I wrote my own book! I know this is /mu/ however and literature and other intelligent forms of creativity aren't critiqued here in this awesome hive mind. A hive mind that is as if the creator of the universe turned a blind to so that the greater good of his directionless puppets could speak with their weak voices to form one large voice. The voice of a God.
I was told in jr high that I had a writing style that emulated the greats such as Albert Camus, Dante Alighieri, and as my elementary school art teacher Brookanne Mcallister told me, Marquis De Sade.
However, this post isn't about my book, it's about my first piece of music that I have ever written. I know, I know, you sit thinking deeply to yourself, "why put such a masterful work of music against the backdrop of an advertisement for your soon to be successful book?"
Well you see, you beautiful pile of atoms stacked up nearly six feet, perhaps taller than six feet. Molecule by molecule formed in a star you think to yourself, but you do not understand, I wrote this piece for my book trailer. I know my writing style is incredible thought provoking and I don't know how to turn it off my fellow human beings in crime, my fellow bits of star dust stacked perfectly in which we can communicate through the luck of a statistically anomaly. So look past that and please just critique me on my musical piece.
please give me your honest opinion. An opinion that is to critisize my work but to not put down my spirits. To critizie is to chisle away at problems and to leave behind a meticulously crafted statue formed by the millions of artisanal hands of you. My fellow shadowy and secretive buddies. I want to pursue a career in musical piece, so I present to you,
An Ode to Atemis™© - David Farris®™© 2015
Holy shit OP, I'm swaying back and forth like tulips in the peaceful yet chaotic wind. This song makes me feel as though a storm of great proportions is coming. I can feel the epicness of it, the beauty of it. With this sense of pleasure that I am experiencing, I know that I must test fate and ask you of your book. If your style of literature is as genius of ability to write music on almost a Beethoven level. Please OP tell me more about this book ERAFEEN ™© WRITTEN BY DAVID FARRIS 2015
My beautiful dear internet strange, to find out more or to preorder my book, you need not stress any longer.
My passions of writing and music aren't just the only things that I am a true atisian at, I am also highly skilled at HTML, I coded and designed this webiste all by myself. I don't even know coding, but the C++ language just flowed through my finger tips
what the fuck is this shit
THANK YOU SO MUCH OP I JUST PREORDERED! Seriously the premise looks amazing and your writing style is impeccable, savant level genius. And your musical abilities..... you should be writing pieces of Ghibli movies. Your truly a master at every ability you strive to commandeer. You are like a willow of the wisp, darting across the forest in an impressive manner dropping intelligence like a river that flows from your soul that glistens in a meadow pond
I'm sorry to hear that young nomad soul traveling through the spiritual plane of information know that of the internet. My fans have told me I have a universal writing ability that anyone of any language could appreciate.
This however is now about my book ERAFEEN ™© WRITTEN BY DAVID FARRIS 2015 this is about my musical piece that I wrote and performed myself on my book trailer, seen here
please critique it instead of being negative against yourself, it hurts your soul to be down on yourself.
This is the worst post I've ever seen on 4chan, or the greatest bait to ever grace this bolivian shiteating forum.
OP sincerely kill yourself today.
It would behoove you to refrain from insulting someone just because their intelligence is much higher than yours.
Sincerely, please focus on the music. This isn't about my book ERAFEEN ™© WRITTEN BY DAVID FARRIS 2015 which more info can be found out about at
this is about the musical piece I put together myself,
An Ode to Atemis™© - David Farris®™© 2015
peace be with you, the stars are lining up
My father thinks I'm a homosexual and he thinks that piano music is homosexual, so I put that there so that he would think I didn't produce any homosexual propaganda. Sorry about not giving you any context weary traveler.
Tell me more about several of Kooky Spira's ten kingdoms.
mfw reading this thread on drugs
i know there must be thousands of delusional "artists/writers" that do this type of shit, but i don't get why anyone would promote their stuff here of all places besides it being b8.
his dead father: a legend
his father figure: an icon