Alone in Equestria Girls Verse #18.1: Sorry I fucked up edition

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>>30681343
Again I'm really sorry, had to do it from mobile, please have this sunny.

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>>30681343
New thread smell

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>Anon goes to Equestria
>But not really
>Equestria Girls
>Is fucking confused
>And really fucking salty
>He didn't even follow that shit, thinks Sunset is an OC character made exclusively for EqG, doesn't know she's a pony from Equestria.
>Is a teen again
>Makes it hard to have more than the suit he was wearing for an interview before he ended up there
>Especially when he's a literal anomaly, without a family nor a social security.
>The only reason he's even at canterlot high school is because nobody really asked him what he was doing.
>He just followed a girl he recognized to be one of the >no hooves mane six to their classes and bullshitted his way into being a student.
>He sleeps at school like a hobo.
>Hard to make friends when he has no money, no place to live and with only the wrinkled suit he wears everyday like the poorfag he's become for clothes.
>Did he mention he was really fucking salty about the no ponies thing?
>Because he was really fucking salty about the no ponies thing and it shows.
>One day, Sunset Shimmer catches one of his monologuing rants about >no hooves
>"...and fucking really, a principal? This place's Princess Celestia is the fucking principal of a public school in "Ambiguous city" USA? Why not a princess? There's plenty of places with monarchs still! And what the fuck does a vice-principal even do? This was a bigger mistake than Princess Twilight."
>Sunset thinks he's a pony from the portal if he knows Princess Celestia and Princess Twilight.
>Starts having an eye on him
>Notices most of the above things. Makes special note that he has no place to stay and eats only cafeteria food.
>She isn't that well off either, but at least she has a roof over her head.
>>Hey girls, you ever wonder why Anon is always alone?

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>>30681907
>AngryAnon in >nohooves Equestria

Why is Rainbow Dash seem like the only one who wears her magic geode thing all the time? I dont recall seeing anyone else with theirs.

>>30682343
they brought that up in a short actually

>>30682365
Yeah thats what i mean.
In the pet short for example, fluttershy could have had her pendant to talk to animals, although she seemed okay for it.
In the monday blues short, Rainbow Dash uses her geode to get to school, burning her shoes.

But what about everyone else? I figured they should all be wearing them after that movie magic short.

Update coming tomorrow. Ish.
Tomorrow, Wednesday.
One of those.

>>30682847
Who dis?

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>>30682864
Sci

>>30682977
You don't have your name up dude.
>>30681354
>>30681343
Also.
>Came back from work to see new art
Bueno.

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>>30682977

>>30682999
>new art
That pic is old m8.
And looks like the guy who's going to update is Sea

>>30681907
Oh, this could have a neat turn out. If Sunset manages to seduce him, by accident or purpose, does he hold onto her like a dying man drowning for horsepussy, or does he reeee and call her a mutant?
>>30682977
Uh huh. Carry on baitman

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>>30683017
>Jokes are bait
Oh boy

>>30682977
He's finally back?

>>30683032
what do you think

>>30682999
Speaking of art, how bout some of bite me once anon?

>>30682847
I believe in you fag

Bamp

i'm trying to read through YFN's story, but i'm having a really hard time keeping interest through the second chapter. the flashback dream sequence is so tiresome and boring.
can i skip it without missing much? he was doing such a nice job of showing and not telling before that point.

>>30682977
Every new thread someone brings him up...

Get over it, he was a shit writefag anyway.

>>30684645
Im trying to recall which one you're talking about. I'd say finish it anyway, but if you're losing interest, you could probably skip so long as nothing important is going on.

>>30685356
Post more TwiTwi you cuck.

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>>30685444
Trips demand it, we need more twiggles

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>>30685444
Fuck you mister Trips, she's mine.

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>>30685498

>>30685506
M O M M Y

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>>30685506
>had a qt gf
>practically carbon copy of twiggle
>tfw gf didn't love me
>tfw i finally got her back

Still hurts bros

>>30681907
Writefags? Please

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>>30685553

>>30686133
Maybe, don't hold me to that though.

Aspiring writefag here. I wanna write something for you guys, but I'm still in the brainstorming phase. What do you guys think of this?
>crime is on the rise in Canterlot
>gang violence has quadrupled and drugs begin flowing into schools
>humane7 are troubled by this, but don't know what to do other than urge others to stay clean
>Enter Anon, ex-SWAT member turned School Resource Officer
>Officer Anon begins cleaning up the school
>Officer Anon proceeds to clean up the city any way he can
>Humane7 are troubled when they realize just how far Anon is willing to go protect and serve

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>>30681343
Yo, i like that OP pic

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>>30687099
I'm interested

>>30687371
Sadly the drawfag is ded.

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>>30687473
You're bullshitting me

>>30687099
interesting, but how would schoolgirls wind up getting involved with SRO-turned-batman?

you would probably need some way for the school to be central to the city's crime spree, and guarantee continued interaction with the girls and anon. you could try a variation of a "black market for magic" and the girls are targeted because of their innate magic, and the best way for criminals (of the non-magical type, so beyond the girls' purview of expertise and experience) to get them all at once (because their magic only works together) would be to target them at school.

>>30687941
Well, I'm thinking for starters, the girls would probably just introduce themselves to Anon. Them being the friendly, good-natured, and popular girls they are, it makes sense to me that they'd want to talk with him. Hell, the SRO I had in school was awesome. Super chill and loved to shoot the shit with kids. Of course, I've also got a few darker ideas. As for keeping them interacting, I've also got some ideas. I don't want to put to much out there, but I'm thinking he gets roped into helping with school events, or one of the younger faculty members let's slip that they went to school with Anon, and that he's a lot different than he used to be. This spurs the girls into asking more about him.

I don't know how I feel about the black magic, though. It feels a little similar to what NaOH is doing over in fingerbang, and I'm not sure I want Anon to be more concerned about protecting the girls over all the other students, or even the general populace. I'll take it into consideration though.

>>30688102
>similar to what NaOH is doing over in fingerbang
link? all i see is the dash romance storyline

>>30688300
>dash romance story
Yeah, that's it.
https://pastebin.com/rQQ97EWC
It's long as fuck, but I thought it was kinda interesting. Sort of a cross over with Hotline Miami. The black magic stuff doesn't come up until WFD: A second chance.
https://pastebin.com/f46HtqJQ
The gist of it is that aside from drugs and shit, a gang begins kidnapping young girls to sell off as sex slaves, and Anon puts on a mask and begins viciously murdering them to protect his friends. Anon causes so much death and destruction that dark energy starts to spring up. If the girls don't find a way to stop it, it'll throw the harmony of the world outta wack or some shit, and doom the world.

>>30687601
WRITE YOU FAGGOT!

>>30688390
Nothing like a murderous rampage to set off a dark magic bomb. Classic. Speaking of, isn't the writefag about to begin his seasonal updates again?
>>30688102
Should be good either way. Just don't die on us. Also, if you do start writefagging, do you know our general rules for writefags aspiring to be placed on the bin?

>>30688489
NaOH? He actually just updated a little while ago. And no, I didn't know there where rules, can you explain?

>>30688519
Sure thing. As a precedence set by writefags dropping like flies after SciAnon left (only for Axii Anon to take up the thread on his back), we instituted a rule for new writefags to be able to update at least twice in 2 consecutive threads. At which point we add them to the alive list, after at least 3 threads then they get moved to the MIA/Unknown writefag list, and if they don't post after 2 threads in that spot, or at least check in, then they are considered dead. In the event of a writefag being placed in the unknown list the need to post in 2 consecutive threads again. Other than that, that's everything.

>>30688540
Sounds fair enough, thanks

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>>30688459

>>30688565
No problem. Oh, there was one last rule I forgot, absolutely no Outside chats, be they Discord or otherwise. And that's everything. Good night then.

>>30688629
>no outside chats
Good. That shit is elitist cancer. You should see what happened to /nst/ when the writefags all got into skype. Dick sucking and faggotry all over the place except for Urchin who turned down the invite

>>30688390
This sounds interesting. Gonna gove it a read

>>30688390
oh damn. i read half of "a second chance" first chapter and thought the writefag just put a lot of thought into the lore or something. well, considering what i've read so far about the first story, i think i'll skip it.

>>30690326
I havent read it or caught up, but it seems like its more focused on the violence and harem stuff, but less on lore maybe? Again I havent read it, only gleaned bits and bobs from the few updates each thread.

>>30690621
Its been a while since I read through the first half, but I think the first part is more focused on Dash rather than a harem type thing, while A Second Chance definitely goes heavy on the harem.

>>30690788
Yeah that sounds about right, i only read one or two posts, he seems to have some kind of points system with the characters, dont know why. Is that kind of thing in hotline miami?

>>30692298
Nah. I'm pretty sure it means jack shit in the long run, but it's just a way of showing how character's opinion of Anon changes. I think it's kinda cool.

>>30692362
Oh yeah nah yeah i'm not too fussed about it, would be handy to help show relationships, and how they treat eachother. But yeah nah its alright mate.

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So, here we are once more, and by that I mean so here I am failing to deliver once more...
Please end me
So by combination of a planned speed running competition of Dark Souls I didn't know was being held at my apartment and it fucking up my sleeping schedule I haven't got the update
It's almost there, but I'm still short a few posts
I will be updating in the morning though
On the bright side I was able to fufill an old dream of mine
Making a character with a longer stamina bar then health bar
So forgive me once again and look forward to the next update, tomorrow ;~;

>>30693162
Get fit or get hit, the code to live by.

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>>30693162
I'm just gonna start anticipating your updates a day or two after you announce it.

Enjoy your souls though.

>>30693631
Would you?

>>30693162
F

>>30693631
Hey I drew that

>>30694725
Neat

>>30693793
Yes.

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>>30694725
I save all the cute art people make.

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Continued from: https://pastebin.com/LLukQs1V

>Much like before when you last ventured this deep into a mind you instinctively halt before entering
>You can’t help but stare at the emptiness as you stand at the threshold of the subconscious
>A gnawing sense of trepidation rises from within you as you gaze into the abyss
>Perhaps it’s the sight of the light from your side flowing into the darkness and somehow brightening the nothingness that is the floor that inspires fear
>Or maybe it’s the unease you get from plunging into the depths of the mind no one, not even the its owner, truly ever sees that’s set you on edge
>Whatever causes it is you manage to overcome the growing feeling of dread that hangs in your mind as you step foot into the darkness
>You carefully venture further past the threshold, one step at a time, until you’re fully submerged within the darkness
>With a startlingly noisy *SLAM* from behind you find yourself entrenched in almost total darkness as the light from behind you disappears
>You find only yourself illuminated by the dim blue light that radiates from Dream Cutter as you peer over your shoulder
>Nothing but pitch black whence you entered
>It seems you can only press forward into the unknown
>As you continue to cover ground in the dark you begin to miss sound
>Before at least the hum of the lights and your own footsteps kept you company, but in here there is nothing
>Not even your breath, as you don’t need to breathe
>There’s no feeling of air rustling past as you move either
>The only real use of your senses besides surveying the empty expanse ahead of you is the feeling of solid ground below your feet
>Could you not see your feet moving you wouldn’t know if you were traversing any ground

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>>30696861
It’s the feeling of sensory deprivation that makes you the most uncomfortable
>You don’t know why this place even exists as it is
>That being as simply a void
>Perhaps it has something to do with how you infiltrate the mind?
>Using magic to give the mind itself to forge a world for you to traverse
>Maybe instead of a void the unconscious simply paints a canvas that a conscious mind can’t comprehend?
>It’s actually quite an interesting thought to mull ov—
>”it…”
>You stop your attempt to distract yourself with idle meandering as you hear, something
>The dying echoes of a voice?
>Had it not been for the absence of any and everything you might not have caught it, but any change is enough to notice here
>You can’t quite tell what direction it’s coming from, but you don’t think direction really matters here anyway
>The best thing to do would be to resume walking, and hopefully you’ll encounter someth—
>”ou…”
>This time whatever it is seems less faint, enough so that you can tell a general direction in which it’s coming from and be almost sure that it was indeed a voice
>Your footsteps increase in frequency as you hurry towards hopefully the source of the voice and the corruption you’ve come to purge
>The solid hard ground beneath gives way to a much softer almost carpet-like surface as you stride forth
>”ster…”
>Another echo of a voice reaches your ears, this time from someone else
>The voice sounds similar somehow, and much clearer than the first fragment of sound you heard
>”Unforgivable…”
>The increasing frequency of different voices renews your vigor as you feel joy brewing within for finding anything down here in the deep

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>>30696872
>You can see something in the distance
>Like a tiny splotch of color on an otherwise black landscape
>As you close the distance between you and the unmoving dot you begin to notice other specks around it appearing and vanishing from sight alongside more discernible words
>”you?”
>”-o that…”
>”faker…”
>Though what you hear isn’t very cohesive you can get a general feel from their inflection
>That being, disappointment
>Getting ever so closer you can at least make out the color of the still dot in the distance
>”human being…”
>Grey and green
>That’s probably Anon, or another representation of him
>”-l a lie?”
>Can’t exactly tell what he’s doing though
>While squinting you can tell what seems to be standing around him, or in this case who
>It appears to be Sunset
>No wait, now Rainbow Dash
>”-ess I was wrong.”
>Their voices seem to reverb slightly, but you now can match the voices easily as you proceed towards them
>Along with being able to hear what they say entirely
>”Ah guess he took us all fer a ride.”
>Applejack?
>It seems as each of them speak they appear in front of Anon before fading away as the next talks
>Are they reprimanding Anon?
>”Well how great is that, not only does Nonners the terrible take us for a ride he likes to help book his mom for flights too!”
>What on Earth is Ms. Pie referring to?
>When Anon finally becomes clearly discernible you can see he looks so small compared to the disappearing and reappearing girls
>Almost like he’s sitting on the non-existent ground
>”A morbid joke Pinkie, but most certainly fitting for a bakemono like Anon-me.”
>Even Twilight is verbally lashing him?
>Just what’s going on?

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>>30696893
>It’s only as Twilight is fading away do you notice how twisted her face is by the absolute contempt present on it
>The sight is enough to take you aback
>Tearing your eyes from the spot she used to occupy you see that Anon is huddled on the floor
>His distress is easy to see
>Rocking back and forth slowly while pressing his forearms together to cradle his head you can hear him whimpering incoherently
>Rushing to his side you kneel down placing a hand on his shoulders
>He doesn’t acknowledge your presence
>You open your mouth to comfort him, but for some reason the words don’t come out
>Something else does though
“I would’ve talked sister out of looking after you if I knew the truth.”
>Both you and Anon share a look of abject horror as the words tumble out of your mouth with a will of their own
>What!?
>That’s ridiculous, you know the situation he was in and you’d never hold any feelings he bore from it against him!
>Why did you say that?
>You try say that you’d never actually do that, but instead
"After all, what kind of son does that to their own moth—"
>You clamp your mouth shut before you finish that sentence
>Why do words force themselves out of your mouth?
>Opening it for a moment causes them to spew out once more while you loose control over it
“Or maybe I could’ve just mentioned how unlike your father you reall—”
>You slap both your hands over your mouth before you say anything else to agitate the situation anymore
>It’s obvious that something’s controlling what you can say
>You try to inspect your surroundings as your sister appears beside you
>”You say that as if his ineptitude compared to his father isn’t clear to anyone that knew him.”
>The phantom image of your sister sneers as she looks down her nose at Anon
>”If this garbage was even a fraction of the man his father was, well, maybe he wouldn’t be here.”
>You can’t help but stare wide eyed at the fake Tia

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>>30696910
>This, this is definitely Shadowfright’s handiwork
>There’s no denying it at all now
>You ball your fists tightly as the realization finally hits you
>The small amount of hope that resided in the back of your mind seems to have all but disappeared along with the twist visage of your sister
>This is just like him
>You may have been able to wave off everything else as a copycat of sorts, but the way he torments people…
>Turning to Anon you open your mouth hastily to say something, but slap a hand over it at the last moment when you realize you’d probably be unable to control what you’d say
>You already know not to play into his game
>Drawing on past knowledge you examine the space above Anon looking for anything that stands out in the darkness
>You have to consciously ignore the voices of several other people as they lash Anon while you attempt to see through the deception
>Sending Dream Cutter into the air directly above Anon you try to light up the nothing
>There has to be something there, there always i—
>A glint!
>A blue glint in the air!
>It’s a small thin line like a…
>Following the tiny refraction of light up its string like structure causes a twisted entity pulling at the strings to materialize from the aether
>That’s, new
>The floating monstrosity looks more like a marionette then a marionettist
>While its torso seems to be mostly hidden by a cloak of some sort you can see that its arms are seemingly assembled out of different parts and pieces that seem more appropriate for toys you’d see in a museum
>That’s not mentioning its mannequin-esque head
>The eerie grin painted on its otherwise featureless face that expands to where both ears would be reminds you a bit too much about another of Shadowfright’s minions

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>>30696937
>Its head and arms jerk about randomly as well elevating it to a whole other level of offputting
>You notice its silky white gloved hands move deftly as strings connected to the ends of each finger flick about
>Following the strings down back to your level you see that they’re controlling the fake copies of people
>Now that you can see their strings the copies look more like marionettes of what they’re copying instead of the real thing
>Not surprising considering how Shadowfright’s tricks work
>Shaking your head you affix your gaze at the marionettist pulling the strings high above you and poor Anon
>Cutting the air with a quick swipe of your arm you smirk as Dream Cutter hurtles towards the warped puppeteer
>However, instead of the satisfying dissipation of enemy corruption your sword flies right through the jerking freak
>What?!
>Stepping back you ready yourself for it to retaliate as you swipe downwards
>Again your blade seems to phase right through the thing as its puppets continue to dance around Anon
>Is it moving too fast or is your blade ineffective?
>Flexing your mental muscles for the first time in quite a while has made you sloppy
>You have a perfect way to make up for it though…
>Aiming your hand at the floating eyesore you focus this time much quicker than before
>This time the whispers that seep out of your mouth are your own
“Aut veritatis, aut ENSE!”
>With a blue flicker of magic and a snap your fingers you loudly pierce the silence of the abyss
>In a flash you amass your blades around the floating manipulator
>You’d like to see him dodge this
>Balling your hand into a fist your ring of swords close in on the fiend, impaling it from all sides

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>>30696949
>The twisted puppet-like string puller stops its jittery movements as your swords puncture it like a pin cushion
>How is that thing not gone?
>The copies of Dream Cutter must have hit their mark, but it’s odd that it hasn’t dissapea—
>https://youtu.be/dm_zhvJEdVQ?t=13s
>As you try to reason why the dark hellion isn’t gone its head contorts suddenly in your direction cutting through your thoughts like a blade
>The surprise is enough to catch your currently non-existent breath
>You can’t tell exactly because it has no features besides the toothy Cheshire grin, but you think it’s studying you
>As though it didn’t even notice you until now
>It’s very feint, but through both the silence of the emptiness and your state of alarm you manage to hear and see something
>Its head bobs up and down slightly accompanied by, laughter?
>Is it, mocking you?
>With that it goes back to its jerk movements as the puppet versions of Anon’s companions dance around him
>A surge of rage and confusion courses through you as any semblance of levelheadedness is thrown out the window
>Dream Cutter was able to easily destroy Shadowfright’s creations before why not now!?
>According to Will he was weakened!
>Have you really fallen so far without 6 years of practice that you can’t take out something that doesn’t even register magic wise?
>No wait, it doesn’t even register
>While you know Shadowfright likes to hide things through a very thin layer of magic this thing…
>It doesn’t even seem magical
>Well, besides its odd form
>So how do you rid Anon of it then?
>You can’t think of a way that doesn’t use Dream Cutter or another item of your conjuring
>”Except for one…”

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>>30696962
>Your eyes flick to the embodiment of your past
>Nightmare Moon…
>She steps around in the empty expanse with a form reminding you of your twisted reunion long ago
>”Spare me the memories Luna, you know of one way to alleviate Anon’s corruption, don’t you?”
>She shouldn’t be here
>Fluttering her eyelashes she smirks
>”And yet I am, feeling a bit too hot under the collar?”
>You’re fine
>She steps around the dancing puppets with a ballerina like grace while maintaining eye contact with you
>”Quit stalling, you know how to fix this quickly.”
>The only other way you can think of is…
>Coming to a stop she peers over your puppet sister’s shoulder
>”Ding-ding.”
>No, that’s out of the question
>Not only are you unsure if you can even do it once more, it’s not a solution
>Leaping from your fake sister’s side she daintily strolls towards the now still Anon
>”Just look at poor Anon…”
>Instead of rocking back and forth with his arms covering his head he sits idly staring at the puppets as they waltz robotically around him
>His arms lie sprawled out at his sides as he gives his full attention to the performance around him
>Sadness taints his face as his eyes leak tears and his mouth hangs agape
>Kneeling down Nightmare Moon points to him
>”We can’t hear the voices of these FAKERS anymore, but he still can.”
>She strokes his head lovingly
>”And while I may not always agree with you, we do both want to help Anon, right?”
>Of course you do, but…
>Teleporting in front of your face your other half furrows her brow
>”Then you know what we must do…”
>But…
>Will you be able to handle it?
.
.
.
AND THAT’S IT FOR TODAY! Next time it WILL be on time! I know so since I HAVE IT WRITTEN OUT BEFOREHAND FOR ONCE DAMNIT! So until 3 days FROM NOW, BE THERE, or don’t…

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>>30696968
Thanks, fampai, can't wait to dig into it.

I'll see you in 4 days.

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>>30696937
I don't like this pic YFN, it's smug aura mocks me

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>>30696968
>Will you be able to handle it?
I-I don't know.

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>>30696968
DON'T

>>30698291
>>30698865
>>30699541
>three bumps with no content
kill yourself.

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>>30696968
>Inb4 the magic presence is too high for Anon's mind
>Vegetable in Equestria Girls

>>30696937
>pic
delet this

Bamp

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>>30702164
>>30702807

Aspiring writefag from >>30687099
How do you guys feel about having an OC as a main villain as opposed to a returning established villain like Chrysalis, Sombra, etc.?

Also
>>30703041
>Shadman
Why

>>30703165
YFN's doing it so yeah whatever you like, just dont do anything like Coldsteel or Shadow the edgehog

>>30703202
>no Coldsteel
Damn it, now I actually wanna write in Coldsteel as a totally incompetent character

>>30681343
>Someone makes an offhand comment on why Anon is always alone and one of the girls goes and does a thing to try and be his friend.
Why can't it be one of the dudes? Would love to see something with Flashy or Shiny.

>>30703391
I would read it.
/ourguy/

>>30703391
Shining would probably be pretty bro until you start fucking his sister. I've seen some people saying Flash actually turns out pretty okay in the latest EqG movies, but from what I've seen he's still a bit of tool.

>>30703391
Because they never matter, or are a part of the problem, therefor main characters groups are the best to have, also pussy.
>Would love to see something with Flashy or Shiny.
Shiny is a grown man out of highschool fucking the rival teachers on the other side of town and about to be married, he would have zero interaction with anything relevant unless this happened
>Shining would probably be pretty bro until you start fucking his sister
And Flash is still a tool. Which is why no one likes him.

>>30703391
>>30703398
>>30703448
The problem is someone could write a story like that, but then it could turn to homo and people might be all gay about it.

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>>30703692
True, if the person constantly asking for gay themed stories stopped coming here(as if), or actually wrote something in the designated gay thread, then no one would care. And people could ignore it properly. But this entire conversation is probably going to be blown up into a homophobic rant by kids claiming RGMAnon is here or something. Fucking summer kids. Ruining everything with faggotry.
Oh well. Pic to get back to the thread.

>>30703725
Well there's not much to be done, best to just roll with it.

Back on topic, who's that meant to be in the pic?

>>30703827
judging from the hoodie and pin on the string, YFN's Anon

>>30703827
This>>30703838
one of the first pics he got for us.

>>30703838
>>30703857
Now I feel stupid for not noticing that.
Do we have pics for the other anons? Wouldn't mind abit more art.
What art would you anons like to see made?

>>30703899
Aside from OP's pic, I know I've seen a few pics from Axii's and YFN's stories. Can't recall much else, though.

>>30703923
Sci has one or two laying around somewhere, but not much else besides them and the OP.

>>30703923
>>30703955
We could do with more, that would be nice. Who should get a picture though?

>>30703923
Who's which anon in the op?

>>30704075
Sea Urchin's Monster hunter Anon. Speaking of Sea Urchin, please come back, senpai :'(

>>30704099
Dude with the swords is Axii's, anon in the hoodie is YFN's, and the mega nerd in the center is Sci's. Pretty sure the one with the laptop is Damynorb's. The one with the gun is some kind of hitman/mafia type anon, but I don't recall the writer and I'm too lazy to look. Don't recognize the other three.

>>30704099
Left to right
Cookies, Damynorb, Axii, Sci, YFN, FateAnon, Nayaa

>>30704213
Where are they all?

>>30704133
>>30704213
I'm pretty sure damynorb has another pic, cant recall what it was though

>>30704632
Dead. Axii lurks, but I don't think I've seen anyone else.

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>>30704764
Hell yeah I lurk.

>>30704632
ded

Aspiring writefag here, yada yada yada. Look, I got this idea I wanna pitch about Anon being the only human in Equestria in a Dark Souls-esque universe. It isn't an EqG, but he is technically 'alone' during his journey, then meets ponies and whatnot, eventually gaining comrades on his quest. I am stretching it, but if you guys need a writefag, and are interested, I already have a prologue set up as a sample if you guys want.

>>30706757
>dark souls
Lotta that going around lately. Anyway, the alternate setting wouldn't be an issue for me, as we have Sea Urchin writing a story that has nothing to do with high school or any of that stuff. Plus, we need more writefags. However, that it's ponies and not the human versions is iffy with me. I mean, the thread IS called Alone in EqGverse.

I'm not gonna be a faggot and flip my shit about it if others don't mind, though. If it seems fine with other anons, I'd say go for it.

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>>30706757
Post the prologue senpai

>>30706934
iirc the thread was called "Alone in Equestria" in the beginning. Threads later was added "EQGverse" because there wasn't a pone green.

>>30706757
Would read, but this is the EqGverse thread. It would need to be there. If you can switch it over or something like that then by all means come on in. Otherwise it does need to be thread related, and it would be too weird otherwise to have a story that doesn't follow the thread title.

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>>30706757
Go ahead m8

>>30706757
Sure

>>30703692
Even if it went a little homo, who gives a fuck? A story means content. Don't read stories you don't like.

>>30707650
How about you leave for the thread that has gay content and stop trying to drag it everywhere else? Don't lurk threads you wont like.

>>30707662
So one could write the greatest Alone in Equestria story ever, but if it has even a tiny, almost microscopic hint of romantic bromance in it, then it's instant shit and should be deported to the super-ultra gay general? It's like telling someone at a restaurant to go to a slaughterhouse if they ask for a steak.

>>30707721
>Conflates Bromance with gay
Well, guess its that summer kid from the incest thread, you catch that boogyman yet?
> It's like telling someone at a restaurant to go to a slaughterhouse if they ask for a steak.
Well, yeah, that's what you tend to do. Be it the restaurant owners or the shop is in the Slaughterhouse. You go to where you know you can get it. Is this really so hard for you to get that the idea isn't popular anywhere else, or do you have a specific brand of autism to ask everywhere that you can before you get reported for shitposting and thread derailment? Because I am morbidly curious and your stubborn stupidity/insanity intrigues me(not enough to not remind you to leave obviously).

>>30707743
>Conflates Bromance with gay
Romantic bromance. You know, with feels? Learn to read.

>>30707746
You are asking for two different things, and you don't understand that...wait a second. Is that your shtick, to use words you don't know how to use? Your being intentionally retarded aren't you.

>>30707751
Bromance that turns into romance, you idiot. Sheesh.

>>30707769
So go to HHH faggot, you aren't getting it here. Here's your last (you). Though I will admit I am surprised that you knew you were using that word incorrectly. Good on you for that. Now get out.

>>30707769
>>30707814
This. You come here ever 3 months when you get off the ban. Just leave already and stop coming here. If you are so damn interested in getting some gay stories go to the thread that will give you that. The one that is just a click away from here.

>>30707814
>I decide what is and isn't allowed
Just a couple of posts above us is a guy talking about writing a Dark Souls-esque story (which sounds awesome). Why don't you scream at him to go to a crossover thread while you're at it?

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>>30707841
Because he was planning to make it EqG, and it follows the thread title and OP. If you cant read, then you shouldn't be here. We have Witcher themed stories too. We function as the light /sup/ thread. Which his idea would fit in. You and your idea don't fit that description unless you stretch the idea paper thin.
>Why don't you scream at him to go to a crossover thread while you're at it?
No one is screaming at you, your just a annoying kid that wont stop getting into popular clubs room, when you belong in your uncles closet. You know where too go, you have been removed from here what...last time was the sixth, right? In any case multiple times you have been removed and your idea shot down. It isn't even a mater of your boogyman RGMAnon, coming to ruin it for you. You did it yourself, you ruined it. Gay isn't wanted here by the fact you will be removed, again, and in 3 month we will have this conversation, again. Up until the mods get turned over and the next batch step up. And if they aren't as lazy as the ones that let you stay on, then your looking at a perma ban. So is this entire conversation worth that much too you, that your willing to risk that. When you could literally, BE ANYWHERE ELSE, or even, I don't know, go to HHH where you can enjoy what you want. Probably even avoid getting banned there...unless they find you detestable as well. Which, considering how often you come by too annoy people, I cant imagine they would take too kindly to you. Actually, is that the reason why you don't just go there, are you just that much of a annoying shitposting faggot that they cant stand you either, have you ruined your chances for getting your shit taste fix that badly? Because if so, I kinda have to pity you. Do you piss off people outside as well, are you the faggot that makes other faggots mad for being faggots?

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>>30707841
Anon I think you broke him >>30707875

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>>30707875
Bruh

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>>30706757
>qt pones green
Sure

>>30707841
Because Dark Souls doesn't suck as much dick as you.
>>30707902
If we let that happen do I need to make a add on to the title?

>>30707909
The next OP title could be just "Alone in Equestria"

>>30707875
>Because he was planning to make it EqG, and it follows the thread title and OP
Which I have also done. Anon is alone and becomes friends and possibly more with Flash or one of the others. Maybe even Normal Norman?

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>>30707875
Your autism is showing.
Relax.

>>30707918
It says "girls" in the OP you fucking cunt
>>30707927
>>30707897
>>30707893
Way to samefag whenever anyone dares bring out the truth asswipe. Your fetish doesn't belong here so stop shitposting. Fuck off to HHH and never return.

>>30707915
Then that would alienate all the stories we do have.
>>30707918
Its the
>possibly more
part that you are told no to every time you ask for it that gets removed. If its just friends like a few of the stories have already(not like you actually read anything here) you would know that isn't the issue. But you still try to deflect and carry on your shit. Why? Your just going to be banned again for a few months and we get some fresh greens. And even then your prompt will be forgotten again. Untill you show up and repost your dumb idea. You want gay buttsex? Go ahead and have at it. But you are going to the wrong thread for it
And it looks like your pulling the, make mass posters trick again. We went up at least 4 in the last hour. Which reminds me, how many proxies do you have this time?
>>30707927
No, he comes here like clockwork, every time we have to do this. Then in a day he will get removed. There isn't even anything original in his shit idea either, I am pretty sure Fingerbang has him covered at this point.

>>30707875
>Getting this fucking triggered just because someone wanted a little homo
Hello, RGMAnon, Still thinking that you're the cop of /mlp/?
I don't really like The Witcher, but you don't see me screeching like a child everytime someone talks about that here.

>>30707918
>Normal Norman
Whatever happened with that general anyway?

>>30707936
Shut the fuck up no one wants you here

>>30707931
Just wait a day or two, even if the mods weren't so lazy, they DO have to go and remove the proxies. Again. Here's hoping the next wave of mods and janitors actually hard ban him. In anycase, how about some comments thread related, >>30706757
if he can make it EqGs, where would they meet Anon? I would think they accidentally dig him up while at the Camp Everfree thing.
>>30707936
Oh look, he's calling out to the boogyman again folks. Lets watch.
>Norman Normalson thread
They died do to, way to many OCs and autism on par of you.

>>30707936
>le triggered maymay
Jesus Christ I hope you fucktards go back to school soon. It's so god damn painfully obvious that this thread isn't for you. It never was and never will be. Move your shitty story away from here, your shitposting away from here or write something that actually fits the fucking thread. How many times do we have to tell you to FUCK OFF?

>>30707942
>>30707950
Yup you guys hit the nail on the head
We don't do gay shit here, that's for another thread these shitstains can go to in one simple click. It's not difficult.

>>30706757
I don't think it's necessary to change it to EQG if you already made a prologue. That's my opinion.

>>30707915
This could work

>>30707963
While that may be the case, this is still the Equestria GIRLS verse thread, they would still need to be made human to fit here.

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>>30707996
We begin as "Alone in Equestria" tho.
Also I'm pretty sure nobody is going to get mad just because the next OP deleted some words.

>>30707996
This.
>>30708002
Either change the story to fit the OP or don't bother writing here. Unless we delete some words in the OP which I honestly don't really care if that happens.

>>30708002
True, but when our main stories, and all our future stories went EqGs then it kind of makes no sense to up and change the thread title for one guy that may or may not change a few things in his story to become thread relevant again.

>>30707931
>It says "girls" in the OP you fucking cunt
Which is there to make it clear that this takes place in the Equestria Girls universe, not to say "girls only".

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>>30708024
This. It seems a little dumb and disrespectful to the past writefags. Sure, the thread may have started like that, but every one of the greens I've read here has been EqG. If there's a pony story, I wasn't aware of it.

Sounds like he's got the whole 'alone' part down, and it being pony rather than EqG doesn't bother me that much, but it seems really stupid to change our title, even if for just one thread, for one writer.

>>30708008
>Either change the story to fit the OP or don't bother writing here
This. There's already a thread for anon alone in horse equestria this is for EQG.

So why does this place get so bent out of shape when someone suggests guys approaching lonely Anon? I understand people not wanting gay smut here, it's more of a niche so that's understandable but what's wrong with Anon making friends with guys instead?

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>>30708264
I dont know anon, some people wouldnt mind it, some want the homo, and others hate homo and want it kept in the homo thread.
In the end though, it all boils down to 2 people arguing about gay shit, with the odd samefag.

Uhhhh... Ahem... It's not actually... EqG... Lynch me I have it set up in the MLP Universe because it has all the crazy creatures and magic in it already, so it would make more sense if it was there. But you guys seem really enthusiastic about it, so I'll gladly deliver when I have time, because I write for another thread currently. Although, this won't mean I won't post until I finish that current story, I'll just go back and fourth depending on my mood.

I just wanted to write this because I've always wanted to, and it really fogs my mind when I try writing other greens that aren't similar in the sort. So hopefully I can get these epic battles and dark lore I've set up out of my system so I can go back to writing cute horsie stuff without bother.

I had started some strawpolls over in Magicless, because I thought they'd be all for it. But their enthusiasm and activity isn't as grand as you guys, so I'll link those over here...

http://www.strawpoll.me/13687062
http://www.strawpoll.me/13687092
http://www.strawpoll.me/13687112
http://www.strawpoll.me/13688814

Expect the Prologue (which is short) in a few moments.

>>30710197

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l__8ExcSOPY [Embed]

By the Void - Prologue

>The Heart's Warming Eve tale, passed down by Equine tongue, tells of the story of how the land of Equestria was formed. Three tribes, the unicorn, the pegasi, and the earth ponies sought for shelter, for their disharmony corrupted the soil and weather. The vicious Windigos, beings of the Void, stalked the nomads, until they were finally cornered by bitter winds and a blistering storm.

>They were doomed, had it not been for the Harmony within that saved these creatures. Setting aside their differences, they drove away the beasts, back to their primordial home. Only select creatures, since the beginning, were granted the gift of Harmony.

>Long before even Equestria was formed, there existed Chaos. Unbalance and anarchy reigned the world. Only the ancient beings walked these cracked plains. They had no magic, relying on their meek bodies, yet knowledgeable minds.

>But then there was Harmony, and with harmony, came Evil. Creation and destruction, light and dark, and of course, good and bad. Then they came, emerging to claim the essence. Tirek, first of the damned, Chrysalis and her Hive of Changelings, and the first Alicorn.

>>30710473

>With their newfound strength, they challenged the ancient beings of the old world. The first Alicorn’s magic tore through their barricades and towers. Chrysalis weaved storms of insects and decay from her Hive. Tirek sucked the energy and hope from their very essence. And an ancient furtive being betrayed its own, in hopes with newfound power to seek something long lost.

>From their victory, only arose new turmoil. Harmony and Evil cannot reign a new age, for one would subdue the other. The first Alicorn and the furtive being battled against the damned Beast and the Changeling Queen. Harmony triumphed over Evil, with Tirek being locked away in Tartarus, and Chrysalis fleeing to the Badlands. The furtive being left to pursue its effortless quest, leaving the burden of the new age with the first Alicorn.

>Yet, none can silence the chaos. From the vestiges of old, and from the newfound forces of Harmony and Evil, an amalgamation of the two essences formed. And thus the Void was created. An abyss of chaos and discord, seeking to deform the rebirthed world. From the essence of the ancient beings, deformed creatures were molded; beings of the Void. Soon Harmony and Evil will be subdued, and only Chaos will reign.

>Even now, there are only shimmers of light, and cracks of dark. Equines sees not harmony, but endless discord. Beasts cannot conquer the untamable anarchy, for it spares nopony. And amongst the equines and beasts are seen, carriers of the accursed Chaos Star.

>Yes, of course. The Chaos Star brands the Husks. And in this land, the Husks are corralled and led to the snows of the north, where they are locked away, to await the end of the world… The Void beckons them, to feed their bodies to the old chaos, and fuel the ever growing abyss.

>Only, in the ancient legends it is stated, that one day, an ancient being of old shall be born from the Void, and in pilgrimage, travel to the land of Equestria. This is you. No one else, but you.

>>30710489
Actually came up with an idea where Anon starts in the EqG universe, and the curse leaks into their universe, causing him to find the statue and having to go to Equestria.

>>30710197
>Alone in Equestria Girls Verse
>It's not actually... EqG...
So what the fuck are you doing posting here. This thread has a theme so either write something that fits it or move to a more relevant thread. If you start in Equestria then move over to EQG at least it fits.

>>30711174
Because someone recommended me here, because it is a story where Anon is technically all alone, and then makes friends along his adventure that support him and help him out.
If you don't want it, I'll take it elsewhere, even with this >>30710629 suggestion.

>>30710629
Reverse that, so it starts in Equestria and moves to EQG. That way it fits the thread, otherwise you're writing something that doesn't fit the thread theme, you wouldn't go to the JoJo thread and start a Fallout Equestria story. You said you have interest from the Magicless Anon thread so if you're not going to change why not move there.

>>30711222
With that suggestion it still doesn't fit do as >>30711225 says then it'd work as you may have started in Equestria but you ended up (Alone) in EQG.

>>30711253
What would be the purpose? It makes no sense if it ends in EqG, considering there is rarely any magic in that universe except for Everfree and the mane 6 + 1. It would turn into some weird high school zombie story rather than Dark Souls-esque fantasy. I got the impression that the thread was mostly about an Anon being socially deprived, then develops friends and becomes better, or worse, depending. High school drama ain't my thing. Guess I'll just go back to Magicless. Shame.

>>30711330
The thread was that, but nobody really used the Equestria setting.

>>30711394
Then why can't I use the Equestria setting? So you're telling me it changed over the course of when I last time lurked here? Damn, that is really a shame.

>>30711330
Yet one of the all time greats of this thread is a crossover with the Witcher, a world where the magic and supernatural are keep elements. Along with this there's little in the way of highschool drama other than the starting prompt. It's clear it can be done but at this point it sounds like you're making excuses to no rewrite it.

At the end of it all if you strip away the Equestria Girls Verse part you end up with Anon being along, and the only human, in Equestria making it the same as the majority of the MLP stories out there.

>>30711424
This thread has a few idiots in it.
I really do hope you will continue with your idea, because the prologue was interesting.

>>30711692
>This thread has a few idiots in it.
Idiots like you, SHITLORD.
This is Alone in the EqG universe as it says in the fucking OP post. It starting out alone in Equestria doesn't matter because no one ran with that concept and it's too late to go back.
And now here go the retards like you saying "yooo cool story man I totally want more even though it barely has anything to do with thread"
You are ruining this thread with your disgusting cesspool of autists. THE STORY DOESNT FIT.
So the writefag either is to make it fit the theme properly or he can fuck RIGHT off.

>>30711692
What's so idiotic about coming to a thread with a theme and expecting stories to fit said theme. Besides the writer said he's moving on so it isn't like he said he'd stopping writing.

>>30711610
>>30711692
I can EASILY rewrite it, the problem is, considering how Dark Souls is set and the type of lore, it'll turn into some disgusting high school crossover with Dark Souls tone and events. What, is Crystal Prep going to turn into the Grand Archives of Dark Souls 3, or the Crystal Archives of Dark Souls? That sounds ridiculous.

Or just Dark Souls with an EqG reskin. There's no creativity in that, and it sounds like a mess and has lots of limitations in comparison with Equestria.

Equestria is not modern and is more medieval, so it perfectly fits with the setting of Dark Souls. And the fact that it already has all these magical creatures and lore, makes it mold-able and more natural. Trying to shove EqG into the mix is just a forced crossover with ideas that seem out of place.

I've never played Witcher or read the Witcher story, so I can't give my two cents on how the Witcher story was a big hit in comparison to something like this.

>>30711692
It seems you guys want more green, yet opinions are half in half. If some are not willing to give something 'different' a chance (it's still on topic, it just doesn't take place in >no hooves land), I'll gladly leave you all be and let you continue with your stories.

>>30711813
>I'll gladly leave you all be and let you continue with your stories.
do it then faggot

>>30711813
Why not just place it in Equestria, and swap the ponies for their humanized counterparts? Seen other writers do it, and it seems like a good compromise to me.

>>30711834
It's not good enough. Equestria is NOT the EqG universe. Please think before you post so you don't look like an idiot.

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>>30711813
>opinions are half in half
I'm pretty sure it's just 2 guys who are discussing with you.
I also lurk /magicless/ so I'll be reading your green

>>30711849
>hurr DURR it's a samefag
Wonderful day for being a faggot I see. You ignore all the facts and tell him it's not the thread culture we developed but project your shitposting, samefagging nature onto us.
Fucking pathetic.

>>30711849
>implying I track IPs and can tell individuals on an anonymous board
You're just as ignorant as I am, friend. But I appreciate the support over on magicless. Happy reading to you, Anon.

>>30711846
This

>>30711813
>Alone in Equestria Girls Verse
>it's still on topic
It really isn't.

Also regarding the Witcher a quick summery: Witchers are monster hunters who with training and body modification develop supernatural abilities, including basical magical abilities, at a young age to battle deadly monsters. Also it is set in what I'd call a medieval type setting. Literally everything you're complaining about applied to the Witcher and Axii (the writer) adapted it to fit this thread and the setting. On top of that he wrote a phenomenal story that I'd consider one of the best greens I've ever read.

>>30711849
>It's not thread culture
Wow
Yeah whatever. Fuck you, asshole.
Thread will be back on topic once YFN updates.

>>30711788
>Idiots like you, SHITLORD.
>You're a shitposting shitlord if you want stories where Anon is Alone in Equestria
Great bait.

>>30711813
Lurk more here before jumping to conclusions, the way you argue strikes me as errily similar as to the gay kid that drops by whenever his ban is finished.
We would like your green, you just have to make RELEVANT TO THE THREAD TITLE, what part of that can you not understand? This thread has been going to two years(give or take), with that thread title. Why would you come here to start a shitstorm by not making a story that follows the NAME OF THE THREAD you are going too? Its literally the first thing you read to find the thread, not even going into the OP.
>>30711849
Your proxy has been noticed and tagged kid, nice to see your still obvious.

>thread is fucking dead until a writer dumps
>even then, almost zero feedback
>thread almost fucking explodes overnight over a dude pitching his story

Nice. Can't wait for this to die down so we can go back to contentless bumps in between YFN's updates.

>>30711813
Then rewrite it, and post it, just use the Everfree woods camp to dig him up or something. EqGs verse has so many literal holes in reality that Dark Soulsverse stuff dropping in is not only not that weird, but kind of expected. AND it would be obscenely easy to keep the Alone part of the title. Well up until the Magic girls find him. Hell, you could even go the distance and have the Crystal Prep chicks find the bacon assed undead dude first, and not the Mane 7.

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>>30712051
>If someone is against what I say is using proxies

>>30712051
>you just have to make RELEVANT TO THE THREAD TITLE
>"Welcome to Alone In Equestria!"
>Writer says that he is thinking about writing a story where Anon is alone in Equestria
>"You have to make it relevant to the thread, faggot!! Reeeee"
Seriously?

>>30712122
>>30711987
Here's your last (You) from me

>>30712122
>>30712118
So, are you illiterate or what? Just because you ignore the Girls in the title doesn't mean its not there and important to the thread. Or is this an elaborate shitpost for (you)s before your banned?

I really hope someone removes the "girls" from the OP so all stories and art that is about Anon alone in Equestria can be posted here.

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>>30712228
I just want to cuddle a poner goddamit

>>30710629
Why do you constantly try to bring it to Equestria? Just keep it Equestria Girls universe and its fine.

>>30712228
>>30712273
So...did you get kicked out of AiE for annoying them or something? Because we aren't changing the OP or the title. This is the Alone in Equestria Girls verse thread, Not Equestria, get out already.

>>30712228
>>30712273
You do know where you are right? The vast majority of stories on this board a solely pony.

>>30712311
>The vast majority of stories on this board a solely pony.
Exactly. So why get so asshurt when someone wants to write a story in the Alone in Equestria thread where Anon is alone in the pony world?

>>30712353
because this thread is specifically for EQGverse not the fucking pony shit, you shitcock

>>30712353
Because you illiterate retard, this is the Equestria GIRLSverse thread. Go to AiE if you want your pone. Your even dumber than that faggot shitposter, because you have EVEN MORE OPTIONS TO CHOOSE FROM!

>16 days since the last update from someone who wasn't YFN
Where did all the writefags go?

>>30713467
chased away by peeps who only want eqg

>>30713628
As cool as the concept of possibly having more than one extremely active writer is, the thread is still called "Alone in Equestria Girls Verse".

>>30713780
I think someone will update soon, it's been awhile and i have a good feeling

>>30713891
I'm hoping for some more Urchin soon. It's been about 2 weeks I think.

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>>30713891
I want to believe senpai

>>30713780
you cant expect much activity with a niche topic

https://www.dailymotion.com/video/x5wp7pr

So applejack works in a shake shop?

>>30714552
>Not selling appuls
brb gonna nuke Hasbro

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>>30712065
>>30713467
Remember Anon, (you) can always fill the gaps between your favorite writefag's updates
Just start writing
It's how my story started, remember?
Update should drop sometime before noon central tomorrow btw

>>30715962
But senpai, I actually just started writing my Cop Anon story yesterday. Might be a while before I'm ready to dump, though.

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You guys really look like you need writefags, feels like you're self-cannibalizing a bit... well.. a lot really.

Anyway, I've got some green that I will post in a couple of hours. I want this thing finished. I feel like I need closure as much as some other people here.

We'll see how things go from then.

I don't know if people are still interested in my story, but I went over my pastebin and updated a lot of what I've written just to read a little better. Nothing major, just that the earlier parts were a mess. I had this real problem with writing tense that I needed to work out.

There were a lot of problems I needed to work out.

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>>30716663
HOLY SHIIIITTT!
I never thought the day would come
Thanks for coming back, I know that cant be easy
You've been a very sadness inducing meme for a while now
Many are interested in seeing the end of your story
Looking forward to it

>>30714552
I feel disappointed, does she sell Appleshakes at least?
>>30714610
Do it.
>>30716663
We would like to see Sci Anon's story again. If that's really Sci Anon typing and not some random shitposting with a name and trip. Will be watching you for funny business.

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>>30716663
Someone please check the trip.
I swear to God...

>>30712496
>fucking pony shit
>Hating on ponies

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>>30716663
LISTEN HERE YOU LITTLE SHIT

>>30704133
>Sea Urchin's Monster hunter Anon
This. We've already got descriptions of a few potential outfits. Plus a lot of his fight scenes would be cool to see, or the aftermath of the hotel where he's covered in blood and leaning against the while while Twilight walks by him.

>>30716930
I didn't know you could lean against the while.

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>>30716924
holy shit its real......>>30716663
WHERE WERE YOU!!!!!!!!

>>30717009
While, wall, whatever

>>30717009
>He can't lean against the while
Pleb.

>>30716663
I'm too tired to post my angry reaction pics.
Expect me tomorrow.

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>>30716924
>>30717027
>>30717380

Sorry I made you all so angry. You deserve an explanation but I feel like there's not a single answer I can give that you will find satisfying.

Maybe some green can make you feel better?

>”In her words, Sombra was not just a tyrant, but a powerful and malicious sorcerer, who used dark magic to influence his people.”
>As Anon speaks, your mind keeps returning to Equestria, to a time away from all the dark times in your life.
>”I say influence, but perhaps the better way to describe it is that he dominated his subjects, as he did all kingdoms that would dare stand against his aggressive expansion.“
>How long has it been now? Four years? Almost five?
>As Anon talks, you look over the vast caverns before you.
>Your potential was once this expansive, now it is gone. Along with your old life.
>”The dark magic Sombra wielded was not like anything seen or experienced before in this world, and the crystal has eaten away at the heart of the empire. Along with her testimonial, she gave a… ode, a rhyme of sorts, for anyone who may seek to find the ruins.”
>Anon’s words dissipate into an uncomfortable silence as he doubtlessly waits for you to give him your attention.
>”Rhyme? What rhyme, Anon?”
>Despite Twilight eagerly prompting him to continue, Anon does not do so.
>You prolong the moment until he verbally demands a response by loudly clearing his throat in your ear. In response, you nonchalantly turn to him with an innocent smile on your face.
“What, I’m listening”
>You do your best to remain casual, despite how uncomfortable it’s making you to still have Anon so close to you. You are rescued however, as Twilight intervenes.
>”What was the rhyme, Anon?”
>Her eyes are attentive, and her question is more firm this time, despite the fact she’s shivering uncontrollably.
>Shivering…

>>30717630

>You surprise yourself by forgetting about the bitter cold all around you, and how it affected Twilight.
>You barely register that Anon has continued, as your mind is once again preoccupied with the severity of the situation at hand.
>”Deep, deep in the depths it lies, a beating heart that never dies-”
>Anon’s eyes look are both absent and focused at the same time, disinterested in the people around him, instead piercing into the structure that looms ominously in the distance.
>For the moment you see him, it looks almost as if he is challenging it, standing straight up and unafraid. Stark contrast to the usual Anon who shrinks away in the hopes that nobody will see him.
>Until Twilight interrupts him
>“-atop the buried castle, in a room that holds the prize.’“
>Anon whips back to Twilight and stares her down. His eyes scanning her face back and forth, unsure of how to react.
>Twilight returns the same stare, seemingly stunned by her own words. The only movement she exhibits is the shivering, that slowly creeps up her legs as the two of them stare.
>You remain with Anon, still leaning on your shoulder, as the silent witness, panning your eyes back and forth in unsteady anticipation.
>For what seems like hours, the tension builds in the confusion. Until you cannot take it anymore.
“Wha-
>“A heart of power that every hour, calls upon the world beyond our stars and skies.”
>Anon speaks as if he’s reciting in front of a classroom.
>You’re not sure if he waited for someone else to speak before he continued to break the silence for him, or just waited for you to speak so he could undermine you.
>It wouldn’t surprise you either way.
>What does perplex you, is why the tension is so palpable you could cut it with a knife. So palpable in fact that Twilight is ignoring the fact that she’s freezing to death.
>”How do you know that poem?”
>Her chattering teeth almost hiss the accusation.

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>>30717642

>Anon takes a moment to formulate a response. Possibly just as taken aback as you are by Twilight’s dramatic shift in tone.
>”I…I just told you? I knew Sunset wouldn’t care to listen but I at least thought you-“
>”Liar!”
>Twilight’s voice crackles along the cavern, lingering as it bounces to one end of the expanse and back to you in a tremendous reverberation.
>Anon looks Twilight up and down, making slowly formulating an appropriate response. Just as he opens his mouth to speak, she interrupts him again.
>”Moondancer was the only person who knew that poem!”
>Her voice once again dances to the structure in the distance, and then back again.
>The reverberation comes back to the three of you like a wave of force, rippling through your body and sending a shiver down your spine.
>You can’t quite register the extent that her words affected you, and neither can Anon. He eyes her with a similar expression of confusion.
>Twilight is fuming, breathing heavily after her unexpected outburst. She stands rigid for a moment before the chill catches up to her.
>She throws her arms around herself, dropping the soaked jumpers and crumples down from her stoic pose.
>She begins shivering as her voice trails off.
>”I-I didn’t mean to… What did I…?”
>She looks back to the looming structure as Anon answers.
>”You called me a liar.”
>You would examine Anon’s expression to better determine the nature of his proclamation, as his voice is plain and inexpressive, however you can only look at Twilight.
>”I – I – I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to yell at you I just..”
>She doesn’t complete her sentence, she just keeps shivering.
“Twilight… you’re freezing”

>>30717666

>You gingerly approach, offering out a hand as if you were attempting to coerce a timid animal. Anon stumbles to keep balance as you shuffle forward, prompting an irritated grunt
>All the while you do so, you remind yourself how many mistakes you’ve made when comforting people of late.
>Hopefully you don’t mess this up as well, as the situation is getting worse and worse.
>You need to keep moving, or Twilight is going to freeze to death.
>”What you mean and what you say and do have very little in common it seems-”
“Don’t start, Anon.”
>After once again being interrupted, he sighs.
>”Can I get at least one full sentence across without being cut off by some aggressive half-statement that I’m not yet allowed to know the full motive behind?”
>As Anon rambles, Twilight eagerly accepts your offer of comfort, clinging her shivering body to your arm.
>She rests her head on your shoulder and whispers in your ear.
>”I’m sorry. I – I’m scared, Sunset.”
>As she sobs between hushed and stuttered words.
>You answer Anon, who is trying to stay as distant from you as possible while still using you for support.
>He’s almost balancing on one leg he’s so determined.
“What part of the motivation do you not understand about being told to can it?”
>”Sunset… I want to go home.”
>You immediately turn your attention to Twilight, who is currently burying her face into your jacket.
“We’ll get home Twilight,”
>You whisper in response
“We’ll get out of here.”
>You can feel Anon glare at you as you speak.
>”The part where get the nerve to say that to me, after-”
>Anon stumbles as you pivot back to him
“Y’know, we wouldn’t interrupt you so much if you didn’t take so long to say the simplest god damn things.”

>>30717679

>Twilight wretches back another sob as you snap at Anon, prompting you to whip your attention back to her. With Anon doubtlessly formulating a response as you do.
>You feel like you’ve caught the worst case you’ve ever had of being between a rock and a hard place.
>Twilight is breaking down while Anon is trying to break you, all the while you’re facing the constant threat of freezing to death.
>What the hell is Anon’s problem? Why is he determined to fight you, even now, after everything was turned up-side down?
>Just as Anon begins to respond, Twilight asks the question loud enough for the both of you to hear.
>”We’re going to die in here, aren’t we?”
>Both you and Anon are brought to silence by the remark, both of you staring at each other for an uncomfortably long moment.
>Anon’s face is frozen in place, unsaid words still on the tip of his open mouth. Slowly, his mouth closes, but he does not break eye contact.
>He tries to remain stoic, but you can tell that deep down he’s scared. He can barely walk, much less survive the cold.
>Despite his restraint, a brief shiver coils through his body.
>You are the first to break the stare by closing your eyes. You push Anon out of your mind and focus on the task at hand.
>The bitter cold is all around you, and the only way left to go is deeper.
>You rest your head against Twilight’s and take a deep breath, inhaling the warm air eradiating from her body.
>Her shivering ceases for a moment as you both take in each other’s warmth. Her sobbing significantly recedes and she begins to breathe normally, following your lead in slow, long breaths.
“We’re going to make it out of here Twilight, I promise.”
>You tell to both Twilight, and yourself.

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>>30717695

>Your tenderness is interrupted with a muffled grunt from Anon, and a weight falling on your shoulders.
>Anon’s arm clumsily wraps around your shoulders for support, to which you automatically respond by tensing your arm to keep him standing
>You would have lost your balance yourself if Twilight wasn’t holding you.
>For an instant the three of you are locked in place, struggling to regain your ground. You and Twilight supporting each other while Anon drags you down.
>The instant ends, and you have regained control. Now with two bodies pressed against yours.
>The added warmth is welcome. You just wish it wasn’t Anon. The last thing you want is to feel his lean figure pushed against you.
>His hot breath running down your neck.
>The last thing…

>>30717740

>”Enough of this.”
>Anon’s voice is raspy and hushed.
>”Unless your plan is to drop me off the ledge, we need to keep moving.”
>Anon does his best to push off of you and regain control, but you take the first initiative by grabbing his waist and hoisting his arm over your shoulder.
“You’re acting like I need to drop you off the ledge.”
>Twilight reluctantly backs off momentarily to allow you to reposition, leaving behind a damp spot on your jacket.
>She is doubtlessly surprised when you pass Anon’s arm over to her.
>”S-Sunset?”
“You can barely stand, Anon. You’re gonna stay down regardless of how far you fall. But you are useful for something”
>Anon intently glares are you, but his brow is furrowed in confusion as well. You try to avoid his glare, hoping he doesn’t notice how flustered you are.
>Or that you’re blushing.
>Twilight stumbles as Anon is forced to shift his weight onto her shoulders instead.
>You take a step back once to two of them are settled. They briefly exchange glances and turn back to you.
>”Sunset what-“
>”Couldn’t stand me, could you?”
>Their conjoined answers couldn’t be more different in tone, as well as their expressions.
>Twilight just stares, while Anon continues to glare.
“I said you were good for something, Anon. That’s keeping someone warm.”
>Anon scoffs and turns towards the ground. Twilight glances between you and him as her face gains an extra hue of red.
>Good, blushing will keep her face warm at least.
>”Um… Thanks? But what about you, Sunset?”
>You pull your gaze from the two of them and scan over the side of the ledge for a path downward as Twilight expresses her concern.
“What about me, Twilight? You’ve been shivering non-stop, you need to keep warm, and Anon needs someone to help him walk. Win-win, right?”

>>30717752

>Along the circumference of the jutting rock the three of you are perched upon, you spot the beginnings of a path, protruding out from the massive walls that surround you.
>”But you’ve been shivering too Sunset! So has Anon! We’re all freezing!”
>You take your eyes away from your recent discovery and back to Twilight.
“What?”
>You hesitantly examine yourself, bringing your hands up from your sides and holding them out, slowly flexing your fingers.
>When did you stop being able to feel your hands?
>”Yes, this is mostly likely some form of error. I can’t see how Sunset could be freezing when she is best described as a banshee of some kind, rather than a person.
>Your eyes dart at Anon, who is now dangling from Twilight’s shoulders instead of yours.
>Still weak, still vulnerable. Still completely dependent on the two of you to survive, yet still doing everything in his power to piss you off.
>Maybe this is why you didn’t notice he was shivering until now.
“And what’s your excuse? I always figured a snake like you was cold-blooded.”
>He snorts
>”My excuse is that I don’t have an added layer of thickness like you do, especially that layer you keep around your skull.”
>This time, you do notice that you are shivering. Although you’re not sure if you’re shivering because of the cold, or shaking in rage because Anon just called you fat.
>Possibly. You’re not exactly sure. But it was close enough to make you angry.
“Oh that’s rich coming from-“
>”Stop it! Both of you!”
>Twilight trembles violently as she shouts, as if her vocal cords are more powerful than the rest of her body.
>Your verbal assault ceases immediately as she commands. Anon does not take advantage of your silence, but instead silently examines your reaction.
>”I don’t… We’re down here together. Start acting like it!”

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>>30717769

This is a good stopping point for the moment I feel. Unfortunately it's hard to pick up the pieces at this particular stage of the story; it's very transition-airy.

I know I have no right to ask anyone to be patient right now, but It gets the green going again. That's something, right?

I'll link the pastebin here for new readers. After all it has been a while now, hasn't it?

https://pastebin.com/u/SciAnon

Currently at chapter V.

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>>30717791
I'll have to read up on this again. Thank you for coming back to us in our time of need. Don't be a stranger.

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>>30717791
IT'S FINALLY HAPPENED
AND I AM HERE TO WITNESS IT

>>30717769
Anon is just fucki g ridiculous now. Don't get me wrong, I'm glad you came back, but anons whole character is fucking stupid. He's smart but then decides "you know what? I'm gonna be a complete dick to everyone, even if i die in some shitty cave." The fuck kind of mindset os that? Yeah he's an annoying cunt, but it's far too over the top. For starters, picking at everything Sunset says like an absolute autist, I starting to think he has mental problems.
What's really confusing is that he's attempting to search for magic or power or something? Yet again he decides to be a dick and slow everyone down and increase everyones chance of death. That's another example of how retarded this characterization us.

I don't think I'm the only one who thinks this, well I hope I'm not.

>>30718382
Haven't started part 5 yet, but yeah, I kinda feel the same way. I really like the backstory and conflict between Anon and Sunset, and I feel like Anon's hatred of Sunset and how jaded he is is pretty well done.

However, he's an absolute unlikable cunt. I'm sure that's the point, but I don't really enjoy reading from Anon's perspective because I feel like I can predict how he's going to interact with everyone he get's to interact with; he's going to be an unlikable cunt. I'm also not a fan of the whole 'ultra nerd' thing he's got going on, but I'm chocking that up to personal taste.

I'd much rather read from Sunset's perspective.

>>30718541
I agree with you on the backstory. The way he acts to Sunset and how much he hates her is perfectly justified because of what she did to him, but it's just too hard to read because of how nitpicky he is and how hard he tries to get on Sunsets nerves. There's a limit to how much you can be a cunt to people, but this has clearly gone over the limit.

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>>30696968
>With a stretch of your arms you let loose a long yawn
>AJ wipes her mouth from behind her burger as she points it to you
>”You feelin ok?”
>You wave her concern off as you pick your fork back up to chow down
“I’m fine, just feeling a bit sluggish due to all the excitement lately.”
>Rarity perks up and digs into her purse
>”Oh Sunset Darling, I have just the thing. I use it all the time to put a little pep in my st—”
*SLAM*
>You and everyone else at the table are startled by the backpack being mashed on the table
>”OK I have two things to say and only one of them is remotely good.”
>Pinkie is the first to bounce back both literally and figuratively from Rainbow’s interruption as she bobs up and down in her chair
>”And happy lunch to you too Dashie!”
>Rainbow sighs as she takes her seat by AJ
>”I’d say it was if I got here in time to really enjoy it.”
>She eyeballs AJ’s fries as she frowns theatrically
>Rolling her eyes AJ pushes her tray of fries in front of Rainbow as she finishes her burger
>You can’t help but smile at the almost regular lunch scene
>Fluttershy looks on in concern as she stops nibbling at her pile of steamed lentils
>”What kept you behind so long?”
>Between chews of a mouthful of fries Rainbow snaps her fingers into a finger gun at Fluttershy
>”That’s, mhmm, because of the first thing.”
>Beating her chest before letting out a satisfied sigh she frowns once more
>”Alright, I’m pretty sure I failed that math quiz.”
>Ahh of course, you forgot that was today
>It's been a bit since you actually paid attention to math
>Maybe you should review a bit between classes?

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>>30718915
>Twilight puts down her eggroll as raises an eyebrow
>”I thought we went over Mr. Procrates’s material the other day?”
>Rainbow nods with a half-shrug
>”Well yea, but that leads to the second thing.”
>The rest of you wait in anticipation as she stuffs a few more fries into her maw
>After gulping loudly her demeanor changes from laid-back into very serious as she furrows her brow and hunkers down conspiratorially
>Her gaze darts left and right before she continues
>”We got to keep this on a need-to-know basis, and vice-principal Luna doesn’t need to know, got it?”
>What?
>Her tone and body language give you the impression that she’s serious, but that just worries you
>What could possibly be so serious right now, and be something to keep from prince-ipal Luna?
>The possibilities run rampant through your head as you bite your thumb
>The others share somewhat worried glances as everybody at the table hunkers down like Rainbow
>With her arms flat on the table Rainbow intertwines her fingers
>”Brace yourselves; the band has a new gig.”
>Almost as suddenly as it swept over the table all the tension vanishes
>The band has a new gig?
>Why did she make that out to be such a big deal?
>AJ speaks up first while pulling her Stetson back from her forehead
>”Now why’d ya have to go get us worked up for nothing?”
>You nod in agreement
“That’s not a big deal, plus I don’t really see why we’d need to keep a gig secret from Luna.”
>Rainbow holds up her pointer finger as the others start to raise their own questions
>”It’s not just any gig though, it’s a rock off!”
>A rock off?
>Wait!
>You push yourself up to a standing position as the realization hits you
“Don’t tell me the sirens want to settle the score!?”

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>>30718921
>That would explain why Rainbow was so serious just a moment ago
>The others all react differently to your exclamation
>AJ with a scowl
>”Ah knew they were still rotten to the core.”
>They DID never apologize for what they had done
>Even if they were practically ran off the stage
>Rarity with a deflated shake of her head
>”We should’ve figured with what Anon said.”
>It hadn’t occurred to you that they may have wanted to reclaim their lost glory
>Though you guess nothing’s stopping them now that they have their gems back
>Twilight runs a hand through her hair
>”Well this certainly poses a new threat.”
>No kidding
>Fluttershy with a disappointed sigh
>”I thought that at least Sonata had turned a new leaf…”
>Why would she think that?
>Pinkie however, she simply shrugs
>”Eh, saw it coming.”
>A bit crass compared to her usual reactions
>Rainbow shakes her head however
>”No nonono, the sirens aren’t our enemy!”
>Say what?
>She scratches her chin
>”Well, at least for the rock off they aren’t.”
>Then…
>”No, this Saturday at Galloping Fillies, The Rainbooms will take on…”
>Looking around the cafeteria she points to the far right corner
>”The Flashers!”
>Who?
>Twisting around in your seat you scan the direction she’s pointing at
>You only see Flash reading a book by hims—
>The Flashers, Flash sitting alone reading
>Whipping your head around you stare at Rainbow in disbelief
“We’re having a rock off with Flash?”
>Before she can respond AJ scratches her temple
>”What kind of a name is The Flashers?”
>Rarity flicks her hair as she rolls her eyes
>”An uncreative one fitting for someone lacking a flair for spectacle like Flash.”
>That’s an understatement
>Though it’s not like your band really has the right to talk

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>>30718925
>You’re pretty sure Rainbow just wanted to work her name into the band’s, though it turned out fine
>Twilight beside you pinches her bottom lip between her thumb and forefinger
>”Excuse me Rainbow Dash, but why exactly are you rocking off against them?”
>You’re wondering that yourself
>Rainbow smirks before pointing at Twilight
>”What do YOU mean by you, you’re part of the Rainbooms ya know!?”
>Way to dodge the question there
>Twilight physically recoils a bit while holding her hands up defensively
>”Me, oh nonononono, I can’t sing or play an instrument.”
>Pinkie shakes her head with a smirk
>”Ahhh nonsense Twilly-twally, it’s practically law around here that everyone have some musical skill.”
>Leaning over the table she gets in real close to Twilight
>”That and I’m pretty sure we heard you singing for help at the Friendship Games.”
>What?
>Twilight raises an eyebrow along with you
>”I’m sorry, what?”
>Rubber-banding back to her seat Pinkie coughs into her fist
>”Erhm, I mean what do you think Anon plays, I see him as a jaw harp kinda guy.”
>Rainbow looks up to the ceiling
>”He said he doesn’t have any musical talent, but for some reason I’m getting the weird feeling he’d be really good at the accordion…”
>AJ has a big grin on her face as she begins to stare at the ceiling as well
>”In a perfect world he’d play the castanets.”
>You speak up before anyone else can throw out an idea of what Anon plays
“So Rainbow, why are WE having a rock off with Flash?”
>Instead of an awkward smile like you were expecting she manages to boast a confident one
>”I’m so glad you asked, it’s because Flash is a SIN.”

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>>30718930
>You cock an eyebrow at the obvious
“And?”
>Rainbow practically stands up from her chair as she points at Flash
>”Look at him, Flash is too busy reading to do anything bad!”
>Well you can’t argue with that
>Crossing her arms her smile steadily grows
>”So not only is he preoccupied, we now have a time and place where we’ll throw down.”
>Twilight nods while adjusting her glasses
>”And so we can formulate our plan of attack…”
>Hmm, that’s actually a good point
>Though there’s one tiny problem
“Ok, that makes sense, so we just need to win this Rock off and, what will happen?”
>Rainbow smiles toothily
>”Flash says if we beat him he’ll do whatever we want.”
>Oh, guess you could ask him to not do anything bad, assuming he’ll keep his word
>Fluttershy speaks up once more
>”So, not to sound like I think it will happen, but what if he wins?”
>That’s a good question
>Rainbow laughs in a painfully awkward way as she looks away from all of you
>”Oh nothing too bad, justthatwe’dbecomepartofhispossy…”
>Blank stares from all around the table focus in on her
>It's not long before she begins to overly enjoy what remains of her fries
>”Boy, these are REALLY good…”
>AJ slowly slides the tray out from under Rainbow, much to her dismay
>It screeches as it drags across the surface of the table
>AJ slowly looks her in the eye
>”And ya agreed ta that for us?”
>Looking at all the now slightly annoyed faces around the table Rainbow holds up her pointer finger
>”In my defense, I thought this out completely beforehand and figure—“
>Rarity leans forward past AJ and makes eye contact with Rainbow as well
>”You got heated up because he said he was a better guitarist than you, didn’t you?”

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>>30718938
>Rainbow suddenly looks a lot redder in her face as her breathing gets a bit heavy
>”Uhh, I uhh, of c-cours—“
>AJ’s piercing stare seems to glow from underneath the shade of her Stetson
>”You wouldn’t lie ta us now would ya?”
>You have never seen Rainbow’s lips purse harder
>Seemingly giving up she collapses onto the table top
>”Ok, I may have gotten a bit angry.”
>The table shares a sigh in exasperation
>Rainbow bounces back up after a moment with an unsure smile
>”But it’ll be fine, we just need to rock his socks off!”
>She points to you
>”Sure, he pretty much has the same magic as the sirens did, but since you were able to make a counter-spell to that this should be no big deal.”
>Sorry what?
>Both you and Twilight suddenly become much more attentive as you lock eyes for a moment
“Did you just say that he has the same magic as the sirens?”
>Rainbow nods slowly like a foa-kid, caught snatching from the cookie jar
>”Yea, pretty much; I only saw red stuff from his eyes and a red mist on the floor, but people were going nuts for him.”
>You bring your hands together in front of you as you inhale deeply
>Twilight speaks for you as she adjusts her glasses
>”That’s going to be a bit of a problem.”
>Fluttershy furrows her brow
>”Why, is that?
>You lay your arms flat on the table as you answer her
“The counter-spell princess Twilight performed with us was completely improvised, even though she knew that it was the sirens of legend she was dealing with, she had absolutely no idea how to develop a counter-spell.”
>Worry colors everyone’s’ faces as what you said hits them
>”Darling, are you saying that we, we just got lucky?”
>You can only frown
“In essence, yes.”

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>>30718942
>Rainbow snaps her fingers
>”Ok, in that case we just have to make a new song that makes us all pony up right?”
>You and Twilight both look to each other before shrugging
“I guess we could try to and hopefully our raw magic output blows them away?”
>AJ peers out from under the brim of her hat as she points to you
>”Can ya just tweak the one we used against the sirens?”
>Ehh
>You shrug with a shake of the head
“That was one we sung with princess Twilight, so I don’t know if it’d have the same impact as before.”
>Twilight holds up a finger as she interjects
>”Not to mention it’s probably not wise to reattempt the same song and hoping it’ll do the trick.”
>Fluttershy brushes her bangs out of her eyes as she tries to get your attention
>”Are we sure that your world doesn’t have any information on Nihilem’s magic?”
>Twilight piggybacks on Fluttershy’s question as she turns to you
>”Perhaps his magic was well documented, did the other Twilight learn anything about Nihilem that can help us better understand his magic?”
>Well…
“Not really, she just recently got back from a trip to Yakyakistan yesterday; so she’s just now looking into Nihilem.”
>Pinkie nods rapidly in her seat
>”So we just need to make a really good song while we wait for p0ny Twilight to get back to us on magical stuff!”
>That’s probably the best plan of action for right now
>Rarity takes a sip of her milk before dabbing her mouth with a napkin
>”I suppose that’s all we can do for now.”
>You guess s—
>Wait, there is one thing you can do
>You lean forward and stare at Rainbow intently
“Why is it that you don’t want to tell Luna about this?”

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>>30718947
>Rainbow shies away from your stare
>”I, I dunno; I guess it just wouldn’t really help things.”
>That’s right; she was looking after Anon all day yesterday and didn’t spend the day learning what you did
>Both AJ and Twilight seem to perk up as realization hits them
>Twilight smiles as she speaks up
>”But that can’t be further from the truth!”
>Rainbow scrunches her face up as she looks at the two of you confusedly
>”How’s that?”
>AJ props her hat up with a flick of her fingers
>”It’s cause vice-principal Luna has been studying magic, Equestrian magic, fer almost 21 years now!”
>Rainbow looks from you to AJ with her incredulous reaction plain on her face
>”Seriously?”
>Pinkie bounces in her seat
>”Yep, she said she was a part of a group like us who dealt with magic stuff that happened in Canterlot when THEY were in high school!”
>Rainbow’s wide eyed response reminds you of a fish gasping for air
>”No crap…”
>Twilight nods before adding onto the new info you learned yesterday
>”Apparently she was also researching all sorts of things about magic from Equestria alongside Anon’s father.”
>You sigh before addressing everyone
>”So I guess we’ll wait for princess Twilight’s response while we write a good song together and ask Luna if she can help in any way?”
>Everyone seems to agree in one way or another as you feel the conversation come to a close
>Well that is before Rainbow sighs and asks
>”So, do you think I should go get food before we meet up after school? It seems like we’re going to be talking about stuff for a long time.”
.
.
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And that’s it for this one. Looking forward to reading more from SCIANON JESUS I CAN’T BELIEVE HE’S REALLY BACK! It seems that just like with Seismic, NEVER EVER really wasn’t forever ;v;
In the meantime I’ll be updating again within 3 days my dudes

>>30718954
Nice to get a little break from that dream world thing. It was kinda interesting at first, but it's starting to drag on a bit for me. I'd completely forgotten about flash though, can't wait for him to get rekt

>>30717791
welcome back fampai
>>30718954
>3 days
oh baby

>>30718954
See you in 5 days

>>30718382
She was the only person he ever opened up to and she literally threw him down a flight of stairs while humiliating him. Of course he's a dickish, angry, unlikable cunt. He has no reason to be nice or to care if anyone in this story lives.

>Nobody becomes a hunter expecting to live a long life.

>>30719966
I understand and I agree with you, but there's a time where his kind of attitude is completely out of place. The cave for example, as I said earlier, his attitude and such is completely justified, but when you're freezing your balls off with death on its way, you dont have time to make stupid jabs and insults. He's a smart person, so really he just needs to shutup for once. Once they're out the cave he can do whatever the fuck he wants.

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>>30720088
>dead writer comes back after fuck knows how long
>lets insult his story and bash the main character

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>>30720385
Forgive my faggotry, but I don't understand.

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>>30720527
No matter what situation Anon is in he will never stop hating Sunset. She was his rock and she abandoned him.
He would rather die than be her friend again.

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>>30720675
This game sure was something.

>>30720675
>>30720770
Looks familiar. Is it I have no mouth?

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>>30721027
Yeah

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>>30716663
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

>>30609423

“Hey, Rarity,” you say, letting her name hang on your voice.
>”Darling?”
“What if you came to Bahhston with me?”
>She pushes away from you and raises an eyebrow in response.
>”What’s in Bahhston? I thought you had to go to work.”
“I do. Didn’t I tell you my company runs out of Europe? In fact, HQ is right in Haynau, Germineigh. As far as they’re concerned, Bahhston is the west.”
>”Haynau, you say? Some of my favorite designers are from there!”
>She brings a finger to her chin and rubs it contemplatively.
>”And I do have a friend down there I could meet up with as well.”
>Oh fuck.
“You two could totally get together then. It’s good to catch up with old friends.”
>”Indeed. Did you know she’s a--”
“Too bad we can’t go see the Rouge Stockings. I’d love to go see a game, but they’re away in Vanhoover for a few weeks.”
>”I didn’t know Caneighdians played baseball.”
“Wicked.”
>Rarity sighs and turns her head, staring wistfully out the window as it bleeds light into the hard room.
>”Oh well. I suppose it wasn’t meant to be.”
>Dodged a bullet there.
>Then her smile returns, and she rises from the couch.
>”I’d love to go with you. I just need to pack my bags.”
“Great! I’ll pick you up soon, then.”
>She disappears around a corner.
>You can hear a door click and what sounds like a mountain of fabric tumbling onto the hardwood floor.
>”Curses! Oh, uh, yes. I’ll see you soon, darling!”

>>30724646

>You open the door to her apartment and hesitantly stick your head outside.
>Any signs of you-know-who?
>No, it doesn’t look like it.
>Taking a tentative sniff in the air, you try to make out her perfume, or perhaps any strong odors of blood.
>It’s all clean.
>You try to push the woman out of your mind, but her and her cherry blossom scent cloud push right back into the forefront of your worry center.
>You reach into your jacket and take a firm grip on your cross, you make way into the long hallway.
>Once the door is closed firmly behind you, you take slow, controlled steps over to the elevator.
>The light above the machine travels from number to number, until hitting twenty four, the floor you’re on.
>It dings and sits for a few seconds before the aluminum doors slide apart, opening the bland, brown chamber in all its smooth jazz glory.
>You don’t enter it right away.
>Instead, you poke your hand in, hold it there for a second, and then slowly move to the control panel.
>After pushing the button for the bottom floor, you pull your limb out of the doorway and stand still until the metallic barrier starts to slide shut.
>At the last second, you jump in, letting the door close securely behind you.
>If anybody was in here, they would have gone right after your ha--
“Wow!”

>>30724658

>Something grabs onto your neck and lifts you off the ground.
>You find yourself flying through the air, but not very far as you slam into the particleboard wall just two feet away.
>Before your feet can touch the carpet, the force returns.
>With an iron grip, you’re thrown like a ragdoll and twisted, having your back slammed against the wall.
>Your chest and your mouth are both covered before you can even register what’s going on.
>Finally, they slow down just enough that you can make out the orange, manicured hand pressed against your lips.
>Trailing up the wrist, and the leather-covered arm, you reach a face you never thought you’d see again.
“Fmmh hemhy?”
>”What’s up, Anon? It’s been a while.”
>The blue haired prick shoots you a smile.
>It’s not to show his happiness, either.
>Your eyes are drawn to two very large fangs protruding from his upper jaw.
>You lock eyes with him and widen yours, then dart them around the room.
>In the corners of your vision, you can see his smile growing as he focuses on your scared little stare.
>That’s right, pretty boy, focus on the eyes.
>From your jacket, you pull out your cross and shove the silver tool against his shirt, right on the lightning bolt logo.
>He squeals and jumps away from you, hitting the elevator door right as it hits floor twenty two.
“What’s wrong, Flash? Band washed up and now you’re moon lightning as the main character of a discount love story?”
>”Real funny, kid, but not nearly as funny as the look on your face when I bring you to her.”
>Her?
>Wait a second, he and Sunset were pretty close back in high school. In fact, you think they dated for a semester.
>She couldn’t be involved in this too, could she?
>Damn, it looks like all your classmates are coming back to haunt you.

>>30724665

>Enter Rainbow Dash, the coolest girl and greatest player in Bahhston.
>The bright afternoon sun beats down on your hat as you maneuver through a few less crowded streets in the city.
>Through your tinted glasses, you stare down everyone that passes by.
>He’s got a thick neck.
>Ooh, but her jugular is just asking for it.
>No, no, that kid with the candybar probably has some sweet blood.
>Come to think of it, you felt kind of bloated this morning. Maybe you should lay off the sweets.
>Protein might be good.
>That’s when you spot a big guy for you.
>He looks gay on the outside, but that shouldn’t be a problem.
>Yeah, that’ll do.
“Lunch time.”
>You make a beeline for him, prepared to bump shoulders, until your phone starts to ring.
>He jerks his head to you and you turn right away, walking by the hulk.
>Damn. Who the fuck is calling you at noon?
>Ripping the phone out of your pocket, you take a look at the screen expecting to be very upset by the caller.
>Instead, your mouth begins to water.
>Lunch hasn’t been ruined after all.
>After a little swipe, you bring the phone up to your ear.
”S’up.”
>”Hey, Dash. I’m in town for a few days. Want to get a coffee?”
>Bold. Straight and to the point.
>What is it about this guy that makes him think he can talk to the greatest athlete who ever lived like she was just another girl on the street?
>He should be stuttering and begging you.
>Cheeky little thing.
“Just a coffee?”
>”Let’s start there.”
>Oh, you’re going to enjoy draining him.

>>30724672

>A few minutes later, you arrive at the cafe where you two first drank.
>The place looks identical to the day you left, right down to the pile of dust in the corner.
>You can’t smell the coffee beans though.
>No, you’re hit with a wall of blood so strong you almost step back.
>It fills your nose, leaks into your mind, and wraps around it.
>Like a lasso, the heavenly scent draws you through the outdated room and to a familiar booth.
>In sits Anon, hunched over the table with a coffee cup held close to his chest.
>You lean in behind him and take a few light whiffs.
>That’s definitely coming from him.
>Further in you go, not even realizing you’re over his shoulder now and inhaling deeply.
>”Hey.”
“Oh, uh, hey,” you stammer, caught in the act.
>Think.
“The coffee smells good.”
>He raises an eyebrow and brings the cup to his nose.
>”Yeah, I guess it does.”
>You giggle and step around the table, taking the seat opposite him.
>He’s smiling at you, but it’s not genuine.
>Even you can tell that.
>In fact, it looks like he’s trying to hold something back.
>A closer examination with your super sharp eyes alerts you to all the makeup he’s wearing.
>The areas he’s applied the most seem to bulge out from his face slightly, especially on his lower right lip.
>No way, he didn’t.
>Not this guy.
>You close your eyes and take another sniff in the air, sucking in the blood around you.
>Yeah, he did.
>Anon, the smooth talking, bar fighting, paper company salaryman.

>>30724682

>He adjusts in his seat slightly, careful not to move his midsection.
“You alright?”
>”Yeah, I just slept funny. What about you? You’re acting like this is your first day with a nose.”
“I just really love the smell of coffee.”
>”Maybe I’ll bring some to your next game. Come by the bleachers and I’ll get you a cup.”
>Your next game?
>That’s in a week, and sorry to say, you’re not going to last that long, buddy.
>Hell, if he keeps bleeding like this, you might pounce before the day even ends.
>Know what? Fuck it. And fuck surprising him in the woods with some dead parents and a jaguar.
“You know what we should do today? Let’s throw the ole’ ball around.”
>”You haven’t even had any coffee yet. Didn’t you say you loved it?”
“I’m just eager to get out there is all.”
>”Have a cup of joe. We’ve got the day ahead of us, don’t we?”
>He didn’t just say no to you, did he?
>Where does this guy find his balls?
>It’d be almost hot if he weren’t a paper boy.
>The only thing that’s making you hot right now is all that blood in the air.
>You cross your legs and squeeze your thighs together as you take in another whiff.
>This might be the best blood you’ve ever smelled and he just fucking leaking it.
>You flag the waitress over and order some black as you inspect his shirt.
>There are no stains on it, so he probably just bandaged everything up.
>A few seconds later, the woman comes back with a small ceramic glass filled with caffeine.
>He tries to talk to you about something, and while you do nod and give affirmative grunts, you’re barely paying attention.
>All that runs through your mind are ways of getting into his neck.

>>30724690

>You could just rip his throat out and use his veins as a drinking straw.
>That would be fun, but there’s also the classic pose.
>Imagining him trying to push you off as you lock your arms around his back and bite into that thick, pulsating neck brings a blush to your face.
>”You ok?”
“Hm?”
>”Your cheeks are red.”
“Oh, I guess it’s just hot in here. We should go.”
>”Try taking off your jacket?”
>He gestures to your leather getup.
“And lose the fashion? I don’t think so. Besides, I need this for the disguise.”
>”Fair enough.”
>It’s at that moment that his phone starts to ring.
>He visibly tenses, and you can hear his heart start to thump faster.
>Oh? Who is on the line?
>Whoever they are, they’re stirring his blood up nice and good.
>You can practically see the veins on his neck pulse as blood rushes through them.
“Aren’t you going to answer that?”
>”Nope.”
“It might be important.”
>”And it might not be.”
“Don’t worry, I won’t mind. Go ahead and pick it up.”
>”It’s ok, really. You wanted to go play baseball, right? Let’s go.”
“Answer the phone first.”
>He stares at you for a long few seconds.
>For once, it seems like he doesn’t have anything to say.
>Ever so slowly, he reaches into his pocket and pulls out the ugliest little flip phone
>Wow, they still make those?
>He flips it open and raises it to his ear.
>”Yes. Can you describe the nature of the jam?”
>He keeps eye contact while the other person presumably talks.
>”A representative will be over shortly. Please find a safe place to store your paper while you wait.”

>>30724696

>Uh oh, paper boy got called out to fix a mean old printer?
>”I have to go fix a printer.”
>Ha!
>Wow, what a loser.
>Although, this isn’t too bad.
>You can just follow him there and bag two for the price of one.
>Draining someone in front of him might season his blood a little before you go in for the big score.
“That’s cool. I’ll meet you at the field later, ok? Just tell the guard Dash gave you the green.”
>”I feel like that’s something a lot of people say.”
>That’s because it is.
>Although they’re usually dinner guests, so to speak.
>You smile, and as your lips brush against your teeth, you feel a little prick.
>Oh shit, were those showing all along?
>You close your mouth and keep it to a grin, but that’s getting harder to maintain the more you imagine his blood pouring out over your tongue.
>Maybe you should bottle some of it and keep it on hand for before a game.
>Rainbow Dash, super sports star, scores homeruns by the dozens, all fueled by a vial of the good shit.
>You run your fingers through your hair and throw the cap back on.
“See you soon.”
>”See you soon.”
>He tips his head back to finish off the cup and slams it down after.
>His journey to get up out of the booth is drawn out, and he locks up for a split second in a twist.
>Man, you wish you saw that fight.
>The man waves as he leaves, and you head out not long after.
>You follow the scent of blood while he walks, and eventually he stops at some beat up pickup.
>Paper boy drives that thing? Not bad, actually.
>As he drives off, you make haste and keep up just enough to annoy the crowds on the sidewalks, but not enough that anyone driving should take their eyes off the traffic.

>>30724700

>It’s not terribly long before he makes it to the end of backstreet and parks on the wrong side of the road.
>You dart behind a lexus and watch carefully as he grabs a duffle bag out of the cab and walks up to the pink house he parked in front of.
>While he’s knocking, you speed across the street and find refuge behind his truck.
>You can hear the door creak open, and Anon starts to talk about printers.
>”Who the hell are you?”
>”Hi, I’m with the city’s Board of Central Water Care. Do you have a second to talk about the new bill?”
>Wait, what?
>”The board of what?”
>”Of Central Water Care, sir. May I come inside?”
>”I never heard of that.”
>”Have you ever checked your taxes?”
>”I, er, I do my taxes every year.”
>”I’m sure you do. Now, let’s get to this bill. You got any coffee?”
>This isn’t printer talk at all.
>Come to think of it, why’s the other guy sound surprised to see anyone?
>You’d think that if you called someone to fix a printer, you’d also expect someone to show up at your door.
>The door shuts, and you peek at it from under the truck.
>Nobody’s there.
>The coast is clear, so you make your way up to the front window and hide in a green bush just beside it.
>The door is a few feet in front of you, with an identical window and bush just past that.
>You press your ear against the house and try to make out what they’re saying.
>It’s all muffled just enough, but pretty soon their voices start raising.
>It’s quiet for a solid minute, but then they start yelling again.
>The smell of dog blasts through the window, and you can hear some nasty growling from in there.