I write shitty poetry as a hobby, and wanted to share it with

That was shit. Off to the trash it goes

>>26406118
OP is a fag
Cause all he does is nag
All this faggot really needs
is to get down on his knees
Drop my trows
Swipe his brows
and give me head
becuase that's what I said.

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>>26406118
keep trying. no offense but that was bad, but still, you're doing more than most people on this board.

please write every day, and keep posting. i am positive that eventually your writing will improve and impress even the most cynical/critical types.

>>26406118
Well, you aren't rhyming, which is nice. Don't focus on bring the next Frost, focus on being edgy and grotesque, people love Poe. Also don't rhyme, that shits gay.

>>26406118
Tendies are brown
Pajamas are blue
Im just a normie jew
poo in loo

>>26406235
Yeah OP, it doesn't make sense.

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>>26406118
I hate niggers
I hate Jews
I hate Spics
and Arabs too.

Go ahead and try to sue.
I got money up the Wazoo

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>>26406235
also, read a lot of poetry, if poetry is actually something you care about. i have lots of recommendations, if you're interested....

>>26406235
I am so used to people being such assholes to me, that literally brought me to tears. Thank you.

>>26406314
Quit stealing moonman lyrics fag

>>26406314
why would i want to sue?

your obviously an idiot who cant be taken seriously.

Your poetry is shit and plain. Also you're trying to ryme like a nigger.

Move aside I'll show you real poetry.

One night
One night all full of perfumes, whispers and music of wings.
One night where in the nuptial, humid shadow, the fireflied flamed.
Beside me, slowly.
Mute and pale.
As if a presentiment of infinite biterness
Agitated even the most profound of your fibers.

>>26406610
mehitwasn'tthatgood/10

>>26406118

this is really terrible m8