>trying to write a music album >all my lyrics are awful

lyrics don't matter

melody and rhythm are much more important

Post some lyrics

>>26285269
>lyrics don't matter
People like you are the reason why songs about a guy reapting the word "Jumpman" over and over are popular

I know that feel. Good songwriting is fucking hard. Sometimes I can think of a verse or two but not a whole song. I wish I was more creative.

Never stopped anyone else

>>26285239

Show us your what you have so far pham.

Also what kind of genre and shit do you do?

>>26285269
This is true for a lot of popular music. But most of my favorite music has great, memorable, meaningful lyrics.

Simple.

Do Cloud Rap instead, aesthetically "shit" lyrics.

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>>26285269
>Lyrics don't matter
Triggered. Although my favorite band is Nirvana, which 99% of the lyrics in their songs are just rhythmic garbage the gels well with the beat so take my shit critique of music how you want it.

>>26285291
>>26285323
these. share with us fampai.

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>>26285291
>>26285323
I wrote this while I was tripping on allylescaline. I try making songs in a lot of different styles, I haven't really found my own niche yet.

>and as we stand here
>two by seven
>our bodies wait their
>heaven blessing

>but to whom are we directed,
>to a shallow void?
>a name we cannot understand?
>hazy research noids?

>as Chronus slices
>at our phallus,
>our children drip
>from our chalice.

>as our fathers once did before,
>so we do our own.
>when, oh when, Dionysius, will
>this cycle be torn?

>and they were called mad
>for beating chests
>filled with fury
>from man's behests.

I have like folders and folders of lyrics like this, I don't think they're any good. They're too pretentious.

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>>26285462
>a scene of gold flows under my arms
>you've got that Paris charm
>frankincense, shades of royal blue
>your shadow casts a golden hue

>rushing from disco to disco
>your head against my shoulder
>our souls an amber torus
>the virtues of a tourist

>i hold your arm against my side
>we look at rivers so sublime
>the sparkling moon, a desert shake
>we'll always want this to the end

>>26285462
Feels like some King Crimson shit.

>>26285462

>as Chronus slices
>at our phallus,
>our children drip
>from our chalice
not bad at all. just need the right melody to go with it.