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Alright guys, need a quick critique.

This is jst my backing track, no solo's, no lead melody or anything, working on this.

Thoughts suggesstions?

Drums sound straight out of a 2005-10 mid-budget porno.
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I like the jazzy feel to the piano and the shifting atmospheric synth thing in the background. I'd kind of agree about the percussion sounding porn-like, maybe make it sound less muffled unless that's what you're going for

Since you posted the soundcloud logo, it's shameless self promotion time

>dubstep, trance, heavy, melodic

If you have a couple of seconds, my track Eulogy is up youredm.com's Fresh Face Friday contest, and I need dem sweet votes

get some lowpass on that lead and youll get a catchy porn melody
also forgot to say, it could sound extremely cool with pitched down vocals. just a suggestion.
lmao, yeah my percussion is definitely not my strong suit

thanks for the feedback. What do you mean less muffled, as in...sorry im kinda bad at this.

Ill check ur music out too, np
omg..OP here again..listening to your track now...oh god..its killing me man...good stuff...

....killing me...
Not necessarily muffled in a bad way, if you boosted the higher frequencies (17kHz+) and maybe the lower ones too (50-80Hz), the percussion might sound a bit more powerful and present in the mix.

what program and vst's are you using?

Also, im a complete noob at EQ'ing, how did you learn and where could you point me to that could help?

Voted for you're track too

>Dream pop
Reaper and loads of VSTs, what do you want to know specifically?

I pretty much just learned through trial and error, a lot of stuff is obvious, such as tracks that aren't bass instruments or percussion having a high pass on them around 300Hz so the bass stands out, that kind of thing... I'm far from an expert with EQing and mixing so you'd be better off finding a guide on the internet. Practice is key though.

>indie folk from eastern europe

going to return all feedback and listen to your shit
well first, how long have you been making music? Eulogy was sick, i'd like to know how long youve been mastering you're sound
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>Trip-Hop/Sample Based/Groovewave
Since April of this year, not been terribly active in the past month...

The music you make when you start off is always going to be pretty bad, but what you posted is a pretty solid early attempt OP
Lovely...love youre sound. Garden was great man.

same as above. Very chill, you're vocals fit perfectly. Love the guitar
Feedback on mine? Im OP btw
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>ashtray juice

hit me on da cloud

Working on some new stuff so an eye if you're into it!

>down-tempo, ambient, pop, drone, home-recorded
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Amateur hip hop producer looking for feedback, will return feedback on soundcloud

Thanks, I appreciate it. It's still a work in progress. Jst needed some ears to hear. I'm gonna work on the percussion and already have melody for the chorus that i need to track down.

started April of this year and you came up with a monster of a track so soon. That's pretty impressive. I'm still trying to find my sound and voice, ive been doing a lot of music theory reading. Were you in band or orchestra or something in school?
sounds cool man, try some synth sounds over that stuff...and maybe distant highly reverbed vocals, would sound cool I think
from: https://soundcloud.com/dirty_bones
thanks for listening
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>chillwavey, psychedelic, washed-out RnB, not sure
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>lo-fi teenage bedroom witch rap

new track

my voice is weird

haha thanks man, I've played guitar for god knows how long and I'm not going to lie and say it hasn't helped, but I don't really think it matters how long you've played an instrument for or whatever as long as you have an understanding of what sounds good.

If you want to talk more or want advice about anything, just message me on soundcloud if you want

>guitar pop demo
>female vox
>more demos/full album with pro engineer soon

This is our demo ^^ We hope you like it!!

This is cool
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>some kind of house i guess

also is it possible in FL Studio 11 to mark certain bars in playlist as "to be skipped"? like the cursor come to the marked part but just skips it and continues right after it?
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>some1 critique my rap? no one responded in the last thread :'(
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>Ambient, Piano

Its got an old school vibe. Think 70s-80s or GTA radio FEVER 105



Here's mine and enjoy!

>sloppy ambient, piano

>classic vibe
>new vintage
OP Here:

really awesome and funky. This is really damn good, you're vocals in the mix are fking good. Great work, keep it up my dawg

I live in Atlanta and hear alot of Hiphop, Rap, trap beats and music. You're instrumental is pretty good. the vocals need work though. Im talking mix down and overall flow. Needs more energy and feeling. Sounds like you're just reciting you're lyrics as opposed to speaking to my soul.

Thanks alot man, I WILL be messaging you on Soundcloud so keep a heads up for StillBlade lol

Hey i love this sound, its really good. I think the vocals clash with the instrumentation though. You did mention you're gonna work with an engineer soon, so that may not be a problem. Overall youre sound is unique, keep making more music :)

This shit is pretty good. What sound is that lead synth. I'm really digging it. Also, i work in FL myself...cant answer you're question unfortunately. =( . Maybe just create an arrangement in your sequencer seperate from the main arrangement and have it repeat that.

Need some work. Can't tell if serious or not.

whoa really creepy sound. But its definitely good. Need a better mix though, i hear alot of clipping and overlapping and a lot of things arent vividly clear to me.
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Singer/Songwriter, looking for feedback, thanks for listening. I need sleep but ill listen in the mornin these threads are a lot more fun when you participate
Thanks for the feedback.
Just listened to your page. What piano is that? It's awesome. What did you use to record it?

Really good, sounds like something i'd hear on the radio hear. Flow is good. Keep it up, sounds like you can get a lot better too.
Hey, /mu/ r8 my symphony introduction draft


its a draft, so its not final but all the parts which i want to exist are there, also the dynamics and legato hasnt been adjusted in the production
Great music, i love it. Would definitely chill to this smoking a blunt on the porch. You're really talented on guitar keep it up.
This is beautiful...how did you record all of this?
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throw in a kick in there, i only hear sub and it's not very hard hittin
high pass the hi hats, maybe stereo spread them too. if u think it sounds good
snare doesn't hit hard enough
piano is well above everything, making the flute and..well everything else a bit quiet lol
basically work on ur mixin, composition is OK i guess

>drones and repetition
>digital synth soundscape
>dat feel

Im mostly concerned about the drop (and the mix which im working on)

Is it too drastic a change? Im tryna get some ideas or song examples to get inspiration from.

Will return fdback on SC
thank you very much!

its done through 3 softwares that i "join" together

Sibelius, which is a score writer, here i write my music

Kontakt which is a bank software where i put files from a library which are the samples of each instrument

and East West Quantum Leap orchestra which is a library of orchestral intrument samples

Also if i its not a hassle can i ask what stood out in the introduction?

>electronic pop
i really like how you want your guitar music to be melodic

sure i can say that structurally and form wise you need to develop a little more but so far your use of melody is very well done

>new vintage
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experimental hip hop beats
returning feedback
Thanks for the feedback. Im using an 808 preset drumkit. The kick is there but you're right it's very subby. My mixing is absolutely terrible and will work on it, thanks for commenting. As far as my composition goes, what do you think is missing?

whoa lots of energy, this is great. That drop though....very nice. It isnt too drastic, i think it rly makes the song.

Wow, i see. It sounds amazing, i had to follow you. I really love the use of the woodwinds personally. Its smooth and soothing. I know you said you're not done, so i think you dont need me to tell you it's fairly quiet.

The intro grabbed my attention. Then the song pulled me in and kept me. Love it, I can totally vibe to this. Are you doing the vocals too? And is it just you? Or do you work with others?
thanks it's actually just a remix of this guy Wholewheat's track: https://soundcloud.com/whole-wheat/anyhow-anyway-anyday

there were no stems so plyd the stuff live over the track
woah i listened to that

thats is some interesting stuff

The entire feel of it is kind of "surreal"

was this meant?
you have a good build there

this i actually really liked

it needs work, the percussion needs to be matched with the flow of the music
also the piano needs to have some variations

but other than that it has a "good flow"
who knows
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>Psychedelic beat music

Just put out our second LP. Just dreamy psychedelic documentation.life events, memories and moments within nature. Hope /mu/ guys enjoy, we were always on these threads trading feedback in '12, good days.
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I've been working on some demos if anyone is interested


>Vaportrap, Chill, Ambient infulences

>14 track album set
>free d/l
20 minute experimental sent 100% anal

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Working on making some feelings into electronica.

would appreciate feedback, going through some randomly selected soundclouds here.
I make some hip hop instrumentals, wondering if I could get some feed back.

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>New song

>Experimental, Psychedelic Ambient
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here you go
what is this? I changed my Sylenth to the settings in the first part of the picture...still sounds like and adjusted version of the default init sound.
alright also adjusted part b, not too much of a difference. I also notice i have 72 voices as opposed to your 96 in the picture.

What sound are you pointing me towards?
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>some sexy rnb shit
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Thats the settings for the lead that rolls in around 0:28, i thought thats what were you asking about
pic related is the eq
Ohhh my bad didnt know >>50162450 was you. Thanks for that. Why did you take down your track?
oh btw thanks alot for the feedback. I doubt you're still monitoring but thanks. By percussion needing to match, you mean slow it down? Or change the instruments? Or rearrange?

Thanks again
well you see

the rest of your music has a pace, the percussion doesnt match that for some reason your soundcloud wont work anymore so i cant point out what i mean.

but from memory this what i thought.

The piece has a rolling flow such as it feels smaller through the beginning of a phrase (section) then it ends up fuller. I think your drums should help build that
I didnt, probably soundcloud did for some reason
Alright, i understand what you're saying now. Thank for the feedback. =) Will definitely work on it.

well that fucking sucks...reupload! lol
>sample-based shenanigans
is soundcloud acting screwy for anyone else?
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>sadkid productions, lofi bedroom bullshit, depressedcore beats
it loads my own page, but not anyone else's...
i'm having all sorts of issues. spotlight tracks won't show, can't view anyone else atm

> trying be lo-fi
yeah I can't log in. I was just about to post in here for that reason
thought i was the only one
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hopefully its not some retarded faggot ddosing soundcloud
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>Dubstep, Trap, Electronic
New Track
we cant see shit yet
Glad to see I'm not the only one having issues.
Welp time to go back to making shitty music
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>experimental noise
>inspired by death grips and noise artists

I return all feedback on the cloud
hey man post your soundcloud, ill be the judge of that
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Feedback maybe?
>asking for feedback
>soundcloud is broken
Is this finally the end of soundcloud? Am I actually going to have to start handing out casettes at school and hope it reaches someone big? Am I going to have to purchase ads in the school newspaper? Get second to last place in a talent show? I spent all my bandcamp money on xanax and Arizonas, please /mu/, hold me.
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>tfw you literally just uploaded something you're absurdly hyped about
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>Alt Rock
>beats (the 3 new uploads are what my work is)
feedback pls
are you guys retarded?
a little bit
didn't have any problems until you mentioned the issue. my bad. also, jynxed
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just finished writing this song tonight

>electronic, acoustic, vox, idk


idk but i think it's the best thing i've written

will listen to your guys' music
I've missed you.
yo seems to be back

Sounds very James Blake. Regardless, I like it.
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just tryna bump my stuff out.



>Hip Hop Instrumentals
>House Music

Its a final draft before I submit it to the remix contest.
Genre is some kind of step, take a listen!

Will return feedback on SC
>various electronic originals and mixes

Got both a new original and a new mix up.
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Just trying to get my name out there.

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>git gud
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>live acoustic/experimental rock

It's pretty unique stuff. I return feedback.
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O U F - Crisis:

>Alt. Hip Hop Duo
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First time i hear you ,and dammn you got some good shit man

>New EP

>Sample based
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Me again guys, dropped this 2 days ago!


um hi there c:

Not bad, what are you using to produce?

mostly electronic, some beats
>indie rock, post hardcore, emo
just one song, would really appreciate feedback. Thanks.
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>electronic, experimental, idm, tracker


I used to rhyme like this, but most of my stuff these days is a bit slower. Quicky one-take type thing, I've been trying to record a tune every day or two over the past little bit.
>experimental psychedelic dreamjazz
>we've working on new songs, its sounding pretty neat
>solo stuff from Ocelot and Polysemy

you're a nerd and im callin you out
>lol jk love you
let me know what you think :)


Hip Hop beats

You seemed to of calmed down today.

Production of the track is really good, reminds me of Death Grips with it's industrial sound. I feel like there's maybe too much effects on the vocals as they are already not clear enough in the mix to hear what you're actually saying. The vocals need to be re-mastered I think.

There's a bit around 3:03 where you lose the timing, I don't understand if it's intentional, but it kind of ruins the otherwise decent flow.

just uploaded my first demo
>Psychedelic Rock
New track, finished it yesterday, suggestions?

I like move, I'm a sucker for airy vocals, wish I could sing
So cosy
me too, fixed now though

Hey thanks man! Your track was great. It would really benefit from some vocals!
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>like eating electric sugar
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Here's my newest track:

Its just something quick while school takes up most my time.

Here's my first project I put together this summer:

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Hey guys. Gonna be listening to all of your pages during the course of today while I clean my house. I will follow/comment on everything in soundcloud first then i'll paste it to here.


love you bye
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>Afghanistanian wITCH HOUSE


>Hip Hop Instrumentals


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>Classical Groove

I give crit cos that what it do
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>Electronics with guitars
>A bit experimental
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>Instrumental Hip Hops


some guy said the drums were to soft I fixed them.

Nice and chill, followed.
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Machine of the Absurd
Phony External Signals -LP available


>chillwave, haven't uploaded any vaporwave yet, but it's soon to come

I wrote this, this week.
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>inspired by ps1 and n64 osts

no man we love YOU
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>sad cutesy acoustic music, female vox
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Just finished up a song today, hopefully you like my stuff
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Thoughts on my new track? I can't tell if it came out well or not.
>beats, samples, instrumental
I'm curious, why Vittorio Sgarbi?
I didn't even know that's who he is. I just saw that on a cover of a book in Italy so I bought it and made an album cover out of it.
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>> game music etc.
>> guitar finger picking acoustic
did you generate that picture's glitch yourself?
if so, what technique did you use?
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gritty, sample-based hip-hop. remixes, redubs, re-raps, new raps and everything dirty in between. i peep anyone with crazy cool genres i see on here ...
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Das gud.

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>NEET Pop, pitch shifted choirs, lyrics about death, shinsei kamattechan covers, can't sing

Will comment on any songs or genres that pique my interest.

Hope you enjoy my weird attempt at pop!

>EDM/Glitch Hop/Chiptune

Would love some feedback or general comments. As usual, I will return all comments directly on soundcloud. Thx!
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>(German) Hip Hop, DnB, Bass, Dubstep, Breakbeat, ...

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>Post Trap
>Gang Music
New Song
Lyrical rap


Will return feedback
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>rap, reggae, folk, more, less

Not bad, good flow, good concept, would sound better if sounded more natural and not reading i dig it
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>could really use some advice/criticism/feedback on these vocals I just put up on this track
>will return the favor
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WordPad effect

dope lyrics. that beat on flowers is freeeesh. keep spitting and tightening up that flow. you've got a little bit of a slug thing going on, but sounds like you're still holding back some of your emotion / emphasis. enjoyed your sung bits.


heavy shit .. your production work reminds me of Pinch, which is a major compliment. "haunted" is the one.


wow that beat tho. flow is solid, shades of a lot of stuff from kendrick to migos. dope combination of elements between the experimental production and trappier vocals. enjoyed, keep tightening up that delivery your voice is good.


you've got a lot of good ideas lyrically, i feel like something in your flow isn't coming through tho. singing parts are pretty decent. i would say try to slide into a pocket on the beat more, you can definitely ride the bpm but the delivery is a little scattershot. once again your ideas are dope, plenty of potential, keep putting in that work. love what you did with that fade at the end.


this is well produced (the kick and clap on work get a little stale after a while but the melodies are on point, interesting elements). your flow is coming along as well, maybe push some more emotion into your delivery. like the combination of styles here.


this beat is dope like some gold panda type of shit. slaps pretty hard i like that east indies vibe. your singing definitely isn't bad, you certainly pour your heart into it and stick the notes. when you get really into it you almost slide into a bob dylan kind of thing. maybe even them out a little more with compression, they fade into the beat at points. unique style for sure but i was rocking with it. not sure on that piano bit.


new joint i produced. mpc / analog. pete rock / boom bap type of vibes with weird atmospherics. let me know what y'all think.

i liked your music 'cause is not as sad as most people's stuff here
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>this si csomic pop
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>guitar pop demo
>female vox
>more demos & album w/ pro engineer soon

Hope you enjoy our song ^^ <3

The most digital in the game right here !!
>vocal harmonies

Your donation of just 3 minutes of listening time or more will help make sure a child doesn't go to bed hungry tonight.
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need some feedback on this will return all feedback
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>Dubstep, Trap, Electronic

Anime, Vidya whatever

New Track, will return feedback and shit
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Just experimenting.
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A remix (sorta) of SZA's Julia.

>electronic, alternative r&b
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Newest from a few days ago! Happy weekend /mu/

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Until November is a shitty chicken
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>implying I don't know u
>implying you don't have dubs
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the hat is too loud and too bright. more powerful precussion, and add a subtle bass line. Other than that, good song
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>rock/indie/punk/alt/garage/(insert rock based genre here)

Pretty good about feedback and reccs. I appreciate listens and input.
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im a sad piece of shit. critique my music if ya wanna im just gonna set it here.

I'll come back and critique in a few, currently eating a hamburger.


>chiptune, techno, please help me name my genre
New track. I sampled from Arthur the cartoon, because why not.



Let me know what you think. I'll return feedback.
That drop tho, A+ production as well man,
This guy gave a lot of crits, go check his shit out, won't disappoint.
reporting in


>post rock
Hard in the Paint Remix
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>Bruh...i'm trying electronic kinds of music now.
yeah why be sad when you can just groove, appreciate it
Wow this is like 1000 nuclear explosions at once!!!
the feels on your guitar is so strung!!

check out this track...
>smartfag metal
Or whatever
come check out the ruckus

> had feels
> made song

any feedback would be awesome
feedback please

is that a string instrument or an e.piano (for main melody in beginning)?
I like it a lot, but imo the bright electric sounding thing is out of place.

it's a ukulele. i kinda took the song in an entirely different direction after the beginning
unless it's supposed to be lo-fi, clean up the mix man

otherwise good stuff
I like the original place the song was going. It feels like you got distracted and it kinda turned into dance music over time. I enjoyed the mellow
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>electronic, alternative R&B
get into synthesis man your sounds are very bland
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>hollow squad // raider klan // new internet trap wave shit
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A while back, I made a mixed CD for my girlfriend, and she really enjoyed it, and made one for me later.
Now, I'm making her a CD of around 5 or 6 songs written and performed by me. Lately, she's been saying that I 'owe' her one because she's bored of the CDs in her car, so I'm gonna surprise her with this one, but it'll take a while.
If you want to see the two songs I have finished so far, here's my soundcloud:


Feedback would be much appreciated. Keep in mind these aren't the final takes, they're pretty much just demos. I'll upload more songs as I write them.

Just for some context, we both like AJJ, The Mountain Goats, NMH, Arctic Monkeys, etc.

Catchy rap music, check me out baby.

>Eddie Murphy Wave
>Eddie Murphy Core
>Proto-Hardcore Murphy Movement

I got some lyrical rap guys,


Will return all feedback
Do it.


>new track

Wow. This thread has survived. Good work everyone!

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Wrong pic, ooops
There we go
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>Noise/Drone, Electronic, Ambient
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>dreary stuff
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Been delving into some midi songs, leaning towards the happier side this time. Here's another WIP.

Feedback appreciated. Obviously the song is short.

Hey there!

We're Senzu Collective! An LA based experimental electronic beat collective.
We started in 2k11 and intend to keep going strong.

Fuck with us.


Check out out this months release line up
from the fam at Senzu Collective! (pic related)


follow us and stuff too :)

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really nice B]
>chill guitar and organic samples
>emotional and dark, slowly picks up
Yo i just dropped a bunch of new tracks I would love some feedback
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