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CYOA - No Time For Snacks Edition

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>>54381109
Your thread is bad and you should feel bad.
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>>54381258
Now I feel bad and am a sad panda.
And I'm not even OP.
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>>54382887
You should feel bad for bumping this.
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try again
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>>54381109
> It's gonna outlive the other thread.
Hory Shit.
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How did Pokemon Personified get away with taking over majority of the previous thread before philosophy lmao?
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post builds, maybe even do RP
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>>54387514
PP, Traveller, and some other CYOA have meat we can dig our teeth into, something other CYOA lack enabling them to come out of nowhere and re-dominate a thread every now and again.
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>>54387541
[Post about the Culling]
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Hey bliss, if you're around, how do the stats relate to actual capability, like, what can each class do with their standard stats
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>>54387603
He's refused to elaborate on that ever since the first release.
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>>54381109
Fyi don't let the thread name trick you into fatposting. Fatposting carries a 30 day ban.
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>>54387943
Did you get reeducated, fatposer?
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a cyoa where you design your forced "reeducation" camp for fatties when???
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>>54387967
It was extremely annoying. They kept banning me and I kept appealing, and winning. I'd still keep getting banned for fatposting though. It was very odd as if the mods doing the banning are not the ones reviewing appeals. The annoying part was having to wait 3 days to appeal though. I no longer fatpost now. It's better for my diet anyway. I'm on keto now. I can eat all the protein and fats I want as long as I don't eat carbs. It's great. This morning I ate a plate full of deep fried sausages with mayo.
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>>54388075
I have a dinner suggestion for you ...
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>>54388153
I'm not allowed to post that anymore either. They take away everything I love.
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>>54388200
>I'm not allowed to shitpost anymore
Frankly, I am quite glad about this.
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>>54388075
People always ban what they fear
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>>54388218
It's not shitposting. I just don't like loneliness and silence. Last thread I got that whole pokemon, space and philosophy discussion going and the thread became a lot more active. I just don't want to be alone.
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>>54388218
I liked it
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Any strong reactions to the addition of this to Altering History:

Homeland (free; Shared World Only) You can establish a sanctuary against those that would do you or your people harm. This can only be done in your starting region, or in a new location that is the place in the world where your heart most feels at home. Your sanctified area grows at a rate of one mile per day in all directions, to a maximum of 100 miles. It will not overrun an existing homeland of another player. If you establish a second homeland, the first one shrinks at the same rate as the new one grows.
All players can sense when they are near (a few miles) the homeland of another player. If you enter the homeland of another player then your magic is significantly weakened, and your strength and speed is reduced by one level, to a minimum of 0.
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Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!

Uncensored version:
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>>>/trash/10515443
>>>/trash/10515453
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Uncensored version:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B1CwO4KqTglodHhsOUVqNTFzeWc?usp=sharing
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>>54388328

Uncensored version:
>>>/trash/10515437
>>>/trash/10515443
>>>/trash/10515453
>>>/trash/10515460

Uncensored version:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B1CwO4KqTglodHhsOUVqNTFzeWc?usp=sharing
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>>54388348

Uncensored version:
>>>/trash/10515437
>>>/trash/10515443
>>>/trash/10515453
>>>/trash/10515460

Uncensored version:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B1CwO4KqTglodHhsOUVqNTFzeWc?usp=sharing
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>>54388305
Although that goes great with my original, old elven king in australia build; it does seem to promote passive, defensive play. + what about continental movements and the likes?
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>>54388285
You're the one who's responsible for the thread losing a third of its speed, aren't you? It happens whenever you get banned and can't do that?
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>>54388373

Uncensored version:
>>>/trash/10515437
>>>/trash/10515443
>>>/trash/10515453
>>>/trash/10515460

Uncensored version:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B1CwO4KqTglodHhsOUVqNTFzeWc?usp=sharing
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>>54388375
Good points, though I would point out that 100 mile radius is not a large area. It's not big enough, for example, that you'd really be able to do any of the Quests. It's meant more as a "retreat" option.

I'm still considering it. Trying to come up with the best solution which will allow those that want to be essentially invulnerable to be so, without allowing one unkillable murderhobo to stomp over everyone else's civilizations unstoppably.

As far as continental movement, I can add a line in there easily enough.
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>>54388385
ITS NOT AGAINST THE LAW
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>>54388328
I'm getting way more points than I'm comfortable with.
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>>54388492
Embrace the truth.
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>>54388328
I love your cyoas because they're very generous and rewarding for those of us without a ton of fetishes. In this cyoa for example I can get by with possession from BLUE and maybe a bit of RED. Very manageable.
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>>54388328
Is it normal to possess 90% of those fetishes? Is that intended? Is that why they're so vanilla?
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>>54388565
He ran a poll to gauge the average amount of fetishes people have. This is a blue board. Most votes were in the lowest category, so he balanced around that.
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>>54381105

Had to fix an error Acheld pointed out and made some other pretty big changes.

Sati-Anat

>Time and Place to be Determined by RP World
>Figure of Legend
120
>Wizard
70
>Strength & Speed Level 0
70
>Reflexes & Reaction Level 2
62
>Impervious Level 0
62
>Regeneration Level 1
59
>Non-Reactor
57
>Endurance Level 0
57
>Super Senses Level 2
53
>Diet Level 2
48
>Sanitary Convenience Level 1
46
>Iron Gut
45
>Beauty
43
>Flight Level 1
42
>Mage Eye
41
>Divination, Beastmaster, Blessed One, Stormsage, Spirit Singer, Firedancer, Earthdancer, Winddancer, Waterdancer, Binding, Illusion, Defiling Major
-19
>Teach Minor Divination and Spirit Singer
-24
>Telepathy, Master of Motion, Shapeshifting,Enchanting Minor
-34
>Personal Omni-Wear
-35
>The Slow Pace of History
-20
>Rage
-15
>Weak
-10
>Sorcerer Supreme
Telepathy, Master of Motion, Shapeshifting,Enchanting upgraded to Major
>Multiplayer Build
-0

Sitmut-Nefert's kinder, gentler sister. Ready for magical historical adventures! I'd like to be able to teach even more schools of magic, but I'm not sure what to give up. Since I have lots of other good things for protection, I might drop Regeneration in order to teach Stormsage or something.

>>54383996

Mars returns!

>>54385396

Nice to see someone using their powers for good!
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>>54388520
Just 29, thought worse.

Mainly because there are some of my favorites missing.
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>>54388328
What if the fetishes come and go, anon? Say, if you obsess for a few days over one of these fetishes every year or so?
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>>54387541

Vyora Arfaris

Class
>Sorceress
Attributes
>Str +++
>Def +++++
>Agi ++++ (+++)
>Int ++++++++++ (+++)
>Ski ++++
Blessing
>+1 Skill Point

Skills
Magical
>Catalysts
>Finesse
>Arcane
>Combine
>Barriers
Spiritual
>One With Nature
>Poisons
>Bloodlust
>Bindings
>Soul Spirit
Ethereal
>Indomitable
>Recall
>Pocketing
>Blessed
>Unleash
>Healing
>Wings

Monsters
>Arachnid 20
>Wolf 40
>Cerberus 70

Persona
>Age 5 (22yo)
>Beauty 10
Resources
>Library 20
>Alchemy 30
>Training 35
>Scavenging 40
>Map 45
>Bounty 50
>Low 70

Adventure with group more than alone. I can use Healing, Barriers, and Bindings to help the party. For fighting I mostly spam arcane bolt type stuff from the air. I can also make potions at the alchemy to help party out or to sell and trade.
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>>54388328
>>54388601
I'm at 72. Is that good?
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>>54388328
>incest is a black fetish
I'm actually triggered.
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>>54388328
Do I receive points if your CYOA just gave me a new fetish?
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>>54388328
>pee is a black fetish
I'm actually triggered.
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>>54388492
>I'm getting way more points than I'm comfortable with.
Embrace your deviancy anon!

>>54388605
>What if the fetishes come and go?
Hard question, doesn't happen to me, take points for what you are comfortable on taking points for and use your conssion I guess.

>>54388664
>I'm at 72. Is that good?
Very good, but your not quite at my level yet. Keep fapping tho and you will get there.

>>54388676
>incest is a black fetish
I like incest, but technically black fetishes are suppose to be taboo fetishes and incest is pretty taboo.

>>54388677
>Do I receive points if your CYOA just gave me a new fetish?
Yes
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>>54387541
>post builds, maybe even do RP
Shieeeeet. I was going to but Tok posted OC. Next time.

>>54388328
Sweet. Release the beast. Build soon.
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>no cyoa about being anon's girlfriend
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>>54388328
How do I make futanaris in this?
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>>54388855
Becoming one or turning others into them?
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>>54388918
Turning others.
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>>54388855
>How do I make futanaris in this?
Green eromancy: Transform
Black Eromancy: Curse
Purple Eromancy: Parasite

If you want yourself to become a futa, you can just get pretty much any "Girl option" in the corruption section.
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>>54388328
>tfw your top fetishes didn't make the cut.
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>>54388930
>>54388960

Beaten to the punch by author.
Also wasn't sure if Transform worked, but apparently it does.
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>>54388960
Thanks, my man.
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>>54388779
>taboo fetishes
Where do you live that only the black fetishes are taboo. Also, what the fuck is wormhole supposed to be.
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>>54388328
not gonna lie, a little disappointed.
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>>54389106
I hoped for something bigger as well. WAY bigger.
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>>54389140
I just sort of expected that the fetishes would actually impact you and you could live out fantasies. I don't really care for these powers.
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>>54389140
That's what I expect my woman to say should I ever get one.
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>>54389089
>what the fuck is wormhole supposed to be.
Its when you have a portal in like a onahole and fuck the onahole and the portal leads to a girls pussy so when you fuck the onahole you fuck the girl essentially.


>>54389106
>not gonna lie, a little disappointed.
What was disappointing?
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>>54389204
The system it works in feels needlessly complex and convoluted, and the powers connected to them also feel overly confusing.

It's not that your CYOA's are by any means bad, they just feel difficult to 'break into'. Maybe I'm just dumb.
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>>54389204
Someone just shared me a vid of irl nipplefuck on Facebook.
I blame your influence.


On the up side, now i know that you're the real deal tho.
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>>54389204
>What was disappointing?
I can only talk for myself, but I expected more depth, I guess.
Also, meaningful ways to interact with the world at large. Like, some kind of goal or even just people that I could fuck with.
It's probably just that my expectations were different, because I expected lewd necromancer and not super sex magic turbo edition.
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>>54389325
Post link on /trash/ sister thread.
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>>54388328
Yellow Points
>6
Green Points
>3
Blue Points
>3
Purple Points
>12
Pink Points
>4
Red Points
>9
Black Points
>6

Primary (Purple)
Secondary (Red)

Mana Regeneration: Abyssal Summoner and Mana Leech

Purple Spells
>Summon Tentacle (Upgrade)
>Incubate (Upgrade)
>Spawn Monster (Upgrade)
>Spawn Parasite

Red Spells
>Drain Strength (Upgraded)
>Bind (Upgraded)
>Hex

Boons
>Immortality
>Mana Conduit
>Mana Resrvoir

Purple Corruption
>Corruption
>Eldritch Dreams
>Summon

Red Corruption
>Sadist
>Rapist

Well, I guess now I just have to go find magical girls and I'll fully transform into a hentai villain.
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>>54389204
>>54389411
I support this anon's summary.
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>>54388328
Yellow: 0
Green: 1
Blue: 5
Purple: 2
Pink: 12
Red: 9
Black: 1

Primary: Pink
Secondary: Red

Mana Regen: Divine Radiance (Pink)

Pink: Summon Deity (1). What is she like anon?
Pink: Empower (Upgraded Bind from the red school) (10)

I have several points left so might as well grab immortality.

I have to spend 6 pink corruption points, so my deity is a Sadist (1), I'm her slave (3), she likes denial (5), and she's a yandere (7). Is going over in this section bad? It talks about hitting the minimum but not a maximum.

This was really cute, thanks for sharing friendo.
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>>54389204
Arbitrary distinction between fetishes, for one. As an example, my biggest kink is watersports, which is black. But that's my only black kink, which means if I want to buy the spell that makes people piss themselves then that's all I get for one of my two schools. And I have to become a cannibal or undead.
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>>54389204
Not the anon you're replying to, but it bothers me that my biggest fetish is not only not represented, but the section that represents it most closely has nothing to do with it.

Fetish being pregnancy.
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>>54389277
>Its very complex
I know, I have been heading in that direction with my CYOAs since people say they like my build heavy CYOAs. Some people like you didn't like Infected becouse it was so complex and confusing. I will do a strawpool to when Eronomicon has been out for a while to see if how well received the Eronomicon and Infected were and if I should try and make simpler CYOAs or if I should keep doing complex CYOAs.

>>54389325
>irl nipplefuck on Facebook.
SAUCE!
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>>54389528
Impregnation is yellow.
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>>54389556
I know, but none of the yellow abilities have anything to do with it.

Also, it has impregnation and hyper pregnancy, but not regular pregnancy. Which is just weird.
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>>54388328
>>54388348
>>54388373
>>54388391
Censoring this masterpiece
You disgust me TokHaar
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>>54389504
Anon get the Boon:Hidden Power
or
Get Pink Eromancy and get the spell: Divine Gift

>>54389528
Well there where like 90+ fetishes and I could not do every fetish justice.
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>>54389578
*Edit* No you already disgusted me so this would be.. You, got more pure?...
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>>54389599
Well, it's not so much that it's not included. It's that it is, effectively, included but then the actual spells in that section have nothing to do with it.

Don't get me wrong, I love the CYOA and made a build >>54389448 that I'm very happy with. It just strikes me as odd the way you have yellow set up.
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>>54389578
>Censoring this masterpiece
>You disgust me TokHaar
Not every man is brave enough to gaze upon the true Eronomicon and behold its terrible wonders.
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>>54389204
>was disappointing?
I thought the spells would be more like 'power related to fetish' than just straight up 'spell that fulfills your fetish'.
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>>54387541
eyyy Kids wanna climb some mountains?
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>>54388328

Yellow 1
Green 2
Blue 1
Purple 3
Pink 5
Red 2
Black 0

>Primary School Pink
5 Points
>Divine Radiance
Mana Regeneration
>Summon Deity Upgraded
3
>Empower Upgraded (Summon Tentacles Upgraded and Incubate Upgraded)
1
>Power Word Stop
0

>Secondary School Green
2 Points
>One with Nature
Mana Regeneration
>Shrink
1
>Enlarge
0

>Boons
7 Points
>Immortality
2
>Embrace Corruption
0

>Corruption
3 Pink, 1 Green, 5 Any Color
>Nymphomaniac
1 Pink
>Orgasm Denial
3 Pink
>Fairy Rapists
2 Green
>Elf Girl
1 Colorless
>Magical Wardrobe
2 Colorless
>Mana Tanks
4 Colorless
>Spirited Away
5 Colorless

>Be sexy elf
>Live in the forest
>Be sex slave of beautiful nature Goddess
>Giant boobs, fairies, tentacles and eggs
Unf.
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>>54389709

I chose Shrink and Enlarge so fairies can be human size and go back to normal, but if they can do that themselves, then I'll probably take Invigorate Upgraded instead, which is what I had anyway before looking at the corruption section.
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>>54387541
Strength 1 (8)
Defense 2
Agility 4 (10)
Intelligence 3 (7)
Skill 5 (7)

Class
-Noble

Blessing(Stat points for Agility, Intelligence, and Skill)

Skills
Physical
-Tempered
-Willpower
-Enhanced
-Overdrive
Magical
-Catalysts
-Arcane
-Blink
-Mana Sphere
Weaponry
-Bladed Arms
-Stamina
-Marksmanship
-Overcharge
-Blunt Arms
-Enchantment
Ethereal
-Indominable
-Pocketting

Licenses
-Ruins
--/w Twilight
-Glacial

Resources
-Forge
-Library
-Alchemy
-Market
-Healing
-Scavenging
-Map
-Club
-Bounty
-Low
-Training
-Campsite

Kind of a hit and run expert with a specialty for high end gear.
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>>54389544
>>54389447

>>/trash/10516522
Dunno if I am linking this properly
Whatever
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>>54389801
Of course I am not, I wouldn't be a giant faggot otherwise
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>>54388328
Do green fetishes count if you're not transforming someone to have them? E.g., if I just like amazons does that count as gigantism and muscle growth or does that only count if I fantasize about turning someone into an Amazon?
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>>54389801
You need a third > for cross-board links.
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>>54389801
You need three maymay mouths for other boards.
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>>54388328
>can't become a lich girl unless you're mentally fucked enough to benefit from picking black magic
>can't become a lich guy at all
nani
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>>54389709

Oops. Only get Divine Radiance for Mana Regeneration. One With Nature has to go.
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>>54389930
You can embrace corruption and then grab it
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>>54389544
Okay?

I was just saying why I didn't like it, not that you should change it.
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>>54388328
>78 points
I am one with the filth of the earth
also if i take internal ley lines and mana tanks what happens
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>>54390281
wait, does that allow you to get only one black point and 4 of the other colors? Because having to take any of the other black corruption traits would be pretty terrible desu.
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>>54389656
Tok. Come to the fucking discord regularly so I can discuss my fetishes with you, have you realize I'm the stronger one, then we can fight to the death.
It'll be great!
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>>54388328

Pls provide input on builds and answer questions Tok;_;
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>Start working on CYOA again
>Next part of the CYOA is a really boring part to make and also hard to write well
>Can't just skip it because it's an important part
This is what I get for prioritizing looks
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>>54388328
I knew without even looking Green would be my favorite school.

Why is it always green?
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>>54390744
>Pls provide input on builds and answer questions Tok;_;
No! it's time to fap now! I have seen several good builds I need to fap to!

Also updated Eronomicon 2 times, the newest version can be found on my google drive.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B1CwO4KqTglodHhsOUVqNTFzeWc?usp=sharing

>Changelog
>Enslave: Before you diden't needyour slaves to wear the collars, u just needed to equip the collar and then you could remove it, it has now been fixed
>Spawn Parasite and Monster: before they had the Requirement: Oviposition, this is a type since I called Incubate Oviposition and I forgot to change it when I released Eronomicon.
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>>54390766
Holy shit, I take that back. I'm Yellow. God fucking damnit, I don't even like math
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>>54388328
>Blatantly lewd CYOA with cropped porn is allowed on /tg/
>The entire thread becomes about the cropped porn CYOA
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>>54390860

Can fairies change to human size and back on their own, or do I need to take shrink and enlarge spells to help them?
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>>54390745
>Making cyoas in sections instead of writing everything first

Eww lad
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>>54390924
Oh shut up and enjoy it Magnus.
You discount ketchup fuck.
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>>54390860
Which build are you gonna masturbate to the most?
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>>54390926
It's already planned out, I have to fit everything into text boxes in the CYOA
The form determines the text, not the other way around. That's how you get stupidly misshapen text boxes
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>>54390710
pretty sure it's any color you want
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>>54390926
>instead of writing everything first
How would you even do that? Write a bunch of text then in editing try to group them thematically?
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>>54390982
>The form determines the text, not the other way around

I hate this standard
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>>54388328
I have a very even spread of points and the way you spread out fetishes feels arbitrary. It wouldn't be bad if you didn't also force me to choose only small parts of what I like while forsaking the rest.

This CYOA is one of those that seems like a great idea for the first two minutes and then ends up being completely worthless for me.
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>>54390982
Misshapen text boxes are a more than acceptable price for good content instead of having too little space to say what you want in one box and needing to overinflate the text of another.
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>>54391033
Not him, but I write CYOAs like this basically

Here's one I never had the will to finish despite being quite well developed:

https://pastebin.com/RircKvuS
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>>54391166
Right, that's more or less what I envisioned, but you still have it separated into sections like Race and Class. Just for pure organizational purposes, for thought and content. I don't know how you'd avoid that the way >>54390926 is implying.
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>>54388328
The upgraded Normalify reads the same as the regular one. Am I missing something here?
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>>54391236
unupgraded merely makes people overlook lewd acts like fingering some random lady on the train, whereas upgraded will make them ignore anything from murder to bank robbing
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>>54390924

It lets me be a sexy elf and frolic in the forest with the fae.
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>>54389709
>pink
>5
wawawewa

>>54390860
show us your magic powerlevel
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>>54391056
You're welcome to have ugly half finished text boxes in your CYOA you know
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>>54391336

What's funny about having 5 in Pink? I don't have very many points compared to most.
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>>54388328
Yellow: 4
Green: 1
Blue: 10
Purple: 0
Pink: 0
Red: 10
Black: 5

Red (Primary) (10)
Mana Leech
>Drain Stength Upgraded (8)
>Enslave (7)
>Bind Upgraded (5)
>Enforce Law Upgraded (3)
>Hex Upgraded (1)
Black (Secondary)
>Soul Drain Upgraded (3)
>Raise Dead Upgraded (1)

Boons (17)
>Signature Spell (Drain Strength) (7)
>Power of Corruption (2)
>Embrace Corruption (0)

Corruption
Red (5)
>Tyrant (3)
>Rapist (1)
>Sadist (0)
Black (2)
>Bloodlust (0)
Other (5)
>Magomaniac (4)
>Cannibal (2)
>Mana Tanks (0)


Final Mana pool: 35
I shall drain all of the strength I can, before and after every sexual encounter. Using this strength, as well as all of the other powers I had obtained, I shall reshape this world into my image. Unfortunately, there is but one obstacle preventing me from doing so, and said obstacle is two part.
Most of my desires are not lewd, and most spells require some level of lewdness.
However, I will persevere. Already I have thought of ways around it. Laws to humiliate the undesirables, hexes on those who I feel most deserve it, an army of the dead raised to destroy my many opponents, and strength drain, my bread and butter, to smash all who dare to come close.
Of course I will have my detractors, such as victims of my recharging and those affected, but to achieve utopia, to bring forth my dreams for the world into reality, some sacrifices have to be made. In the end, what my detractors say won't matter, for the rest of the world will benefit from the fruits of my labor, from my generosity.
In the end, they will thank me for it.
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>>54388840
>keep the door closed
What's the worst that could happen?
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>>54388328
Shrink and enlarge seem like the designated upgrade is the basic thing and the basic thing would be the actual upgrade

Like, making someone's boobs dick or ass bigger is nowhere near the either fetish power or the immense physical power of turning them into godzilla size
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>>54391649
Then you don't understand how the fetishes work.
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>>54388840
I recognize that demon awoo
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>>54391673
Pot, meet kettle

Most people would have absolutely no sexual use for making people bigger or smaller but making boobs bigger is something almost anyone with a breast fetish, a very common fetish, would thrive with

So yeah, I think you don't get how the fetishes work
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>>54388328
First build, here we go.

>Fetishes
Yellow- 12
Green- 5
Blue- 2
Purple- 1
Pink- 2
Red- 8
Black- 1
Total: 31

>Primary School
Yellow
Spells: Upgraded Charm, Upgraded Liquid Production, Upgraded Add Flavor, Normalify, Upgraded Heighten Libido, Heighten Sensitivity
10 spent, 21 left

>Secondary School
Green
Spells: Upgraded Invigorate, Transform, Upgraded Enlarge
5 spent, 17 left

25 total mana

>Mana Regeneration
Mana Potion

>Boons
Discrete Spellcasting
Immortality
Runic Trap

Hoo boy, this is where it gets tough.
>Corruption
Yellow (5 corruption points)- Flasher, Slut, Urges, Random Orgasms
Ouch
Green (3 corruption points)-Random Transformation, Nature Spirits

I can optimize my Green allocation if Liquid Production has built-in expansion, removing my need for an Upgraded Enlarge. Swelling isn't necessarily expansion. I'd prefer to just have Upgraded Invigorate and Transform, allocating those extra points towards better boons.
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>>54391722
Well that's what I mean. I assumed it would lock the more desirable option behind the upgrade because it makes the upgrade more desirable than the base. Hence it being an upgrade.
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>>54391628
Sauce me damnit. All the reverse searches failed me.
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>>54391787
Seems the other way around to me; the basic option should be the more common one, especially since it's practically infinitely less powerful
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What if B is not for Beri?
What if B is for Bernie?
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>>54381109
Which cyoa has the best villains?
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>>54388328
Yellow: 0
Green: 6
Blue: 6
Purple: 1
Pink:7

Primary: Green
Secondary: Blue

Mana Regen: Shapeshifter

Green Spells
Shrink
Enlarge
Gender Swap
Upgraded Transform

Blue Spells
Upgraded Spatial Manipulation
Electrolyze

Boons
Immortality
Signature Spell (Upgraded Transform)

Green Corruption
Random Transformation
Fairy Rapists

Blue Corruption
Elf Girl
Magomaniac

Shapeshifting, teleportation and erotic lightning bolts. With these i can minimize all the downsides of corruption and they're useful enough to be used for non lewd things and general quality of life improvements.
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>>54387565
[posts about how you are totally wrong about the culling and your build is shit]
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>>54391922
>villains whose motives are harder to find fault in

>Griffith
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>>54391922
the so called top tier here is trash, because it ruins the story due to complete immersion break when you're forced to do things you disagree with

the best villain is the sort of villain who wants to save the world just like the hero does, they are just at odds because of difference of method or context
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>>54381109
Are text-only CYOAs okay?
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>>54387943
What the hell did I miss with fatposting?
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>>54392024
won't get much response, you should throw a few images in without bothering to get super autistic about the layout and aesthetics
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>>54390925
>Can fairies change to human size and back on their own, or do I need to take shrink and enlarge spells to help them?
Any spell with an "enchanting effect" can be removed if you wish, so yes.

>>54390963
>Which build are you gonna masturbate to the most?
I enjoyed this build quite a lot, Purple is my favorite school and this build had a lot of purple spells. Even though the build was invalid since it didn't have Incubate it was quite enjoyable.
>>>/trash/10516988
>>>/trash/10517030

>>54391336
>Show us your lewd magic powerlevel
Eight it's 8, but it's sideways like this ∞
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>>54392025
There was a mod who was justifiably disgusted with the fatposter but unjustly abused his power and kept banning him, so the fatposter ended up banned for three days every time until he could appeal and get the ban rescinded by other mods
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>>54392024
Here's your answer.
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Did zodiac brides get an update recently?
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>>54392077
>doesn't want to tell
Coward

I bet you can't get 14 in even a single category
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>>54392024
if theyre short and I'm bored maybe, not gonna read it if it's 15 pages or longer (6 if the introduction sucks)
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>part of eronomicon is that anons from the thread get to pick pink player's deity
>no one is doing that
Interactive options with anons in the thread are always fun and novel, I want to see it happen!
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>>54392025
>>54392085
Avatars are against 4chan rules. Don't use avatars, kiddies.
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>>54392077
I don't understand why I'm pretty much alone in this thread for purple.

I also don't know why someone wouldn't take incubate. That's literally the best part of purple.
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>>54392126
SDA would have been gone a long time ago if that were the case

Naw man, obviously some mod just has a grudge against the absolute bottom rung trash tier mindset the fatposter was bragging about having all the time here
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>>54392085
Well, that mod is a shithead and shouldn't missuse his power to censor shit he doesn't like.
thanks for the story tho anon
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>>54392148

I didn't take purple as a school, but I gave purple spells including incubate to my deity. >>54389709
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>>54388457
For a second I thought that was a brown goat licking someones ass...
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>>54392148
>I don't understand why people don't like purple.
I know right!
>I also don't know why someone wouldn't take incubate. That's literally the best part of purple.
It is the best part of purple.
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>>54392148
i took incubate
>>10516830
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>>54388328

Yellow: 2
Green: 7
Blue: 3
Purple: 2
Pink: 3
Red: 2
Black: 0


Primary
>Green

Secondary
>Yellow

Mana Regen.
>One with nature

Green spells
>Shrink (+)
>Enlarge (+)
>Transform (+)
>Alter age

Yellow spells
>Charm (+)

Boons
>Immortality
>Discrete Spellcasting

Green Corruption
>Plant girl (image related)
>Mental change
>Fairy Rapists

Yellow Corruption
>Slut


Three questions though:

1. If I had a large garden (600+ m2) / lived on a countryside, would that also activate the 'one with nature' regen?

2. Does being pollinated by bees count as rape?

3. What effects do bees have on plant girls?
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>>54392221
I will say this about incubate. It's a shame the girls just lay the eggs and then they hatch, instead of whatever thing they're breeding actually living inside them for a time.
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>>54387541
>>54387562
>>54387585
>Class
Hunter
>Blessing
+3 Intelligence

>Stats
Strength:3
Defense: 4
Agility: 5
Intelligence: 7
Skill: 4

>Skills
>Physical
T1-Toughness (+def)
T2-Willpower
T3-Sixth Sense
>Magical
T1-Catalyst (+skill)
T1-Fire
T1-Water
T2-Arcane (+int)
T3-Combine (+int)
T3-Blink
>Spiritual
T1-One with Nature (+def)
T2-Monster Within
T3-Fleet Footed
T3-Hybrid
T4-Incarnation
>Weaponry
T1-Marksman (+agi)
T2-Enchantment (+int)
>Ethereal
T1-Indomitable (+str)
T1-Pocketing

>Licences (6 Threat, 50 Tribute total)
Ancient Plains (3 Threat, 25 Tribute)
Twilight Forest (3 Threat, 25 Tribute)

>Persona
Visitor (20)
>Resources
Library (10)
Market (10)
Bounty (5)
>5 leftover Tribute

I'm here to hunt beasts and travel the wilds, not hunt people. There is no point to hunting people, and you cant really get any good resources from their bodies that wouldn't be better when taken from a beast
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>>54392154
>if that were the case
That is literally the case. Rules are enforced as the gods decide. SDA has contributed to the thread and is a shitposter. Fatposter is just a shitposter.
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>>54392233
>If I had a large garden (600+ m2) / lived on a countryside, would that also activate the 'one with nature' regen?
Unless it looks like this (pic related), I would say no.
>Does being pollinated by bees count as rape?
No
>What effects do bees have on plant girls?
They will pretty much do whatever bees do with normal plants.
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>>54392261
you say that, but you haven't purchased 'exempt'
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>>54392315
Whoops, I was working with an older version that didn't have the stipulation for Culling in Visitor. brb fixing
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>>54392294
You're actually agreeing with me in the first half of your post, but your conclusion is wrong - being a shitposter was not the reason fatposter was banned, it was the excuse for it

The same would likely be true if SDA were banned
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>>54392314
Tok, does Upgraded Liquid Production have an expansion aspect, beyond just "swelling"? Or are we relegated to Upgraded Growth for that little kink?
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>>54388328
>>54388348
>>54388373
>>54388391
https://youtu.be/rYE84KgOPXY
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>>54392315
>>54392335
Luckily, the older version had Visitor cost 20 instead of 15, so justget rid of Visitor, and spend that along wth the 5 remaining points to get Exempt
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>>54388849
...
If you make it, you can become my sweetheart.
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>>54388849
why the fuck would you want to
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>>54392393
>Does Upgraded Liquid Production have an expansion aspect, beyond just "swelling"? Or are we relegated to Upgraded Growth for that little kink?
Well the swelling will continue if person is not milked, so it's defiantly a kind of breast expansion but the person can always milk themselves to reduce the size so it's a weaker breast expansion then upgraded enlarge.
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>>54392362
>being a shitposter was not the reason fatposter was banned
>, it was the excuse for it
THEN THAT WAS THE REASON HE WAS BANNED, YOU FUCKING IDORT.
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>>54392523
avatarfagging, he used the same "person" in his pics
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>>54392481
I like reading your posts all day, I think you're funny and we obviously share some hobbies, so naturally I would fantasize about actually spending time with you.
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>>54392551
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>>54391992
>be young mercenary with a dream
>want to make the world a better place together with your comrades
>even go so far as to sell yourself to disgusting old men to keep your friends fed and happy
>things are going great when suddenly your soulmate abandons you
>you pull a risky move and sleep with the princess you have been courting for months to distract yourself from the betrayal
>the king turns out to be an incestual lunatic and has you imprisoned
>spend the next year being tortured, disfigured, crippled and raped until your "friends" get their shit together and come save you
>about the time you realize the full damage done to you you also discover that the one person you loved is cuckolding you
>flee the scene only to be pulled into hell by a bunch of demon gods with your comrades
>they offer you ultimate power and the ability to realize your longheld dream which was now shattered
>they ask for the souls of the comrades who pledged their life to you
>if you refuse you'd all be killed
>you accept
>almost all your comrades die
>you become a demon god
>you enact your revenge on the ones who cuckolded you and set out to turn the world into an utopia

How is this a "villain"?
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>>54392089
>Did zodiac brides get an update recently?
>zodiac brides
>update
First of all, no.
Second, what exactly would I even add in an update besides fixing typos and fixing B-03 so it doesn't extend your life when you'll be immortal eventually anyway?
I did bring up that I'm considering making a Lore Companion Piece a couple threads back to expand the setting, history, and Noble Houses a bit though. But that would only be after I finish Guardian Spirit and the Mad Scientist CYOA I'm planning on making after it...
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>>54391856
He does kind of look like he's made of jelly...
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>>54392580
still waiting on that necromancer build senpai
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>>54392519
And you are able to reverse an enlargement without shrink, right?
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>>54388200
Change one letter in the file name. Maybe one pixel in the image itself too.
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>>54392577
Some people just can't accept that if you promise your life to someone then they'll have right to use it as a stepping stone to their goals.
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>>54392523
Anon, I think you're clinically retarded. Go open a a dictionary or something.
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>>54392148
I'm still writing my Purple/Green build, but I'm going to post it on the other side do to maximum over lewd.
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>>54392622
I'm literally doing it right now, sorry for the wait buddy.
Just give me a few.
And I need to make an Eronomicon build right afterward because I love Tok and I want to see how vanilla I truly am.
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>>54392294
I am also cute, so there's that.
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>>54392126
You don't get banned for avatarposting anymore, and fatposter wasn't avatarposting anyway.
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>>54392580
I actually hated that setting so much because harem that a few days ago I dreamed I was the ruler of an opposing empire who invaded and conquered the zodiac throne while all the nobles where playing their harem battle game.

My empire was based on the chinese zodiac and was ruled by a rotating system of primus inter pares (YEAR OF THE ... ). It wasn't "my empire" actually. But it was my turn to be in charge because it was my year.

I forgot all about it until your post just now. Pretty cool.
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>>54392577
>>54392577
and where does raping a girl in front of the man she loves fall into that?
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>>54392694
Clone yourself and give me one, cutie.
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>>54392730
>I actually hated that setting so much
Oh...
Okay...
I'm sorry you didn't lie it.
I'll try harder next time.
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>>54392751
>hero cuckolds villain: all is fine
>villain cuckolds hero in retaliation: REEEEEE EVIL EVIL EVIL WHY DID YOU DO THAT?!!!
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>>54392710
Aqua likely got banned for avatarposting.
>>
I don't like how half the -girl corruptions are hidden immortality options while the other half are just visual fluff changes
>>
Have the new mods effectively ruined these threads?

I remember it being much more humorous
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>>54392577
> things are going great when suddenly your soulmate abandons you
If they were soulmates, then why did Griffith fail to notice that Guts was seriously unhappy?

> the one person you loved is cuckolding you
> you enact your revenge on the ones who cuckolded you
Griffith wasn't in a relationship with either of them.

> they ask for the souls of the comrades who pledged their life to you
They were willing to risk their lives in battle. That isn't the same thing as being willing to guaranteed be slaughtered. Becoming a soldier is not consent to being straight up murdered.
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>>54392824
>my life belongs to you
>reeeeeeeee dont sacrifice my life!!!
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>>54392796
> hero cuckolds villain
Literally didn't happen.
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>>54392649
>Some people just can't accept that if you promise your life to someone then they'll have right to use it as a stepping stone to their goals.
Fug, never thought about it like that.
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>>54388328
Yellow: 6
Green: 0
Blue: 6
Purple: 7
Pink:3
Red: 8
Black: 1

Primary: Red
Secondary: Purple
Mana Regeneration: Mana Leech

Red Spells
>Drain Strength Upgraded
>Enslave Upgraded
>Bind
>Hex

Purple Spells
>Summon Tentacles
>Incubate Upgraded
>Spawn Parasites Upgraded (Vampire Girl)
>Spawn Monster Upgraded

Boon
>Embrace Corruption (+1 Red corruption, +3 Black corruption, +1 Yellow corruption)

Red Corruption
>Vamp Girl
>Sadist
>Tyrant

Purple Corruption
>Living Clothes
>Eldritch Dreams
>Corruption

Black Corruption
>Sinister Aura
>Death's Whore
>Embrace Madness

Yellow Corruption
>Random Orgasms

It's a little concerning to see how degenerate I am in text. Now as self proclaimed Queen of the Vampires, I can enjoy raping who I wish at my leisure once I've taken some unwanted NEET's home for myself. I'll keep a stable of victims as blood dolls/monster/parasite farms and offer Vampirism to my favorites. Not that they'll have choice.

I'm thinking monster dogs to watch the place during the day and bat shaped parasites to keep the vampire theme going.

I'd have loved to be summoned as a familiar so I could bring my love another world but that's only for Eldritch girls. I'm sure I'll catch one of you world hopping deviants and have you carry a few of my children around for me.
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>>54392631
Yes, you can reverse any spell effect that is similar to an enchantment.

>>54392664
I look forward to inspecting your build.
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>>54388328
>yellow - deviantart
>green - furaffinity
>blue - wizardchan
>purple - google searches starting with "H."
>pink - tumblr
>red - fetlife
>black - fbi.gov
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>>54392824
>Guts unhappy
He was unhappy for ridiculous reasons and due to his own insecurity. He became unhappy in the span of 5 minutes too. Then decided to autistically abandon Griffith while refusing to tell him the true reason or look for a solution.

>not in a relationship
It's still understandably extremely emotionally taxing to see the person you love find love with someone else while you were being tortureraped and crippled for a year, turned into a husk of your former self.

>pledged lives
This >>54392848
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>>54392817
These threads are no meant to be humorous. They're meant to have choose your own adventures. Take your funposting elsewhere.
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>>54392903
>extremely emotionally taxing to see the person you love find love with someone else

You must have got the shit cucked out of you through your school years.
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>>54392789
why are you such a beta, holy shit
He's basically saying he just doesn't like what the cyoa sets out to do. If someone dislikes your waifu cyoa because its about waifus, will you apologize? There's no reason to try to satisfy everyone, because it's impossible, you dork
That's almost as pathetic as that guy dreaming about a cyoa he doesn't like and deciding to post about it.
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>>54392848
>>54392903
Being willing to go onto a battlefield under another person's command is not the same thing as being willing to let that person kill you outright. Being a soldier contains a risk of death, yes, but it is just that. A risk, not a guarantee. For example, signing up to join the army means that while the state can put you in danger since that is a required part of war and soldiering, it's not okay for them to just murder you.
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>>54392942
It's a joke, not your gay porn audition.
Don't take it so seriously.
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>>54392848
It was more in the sense that they trusted him as a leader. Feeding them to demons was not in their mercenary contract.
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>>54392903
> He was unhappy for ridiculous reasons and due to his own insecurity.
You mean kind of like getting supper salty about someone walking away from you because they're unhappy with the direction that you're taking them? Or perhaps getting angry that someone who isn't in a relationship with you and in fact has not seen you for a year is in a loving relationship with someone else?
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>>54388391
You should add at least another page's worth of corruptions.
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>>54392972
> his gay porn audition
>not a joke
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>>54392951
Except it totally is okay, they just don't outright say it is, but we all know the truth, anon.
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>>54392980
ah, but you see, it wasn't TRUE Griffithism.

so it doesn't count.
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>>54392972
Jokes are supposed to be funny, you know.
No, being pathetic is not funny by itself.
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>>54392848
>>54392903
Even if you want to be absolutely 100% strict about that, they didn't pledge their souls to him. They weren't just killed, their souls were all permanently and irrevocably damned to hell because of what Griffith did. Not a single one of them consented to that.
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>>54392942
Fuck you it was a cool dream. Imagine a glorious magitech empire ruled by a Zodiac style council kind of like in HunterxHunter. The Dog Zodiac being in charge of healthcare, medicine, etc. It was an entirely meritocratic society too. The leader of the cover ops/intelligence would become the Snake Zodiac. Etc.

It was in many ways the opposite of the original Zodiac world. I think we were on bad terms with them for centuries now because of the Zodiac King's insistence on calling himself the "King" of Zodiacs.
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>>54388328
Yellow: 10
Green: 3
Blue: 10
Purple: 6
Pink: 6
Red: 12
Black: 5

Total: 52

Primary: Red (6)
Mana Regeneration: Power of Dominance
Spells:
Bind (Upgraded)
Enforce Law (Upgraded)
Enslave (Upgraded)
Summon Succubus (Upgraded)

Secondary: Yellow
Normalify (Upgraded)

Boons:
Embrace Corruption
UNLIMITED POWER

Corruption:
Yellow: Flasher
Purple: Corruption, Eldritch Girl
Red: Kinky Wardrobe, Sadist, Tyrant
Black: Sinister Aura
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>>54392942
Calm thy raging tits, Anon.
I honestly don't really give a shit, I just like to playfully respond to nonconstructive criticism and whining by being over dramatic.
Do you really think I can seriously be swayed so easily by people on this board after all the stupid shit I've caused.
Lighten up, my friend.
Life's a meaningless series of inconsequential bullshit, the least we can do is try to have some fun with it!
>>54393033
>being pathetic is not funny
You and I have a very different sense of humor.
>>54393047
I actually thought the dream sounded cool.
Let me know if you ever want to do a colab CYOA based around Zodiac and your dream kingdom going to war.
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>>54393002
Burgers might do that sort of thing, but that doesn't make it okay.
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>>54392980
Rather like sperging out on a crippled torture victim whose entire has been manipulated and guided by a personification of evil and fate because he fell for the plans they carefully set in motion centuries ago.

Griffith never stood a chance. Even his comrades were just more pawns who had been carefully planned to be included into his life so they could be sacrificed.

Lorewise there's less than 10 people in the Berserkverse with free will anyway.
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>>54392888
tok, buddy, your CYOA is missing some extremely essential things. For example, you get no power from being into vanilla/romance/handholding. Also, aren't the black powers a bit /too/ different? I mean, making people shit themselves and sexual voodoo are leagues apart.
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>>54393096
>Do you really think I can seriously be swayed so easily by people on this board after all the stupid shit I've caused.
I certainly still can. Tell me your secrets.
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>>54393096
I'd prefer it if you spent more time working on your cyoas and less time bickering with all your haters ZBG.

But eh whatever, you do what you want to do.
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Guys, the reading are off the fucking charts in here.
What did the handbook say to do in case of this?
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>>54393121
> Rather like sperging out on a crippled torture victim
Guts, Casca, and the hawks didn't "sperg out" on him when he was a crippled torture victim. Guts didn't hate him until after he was uncrippled, sacrificed the hawks, and raped Casca.
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>>54393170
And killed his unborn child with demon semen.
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>>54388328
>>54388348
>>54388373
>>54388391
>tfw 30 fetish points
Only want 6 spells though. The rest seem meh.
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quick, post CYOA author waifu CYOAs!
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Jumping in the middle of the thread to show the new WIP piece of shit I dreamt up.

Anything you think I missed or should add? Obvious spelling mistakes someone with two brain cells to rub together would've caught before typing that drivel? Use the same word/phrase 5 times right after each other? My flaky at best pseudo science makes even less sense than it should?

Let me know!

Things that will probably change:

The balance of friends in high places, and reputation.

The opening preamble.

All of Leader of Industry.

Some weapons are subject to removal.
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>>54393047
It may have been cool to you, I don't have anything to judge that on, so I won't.
But dreaming about a cyoa you don't like and completely changing it is pretty autistic desu. It's just a cyoa, you shouldn't get stuff like that get you riled up, especially if you just don't like it because it doesn't fit your preferences.
Even then, I mean, if there was something small that bothered you? Sure, I can completely understand that. But what you're doing is just completely derailing it. It's basically not even related to the original cyoa. Reminds me of the people who travel to ww1 or shit like that in pathfinder. I mean, I won't tell you what to imagine, but it's really not cyoa related at that point anymore.
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>>54393121
That fact that he's fucked up because he got fucked over by demons doesn't make his motives "arguably better than the hero's." His motives are still ass.
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>>54393154
Guess we can discuss PP some more. What exactly is grimdark about it considering you are the Hero and assuming you are a "nobody" back on Earth ?
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>>54393218
>SpacePirate
>says Space Privateer
Why do you do this
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>>54393121
Nah, the offer could still be refused by anyone who chooses to. One of the first Apostles we see decides he won't sacrifice his only daughter for his life.

Griffith could have chose the Band but he would rather climb over their corpses and get his kingdom. Griffith made the choice to sacrifice.

Lorewise there is less than 10 people who choose to exercise their free will and instead choose to throw away a fundamental part of themselves.
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>>54393196
He didn't find out about that until a bit later, but yeah, there's that wonderful bit too. The hate started because of the sacrifice and rape. The demon semen thing just added fuel to the fire.
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>>54393236
Everything is a mess and you can't fix it even though you're supposed because you have to fight literal Gods to do so.
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>>54393218
The premises are too high profile imo and kind of break immersion.
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>>54392577
>Griffith
>Cuckholded
You can make an argument for that, but the way you worded it implies that Griffith had a thing for Casca, when he really didn't. He loved Gats.
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>>54393096

Can Empowerment be taken multiple times?
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>>54393308
Casca and Charlotte were his rebound options.
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>>54393242
Because I've gone without sleep for the past 20 hours.

>>54393277
High profile? As in you're too high profile?

Hmm. I mean, CYOAs are by their very nature, wish fulfillment. I don't think it's particularly out of the ordinary to make you someone reasonably important.

I feel that leader of industry could use a little rework, but friends in high places only implies you KNOW someone important, and Reputation implies you're basically an ex-police officer.
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>>54393197
>tfw 30 fetish points
>Only want 6 spells though. The rest seem meh.
You don't want Planeswalking anon? To travel between all of your favorite universes and fuck every character you love and hate? I would hate fuck so many characters anon, so many characters (pic very related).

>>54393125
>Do a 5th page with more drawbacks
Ehhh... I'm had a hard time finding pictures for the last page and my CYOA folder is running dry on images. I have even re-used a lot of images from my previous CYOAs and I don't like doing that. I all of my CYOAs to feel unique and fresh. Will proboby need to gather more images before I create my next CYOA.
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>>54393096
>Let me know if you ever want to do a colab CYOA based around Zodiac and your dream kingdom going to war.
That's probably the worst cyoa idea I've heard in a few months. I'm certain it could surpass the entire spire stuff.
No, wait, that sounds absolutely amazing. Please get immediately to it.
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>>54393128
>Tell me your secrets.
I just do the same thing I ever do whenever I feel depressed, overwhelmed, or stressed:
I take a deep breath and remind myself that someone actually made a movie where Rick Moranis gets pantsed and shot at eaten in the original ending by a giant, singing, man-eating plan and start to feel at peace with humanity and our place in the universe.
https://youtu.be/WFx7kfHnKg8
Also, pic related helps.
>>54393142
I actually spend most of my time playing video games, reading visual novels, binge watching anime, writing and fapping.
I am still working on my CYOAs.
I just post here during breaks and when someone asks me.
>>54393309
...What are you talking about?

Now leave me alone so I can make my Necromancer for the nice Anon who asked to see it.
>Tripcode initiate deactivation
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>>54393335
He initially wooed Charlotte for the political move, and had sex with her because he probably read while examining the Kama Sutra that sex was a stress reliever. He neglected Casca, he just raped her to give a middle finger to Gatsu after having left him.

I still find in grating how so much of the pivotal eclipse scene was established by asinine timing by the characters throughout the final parts of the golden age.
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>>54393376

>What are you talking about?

Meant to ask >>54393361

Can Empowerment be taken multiple times?
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>Do you really think I can seriously be swayed so easily by people on this board after all the stupid shit I've caused.
I have reason to think so. See pic related.
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>>54393361
>You don't want Planeswalking anon?
Meh. I'd have to give up another class to get it. And what's the point of plansewalking if you can't turn people into big titted slave girls?
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>>54392577
>>you become a demon god
>How is this a "villain"?

Right there amigo. When you start sacrificing people to the guro crowd and start the raping it pretty much doesn't matter what has been done you've passed an event horizon.
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>>54393459
At least Corkus was avenged.
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>>54393423
Is this a parody?
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>>54393218
Oh boy i think the ramming ship might actually work!
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>>54393361
Then how about converting the current drawbacks into tiered/upgradeable ones? This way, you could have more things to spend points on with the same amount of accompanying images.
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>>54388328
Yellow: 2
Green: 9 [-9]
Blue: 2
Purple: 0
Pink: 5
Red: 1
Black: 4 [-2]

Primary: Green
Secondary: Black

Regen Type: Black Power of Darkness
Shrink Upgrade -2 G
Enlarge Upgrade -2 G
Gender Swap -1 G
Alter Age -1 G
Transform Upgrade -2 G
Invigorate -1 G
Voodoo -1 B
Unleash Hell -1 B
Mana: 21

Boons: Unconventional Mana, Embrace Corruption
Corruptions: Mental Change, Fairy Rapists, Plant Girl, Random Transformation, Sinister Aura, Corruption, Magomaniac, Urges, Slut

I think I've managed to make the most evil possible Eromancer Dryad possible. I'm basically Poison Ivy mixed with Scarecrow with magic powers, and also the requirement of transforming the hell out of whoever I fuck or just use Unleash Hell. I'll enjoy being a supervillan

Also there aren't enough corruptions, and all of the fun pink ones are linked to spells. Plus, the design is shit, remove all the unnecessary white space pls
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>>54393417
>Can Empowerment be taken multiple times?
No, no spell or option can be taken multiple times. I get asked this question a lot. I should have worded 1 option so that people could take it multiple times, in order for clarify that you can't normally buy options multiple times.
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>>54393486
I was waiting for this anon. I sat there, as I was writing, waiting for this. I wrote one option specifically for your benefit.

I hope you enjoy crashing your expensive warship into an enemy fighter and giving whatever planet you're orbiting a new ring.
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>>54388328
I want to be able to turn into a shota, but three of the green drawbacks turn you into a girl, one makes you fuck tiny fairy girls, one makes you hate technology, and one would turn me into a kid mentally if I did. Oh well.

>Yellow 10
>Green 4
>Blue 4
>Purple 4
>Pink 6
>Red 9
>Black 4

>Primary Red
>Power of Dominance
>Enslave(Upgraded)
>Enforce Law(Upgraded)

>Secondary Blue
>Spatial Manipulation
>Mind Sculpt(Upgraded)

>Immortality
>Hidden Power(Heighten Sensitivity(Upgraded)
>Signature Spell(Enforce Law)

>Sadist
>Tyrant
>Mana Tanks
>Urges

Conquer the world through Enforce Law spam. Everyone who would oppose Anon must go suck a dick instead. When it looks like Anon is trying to cast a spell on you, you must strip naked and pose sexily while he does it. Etc.
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>>54393482
My one hope is a live long enough to see everyone is avenged. I probably won't but I can hope.
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>>54391922
>Griffith + good motives
?
>Dr Breen + forced by circumstances
??
>Meh Tier's definition being above Shit Tier's definition
????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Villain with non-standard motives/morality/etc can be cool, as long as it can actually be parsed. lololol he's insane is the fucking worst though. At least the one who lusts for power... well, he wants power. I can understand that, and it'll be interesting to see what he will or won't do in the name of power, and what he'll do with that power. Discount Kefka who gains omnipotence and uses it to make never ending cheese wheels? I mean, maybe as a punchline. Not as an antagonist to drive a story.
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>>54393412
Not asinine timing. Careful planning that dates back centuries ago by literal causality. Nothing happened by accident.
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>>54393361
>>54393435
Nevermind. For some reason I thought it was blue spell.
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Changes

* Fourth Fate option.
* Third level of Impervious opened up, to prevent mundane death.
* As one counter to this, Godslayer weapon now available as an upgraded Omni-Weapon, which ignores one level of Impervious to a minimum of one.
* As another optional protection, new "Homeland" power under Supernatural Gifts benefits those who want to live peaceably, but limits their expansion.
* Due to the ability to make the Figure of Legend very, very hard to kill, the 80 point options were increased to 90 to balance that.
* Deity Descended can now complete quests for the Unique rewards, but not the extra points/powers.
* Can set failsafes for automatic death in comas and the like.
* Clarified that reincarnation retains magic mastery.
* Clarified Wizard Fate Modifier includes discount on the ability to imbue magic
* Removed unnecessary line about equipment in Mysterious Wanderer (since that is explained under equipment)
* Added that SEP fields have no effect on other players in shared worlds.
* Free Memory of Ages 0 power added.
* Lost in Time loopholes for new Fates removed. Now a flat 20,000 years to complete quests if beginning at 20,000 B.C.
* Region Locked drawback limits rebirths to its region.

On Definite "to do" list:
* Compulsion, Disjunction and Abjuration listed as future magic schools
* Clarified in companion section that they have the same form of immortality that you do.

On Maybe "to do" list:
* Overcoming Entropy quest
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>>54393539
Keep dreaming. Haven't you noticed the author has been keeping us outside Griffith's mind ever since the eclipse? My bet is that he's double crossing the other evils and will be redeemed or martyred.
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>>54393483
Yes.
It was a joke making fun of all the screeching cuck-a-doodle-dooers that flooded thread after Fortune's Cookie.
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>>54393596
You know. As long as he properly Martyrs IE: Dies and takes that retarded fucking heart with him I could accept that.
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>seems like everyone is red, with green and black and yellow being popular secondaries
>no fellow pink friendos
Eronomicon is lonely
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>>54393627
but anon, red and pink go together. After all, the colour pink is just red except weaker
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>>54393627
How cute are you and how small is your feminine penis?
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>>54393528
Thank you henderson i will wait for the finished CYOA to make my build but i assure you that it will be glorious
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>>54393700
>After all, the color pink is just red except cuter.
ftfy
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>>54393737
I'm a red, anon. I find weakness cute.
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>>54393730
Godspeed anon. See you in Valhal, shiny and chrome.
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>>54393700
Well they certainly go together in this cyoa. The only reason I had any red points at is that I like receiving some of the red things listed.
"weaker" isn't quite the word I would use though, about the colors.

>>54393713
not cute.
no penor.
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>>54392580
Will there be cute magical girls to corrupt as a mad scientist? Someone has to oppose our mad science.
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>>54392622
Okay...
I already confused by Necromancer.
The first page says I get a total 11 spells, but each Grimoire says I escaped with 15 spells...
Which one is right?
Also, what the fuck are the first letters in each of these words in this name?
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>>54388328
>Yellow: 12
>Green: 13
>Blue: 10
>Purple: 14
>Pink: 13
>Red: 14
>Black: 8

I've got too many points to spend
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>>54393799
You beat my highscore of 72. Fuck. How do I get into more pink and black stuff?

Then again, I don't want to become a sissy. Shit.
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>>54393523

I see. Thanks!

How dangerous is it to update build without Power Word Stop?
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>>54393828
the secret my friend is fapping to porn that panders to 6+ different fetishes at once
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>>54393627
Nah pink is my highest one with 11
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>>54393789
no it doesn't. The first page says 'composed of 15 spells, you grimoire has a focus in one particular school'.

It says Kroveri Hæma. Kroveri is a russian word that means 'bloodshed' and haema is self explanatory
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>>54393781
Be my girlfriend, and I'll give you all the penis you could want.
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>>54388373
So, wait; are the color points outside your top two just wasted?
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>>54393799
Fellow CBPWC fan, welcome back!

Also holy fuck that's a lot of fetishes.
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>>54393919
You can use them on boons
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>>54393876
Oh, okay.
The 15 is for the extra 3 I get if I don't choose to pursue immortality.
Thanks!
And my Tier 1 is reserved for how I get immortality, right?
Sorry, I'm having trouble understanding this because how flowery it's written.
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>>54393799
>8 black-tier abilities. Good god man, how did you do it.

>>54393942
Tier 1 is your immortality method, yes.
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>How dangerous is it to update build without Power Word Stop?
Depends on how many corruption options your your Deity has and their personality. Personally I wouldn't take Power Word: Stop. Safewords are for pussies!

>>54393799
>84 Spell points
This is how it should be! (pic related)
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>>54388328
30 points total.

No magic powers.

Immortality
Unlimited Planeswalker.
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>>54393974
With practice and copious days spend day dreaming about fucking qt zombie and skeleton waifus, truly monstrous monster girls that can split your dick wide open like a frankfurter when they give you a blow job before preceding to eat you whole while masticating your body into a bloody pulp and cherishing the breath/choke play I used to do with my ex gf in uni.
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>>54388373
The Enforce Law example is.... awful specific.
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>>54393997

>Depends on how many corruption options your your Deity has and their personality. Personally I wouldn't take Power Word: Stop. Safewords are for pussies!

Thanks. I was looking for a way to get the lactation option, but wasn't sure what to give up. So for updated build I'll switch out Power Word Stop for Divine Gift (Liquid Production)
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>>54393523
>No, no spell or option can be taken multiple times
The fact that i can't harness my subby magic to make my deity the fucking strong hurts me
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>>54393568
People are busy being lewd senpai, bad timing.
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>>54394103
>The Enforce Law example is.... awful specific.
Let's face it anon it's clearly the best use of that spell.
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What happens if you take fairy rapists and unlimited power together
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>>54394146
That's fine; I needed to post the updates before I lost motivation. I'll worry about "timing" when I have a very final version.
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>>54394165
24 hours then they leave
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>>54394180
It would be more funny if they died from either exhaustion because they refuse to leave until they suck you dry, or if they exploded from absorbing too much mana from the infinite reservoir

Also what happens if you have mana tanks and infinite power

Also why the fuck isn't the mana tanks option under green
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>>54394165
I said on /trash/ they would fuck you 24 hours and then leave. But if you have infinite mana and Living Clothes you will bad end yourself.
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>>54394228
That seems unreasonable, why are the clothes an indestructible object?
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>>54394256
Magic
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>>54394228
>bad end
>bad
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>>54394159
Not going to disagree with you there, but why limit it to wendy's? Why not just say "fastfood employ's must all be attractive women who cosplay as female versions of their chain's mascots and offer sex to their patrons."
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>>54394271
That answer doesn't work when everything in the context is magic

>>54394293
Because he makes CYOAs by writing whatever comes to mind while he masturbates
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>>54388328
Yellow: 7
Green: 2
Blue:0
Purple: 9
Pink: 1
Red: 0
Black: 4

Primary: Purple
Summon Tentacles: Upgraded
Incubate
Spawn Monster: Upgraded
Spawn Parasite: Upgraded ()
Summon Abyssal Girl: Upgraded

Mana Regeneration: Abyssal Summoner

Secondary: Yellow
Normalify: Upgraded
Liquid Production: Upgraded
Heighten Libido: Upgraded
Heighten Sensitivity

Boon Points: 7

Embrace Corruption
Immortality

Corruption: Yellow: 4/ Purple: 5
Urges
Flasher
Slut

Thank Goodness for Normalify.

Eldritch dude: I'm not into tg or futa, Good thing this is just a cyoa on the internet.
Summon
Corruption
Eldritch
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>>54388328
I uh, scored 03. If I go generously, I can go up to 07.

Also, you spelled "bestiality" wrong. And no, that isn't one of mine.

Also, I received a post warning from the mods for shitposting on /a/.
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>>54394338
Don't worry, I got enough points to take the 40 point boon in addition to a good amount of spells, but the CYOA is just too shoddily made to create a decent build out of it despite that

So yeah, you ain't missing out
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>>54394338
>Also, you spelled "bestiality" wrong. And no, that isn't one of mine
Sure it ain't~.
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>>54394338
>/a/

You two-timing bastard!
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>>54394338
Just be half generous, take the 5 point immortality, then peace out.
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>>54394338
>/a/
That would explain the compulsive shitposting...
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>>54394382
Cat/dog girls may be one of them, and I was generous enough to just lob that under "monster girls" which really isn't a fetish of mine (considering the whole package that comes with it).

Bestiality is a whole other level of shit, though.
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>>54394338
>Also, I received a post warning from the mods for shitposting on /a/.
If only you got a warning on /tg/. Still, I think you've calmed down lately. New mods got your balls in a vice grip I reckon.
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>>54394463
I started a philosophy shitstorm today, I wouldn't say I calmed down.

I've just been browsing other boards lately. And when I'm home, I'm either playing vidya, chatting or working on my CYOA stuff, so I don't come to the threads as often anymore even though I still post rather frequently. I don't see the problem, here.

I take back my earlier statement that writing was the hardest part of making a CYOA for me. 90% of my time is balancing numbers lately; I feel like an accountant.
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>>54394528
I have no sympathy for you. You are the one that insists everything is perfectly balanced. Literally no one cares if it isn't.
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>>54392233
>>54392314

Easy solution: Create Beegirls, make erogeneous flowers. Problem solved.
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>>54394658
>Literally no one cares if it isn't.
Not to defend modern shitposting SDA, but to many posters cyoas that are not perfectly balanced may as well be not balanced at all.
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>>54393218
>devesatation
dude what
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>>54394731
My brain likes to replace A's with E's. And also I'm a complete and utter retard.
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>>54388328
>Points
Yellow - 6
Green - 5
Blue - 6
Purple - 6
Pink - 6
Red - 10
Black - 7
46 total

>Primary School - Black
Power of Darkness
Raise Dead Upgrade
Voodoo Upgrade

>Secondary School - Red
Enslave Upgraded
Bind
Hex
Enforce Law Upgraded

>Boons
Immortality
Hidden Power - Time Stop Upgraded
Signature Spell - Time Stop


>Corruption Points
Black - 3
Red - 4
Blue - 2

>Blue Corruption
Mana Tanks

>Red Corruption
Tyrant
Rapist

>Black Corruption
Bloodlust
Death's Whore

It's not about the sex...It's about the money. I can stop time whenever I fucking want and bind will render people powerless. Then I make my money as a contract killer. I'm sure the clients don't care what I do to the target as long as they die. Then I'll take that pretty little corpse and bring it back to add to my army.
That's right fucker. I'm not just a serial rapist and contract killer, I'm building an army of super soldiers under my command to then take over the world, raping and pillaging the whole way.

See you all real soon.
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>>54393568
I don't see why anyone would take the wizard fate modifier. You need to take more than 80 points of magical abilities in a 90 point build. Or more than 100 points of magical abilities in a 120 point build. Even my magic-heavy build don't benefit from wizard fate modifier. The only people who have enough points for it to maybe do something are deity descended, and they don't get fate modifiers.
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>>54394658
>You aren't allowed to work to ensure a variety of builds is viable in your CYOAs!
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How do people take the idea of soft canon? X is canonical to Y, but if you love Y then Xz is not necessarily cannot to it.
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>>54394800
Damn it Dio stop being lewd
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>>54394849
I'm not entirely certain as to what you're trying to say.
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>>54394807
The fate modifiers are optional, and very much intended to only be worthwhile if you are very much focused in that area. One poster (Angel-anon) has already used the Wizard fate modifier.

There are currently 280 points worth of purchases that you can get at discount; don't forget that it includes the supernatural gifts like flight as well.

Also, almost everyone tends to take another +30 points from drawbacks, and +10 for shared world; that +40 by itself pays for the fate modifier.

At the end of the day, you're correct that you'd need to buy at least 80 points (pre-discount) of magic type skills for it to be worth it, but many builds will do so.
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>>54394849
Can you explain further?
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>>54394849
>X is canonical to Y, but if you love Y then Xz is not necessarily cannot to it.
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>>54388391

Really feels like it needs more Corruption options. Or some generic ones, you very quickly end up with 'Yeah, I'm getting all for my primary colour, there isn't much choice'

>>54388348

I am a very green mage.

Yellow: 3
Green: 11
Blue: 7
Purple: 3
Pink: 1
Red: 6
Black: 0

Mana Regen: Shapechanger
Total Mana: 19

Green: 7/11
Upgraded Alter Age
Upgraded: Transform
Upgraded Invigorate
Gender Swap

Blue: 2/6
Upgraded Mind Sculpt

Spare Points: 19

Discrete Spellcasting
Runic Trap
Signature Spell(Transform)

Signature Spell really helps my mana efficiency. I'm working with the idea that 'Minor' mostly means 'Within normal ranges' for Transform or else it is a staggeringly pointless spell without buying most of the rest of the school.

Corruption:
Green: Plant Girl, Nature Spirits

Blue: Magomaniac

Nature spirits are a serious worry but interesting and Mind Sculpt will allow me to regress damage if it happens. I've transform as a signature spell, I don't think too much was happening without it being involved in some way.
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>>54394862
No.
Fuck you.
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>>54393568
Wizard seems a bit overpriced. I mean the benefit is nice but you need to have spent at least forty points on Magic for it to break even. Considering it for a Reincarnation build since that can actually get some benefit from it without going ridiculously mono-focused, but it's still a bit of a problem.
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>>54394888
>>54394893
>>54394904
Netflix Daredevil takes the MCU movies as canon. No MCU movie could care less about the Netflix canon. Could an author release a "Netflix" style cyoa that only updates the canon for players that care about the update?
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>>54395011
>Netflix Daredevil takes the MCU movies as canon. No MCU movie could care less about the Netflix canon.

This is what we call a fanfic. The only difference is your example had a lot of money thrown at it, rather than an awkward fujoshi's fishy smelling fingers jumping from keystroke to selfstroke.
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>>54394953
Have to disagree. If you don't spend 40 points on Magic you're not really a wizard! Here's an example build that is much better with the Wizard modifier than without it:

Master of the Cycle (90 points)
Wizard (50 points)
Wellspring of Harmony (45)
Homeland (42.5)
Flight 2 (40)
Mage Eye (39)
Reflexes and Reaction 1 (35)
Impervious 1 (29)
Pain Control (27)
Endurance 1 (23)
120 points worth of magic discounted to 60 (-37)
Personal Omni-Wear (-38)
Sanitary Pack (-40)
30 points of drawbacks (-10)
shared world (0)

This build saved 66 points in discounts for a cost of 40, AND if you do the sorcerer supreme quest, you'll get another 10 points to spend also at that discount. 76 points saved at a cost of 40; profit of 36.
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>>54394891
> Also, almost everyone tends to take another +30 points from drawbacks, and +10 for shared world; that +40 by itself pays for the fate modifier.

Okay, so you can spend an absolute maximum of 130 points on magic in a 90 point build. Or 160 points in a 120 point build. That is if you spend literally every single point in magic, and you take 30 points of drawbacks, and it's a shared world. I have never seen anyone do that.

I think the assumption that tons of people will spend 90% of their base point total on magic is a bit unrealistic. Take for example the magic-heavy build that was posted in >>54385396
That only contained 60 points of magic, yet it close to being just magic, mental, and nothing else.
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>>54391922
That list exists for the sole purpose of Nox being at the top of it.

What have you done?
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>>54393627
fapping to pink is one thing, actually wanting it is another
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>>54395123
>assuming that tons of people will spend 90% of their base point total on magic is unrealistic.

I'm not assuming anything of the sort. Certain wizardly builds will benefit greatly from the fate modifier Wizard. See >>54395112 . It will not be optimal for everyone that wants to use magic to take the Wizard modifier.

The problem is, if it becomes cheaper, it is *too* good for magic heavy builds. So I am satisfied that a subset of people will use it, and most won't.

It's not like it's required to buy magic.
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>>54395084
Then how do I make s cyoa that may upset people but they may ignore?
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>>54395149
>What have you done?
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>>54395112
Spending 40 on magic doesn't make it worth it. You need to spend more than 80.

Also your "build" isn't really a build. You don't specify your "30 points of drawbacks" or what you're even spending those 120 points of magic on. It's basically just saying that it's possible to make it worth it. Yeah, it's possible. That doesn't mean people are actually going to do it.
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>>54395186
Just put a disclaimer in the intro regarding the canon it uses and how people can decide whether they want the new stuff to be canon as well.
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>>54395164
I'm happy to be pink. I wouldn't trade it for the world. I want to make my master very happy one day.

uhh...when I meet them.
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>>54395170
The build you posted isn't a serious build, it's not even complete.
The example I gave was a specific, magic-heavy build that did not even come close to benefiting from wizard.
Big difference.
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>>54394688

Interesting idea, thanks anon!
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>>54394842
SDA is a great guy and all, but he's a one trick pony. Only stardust kicked off, and he's done expansion after expansion, with an occasional remake. It's keeps things just fresh enough for his fanatical followers but I'm getting tired of it.

SDA, if you're reading this, it's time to let go. Make something new and refreshing, and bring closure to a good cyoa.

Or just give up mate. You'll never make something as good as monster hunter.
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>>54388328
20 points.
Primary and only school: Blue
Mana regen: Ley lines.
Upgraded time stop
Spatial manipulation
15 unspent points used for discreet casting and signature spell time stop.
Mana tanks drawback.
>Literally no drawback because no passive mana regen so I can just use a spell few times to keep my balls normal.
>not getting ZA WARUDO over some fetish bullshit
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>>54395212
I'd rather be working on the CYOA than hashing out the details of drawbacks for a made-up build; it would not be difficult to do so.

Fact is, there has already been one legitimate build that, with zero prompting from me, chose to make use of that Fate modifier. As long as a couple people use it, then I consider that a fine outcome. It's not meant to be something that everyone who wants to use magic is better off taking.

Some people want to do a build that is almost entirely magic; it is *them* that the Fate modifier is intended for, and it is for them that it is useful.
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>>54395170
> The problem is, if it becomes cheaper, it is *too* good for magic heavy builds.
Then why is the fact that soldier is only 25 points acceptable? You can rack up large numbers of points on physical upgrades too, soldier gives some extra things like commander for free, and it's almost half the price of wizard.
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>>54395291
Can you point out an actual build that someone else made that benefits from from wizard?
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>>54395251
>Literally no drawback because no passive mana regen so I can just use a spell few times to keep my balls normal.
>not getting ZA WARUDO over some fetish bullshit
Actually, anon you start with a full mana pool which means your testicles will be huge, unless you cast a few spells which will reduce your testicle size. But be carful anon, if you cast too many spells your testicles will be small like pees and since you have no mana regeneration your testicles won't regain their size, so you better count every spell you cast.
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>>54395325
The only one is angel. See >>54388590
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>>54395325
Here >>54388590

>>54395297
Because there are far fewer points that you can actually spend in physical upgrades than magic ones.
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>>54395367
> Because there are far fewer points that you can actually spend in physical upgrades than magic ones.
Sure, because there are a ton of niche magical schools inflating the point total. But physical has high value items as well, particularly now that Impervious is useful again. You can get to the 50/60 fate break even point taking things that are much more effective than the bloat you have to take to get to 80/100 for magic. Soldier is so much more efficient that it's entirely reasonable for a magic-focused build to take soldier anyway just for the extra durability.
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>>54395352
By the way you worded it in the cyoa his mana wouldn't actually decrease as he consumes spell uses and he "ignores mana cost".
Or it would just refill everyday, together with the uses.
It wouldn't make sense to be able to cast without having any mana right?

An alternative could be the tanks refilling themselves continuously over time as mana flows from the leylines.

It is a little wonky.
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>>54395352
>>54395554
Still, you have the final word.
You know, being the author and all that.
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If you need a picture always was partial to this one.
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>>54395584
so edgy
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>>54395584
And this one.
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>>54395505
For many builds you'd be absolutely right. But for others, Wizard is better. Angel-anon's is one, and the one I posted (which is pretty close to what I would do) is another. And, if it helps you, I'll even specify the details of that build real quick.

Master of the Cycle (90 points)
Wizard (50 points)
Wellspring of Harmony (45)
Homeland (42.5)
Flight 2 (40)
Mage Eye (39)
Reflexes and Reaction 1 (35)
Impervious 1 (29)
Pain Control (27)
Endurance 1 (23)
120 points worth of magic discounted to 60 (-37): Major Divination, Major Telepathy, Major Blessed One, Major Spirit Singer, Major Enchanting, Major Stormsage, Major Waterdancer, Major Binding, imbue minor casting for all eight schools.
Personal Omni-Wear (-38)
Sanitary Pack (-40)
30 points of drawbacks (-10): Slow Pace of History, Nearly Mortal.
shared world (0)

Though this *has* made be realize that Nearly Mortal is too good now for the rebirthing Fates. hmm.
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>>54394842
>>54395246
In all seriousness though, please finish catastrophe and audit.
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Could somebody be kind enough to post Altering History and its other contemporaries?
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>>54395767
I just posted it here anon: >>54393568

Don't know what you mean by contemporaries.
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>>54395505
Soldier needs to be cheap because it's the only way that figure of legend is even remotely viable. Without the burst of extra points for physical upgrades like strength, reflexes and impervious, there is no good reason to take it over immortal wanderer. And even then, durability and evasion only somewhat compensates for only having one chance and then you're dead.
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>>54395798
The fantasy version etc
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>>54394159
I live in a place without Wendy's. You make me even sadder than I was before.
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>>54395817
Ah. I'll share the World of Myth and Wonder DLC, but it has not yet been adjusted to the 2nd edition, so a lot of stuff may not make sense in concert.

I will be moving on to update it once I've finalized the base CYOA.
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>>54395806
There are only 75 points worth of physical upgrades. 30 points for Soldier for FoL, 30 more points to break even, then you get 7 points from discounts, plus commander (5 points) and omni-weapon (1 point).

And again, that is buying literally the entire section.
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>>54395849
I pity you for being unable to enjoy Wendy's thick meat.
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>>54395937
our Wendy's burned down. same with our Bandanas and Fashion Bug
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>>54395902
Great, thanks.
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>>54395554
>By the way you worded it in the cyoa his mana wouldn't actually decrease as he consumes spell uses and he "ignores mana cost".
Yes that is true, but once he has cast the same spell twice then his spells cost mana, check the descriptions.

>>54395849
>I live in a place without Wendy's.
And so do I, I live in the shithole known as Sweden. I get sad every day since I can't ogle cute waitresses on Wendy's. I have to ogle cheap McDonalds whores and it pains me everytime I think about Wendy's superior beef.
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>>54395755
Won't lie, that kind of stung, anon. I even took this Monday off for time to work on my CYOAs.

Guess I'll just spend that time unmotivated and tired, wallowing...
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>>54395977
Don't be blue, SDA. I love you! You give me hope that one day I won't be
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>>54395977
You're literally Aqua
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>>54393757
Race: Human
Worships: None

Primary School: Promræn Caro
Tier 4: Calcify, Cure injury, Reinforcement, Create abomination
Tier 3: Limit Bane, Natural weapon, Warp flesh, Alter appearance, Enhanced Senses, Cure disease
Tier 2: Rejuvinate, Mass growth, Craft plague, Create life
Tier 1: Potion of Khizaz

Nobody can call ME a non-dedicated biomancer

Companions
Nathan Salem
(free perk)

Minions: (30)
None, I buy three perks instead

Perks
Surgeon(free)
Cunning Linguist(free)
Storyteller (bought)
Constitution (bought)
Undead Activist (bought)
Engineer (bought)
Wealthy (bought)
Silver Tongue
Gold Tongue

World:
Teb'Eis

Lair:
Icelands Castle

Enemies:
Psychotic count +4
Death-fearing duke +7
Bounty hunter +10
Total: +21
two more perks

I'm going to take my ridiculous levels of charm and become the count of the area I live in, and eventually king of Teb'Eis through strategic charming, backroom deals and one or two good old-fashioned murders. As the immortal warrior-king I will lead my undead forces (no mortal shall be forced to serve in my armies) to conquer the world. I shall make it so that the undead are an equal class of citizen to humans. However I shall visit great plagues upon the other races. I'll be necromantic hitler, except a better wartime leader. And my own superpowers enable me to be more or less a one-man army, as well as making me damn near assassination-proof. My diplomacy shall truly know no bounds with the quadro-combo of Nathan Salem, Silver Tongue, Gold Tongue and Storyteller. I'll give him a nice, behind the scenes job to do once I've conquered the world. He can pull his strings and make sure things function properly. He'll likely be a good ally. Perhaps I will eventually succeed in making myself emperor of the world. My skill in engineering will endear myself to the people by making their lives easier. My 'creations' will do that too, but they will take more getting used to methinks.
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>>54388328

Well

Yellow - 7
Green - 2
Blue - 2
Pink - 3
Pink - 11
Red - 7
Black - 1


Schools
Primary - pink
Mana regeneration - power of worship
Spells -
Summon deity +
Empower + (gender swap / invigorate)
Divine Portal +
Divine blessing
Power word: stop!

Secondary - yellow
Spells -
Normality +
Charm
Heighten libido
Heighten sensibility
Add flavor

Boons
Mana conduit (internal leylines)

Corruption
Yellow -
Flash
Slut
Urges

Pink-
Sadist
Orgasm denial
Yandere
Nimphomaniac


I'd basically get a qt funny and overall nice deity who has the pink corruptions and live a (although forced to be that way by the use of the spell) normal life. Since anything I do is innocent, going around stealing is my go-to to have some fun in the real world before going back to my comfy pocket dimension
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>>54396085
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>>54396503
I don't think being compared to Aqua is a compliment, when Darkness clearly is best girl.
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>>54396605
Tok confirmed for speaking the Truth.
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>>54396605
>>54396503
>>54396618
You poor, dumb cunts.
EXPLOSION
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>>54391293
dude a vacation to miami isn't that expensive
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>>54393757
>Race
Human

>Country
Teb-Hai, Jungle/Forest Area

>Lair
Isolated Castle

>Worship
None!

>Faction
Fleshweavers, maybe. Not sure I trust any of these guys.

>Spells
All from Promraen Caro
Tier 4- Gentle Repose, Cure Injury, Reinforcement, Create Abomination, Inflict Paralysis
Tier 3- Enhanced Senses, Natural Weapon, Cure Disease, Warp Flesh, Alter Appearance
Tier 2- Rejuvenate, Create Life, Craft Plague, Mass Growth, Alter Age (traded for Companion), Create Skinwalker (-15)
Tier 1- Potion of Khizaz

>Companions
None

>Minions
Slyther (-9)
Skinwalker (-8)
Created Life (-7)
Groundskeeper (-2)
Slaves x4 (-4)

>Perks
Surgeon (free)
Bloodcrafter (traded for Companion)
Silver Tongue (-10)
Gold Tongue
Apothecary

>Enemies
Wild Elf Tribe (+3)
Pyschotic Count (+4)
Abholean Witch (+15)

>Drawbacks
Single-Minded (+3)
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>>54396802

?
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Our most beloved kitty, Pallas, posted a build on /trash/: >>>/trash/10522362
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>>54396503
>>54396605
>>54396656
Ignoring the glorious existence that is Eris /Chris is true blasphemy!
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>>54396872
Why do these people need to announce themselves
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>>54396896
Namefags gonna namefag.
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>>54396895
Why am I so bad a formatting spoilers ;(
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>>54396872
>Pallas into corruption, parasites, and is a slut
Back to the pound with that cat
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>>54388285
You're alright anon. I'm kinda glad you laid off the whole fatposting thing. It was fun from time to time but you went a bit too far with it. Other stuff like discussion and whatnot I understand and appreciate. You don't have to be alone anymore.
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>>54396938
>Cats
>Not being into parasites

It's kind of their thing, yo.
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>>54396938
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>>54388218
>fatposter gets banned but actively derailing shitposters remain

I think I'm getting to the point where I need a break from these threads.
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>>54388328
Y8 G6 b9 p12 P7 R10 B06
Hot damn.

>Blue primarily(You'd have to be STUPID not to)/Pink Secondary
>Onahole Familiar

>Blue Magic (9/9)
Time Stop+(duh), Spatial Manipulation+, Electrolyze, Mind Sculpt+, Summon Person, Spiritual Possession
>Pink Magic (7/7)
Summon Deity+, Empower+(Purple Banish+++, Purple Summon Abyssal Girl+++). Divine Portal, Divine Gift, Divine Blessing

I serve Tiamat, the Mother of Dragons. Time to help my Monster Godfu kickstart the next step in Human Evolution. You can choose to become an Abyssal Gril, an Abyssal Dragon, or the Ultra Elite Abyssal Reaper(loli). You will shed your current imperfect form with the help of our loving assistants, while I will visit periodically for minor psychic adjustment. Mindbreaking is pointless if you don't intend to rebuild the victims in your image. Might as well just put a bullet on their heads.

>Feats (42/42)
Planeswalker+, Signature Spell(Mind Sculpt+), Discrete Spellcaster, Embrace Corruption

>Corruption(5/5b, 4/4P, 5/5)
>>Blue
Magical Wardrobe, Magomaniac, Mana Tanks, Accidental Summoning
-I like bathrobes
-Hopefully my fairy assistant will help carry my balls if they are too heavy
->implying I would not be protected 24/7 by a squad of Abyssal Reapers, plus my subtle Mind Sculpting Spells. Fall in line, bitch, or I send you back to Hell.

>>Pink
Sissification, Yandere, Nymphomaniac
-I'm a mage, duh. Looking like a fuccboi is part of the deal.
-Being an important part of her rape industry, it's the only logical outcome. We are too busy 24/7 bringing about a new world to be bumping uglies regularly.

>>Colorless
Fairy Rapists, Eldritch Girl(Futa), Corruption, Sadist
-You say rape, I say opportunity. Odd how every fairy squad sent against me never returns.
-My Little Illythid Can't be This Cute!
-Depression is the default state of the human condition. Which is why we must exercise our ultimate freedom as humans and become something other than human.
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>>54388328
so an upgraded spell takes 2 or 3 points
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>>54397069
>forgot the image
at least it wasn't an image that /just/ made the post.
Might as well elaborate a bit on the Goddess
-Mother, nurturing and loving. Fierce against those who would hurt her progeny. Proud and domineering. Jewish mom manipulator 1000x. Knows better than you.
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>>54397041
Hey, don't misunderstand. When I say take that cat to the pound, I mean that's what I'd like to do.

Take her to pound town.
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>>54397071
2, in total
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>>54394338
I want to corrupt SDA's pure mind and turn her into a fetishistic slut!
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>>54397132
You'll have to get through "her" deity first
Hope you enjoy being a fuckin bimbo
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>>54388328
>got more than 30 points
immortality and upgraded planeswalker
most of the corruptions and spells suck, dimensional tourism is clearly the best option
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>>54397168
>Hope you enjoy being a fuckin bimbo
Almost correct. If it means tapping that deviant cat ass, I can survive being a himbo
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>>54393757
>>54393795
How exactly does the money work? Do you start with some? Does it determine max minions or just the ones you start with?
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>>54397197
Now that's dedication
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>>54397284
you start with thirty money and you can get more by taking on drawbacks and enemies. You can trade it in for more companions, perks and spells for 10, 10, and 15 respectively. You can buy as many minions as your money will allow.
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>>54397419
Can you buy only a minion or two to start, then just plan to make more later?
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>>54397460
That's what I do. I take a few useful "start-up" minions with the plans to make more.
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>>54397460
Yes, if you have the spells. However, minions take time and energy to create and in some cases you get stuff you wouldn't be guaranteed if you tried to make them later, for example the created humans have the brain of a warrior when bought as a minion, giving them fighting skills. And some of the others are just plain hard to find later on.
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>>54388328
Yellow 8 Green 5 Blue 8 Purple 6 Pink 6 Red 9 Black 3

Looks like I'll be taking Red and Yellow.
Main : Red. [9]
Mana: Power of Dominance
Enslave Upgraded [7]
Bind, upgraded [5]
Enforce Law upgraded [3]
Summon Succubus [2]
Hex [1]
So I can make as many laws as I want that has to be followed, get slaves that will be more loyal as time goes on, and a cute little succubus to help me break them in.

Yellow [8]
Normalify [7]
Charm upgraded [5]
Liquid production [4]
Heighten Libido upgraded [2]
Heighten sensitivity upgraded [0]

I spend 16 spell points for 26 max mana. Not that I wont constantly have a slave by my side.

That leaves me with : Red 1 Green 5 Blue 8 Purple 6 Pink 6 Black 3 . I really wanted blue but I dont know that it's worth losing sensitivity and libido altering.
Thats [29] mana points.
Going to take Hidden Power and buy upgraded Alter Age for the eternal youth. [17]
Then, Planeswalker and travel to a universe that has dimension hopping for whenever our universe ends. [2] and I cant do anything with 2 points.

Corruption : 4 yellows and 4 reds
Random Orgasms, Flasher, Urges. Not too bad when I can give in to these anytime I want without consequence.
Man red's downsides suck though. I wish there were more to choose from.
Sadist, Kinky Wardrobe, Rapist

Well. I guess I'm going to have to make it a law to have some girls "chosen" for public service duty every day.

Kinda wish I can trade rapist for like, mana tank or something. Maybe we can implement a thing where I can take like twice the amount of corruptions for another color to make up for a corruption of my color?

Going to start with a law of me being able to do whatever I want and no consequences. And one thats the basic no harming me. Then I'll go collar my first slave. Enjoy the rape and slow mind breaking. Then more rules, like the chosen girls for public service, peace on earth, focusing science, etc
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>>54397520
You do know that laws must be lewd, right?
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>>54388391
.....So no matter what you have to turn into a girl or futa in the end. Why would anyone play this?
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>>54397557
Picky picky.
Fine.
Instead of peace on earth, how about instead of wars we "fight" it out with some sort of lewding contest. And instead of focusing science on any particular thing, I'd say something like focusing on finding and lewding some space aliens. Just because the goal isnt lewd doesnt mean the solution cant be.
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>>54397618
Or you choose to be male rape-bait with zero self-control.

It is true that this one forces the drawbacks on the player themselves, unlike most of Tok's popular stuff that allows us to inflict fetishes on other targets as drawbacks.
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>>54397618
That's my problem with it, the forced corruption with few options ruins it for me.
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>>54397618
I mean You could take the other drawbacks. Or you could just take the transformation spell from green.
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>>54397637
Why bother playing at all, just go write up your fap fiction somewhere
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>>54396938
I redid the count and came up with 80 points
Help
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>>54397701
I'll adopt you, Pallas. We can work through your deviance together.
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>>54397656
You know, Having a pool of non-colored drawbacks would probably solve the problem fairly easily. A set of drawbacks that you can use whichever color points to buy. It would widen the pool without him having to come up with to many new things. (Although he totally could come up with more stuff for each color spell and corruption if he wanted to. Theres def potential to expand.)
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>>54397781
>Theres def potential to expand.
Heh.
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