter
>instead more concerned about OC anon's streak being broken this weekend

>>54615602
weekend ain't over yet

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>>54615634

>>54615556
Never speak of my doggirl waifu like that again.

>>54615573
I find him annoying.
I find (You) annoying.
Make me a CYOA and I'll find you equally annoying.
PLEASE! I'LL SUCK YOUR COCK!

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>>54615596
>the only thing I really support and feel hype for

Shit I'm a liar now, I forgot about him saying he was gonna cuck tok and make a lewd cyoa to win that reddit contest tok fucked up eronomicon for.

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>>54615643

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>>54613098
No?
She Hulk Married John Jameson at one point, JJJ's son

>>54615532
noting that, iirc, this is per year. Not per sex.

>>54612248

I legitimately thought Power Girl was solely into some straight shota shit because I've never read her comics and that's basically all the porn I've seen of her.

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>>54615573
>>54615600
Quite the opposite, it's a vocal minority that likes to shitpost me. Most people don't really give a fuck and tend to see through their shitposting guise.

There are a few people here whose anuses clench at the very mention of me, and it's those people that make this fucking funny.

>>54615760

Cats and lewds and lewdcats when?

>>54615634
May I ask where the Mr. Merchant image is from?

>>54615789
When he stops being a bitch. Don't expect it anytime soon.

>>54615803
Not mine senpai.

>>54615789
When people like this >>54615859 stop being a bitch.

Don't expect it anytime soon, like I keep saying.

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>>54615869

>>54615894
Me on the top.

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>>54615859
>>54615869

For you both.

Now kiss.

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>>54615923
No way. You on the bottom.

>>54615634
9 days
Jungle
Cabin
Halo of the Saint, Mirror of the Bashful
The Magical Girl, The Priestess, The Carpenter
Wolf Packs, Skeletal Hordes, Slimes
Heavy Rain

>>54615760
Those aren't mutually exclusive. Basically, anyone who gives a strong shit about you either way is a vocal minority. Most people do not give a fuck.

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>>54615634
>9 Days
9 days ain't shit because I'm a badass

>Forest
Forest please because I'm a pussy
>Archery Range

>Halo of the Saint
I don't think it will be all that useful but if I will I would love to walk the ocean when I win
>Mirror of the Bashful

>The Magical Girl
>The Wolf Girl
>The Priestess

>The Orc

>Skeletal Hordes
>Zombies
>Slimes

>Sky Whales

>Heavy Rain

So, I see SDA is going down the Tok path of "if you criticize it, you're not the intended audience and you just don't understand". Perhaps you should take that game design class after all, SDa.

I have an overpowering urge to make a 'Tok x SDA' yaoi CYOA / OC

Should I do it?

>>54612092
>Mentor
Wanda Maximoff
>Powers
Rank 2 Temporal Magic
Rank 2 Utility Magic
Rank 1 Summoning
Rank 2 Biomancy (General Points)
>Gear
Lair Tier 1 - small house in the woods
Utility Belt Tier 2
Vehicle Tier 1 - a jeep in case I need to keep a low profile
Guns Tier 1 - largely unnecessary but comforting to have anyway

Probably just going to act as a well paid healer while working steadily towards a mastery of time magic. Well that's the plan, I'm sure I'll get wrapped up into some super powered drama due to my mentor's proximity to the X-Men and the Avengers.

>>54616522
You should never make author CYOAs anon, channel your time into something more productive.

Someone please post that assassain one that was recent?

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>>54616522
OH DEAR GOD YES PLEASE

>>54613697
sure i know anon, it's shitposting because someone doesn't like it

>>54616437
Ignoring the parts where I responded to regular criticism and not shitposting fine, yes.

>>54616522
You're willing to direct the entirety of the thread's hatred toward you just for peace, anon? God bless

>>54616736
>>54616522
Oh no, I'm not doing this because I hate Tok. In fact, I adore him.

I'm just doing it 'cause I'm a wanker, as one guy put it. It's nothing personnel.

>>54616522
Please don't. I always have no interest whatsoever in author CYOAs.

>>54616759
>I'm a wanker, as one guy put it.
I wasn't being serious.

>>54616522
Please do it

>>54616522
>Tok x SDA

Who'd be the Uke in the relationship?

>>54615634
>9 days.
Not only will the money allow me to easily pay of my college loans, but I could also make enough investments in dividend yielding stock to live a fairly comfortable life. Thus, it is worth the risk.
>Forest
A rather plain choice; no major advantages, but no major disadvantages either.
>Dock house
The amount of fish hear allows for a fairly easy supply of food, whilst the alligators will make a decent trap for any creatures that dare to attack me.
>Fairy in a Jar
So long as I give detailed orders, I shouldn't have a problem. Perhaps it can scout for and return food.
>Halo of the Saint
Not only will the ability to walk on water prove to be a massive boon, especially with my current residence, but it's also aesthetically pleasing.
>Allies
>The soldier
Someone on the team with combat experience is indispensable, all things considered.
>The Priestess
Given the presence of alligators and monsters, being able to heal any wound is vital.
>The Carpenter
With all the trees nearby, hopefully we'll be able to construct some stable fortifications within the first three days at least. If not, well at least we have some spare food.
>Trackers
>The Orc
Dumb Brutes still need to breathe, yet another reason why I picked the dock on the lake; he just might be dumb enough to follow me, especially if I provoke him with the fairy. The halo only makes this easier.
>Goblin Tribes
Another tool using species is a nuisance, but those very same tools will give us a resource for bartering with the Merchant.
>Slimes
Yet again, it comes down to the lake.
>Skeletons
A hammer will be good enough against them, possibly taking each one down in one hit. Perhaps their clothes or bones could be sold (bone meal is good for crops.)
>Sky Whales
The sky is the last place we want to be aiming.
>Heavy Rain
At the very least there will be fewer slimes; though we may need to take a boat and leave for the cabin if things get too bad. At least I can still walk on the water.
Cont.

>>54616810
the stupid weaboo fuck who knows what that means

>>54616806
I accept it, though. If you don't think I'm a wanker, you're out of your mind.

>>54616704
I can't help but be amused that your usual excuse when people point out your own shitposting is that "you're just telling it to people who deserve it" or the like, or how you were bragging about getting kicked off the discord because you were criticising "some game design student who couldn't handle it" and then you have your little meltdown last thread, and bring it up again this thread when no one was talking about it.

Given you spend so much of you time in these threads it'd be good if you could be a little more mature about it.

>>54616810
SDA would definitely be the submissive bottom

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>>54616522
Do I ever get shipped with anyone?

>>54614578
Again

Ladies and Gentlemen

We're getting to the end

>>54616864
You're stuck with Angel

Yes, she has a penis

>>54616838
Your interpretation of a meltdown was me defending my design choices even when the shitposters came out. It's as if you can't accept that I can be right sometimes.

This happens every time, and nothing changes. Were we to have post IDs, I think you'd wholly accept that I'm a saint compared to some other regulars here. It's so easy for you to point me out on my shit, it's great.

>it'd be good if you could be a little more mature about it
Yes, like this post of yours, right? As if trying to convince me of my misdeeds in the form of posting in the thread was ever a good idea.

>>54616522
You should make a 'Tok x SDA' yuri CYOA / OC

>>54616813
So, to further detail my plan.
>Arrive on the Island
>Harvest resources as soon as possible; in particular identifiable fruits and fish.
>Will have to start working in the rain with the Carpenter, but hopefully it won't be too bad.
>Hunt down goblins and sell their tools to the merchant in exchange for supplies. Priorities are weapons, clothing, and ammunition.
>When the orc comes a knocking, it will be withing three to seven days (that rain will slow him down even more for sure).
>When he does arrive, I will try and drown him in the nearby lake. Maybe get him eaten by alligators.
>Try and avoid the skeletons.

>The soldier will be the main defense of the party; helping hunt and hunker down the fort if need be.
>The priestess will be the healer, treating everything from swamp foot to no foot.
>The carpenter will be the one to plan the fortifications, and though the rain makes it difficult to build them, it's better than hyper aggressive monsters and a pilot of questionable morality.
>I will be the one to organize and the main forager, as well as giving a helping hand whenever necessary. Since I was also in Boy Scouts, I should have a few skills to help us survive such a situation.
Some things that are uncertain, but I'll still try and do.
>See if the merchant has any arcane items for sale; while I am not certain to bring them with me, if I can then that would be a massive boon for me.
>Ask where the priestess gained her magic and if I could learn it. If not, or if it would take more than nine days, then I say it is not worth it.
>If I can take any money from my dealings with the merchant with me, then I will sell what I can and split it with the party; a little bonus, I say.
All in all, if I play it safe, only take risks when the payoff is good or guaranteed enough, and kill the orc when he comes around, victory is guaranteed.
Thoughts?

>>54616921
But Yuri isn't pure enough

>>54616903
Angel is a cute Shota

>>54616906
Yes SDA, everyone who disagrees with you is shitposting and you're just the brave rebel who sticks up to them.

I know you're not going to leave these threads any time soon, so please try to be a better influence on them.

>>54616903
No way, celt and zbg are butt buddies.

>>54616948
>Yes SDA, everyone who disagrees with you is shitposting
Nice argument, but I never agreed with this mentality.

>so please try to be a better influence on them
Are you my manager?

>>54614871
Eww.

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Can you make Power Armor badass enough to cleanse this shit thread?

>>54616957
>Are you my manager?
Sounds like a bit more work than I could handle. I'm just an anon who would like to see these threads be better.

>>54616994
>I'm just an anon who would like to see these threads be better.
Maybe trying to voice the obvious and trying to stir shit up isn't the right thing to do, Mr. Samaritan.

And before you point out that I'm doing exactly that, I just want you to know that you're not helping the situation in the slightest if that's what you're trying to do.

>>54617035
Well, being silent for as long as I have hasn't worked. Why shouldn't I start asking people to behave better? Are you saying you couldn't act better in these threads?

>>54617072
>Well, being silent for as long as I have hasn't worked
And make this a testament to your inability to do anything about the situation.

>Are you saying you couldn't act better in these threads?
I'm not here to act like a good boy, anon. I will defend my points whether or not it abides by your code of ethics, and I will listen and respond excellently to points that feel that deserve it.

>>54617100
>your code of ethics
Do I look like a society to you?

>>54617100
So you'll continue to be a hypocrite and make these threads worse.

Carry on then.

>>54617108
Whatever it is that you subscribe to.

>>54617119
>So you'll continue to be a hypocrite
Never, ever denied this.

More like SDGay amirite

>>54617100
Is this the internet version of reality tv's "I didn't come here to make friends"? You really are pathetic, and not even aware of it.

>>54613137
He's right.

Also, it's dumb to namefag, and egotistical to tripfag.

>>54616864
What cyoa have you made?

>>54617178
BLASPHEMY

>>54617191
Not trying to offend, just looking for fun new cyoa.

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>>54617160
I knew you'd break.

>>54617199
ok but WHY DO YOU HAVE SO MANY HENTAI REACTION PICTURES!!!

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>/cyoag/ now just tripfags that don't even make cyoas
>at least highlander made something

I want to go back a year.

>>54617199
>>54617262
Yeah, why do you have so much hentai reaction images? You're not some kind of faggot, are you?

>>54617282
I'll do you one better

>most of the new OC is actually made by legit anons
>it receives a fraction of the discussion because the namefags and tripfags and their fanboys always turn the thread back into a circlejerk

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17. There are 17 cyoa images out of 42 images. Out of 235 replies.

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>>54617326
Let's change that, shall we?

>>54617305
I'm sorry. I'll try to be better. Extreme loneliness does things to me.

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>>54617367

>>54617305
Don't worry, I'm thinking of abandoning the contest. This thing left a bad taste in my mouth.

>>54617381
I understand anon. I hope you have a nice day!

>>54616993
>Light
Overall well balanced and dexterous, it serves as a rather fine base for my plans.
Features
>Extra limbs (arms) (195)
You’d be surprised what an extra set of arms can do, how much productivity is added.
>Gills (190)
For research and escape, being able to breath under the deep will benefit me greatly.
>Natural Weapons (180)
Simple and brutal, yet great for an emergency in a fight.
>Fins (165)
Because if I’m going in the water, I might as well keep my dexterity advantage.
Body type
>Hunter (125)
If I wish to survive in this crazy world, I must become like those who came before; a powerful hunter.
A.I.
>Engineer (115)
For something to repair my suit when I fail to remember. A well maintained weapon is more powerful and effective than one that isn’t.
User Interface
>Brain Implant (95)
I’d hate to be caught without my suit.
HUD
>Suit Status (free)
>Thermal Vision (free)
>Night Vision (free)
Since it is free, there is no harm in taking it.
>Radar (85)
Having an understanding of your surroundings is important.
>Sonar (75)
Same principle as radar.
Comms
>Radio Transmitter (free)
>Defense maze (65)
By preventing others from hacking me, I remove much of my weakness.
Weapons
>Plasma Bow (Silent)
If I want more weapons, I could just loot others. How hard could it be to find a knife, that which nearly every kitchen has?
Upgrades
>Environmental controls (all) (free)
There are many things that can kill a man, and most of them are from nature.
>Capacitor I and II (45)
Required for the Hunter mod
>Cyber Brain (35)
Essentially immortality.
>Martial arts (30)
In conjunction with the natural weapons I also wield, this makes me a far more dangerous hunter than others realize.
>Solar Panels (20)
In the future, I’m going to need this. When my body has all but decayed, my suit will be all that is left. I’ll need to keep it active for as long as possible
(cont.)

>>54617474
>Armour Plating (10)
Currently my suit is still fragile. So preventing injury to it with greater plating is a great investment.
>Mycelium (0)
Even if in the future I won’t need to eat anymore, sleep may still be needed. Well, it would without this.

Unlike my contemporaries, combat is not my primary focus. While it is indeed an important aspect, and indeed I will engage in it in order to save this planet, my main goal is merely the acquisition of knowledge. My newfound brain makes acquiring this knowledge and accessing it all the easier. Books, stories, perhaps even downloading the internet itself. All I shall do, and all for humanity. With this knowledge I will find a way to create new inventions to help humanity defend itself. In time, perhaps even the secrets of the power armour itself shall be revealed to me, allowing for even further upgrades in time.
Of course, what is infinite knowledge if you don’t live long enough to use it properly. Hence where the cyberbrain comes in. With it I shall transcend the normal lifespan of mankind, living for centuries while the others age, die, and are born again all around me. In time, I shall lead humanity into a golden age, and I shall remain their leader, long after the war.

>>54617199
???

>>54617509
Shamanize now!

What is the most popular military cyoas? How many do we have?

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Well here is the entirety of the full release for boon of mutation, gonna stop work on it for awhile except for maybe fixing balance issues and spelling mistakes but I dont see myself adding any content to it in this state. Was fun giving cyoas a try and am probably gonna go get photoshop or another real image editing program and start on a different project.

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>>54612092

Hmm. As a superhero, I'd have to say that survival (i.e. not getting my shit wrecked) is going to be my priority.

Magic and technology are well and good, but having a durable body and durable mind would be the best way to survive encounters.

To that end, Kevin Masters, Balrog, and Mantis would make the best mentors. Mantis is the only paragon outta the three, so she fits best.

4 Physical, 5 Psychic, 3 General, 10M

Skills: Telepathy (U), Precog (U), Speed (U), Healing (U)

Equipment: Utility Belt (U), Guns, Explosives

With this build, I'd have precognition+speed to evade and attack with near perfect accuracy. I'd have healing factor to hopefully survive things that for some reason I don't forsee, as well as Telepathy to perform mind attacks as well as act as a mind shield. The combination of knowledge and evasion should make me difficult to fight or kill.

As for equipment, I have the utility belt to assist in infiltration and guns/explosives to win physical fights. I'd take upgraded guns, but doubt I could withstand the recoil of anything too strong. With basic guns/explosives and speed my objective would be to blink behind people and put a sawed off shotgun or satchel charge into their back. Presuming that they were not vulnerable to my mind attack. If those don't work, then I'd run.

The layout and design of this CYOA is beautiful, but I'm not sure where to go from here. I'd join the local Justice League branch and see where things go from there.

>>54615634
9 days
Jungle
Monoliths
Halor of the saint, goblet of mist
Soldier, skeleton, monkey
Human hunter
Sahuagin
Sky whale, leaviathan, forest guardian
Heavy rain, crashed pilot

>>54617509
Defender
Breaching totem
Ghlovu, Yeregnu
Qeyk

>>54617581
Wait, so can you only take ONE companion? Since this part seems to be differently worded from the other sections that say you can get more for every drawback/malignancy you take.

>>54617647
You are free to take more than one if you would like, in hindsight there is really no reason to have the limitation and it is not something anyone pointed out

>>54617553
I like GIMP because photoshop's undo is kinda stupid and annoying. That said, I guess I should make a build for this now that youre gonna stop working on it.

Biological Form. Steady and not too bad for my health and no risk of catching the eye of an outer being.
Malignant: Twice as Bright , Marked one, Ichor blood
Mutations: Regeneration, Darksight, Ranged option (Ichor blood), Reactive Conditioning. So my attacks is basically spraying my blood, which actually makes me stronger the more I use it until I heal up.

Drawbacks: Addiction. The only one thats not terrible and I can deal with. I think I can break the addiction.

Traits: Preserved Visage, Controlled Progression. These two should give me a good advantage in dealing with the uppers and possibly earning my way out.

Companion: Maaaan what do you mean I dont get one for free. Fine. Lets do sensory deprivation. The fuck is gut feeling? It's going o be either that or smell so ya know.

Companion: Irvine , she looks pretty human and her connections will be very helpful. Plus, she seems like she'd make a cute little pet.

Plan is to talk / earn my way out of this pit I guess and into the uppers.

>>54617870
Cont.

Missions: Onward and Upward. That was the whole point is to more or less be acceptable to polite company.
Second, Survival. Really just kinda hanging about and slowly piling on achievements. You know the drill.

Bonus: Noblebright. Should help a lot with the acceptance thing.

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>>54617367

Shame people needed to be prodded to post, and not shitpost.

>>54617581
spelling error in Rude Awakening
have -> hive

Gifted

Regeneration, ascended mind
Ichor Blood
Controlled Progression

Public Enemy
Irvine

Dark Descent

I guess I take my waifu with me into madness. She can be my yandere combat waifu.

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Saw this in the last thread, but the thread archived before I got a chance to post.

Immortality – Sacrifice

Spells:
>Arcane Bolt (-1)
>Mind Hand (-1)
>Perfect Sight (-1)
>Steel Skin (-2)
>Boost Strength (-2)
>Perfect Form (-2)
>Invisible (-2)
>Haste (-2)
>Regenerate (-4)
>Fly (-4)
>Counterspell (-4)

Enchantments – Bonus Points (+8), Apprentice

Drawbacks – Dogsbody (+2), On-Call (Extra Enchantment)

>>54617326
>>54618015
How many of these are there?

>>54617553
Mutation Source: Chemical
Mutations:
>Natural Armor
>Living Hive (Giant eels)
>Regeneration
>Iron Frame
>Reactive Conditioning
Malignancies:
>Ichor Blood
>BloodLust
>Ravenous Hunger
>Failing Organs
Traits:
>Controlled Progression
>Accepted Member
>A Little More
>Tenacity
Drawbacks:
>Debt
>Addiction
>Hive Plague
Companions:
>Melissa, Voracious Devourer
>Decius Amadeo, Oxidized King
>Dark Delver Annalaise
>Orielle, Corpse Witch
Missions:
>Miracle Matter
>To Make A Kingdom
>Kin Slayer
>The Toxic Tongue
>Turf War
>Onward and Upward
Bonus
>NobleBright
Not sure how the NobleBright bonus would fit in given how me and one companion are cannibals and another likes messing around with corpses, but I'll just assume that this'll play into some gallows humor or whatever.

Time to help King Amadeo ascend to the throne. Me and the rest of my motley crew can even act as his entire retinue; me and Melissa as bodyguards, Orielle as the royal physician, and Annalaise can even be the royal bard.

>>54618333

A few, google Knight bros to save the rest — these two are my favorite (and in my opinion, most polished and well done)

>>54618250
>Immortality:
Sacrifice
>Spells:
-1 Perfect Sight
-2 Steel Skin
-2 Boost Strength
-2 Perfect Form
-2 Blink
-2 Haste
-4 Regenerate
-4 Fly
-4 Counterspell
>Enchantments:
Bonus Points
>Drawbacks:
Dogsbody

Just an Adonis tier junior musclewizard, helping out the guy who taught him everything he knows.

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>>54618574
2/4

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>>54618584
3/4

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>>54618600
4/4

>>54618574
>>54618584
>>54618600
>>54618624

Is that even good anime

>>54618696
Yes

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Currently working on a CYOA themed around becoming a fighting game character, and I thought I'd ask her for ideas on perks to help me brainstorm.

Basically, perks are little bennies you can choose; I'm thinking you'll get two or three, but certain backgrounds can give you perks for free, and if you take a disadvantage you get a certain amount of perk choices (or extra skill points, to be assigned to Power, Speed, or Spirit).

So far I have a couple ideas.

Minions - You have a bunch of nameless lackeys who'll do your bidding. They won'g stand up to another Fighter in a fair fight, but you can use them for fodder, cheating, whatever tasks you want.

Wealth - You're rich. You always have money to spend on things you want, with all the benefits that carries. You could even try bribing other competitors, or make friends by throwing some cash around.

Fanclub - You have a fanbase, people who come to all your fights and cheer for you. Their support helps you fill your Spirit meter faster, and if you're close to defeat it may instantly charge

Mark of the Demon - You harness the powers of dark chi, letting you do double damage on all attacks. In exchange, you also take double damage from all attacks.

Those are the ideas I have so far, any more come to mind /tg/?

>>54618696
Sort of, both of the two adaptations have issues, such as one of the episodes in the 2011 version was almost entirely narration despite the fact that there was a battle going on. The story itself though is pretty solid.

>>54618791
too little information to go on. Sounds like a standard cyoa.

develop and come back later

>>54618696
It's a fanwanked anime so you will get either haters or fanboys, so I'd recommend to take a look for it yourself.
I'm on the first group, mostly because how edgy some of the cast was on the few episodes I watched like 10 years go.

>>54596954
I'm going to Nueva Plata to carve out my own nation.
I think I'll align myself with the Templars. As an organization that has recently changed pretty fundamentally, it seems like something that I would be able to subvert at least a part of to my own ends, if their vows would ever prevent me from following my own designs. But protecting the weak and smiting evil are perfectly acceptable strictures.

>>54596979
I get combat training or hardy for free, but I want them both so that's my first skull gone.
Outdoorsman and Athletics also seem pretty necessary for the life of a warrior.
Charming is mandatory for anyone who wants to be more than a lackey. Hypnosis is a better tool in certain other situations as well.
Fortune telling seems like something any wise man can use.

Not going to bother with companions that don't have descriptive titles.

>>54597022
Arsenal to appoint charmed and dominated underlings, magic weapon for me.
Oh, and lackeys because you always need those.
A library and safehouse will make my own fortress, after I build them in the unclaimed (by corvid powers) back country of the new world. This all, of course, is funded by my great wealth.
And with that and my reputation, I will carve a new land.

>>54615198
A roommate is someone who lives with you, it doesn't necessarily mean that they sleep in the same room as you. That would be weird.

>>54615549
You're assuming that teens who haven't taken Human Reproduction know how to use birth control correctly.

>>54619006
Of course a roommate is someone who lives in the same room as you. It's the kind of situation endured by children with siblings, university students, and people in prison. A housemate is different which is why there is a separate word for it.

>>54619028
I've never seen that term used instead of roommate, >>54619006 is correct.

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>>54619028
you high nigga?

>>54619028
Except a housemate isn't a word, people with siblings don't call it a roommate since they're fucking siblings, and people in prison call it a cellmate. A roommate is the person you share rent with, the only one of those situations that it applies to is a university student, since they often rent houses or apartments in groups due to being poor.

>>54619050
Anon, words change their meanings over time.

>>54619050
>occupying
So if I take a gun and enter someone else's domicile with intent to stay there, I become their roommate?

>>54617553
Source:
Biological
>Baby I was born this way.

Mutations:
Ascended Mind
Bioluminescence

Malignancies:
Failing Organs
>It's been working poorly for a long time but it seems like it's finally about ready to give out.

Traits:
Preserved Visage
Craftsman (Pharmaceuticals)
>Learned this to help deal with medical issues stemming from the failing organ.
Survivalist
A Little More
Heightened Senses ("Gut Feeling")
>Actually a psychic 6th sense from Ascended Mind.
Reaction Time
>Good luck getting the drop on me.
Silver Tongue

Drawback:
Debt
>Went a bit into dept aquiring the medicines to deal with my condition before I learned to make them myself. Been slowly paying it off but the person I know is getting impatient.
Public Enemy
>Sold a batch of medicine to a clinic in a settlement and it turned out to be a bad batch. Fishy part is the bad batch described in rumor quite a bit bigger than the one I sold.
Rude Awakening
>How the hell did I get here?!
Hunters Prey
>Ok... some rich sicko really likes the glowy patterns on my skin and wants to strip it off and mount it in a life support tank to use as lighting.

Companions:
Irvine, Penitent Abomination
>She seems like the waifu option that needs a hug the most.
Decius Amadeo, Oxidized King
>This guy(?) seems like he might be able to bring some much needed peace and stability down here.
Orielle, Corpse Witch
>Maybe with her help I can finally get fixed up for good.

Cont.

>>54619090

Missions:
Hunt for the Cure
>I don't really intend to use it for myself but I'm sure I can help alot of people who weren't as fortunate with their mutations.
The Coming Storm
>This bloodshed benefits noone, and hopefully between Irvine's contacts and Decius' and my diplomatic skills it can be averted.
To Make a Kingdom
>I'm really not sure how I feel about those staged disasters but as long as there is little significant or lasting harm done I'll try to see the course through.
Kin Slayer
>I pity these lost souls and hope to bring them peace. I might not be the best suited for killing them but with my senses I can help track them down.
Turf War
>I'm sure we can twist this situation into advancing Decius' plan.
Promised Land
>If this place exists it could have massive implications the plan to unite the settlements. Or it could make a good fallback plan if that doesn't work out.
Onward and Upward
>I would really want to know what's up there, and knowing how to reach the surfice seems useful all around.

Bonuses:
NobleBright
>Yeah, let's make this a little less a struggle for survival and more a grand adventure.

>>54614135

(first part of the build)

I hail from Chauve-Sourispays

I have no affiliation, I'm a lonely hunter who travels constantly from towns to towns, from villages to villages, from hostile places to hostile places. (my build will be some kind similar to a witcher). I am free but my freedom has some cost.

Skills :

Observant (12), nothing can escape my gaze
Athletic (11), my style of fighting is entirely based on agility and dodging, just like the one of the witchers
Combat Training (10), I master the mysterious dance of the sword, a style of fighting that comes from the Far East. My moves are like an hypnotizing and deadly dance (similar to the water dancers' style in GoT). I fight with a thin rapier, a perfectly adapted weapon to touch extremely quickly the vital points of monsters with an extreme precision.
Marksman (9), I addition to my sword, I wear two revolvers at my belt with which I'm particularly skilled.
Outdoorsman (8), As an independent hunter who is perpetually traveling, I have to know well how to survive by my own into the wild.
Thief (7), My childhood in the streets of Jouvence, the capital of Chauve-Sourispays, taught me the art of the pickpockets, which have been extremely useful, and during this period of my life, I created some important contacts with many guilds of thieves in the all continent.
Wordly (6), as a traveler, the reason I chose this skill is obvious.
Forensics (5), As a direct result of my sharp sense of observation, I am an outstanding investigator capable of unraveling the most difficult intrigues.

I'm maybe a lonely hunter who try to never keep any relationship with people I met, unless I think it will be useful in the future, I have to fellow travelers who joined my company in spite of myself :

>>54619111

The first is Rhona, a young woman who admires me since I killed a monster which had slaughtered her family. Without leaving me the choice, she became my disciple. She follow me everywhere and I tried hundreds of time to abandon her but she always found me several days later. So, I accepted her as my apprentice.

The second is Mihail Severin, a mysterious guy I crossed the road and with which I quickly became friend. When he revealed me his true nature, I swore to kill him if he ever lose the control of himself. That was the condition to join me. He accepted. From this day, we lived countless adventures together.

Assets :

Amulet (4), useful for protecting yourself from magic and curses
Gypsy contacts (3), I became one of their allies when I defeated a horde of demons which was threatening their caravan. Now, I'm sure to have friends everywhere on the continent.
Reputation (2), my feats are known from all over the country and I'm even the protagonist of a serie of novels which describe my adventures. (I'm as famous as Geralt is in the world of the Witcher)
Safehouse (1), my own Kaer Morhen.
Library (0)

>>54619050
>North American

So a bunch of ESL Mexicans think a roommate is anyone who lives in the same building as you.

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While doing missions, I decided to update page 5

>>54619080
I am pretty sure it refers to people you share that house/flat with. Technically, family members living in the same house are roommates.

But I like the mental image of a burglar breaking in and then telling some confused, sleepy guy who just got up to check out the noise that they're roommates now.

>>54617553
Boon of Mutation CYOA:
Source of Mutation:
>Gifted
Advancement:
>Insight
Mutations:
>Darksight
>Regeneration
>Ranged Option
>Ascended Mind
>Bioluminescence
>Seer's Gaze
Malignancies:
>Ichor Blood
>Marked One
>Sickly
>Twice as Bright
Traits:
>Preserved Visage
>Accepted Member
>A Little More
>Heightened Senses: Sight
>Silver Tongue
Drawbacks:
>Debt
>Public Enemy
Companions:
>Geo: Colossus of Muscle
Missions:
>The Coming Storm
>Dark Descent
>Survival
>The Toxic Tongue
>Promised Land
>Onward and Upwards
Bonuses:
>Noble Bright

>>54618250
Immortality: Bound
Level 1 Spells: Arcane Bolt, Shield, Perfect Sight
Level 2 Spells: Perfect Form, Haste, Blink, Boost Strength.
Lever3 Spells: Regenerate
Enchantments: Bonus Points
Level 3 Spells: Scry, Blast.
Drawbacks: On-call, Dogsbody.
Enchantment: Apprentice
Level 2 Spell: Invisible.
Gonna go on adventures with my new apprentice waifu..

>>54619350
Where's the rest of this?

>>54618696
Yes it is, this is just full of a shitton of typos though>>54618624
>>54618600
>>54618584
>>54618574
and has not bearing on the show.

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>try to set ammunition as factors of the capacities of the guns that fire it
>get to 9mm
>34 round mags
>13 round mags
>5 round mags
fug

>>54616864
Post war if zodiac brides & fortune cookies fag , I want to post my builds

>>54619509
6-7-8 are not ready yet. I can post 1-4 though.

>>54619930
It looks pretty interesting. I thought I was losing my mind combing the thread for 1-4, though. I'd appreciate seeing the rest if you don't mind.

>>54619930
I would love to see 1-4 as well

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>>54619984
Not everything has flavour text, because its still WIP

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>>54619997
And a taste of page 6 that still lacks proper text and the last mission for the page

>>54619866
Wtf a mage cyoa needs to go so into the gun details as to even make you buy mags.

>>54620129
rescource management is part of the cyoa, not just for ammunition

>>54620129
>Not using magic to enhance your bullets instead of casting fireball so you can economize your mana